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YTYuyu

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Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-08-01T01:13:29+00:00

Alright let's get started. mod requested on my queue

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
the lead in time should be the same for all diffs. set the easy's lead in to 1500 like the other diffs.
Preview times are inconsistent. remember they must be the same for all diffs.

[Easy]
consider increasing every setting except for the CS by 1 for a smoother flow to the song.
00:08:826 (1) - maybe make the slider like this so that it'd somewhat form a blanket for the next slider. i think doing this would flow smoother to the next note durung gameplay.
00:11:683 (1) - since you have a slidertick file, make that slidertick before the repeat is hit a clap for consistency.
00:15:254 (1) - idk about this...instrumental is still going and i feel that this is placed at an awkward spot. move this spinner up by 1/1, and ofc reduce the spinner by 1/1. also add notes at that empty spot to follow the instrumental in the song. it makes me feel comfortable on where this note is placed since it flows to the instrumental nicely IMO.
00:30:254 (4) - maybe it's just me, but this 2/1 slider breaks the flow in this combo since (1) is a 1/1 slider and the flow should keep going if this is a 1/1 slider, so reduce this slider by 1/1 and either add a repeat or add a circle to keep the flow doing from the previous pattern.
00:37:397 (1) - maybe make this a curved slider to blanket the beginning of the next slider? again i think doing this would make a smooth path to the next note during gameplay IMO.
00:45:969 (2) - i think i heard cymbals on this note, so either add a finish with the whistle, or replace the whistle for a finish to match it.
00:48:826 (6) - make this a NC. this is where the lyrics change in this note.
00:50:076 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the lyrics are still going from the previous note, and replace the claps for finishes to not only match the vocals, but to match the cymbals in the background music.
01:00:254 (1) - personally, i don't like where this spinner ends. for me, it ends at an awkward spot in which the vocals continue at the 1/2 tick. i suggest ending this spinner at 01:01:504 because that's where the instrumental starts all over again in the song.
01:25:076 (1) - this slider should start 1/2 ahead because it looks odd starting that note at "se". it follows "sekai", but if you move it 1/2 up, it'll end at "kai" in which it'll flow to the map and it'll make a nice ending to the song before the spinner.

[GiNa's Normal]
00:11:683 (1) - *nazi* not a big deal but think you can stack the repeat on (1) perfectly? i think it'd look neater during gameplay.
00:17:219 (3) - maybe you can move this note 1/2 back to follow the piano? i think moving it here might cause players to hit this note too early IMO even though it's following the vocals here.
00:30:790 - maybe add a circle to follow the guitar in this part of the song?
00:41:326 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in the song?
00:43:647 (2) - remove the finish at the beginning. it sounds unfitting to me and no cymbals are heard in this part.
00:45:254 (1) - replace the whistle for a finish. i feel that the whistle isn't loud enough to match the cymbals in the song.
00:51:147 (4) - add a repeat on this slider to not be consistent with the previous slider, but to follow the vocals accurately during gameplay.
01:11:683 (1) - remove that clap at the repeat arrow. i find it unfitting with this part and it ruins the consistency in the claps.
01:13:290 (3) - maybe add a clap at the repeat for consistency purposes?
nice diff, and i gotta respect your mapping style in this...

[Hard]
00:04:362 (2,3) - add whistles here but not at the sliderbody of (2) to match the piano in the song.
00:22:040 (2) - i feel that this is unrankable because the repeat arrow is being covered by the hitburst. find a way to make this repeat arrow fully visible for players to see.
00:45:969 (4) - same as normal, but replace the whistle for a finish.
01:25:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this star's spacing can be bigger because during gameplay, it looks clumped up IMO.
other than that, this is a good diff.

[D.N.Angel]
00:02:754 (2) - replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider or 3 circles because it'll follow the piano and guitar nicely. it feels odd following this slider when the instrumental changes in this part.
00:40:612 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in this part of the song?
same comment as hard.

I guess that's it. Star and GL

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-01T05:28:49+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
Alright let's get started. mod requested on my queue

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
the lead in time should be the same for all diffs. set the easy's lead in to 1500 like the other diffs.Fixed
Preview times are inconsistent. remember they must be the same for all diffs.Fixed

[Easy]
consider increasing every setting except for the CS by 1 for a smoother flow to the song. OD+1
00:08:826 (1) - maybe make the slider like this so that it'd somewhat form a blanket for the next slider. i think doing this would flow smoother to the next note durung gameplay. Fixed
00:11:683 (1) - since you have a slidertick file, make that slidertick before the repeat is hit a clap for consistency. x
00:15:254 (1) - idk about this...instrumental is still going and i feel that this is placed at an awkward spot. move this spinner up by 1/1, and ofc reduce the spinner by 1/1. also add notes at that empty spot to follow the instrumental in the song. it makes me feel comfortable on where this note is placed since it flows to the instrumental nicely IMO. I think it's ok... I follow the lyrics
00:30:254 (4) - maybe it's just me, but this 2/1 slider breaks the flow in this combo since (1) is a 1/1 slider and the flow should keep going if this is a 1/1 slider, so reduce this slider by 1/1 and either add a repeat or add a circle to keep the flow doing from the previous pattern. Fixed
00:37:397 (1) - maybe make this a curved slider to blanket the beginning of the next slider? again i think doing this would make a smooth path to the next note during gameplay IMO. Fixed
00:45:969 (2) - i think i heard cymbals on this note, so either add a finish with the whistle, or replace the whistle for a finish to match it.Fixed
00:48:826 (6) - make this a NC. this is where the lyrics change in this note. I follow the lyrics o.o
00:50:076 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the lyrics are still going from the previous note, and replace the claps for finishes to not only match the vocals, but to match the cymbals in the background music.^
01:00:254 (1) - personally, i don't like where this spinner ends. for me, it ends at an awkward spot in which the vocals continue at the 1/2 tick. i suggest ending this spinner at 01:01:504 because that's where the instrumental starts all over again in the song.I follow the lyrics.. the vocal's end
01:25:076 (1) - this slider should start 1/2 ahead because it looks odd starting that note at "se". it follows "sekai", but if you move it 1/2 up, it'll end at "kai" in which it'll flow to the map and it'll make a nice ending to the song before the spinner. x

