pimpG wrote:

hi o/

easy

00:29:550 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - select them all and move 1 (small) grid right..
..that fixes the spacing/and looks better in 00:33:408 (2,3)

normal

01:10:693 (1) - this clap pattern makes the song have 2 upbeats, remove clap iat slider start, move to end
01:11:550 (2) - ^
01:12:408 (3) - remove clap
01:12:836 (1) - clap at start/end
01:14:122 - keep up

hard

00:32:122 (2) - move the curve point 1 (small) grid left
01:25:265 - same thing about claps as normal
02:12:408 (1) - move the curve point 2 (small) grids down
02:13:265 (3) - move the curve point 1 (small) grid up

insane

00:49:693 (1,2) - strange slider (imo)
00:59:122 (7) - move it 1 (small) grid left and 2 down
01:11:122 - same thing about claps as normal
01:49:050 (4,5,6) - use the same distance spacing?
02:15:193 (4) - move it 1 (tiny) grid down

thats all

nice map

i have no kudosu! atm but i'll give you a ★ after you aplly my mod

good luck

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Konei

My mod from your request in nich95's modding / mod4mod Queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Easy

1. HP +2 (2)
   OD +1 (1)
2. 00:37:693 (3) - Remove finish in slider end
3. 00:39:836 (1) - Add finish
4. 02:17:550 (1) - Remove finish in slider begin
5. 02:19:265 (1) - Add finish in slider begin

Normal

1. 00:30:836 (2) - Move to x:168 y:96
2. 00:31:265 (3) - Remove finish in slider begin
3. 00:32:979 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
4. 00:36:408 (1) - Move 2nd point to left 3 grids, and make same as 00:32:979 (1)
5. 00:39:836 (1) - Same as 00:32:979 (1)
6. 00:41:550 (3) - Move slider begin at 00:41:336, because I hear the rhythm sound here.
7. 00:51:408 (3) - I hear the rhythm sound when the slider is already running. You should change its slider repeat.
8. 01:02:054 (4) - Slider repeat 1 time
9. 01:14:979 (3) - Add clap in slider begin
10. 01:33:836 (5) - I don't suggest using slider 3/4 rhythm in this diff.
11. 01:40:265 (1,3) - Try don't silders are overlap.

Hard

1. 00:35:240 (4,5) - They don't match the rhythm. Make to http://puu.sh/GDkM be better.
2. 00:41:336 (5,6) - Ctrl+R, it's suitable for the rhythm.
3. 02:15:622 - Add a note?

Insane

1. I don't find the problem.

That's all, that I can find them.

Good luck~

1. You are missing a reverse arrow, if you don't plan to skin it use the default one.
2. You dark purple combo colour blends in with the BG and the video, make it lighter please.
3. The rhythm of these maps need a lot of work, please try to follow the song more closely. Suggestions below.

1. The rhythm is okay for a normal I guess. I still feels the vocal could be follow more closely here and the placement also seems random so try to work on that.
2. Some of the square sliders you use look really ugly like 01:50:550 (7) - and especially 02:18:407 (4) - I think the map would look better if you kept it as curved sliders.

1. This is practically the same as Insane with a slower slider velocity so I don't really have much to suggest here except the same thing as I said on Insane. For Hard try to make the rhythm simpler while keeping a close eye on the rhythm, use less 1/4 than Insane but don't just spam 1/2.
2. You could probably work on the patterns and sliders some more too, see the suggestion on Insane.

1. I feel this diff has too much 1/2 and doesn't follow the song closely enough. From 00:29:550 to 00:43:050 you should follow the guitar and instruments more closely and use 1/4. From 00:43:908 to 02:06:622 you could probably follow the vocal more since it carries the song. Alternatively you could follow the instruments more closely but right now you seem to be placing 1/2 notes / sliders everywhere without much consideration for the rhythm. While this is passable the rhythm could be much better! ^_^ Some example suggestions below:
2. You could also work on your patterns some more, the placement of circles often feels random. Why not check out the mapping techniques forum here for some ideas?

Shulin wrote:

From #modreqs ~

[General]

1. You are missing a reverse arrow, if you don't plan to skin it use the default one.
2. You dark purple combo colour blends in with the BG and the video, make it lighter please.
3. The rhythm of these maps need a lot of work, please try to follow the song more closely. Suggestions below.

[Easy]

00:47:979 (3) - Make this end at 1/1 at 00:48:408 - the short 1/2 slider will be confusing for beginners.
00:55:693 - Remove this break, keep on mapping.
02:14:122 (1,2) - I think it's better to keep it 1/1 here.
02:20:979 (1) - ^
02:23:122 - Note

The 1/1 rhythm is good for an Easy, I feel you could tidy this up a bit by aligning notes and improving sliders.

