TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]
00:57:317 (9) - Strg+J it for a better transition from (9) to (10). - Done.
00:59:717 (3) - Err.. I would make like this. http://puu.sh/Ho7O (Also add at 01:00:232 a Circle) and remove Whistle and set Clap there. - I want to follow the piano here >_<
01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to make the Distance of the Circles bigger. - If it's because it has a smaller spacing than other pattern, I reject.
01:20:117 (8,9,10,11) - ^ - ^

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Lunatic Loli

00:25:774 put end of 3 it exactly into the end of slider 2 - I do.
00:53:546 new combo ? Looks better to me - Done.
01:12:232 put it exactly into the slider end of 6 - Done.
01:16:174 put it exactly into end of slider 1 - Done.
01:17:546 ^ start of slider 1 - That was on purpose

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Hi ^w^

Here I am from my modding queue


General :

delet .osb file in beatmap foler and full submit It seems I missed that, fixed

I am only making suggestion and when you like some , than I did a good job ^^

Normal

00:14:117 make the slider a bit nicer like this http://puu.sh/HGSe Can't see the slider points but I tried to make it as close as it is, done
00:26:974 I think a jump like that isn`t allowed , or is it ? But may change that ^^ ? I accidentally missed that D: thanks for noticing, done
00:45:917 Why not put timeing point at the end of spinner at 00:46:003 ?Doesn't really matter though but done
00:49:260 maybe new combo ? Um, it's NC already
01:03:146 you can put it like spacing is near to combo 6 befor and than make it like this http://puu.sh/HH4u than spacing is correct at every combo at that moment and it looks good =) I don't really get it but if you mean putting 01:03:146 (1) inline with 6 then done
01:26:117 stack it correctly in the end of 3 Done
01:37:346 Why not put the timeing point exactly at the end 01:37:432 ^^ ? Same as 00:45:917 but then again, done

That is it for Normal


Hard

00:30:232 put it correctly into the end of slider 6 Done
00:42:232 put it correctly into the end of slider 1 Done
01:02:289 try to put end of slider 2 exactly into slider 7 from befor Done

That is it for Hard

Like the song and the beatmap ^^ Star ~
Good Luck =D

Fenya wrote:

Hi n.n)/

General:
In the diff "Lunatic Loli" there is a combo colours different from the other diff, please check it~ Fixed

Normal:
00:53:888 (2) - (nazi) move to x:180 y:340 Done

Hard:
00:43:774 (9) - Remove finish, add whistle Sounds better, done

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! Mod Request from my Queue.

[General:]

- Epilepsy Warning: Are you sure about the use of this option? Because I can't see any kind of weird flash lights to be added, really. You should ask to a BAT about that. Will ask around
- Break Time: 00:22:003 (B): On Loli's diff. you have a break time in this position but on the other difficulties you didn't add it. For consistency, it's better if you Remove this Break time from Loli's diff. or if you want you can add a Break Time on the other difficulties.
- Tags: Yasora, it's already on Yasora-Chan, so this make the tag Yasora useless, with Yasora-Chan in tags is more than enough because you can find him/her adding Yasora on the web, etc.For example you can check this map (that only has Yasora-Chan in tags), and I could find her/him without any kind of problem. So, Remove Yasora from tags. Removed

[Normal:]

• 00:22:003 (5): This finish doesn't fit fine here, sounds really low and this is the highest reason to say that it sounds bad. If you want to add a Finish in this Note is better if you add a Normal Finish custom 1 like you did on your Hard difficulty. Done
• 00:27:317 (x): Sounds a bit empty here, in General is a Normal diff. so a Note in 1/2 could be Ok. So, try to add a Note here Added
• 00:29:546 (4): Two Things in this Slider:
1- I think that it's ok where is it the Slider, but can work better with the music if you move this Slider 1/2 back (Red Tick, 00:29:374) and then you have to make it bigger on 1/2 to finish with this Slider on 00:30:232. Is more benefit to the Rhythm, really.
2- (NAZI)- A bit nazi, but in general your Sliders are curve (you only make stright Sliders when it's a short Slider), so for consistency, would be better if you do a Simple Curve in this Slider. Nothing Hard, just a simple curve to follow with your previous Slider. All done
• 00:35:374 (3): This Whistle on this note sounds very alone around a lot of Claps. To mantain the consistency and because sounds better in my opinion, would be better if you Replace the Whistle to a Clap in this Note. Agreed and done
• 00:46:003 (T): As I said on Easy, this change in the Volume is too high and to be sincere the music doesn't need that. It's better if you increase the Volume at least 20/25 % Was supposed to silence the spinner end but okay
• 00:49:260 (1): You have to consider to add a Clap at the beginning of this Slider. Plays preety fine and it's consistent with your previous Clap's Patterns. Done
• 01:05:889 (5, Spin): It's a Normal difficulty, and I also think that the Rhythm doesn't need a high emphatisize like you gave with the Note (5). On another hand, this kind of things can cause confusion in Normal players because the Spinner appear too sudden after the Note. In this case is better if you Remove the Note (5), and then the Spinner should start where was (5). Done
• 01:08:460 (T): Same as 00:46:003 Done
• 01:24:746 (3): To keep consistency on Hitsounds, it's better if you add a Normal Hitsound on the end of this Slider. You have to add a Inherited Timing Point (Green Line) with Normal Hitsounds on 01:25:089 Done

