[quote="TheVileOne"]Okay here's my mod
General
Lize's Hard doesn't have letterboxing checked. Is this alright? Fixed
name1, name2 are unused. If you're not going to use them, remove them from the mapset and full submit. Fixed
Insane
00:01:870 (5,1) - Awkward spacing. A more normal spacing would be better IMO.
00:05:870 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:370 (6) - Next combo should start here.
00:04:370 (1,2,3) - Consider using a larger snap and possibly mapping this part more towards the left side of the screen.
00:05:870 (5,1) - Spacing is too far.
00:10:870 (2,3) - Perhaps replace with a slider?
00:19:995 (7) - Move to x 264 y 192 to straighten.
00:22:120 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about having a jump go into a slowdown. 00:23:370 (3,4) - is kind of awkward. How about turning this 00:23:370 - into a 1/2th length repeat slider. http://puu.sh/12WI5
00:23:745 (4,1) - Too close. 00:23:745 (4,1,2,3,4) - needs to all follow 0.5 snap.
00:28:620 (3) - Plays bad. I suggest you just have a single note here 00:28:745 - and you have a 1.2 snap stack. http://puu.sh/12WRf
00:29:620 (3) - ^
00:30:620 (3,4) - I don't feel these jumps. They seem forced to me. I would adapt the stack pattern I suggested you use above instead.
00:57:370 (4,5,6) - I'm pretty sure this is unrankable and it looks bad. You should change. also I'm not sure where you're getting 1/4th sounds here. I suggest replacing the mini-sliders with 1/2th notes and then stack them.
00:59:370 (4,5,6) - ^
01:01:620 (5) - Should be 1/4th
01:01:620 (5) - Move second point to x 152 y 88. The curve looked a bit lopsided.
01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds overmapped to me, but people probably like this sort of thing. The plan to change performs in particular the status quo because there is not it.
01:16:370 (1,2) - Too close. At least 1.0 snap.
01:29:870 (1,2) - Shouldn't be greater than 2.0 snap.
01:30:245 (3) - Remove whistle from end.
01:50:370 (2,1) - 1.0 snap.
01:50:870 (1) - Unfitting shape. I recommend this. http://puu.sh/12Xcm
02:43:120 (1,2,3) - Add a slight curve to this.
02:50:620 (3,4,5,6) - Stacking improperly. Move this to x 352 y 364
Other ALL FIXED thanks ~
General
Lize's Hard doesn't have letterboxing checked. Is this alright? Fixed
name1, name2 are unused. If you're not going to use them, remove them from the mapset and full submit. Fixed
Insane
00:01:870 (5,1) - Awkward spacing. A more normal spacing would be better IMO.
00:05:870 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:370 (6) - Next combo should start here.
00:04:370 (1,2,3) - Consider using a larger snap and possibly mapping this part more towards the left side of the screen.
00:05:870 (5,1) - Spacing is too far.
00:10:870 (2,3) - Perhaps replace with a slider?
00:19:995 (7) - Move to x 264 y 192 to straighten.
00:22:120 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about having a jump go into a slowdown. 00:23:370 (3,4) - is kind of awkward. How about turning this 00:23:370 - into a 1/2th length repeat slider. http://puu.sh/12WI5
00:23:745 (4,1) - Too close. 00:23:745 (4,1,2,3,4) - needs to all follow 0.5 snap.
00:28:620 (3) - Plays bad. I suggest you just have a single note here 00:28:745 - and you have a 1.2 snap stack. http://puu.sh/12WRf
00:29:620 (3) - ^
00:30:620 (3,4) - I don't feel these jumps. They seem forced to me. I would adapt the stack pattern I suggested you use above instead.
00:57:370 (4,5,6) - I'm pretty sure this is unrankable and it looks bad. You should change. also I'm not sure where you're getting 1/4th sounds here. I suggest replacing the mini-sliders with 1/2th notes and then stack them.
00:59:370 (4,5,6) - ^
01:01:620 (5) - Should be 1/4th
01:01:620 (5) - Move second point to x 152 y 88. The curve looked a bit lopsided.
01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds overmapped to me, but people probably like this sort of thing. The plan to change performs in particular the status quo because there is not it.
01:16:370 (1,2) - Too close. At least 1.0 snap.
01:29:870 (1,2) - Shouldn't be greater than 2.0 snap.
01:30:245 (3) - Remove whistle from end.
01:50:370 (2,1) - 1.0 snap.
01:50:870 (1) - Unfitting shape. I recommend this. http://puu.sh/12Xcm
02:43:120 (1,2,3) - Add a slight curve to this.
02:50:620 (3,4,5,6) - Stacking improperly. Move this to x 352 y 364
Other ALL FIXED thanks ~