[Normal]

1. The rhythm is okay for a normal I guess. I still feels the vocal could be follow more closely here and the placement also seems random so try to work on that.
2. Some of the square sliders you use look really ugly like 01:50:550 (7) - and especially 02:18:407 (4) - I think the map would look better if you kept it as curved sliders.

00:36:408 (1) - Try to make this overlap less with 00:35:550 (5) -
00:41:550 (3) - Move this to 1/1 at 00:41:550 - ?
00:52:693 (1) - The start of this doesn't follow anything in the song maybe start at 00:52:479 -
00:54:408 (3,4) - Again the start isn't following the song, move this back to 00:54:193 -
01:14:979 (3) - Align this with 01:14:122 (2) - or place somewhere else? It looks random / bad at the moment.
01:08:550 (1) - End at 01:08:979 follows the song.
01:20:550 (3) - Placement looks random, try to make a pattern with 01:20:550 (3,4,1) -
01:30:407 (1,2,3,4) - What is this following? Delete the 1/2 notes they sound odd.
01:50:122 (6) - Try and move this away from 01:48:836 (5) - placement plays badly.
01:56:765 - Note? why not keep following the vocal here.

Again concentrate on the rhythm. Try to keep it simple whilst following the song.

[Hard]

1. This is practically the same as Insane with a slower slider velocity so I don't really have much to suggest here except the same thing as I said on Insane. For Hard try to make the rhythm simpler while keeping a close eye on the rhythm, use less 1/4 than Insane but don't just spam 1/2.
2. You could probably work on the patterns and sliders some more too, see the suggestion on Insane.

00:34:693 (3) - Space this out so it doesn't overlap with 00:34:265 (2) -

[Insane]

1. I feel this diff has too much 1/2 and doesn't follow the song closely enough. From 00:29:550 to 00:43:050 you should follow the guitar and instruments more closely and use 1/4. From 00:43:908 to 02:06:622 you could probably follow the vocal more since it carries the song. Alternatively you could follow the instruments more closely but right now you seem to be placing 1/2 notes / sliders everywhere without much consideration for the rhythm. While this is passable the rhythm could be much better! ^_^ Some example suggestions below:
2. You could also work on your patterns some more, the placement of circles often feels random. Why not check out the mapping techniques forum here for some ideas?

00:30:408 (4) - Move this to 1/4 at 00:30:300 to follow the guitar. You could create a slider that ends at 00:30:515 to follow the end of the guitar.
00:30:515 - This needs a note to follow the rhythm. You could stack a note on top of 00:30:622 (6) - if you decide not to create a slider.
00:30:836 (1) - This should be a 1/2 slider to follow the rhythm. The long slider doesn't really follow anything.
00:31:693 (3,4,5) - Same 1/4 suggestions as above.
00:33:408 (5,6,7,8,9) - This stream is kind of random on it's own. If you want to keep it you should extend it to 00:34:479 since this is where the stream sound ends.
00:35:122 (3,4) - Use 1/4 here again to follow guitar and piano.
00:36:408 (1) - Again better as a 1/2 slider.
00:36:836 - Note here if you do ^ and then add notes at 00:36:943 - and 00:37:051 - and 00:37:158 - to follow the guitar
00:37:372 - Note here if you do ^ to follow the guitar
00:38:551 (1,2,3,4) - Same rhythm here.
00:40:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like 00:33:408 (5,6,7,8,9) - the stream is random on it's own, if you're going to start it then you should finish imo. If you don't want to follow the stream a spinner might be a good idea.
00:44:122 (3,4,1) - Here you could have a 1/1 slider to follow the vocal.
00:44:979 (1) - This one should start at 00:44:765 - to follow the vocal better.
00:46:479 - Needs a note.
00:46:908 (2) - This one should start at 00:46:693 (1) - to follow the vocal better.
00:49:693 (1,2) - Similar thing here, you should use the 1/1 sliders where they fit and not just randomly.
00:51:622 (2) - A 1/1 slider would fit here
00:53:550 (4) - and here
01:03:836 (3) - and here etc. Hopefully you get the idea, just try to follow the rhythm of the song more for this part. ^_^
01:09:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Random stream that doesn't follow the song, remove please.
01:20:979 (1) - Don't change SV speed mid slider! Also slow down is random so I'd suggest removing it.
01:47:122 (1,2,3) - Don't leave a massive gap in the rhythm here. There's vocal and instruments playing away, it's best if you map this bit.
01:49:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This stream for the most part doesn't follow anything so I'd remove it. It also sounds weird because at 01:50:550 to 01:50:765 - is a 1/6 drum roll.
02:08:979 to 02:20:979 - Same suggestion as 00:29:550 to 00:43:050 since this is a repeat of that part.