[Hard:]

• 00:23:374 (1): There is no music here, the music start on the next note. You can listen better that if you listen the music on 25/50%. So, to follow the music properly, it's better if you remove this Note. Done
• 00:26:289 (x): Feels kinda empty, and also it's a Hard difficulty. So, would be a good idea if you add a Note here. Done
• 00:32:632 (7,8): (NAZI)- To stack these Notes properly with (3,4,5) you should move these Notes to x: 273 y: 250. To make that you have to disable the option Grid Snap. Done
• 00:35:203 (7): To be sincere, this Note feels unnecesary and sometimes this diff. becomes difficult to a Hard difficulty. For this reason, is better if you delete this Note Done
• 00:43:089 (5,6,7,8,9): This pattern looks preety bad at the hour to play the map because is very overlaped by hitbursts, especially the Notes (8,9). Try this formation for a better flow and better visual. I'll give you the Screenshoot and the Code if you want to fix it easily Done

SPOILER

[352,68,43089,1,0
432,92,43260,1,0
436,176,43432,1,8
364,216,43603,1,8
308,148,43774,1,4

• 00:50:803 (1): There is a Stop in the music, so you have to remark that and not only follow a simple pattern. Would be better if you move this Slider to 00:50:974 to remark this Stop and then this Slider should finish on 00:51:146 Replaced 00:50:632 (6) with a slider that ends at 00:51:146 since it sounds better for me
• 00:58:174 (2): Well, this Slider looks very overlaped by hitburst. This is preety bad at the hour to play the map, anyways I can't find a good suggestion here, so if you can make a better thing would be great Done
• 01:05:889 (7): Seriously, do you listen any sound in the music? there is no sound here, it's better if you Remove this Note and then move the Spinner to here where appear the long sound in the Instrumental. After that make the Spinner bigger to finish on 01:08:460 Done
• 01:25:432 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3): You could strive a bit more with the Rhythm and not just copy/paste the same things. But ok, this is a personal opinion. Remapped that part so done

Well, I'm tired to mod the Taiko but in General aspects looks fine.
That's all, Good Luck with your map

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Lunatic Loli:]

• 00:23:546: Since it's the Hardest difficulty on the mapset, it's better if you start to map since here like the Hard difficulty. Consider that, please - Spinner added instead of notes because it fits better.
• 00:30:060 (x): It's an Insane diff. it's a good idea if you strive with the Rhythm a bit more. Since sounds empty this section, would be better if you add a Note here - Added notes.
• 00:32:117 (5): Meh, 1/1 doesn't fit at all here, and plays on awkward form to this difficulty. In this case I prefer to Reduce the length of this Slider by 1/2 (so will finish on White Tick, 00:32:289) and then add a Note on the blank space in 00:32:460. Just broke a bit the symetry, the Rhythm is the most important thing. - I would like to, but I have no idea what should I make.
• 00:32:803 (x): Add a Note here too. - ^
• 00:38:460 (1,2,3): This pattern can have a better flow if you Unstack (3) from these Sliders (1,2). Something like that would look great:

SPOILER

- Er, like what o_o
• 00:39:832 (4,5,6): (^) - I don't see any picture D:
• 00:43:774 (x): I'm preety sure that you need a Note here. Sounds preety good in my opinion. - Added stacked circle.
• 00:58:174 (2,3,4): (NAZI)- You can make a better edge to (2) if (3,4) are Curve instead of Stright Sliders. Try to make something like that, I'll provide you the Code too. - Do want.

SPOILER

216,264,58689,2,0,B|256:272|256:272|296:264,1,80,10|2
176,336,59031,2,0,B|256:352|256:352|336:336,1,160,0|10

• 01:08:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1): In my opinion, there is no a Stop to add an antijump in this place, so would be better if you increase the Spacing between these Notes (maybe 1,20 it's Ok) and at the end you can add a little jump between (7,1). You can try something like that - I'll think twice.

