bmin11 wrote:

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Really now. Everything looks good except the lack of new combos. If you can no more than 5 beats per combo. =x (basicly shorten the huge 10+ combos that you have on both diffs)

Less then 5????
I'll say less then 20
Right now, the map looks dizzy @_@

animask wrote:

Negative offset?
!summon Zekira
lolz


[Normal]
01:11:34 (7,8,9) - Spacing
01:12:65 (1,2,3) - Spacing

[Hard]
01:12:65 (7,8) - Doesn't feel right

Some parts seemed to have wrong spacing.
Good Job though~

Fixed

PandaCath wrote:

[Normal]
00:10:03 (2) - Not distance snapped correctly
00:11:90 (7) - one grid up, level 3
00:12:65 (9) - Maybe start a new combo here
00:22:78 (7) - DS this too
01:05:90 (7) - 2 grids to the left, level 3
01:09:09 (9, 10) - DS
01:11:34 (7,8,9) - Why is this distance snap slightly different from... say 01:10:40 (3,4,5,6)
01:12:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:21:46 (5) - ends weird

[Hard]
This has a different offset, but it's still spot-on like normal... I guess it's okay?

Nothing wrong from a look-through.

Starred!

rust45 wrote:

Remember, I am making suggestions most of the time, not must need to be fixed fixes.

[Overall]
Very Nice Job, good hitsounds, comboing, etc. Also, capitlize the "W" in "World" in the title, then make a full submission. Anyway, star.

[Normal]
00:21:84 (5) - This part tripped me up because the note next to it made me ignore the repeat, maybe it you move the next note to a different place.
01:00:65 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I found these odd because most of the song had loud hitnoises and a lot, and don't think this whole part needs to be quiet, makes it sound boring.

[Hard]
The Drain Rate seemed to be unforgiving, maybe lower the Drain Rate and/or the Overall Difficulty
00:09:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The really fast sliders in this combo seem to make it too hard. But it's your call, I'm not the best at hard maps.
01:06:65 (1) - Why did the hitsounds get quiet here? Either make the rest of the song the same volume, don't do it, or make the change less noticeable, it just sounds odd the way it is.

- I intended it because it is 'Hard' difficulty

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Normal:
00:13:78 (4) - align with 5 from previous combo
00:29:53 (2,3) - the spacing between these 2 is different than the spacing between 4,5 and 6,7
01:04:40 (3) - align with 1
01:14:90 (10) - align with 8?

Hard:
00:29:53 (3) - align with 1?
00:30:09 (4) - align with 6
00:36:09 (4) - align with 6
00:53:72 (9) - align with 7
01:15:09 (6) - align with 5?
01:19:03 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
01:19:40 (5) - make the same distance from 4 that 3 is
01:19:59 (7,8,9) - make a straight line?

Nice map. Star.

MoonFragrance wrote:

Normal]
00:21:84 (5) - This part tripped me up because the note next to it made me ignore the repeat, maybe it you move the next note to a different place.[/color]

MoonFragrance wrote:

[b][color=#BF0000][Hard]
The Drain Rate seemed to be unforgiving, maybe lower the Drain Rate and/or the Overall Difficulty
00:09:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The really fast sliders in this combo seem to make it too hard. But it's your call, I'm not the best at hard maps.
- I intended it because it is 'Hard' difficulty

MoonFragrance wrote:

I can't understand 'uninherited offset' and 'multiple offset' @_@

Once, I fixed offset to 5153.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

:O

[Normal]:
00:35:15 (1) - Move a little more down to make even with (4) and (5).
00:35:15 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - That's a lot of claps. x_x
01:11:53 (8) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
01:12:65 (1) - Move it a little more so it can connect with (2)~
- Fixed

[Hard]:
00:42:46 (7) - Finish?
- I added a new circle sounds finish at 00:42:65

01:12:65 (x) - Add beat here?
- Fixed

[MX]:
00:09:46 (x) - I don't know how DJMax started the song out, but it sounds better if you start it here?
- My mistake , Fixed

00:17:34 (2) - Move 1 right on Grid Level 3.
- Fixed


I'm impressed. There aren't a lot of errors and this is a pretty solid map.

Star~
- Thakns

DeathxShinigami wrote:

A fantastic pink star for your efforts. :>

Alex0686 wrote:

[Normal]
00:48:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Didn't hinder me, but spacing is different from the rest.
Why are the hit sounds set to Custom 1?

[Hard]
Fine~

[MX]
00:42:09 (8) - Not to be nazi-ish, but maybe make it more parallel to (4,5)

StarForU!

Fixed Thank you.

deepsea wrote:

All map is good, just...

All Difficulties-RESNAP ALL NOTES. Please remember this after timing change.


Also, IMO the easist difficulty is still tough for newers, do you want to make an easier one? This is a suggestion.


Get a teletubby star.

Takuma wrote:

General:
You still didn't resnap notes. Timing > Resnap all notes - do this with the 1/4 snap divisor.

MX:
I think the slider velocity is a little too fast.
- I wanted to player can feel speed on this speedy song. If you think this slider velocity make this map extremely hard, then I'll fix it.

01:21:46 (1) - Maybe add a finish?

Hard:
01:20:34 (10) - New combo.
01:20:90 (12) - ^

Normal:
01:16:028 - It feels odd that there's a break then a few notes - you should delete the break and map this section imo.
-Then, the difficulty is raised. I don't want that. :(

Mogsworth wrote:

All difficulties:
-00:29:153 - Set this as the preview point.
- I didn't know how can I set the preview point T.T
Thank U for tell me about preview point.

By the way, I think 17:340 is more fitter.
So, I fixed it at 17:340.
Any defecf in here?


Normal:
-00:15:09 (5) - Remove the Finish, this part could do without one, since there is no resonating sound afterwards.
-00:51:27 (10) - Add a Clap.
-00:53:34 (6) - Remove the Clap from the endpoint.
-A spinner is needed so there is no absolute max score set in stone. I'd suggest you replace 01:20:34 (1,2,3,4,5) with one.

Hard:
*-01:08:15 (5) - This is slightly awkward to me, I dunno. I'd suggest either a new combo mark or leaving it as it is unless another BAT brings up this point.
-01:21:46 (1) - End this silently (have the last inherit timing section have no hitsound volume).

MX:
-00:42:46 (10) - Finish goes here.
-01:21:46 (1) - End this silently (have the last inherit timing section have no hitsound volume).

That's all I really have to complain about. Fix and I'll bubble.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Normal:
Increase the hitcircle size, please. This will also lower the star rating, giving it a wider spread.
01:19:121- You don't need a break here.

MX:
00:28:21 (7) - Slider is improperly snapped.