1. I wonder why you didn't capitalize 'i' on the source.
   http://akbstrip.jp/1st/information.html
2. Add tag "ACQUIRE"

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]

1. I wonder why you didn't capitalize 'i' on the source. OK,I change~
   http://akbstrip.jp/1st/information.html
2. Add tag "ACQUIRE" Add~

[Insane]
00:27:334 (5) - NC fixed
00:27:968 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:28:813 (4) - NC here or next note fixed
01:15:292 (3,4) - Switch position? Flow would be better imo. fixed
01:20:256 (1) - Start from 01:20:362 to fit lyrics. fixed


[Hard]
Fine


Good luck

- t e n n y a - wrote:

hello from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion

[General]
the bg seems LQ, consider to change it?
i suggest to use muted slider slide I have already add the mute sliderslide...I full submission again~

[Hard]
nothing o.o

[Insane]
- 00:02:510 : add circle? fixed
- 00:23:320 : move the 2nd point to x56 y96 ? not big problem..

thats all I can find, rank good luck

@Shameimaru- Thank star!!

@Nagisawa
Thanks mod and star >w<

Nagisawa wrote:

Normal
00:08:742 (2,2) - maybe symmetry what?
00:14:658 (1,3) - ^ what?
00:34:094 (1) - remove whistle the whistle on next slider become unconcistant, also I like this whistle 3:
00:52:686 (1) - end spinner here 00:55:221 - no, where your suggest is supporting to?
00:56:066 (1) - no whistle, finish finish sounds awful for me

• fix the source of Insane(AKiBA'S TRiP → AKIBA'S TRIP)
  add "ACQ UIRE" to the tags.

• 00:05:362 (3,4) - this step between sliders may not be kind for newbie players.
  00:12:545 (1) - how about start spinner at 00:12:334 or remove 00:12:122 (3) and start at 00:12:122 ? this spinner seems too short for the lowest diff.
  00:27:756 (2,3) - same as 00:05:362
  01:18:883 (4,1) - ^
  01:22:263 (3) - I think the song is end at 01:22:897. how about cut this slider at that time?

• 00:23:953 (1,2) - why the rhythm become so simple though you put sliders at 00:20:573 (1,2)? I feel here lonely.
  00:47:404 (3) - a bit close to previous slider. 1 grid left.
  01:02:193 (1,2) - the flow of cursor is suddenly curved, and I feel it not so good. how about put (2) on an extension line of (1) ?
  01:03:883 (1,2) - according to previous section and melody, this jump is a little unnatural. how about to do Ctrl+R to (1) ?
  01:06:418 (2,3) - this angle may be difficult, because the direction of the large jump and the slider are different.
  01:07:263 (4,5) - ^
  01:18:038 (1) - how about rotate like this? I think it will get better flow.
  SPOILER

  
  01:20:468 (1) - I think it's cool if you cut this slider at 01:22:897 and add finish at volume of 40%.

• 00:26:489 (1) - remove NC to be symmetric with 00:12:968 (3).
  00:30:714 (1,2) - according to the previous flow, this short slider is unnatural for me. how about this rhythm like this?
  SPOILER

  
  00:59:446 (1,3) - remove grid snap and stack them perfectly.
  01:16:348 (1) - I think this straight slider doesn't match with the flow, how about change like this one?
  SPOILER

  
  01:20:362 (1) - same as Hard's last spinner.

h-728 wrote:

Thank you for request

[General]

• fix the source of Insane(AKiBA'S TRiP → AKIBA'S TRIP) fixed
  add "ACQ UIRE" to the tags. fixed

[Hard]

• 00:23:953 (1,2) - why the rhythm become so simple though you put sliders at 00:20:573 (1,2)? I feel here lonely.fixed. same rhythm with 00:20:573 (1,2)
  00:47:404 (3) - a bit close to previous slider. 1 grid left. fixed. but is move previous slider.
  01:02:193 (1,2) - the flow of cursor is suddenly curved, and I feel it not so good. how about put (2) on an extension line of (1) ? nope~
  01:03:883 (1,2) - according to previous section and melody, this jump is a little unnatural. how about to do Ctrl+R to (1) ? fixed
  01:06:418 (2,3) - this angle may be difficult, because the direction of the large jump and the slider are different. fixed. remap this section.
  01:07:263 (4,5) - ^ ^
  01:18:038 (1) - how about rotate like this? I think it will get better flow. nope~
  SPOILER