SPOILER

• 01:19:603 (7): You can add a New Combo here, looking 2 Reasons. The first one because it feels a change in the music so you can remark that with a New Combo and the second one is to avoid 12 Notes on a Combo. - Added.

- Sometime I would like to see more variety in the Rhythm and not just some 1/1 + Claps on the SliderTicks. It's an Insane, so you can use more 1/2 patterns. But, it's Ok. - Seriously, I focused on slider because that's my plan on the first time. This to proves that even we can make a lot of variation with 1/1, not just random stream like we pretend don't know how to map. Plus, my opinion says that 1/1 fits on most places, so I reduce using 1/2.

Loli Cjj wrote:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Lunatic Loli:]
• 00:38:460 (1,2,3): This pattern can have a better flow if you Unstack (3) from these Sliders (1,2). Something like that would look great:

SPOILER

- Er, like what o_o
• 00:39:832 (4,5,6): (^) - I don't see any picture D

SPOILER

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Whoops, I don't know what's happend here. I thought in something like that

SPOILER

Sorry for the inconvenience, Loli! Hope it fixed the problem with the BG now

Genshin wrote:

from modding queue:

[Normal]
00:26:974 (4) - change this to a reverse slider...
...and delete this note 00:27:317 (5) - Done
else is ok

[Hard]
00:25:089 (2) - move this note in another place, like this http://puu.sh/Kt5B Done
01:05:889 (1) - move the end of this spinner here 01:08:289 - The current one fits the music so no. Just try to play it at 25% playback rate and you'll find that it fits pretty well Also the kiai time ends there as well.

Good Luck :3

p.s. very nice map

palinus wrote:

palinus mod request queue

[Normal]

01:20:974 (1) - Is possible to make the slider look proper Edited it a little, done anyway
couldn't find any major unmentioned thing

[Hard]

00:49:260 (1) - wouldn't that hitcircle fit better at x:84 y:292 The current one flows better imho, since it'll move in arc instead of straight line
01:09:831 (4) - ^ x:324 y:64 Done
01:18:574 (2,4) - a similiar part earlier had end and start point ''reverted'' do the same here like this. Done
01:19:603 (1,3) - ^ Done with minor edits

I hope it was useful

1. The max size of SB images is 800x600, so u have to resize all ur images except white, and recalculate your SB codes
2. Seems you changed your timing but forget to fix the SB's, click "design" menu and choose "Move all elements in time...", then fix the timing of sb.

1. 00:49:431 (1) - maybe you can start this slider from the second white line(00:49:774 - ) to follow the beats prev.
2. 01:16:860 (1) - it's sudden a bit....i'd like to move it to 01:18:232 - ,stop at 01:20:632 - , 01:16:860 - could be another note+slider like 01:15:489 (1,2) - .

1. HP-1 at least
2. to be honest, put nearly all drum-claps on tickpoints is not a good idea because clap has the sense of "click" but not drag.
3. 00:47:717 (1,2,3,1) - claps here is confusing....

1. 00:24:574 (4,1,2,3) - this shape make a bad flow because of the spacing between 00:24:574 (4,1,2) - : same spacing with different time-distance, which will cause player confusing. To myself, i choose rather to stack (1,2) to current shape.
2. 01:24:232 - add a note here?
3. 01:31:945 (1) - don't be lazy to add green lines like Lunatic plz :>

1. 00:11:889 (1) - the nc here make no sense...imo
2. 00:34:860 (5,6) - this kinda shape also may ruin the flow
3. 00:45:831 (5,1) - bad stack...
4. 01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - er...what the shape here...

Scorpiour wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]

1. 00:11:889 (1) - the nc here make no sense...imo - Fix nc here and nearby.
2. 00:34:860 (5,6) - this kinda shape also may ruin the flow - Yeah, I believe. On the other side, ctrl+r this may a bit confusing people. If you like if it's ctrl+r'ed, I will. No changes at this part atm.
3. 00:45:831 (5,1) - bad stack... - It's well made I think. If you think it's bad because it's stacked, well then. No changes at this part atm.
4. 01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - er...what the shape here... - srsly why people? I think this part have been asked many times. This picture may explain , perhaps. http://puu.sh/LvWW

BeatofIke wrote:

Mod Queue Request! Sorry for long wait.

General
-> Nothing found! Congrats!

