Okay here's my modGeneralLize's Hard doesn't have letterboxing checked. Is this alright?
name1, name2 are unused. If you're not going to use them, remove them from the mapset and full submit.
Hibari's NormalIt was a nice solid difficulty for the most part. It was also confusing to mod, so make sure you're happy with anything I suggest.
00:16:120 (1,2) - Exactly 1.0 please. Afterwards make sure the rest of the spacings are perfect.
00:22:870 (2,3) - Look like they should be lower in the pattern. If you didn't adjust the part before it, then it looks better if these were at x 84 y 40. adjust spacing after as necessary.
00:40:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not the nicest combo to look at. This needs some work before it gets ranked. My thoughts is to change the slider slider transition here 00:40:120 (1,2) - to a slider note transition similar to the one at the end of this combo. (Curve the slider) Starting a note before that slider allows for better positioning.
00:41:870 - Not having a note here is bothering me really. You should just add a note here for a more complete beat.
00:43:870 - I feel there should be something here, but a note doesn't fit. You could start the next slider here, and have it half long. Then a single note can go on the red tick. I rather like how this plays.
http://puu.sh/12V3C01:09:120 (3) - I don't think this is perfectly shaped. I suggest you use a softer curve and then the next couple notes should be lower to sort of match a curve. Something like this would be better IMO, maybe not absolutely perfect, but it's better.
http://puu.sh/12VjC01:36:120 (1) - This shape looks a lot better than this 01:37:120 (2) - . Why not just use this shape instead for all these parts or at least some of them? also new combo. It's bugged.
02:40:120 (1) - Add whistle to repeat and end?
02:40:120 (1,2) - Exactly 1.0.
Lize's HardVery well made. I enjoyed this difficulty. It kept a repetitive beat fresh with constant new and interesting patterns and it was fun.
00:58:870 (3,4) - Perhaps increase spacing from center from 3 to 5 units? You're slowly increasing the spacing after and I think the extra distance helps somewhat.
01:02:870 (1,2,3) - just awesome.
01:12:370 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Good job on this.
01:34:120 - Unnecessary green line.
01:34:120 (3,4,1) - So weird... I'm not sure what to suggest. 0.8 maybe.
01:34:745 (1) - Start here 01:34:870 - ?
02:10:995 (4) - Meh. I'd rather this note be removed. Don't even have to fix spacing afterward IMO. It's the same spacing as 02:18:995 (5,6,1) -
02:13:745 (3) - Kind of hard to identify this as a slider due to that hitburst. I suggest moving it somewhere else.
02:21:120 (2) - Sounds weird with so many repeats. Not the best design choice.
02:45:870 (4,1) - Space at a normal snap? Smaller snap doesn't flow the best IMO.
Insane00:01:870 (5,1) - Awkward spacing. A more normal spacing would be better IMO.
00:05:870 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:370 (6) - Next combo should start here.
00:04:370 (1,2,3) - Consider using a larger snap and possibly mapping this part more towards the left side of the screen.
00:05:870 (5,1) - Spacing is too far.
00:10:870 (2,3) - Perhaps replace with a slider?
00:19:995 (7) - Move to x 264 y 192 to straighten.
00:22:120 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure about having a jump go into a slowdown. 00:23:370 (3,4) - is kind of awkward. How about turning this 00:23:370 - into a 1/2th length repeat slider.
http://puu.sh/12WI500:23:745 (4,1) - Too close. 00:23:745 (4,1,2,3,4) - needs to all follow 0.5 snap.
00:28:620 (3) - Plays bad. I suggest you just have a single note here 00:28:745 - and you have a 1.2 snap stack.
http://puu.sh/12WRf00:29:620 (3) - ^
00:30:620 (3,4) - I don't feel these jumps. They seem forced to me. I would adapt the stack pattern I suggested you use above instead.
00:57:370 (4,5,6) - I'm pretty sure this is unrankable and it looks bad. You should change. also I'm not sure where you're getting 1/4th sounds here. I suggest replacing the mini-sliders with 1/2th notes and then stack them.
00:59:370 (4,5,6) - ^
01:01:620 (5) - Should be 1/4th
01:01:620 (5) - Move second point to x 152 y 88. The curve looked a bit lopsided.
01:12:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds overmapped to me, but people probably like this sort of thing.
01:16:370 (1,2) - Too close. At least 1.0 snap.
01:29:870 (1,2) - Shouldn't be greater than 2.0 snap.
01:30:245 (3) - Remove whistle from end.
01:50:370 (2,1) - 1.0 snap.
01:50:870 (1) - Unfitting shape. I recommend this.
http://puu.sh/12Xcm02:43:120 (1,2,3) - Add a slight curve to this.
02:50:620 (3,4,5,6) - Stacking improperly. Move this to x 352 y 364
ConclusionI might have to recheck for a star on this.