  
  01:20:468 (1) - I think it's cool if you cut this slider at 01:22:897 and add finish at volume of 40%. fixed

[Insane]

• 00:26:489 (1) - remove NC to be symmetric with 00:12:968 (3). fixed
  00:30:714 (1,2) - according to the previous flow, this short slider is unnatural for me. how about this rhythm like this? fixed
  SPOILER

  
  00:59:446 (1,3) - remove grid snap and stack them perfectly. fixed
  01:16:348 (1) - I think this straight slider doesn't match with the flow, how about change like this one? fixed
  SPOILER

  
  01:20:362 (1) - same as Hard's last spinner. fixed

that's all. sorry for delay It's OK ><
many mods are already here, and there are nothing left for me to say. good luck

h-728 wrote:

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[Normal]

• 00:05:362 (3,4) - this step between sliders may not be kind for newbie players. how not? its spaced correctly
  00:12:545 (1) - how about start spinner at 00:12:334 or remove 00:12:122 (3) and start at 00:12:122 ? this spinner seems too short for the lowest diff. you said something about newbie players upthere, I think the space between last note and spinner should be this way
  00:27:756 (2,3) - same as 00:05:362 same
  01:18:883 (4,1) - ^
  01:22:263 (3) - I think the song is end at 01:22:897. how about cut this slider at that time? someone suggested to make it longer, and Im according to it

sliders you made look pretty nice. but newbie players may feel difficult to follow them that were curved in a right angle like 00:07:052 (1). nah

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

All fix ~ thanks your mod

ikari_kyon wrote:

wow!! your reply so fast ><

Byakugan249 wrote:

italic is annoying =w=
[Normal]
00:00:292 (1) - that whistle isn't loud enough to emphasize the instrumental. replace it for a finish instead. it'll give off a nice introduction to the song as it matches the instrumental nicely.[/i] beginn of instrumental is so loud that even finish gets covered by it, anyways added ;x
00:10:432 (1) - ]hmm consider making this a curved slider to blanket the m-shaped slider. yes it disappears, but i feel that by doing this, it'll be consistent with the blankets in this part since almost every note here is blanketed.[/i] will consider if its pointed again~ you said it, the m-shaped has disappeared till here
00:12:545 (1) - you forgot a finish on this spinner. add it to match the cymbals in this part of the song. though I dont like it at all added =v=
00:20:573 (3,4) - i can see why this isn't a NC because of the pattern, but make (3) a NC because the lyrics there. do this pattern instead as it follows the vocals accurate and it flows to the song during gameplay IMO.[/i] no new combo due placement
00:42:122 (2) - replace the whistle for a clap. it'll match the "clap" in the background music.[/i] sorry, dont want to use claps ><
00:43:813 (2) - ^[/i]
00:45:503 (2) - ^
00:46:770 (2) - same as above, but at the end.[/i]
00:51:841 (3) - make this slider look like (2). the lyrics do change, but since the melody in the vocals is the same, i think this combo would make sense as it emphasizes the feeling in the vocals during gameplay.[/i] not so according with explain but changed since it just looks better
01:02:827 (1) - replace the whistle for a finish. i feel that it'll represent a new pattern since the lyrics change to the point that a new verse in the lyrics change.[/i] k
01:04:517 (2) - make this slider look like (1). i see the blanket to (3), but since the vocal tone is the same although the lyrics change, it gives off that flowy feeling to the map since the vocal tone is the same. not to mention it should make the blanket nicer during gameplay IMO.[/i] o: dunno
01:16:348 (1) - ]same as 01:02:827, but if you don't add a finish, add a whistle for consistency with 01:02:827.[/i] vocal is not so high on this part~

