1. The new combo issue from before is still here, you ignored all of Gabe's combo mod...? ._. Insane is still a good reference for this.

1. You may want to create your own sliderpoint10.png and sliderpoint30.png; they should match the 300's colour and style.
2. Straight sliders and circles placed at 0, 45, and 90 degree angles are what most people are not looking forward to see. This applies throughout your difficulties. Care to make sure you get creative object placement; while these angles formed by the objects are not unrankable, they are certainly not optimal. Check out the entire map for each difficulty and limit yourself to a minimal number of 90 degree patterns.
3. Many of your 3-point curved sliders, as well as waves and other sliders that were meant to be symmetrical, are not, unfortunately. Giving them symmetry would contribute to the aesthetics greatly.

1. No problem with rhythm at all. The only issues are up in General.

1. 00:46:693 (1,2,3) - Would probably look and play better if these sliders weren't so "fat". For sliders (1,2), use a simple 3-point curved slider. For (3), try an anchor at time 00:48:193 - to fit the music.
2. 00:50:122 (1,2,3,4) - The 90 degree angles and straight slider combination, mentioned in Easy. Would try to improve the placement, as well as the symmetry on (4). Apply fixes to (4) to 00:53:550 (1) - as well, seeing how you have it as a rotation.
3. 00:55:479 (1) - Remove new combo spinner since it's a continuation of 00:54:836 (2) - .
4. 01:07:693 (1,2) - Would be much, much more interesting if these weren't exactly vertical or horizontal. Try changing their orientation while keeping the spacing nice.
5. 01:13:265 (1,2,3,4) - Don't like the pattern very much. You can do something much more interesting with this 1/1 slider combination.
6. 01:17:979 (3) - Removing the leftmost node ought to make this slider look a bit better. //Did you switch mappers here? Sliders seem to get more interesting from this point onward.
7. 01:31:265 (2) - Angles between anchors are too big, making this slider look unnecessarily boxy for its own good.
8. 01:32:979 (4) - Curved part has too much of a curve. When you restructure this, keep in mind to keep anchor at the slider tick 01:33:408 - .
9. 01:53:122 (4) - Not too sure I like this slider shape; can be made simpler and more pleasant. 01:55:265 (1) - too.
10. 02:14:122 (1) - From this time on, map contains too many adjacent 1/2 rhythms. Leave more space for breaks.

1. Try slider tick rate 2 due to your abundance of 1/2 rhythm usage. This would allow you to hitsound the right beats during your chorus (01:42:836 - for example).
2. 01:00:408 (3) - There seems to be a misplaced whistle.
3. 01:07:908 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Perhaps a way to make this neater and more interesting would be to place (3,4,5) in a straight line, and (5,6,7,1) in another straight line, forming about a 60 degree angle between the two lines.
4. 01:17:336 (1,2,7) - I feel these sliders are too long for a Hard diff. I generally do not recommend sliders longer than 1/1 in Hard and above unless it's used to emphasize a certain part of the music; in this case, the simple vocals can also be mapped to by a combination of shorter sliders and circles. This applies to 01:25:050 (3,4) - and any other sliders longer than 1/1 that I may have missed.
5. 01:40:693 (7) - Whistle the slider tail, maybe?
6. 01:56:979 (7) - Great place for new combo.
7. 01:57:836 (10) - Shorten this to 1/2, since a triple at 01:58:265 - would be very fitting.

1. Can umbrella save me now?
2. Recommend slider tick rate 2 for the same reason as Hard.
3. 01:22:479 (6,1) - Almost never a fan of this kind of stacking, in your free time I can explain to you why I begin to point these out more than ever.
4. 01:41:122 (8,9,1) - Let's get these to equivalent spacing.
5. 02:07:158 (1) - Remove new combo spinner since it's a continuation of 02:07:050 (8) - .
6. 02:22:479 (15,1) - Best if this was also 1.3x spacing, since you've got the syncopated (2,3,4), it's important to keep a good enough spacing so that it's completely readable.
7. 02:27:622 (1) - 1/6 would be more appropriate, from red to white ticks.

SkyDevil wrote:

Sakuya's Insane
01:10:265 (3,4,5) - Claps at the slider's end of 3 and at 4 and 5 :3 Fixed

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

02:24:515 (1) - move here 02:24:408 and end 02:27:408 Fixed

Shulin wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

00:41:550 (1,2,3) - Use a 1/2 slider here? It's a better rhythm imo and then just continue the stream. Fixed
00:56:872 (8) - Delete this note? Sounds better without it. Fixed
01:25:586 (3) - Delete this? No drum sound here so it sounds odd. Obviously respace 01:25:693 (4) - if you do this. Fixed
01:21:300 (2,3) - Maybe space these out so it's something like 01:13:050 (7,8,9) - think it has better flow. Fixed
02:06:836 - Note? Drum here and I think it'll play better ^_^ I was following vocals =v=
02:10:908 (2,3) - Stack this on 02:11:122 (4) - ? it looks neater. If not align it like 02:10:050 (5,6,7) - Fixed
02:17:550 (1,2,3,4) - Start 02:17:550 (1) - in the same position as the start of 02:16:265 (2) - and then respace the stream a bit? It looks much neater when playing. What
02:27:622 (1) - Add a return to follow the drum. Fixed

those wrote:

[Insane]

1. Can umbrella save me now? ヽ｀、ヽ(ノ；Д；)ノ ｀、、ヽ｀☂ヽ｀
2. Recommend slider tick rate 2 for the same reason as Hard. ヽ｀、ヽFixedヽ｀、ヽ
3. 01:22:479 (6,1) - Almost never a fan of this kind of stacking, in your free time I can explain to you why I begin to point these out more than ever. ヽ｀、ヽFixedヽ｀、ヽ
4. 01:41:122 (8,9,1) - Let's get these to equivalent spacing. Fixed
5. 02:07:158 (1) - Remove new combo spinner since it's a continuation of 02:07:050 (8) - .Fixed
6. 02:22:479 (15,1) - Best if this was also 1.3x spacing, since you've got the syncopated (2,3,4), it's important to keep a good enough spacing so that it's completely readable. Fixed
7. 02:27:622 (1) - 1/6 would be more appropriate, from red to white ticks.

1. 00:40:265 (2,3) - odd to ignore the drums here suddenly
2. 01:01:693 (3) - make 01:02:122 this heavy beat a sliderend is a bad choice. consider another pattern to make it something can be hit.
3. 01:17:550 (1) - out of music. the reverse is too early
4. 01:36:622 (1,2,3) - considering the spacing next, make the order right, left, up?
5. 02:24:408 (1) - missing new combo, if this is not intented

1. 02:14:122 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - out of music.
2. 02:24:193 (4) - make this a slider and ends at 02:24:300.
3. 00:43:693 ~ 01:10:265 - claps on this part is all wrong place. 00:46:265, 00:48:193 are how it should go. 4th white tick, 4th red tick, 4th white tick, 4th red tick...
4. 01:10:693 - normal default claps after this is not a good choice. refer to how Insane done.

1. the clap things mentioned in Hard and 02:24:193 (4) - slider.
2. 00:55:479 (1) - lost new combo on spinner.

1. 01:05:550 (2) - ugly slider, copy (1) can be easier and better.
2. and the clap things

Colin Hou wrote:

M4M/

[Hard]

1. 02:14:122 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - out of music. I think it's fitting the high notes
2. 02:24:193 (4) - make this a slider and ends at 02:24:300. fix
3. 00:43:693 ~ 01:10:265 - claps on this part is all wrong place. 00:46:265, 00:48:193 are how it should go. 4th white tick, 4th red tick, 4th white tick, 4th red tick... fix
4. 01:10:693 - normal default claps after this is not a good choice. refer to how Insane done.

fix

[Normal]

1. the clap things mentioned in Hard and 02:24:193 (4) - slider.Not sure what you mean by slider
2. 00:55:479 (1) - lost new combo on spinner.

fix

[Easy]

1. 01:05:550 (2) - ugly slider, copy (1) can be easier and better.fix
2. and the clap things

fix

need more work on hitsounds and use more fun patterns.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:40:265 (2,3) - odd to ignore the drums here suddenly Fixed
2. 01:01:693 (3) - make 01:02:122 this heavy beat a sliderend is a bad choice. consider another pattern to make it something can be hit.Fixed
3. 01:17:550 (1) - out of music. the reverse is too early Fixed
4. 01:36:622 (1,2,3) - considering the spacing next, make the order right, left, up? Fixed
5. 02:24:408 (1) - missing new combo, if this is not intented There's already one

1. You need add a SliderBorder for the skin, add a white default in all diffs like this. http://puu.sh/ZFws

• Settings

1. Don't make the super difference but HP and OD+1 is best because the settings between [Normal] and this is a bit huge.
   Hitsound
2. 00:46:265 (1) - Add clap, fits perfectly with the track, if you agree, add this in [Normal] & [Hard].
3. 00:46:693 (2) - Same as before but here at the end of the slider.
4. 00:49:693 (1) - Here at the start, check the track and add the missing claps.
5. 00:52:693 (4) - Well I don't want make a longer mod of claps then only check the parts when a claps sounds in the track and put the clap, here in the repeat, you know what I mean.
6. 02:01:693 (1) - Missing finish at the end.
7. 02:14:122 (1) - Add a finish like the others diffs at the start.
   Beatmap Suggestions
8. 00:53:979 (5) - New combo time.
9. 01:24:408 (2) - According with your pattern, the new combo should start here and not here 01:23:550 (1). After this if you want add a new combo in 01:22:265 (5). 01:51:836 (1) Check this part to rectify.