Normal
-> Overall Difficulty +1. Done

Excellent Map Overall. Should find a MAT now. No kudosu please! Oh crap I accidentally gave kds D:

PS: 888th Post! XD

Scorpiour wrote:

mod from queue

[Storyboard]

1. The max size of SB images is 800x600, so u have to resize all ur images except white, and recalculate your SB codes All done
2. Seems you changed your timing but forget to fix the SB's, click "design" menu and choose "Move all elements in time...", then fix the timing of sb. All done too

[Hard]

1. 00:24:574 (4,1,2,3) - this shape make a bad flow because of the spacing between 00:24:574 (4,1,2) - : same spacing with different time-distance, which will cause player confusing. To myself, i choose rather to stack (1,2) to current shape. Fixed with my own way
2. 01:24:232 - add a note here? Done
3. 01:31:945 (1) - don't be lazy to add green lines like Lunatic plz :> Done

that's all, general a good mapset good luck with rank~

those wrote:

irc

12:54 those: : Alright, you free to talk for a bit?
12:54 Frizz925: : Yup
12:54 those: : Alright. I try to be as unbiased as possible, due to having played the ranked Mirage of the Rain as my most played beatmap
12:55 those: : I'll go through all diffs, even if they are guests; I'll leave it to you to tell it to the mapper
12:55 those: : Starting with Lunatic Loli:
12:57 those: : 00:26:289 - The many, many occurrences of this hitsound pattern are too loud. They all happen on the slider tick (not sure if intentional), but because
12:57 those: : it's a slider tick, it really should not be as loud as a "hit" sound.
12:57 those: : Change: for S:C2 slidertick, change volume to 15-20% lower than the hitsounds around it
12:58 Frizz925: : Alright
12:58 those: : For example: 00:26:289 - should be lowered to 40-45%. - Done.
12:58 those: : 00:45:831 (5,1) - This stack is very, very difficult to read. - Changed.
12:59 those: : Furthermore, 00:46:346 (1,2,3,4) - should be a 5-stream as opposed to just 4. - Together with this, but still 4 stream as I follow beat on the song. It's not a big problem, so I'll change it to repeat.
13:00 those: : 00:59:546 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this, play and hitsounds feel like there isn't much going on. - I'm not sure, I'm lack of ideas here because I think it's better if it was like this, unless you gives me ideas for hitsounds ofc.
13:00 those: : Rotation and symmetry seem to be overused throughout the whole map; try to tone it down a bit to bring out more creative patterns, especially in the
13:00 those: : Kiai. - I think as long as it creates non-boring copypasta pattern here and there, it's okay. Instead of mapping 3 minutes map with 1/2 map copypasta'ed, I prefer to map symmetry and rotation pattern. Second, It's how I map. (At least how I map long time ago!)
13:01 those: : 01:25:089 (5,1,2) - Stacking here creates a hanging, stalling feeling, and is not appropriate here. - Nope.
13:01 those: : Same goes for 01:26:460 (3,4,5) - Nope.
13:02 those: : and the next two sets.
13:02 those: : 01:30:917 (7) - Can be made circular by adjusting nodes. Give it some time. - Done.

zeroclover wrote:

Yasora's Easy

00:11:031 (1) to previous slider like this - i just dont like slider tick sound, if 0.5 slider tick is rankable.. it will look nice humm, that's unrankable right
00:48:403 (3) - remove clap, too much clap sound weird imo following 'tak' sound in bg music
00:48:060 - this downbeat tick so alone but i don't think so-
short mod due too lazy and nazi
- dont overused hitsound, use it wisely and use different flow because song not always looping beat (this why nightcore mod very usefull , just hear the beat by yourself im too lazy modding nazi hitsound) no have idea for this, but imo the current hitsound is already fine

zeroclover wrote:

Taiko

00:22:003 - reduce volume hitsound , too noisy here no need actually, i think ._.
00:57:660 (1) - big katu look better imo big don "sounds" better :3

zeroclover wrote:

Lunatic Loli

00:22:003 - add spinner here end it at 00:23:289 - , look fit and work hehe - Since the music is trimming down, nope.
00:29:889 (6) - clap is enough, i dont think whistle not work here because im totally can hear whistle at (7) - Actually it's hitsound pattern, I know you hear most of clap includes whistles. Not all of them, though!
dont say u want make a huge Blue circle in taiko mode, if u want, ignore this

00:35:374 (6) - ctrl + R better imo - Totally agree.
00:42:574 (4,5) - this flow look broke - Many people commented about this so, changed 00:41:203 (1,2,3,4) -
00:59:717 (3) - clap in blue tick - yep.
01:18:746 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern look awful, why u not making star jump here, it will look pretty - Nope, until someone point this again, and again. I like this pattern though.
01:20:117 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ maybe - Nope, until someone point this again, and again. I like this pattern though.
01:25:432 - add note, this for previous white tick too - Nope, I have no plan to put notes there to follow percussion.
01:32:289 - why u need a lot of timing point here, u already used blank wav for spinner spin - Really? My folder has no blank spinner. Seems I need to redl.