[Taiko]
00:11:489 (2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - i feel that this should be kkkkddd. the k's follow the snare drums in the song.[/i] yes, Im following the drums, but they are not on the same scale, also 4 katsu and 3 dons then is not so soft to hit, this pattern feels better on the drum variation and is more soft to hit
00:27:122 (1,2) - make this dd instead of kk. if you're following that sound in the instrumental, it gradually decreases in this. the k's follow the crescendo in this and the d's follow the decrescendo in the instrumental part of the song.[/i] I know about decreasing and increasing sounds for notes, that is basically my style /o/ but I feel that on this pointed part that effect is having a lower increase and that is why I used them here

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's get started...mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
CLEAR!

[Hard]
00:09:799 (4,5) - i feel that a repeat slider fits here since the instrumental pauses for a half beat and it's connected in this part since there's a 1/2 hold in the instrumental. ok! use slider with the instrumental is better~
00:12:968 (3) - maybe you can make this a NC because the vocals start here? (1,2) is following the instrumental while (3-6) follows the vocals. I think 00:25:432 - is the same
00:18:461 (3) - i think it'd be easier and the flow would be somewhat smoother if you can stack this note on (4). the transition plays oddly during gameplay for me. fixed
00:48:672 (3) - i see the jump, but the transition plays to the point that i felt uncomfortable during gameplay. do Ctrl+R for this. it'll be easier as the transition is smoother and the jump from (3,4) would be easier for players to clear during gameplay. fixed
00:50:996 (3) - maybe you can replace the whistle for a finish to emphasize the vocals in this part of the song? ok already added.
00:57:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - re-arrange these notes to a diamond like this. i think doing this would be somewhat easier as the notes are fully visible for players and nothing is being covering the hitbursts in this combo for this diamond. fixed,this mapset should be easy to read map.
01:05:573 (6) - instead of stacking this on (4), align it instead. same reason as above. ^
01:19:306 (5) - same as above, but align this to (3). I think this part is not more hard for this difficult.

[Insane]
00:05:362 (1,3) - i feel that these sliders can look a lot nicer if it's symmetrical. it'll also flow a lot smoother during gameplay IMO. ok.try re-map sliders. should be better ._.
00:11:277 (3) - you're missing a whistle at the beginning of this slider. add it to keep the consistency in the whistles going. fixed
00:12:968 (3) - same as hard. same with hard too~
00:15:503 (1,2) - same as 00:05:362. fixed
00:52:686 (1) - move this spinner back 1/4. it'll follow up the long hold in the vocals. ok!
01:06:207 (1) - replace the clap for a finish for a new pattern in the vocals since the lyrics change. if you don't add the finish, add the whistle. the clap doesn't fit with this part at all during gameplay. already changed
01:18:038 (6) - make this a NC. it should be consistent with the hard diff in the combos. fixed
01:18:883 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. same reason as above. ^
01:19:728 (3) - same as 01:18:038. ^

I guess that's it. GL

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
[Inconsistency in Kiai Times: Keep the kiai time the same]
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:56:066, ends on 01:22:897

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:56:066, ends on 01:22:897

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:56:066, ends on 01:23:108

- [Taiko] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:56:066, ends on 01:23:108

Normal fix~ Taiko 01:23:108 have a note



[Hard]
00:37:263 (1) - 跳错了 不应该这里跳 这里按照原距离摆 然后这个做一个跳00:37:475 (2) fixed~
01:20:468 (1) - remove finish 最後面還有1/2拍的餘音 這用finish感覺剛剛好 :>


[Insane]
00:02:510 (4) - delete 一直覺得這個circle很斟酌 好吧砍了 QAQ
01:20:362 (1) - remove finish 同Hard

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这真的是你第二张图么=-= 其實有坑了3-4張啦..
太不科学了 怎么这么神..
没什么好挑的了
Wonderful Mapset

General

BeatofIke wrote:

Mod Request. Here's what I've found:

General
-> I recommend an Easy Difficulty, due to difficulty spread! I think Normal is easy enough in whole difficulties I will Consider to make the Easy difficulty ..thanks

Hard
00:03:249 (3,1) - This felt weird to me. I don't know the reason that it felt weird ><

Insane
-> Good Enough!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

• 
  Speaking of a taiko BG, it has a blank under the playing field.
  