[Hard]
00:04:362 (2,3) - add whistles here but not at the sliderbody of (2) to match the piano in the song. Fixed
00:22:040 (2) - i feel that this is unrankable because the repeat arrow is being covered by the hitburst. find a way to make this repeat arrow fully visible for players to see. ..it is ok?(maybe...) - http://puu.sh/Nyb5
00:45:969 (4) - same as normal, but replace the whistle for a finish. Fixed
01:25:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this star's spacing can be bigger because during gameplay, it looks clumped up IMO.
other than that, this is a good diff. I think it's ok~ the spacing is 1.5x o.o

I guess that's it. Star and GL
thanks.. you forget to shoot star to me T.T

Thanks mod

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

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Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-08-01T12:29:55+00:00

oh whoops...sorry

. here you go.

GiNa

1,023 posts

Joined September 2010

GiNa 2012-08-01T20:39:48+00:00

Frostmourne's Mod

Frostmourne wrote:
GiNa's Normal
00:14:897 (2) - try changing volume and hitsound type to 25% and normal hit, I find it very fit with tom(drum) sound much >w<　I think 25% is too low, so I use 50%
00:30:076 (1) - ehh.. why no whistle at the end? since it does fit very well with vocal , end with that empty sound feel lonely ;_;　Fixed
00:33:826 (2) - same.. whistle here sounds very nice :3 b　Fixed
01:04:362 (4) - .... use this as slider and end at 01:04:897 (2) - instead? , I feel it kinda forced me while playing and not intuitive much　Nope, but I still moved it a little
01:12:576 (2,3) - add finish at these two sliders at the last point of it (finish combine with vocal is better than nothing I think )　Fixed
01:17:397 (2) - if you would like to follow the vocal, I think the slider should be started at red point before 1/2 beat like this ? and I think that slider will flow better with (3) too　Nope, I tried to keep them as 1/1

249's Mod

Byakugan249 wrote:
[GiNa's Normal]
00:11:683 (1) - *nazi* not a big deal but think you can stack the repeat on (1) perfectly? i think it'd look neater during gameplay.　Fixed
00:17:219 (3) - maybe you can move this note 1/2 back to follow the piano? i think moving it here might cause players to hit this note too early IMO even though it's following the vocals here.　Nope
00:30:790 - maybe add a circle to follow the guitar in this part of the song?　k
00:41:326 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in the song?　Nope
00:43:647 (2) - remove the finish at the beginning. it sounds unfitting to me and no cymbals are heard in this part.　Fixed
00:45:254 (1) - replace the whistle for a finish. i feel that the whistle isn't loud enough to match the cymbals in the song.　Fixed
00:51:147 (4) - add a repeat on this slider to not be consistent with the previous slider, but to follow the vocals accurately during gameplay.　Fixed
01:11:683 (1) - remove that clap at the repeat arrow. i find it unfitting with this part and it ruins the consistency in the claps.　Fixed
01:13:290 (3) - maybe add a clap at the repeat for consistency purposes?　Fixed
nice diff, and i gotta respect your mapping style in this...　Glad to hear that from a experienced modder like you ^-^

Thanks again
http://puu.sh/NJm9

EmPao

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Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-01T22:19:15+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
oh whoops...sorry . here you go.

Thank you xD
-

Updated.~

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-08-04T08:00:41+00:00

Yo

[Easy]
* AR +1?

00:18:112 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu while gameplay. It can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
00:50:076 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:469 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. May hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)

[GiNa's Normal]
* AR +1?

00:13:826 - Add note here?
00:41:326 - ^
01:02:576 (3) - Add clap at repeating slider?

[Hard]
00:51:147 (4) - Add whistle at head slider?
00:59:719 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next object with perfect timed

[D.N.Angel]
01:15:076 - Add note here?

Good luck!!!

EmPao

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Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-04T11:29:06+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Yo

[Easy]
* AR +1?

00:18:112 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu while gameplay. It can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
00:50:076 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:469 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from s pinner. May hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)

[Hard]
00:51:147 (4) - Add whistle at head slider?
00:59:719 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next object with perfect timed

Good luck!!!

all fixed

thank you~

DarknessAngel

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Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-08-04T15:24:21+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[D.N.Angel]
01:15:076 - Add note here? //this stop is good to me.

Byakugan249 wrote:
[D.N.Angel]
00:02:754 (2) - replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider or 3 circles because it'll follow the piano and guitar nicely. it feels odd following this slider when the instrumental changes in this part. //I think the rhythm is fine
00:40:612 - maybe add a circle to follow the drums in this part of the song? //no,I just wanna follow the vocal here.
same comment as hard.

Thank for modding ~

訂閱功能怪怪的...我沒收到訊息通知的說

JudgeTheDude

595 posts

Joined September 2011

JudgeTheDude 2012-08-05T17:01:50+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

Useless mod from an noob modder

I didn't find anything to report

Good work, good luck with rankings ^^

Poggo

1,502 posts

Joined January 2012

Poggo 2012-08-09T07:05:49+00:00

Hi ^^ Random m4m xD

Hard

00:01:862 - add note here, it will be better follow the music
00:50:254 - ^
00:37:576 - remove 1 repeat and put this slider on white tick.

Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diff's

00:44:897 - better add note, it will make a smooth transition
00:54:183 - ^
01:14:183 - ^
01:11:683 - http://puu.sh/Q1go will be sounds better

Easy fine~~

P.S Here multi timing, Open this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494 and look

Good luck~~

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-09T08:01:31+00:00

Katty Pie wrote:
Hi ^^ Random m4m xD

Hard

00:01:862 - add note here, it will be better follow the music Fixed
00:50:254 - ^ x
00:37:576 - remove 1 repeat and put this slider on white tick. ^ , I follow the lyrics

Easy fine~~:)

P.S Here multi timing, Open this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494 and look

Good luck~~

thanks mod

GiNa

1,023 posts

Joined September 2010

GiNa 2012-08-09T18:47:56+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[GiNa's Normal]

* AR +1?　No, people complained AR 5 is too fast for a Normal
00:13:826 - Add note here?　No
00:41:326 - ^　Added
01:02:576 (3) - Add clap at repeating slider?　Fixed

Katty Pie wrote:
Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diff's　??? Is this a rule ???

00:44:897 - better add note, it will make a smooth transition　Nope
00:54:183 - ^　^
01:14:183 - ^　^
01:11:683 - http://puu.sh/Q1go will be sounds better　Fixed

http://puu.sh/Q99u

10nya

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Joined February 2011

10nya 2012-08-10T03:58:07+00:00

request from my queue :3

[General]
~~

[Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement

00:32:754: last point to x264 y168 would be nice~

Rhythms

00:45:254: move the nc to 00:45:969 ?
01:08:469: add finish on the slider tail?

[GiNa's Normal]
Rhythms

01:04:362: remove note?

[Hard]
Rhythms

00:19:183: add whistle on the slider tail?
00:19:540: ^
00:20:076: whistle?
00:25:254: whistle on the slider tail?
00:25:612: whistle on the reverse ?
00:27:754: whistle on the slider tail?
00:28:112: ^
00:28:647: whistle?
00:30:612: whistle on tail?
00:30:969: whistle on the reverse ?
00:31:504: whistle?
00:38:469: remove whistle on the slider end
01:12:933: finish on the head?

[DN Angel's]
Rhythms

00:42:219: add note?
00:45:076: whistle on the head?
00:45:433: ^

thats all I can find, good luck ^w^

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-10T09:30:33+00:00

Thanks mod

Crok425

262 posts

Joined October 2010

Crok425 2012-08-12T12:00:16+00:00

Hi, from the modding queue. Sorry for the delay, I'm lazy

. Sorry if it's short, it seems like the map is looking perfect already.

[Easy]
You're overusing the whistle sound in the first part of the Kiai mode. Try to use less since hearing it over again it's kind of... annoying.
I can't really find anything because it's a well made map.

[GINa's Normal]
00:19:183 Add a circle there.
00:25:254 ^
01:08:112 ^ ... maybe...
01:17:040 ^ I don't like that empty spot. Put a clap sound also.
01:25:076 Add a slider of the same length as the next one. There is a vocal in that part, you should add it.
Done.

[Hard]
Same as easy... although not as overused... still, check it. I kinda think this song doesn't goes well with the whistle... but you can ignore that

.
... And so again... I didn't find anything... damn...

[D.N.Angel]
A... nope, nothing either. Ignore.
__________________

And that's all I can do. Sorry for the shortness, but I hope it's helpful enough and I wish you good lcuk on getting this ranked.

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2012-08-13T17:00:43+00:00

Hi

[Easy]

00:14:183 (5) - Remove the repeat and instead move the slider at 00:14:719 - or 00:14:897 - ? Imho,this would be a better choice here.
00:45:612 - Add a note here? It follows in a really good way the singer's voice

[GiNa's Normal]

00:50:076 (2) - Put this at x:240 y:176,so that this can countinue the flow with 00:48:826 (1) - in a better way?
00:56:862 (3) - If you want to make a better blanket with 00:57:397 (1) - ,then I suggest you to move the last waypoint at x:320 y:132
01:21:326 (2) - Little suggestion here: Move this at x:204 y:225?

[Hard]

00:36:683 (3) - CTRL+R here?

[D.N.Angel]

Really nothing to say,really good work here ^^

That's it. That's rather a short mod,really good map and good luck! ^^

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-13T18:11:11+00:00

Thanks Crok425's & -kevincela-'s mod

Fixed & updated

pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

pieguyn 2012-08-14T02:55:47+00:00

hi there, sorry I'm late >_<

Easy: fine

Normal:

01:17:040 - add note?

Hard:

00:15:969 (5) - maybe put finish on repeat instead of whistle? it might match the cymbal in the song better o-o
00:53:112 (1) - remove finish? since there's no finishes in the rest of this part ><

D.N.Angel:

00:20:969 (3) - add whistle?
00:48:647 (4) - add custom soft 1 whistle like before?
01:11:862 (2) - maybe add whistle here?

nice map, good luck =w=

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-14T03:44:58+00:00

Thanks pieguy1372's mod

All fixed

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2012-08-14T14:57:58+00:00

Hi EmPao, mod request from my modding queue >w<

[General]
I suggest you to change this BG because Andrea has already used it for his mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494
To distinguish this map from the other one, it's better if you change it then.. (:
Add Evergreen to the tags?