zeroclover wrote:

Re- Mod

Hard

00:33:489 (2,4) - this note need symetric Fixed that
00:39:832 (4) - very bad in play view

SPOILER

i like you to move (4) from (2)slider's body ,maybe use this pattern Looks nice, done

SPOILER

01:30:917 (1,2) - use whistle, dont clap , sound weird with low volume sound imo Done

Normal

00:25:774 (3) - i think this will confusing newbie when this note stacked with (2) imo Moved that out, done
short mod due too nazi :
- too many stacked notes, i suggest make a space about it

Armin wrote:

[General]

*add "NOSTALGIA" (album) and "A Shadow in the Blue Sky" (original title name) in the tags? Will do, done
*Epilepsy warning? o_O' I asked a BAT about this before. He said that either way is fine but I guess I'll disable it now.
*your sidertick rate value... does not really fit with the song, but I bet you used it for the custom-slidertick thingy D: Well yes, that's because most of these use tick-hitsound except for Hard

[Normal]

00:32:632 (4,5) - I'd say, use the same spacing that you used on the previous patterns (reduce the distance in other words) Err, missed that one. Fixed.
01:01:432 (3) - unexpected jump o.o Missed that one too D: fixed
01:28:174 (1) - I'm not sure that a repeat on a blue tick (that doesn't follow anything) is a good idea S: I guess so, done

[Hard]

Okay

Armin wrote:

[Lunatic]

01:07:260 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner - yep.
00:49:689 (2,3,4,5) - unintuitive pattern.. i suggest you to add doublets here (in other words add a hitcircle here 00:49:603 and so on) - Once I make doublets, but the hate it, and I delete it. Now you approve it, and I'll put it again.

1. 00:17:889 (1) - Remove NC

1. Combo Mod

   1. 00:19:260 (5) - Seeing the prev combo placement, this should NC
   2. 00:20:632 (1) - The NC should be removed
   3. 00:33:317 (5) - The prev down beat is occupied by the slider repeat but still, this object have to be NC'ed (according to your combo placement)
   4. 00:34:346 (1) - Remove NC then NC 00:35:717 (6)
   5. 00:37:432 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:38:460 (6)
   6. 00:43:946 (5) - NC this (also try to make it so this slider is centered in y axis)
   7. 00:49:774 (6) - ^
   8. 00:50:803 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 00:52:174 (6)
   9. 00:53:546 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:55:260 (7)
   10. 00:56:803 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:58:003 (5)
   11. 01:03:147 (6) - NC
   12. 01:05:032 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 01:05:032 (1)
2. 00:26:460 (4) - This mini jump is unnecessary. There isn't any change in the music whatsoever anyway. Try to make the pattern more neat without changing the spacing, something like this
   
3. 00:59:546 (6,7) - I have to say that this rhythm is quite unexpected. From the rhythm you used so far, I expected this part to be similar with 00:37:432 (1,2). I suggest to stay following the beat instead of the piano here, it'll be easier to follow in this case
4. 01:28:174 (6) - Umm you should just separate the repeat arrow and the slider head all together, the overlap looks bad. Try a different shape, like this maybe (sorry lost the code xD)
   

1. SPOILER

   1. 00:12:403 (1) - Remove NC
   2. 00:15:146 (1) - ^
   3. 00:17:889 (1) - ^
   4. 00:20:632 (1) - ^
   5. 00:49:260 (1) - ^ the NC on 00:49:432 (6)
   6. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
   7. 00:59:546 (1) - ^ then NC on 01:00:403 (10)
   8. 01:01:774 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:27:145 (10,1,2,3,4) - Nothing wrong here, but I just want to say that this is kinda cramped. Next time you can try to spread the object more by not making them overlap with the previous objects
3. 00:50:632 (6) - The beat on 00:50:803 is very conspicuous. It's better if you use similar rhythm with 00:53:374 (4,5)
4. 00:35:374 (7) - Hmm maybe unstack this?
5. 01:30:917 (1,2,3) - You're using whistle instead of clap just like on the previous objects, this make the object to be inaudible. I suggest to use clap in these objects too

