Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
[Inconsistency in Kiai Times: Keep the kiai time the same]
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:56:066, ends on 01:22:897

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:56:066, ends on 01:22:897

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:56:066, ends on 01:23:108

- [Taiko] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:56:066, ends on 01:23:108

Normal fix~ Taiko 01:23:108 have a note



[Hard]
00:37:263 (1) - 跳错了 不应该这里跳 这里按照原距离摆 然后这个做一个跳00:37:475 (2) fixed~
01:20:468 (1) - remove finish 最後面還有1/2拍的餘音 這用finish感覺剛剛好 :>


[Insane]
00:02:510 (4) - delete 一直覺得這個circle很斟酌 好吧砍了 QAQ
01:20:362 (1) - remove finish 同Hard

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这真的是你第二张图么=-= 其實有坑了3-4張啦..
太不科学了 怎么这么神..
没什么好挑的了
Wonderful Mapset

General

BeatofIke wrote:

Mod Request. Here's what I've found:

General
-> I recommend an Easy Difficulty, due to difficulty spread! I think Normal is easy enough in whole difficulties I will Consider to make the Easy difficulty ..thanks

Hard
00:03:249 (3,1) - This felt weird to me. I don't know the reason that it felt weird ><

Insane
-> Good Enough!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

• 
  Speaking of a taiko BG, it has a blank under the playing field.
  
  Can you fix it?

1. 00:31:348 (3,4) - To follow the vocal here is not that good idea, since you're following a simple 1/4-beat basically.
2. 00:52:580 (1) - IMO it's better to start the spinner from 00:52:686, to follow the vocal, as well as other diffs.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
I suggest a tick rate of 2 given the number of 1.5 beat sliders you are using.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
I suggest a tick rate of 2 given the number of 1.5 beat sliders you are using. Fixed

[Hard]
00:10:432 (1) - I think this would flow better if you didn't place jumps between combos in this section I think the jump is follow front part.
00:37:475 (1) - ^ The jump is follow the vocal and music.
01:18:672 (2,3,4,5) - the constant back and forth here feels awkward, see if you can find a better home for some of these notes OK,I change those place. And let those not back and forth too many.

[Insane]
00:01:982 (1) - again, I think the flow would be better here if you didn't jump, since the music here is so smooth Same with Hard

Suzully wrote:

Hi.

[General]

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  Speaking of a taiko BG, it has a blank under the playing field.
  
  Can you fix it? I think this is ok. Because the Taiko mapper also use the same BG with blank in his ranked map 0.0

[Insane]

1. 00:31:348 (3,4) - To follow the vocal here is not that good idea, since you're following a simple 1/4-beat basically.OK. I make the slider end to 00:31:559 -
2. 00:52:580 (1) - IMO it's better to start the spinner from 00:52:686, to follow the vocal, as well as other diffs. Right. Fix it the same with other diffs.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
I suggest a tick rate of 2 given the number of 1.5 beat sliders you are using.

jesse, if you want to change it on Normal, change on Hard too please. Because making a tick rate all the same in all diffs is better. Already fix Normal and Hard

Make change about both SFG's and mine, then call me back.

Garven wrote:

Since there might be tick rate changes going on, I may as well throw in my two cents as well:

[Normal]
New combo progression feels kind of random. Try to set it every 2 tall white ticks, so a new combo should be at 00:17:615 (4) - instead of 00:18:038 (1) - , a new combo at 00:20:573 (3) - , remove at 00:22:263 (1) - etc. Follow that pattern please. Yeah..I see the NC problem and all fixed.
A lot of the sliders felt poorly constructed as well. :o
Take 01:22:263 (3) - as an example. Making blankets with your curves will lead to a much better looking pattern, like this:

SPOILER

This fixed
See what you can find in here that you can improve to make a more satisfying visual experience! Hmmm...I try to find and fix a little part ~"~

[Hard]
00:03:883 (2) - 1 grid down to line up with 1 Fixed
00:11:911 (5,1) - Surprised there wasn't a jump here jump!!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Taiko]
Naming this Taiko Oni might be a bit more informative to players k~change the name with Oni
00:07:897 (5) - see how you like a k here? fixed
00:32:827 (4) - ^ fixed. this hit with vocal will nice
00:57:756 (2) - kat to match the high pitch in the vocals I think fix those could not harmony in kiai
01:03:038 (1) - ^
01:04:728 (2) - ^
01:11:277 (2) - ^

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
00:54:799 (4,5,6,1) - Delete for a much better effect going into the chorus ok! All delete.
01:14:658 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1) - You know, I came across these rhythms earlier, and seeing them here as well... they don't really fit the phrasing of the song that well. For a descending progression like this, maybe a suspended rhythm such as this will work better:

D kd d D kd d agree,and nice rhythm ~
Actually, that's another thing: there were very few finishes used in this map. Maybe see if you can use some to emphasize more phrases better? I find a few part add finish to follow the music!
01:22:792 (1,3,1) - Delete fixed,and I think 01:22:792 - add a note is good in the end.