Overall, I think you should remap keeping a close eye on the rhythm and try some patterns because that's the most important thing here. I hope I've given enough examples of where to improve it but if you have any questions feel free to ask me.

Good luck!

Hinsvar wrote:

You're remapping Normal and Hard AND Sakuya is working on Insane?

I guess me somehow forgetting to mod this in two weeks actually worked.

Call me back if Sakuya's got her diff in.

For now, stars.

1. ...Not really sure, but I think there are some object patterns that are unfitting with the music on the kiai time.
2. 01:03:408 (1,2,3,4) - ...What? I would convert these sliders to two 3/1 sliders, a 2/1 one and a circle, like this.
3. 01:59:550 (4) - Make this a 1/1 slider and a circle?

1. 00:41:979 - Add a 1/1 slider and move 00:42:408 (5) 1/2 beat later (00:42:622)?
2. 00:46:693 (1) - Try adding an anchor point at (200,72). The arc slider should be better... somewhat.
3. 00:47:979 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats twice? It follows the song better.

1. Uh... Maybe it's me that sucks at doing 1/2 streams, but I seriously think this is a Hard+ diff. It just lack jumps to be a true Insane diff. No, don't rename this diff "Hard+". Also, there's still some weirdly shaped arc sliders, so you might want to repair them...
2. 00:29:550 - Maybe you can remove the bookmark here now, especially considering you didn't use it in Easy and Normal.

1. 00:50:122 (2) - Replace this with 00:49:479 (1), remove the repeat, rotate it 180 degrees (using CW or CCW won't change anything, so feel free to use any one you like), Ctrl+R, and place it at (188,272). Now this is better for me, since the current pattern looks weird and (2)'s shape is strange, too, anyway. It should look like this.

1. Add Sakuya and LunarSakuya to the TAGs.
2. The combo colors are different in Sakuya's difficulty. Please make the combo colors the same in all difficulties.

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues
There is my opinions, so you need not follow.

[General]
You may cut your mp3 because of you're using less than 80% of the song. No, I don't want players to be thrown just in

[Easy]
00:55:693 (1,1) - too short for easy? I think it's fine
02:23:979 (1) - I suggest fade out like Insane. Ok

[Normal]
01:01:265 (2) - Slider's endpoint move 2 grid left and, 5 grid up, because of visual. done
01:22:265 (1) - remove NC done
01:22:693 (2) - add NC ^

[Hard]
00:31:050 (1,2) - remove and add NC
00:34:479 (1,2) - ^
00:37:908 (1,2) - ^
00:38:765 (1) - remove NC
00:40:908 (1) - ^
00:41:550 (3,1) - add and remove NC
00:54:193 (5) - I suggest you use two midpoint of slider using long curve slider,for visual.
01:23:550 - too loud. Please volume down.
01:46:479 (5,1) - add and remove NC

all done


Good luck!!

tutuhaha wrote:

Easy
00:47:979 (3) - move this to x:288 y:32 is more easy to read.
00:55:693 (1,1) - too far in easy diff, I think you just need one note in 00:57:836 (X) -
01:08:550 (4) - add whistle
01:23:550 (1,3) - too close
01:47:550 (3,1) - too close

Normal
00:41:979 (4,5) - this part is litter bit hard in this normal
00:46:693 (1) - ...ugly than 2 Orz
00:48:408 (3) - add finish
00:55:479 (1,1) - litter bit far in normal diff
01:55:265 (4) - ...ugly Orz
02:20:550 (2,3) - TOO CLOSE

Hard
00:59:765 (3,4) - TOO FAR

Insane
02:22:479 (15,1) - you can make more far between those two note

Jebok wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]
01:41:122 (8) - Place this on the fading end of slider (3)? Fixed

tutuhaha wrote:

Insane
02:22:479 (15,1) - you can make more far between those two note Fixed

1. That purple combo colour is still too dark, increase the lum to 100.
2. I wonder if people will really search gay... oh well I guess it's nice to have a tag.
3. Too improve the presentation of sliders in hard you might want to give this a read.

1. New combo's on this diff are not in a consistent pattern, new combos in places like 00:49:265 (1) - and 01:10:265 (1,1,2) - don't really make much sense. Use Insane as a reference to improve them.