[Easy]
00:18:469 (2) - I don't know but this slider doesn't convince me. I mean that beginners would think to find a rhythm like this:

I think it would be better to play for them, especially after a spinner's end
00:48:826 (1) - Instead of whistle here I would use finish on this slider's head, especially because it would sound perfectly together with 00:50:076 (2)'s finishes
00:51:683 (1,2) - You could make them symmetric, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402472
I have fixed the spacing of the next elements too, then just copy this code:

308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8

01:00:254 (1) - Remove finish, it sounds too loud. Just a finish on 01:03:112 (1) is already perfect imo
01:11:326 (5) - New combo
I don't like this hitsound normal pattern you used during the kiai time D:
Good map btw :3

[GiNa's Normal]
00:18:647 (1) - Useless new combo, remove it
00:20:254 (1) - Finish here also for consistency
00:24:362 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:147 (1) - To keep consistency with the previous part you should move this circle 1/2 earlier adding a finish on it, the rhythm is much better
00:30:076 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:683 (1) - Finish on the slider's start
00:37:397 (1) - Finish
00:50:076 (2,3) - I would add finishes on (2) and on the (3)'s end. It would fit the music better especially together with 00:51:683 (1)
00:57:397 (1) - Finish on the head
00:58:826 (1) - ^
01:04:362 (1) - What about to use this rhythm instead that follows the vocal? I would put circle first and the slider after it

01:18:647 (4,1) - Same of 00:50:076 (2,3), these finishes are awesome
Nice, just small suggestions about hitsounds

[Hard]
00:02:219 (2) - Remove whistle?
Fine

[D.N.Angel]

Rename to D.N.Angel's Insane

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506

256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4

Just this

That's all, good mapset.
I wish you good luck with rank then ;3 Have my star

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-14T18:00:21+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Hi EmPao, mod request from my modding queue >w<

[General]
I suggest you to change this BG because Andrea has already used it for his mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494
To distinguish this map from the other one, it's better if you change it then.. (: I tried to find it ... But I cant find the other BG orz...
Add Evergreen to the tags?

[Easy]
00:18:469 (2) - I don't know but this slider doesn't convince me. I mean that beginners would think to find a rhythm like this:

I think it would be better to play for them, especially after a spinner's end Fixed
00:48:826 (1) - Instead of whistle here I would use finish on this slider's head, especially because it would sound perfectly together with 00:50:076 (2)'s finishes ^
00:51:683 (1,2) - You could make them symmetric, I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402472 Okay
I have fixed the spacing of the next elements too, then just copy this code:
308,92,51683,6,0,B|452:92,2,144,4|2|8
208,92,53112,2,0,B|64:92,2,144,4|2|8
196,188,54540,6,0,B|256:225|256:317|196:348,2,192,4|2|2
144,268,56326,1,8
92,188,56683,1,0
144,108,57040,1,8
240,108,57397,6,0,B|284:84|332:108,1,96,12|8
408,164,58112,2,0,B|432:212|408:256,1,96,8|8
332,316,58826,2,0,B|284:340|240:316,1,96,8|8
164,256,59540,2,0,B|140:208|164:164,1,96,8|8
01:00:254 (1) - Remove finish, it sounds too loud. Just a finish on 01:03:112 (1) is already perfect imo ^
01:11:326 (5) - New combo ^
I don't like this hitsound normal pattern you used during the kiai time D: some people tell me this problem too.. so I decide to changed the hitsound to soft-whistle. (maybe it will be better now...orz)
Good map btw :3
[Hard]
00:02:219 (2) - Remove whistle? Fixed
Fine

That's all, good mapset. thanks mod, your mod is helpful xD
I wish you good luck with rank then ;3 Have my star

Thanks mod & star

EmPao

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Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-16T09:39:07+00:00

waiting for GiNa & DarknessAngel check those mods ...and I will try to find MAT

DarknessAngel

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Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-08-17T10:54:29+00:00

thank for modding,everyone ~

http://puu.sh/W9XJ

To Pao :
這圖的確是時候找MAT了
sry沒能給你mod ><

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-17T11:23:29+00:00

updated !!

Thanks DarknessAngel xD

GiNa

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Joined September 2010

GiNa 2012-08-17T22:31:46+00:00

Totally in a busy life now T.T
Anyways, here
http://puu.sh/WjjR
I fixed what I think is necessary/make sense

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-18T01:43:11+00:00

okay~updated !!

Thanks to GiNa

yeah~

Sun Rainbow

1,383 posts

Joined January 2011

Sun Rainbow 2012-08-20T09:10:24+00:00

Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？

NORMAL
^

HARD
00:59:719 (3) - 这全部CLAP会呕的

~~INSANE不MOD了肯定坑人~~

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-08-20T14:19:37+00:00

@Sun Rainbow :

就算要騙KD也請別用吐嘈語氣好麼...
老實說如果是我我就不會給...

@ Pao :

I forgot to fix this,can you help me ?
這樣就不用傳檔案，我覺得方便點:p

Chewin wrote:
[D.N.Angel]

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-20T16:55:43+00:00

Sun Rainbow wrote:
Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？前面的節奏比較複雜,在簡單的diff中我覺得不好做所以沒做用一個note帶過>_>

HARD
00:59:719 (3) - 这全部CLAP会呕的 I follow the drum

Thanks mod

DarknessAngel wrote:
@ Pao :

I forgot to fix this,can you help me ?
這樣就不用傳檔案，我覺得方便點:p
Chewin wrote:
[D.N.Angel]

01:00:255 (1) - What about to improve a bit this ugly slider's shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402506
256,192,60255,6,0,B|188:220|208:124|260:88|400:156|248:324,1,322,0|4
Just this

Okay~

~~找不到MAT ;_;~~

GiNa

1,023 posts

Joined September 2010

GiNa 2012-08-23T00:03:57+00:00

Sun Rainbow wrote:
Easy
加个那么长的BREAK是要偷懒？

NORMAL
^

你的語氣聽起來像是來吵架的
reason同Pao，所以無修改

In return, 給個那麼短的MOD是要偷懶？
Btw, I agreed with DA's statement.

Spread Wings_old

67 posts

Joined May 2011

Spread Wings_old 2012-08-27T03:59:56+00:00

Sorry for delay, I have to share the pc with a selfish sister at home

[General]

Clear!

[Easy]

AR+1 plays better in this diff.

00:08:469 - Add a note here? Feel empty without a one here.
00:23:112 - ^
00:28:469 - ^
01:00:254 (1) - End spinner in 01:01:504 and add a note in 01:02:754.

No spacing issues beacuse spacing is good, but consider "add a note". Feel some parts empty.