1. Maybe increase OD & HP by 1?
2. 00:27:146 (6,7,1) - Hmm I don't see why this should be 1.0 spacing
3. 00:41:032 (7,1) - ^
4. 00:43:603 (8,9,1) - Stack error. Move these objects 2 grid right and 2 grid down (LV 4 grid)
5. 00:43:946 (1,2) - The overlap looks bad. Try to make it into a simple cutting slider or an end cutter slider like on 00:27:489 (1,2)
6. 00:45:317 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:46:603 (7) - This should start on 00:46:689 while the previous slider should end on 00:46:603 (add one more repeat to the slider)
8. 00:47:717 (2,3,4,5) - 1.2 spacing is better here
9. 00:59:032 (4) - Hmm try to move this 1 grid up. The gap is to wide compare to the previous blanket
10. 01:08:460 (1) - Try to make the curve on this slider to follow the direction of the next objects (in this case move the 4th anchor point to x: 220 y: 352)
11. 01:02:803 (3) - Why 1.0 spacing? The prev and next spacing is 1.2 so this 1.0 spacing comes out of nowhere
12. 01:19:603 (1) - The direction of this slider brake the flow from the prev objects (01:17:546 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) -). I'm not saying you have to fix it cause it'll be too much too fix
13. 01:20:803 (6,7,1) - The stack is kinda tricky to read because of those overlap with the score burst. Try to reposition it so it'll be more conspicuous
14. 01:08:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing is too close for an anti - jump try 0.4 or 0.6 instead
15. The map have some interesting pattern and flow but you're sometime use 1.0 without any reason at all. Please try to be consistent
    

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]

1. Maybe increase OD & HP by 1? - ok...
2. 00:27:146 (6,7,1) - Hmm I don't see why this should be 1.0 spacing - Instead of stack I prefer triangle. It's not that bad there.
3. 00:41:032 (7,1) - ^ - Give me suggestion orz, but I like it so I'll leave it.
4. 00:43:603 (8,9,1) - Stack error. Move these objects 2 grid right and 2 grid down (LV 4 grid) - err, this maybe is okay?
5. 00:43:946 (1,2) - The overlap looks bad. Try to make it into a simple cutting slider or an end cutter slider like on 00:27:489 (1,2) - done.
6. 00:45:317 (4,5) - ^ - done.
7. 00:46:603 (7) - This should start on 00:46:689 while the previous slider should end on 00:46:603 (add one more repeat to the slider) - I think I've point this out maaaaaaaaany times. I'm following the beat. No changes on this rhythm, ever.
8. 00:47:717 (2,3,4,5) - 1.2 spacing is better here - Done.
9. 00:59:032 (4) - Hmm try to move this 1 grid up. The gap is to wide compare to the previous blanket - Err, yep!
10. 01:08:460 (1) - Try to make the curve on this slider to follow the direction of the next objects (in this case move the 4th anchor point to x: 220 y: 352) - I LOVE IT <3
11. 01:02:803 (3) - Why 1.0 spacing? The prev and next spacing is 1.2 so this 1.0 spacing comes out of nowhere - Okay. lol time breaker.
12. 01:19:603 (1) - The direction of this slider brake the flow from the prev objects (01:17:546 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) -). I'm not saying you have to fix it cause it'll be too much too fix - After thinking about so much complain, move whole triangle part.
13. 01:20:803 (6,7,1) - The stack is kinda tricky to read because of those overlap with the score burst. Try to reposition it so it'll be more conspicuous - Since things are moved, this should be leaved in peace. Second, I like the stacks.
14. 01:08:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing is too close for an anti - jump try 0.4 or 0.6 instead - I'm afraid it's not okay, but It's 0.4x at least for now.
15. The map have some interesting pattern and flow but you're sometime use 1.0 without any reason at all. Please try to be consistent - Point me more, I'll fix it.
    

That's all for now. Poke me after the fix for re-check.

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Normal]

1. Combo Mod

   1. 00:19:260 (5) - Seeing the prev combo placement, this should NC
   2. 00:20:632 (1) - The NC should be removed
   3. 00:33:317 (5) - The prev down beat is occupied by the slider repeat but still, this object have to be NC'ed (according to your combo placement)
   4. 00:34:346 (1) - Remove NC then NC 00:35:717 (6)
   5. 00:37:432 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:38:460 (6)
   6. 00:43:946 (5) - NC this (also try to make it so this slider is centered in y axis)
   7. 00:49:774 (6) - ^
   8. 00:50:803 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 00:52:174 (6)
   9. 00:53:546 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:55:260 (7)
   10. 00:56:803 (1) - ^ then NC on 00:58:003 (5)
   11. 01:03:147 (6) - NC
   12. 01:05:032 (1) - Remove NC then NC on 01:05:032 (1)
2. 00:26:460 (4) - This mini jump is unnecessary. There isn't any change in the music whatsoever anyway. Try to make the pattern more neat without changing the spacing, something like this
   