Shulin wrote:

That's all I can suggest right now. Hard needs a bit more work on the rhythm but it's getting better. Maybe ask for some more mods or another MAT to look at this too ^_^

LunarSakuya wrote:

Gabe you're so godly

Gabe wrote:

Here's my mod for Hard.
First, I am very proud of this beatmap. You made a good job, I can see the effort on it.
Also, write everything you haven't fixed. Please.

Hard

New combos
00:51:622 (5) - Delete the new combo.
00:52:479 (1) - Add a new combo
00:52:908 - Delete the new combo
01:10:265 - Delete the new combo
01:10:479 (1) - Add a new combo
01:10:693 (3) - Delete the new combo
01:12:408 (1) - Add a new combo
01:19:265 - Add a new combo
01:22:265 (1) - Add a new combo
01:26:122 (1) - Add a new combo
01:29:765 - add a new combo
01:30:836 - Delete the new combo
01:31:265 (1) - New combo.
01:40:265 - New combo
01:46:479 - New combo
01:56:979 - New combo
02:00:193 (1) - New combo

Circle emplacement
00:31:265 (1) - Move this slider one tick up to be perfectly aligned with the two previous circles.
00:34:693 (1,2) - These sliders looks not good to me. If I was you, I would change it for something like this:

Screenshot+Code

376,272,34693,6,0,B|392:320|440:344,2,85,0|0|2
376,176,35336,2,0,B|392:128|440:104,2,85,0|0|0

00:37:265 (4) - Move this slider at x:312 y:56
00:38:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make it symmetrical like this:

Screenshot

00:41:122 (5) - Align this slider with (4)
00:43:265 (7) - Align this with (5) (x:344 y:280)
00:44:979 (5) - Make this slider like this:

Screenshot

00:47:336 (1) - This slider isn't symmetrical. Move the last dot two grid up.
00:48:408 (4) - Delete this slider and copy past the previous slider (00:47:336 (1) - ).
00:54:193 (4) - Copy/Paste this slider ( 00:53:122 (2) - ) to make it symmetrical.
01:01:050 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you try to reproduce this? :/

Screenshot

01:18:408 (3) - this slider looks weird, Try to reproduce this;

Screenshot

01:19:693 (7) -

01:25:050 (3) - One grid to the right, please.
01:26:979 (8,10) - These objects are almost overlapped.can you move (10) at x:304 y:128
01:29:765 (6,7) - Move both objects one grid to the left to be perfectly centered.
02:11:122 (3) - Move the second dot two grid up. Same as 02:12:836 (1) -

Hitsounds
I will start with the hitsounds. I also asked Shulin some advices. If you want to read it, just scroll down.
also, the beggining of the song is pretty good.

For the setting, don't put the volume at like 53%, 57%, etc.. Just add like 50%, 55%, 60%. Because, having a 3% diffirence, we don't really hear the difference.

!Warning, biggest hitsounds mod I've ever made!