• Settings

1. Just like a suggest, check the SV here and in [Easy] woah is really huge compared with this and [Hard], try to be consistent because is too notable the jump in spacing and velocity of the slider between the most easy diffs.
   Hitsound
2. 00:39:836 (1) - Missing finish at the start.
3. 01:01:693 (8) - Rememeber the suggestion about the claps in [Easy], here at the end.
4. 01:44:979 (4) - Missing finish at the repeat.
   Beatmap Suggestions
5. 00:46:693 (6) - New combo timee.
6. 01:00:408 (6) - Maybe new combo and remove the new combo in 01:02:122 (1).
7. 01:14:550 (6) - Just if you want add a new combo here, delete this 01:16:693 (1) and finally add a new combo in 01:17:979 (4). Imo is best because fits with the patterns of sliders and the voice.
8. 01:41:550 (4) - New combo time.
9. 01:42:408 (2) - I prefer a Ctrl+R here for the sequence of the sliders, or well the directions, to right, left, to up, down, you know, if you agree then Ctrl+r this 01:43:265 (3).
10. According with the before point (obviously if you agree) then stack this circle 01:44:122 (1) in the start of the next slider, plus: move the slider and circle to the start of this slider 01:42:408 (2). Here the shoots http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416903 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416904, imo looks great.
11. 01:51:836 (3) - Maybe new combo.
12. 02:13:265 (2) - I prefer this here http://puu.sh/ZZi6.
13. 02:24:193 (5) - This slider should be shorten by 1/4 and end in the blue tick, just listen the track, after this move the spinner 1/4 backward and extend by 1/4. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416914, The same thing in [Hard].

• Hitsound

1. Just to remind the point about the hitounding 00:46:265 (2) at the start here.
2. 00:48:193 (3) - And here, etc etc.
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 01:30:836 (1) - This new combo no sense here, maybe for the voice but is too short, try this: 01:29:765 (6) Add new combo here and delete the new combo 01:30:836 (1).
4. 01:48:836 (1) - Please remove this new combo.
5. 01:52:908 (4) - This slider sound a bit weird here, imo this should start after the first slider (just check the voice), look my suggestion http://puu.sh/100bm, I prefer change other things like the next 1/1 slider, Shoot 1 Shoot 2 & Shoot 3, try it!
6. 01:58:158 (1) - The new combo not is neccesary, remove it.
7. 02:08:979 (5) - Imo the new combo should start here, if you agree then make the same here 02:12:408 (5).
8. 02:24:193 (4) - Same as [Normal].

• Hitsound

1. 01:08:979 (1,3) - Maybe whistle at the start.
2. 01:17:550 (1) - Missing finish at the start.
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 02:07:158 (1) - Add a new combo.

Kenezz wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

• Hitsound

1. 01:08:979 (1,3) - Maybe whistle at the start. Fixed
2. 01:17:550 (1) - Missing finish at the start. lol shit
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 02:07:158 (1) - Add a new combo.Fixed

Kataliis wrote:

its so beautifull i like it

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Easy]
00:31:265 (1) - maybe try to find a better way to place it, and blanket with the previous slider better. Sure
01:17:550 (1) - a bit nazi but you may like to place it without grid snap. sure
02:06:836 (1) - make this 1/2 earlier. Yeah
02:08:979 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/1xJwG I think you could try to make the flow better. Current is really good imo
Not bad but i hope you could pay more attention to minor things like slider shape etc. They won't be a big deal when you check certain places, but may affect the feeling in general.

[Normal]
00:39:836 (1) - this part sounds a bit strange to me, maybe try sure http://puu.sh/1xJzc
00:53:550 (1) - honestly i feel it's ugly = =||| Actually like this shape
00:53:550 (1) - add a beat? How is this possible?
01:43:693 (5,6,7) - keep them in a more organized shape... Fixed
01:49:908 (4,5) - just make them a 3/2 slider. done

[Hard]
00:29:550 (1) - I'd try beats like this, more fit with the rhythm done http://puu.sh/1xJCQ
00:53:550 (4) - ...in fact this is not good looking (because of spacing), you should try to get a balance between spacing and the slider shape, not just force it there. done
01:08:979 (1,3) - clap at the beginning may fits well. done, also added one more
02:02:765 (2,3,4) - the spacing is strange here... fixed
02:14:122 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1xJEY or whatever, but it seems too short to draw a crossed slider. fixed

Sushi wrote:

Things were fixed, and were minor fixes. Time to get some candy

~

Flask wrote:

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Gabe wrote:

Flask wrote:

osu needs more yaoi <3

I see what you did there, Flasky.

BCI wrote:

btw grats Konei! (~*w*)~