[Gina's Normal]

Looks good.

[Hard]

00:03:826 (1,2) - Try this: http://puu.sh/ZcYh
00:06:504 - Add a note here? Feel empty without a one here.
00:49:719 (2) - Finish in End
00:50:433 (3) - ^

[D.N.Angel]

Good

I'm tired for now, will sleep.

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-08-30T13:22:11+00:00

Thanks mod^_^

Lizbeth

osu! Alumni

1,731 posts

Joined August 2008

Lizbeth 2012-09-06T03:54:32+00:00

hellow

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:612 (1) - Unexpected, threw me off twice.
00:17:219 (1,2) - plays weird since there isnt any sound here: 00:17:487 - in the song 00:17:487 -
that's abotu it, lovely diff

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:612 (6) - I suggest replace by single note, I think sounds better
00:33:112 (1) - threw me off, maybe delete the slider and add notes at: 00:33:290 - 00:33:469 -

[Easy]
Lovely diff, maybe the notes after slider could enter later thou.

That's all
Good mapset

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-09-06T11:02:19+00:00

Thanks mod & star

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-09-06T12:41:32+00:00

Lizbeth wrote:
[D.N.Angel]
00:05:612 (1) - Unexpected, threw me off twice. //hmm...I think it made a good ffect of emphasis by the jump and NC
I wanna keep it ><
00:17:219 (1,2) - plays weird since there isnt any sound here: 00:17:487 - in the song 00:17:487 - //it seemed that I wanted to follow the vocal a bit,ok fixed
that's abotu it, lovely diff

thank for modding ~

林杯筆電沒puush所以sor請你辛苦點:p

osu file format v9

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AudioFilename: Dreamer.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 62397
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Dreamer (TV Size)
Artist:AiRI
Creator:EmPao
Version:D.N.Angel
Source:TARI TARI
Tags:opening Takagaki Ayahi Seto Asami Hayami Saori gina darknessangel

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-09-06T14:13:14+00:00

Okay ~updated :3

Edit :

Lizbeth wrote:
hellow hi :3

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:612 (6) - I suggest replace by single note, I think sounds better
00:33:112 (1) - threw me off, maybe delete the slider and add notes at: 00:33:290 - 00:33:469 -

all fixed

[Easy]
Lovely diff, maybe the notes after slider could enter later thou. thanks

That's all
Good mapset

Thanks >w<

To GiNa :
我先照著Lizbeth的mod改了,如果哪裡有要再改的再告訴我一下 >_<

GiNa

1,023 posts

Joined September 2010

GiNa 2012-09-09T03:50:27+00:00

EmPao wrote:
To GiNa :
我先照著Lizbeth的mod改了,如果哪裡有要再改的再告訴我一下 >_<

隨便，我沒什麼意見
Lizbeth的mod我挺喜歡的，現在這Normal的style有一半也是因為她以前的mod給我的idea

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2012-09-11T13:36:42+00:00

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general

Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)

首先你這圖因為之前有Ranked版本所以我知道這BPM一定是有問題的請參考Andrea的 AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size)

Easy

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

00:00:612 - 感覺Break並不適合擺在這感覺有些少了東西的感覺

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:40:254 - 60%的volume太高了 40%~50%會比較適合從背景音樂聽來這邊應該要小聲些會比較能融合音樂

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:27:754 (3) - 節奏延長到00:28:469 - 感覺會比較適合你可以稍微比較一下因為00:28:112 - 這個音與00:28:469 - 相比音會比較輕
00:30:254 (4,5,6) - 這我會給這樣的建議: 因為你的(4)是有弧度的而後頭的(5,6)擺成直線相對來說會比較死板建議你擺成符合(4)的曲線排法例如:
00:40:254 (1,2,3,4) - 建議一下若是能讓這個正方形的pattern擺成有點歪的會感覺比較不會那麼死板... 但是這並不表示你原先排的就不好只是個人觀感上的問題
00:45:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:397 (1,2,3,4) - 移到x248,y72? 讓00:57:040 (4,1) - 看起來比較符合曲線

Normal

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

00:00:612 - 同Easy所說, Break 感覺並不適合這邊感覺有少了東西的感覺...

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:40:612 - 50%應該從這開始會比較適當因為你這段的00:40:254 - 為了用finish 而且要夠大聲才用60%的但是第2個音就沒必要了
00:48:826 - 63%? 額...你這地方不能懶阿...用60% 而且不該是60%的都必須種草放回50%

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:17:040 (3) - 加個note吧如果note直接單獨放在1/2節奏上(就是前面沒東西但是接下來以note開始而且放在紅線上) 會很容易confuse ((00:45:076 (3,1) - ,00:54:362 (4,1) - 這個是因為音樂很明確就放在1/2上所以我就不挑了
00:42:397 (4,5,1) - 作成一條直線吧說實話我不是很喜歡這樣的折點法感覺彆扭... 就是說一個弧形的slider後面接著反向的note+note(note+slider) 打起來手感不好:/
01:00:254 (1) - 對稱於00:57:397 (1) - slider尾?
01:10:254 - 感覺這個節奏多於了若是能把音下在01:10:076 - 就會好很多
01:14:183 (5) - 同00:17:040 (3) - 的問題
01:20:254 (1) - slider結尾就直接在01:20:790 - 了吧放2/1拍感覺真的彆扭
01:21:683 (3) - ^

Hard

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

01:24:719 - slider節尾不可靜音... 使用30% 試著把聲音與背景融合吧...

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)前段節奏很奇怪感覺並不適合音樂例如說:00:01:683 - 應該是空音但是你下了試試看這樣的節奏吧:

總體來說沒什麼太大問題就是個人風格/習慣了~我比較不喜歡有note直線擺成正的(意思是90∘或180∘這樣) 感覺比較不好有如我在Easy所說的有些slider弧型作的不錯但是後頭的note卻只是與slider結尾成一直線而不是成弧形感覺真的可惜了...

00:40:076 - 感覺加個note會比較好(音效 S:C1 clap )
01:03:112 (1,2,3) - 被spinner text擋住了會造成player 難以讀懂後頭的物件↓

D.N.Angel

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

前頭音效有點混亂阿在打的時候感覺有點confuse 00:17:754 - 和00:18:290 - 的音效聽起來有些奇怪因為你4個slider開始都是在1/2節奏上但是你這兩個分別下在1/1和1/2上而且又是在同ㄧ個pattern裡打起來的感覺就不會這麼合諧... 建議改掉
00:23:469 - 與00:24:004 - 同上

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:07:397 (4,1) - 這樣的排法挺拗手的你可以看到(4)往右邊劃出slider 可是(1)卻幾乎和(4)的尾端平行劃出像左下的slider 而且是個大跳. 於是我建議你想辦法作出類似繞園或是不要這麼跳的pattern 感覺打起來會比較舒服
00:11:147 (3,4) - reverse 作出流線型flow會比現在好打很多
00:23:290 (1) - reverse and 00:24:004 (3) - 分次reverse 作出flow ((喔草這段你居然做了對稱
00:54:362 (1,2,3) - reverse會更好些你可以用test看看打起來的手感比較不會有順時針pattern 突然呈現逆時針的感覺
01:00:255 (1) - ⑨ baka 你的slider拉沒拉好這個可以拉的更好些的...你懂>_>
01:08:112 - 我反到覺得這個音不應該出現你可以聽聽看如果不加這個音和加這個音哪個比較適合音樂

Please used 2 color to reply it
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and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me

嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來還有BPM的問題一定要改而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-09-11T16:36:55+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
D.N.Angel

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
前頭音效有點混亂阿在打的時候感覺有點confuse 00:17:754 - 和00:18:290 - 的音效聽起來有些奇怪因為你4個slider開始都是在1/2節奏上但是你這兩個分別下在1/1和1/2上而且又是在同ㄧ個pattern裡打起來的感覺就不會這麼合諧... 建議改掉
//這邊我都跟著voice下的，我覺得完全沒問題
00:23:469 - 與00:24:004 - 同上
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:07:397 (4,1) - 這樣的排法挺拗手的你可以看到(4)往右邊劃出slider 可是(1)卻幾乎和(4)的尾端平行劃出像左下的slider 而且是個大跳. 於是我建議你想辦法作出類似繞園或是不要這麼跳的pattern 感覺打起來會比較舒服...我只能說，你不懂lol，rejected

00:11:147 (3,4) - reverse 作出流線型flow會比現在好打很多

00:23:290 (1) - reverse and 00:24:004 (3) - 分次reverse 作出flow ((喔草這段你居然做了對稱 //以我而言這flow頗無聊lol，話說對稱有啥問題0.0?

00:54:362 (1,2,3) - reverse會更好些你可以用test看看打起來的手感比較不會有順時針pattern 突然呈現逆時針的感覺 //我個人很喜歡這個，而且僅此這次我想也不要緊
我在此做個說明，這是雙式交叉三角形的flow，我認為只要間距控制好很多人會喜歡的

01:00:255 (1) - ⑨ baka 你的slider拉沒拉好這個可以拉的更好些的...你懂>_> //遺憾的是這是Chewin給的code，而且還拉得比我好看，我看不出問題...OAO

01:08:112 - 我反到覺得這個音不應該出現你可以聽聽看如果不加這個音和加這個音哪個比較適合音樂 //好，已移除
Please used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me

嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來還有BPM的問題一定要改而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck

雖說你說還不到泡的標準但怎麼都nazi ... 0.0
嘛，謝謝MOD ~

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GiNa

1,023 posts

Joined September 2010

GiNa 2012-09-11T23:51:53+00:00

http://puu.sh/14fUe

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2012-09-11T23:57:07+00:00

DarknessAngel wrote:
雖說你說還不到泡的標準但怎麼都nazi ... 0.0
嘛，謝謝MOD ~

最重要的一點 BPM沒有準確你說我怎麼泡 ((stress
而且圖當然是質量越好越保險你知道的很多泡圖都會被戳即使是一些小事. 我必須保證圖的質量才不會讓mapper的泡被戳

Edit: 還有我說的是再找一些mod之後再找我回來並不是不recheck

Last edited by spboxer3 2012-09-12T00:38:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

GiNa

1,023 posts

Joined September 2010

GiNa 2012-09-12T00:04:43+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
Normal

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
00:00:612 - 同Easy所說, Break 感覺並不適合這邊感覺有少了東西的感覺...　我相信你是明理的人，前面節奏並不固定，所以我覺得不適合map，自創節奏對於Easy/Normal來說又太難了
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
00:40:612 - 50%應該從這開始會比較適當因為你這段的00:40:254 - 為了用finish 而且要夠大聲才用60%的但是第2個音就沒必要了　Fixed
00:48:826 - 63%? 額...你這地方不能懶阿...用60% 而且不該是60%的都必須種草放回50%　Fixed
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:17:040 (3) - 加個note吧如果note直接單獨放在1/2節奏上(就是前面沒東西但是接下來以note開始而且放在紅線上) 會很容易confuse ((00:45:076 (3,1) - ,00:54:362 (4,1) - 這個是因為音樂很明確就放在1/2上所以我就不挑了　I followed vocal
00:42:397 (4,5,1) - 作成一條直線吧說實話我不是很喜歡這樣的折點法感覺彆扭... 就是說一個弧形的slider後面接著反向的note+note(note+slider) 打起來手感不好:/　Sorry, I hate straight line patterns
01:00:254 (1) - 對稱於00:57:397 (1) - slider尾?　Fixed
01:10:254 - 感覺這個節奏多於了若是能把音下在01:10:076 - 就會好很多　I don't get what the hell you're talking about -_-
01:14:183 (5) - 同00:17:040 (3) - 的問題　Same as 00:17:040 (3)
01:20:254 (1) - slider結尾就直接在01:20:790 - 了吧放2/1拍感覺真的彆扭　Fixed
01:21:683 (3) - ^　Fixed