00:34:908 - Actually, I don't know why but, I always heard a Whistle here. Maybe you could add a whistle here? You could also add one here 00:35:765 -
00:43:265 - Delete this finish. The custom hitsound doesn't sound good. Also, at this point, the song is more calm, so it's better to delete the finish.
00:44:979 - Delete the whistle, but keep the clap.
00:45:836 (7) - Delete the whistle.
00:48:408 - Delete the whistle.
00:49:050 - Add a whistle
00:50:765 - Add a whistle
00:50:979 (2) - Delete the whistle
00:52:479 (5) - Add a whistle
00:52:693 (6) - Delete the whistle
00:54:193 - Add a whistle.
00:55:265 - Add a clap instead of a whistle.
00:57:622 - Add a whistle
00:57:836 - Delete the whistle
00:59:336 (7) - Add a whistle
00:59:550 (8) - Delete the whistle
01:00:408 - Add a clap.
01:01:050 (4) - Add a whistle
01:02:765 (4) - Add a whistle
01:02:979 (5) - Delete the whistle
01:03:836 - Eh, no. Keep that consistency ^ Delete the finish and replace it by a clap
01:04:479 - Add a whistle
01:04:693 - Delete the whistle
01:05:550 - Add a whistle oh wait no, a clap.
01:06:193 - Add a whistle
01:06:408 (3) - Delete the whistle
01:07:265 - Add a clap
01:07:908 (3) - Add a whistle
01:08:122 (4) - Delete the whistle
01:09:836 - Replace the clap by a whistle
i am a bit tired. BUT I WON'T GIVE UP!!
01:11:122 - Add a clap
01:11:550 - Delete the clap
01:11:979 - Add a clap
01:12:408 - Delete the clap
01:12:836 - Add clap.
01:13:265 - Delete clap
01:13:693 (10) - Add clap
01:14:122 - Delete clap
01:14:550 (3) - Add clap
01:14:979 (5) - Delete clap
01:14:979 (5) - Add clap
01:15:836 (1) - Delete clap
01:16:265 - Add clap
01:16:693 - Delete clap
01:17:122 (5) - Add clap
01:17:550 - Delete clap but keep the finish
01:17:979 - Add clap
01:18:408 - Delete clap
01:18:836 - Add clap
01:19:265 (5) - Delete clap
01:19:693 - Add a clap
01:20:122 - Delete clap
01:20:550 - Add clap
01:20:979 - Delete clap
01:21:408 - Add clap
01:21:836 (4) - Delete clap
01:22:265 - Add a clap
01:22:693 - Delete clap
01:23:122 - Add clap
01:23:550 - Delete clap
01:23:979 - Add clap
01:24:408 - Delete the clap but keep the finish.
01:24:836 (2) - Add clap
01:25:265 - Delete clap
01:25:693 - Add clap
01:26:122 - Delete clap
01:26:550 - Add clap
01:26:979 - Delete clap
01:27:408 (9) - Add clap
01:27:836 - delete clap
01:28:265 - Add clap
01:28:693 (3) - Delete whistle.
01:29:122 (4) - Add clap
01:30:193 - Delete whistle
01:32:550 (1) - Add clap
02:09:408 - Add a clap
02:14:550 - Add a clap
02:15:408 (7) - Add a clap
02:16:265 - Add a clap
02:16:693 - Delete the clap
02:17:122 (2) - Add a clap
02:17:550 - Delete the clap
02:17:979 - Add a clap
02:18:408 - Delete clap
02:18:836 (4) - Add a clap
02:19:265 - Delete the clap
02:19:693 - Add a clap
02:20:122 - Delete the clap
02:20:550 (2) - Add a clap
02:20:979 - Delete the clap
02:21:408 - Add a clap
02:21:836 - Delete the clap
02:22:265 - Add a clap
02:22:693 - Delete the clap

Savelog

17:32 Gabe: : I need your advice.
17:32 Shulin: : Sure what is it?
17:32 Gabe: : 00:44:550 - I'm suggesting to add a clap here; 
17:32 Gabe: : 00:44:979 - to remove the clap;
17:32 Gabe: : 00:45:622 - To add a whistle
17:32 Gabe: : and
17:33 Shulin: : which diff?
17:33 Gabe: : 00:45:836 (2) - Delete the whistle
17:33 Gabe: : Hard.
17:33 Gabe: : Modding the whole Hard, lawl.
17:34 Shulin: : Hmm I don't think clap fits at 00:44:550 (3) - 
17:34 Shulin: : I'd just have put it on the heavy beats
17:34 Shulin: : but the mapper seems to be following the base line
17:34 Shulin: : whistle fits at 00:45:622 (1) -  though fits with the piano sound
17:35 Gabe: : Okay so, I could say that ;
17:35 Gabe: : 00:44:979 - To remove the whistle,
17:36 Gabe: : 00:45:622 (1) - Add a whistle,
17:36 Shulin: : yep that works
17:36 Gabe: : 00:45:836 (2) - and delete?
17:36 Gabe: : kgood.
17:36 Gabe: : Do you think the finish is good at
17:36 Gabe: : 00:43:693 ?
17:36 Gabe: : In my opinion, it is not.
17:37 Shulin: : I think regular whistle would probably fit but it'd work empty too
17:37 Shulin: : the custom finish does linger for a bit too long
17:37 Gabe: : This one? 00:43:265
17:38 Shulin: : yep 00:43:265 (6) - 
17:38 Shulin: : new combo should probably go there too, but a new combo on this diff would be way too long
17:38 Shulin: : it's better for the mapper just to look at insane
17:38 Gabe: : and also replace the finish by a clap?
17:38 Gabe: : oh this too.
17:39 Shulin: : yeah clap would work too, anything will work there really :)
17:39 Gabe: : [strike]notthefinish.[/strike]
17:40 Shulin: : lol

*fixed a link.

1. The new combo issue from before is still here, you ignored all of Gabe's combo mod...? ._. Insane is still a good reference for this.

1. You may want to create your own sliderpoint10.png and sliderpoint30.png; they should match the 300's colour and style.
2. Straight sliders and circles placed at 0, 45, and 90 degree angles are what most people are not looking forward to see. This applies throughout your difficulties. Care to make sure you get creative object placement; while these angles formed by the objects are not unrankable, they are certainly not optimal. Check out the entire map for each difficulty and limit yourself to a minimal number of 90 degree patterns.
3. Many of your 3-point curved sliders, as well as waves and other sliders that were meant to be symmetrical, are not, unfortunately. Giving them symmetry would contribute to the aesthetics greatly.