  Can you fix it?

1. 00:31:348 (3,4) - To follow the vocal here is not that good idea, since you're following a simple 1/4-beat basically.
2. 00:52:580 (1) - IMO it's better to start the spinner from 00:52:686, to follow the vocal, as well as other diffs.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
I suggest a tick rate of 2 given the number of 1.5 beat sliders you are using.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
I suggest a tick rate of 2 given the number of 1.5 beat sliders you are using. Fixed

[Hard]
00:10:432 (1) - I think this would flow better if you didn't place jumps between combos in this section I think the jump is follow front part.
00:37:475 (1) - ^ The jump is follow the vocal and music.
01:18:672 (2,3,4,5) - the constant back and forth here feels awkward, see if you can find a better home for some of these notes OK,I change those place. And let those not back and forth too many.

[Insane]
00:01:982 (1) - again, I think the flow would be better here if you didn't jump, since the music here is so smooth Same with Hard

Suzully wrote:

Hi.

[General]

• 
  Speaking of a taiko BG, it has a blank under the playing field.
  
  Can you fix it? I think this is ok. Because the Taiko mapper also use the same BG with blank in his ranked map 0.0

[Insane]

1. 00:31:348 (3,4) - To follow the vocal here is not that good idea, since you're following a simple 1/4-beat basically.OK. I make the slider end to 00:31:559 -
2. 00:52:580 (1) - IMO it's better to start the spinner from 00:52:686, to follow the vocal, as well as other diffs. Right. Fix it the same with other diffs.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
I suggest a tick rate of 2 given the number of 1.5 beat sliders you are using.

jesse, if you want to change it on Normal, change on Hard too please. Because making a tick rate all the same in all diffs is better. Already fix Normal and Hard

Make change about both SFG's and mine, then call me back.

Garven wrote:

Since there might be tick rate changes going on, I may as well throw in my two cents as well:

[Normal]
New combo progression feels kind of random. Try to set it every 2 tall white ticks, so a new combo should be at 00:17:615 (4) - instead of 00:18:038 (1) - , a new combo at 00:20:573 (3) - , remove at 00:22:263 (1) - etc. Follow that pattern please. Yeah..I see the NC problem and all fixed.
A lot of the sliders felt poorly constructed as well. :o
Take 01:22:263 (3) - as an example. Making blankets with your curves will lead to a much better looking pattern, like this:

SPOILER

This fixed
See what you can find in here that you can improve to make a more satisfying visual experience! Hmmm...I try to find and fix a little part ~"~

[Hard]
00:03:883 (2) - 1 grid down to line up with 1 Fixed
00:11:911 (5,1) - Surprised there wasn't a jump here jump!!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Taiko]
Naming this Taiko Oni might be a bit more informative to players k~change the name with Oni
00:07:897 (5) - see how you like a k here? fixed
00:32:827 (4) - ^ fixed. this hit with vocal will nice
00:57:756 (2) - kat to match the high pitch in the vocals I think fix those could not harmony in kiai
01:03:038 (1) - ^
01:04:728 (2) - ^
01:11:277 (2) - ^

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
00:54:799 (4,5,6,1) - Delete for a much better effect going into the chorus ok! All delete.
01:14:658 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1) - You know, I came across these rhythms earlier, and seeing them here as well... they don't really fit the phrasing of the song that well. For a descending progression like this, maybe a suspended rhythm such as this will work better:

D kd d D kd d agree,and nice rhythm ~
Actually, that's another thing: there were very few finishes used in this map. Maybe see if you can use some to emphasize more phrases better? I find a few part add finish to follow the music!
01:22:792 (1,3,1) - Delete fixed,and I think 01:22:792 - add a note is good in the end.