檔案連結在上面，忘記按Edit了lol
As of timing ... I don't know what to say about it
It seems/plays fine to me

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-09-12T11:48:39+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
※ 注意
紅色是unrankable的一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general

Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)
首先你這圖因為之前有Ranked版本所以我知道這BPM一定是有問題的請參考Andrea的 AiRI - Dreamer (TV Size)
我覺得現在的timing打起來還可以... 而且Andrea版本的紅線好多條...orz, 我會再請人來check timing的
Easy

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
00:00:612 - 感覺Break並不適合擺在這感覺有些少了東西的感覺
同GiNa,Easy diff不太好下...(也有考慮說把這個note拿掉 ,從後面開始做)
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
00:40:254 - 60%的volume太高了 40%~50%會比較適合從背景音樂聽來這邊應該要小聲些會比較能融合音樂
Fixed，改成50%
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:27:754 (3) - 節奏延長到00:28:469 - 感覺會比較適合你可以稍微比較一下因為00:28:112 - 這個音與00:28:469 - 相比音會比較輕
Fixed

00:30:254 (4,5,6) - 這我會給這樣的建議: 因為你的(4)是有弧度的而後頭的(5,6)擺成直線相對來說會比較死板建議你擺成符合(4)的曲線排法例如:

這個我保留了,最簡單的diff我比較喜歡擺直的QQ
00:40:254 (1,2,3,4) - 建議一下若是能讓這個正方形的pattern擺成有點歪的會感覺比較不會那麼死板... 但是這並不表示你原先排的就不好只是個人觀感上的問題
同上
00:45:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
^
00:57:397 (1,2,3,4) - 移到x248,y72? 讓00:57:040 (4,1) - 看起來比較符合曲線
Fixed
Hard

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

01:24:719 - slider節尾不可靜音... 使用30% 試著把聲音與背景融合吧...
Fixed
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)前段節奏很奇怪感覺並不適合音樂例如說:00:01:683 - 應該是空音但是你下了試試看這樣的節奏吧:
Fixed
總體來說沒什麼太大問題就是個人風格/習慣了~我比較不喜歡有note直線擺成正的(意思是90∘或180∘這樣) 感覺比較不好有如我在Easy所說的有些slider弧型作的不錯但是後頭的note卻只是與slider結尾成一直線而不是成弧形感覺真的可惜了...>_<

00:40:076 - 感覺加個note會比較好(音效 S:C1 clap )
我這留一個空一是這裡mp3好像就沒有聲音，二是接下來的part 速度是x0.8，我想在這做一個停頓

01:03:112 (1,2,3) - 被spinner text擋住了會造成player 難以讀懂後頭的物件↓
Ok.我重擺了

Please used 2 color to reply it
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嗯... 說實話還有些地方還沒準備好到可以bubble 所以你還需要再找一些modder再找我回來還有BPM的問題一定要改而且在找我之前最好再找個timing modder來看過一次
Good luck

Okay.我想先找人來check timing先

謝謝Mod

Lami

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Lami 2012-09-20T04:41:38+00:00

hi~

[GiNa's Normal]
01:05:254 (3) -

01:14:362 (5) - remove note(?)

[Hard]

00:33:469 (5) - remove NC
00:33:826 (1) - add NC
00:59:719 (3) - missed beat, correct beat > <

01:04:897 (5) - remove NC
01:23:112 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - it's so hard.... really...
(01:23:469 (4,5) - decreasing space each other?)

[D.N.Angel]

00:17:933 (3,4,5) - how about decrease space each other?
imo, this part don't need jump
00:25:076 (1,3) - ctrl+R(?) (decreasing space)
00:52:933 (1,2) -

01:12:397 - add something(?) feel empty..
01:14:897 (4) -

Laurier

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Joined February 2011

Laurier 2012-09-21T21:37:50+00:00

hi

Easy
00:00:344 - boring break . I think you can put some notes.
00:09:183 - add clap. please keep rhythm
00:12:040 - ^
00:58:826 (3) - add clap on head?

Normal
00:00:433 - ^ same as easy

SPOILER

00:07:397 (1) - remove nc
00:08:826 (3) - add nc
00:10:254 (1) - remove nc

00:32:933 (3,1) - try this? http://puu.sh/17hIK follow vocal is better
00:56:862 (3) - add 1 repeat and follow vocal

Hard
00:51:683 (1) -make more straight ? http://puu.sh/17iuJ
01:15:790 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/17ivG
00:53:112 (1) - make same pattern as 00:51:683 (1,2,3,4) http://puu.sh/17iyL

D.N.Angel
01:15:790 (7) - bit strange for me. please 2nd waypoint 1grid up and 3rd 1grid right http://puu.sh/17iDn

Lizellota

467 posts

Joined October 2011

Lizellota 2012-09-22T11:34:19+00:00

Hello ;3 From my queue~ Sorry for the delay TAT

[D.N.A]

00:01:326 (3) - Delete 1 repeat and add whistle to the end of the slider
00:11:504 (1,2) - remove claps? sounds weird ><
00:23:112 - remove whistle
00:24:004 - ^
00:24:183 - add whistle
00:25:076 (1) - remove whistle
00:25:254 (2) - add whistle
00:45:612 - missed clap(i mean S:C1)
00:48:647 (4) - clap instead of 00:49:183
01:25:612 - move that timing section to 01:25:433

[Hard]

00:01:504 - whistle
00:11:504 (4,5) - remove claps? TAT
00:25:969 - add finish?
00:28:737 - add a note?
01:10:969 (2) -

how about this?