1. No problem with rhythm at all. The only issues are up in General.

1. 00:46:693 (1,2,3) - Would probably look and play better if these sliders weren't so "fat". For sliders (1,2), use a simple 3-point curved slider. For (3), try an anchor at time 00:48:193 - to fit the music.
2. 00:50:122 (1,2,3,4) - The 90 degree angles and straight slider combination, mentioned in Easy. Would try to improve the placement, as well as the symmetry on (4). Apply fixes to (4) to 00:53:550 (1) - as well, seeing how you have it as a rotation.
3. 00:55:479 (1) - Remove new combo spinner since it's a continuation of 00:54:836 (2) - .
4. 01:07:693 (1,2) - Would be much, much more interesting if these weren't exactly vertical or horizontal. Try changing their orientation while keeping the spacing nice.
5. 01:13:265 (1,2,3,4) - Don't like the pattern very much. You can do something much more interesting with this 1/1 slider combination.
6. 01:17:979 (3) - Removing the leftmost node ought to make this slider look a bit better. //Did you switch mappers here? Sliders seem to get more interesting from this point onward.
7. 01:31:265 (2) - Angles between anchors are too big, making this slider look unnecessarily boxy for its own good.
8. 01:32:979 (4) - Curved part has too much of a curve. When you restructure this, keep in mind to keep anchor at the slider tick 01:33:408 - .
9. 01:53:122 (4) - Not too sure I like this slider shape; can be made simpler and more pleasant. 01:55:265 (1) - too.
10. 02:14:122 (1) - From this time on, map contains too many adjacent 1/2 rhythms. Leave more space for breaks.

1. Try slider tick rate 2 due to your abundance of 1/2 rhythm usage. This would allow you to hitsound the right beats during your chorus (01:42:836 - for example).
2. 01:00:408 (3) - There seems to be a misplaced whistle.
3. 01:07:908 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Perhaps a way to make this neater and more interesting would be to place (3,4,5) in a straight line, and (5,6,7,1) in another straight line, forming about a 60 degree angle between the two lines.
4. 01:17:336 (1,2,7) - I feel these sliders are too long for a Hard diff. I generally do not recommend sliders longer than 1/1 in Hard and above unless it's used to emphasize a certain part of the music; in this case, the simple vocals can also be mapped to by a combination of shorter sliders and circles. This applies to 01:25:050 (3,4) - and any other sliders longer than 1/1 that I may have missed.
5. 01:40:693 (7) - Whistle the slider tail, maybe?
6. 01:56:979 (7) - Great place for new combo.
7. 01:57:836 (10) - Shorten this to 1/2, since a triple at 01:58:265 - would be very fitting.

1. Can umbrella save me now?
2. Recommend slider tick rate 2 for the same reason as Hard.
3. 01:22:479 (6,1) - Almost never a fan of this kind of stacking, in your free time I can explain to you why I begin to point these out more than ever.
4. 01:41:122 (8,9,1) - Let's get these to equivalent spacing.
5. 02:07:158 (1) - Remove new combo spinner since it's a continuation of 02:07:050 (8) - .
6. 02:22:479 (15,1) - Best if this was also 1.3x spacing, since you've got the syncopated (2,3,4), it's important to keep a good enough spacing so that it's completely readable.
7. 02:27:622 (1) - 1/6 would be more appropriate, from red to white ticks.

SkyDevil wrote:

Sakuya's Insane
01:10:265 (3,4,5) - Claps at the slider's end of 3 and at 4 and 5 :3 Fixed

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

02:24:515 (1) - move here 02:24:408 and end 02:27:408 Fixed

Shulin wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

00:41:550 (1,2,3) - Use a 1/2 slider here? It's a better rhythm imo and then just continue the stream. Fixed
00:56:872 (8) - Delete this note? Sounds better without it. Fixed
01:25:586 (3) - Delete this? No drum sound here so it sounds odd. Obviously respace 01:25:693 (4) - if you do this. Fixed
01:21:300 (2,3) - Maybe space these out so it's something like 01:13:050 (7,8,9) - think it has better flow. Fixed
02:06:836 - Note? Drum here and I think it'll play better ^_^ I was following vocals =v=
02:10:908 (2,3) - Stack this on 02:11:122 (4) - ? it looks neater. If not align it like 02:10:050 (5,6,7) - Fixed
02:17:550 (1,2,3,4) - Start 02:17:550 (1) - in the same position as the start of 02:16:265 (2) - and then respace the stream a bit? It looks much neater when playing. What
02:27:622 (1) - Add a return to follow the drum. Fixed

those wrote:

[Insane]

1. Can umbrella save me now? ヽ｀、ヽ(ノ；Д；)ノ ｀、、ヽ｀☂ヽ｀
2. Recommend slider tick rate 2 for the same reason as Hard. ヽ｀、ヽFixedヽ｀、ヽ
3. 01:22:479 (6,1) - Almost never a fan of this kind of stacking, in your free time I can explain to you why I begin to point these out more than ever. ヽ｀、ヽFixedヽ｀、ヽ
4. 01:41:122 (8,9,1) - Let's get these to equivalent spacing. Fixed
5. 02:07:158 (1) - Remove new combo spinner since it's a continuation of 02:07:050 (8) - .Fixed
6. 02:22:479 (15,1) - Best if this was also 1.3x spacing, since you've got the syncopated (2,3,4), it's important to keep a good enough spacing so that it's completely readable. Fixed
7. 02:27:622 (1) - 1/6 would be more appropriate, from red to white ticks.

1. 00:40:265 (2,3) - odd to ignore the drums here suddenly
2. 01:01:693 (3) - make 01:02:122 this heavy beat a sliderend is a bad choice. consider another pattern to make it something can be hit.
3. 01:17:550 (1) - out of music. the reverse is too early
4. 01:36:622 (1,2,3) - considering the spacing next, make the order right, left, up?
5. 02:24:408 (1) - missing new combo, if this is not intented

1. 02:14:122 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - out of music.
2. 02:24:193 (4) - make this a slider and ends at 02:24:300.
3. 00:43:693 ~ 01:10:265 - claps on this part is all wrong place. 00:46:265, 00:48:193 are how it should go. 4th white tick, 4th red tick, 4th white tick, 4th red tick...
4. 01:10:693 - normal default claps after this is not a good choice. refer to how Insane done.

1. the clap things mentioned in Hard and 02:24:193 (4) - slider.
2. 00:55:479 (1) - lost new combo on spinner.

1. 01:05:550 (2) - ugly slider, copy (1) can be easier and better.
2. and the clap things

Colin Hou wrote:

M4M/

[Hard]

1. 02:14:122 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - out of music. I think it's fitting the high notes
2. 02:24:193 (4) - make this a slider and ends at 02:24:300. fix
3. 00:43:693 ~ 01:10:265 - claps on this part is all wrong place. 00:46:265, 00:48:193 are how it should go. 4th white tick, 4th red tick, 4th white tick, 4th red tick... fix
4. 01:10:693 - normal default claps after this is not a good choice. refer to how Insane done.

fix

[Normal]

1. the clap things mentioned in Hard and 02:24:193 (4) - slider.Not sure what you mean by slider
2. 00:55:479 (1) - lost new combo on spinner.

fix

[Easy]

1. 01:05:550 (2) - ugly slider, copy (1) can be easier and better.fix
2. and the clap things

fix

need more work on hitsounds and use more fun patterns.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:40:265 (2,3) - odd to ignore the drums here suddenly Fixed
2. 01:01:693 (3) - make 01:02:122 this heavy beat a sliderend is a bad choice. consider another pattern to make it something can be hit.Fixed
3. 01:17:550 (1) - out of music. the reverse is too early Fixed
4. 01:36:622 (1,2,3) - considering the spacing next, make the order right, left, up? Fixed
5. 02:24:408 (1) - missing new combo, if this is not intented There's already one

1. You need add a SliderBorder for the skin, add a white default in all diffs like this. http://puu.sh/ZFws

• Settings

1. Don't make the super difference but HP and OD+1 is best because the settings between [Normal] and this is a bit huge.
   Hitsound
2. 00:46:265 (1) - Add clap, fits perfectly with the track, if you agree, add this in [Normal] & [Hard].
3. 00:46:693 (2) - Same as before but here at the end of the slider.
4. 00:49:693 (1) - Here at the start, check the track and add the missing claps.
5. 00:52:693 (4) - Well I don't want make a longer mod of claps then only check the parts when a claps sounds in the track and put the clap, here in the repeat, you know what I mean.
6. 02:01:693 (1) - Missing finish at the end.
7. 02:14:122 (1) - Add a finish like the others diffs at the start.
   Beatmap Suggestions
8. 00:53:979 (5) - New combo time.
9. 01:24:408 (2) - According with your pattern, the new combo should start here and not here 01:23:550 (1). After this if you want add a new combo in 01:22:265 (5). 01:51:836 (1) Check this part to rectify.

