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Cygnus
Fix your tags. Magicial should be Magical, right?

go bubble! :D
spboxer3
ok~ looks fine now~
good luck ^^
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rrtyui
Thanks Spinboxer<3
Mercurial
Supporting with my little star before ranking <3
Topic Starter
rrtyui
Thanks Mercurial \:D/

<3
Niva
(:

[General]

-> You don't need lead-in time in PAWN and KNIGHT, really xD (that diffs starts way after)
-> Add "MagicMashMan" also to tags (I know you already have "magic mash man" but sakuzyo's YouTube account is using that name, without spaces)

[PAWN]

  1. 01:06:400 (3) - Move clap from slider's end to slider's repeat
[KNIGHT]

  1. 00:24:400 (2,3,4) - Hmm, if you're aiming for symmetry I suggest something like this though:
  2. 01:48:400 (1) - Move to ~x:168 y:297 regardless of the spacing, it will make this slider perfectly centered while the jump isn't hard to catch :3
[BISHOP]

  1. 01:02:462 (3) - Please move a bit further (~x:185) to avoid overlap, it won't hurt~
  2. 01:21:025 (3) - ...sliderwhistle doesn't really fit here imo, I'd put a sliderwhistle on 01:19:900 (1) instead (:
[ROOK]

  1. 00:10:525 (1,2) - CTRL+R either (1) or (2)? Personally I'd like to see a circular jump here...
  2. 01:32:837 (1,2) - I really think you'll need a manual stacking like this here to maintain the symmetry: (just move (2) a bit lower)
[QUEEN]

  1. 00:25:900 (1) - No whistles here? I'm very much sure a good whistle placement will fit this repeating slider :3
  2. 00:41:368 (10) - The rhythm here really confuses me, I'd put this on 00:41:556 (11) instead to form a quintuple (it'll sound more intuitive with the song)
  3. 01:51:775 (2,3,2,3) - Hmm, I think it's quite obvious that the claps should ONLY be on (3)'s start instead of (2), no need to force clap consistency here - in any way clap on (3)'s start sounds better for me (:
[KING]

-> Make combo color 3 same as other diffs?

  1. 00:13:712 (1) - Move the inherit section to slider's end (00:13:900) and add sliderwhistle to the slider's body, it fits xD
  2. 00:41:557 (3,4,5,6) - The combo color here blends with the video orz... I'm having trouble reading it >_<
  3. 01:08:650 (1,2) - Add some whistles to spice up this part? (there's a synth following though~)
  4. 01:27:025 (4) - Please add new combo here, due to the slider velocity change
  5. 01:38:837 (2) - Personally I'd like to see this is CTRL+R'ed (: (if you do this you might want to CTRL+R (4) also)
I don't see any problems on TAIKO~
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Niva wrote:

(:

[General]

-> You don't need lead-in time in PAWN and KNIGHT, really xD (that diffs starts way after) fix
-> Add "MagicMashMan" also to tags (I know you already have "magic mash man" but sakuzyo's YouTube account is using that name, without spaces) add~

[PAWN]

  1. 01:06:400 (3) - Move clap from slider's end to slider's repeat fix
[KNIGHT]

  1. 00:24:400 (2,3,4) - Hmm, if you're aiming for symmetry I suggest something like this though: fix
  2. 01:48:400 (1) - Move to ~x:168 y:297 regardless of the spacing, it will make this slider perfectly centered while the jump isn't hard to catch :3 fix
[BISHOP]

  1. 01:02:462 (3) - Please move a bit further (~x:185) to avoid overlap, it won't hurt~ fix
  2. 01:21:025 (3) - ...sliderwhistle doesn't really fit here imo, I'd put a sliderwhistle on 01:19:900 (1) instead (: fix
[ROOK]

  1. 00:10:525 (1,2) - CTRL+R either (1) or (2)? Personally I'd like to see a circular jump here... fix
  2. 01:32:837 (1,2) - I really think you'll need a manual stacking like this here to maintain the symmetry: (just move (2) a bit lower) fix
[KING]

-> Make combo color 3 same as other diffs? fix

  1. 00:13:712 (1) - Move the inherit section to slider's end (00:13:900) and add sliderwhistle to the slider's body, it fits xD fix
  2. 00:41:557 (3,4,5,6) - The combo color here blends with the video orz... I'm having trouble reading it >_<
  3. 01:08:650 (1,2) - Add some whistles to spice up this part? (there's a synth following though~) fix. btw, this is no relationship, it was found that 01:09:025 (2) is 1/3 timing. This also fix :D
  4. 01:27:025 (4) - Please add new combo here, due to the slider velocity change fix
  5. 01:38:837 (2) - Personally I'd like to see this is CTRL+R'ed (: (if you do this you might want to CTRL+R (4) also) no
I don't see any problems on TAIKO~
(:

Thanks Niva Modding! >.</
waiting Rein! :D
Rein
http://puu.sh/1451A

Niva wrote:

[QUEEN]
  1. 00:25:900 (1) - No whistles here? I'm very much sure a good whistle placement will fit this repeating slider :3 ->fix
  2. 00:41:368 (10) - The rhythm here really confuses me, I'd put this on 00:41:556 (11) instead to form a quintuple (it'll sound more intuitive with the song)->no change
  3. 01:51:775 (2,3,2,3) - Hmm, I think it's quite obvious that the claps should ONLY be on (3)'s start instead of (2), no need to force clap consistency here - in any way clap on (3)'s start sounds better for me (:->fix
THRete
rrtyui~!

that's so fun!!!!
but so hard!

rank gogogo~! :D
Way to go! :D
Niva
Just one more thing...

[QUEEN]

  1. 00:41:368 (10) - Again, compared with the others this one's rhythm is VERY deceiving due to the basses around, once more I recommend a quintuple here (you can just arrange like this though: )
I still feel somewhat weird about that combocolor in KING though, but it's not that hard to read :3

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EDIT : Rechecking 7 diffs are tiring orz >_< - I hope I didn't miss anything...

Ranked ~
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Niva wrote:

Just one more thing...

[QUEEN]

  1. 00:41:368 (10) - Again, compared with the others this one's rhythm is VERY deceiving due to the basses around, once more I recommend a quintuple here (you can just arrange like this though: )
I still feel somewhat weird about that combocolor in KING though, but it's not that hard to read :3
oops o.o
fix! ;)
Mercurial
Oh c'mon! I'm still waiting D:
Rein
:!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:
rank :!:
THRete
rank~~! :)
Coro
BMS~
gratz ranked~
KogumaX
:)
WVS
10/10
spboxer3
congratz ^^
Melophobia
omedetou~!
Andrea
Hitsounds are way too quiet, I almost can't hear them :(
Suimya
Gratz owo/ moe rrtyui
rui
congratz
Reisen Udongein
more more BMS songs! congratz :3
xsrsbsns
omedetou!
Kawayi Rika
初rank omedeto :3
Topic Starter
rrtyui
yey Thanks Niva and all >w<

Andrea wrote:

Hitsounds are way too quiet, I almost can't hear them :(

I love this sound. I don’t like Hit sound is emphasized too. :)
Nichiyouki
Congrats ;)
Uni
This map *-* i love it Grats on ranked :3
Laurier
good
caren_sk
congrats~
threenash
gz rrtyui! /o/
terametis
おめでとうございます!
Quilt
congratz xD
Ulysses
wow congrats :D
Cygnus
Yey! Congrats rrtyui! :)
Mercurial
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<3

I love you so much! <3
Deni
nice map!! ROOK is very nice :)
Metro
omedetou osu kami!
B2IN
Niko-nyan
gratz to rrtyui yaay
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