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Oh yeah, have a star from me~
Topic Starter
Static Noise Bird wrote:
Oh yeah, have a star from me~
,oh!I love your Avatar,thanks your star给这mp3音质跪了...打到一半关掉了...
另外给你折叠一下皮肤。
另外给你折叠一下皮肤。
Topic Starter
abalee wrote:
给这mp3音质跪了...打到一半关掉了...
另外给你折叠一下皮肤。
瞎了音质太差不能rank？求rank 我好捉急啊[General]
- The end of last kiai is different between two diff. Please check it for consistency.
- Setting tick rate 2 in this diff to unify with breeze's diff.
- 00:18:920 (2) - Probably add a clap at the beginning of the slider to follow your hitclap pattern and make it more consistency?
- 00:24:920 (2) - ^Same
- 00:27:920 (2) - A hitsound suggestion here: How about putting a soft hitsound here to fit the music because there is no drum sound and only with a soft vocal, so soft-hitsound fits it very well.
- 00:32:420 (2) - I would suggest removing this slider and change it to notes or change it in other position. Because of overlap, some newbie might get confusion here.
- 00:34:670 (1) - How about adding a finish at the beginning of the slider because of the strong accent?
- 00:52:670 (2) - I would remove the new combo here if I were you. It seems very necessary.
- 00:58:670 (1) - How about adding a finish at the beginning of the slider because of the strong accent?
- 01:07:295 (1) - How about adding a whistle at the whole slider to fit the music because I can hear the 'whistle' sound from the background music.
- 01:28:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing are inconsistent, although the error is really tiny, it may affect the gameplay, so I would suggest fixing this.
- 01:43:670 (1) - How about adding a finish here because of the strong accent?
- 02:08:607 (x) - I think you can consider adding a note here to follow the vocal because this place is too empty compare to the whole difficulty.
- 02:14:607 - ^
- 02:16:670 (1) - The rhythm is quite weird here. I would say that reduce the slider to 1/1 is much better because there is no drum, lyric, so setting the reverse there sounds strange to me.
- 00:20:982 (2,3,4) - The spacing are inconsistent, although the error is really tiny, it may affect the gameplay, so I would suggest fixing this.
- 00:30:357 - How about considering adding a note here?
- 00:39:170 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:20:982 (2,3,4) -
- 01:12:732 (3) - A suggestion here: Could you make this slider smoothly so it will look better and it can blanket (2)- better.
- 01:17:420 (2,3,4) - Would you remove the finish at the beginning of these sliders because there are no accent or any strong emotion, so I don't see the point of adding the finish there. Also it doesn't fit the music quite well.
- 01:56:795 (5) - A rhythmic suggestion here to follow the music better: How about adding a note at 01:56:795 - and then using a 1/1 slider at 01:56:982 -? It doesn't affect 01:57:545 - , so you can keep the current arrangement.
kanpakyin wrote:
[Breeze's Hard]
- 00:20:982 (2,3,4) - The spacing are inconsistent, although the error is really tiny, it may affect the gameplay, so I would suggest fixing this.
- 00:30:357 - How about considering adding a note here?
- 00:39:170 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:20:982 (2,3,4) -
- 01:12:732 (3) - A suggestion here: Could you make this slider smoothly so it will look better and it can blanket (2)- better.
- 01:17:420 (2,3,4) - Would you remove the finish at the beginning of these sliders because there are no accent or any strong emotion, so I don't see the point of adding the finish there. Also it doesn't fit the music quite well.
- 01:56:795 (5) - A rhythmic suggestion here to follow the music better: How about adding a note at 01:56:795 - and then using a 1/1 slider at 01:56:982 -? It doesn't affect 01:57:545 - , so you can keep the current arrangement.
http://puu.sh/1phxS
Topic Starter
kanpakyin wrote:
[General][Normal]
- The end of last kiai is different between two diff. Please check it for consistency.
- Setting tick rate 2 in this diff to unify with breeze's diff.
- 00:18:920 (2) - Probably add a clap at the beginning of the slider to follow your hitclap pattern and make it more consistency?:arrow: fixed
- 00:24:920 (2) - ^Same:arrow: fixed
- 00:27:920 (2) - A hitsound suggestion here: How about putting a soft hitsound here to fit the music because there is no drum sound and only with a soft vocal, so soft-hitsound fits it very well.
- 00:32:420 (2) - I would suggest removing this slider and change it to notes or change it in other position. Because of overlap, some newbie might get confusion here.
- 00:34:670 (1) - How about adding a finish at the beginning of the slider because of the strong accent?:arrow: fixed
- 00:52:670 (2) - I would remove the new combo here if I were you. It seems very necessary.
- 00:58:670 (1) - How about adding a finish at the beginning of the slider because of the strong accent?:arrow: fixed
- 01:07:295 (1) - How about adding a whistle at the whole slider to fit the music because I can hear the 'whistle' sound from the background music.
- 01:28:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing are inconsistent, although the error is really tiny, it may affect the gameplay, so I would suggest fixing this.
- 01:43:670 (1) - How about adding a finish here because of the strong accent?:arrow: fixed
- 02:08:607 (x) - I think you can consider adding a note here to follow the vocal because this place is too empty compare to the whole difficulty.
- 02:14:607 - ^:arrow: fixed
- 02:16:670 (1) - The rhythm is quite weird here. I would say that reduce the slider to 1/1 is much better because there is no drum, lyric, so setting the reverse there sounds strange to me.
Rebubbled.