• Settings

1. Just like a suggest, check the SV here and in [Easy] woah is really huge compared with this and [Hard], try to be consistent because is too notable the jump in spacing and velocity of the slider between the most easy diffs.
   Hitsound
2. 00:39:836 (1) - Missing finish at the start.
3. 01:01:693 (8) - Rememeber the suggestion about the claps in [Easy], here at the end.
4. 01:44:979 (4) - Missing finish at the repeat.
   Beatmap Suggestions
5. 00:46:693 (6) - New combo timee.
6. 01:00:408 (6) - Maybe new combo and remove the new combo in 01:02:122 (1).
7. 01:14:550 (6) - Just if you want add a new combo here, delete this 01:16:693 (1) and finally add a new combo in 01:17:979 (4). Imo is best because fits with the patterns of sliders and the voice.
8. 01:41:550 (4) - New combo time.
9. 01:42:408 (2) - I prefer a Ctrl+R here for the sequence of the sliders, or well the directions, to right, left, to up, down, you know, if you agree then Ctrl+r this 01:43:265 (3).
10. According with the before point (obviously if you agree) then stack this circle 01:44:122 (1) in the start of the next slider, plus: move the slider and circle to the start of this slider 01:42:408 (2). Here the shoots http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416903 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416904, imo looks great.
11. 01:51:836 (3) - Maybe new combo.
12. 02:13:265 (2) - I prefer this here http://puu.sh/ZZi6.
13. 02:24:193 (5) - This slider should be shorten by 1/4 and end in the blue tick, just listen the track, after this move the spinner 1/4 backward and extend by 1/4. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416914, The same thing in [Hard].

• Hitsound

1. Just to remind the point about the hitounding 00:46:265 (2) at the start here.
2. 00:48:193 (3) - And here, etc etc.
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 01:30:836 (1) - This new combo no sense here, maybe for the voice but is too short, try this: 01:29:765 (6) Add new combo here and delete the new combo 01:30:836 (1).
4. 01:48:836 (1) - Please remove this new combo.
5. 01:52:908 (4) - This slider sound a bit weird here, imo this should start after the first slider (just check the voice), look my suggestion http://puu.sh/100bm, I prefer change other things like the next 1/1 slider, Shoot 1 Shoot 2 & Shoot 3, try it!
6. 01:58:158 (1) - The new combo not is neccesary, remove it.
7. 02:08:979 (5) - Imo the new combo should start here, if you agree then make the same here 02:12:408 (5).
8. 02:24:193 (4) - Same as [Normal].

• Hitsound

1. 01:08:979 (1,3) - Maybe whistle at the start.
2. 01:17:550 (1) - Missing finish at the start.
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 02:07:158 (1) - Add a new combo.

Kenezz wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

• Hitsound

1. 01:08:979 (1,3) - Maybe whistle at the start. Fixed
2. 01:17:550 (1) - Missing finish at the start. lol shit
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 02:07:158 (1) - Add a new combo.Fixed

Kataliis wrote:

its so beautifull i like it

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Easy]
00:31:265 (1) - maybe try to find a better way to place it, and blanket with the previous slider better. Sure
01:17:550 (1) - a bit nazi but you may like to place it without grid snap. sure
02:06:836 (1) - make this 1/2 earlier. Yeah
02:08:979 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/1xJwG I think you could try to make the flow better. Current is really good imo
Not bad but i hope you could pay more attention to minor things like slider shape etc. They won't be a big deal when you check certain places, but may affect the feeling in general.

[Normal]
00:39:836 (1) - this part sounds a bit strange to me, maybe try sure http://puu.sh/1xJzc
00:53:550 (1) - honestly i feel it's ugly = =||| Actually like this shape
00:53:550 (1) - add a beat? How is this possible?
01:43:693 (5,6,7) - keep them in a more organized shape... Fixed
01:49:908 (4,5) - just make them a 3/2 slider. done

[Hard]
00:29:550 (1) - I'd try beats like this, more fit with the rhythm done http://puu.sh/1xJCQ
00:53:550 (4) - ...in fact this is not good looking (because of spacing), you should try to get a balance between spacing and the slider shape, not just force it there. done
01:08:979 (1,3) - clap at the beginning may fits well. done, also added one more
02:02:765 (2,3,4) - the spacing is strange here... fixed
02:14:122 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1xJEY or whatever, but it seems too short to draw a crossed slider. fixed

Sushi wrote:

Things were fixed, and were minor fixes. Time to get some candy

~

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I see what you did there, Flasky.