01:11:683 - change whistle to finish
01:16:326 (2) -

~

01:21:683 - change whistle to finish

Other diffs fine for me~~
Good luck

EmPao

723 posts

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Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-09-22T17:57:05+00:00

Fixed~
Thanks mod :3

Edit:

To GiNa:

normal diff我自己先改過了

00:00:344 這個note我刪掉了

其他有改不好的地方再跟我說下

DarknessAngel

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Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-09-27T04:17:54+00:00

thanks for mod !

http://puu.sh/191vN

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-09-27T15:26:59+00:00

決定這個週末來Fixed timing
;_;

Edit :

~~Easy/Normal/Hard diff的 timing改好了~~

所有diff的timing都改好了._.

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-09-28T14:13:47+00:00

Hello there. Request from modding queue! TARI TARI!

General
-> Good, but I'm feel a bit iffy about the red timing sections.

Easy
-> Increase HP Drain Rate +1? 1 is almost unfailable XD.
00:10:249 (2) - Nazi Mod: Try to move the red anchor point at x:196 y:208? It looks awesome if the anchor point was at the same postion as the slider tick. Also, make sure to readjust the slider a bit so it still blanklets perfectly and follows the spacing.
00:38:119 (2) - Nazi Mod: Similar to what I suggested at 00:10:249 (2). Move the red anchor point so it's at the same postion as the slider tick.
00:39:552 (3) - Reverse selection? That way, it can follow the spacing better.

GiNa's Normal
-> Looks alright, but the map looks kinda messy.

Hard
-> Good!

D.N.Angel
-> Good!

EmPao

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Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-09-28T15:45:56+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Hello there. Request from modding queue! TARI TARI! <3
General
-> Good, but I'm feel a bit iffy about the red timing sections. I use Andrea'sTiming (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55494)

Easy
-> Increase HP Drain Rate +1? 1 is almost unfailable XD. I think 1 is ok since it is the easiest diff
00:10:249 (2) - Nazi Mod: Try to move the red anchor point at x:196 y:208? It looks awesome if the anchor point was at the same postion as the slider tick. Also, make sure to readjust the slider a bit so it still blanklets perfectly and follows the spacing.Fixed
00:38:119 (2) - Nazi Mod: Similar to what I suggested at 00:10:249 (2). Move the red anchor point so it's at the same postion as the slider tick. Fixed
00:39:552 (3) - Reverse selection? That way, it can follow the spacing better. x, I think short slider with reverse is too hard for newbie player to play.

Thanks your mod :3

spboxer3

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spboxer3 2012-09-30T09:19:11+00:00

recheck 別給KD
[general]
Easy的kiai需對準節奏線上 (( 01:14:476 -> 01:14:464
Hard的紅線 00:50:278 ->00:50:258 這才是正確的

[Easy]
00:15:249 (1) - 結尾對準00:17:398 - 需要改代碼如果不會的話就複製下面那個吧(覆蓋掉HitObjects下的"256,192,15249,12,4,17392")

256,192,15249,12,4,17398

01:00:254 (1) - 同理

256,192,60254,12,0,62377

slider穿過紅色timing會有誤差的部分我問過BAT 他說AIMOD如果沒說那就OK

[Hard]
00:50:432 (3,4,5,6) - 沒有snap好把這些改到正確的位置上吧

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:627 (1) - 算是nazi 沒有對準第一條紅線 (1ms的變化雖然沒什麼差但是有人會挑...)
00:25:969 (5,3,4) - 沒有snap的slider end 把這個改好吧
00:51:683 - 這條綠線是多餘的因為BPM x1.0沒有變化所以你要改音量直接改紅線即可

改完找我~

EmPao

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Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-09-30T10:56:22+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
recheck 別給KD
[general]
Easy的kiai需對準節奏線上 (( 01:14:476 -> 01:14:464
Hard的紅線 00:50:278 ->00:50:258 這才是正確的

[Easy]
00:15:249 (1) - 結尾對準00:17:398 - 需要改代碼如果不會的話就複製下面那個吧(覆蓋掉HitObjects下的"256,192,15249,12,4,17392")
256,192,15249,12,4,17398
01:00:254 (1) - 同理
256,192,60254,12,0,62377
slider穿過紅色timing會有誤差的部分我問過BAT 他說AIMOD如果沒說那就OK

[Hard]
00:50:432 (3,4,5,6) - 沒有snap好把這些改到正確的位置上吧

[D.N.Angel]
00:05:627 (1) - 算是nazi 沒有對準第一條紅線 (1ms的變化雖然沒什麼差但是有人會挑...)
00:25:969 (5,3,4) - 沒有snap的slider end 把這個改好吧
00:51:683 - 這條綠線是多餘的因為BPM x1.0沒有變化所以你要改音量直接改紅線即可

改完找我~

Okay ~All Fixed

spboxer3

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spboxer3 2012-09-30T11:57:40+00:00

Change log

BPM/offset setting
Unsnap object.
Video -> mute
Unused green line (duplicated timeline)

ok~

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2012-09-30T17:23:40+00:00

[Easy]

00:38:119 (2) - Slider end is unsnapped.
00:50:082 (2) - ^

[D.N.Angel]

00:28:671 (1) - Slider end is unsnapped.
00:50:082 (1) - ^

And yeah, that's it :3

EmPao

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Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

EmPao 2012-09-30T17:55:53+00:00

Andrea wrote:
[Easy]

00:38:119 (2) - Slider end is unsnapped.
00:50:082 (2) - ^

[D.N.Angel]

00:28:671 (1) - Slider end is unsnapped.
00:50:082 (1) - ^

And yeah, that's it :3

All Fixed ~

Thanks Andrea :3

GiNa

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GiNa 2012-09-30T18:21:17+00:00

衝啊！！！！！
~~我來亂的~~

Andrea

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