3. 00:59:546 (6,7) - I have to say that this rhythm is quite unexpected. From the rhythm you used so far, I expected this part to be similar with 00:37:432 (1,2). I suggest to stay following the beat instead of the piano here, it'll be easier to follow in this case
4. 01:28:174 (6) - Umm you should just separate the repeat arrow and the slider head all together, the overlap looks bad. Try a different shape, like this maybe (sorry lost the code xD)
   

[Hard]

1. SPOILER

   1. 00:12:403 (1) - Remove NC
   2. 00:15:146 (1) - ^
   3. 00:17:889 (1) - ^
   4. 00:20:632 (1) - ^
   5. 00:49:260 (1) - ^ the NC on 00:49:432 (6)
   6. 00:56:803 (1) - ^
   7. 00:59:546 (1) - ^ then NC on 01:00:403 (10)
   8. 01:01:774 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:27:145 (10,1,2,3,4) - Nothing wrong here, but I just want to say that this is kinda cramped. Next time you can try to spread the object more by not making them overlap with the previous objects
3. 00:50:632 (6) - The beat on 00:50:803 is very conspicuous. It's better if you use similar rhythm with 00:53:374 (4,5)
4. 00:35:374 (7) - Hmm maybe unstack this?
5. 01:30:917 (1,2,3) - You're using whistle instead of clap just like on the previous objects, this make the object to be inaudible. I suggest to use clap in these objects too

That's all for now. Poke me after the fix for re-check.

1. 00:59:546 (4,5) - Still quite tricky to read. I suggest to move 00:59:546 (4) to 00:59:374 (the clap sound is very conspicuous here so player will expected a note here). then use custom slider tick for 5
2. 01:08:460 - Instead of 30% volume how about 60%/70% volume with soft-whistle here? The current volume is kinda low I can't hear the feed back of the slider end
3. 01:28:174 (6) - This slider should end on 01:31:603. The blue tick repeat doesn't follow anything and even if it almost inaudible it still play awkward. As for the slider shape, I try fixing it here
   

   308,201,88174,2,0,B|308:141|256:113|256:113|308:89|340:33|340:33|372:89|

4. 01:31:946 (1) - The spinner bonus might not sound very good here, but the spinner spin can actually fit here. So it's better to remove the blank spinnerspin.wav. Beside silencing both spinner bonus & spinner spin doesn't make sense here. Also increase the volume a bit so it have goo fade out effect, I suggest to change the last 4 timing section volume to 50%, 30%, 10%, and 5%

1. 00:35:374 (7) - Hmm I guess 1.2 spacing work better here
2. 00:39:832 (4,5) - Use 1.0x spacing here. I don't see any reason why it should change spacing mid combo
3. 01:10:003 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The overlap make this pattern Hard to read. I suggest to make the overlap more neat, my idea is
   
   1. Try reposition these object so 01:10:346 (2) can be more visible, kinda like this
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. Stack 01:11:203 (5) under 01:10:346 (2) then move 01:11:374 (1) to x:324 y:68
   3. Move 01:11:032 (4) to x:304 y:304 this will make 01:11:032 (4,5,1) into jumps with equal distance and neater position
   4. The mini jump on 01:12:060 (4) is quite surprising imo, I suggest to use normal spacing here or maybe stack it under 01:11:889 (3)
4. 01:31:945 (1) - Same issue as Normal, I suggest to use the same volume setting too

Sallad4ever wrote:

Re-check time~~


[Normal]

1. 00:59:546 (4,5) - Still quite tricky to read. I suggest to move 00:59:546 (4) to 00:59:374 (the clap sound is very conspicuous here so player will expected a note here). then use custom slider tick for 5 Done
2. 01:08:460 - Instead of 30% volume how about 60%/70% volume with soft-whistle here? The current volume is kinda low I can't hear the feed back of the slider end Done
3. 01:28:174 (6) - This slider should end on 01:31:603. The blue tick repeat doesn't follow anything and even if it almost inaudible it still play awkward. As for the slider shape, I try fixing it here Done
   

   308,201,88174,2,0,B|308:141|256:113|256:113|308:89|340:33|340:33|372:89|

4. 01:31:946 (1) - The spinner bonus might not sound very good here, but the spinner spin can actually fit here. So it's better to remove the blank spinnerspin.wav. Beside silencing both spinner bonus & spinner spin doesn't make sense here. Also increase the volume a bit so it have goo fade out effect, I suggest to change the last 4 timing section volume to 50%, 30%, 10%, and 5% Done

[Hard]

1. 00:35:374 (7) - Hmm I guess 1.2 spacing work better here Done
2. 00:39:832 (4,5) - Use 1.0x spacing here. I don't see any reason why it should change spacing mid combo Already fixed before you're posting this xD
3. 01:10:003 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The overlap make this pattern Hard to read. I suggest to make the overlap more neat, my idea is Remade these parts with my own way, should be much more easier to read now
   