(ノ・ω・)ノ
(ノ・ω・)ノ
IRC Modded Normal diff:
[Breeze's Hard]
SPOILER
17:45 Pink Agate: excuse me
17:45 *Niva is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/174251 AKB48 - Beginner]
17:46 Niva: yes, I'm on it
17:46 Niva: :3
17:46 Pink Agate: thank you very much
17:46 Niva: np, kanpakyin recommended me the map :3
17:50 Niva: hmm
17:50 Niva: Normal
17:50 Pink Agate: ye?
17:50 Niva: 00:27:920 (2) - add whistle on slider's start?
17:50 Pink Agate: OK
17:51 Niva: 00:49:670 (1) -
17:51 Niva: For me it's better if the spinner ends in 00:51:170
17:51 Niva: and then delete 00:52:295 (1) - (:
17:52 Niva: err, then
17:52 Niva: drag the break manually to 01:16:670 -
17:53 Niva: 01:30:170 (5) - new combo this
17:53 Pink Agate: spinner ends in 0051170?
17:54 Niva: ah
17:54 Niva: yes (:
17:54 Niva: oh, about 01:30:170 (5) I strongly suggest to new combo (5) and split (6) as two circles...
17:54 Pink Agate: ok
17:55 Niva: 01:43:670 (1) - fix this green line's snapping?
17:56 Niva: then
17:56 Niva: 02:06:170 (3) - finish on slider's start, I hear a cymbal there~
17:56 Pink Agate: snapping?
17:57 Niva: oh, make the green section land correctly orz :3
17:57 Pink Agate: how deal the 0143670?
17:57 Pink Agate: o
17:57 Niva: press 'F6' and click 'Use Current Time' :D
17:58 Niva: 02:16:670 (1) - remove whistle on slider's end here, then add whistle on 02:18:170 (2)'s start
17:59 Pink Agate: You mean 0143670 here's voice is too big？
17:59 Niva: oh, move offset to 103670 from 103684 (:
17:59 Pink Agate: OK
18:00 Niva: 02:26:982 (2) - add whistle on slider's start also?
18:00 Pink Agate: offset is 103684?
18:00 Niva: yep
18:00 Niva: oh, no
18:00 Pink Agate: not 163684?
18:00 Niva: green line offset 103684 -> 103670
18:01 Pink Agate: sorry I can't understant it
18:01 Niva: oh, leave it then~
18:03 Pink Agate: OK, I see!
18:03 Niva: okay, I'll post mod to Breeze's diff after this
18:03 Niva: afk for a while (:
18:19 Pink Agate: ok,I fixed all,thanks ,can I upload ?
18:19 Niva: sure
18:22 Pink Agate: OK, I uploaded
18:22 Pink Agate: can you recheck it?
18:28 Niva: 00:52:670 (1) - add new combo manually
18:28 Niva: err wait
18:28 Niva: 00:52:670 (1) -
18:28 Niva: yes~
18:28 Pink Agate: add
18:28 Niva: ok~
[Breeze's Hard]
- 01:02:982 (5,6) - Uhm, actually I'm quite worried about (5) here because of this rule (last sentence):
Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. -> However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible <-
Err, I'm having trouble editing this slider actually, this is just my suggestion orz >_<SPOILER200,236,62982,2,0,B|242:216|242:216|283:217|283:217|338:210|375:253|360:303|314:324|268:309|251:260|283:218|283:218|305:176|305:176|339:158,1,419.999971389771,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
423,137,64295,1,0,0:0:0 - 01:48:357 (4) - Move to ~x:187 to avoid overlap? xD
thxNiva wrote:
[Breeze's Hard]Others are fine >_<
- 01:02:982 (5,6) - Uhm, actually I'm quite worried about (5) here because of this rule (last sentence):
Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. -> However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible <-
Err, I'm having trouble editing this slider actually, this is just my suggestion orz >_<SPOILER200,236,62982,2,0,B|242:216|242:216|283:217|283:217|338:210|375:253|360:303|314:324|268:309|251:260|283:218|283:218|305:176|305:176|339:158,1,419.999971389771,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
423,137,64295,1,0,0:0:0- 01:48:357 (4) - Move to ~x:187 to avoid overlap? xD
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Topic Starter
all fixed,need bat
Well, I'm just *quite* worried though...
I checked the entire thread, I see no complaints about it, plus I see many MAT/BATs have been around checking this map, personally I think it should be fine (I believe players can read that without any problems (: )
(btw, Pink Agate, please don't suddenly PM me like that orz... I'll recheck, yes, but please give me time >_<)
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I checked the entire thread, I see no complaints about it, plus I see many MAT/BATs have been around checking this map, personally I think it should be fine (I believe players can read that without any problems (: )
(btw, Pink Agate, please don't suddenly PM me like that orz... I'll recheck, yes, but please give me time >_<)
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Congratz!
Flask wrote:
Congratz!
Grats~~
Topic Starter
thanks everyone
YAY gratz~ <3
Breeze wrote:
kanpakyin wrote:
[Breeze's Hard]
- 00:20:982 (2,3,4) - The spacing are inconsistent, although the error is really tiny, it may affect the gameplay, so I would suggest fixing this.
- 00:30:357 - How about considering adding a note here?
- 00:39:170 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:20:982 (2,3,4) -
- 01:12:732 (3) - A suggestion here: Could you make this slider smoothly so it will look better and it can blanket (2)- better.
- 01:17:420 (2,3,4) - Would you remove the finish at the beginning of these sliders because there are no accent or any strong emotion, so I don't see the point of adding the finish there. Also it doesn't fit the music quite well.
- 01:56:795 (5) - A rhythmic suggestion here to follow the music better: How about adding a note at 01:56:795 - and then using a 1/1 slider at 01:56:982 -? It doesn't affect 01:57:545 - , so you can keep the current arrangement.
http://puu.sh/1phxS
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