   1. Try reposition these object so 01:10:346 (2) can be more visible, kinda like this
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. Stack 01:11:203 (5) under 01:10:346 (2) then move 01:11:374 (1) to x:324 y:68
   3. Move 01:11:032 (4) to x:304 y:304 this will make 01:11:032 (4,5,1) into jumps with equal distance and neater position
   4. The mini jump on 01:12:060 (4) is quite surprising imo, I suggest to use normal spacing here or maybe stack it under 01:11:889 (3)
4. 01:31:945 (1) - Same issue as Normal, I suggest to use the same volume setting too Done

That's all for now
I feel kinda sick, so I'll continue with Lunatic Loli diff later. G usah buru-buru betulin nya wa pasti usahain nih map bisa wa bubble dengan selamat

1. 00:27:146 (6,7) - It's not bad but the spacing change is quite big for experienced player to notice. Not to mention on similar place on 00:29:889 (6,7,1) you're using jump which imo played better. The decision is still in your hand though
2. 00:41:032 (7) - Same as before I still think this should 1.2x spacing but for this one my other reason is because the next objects are on 1.2x
3. 00:45:317 (4,5) - Can you make the overlap more neater? You can move 00:45:317 (4) to x:70 y:244 (this will make the slider end to stack to previous slider) or move 4 to x:148 y:245 (it'll turn like this) be careful to not stack 6 & 7 under the slider end cause the stack will be messed up
4. 00:46:603 (7) - I see what you mean about the beat, but that's hard to listen as the sound of piano? is more conspicuous there. So rather than following he beat I strongly suggest to follow the more obvious sound, in this case just like I said before it's more appropriate that 7 start 1/4 beat later while 6 should have 1 more repeat
5. 01:25:774 (2) - The slider arrow almost hidden by the score burst of the previous slider. Just to be safe you should reposition the slider repeat try making it into blanket instead of stacking it the under the slider end, kinda like this?
6. 01:32:289 (1) - Same as the previous mod on Hard & Normal diff, this spinner sounds better with the spin sound on it. If you want to make the spinner almost inaudible make so on the end of it not on the spinner it self

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Lunatic Loli]

1. 00:27:146 (6,7) - It's not bad but the spacing change is quite big for experienced player to notice. Not to mention on similar place on 00:29:889 (6,7,1) you're using jump which imo played better. The decision is still in your hand though - Reducing the spacing here will make an ugly overlapped triangle circle. I prefer to keep this pattern, but if you have suggestions, feel free to tell me.
2. 00:41:032 (7) - Same as before I still think this should 1.2x spacing but for this one my other reason is because the next objects are on 1.2x - Moved.
3. 00:45:317 (4,5) - Can you make the overlap more neater? You can move 00:45:317 (4) to x:70 y:244 (this will make the slider end to stack to previous slider) or move 4 to x:148 y:245 (it'll turn like this) be careful to not stack 6 & 7 under the slider end cause the stack will be messed up - Followed your first suggestions. It came out nicely!
4. 00:46:603 (7) - I see what you mean about the beat, but that's hard to listen as the sound of piano? is more conspicuous there. So rather than following he beat I strongly suggest to follow the more obvious sound, in this case just like I said before it's more appropriate that 7 start 1/4 beat later while 6 should have 1 more repeat - I said bass sound, not piano. You're right that piano has 5 beat. However, I follow bass that has 4 beats. Actually I want to keep this note as I freaking love this. Changed before people point this lovelybye part again.
5. 01:25:774 (2) - The slider arrow almost hidden by the score burst of the previous slider. Just to be safe you should reposition the slider repeat try making it into blanket instead of stacking it the under the slider end, kinda like this? Moved slider repeat but following 01:26:460 (3) - 's approach circle.
6. 01:32:289 (1) - Same as the previous mod on Hard & Normal diff, this spinner sounds better with the spin sound on it. If you want to make the spinner almost inaudible make so on the end of it not on the spinner it self - But, they said it has a silent spinner sound... My whole greenfield was once here. ONCE. AND NOW TWICE.

That's it, I've recheck all the other diff and I think they are ready.This should be the last one I hope

Charles445 wrote:

[Insane]
00:49:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is cool but the spacing should be consistent. - Creating consistent spacing causes overlap, so I change it to sliders http://puu.sh/1aZ2B is it ok now? Although
01:08:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Please don't have these anti-jumps. They are far too hard to read and break the flow of the map. - Changed to star pattern (like
01:07:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - )