ssssssssssssssss wrote:
hard
00:46:006 (3) - 个人认为这个clap加得不太好,首先来说这里本来就是个慢段,不需要有太多的clap变化,另外你前面一直是二四CLAP,这突然来这么一下听起来不太适应 其实这个slider下的不太好。。。不过跟着vocal下米办法。。。fix~
01:11:868 - 和01:14:626 - 这里完全是在重复一样的旋律啊,仔细听vocal。。。你就明白了。。。 而且你的01:11:868 (1) - 这个滑条做的也很棒,何不直接在01:14:626 - 粘贴01:11:868 (1,2) - 然后ctrl+h呢?正好也是一个不错的对称梗,打起来也顺多了 /.\。。。。
(纯个人感觉)01:25:661 (1,5) - 这两个滑条做成3/4滑条比较好,当然后面要补个圈。01:25:661 (1,5) - 也是 咿呀哒>~<!
normal
01:23:247 (1,2,3) - 这样的90度折对新手来说有点难读,也许只是在第一遍时候的问题,但是如果你想善良点的话……考虑到某些沙包来刷榜。。
02:00:143 - 这地方玩起来也感觉不太顺手,把01:58:764 (1) - 粘贴过来会比较好?正好这种滑条的节奏很合这种乐曲不同段落的衔接部分 fix~
easy
诶诶01:58:764 (1) - 这种长滑条好无聊的说~拆掉嘛拆掉嘛~(被拖 咿呀哒。。。
我感觉这曲的旋律没有太多可以(在easy难度)下长滑条的地方,01:11:868 (1,1) - 不过这两个不错 xD
好图给星~
话说高潮确实单调了些= =……加入了点变化→ http://puu.sh/OPo6wmfchris wrote:
Taiko mod as requested
- Add flashy warning for those with SB.
[Taiko]
- remove SB...? Most of the miku head is covered by the taiko bar.
- sounds too loud comparing with the music. Try N70%fix
00:22:040 - since you used xx xx before, add a note here?xx xx only use when……算了不用英语了就是这个只是在长音结束的时候用这个
00:22:730 - ^
00:32:385 - ^
00:33:075 - ^
01:17:385 - better not to put finishes here because it's "1/4" and it's not really a strong accent here in the musicfix QAQ 话说kkkD这样应该没问题吧
01:19:971 - d because the transition of vocal is done in the last tick?I fllow the drum
01:42:040 - ^
02:09:799 - If you retain the SB here, that last miku picture shouldn't disappear end but at the end of the song.
In overall custom patterns are well made under a slower frame, though I feel like some kkk in the first half could be replaced by sth else fitting the vocal/drum better -w- Then kiai will same with other part -w-
Also, great SB, but the SB load seems a bit too much. You may want to find some SB assistance to deal with it.
Banana wrote:
看到doriko就圆润的滚进来了
random mod \o/!!~
General
感觉音效下的不够 找了个kiai段能用的clap音 看着办吧 http://puu.sh/OqDa(话说自定义了音效就是去掉了滑条音吗....) en..其实clap我真心拿不定主意。。orz
Hard
01:56:523 (2) - 这种地方不跳吗,要是没打算跳的话,01:23:419 (2) - 这种跳还是把间距放小点比较好。 fix~
01:23:419 (1) - 感觉这样一堆正常间距中间夹个跳有点违和(而且我在接下一个滑条的时候点太快断combo了...)我的建议是 01:22:730 (7) stack造一个跳出来,然后这边提示跳的nc就可以去掉了。因为在01:23:592 - 附近的滑条上vocal的音调是从前面的最高点开始下来的,所以我感觉不会造成误读。我没有理解这个。。。orz不过误读的确有。。。我试着改改。。。
01:29:109 (2) - 因为之前有用过跳,而且这一段好多都是红线note连到底,会让人感觉这里是个跳造成误读。建议是把三角形slider们的间距拉大点,(1,2)之间用2.3左右的spacing会好一些。(01:27:902 (6) - 另外,如果是jump style的话,类似这里的地方也可以把间距放大点) fix~
01:34:454 (2) - 这个改成1/4的repeat可能会好摆一点,overlap什么的最讨厌了
01:56:523 (2) - 这种地方不跳吗,要是没打算跳的话,01:23:419 (2) - 这种跳还是把间距放小点比较好。again?~
02:01:006 (4) - 建议02:00:833一个1/2滑条代替,全跟着vocal这里不好抓节奏。 \o/fix!~
Normal
00:09:454 - hard里面是有摆note,这边其实已经可以开始转转盘了。en~fix~
00:53:764 - 转盘这里开始? fix~
01:34:799 - 这边节奏有点密,建议中间空一拍出来: fix~
01:51:868 (2) - 我觉得这里用蓝线slider不是很合适,01:52:212 - 这里开始有三个红线上的音,建议跟着。 fix~
Easy
01:47:730 (1) - 没找到什么可以挑的,nazi下这种波浪形的滑条,感觉弯的不够。 囧。。。orz
(一个repeat也没有 好厉害)虾米?~
good luck~
pimpG wrote:
hi o/
no much to sugest, this map is awesome thx~xD
mod as requested
general
offset -6? hmm....im not sure about this~
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2). fix~now..not .osb file/.\~
easy
01:20:143 (1) this hitcircle after the spinner surprided me, it looked like a speed up... because of the slow ar i gess hmmm...i'll ask MAT about this ...
normal
00:11:868 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. fix~
00:21:006 - this spinner looks so sudden orz...idk...waitng MAT check it....
00:32:040 - ^ ^
00:53:764 - ^ ^
01:32:557 (3,4,5,1) - i get 100 in this combo in the 1st play, sudden rithym change, and the notes are too close just for more playable...orz
01:51:868 (2) - i think you shoud use red tick not blue tick again here, just imo hmm...i think not too much problem~xD
02:00:143 (1) - ^ ^
hard
00:00:488 (2) - ^ i got 100 in this note in the 1st play, maybe remove it, its just imo /.\
00:06:006 (2) - ^ ^
00:08:419 (1,2) - reduce the distance a bit maybe? just for fun~\o/~
00:19:454 (1,2) - ^ ^
thats all
good luck ★
wmfchris wrote:
Taiko mod as requested
- Add flashy warning for those with SB. change the SB~
[Taiko]
- remove SB...? Most of the miku head is covered by the taiko bar. fix~
Also, great SB, but the SB load seems a bit too much. You may want to find some SB assistance to deal with it. fix~
ts8zs wrote:
话说高潮确实单调了些= =……加入了点变化→ http://puu.sh/OPo6
Lizellota wrote:
Nyaa. Hii from our Q~
[Hard]
00:08:419 - um..add whistle fix~
00:16:695 - add finish?~ fix~
01:06:350 - ^ no...too noise~
01:17:385 - whistle~ fix~
[Normal]
00:41:523 (1) - ..looks weird ._. xD~
01:39:454 - finish no...too noise~
01:41:868 (1) - delete this note? ...why..orz~
01:58:764 (2) - NC instead of 01:58:419 (1) fix~
02:00:143 - remove finish fix~
02:01:523 - finish too noise~
[Easy]
Nice~
Awesome map!~ GL~
^_^never mind~........orz。。。i click worry。。。deny it。。。orzJudgeTheDude wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue.
I'm probably a newbie, but I didn't see anything wrong.
Good luck with rankings ^^
i cant too。。。( T_T)\(^-^ )JudgeTheDude wrote:
Delete this please, I can't
\o/!!!!~>_<!!!~thx!~Mystica wrote:
質量越來越高了 加油
taikoSB早就刪了啊= = 這張BG會被中間的note擋住的 還不如原來的ts8zs wrote:
新Taiko BG http://puu.sh/V8uK
求最少删taikoSB= =b
诶?分辨率一样的啊……?lucyfly wrote:
taikoSB早就刪了啊= = 這張BG會被中間的note擋住的 還不如原來的ts8zs wrote:
新Taiko BG http://puu.sh/V8uK
求最少删taikoSB= =b
Lizellota wrote:
Nyaa. Hii from our Q~
[Hard]
00:08:419 - um..add whistle fix~
00:16:695 - add finish?~ too noise~orz
01:06:350 - ^ ^
01:17:385 - whistle~ 0.0~
[Normal]
00:41:523 (1) - ..looks weird ._. xD
01:39:454 - finish
01:41:868 (1) - delete this note? hmm...just for more playable~
01:58:764 (2) - NC instead of 01:58:419 (1) change it all~
02:00:143 - remove finish ^
02:01:523 - finish ^
[Easy]
Nice~ xD
Awesome map!~ GL~
384059043 wrote:
万年一见的超棒SB
[General]
nazi:
01:42:040 - 加绿线,去掉kiai
01:42:212 - kiai
---------多一个喷泉更好玩------orz....
[ez]
02:02:212 (1) finish音效 fix~
00:11:868 (2) (slider头)- 00:13:247 (3) - 00:13:937 (1,2,1,2) (slider尾)- 00:20:143 (2) (头)- 00:20:143 (2) (尾)- 00:22:902 (2) (头和尾)- 00:24:971 (1,2,1) (slider尾)- 00:31:178 (3) - 加clap (反正就是这一段音乐中第一条短白线和第三条短白线加上clap音效(据说更带感)?太吵了。。orz
[nm]
00:36:006 (4) - new combo nope~
00:37:212 (6) - 不太喜欢这形状 (nazi) just for fun~
01:33:075 ~ 01:35:488 - 对于normal来说有点难了._. (nazi) just for fun~
[hd]
开头这一段的转盘有些多了._.00:21:006 (1) 00:53:937 (1) 这是两个可以作图的转盘 虾米?~
别的做得还不错._.起码比我要好 orz...看来还要加油了。。只有还不错的程度orz...
gl~
Kiiwa wrote:
Hi~ XD
General
Tick rate is inconsistant on Hard. ???!~
01:42:212 - You can have another Kiai burst here if you want~ oh!!!!!~nice idea!!!
Cool SB o.o thx~xD
Hard
00:02:902 (1,2,3) - Somthing like this would look better: http://puu.sh/QBVj ? fix~
00:20:833 (3) - Make spacing bigger hmm...too hard..
00:30:488 (1) - Move 1 grid right fix~
01:17:557 (1) - Add finish nope..too noise~/.\
01:19:454 (2,3) - Make these both Normal hitset! 01:19:454 - 50% 01:19:626 (3) - 40% is good~? hmm..feel better..fix it~
02:01:523 - Add finish oright...fix..
You could do alot more with hitsounds on this diff if you wanted feel noise...;_;
Normal
00:02:212 (4) - Add whistle fix~
01:23:247 (1,2) - Bad idea to use 1/4 like this on a Normal ...but the rhythm feel not too good...can u give me any idea?~
Easy
02:04:281 - Add finish to make consistant with other diffs ^^ fix!~^ ^
good luck
okey~i'll fix it..ts8zs wrote:
新Taiko BG http://puu.sh/V8uK
求最少删taikoSB= =b
...lucyfly wrote:
taikoSB早就刪了啊= = 這張BG會被中間的note擋住的 還不如原來的ts8zs wrote:
新Taiko BG http://puu.sh/V8uK
求最少删taikoSB= =b
...ts8zs wrote:
诶?分辨率一样的啊……?lucyfly wrote:
taikoSB早就刪了啊= = 這張BG會被中間的note擋住的 還不如原來的
Dusty wrote:
[Hard]
Tick rate 2? Easy and Normal both have tick rate 2 okey~fix!~
01:19:281 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - why is the spacing shorter here than in the rest of the map? /.\....hmm....im not better idea to this.....;_;
overall, this is a nice map, have a kudosu star!
-Baby Strawberry- wrote:
小@好久不见想我了没有! 才没有!~
真相什么的可真要抓紧咯~ 西奈!~
下面是mod,貌似欠了好久了。。。。原因是一直没上网。。。 哔~
皮肤建议:鼠标尾巴弄成黑色的不大好看,试试淡蓝色? 恩呢~ fix~
HardSPOILER00:18:764 (6) - 我觉得吧这样会好些? fix~
01:11:006 (4) - 歪掉了傻孩子 baka!~ fix~
01:13:247 (2) - 这个也是傻孩子 西奈!~ fix~
01:29:799 (3) - 好多歪掉的。。。 你想歪了~他才歪的!~跟我才没关系!~baka~ fix~
01:36:695 (1) - 说实话不大好看。fix~
01:42:212 (1) - 傻孩子。。。 !%@¥……&*&…… fix~
02:01:868 (1) - 02:01:695这里开始 fix~
很值得表扬嘛~SKin很漂亮了~SB更出色~!唔~
NormalSPOILER00:08:419 (1) - 在这以后我建议这样 fix~
00:27:730 (1,2,3) - 干嘛不都弄成转120°的?fix~
01:39:799 (1) - 这里开始?01:39:621 fix~
02:01:868 (1) - 这里开始?02:01:695 fix~
EasySPOILER没有!lol~
看来星星是保不住了。。。。。。^ ^~
pyransc wrote:
Nice skin some suggestions
[easy]
01:07:730 (2) - whiste to firs circle ? nope~
01:10:488 (4) - ^ ^
[normal]
00:05:661 (1) - add whistle ? fix~
00:07:730 (4) - ^ ^
01:17:385 (4) - delete circle, start slider here 0.0~
[hard]
all ok
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240后面几个白屏也是类似的建议
_F,1,43937,44281,0,1
_F,2,44281,44971,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\g.png",320,240
_M,0,80143,,320,269
_F,0,80143,80316,0,1
_S,1,80143,81006,0.1,2.804
_F,0,80316,80833,1
_F,0,80833,81006,1,0
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~mod from Wmf's modding/Taiko queue
[Storyboard]制作非常用心且精美的Storyboard~~Nice Job~~
- Background and video events里面多了一行冗余代码F,0,0,0,0 如果你是想要全程隐去背景图的话,请不要这么做。一个更为合理的解决方案是在SB的Background层内添加如下代码:
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0- 建议将white.jpg换成white.png
- 另外b.jpg看起来似乎就是个全黑屏,建议下次再用的时候可以直接拿white用C代码调整成黑色之后直接用即可。
- 纯建议:从开头到00:33:247这段下雪效果因为背景是纯白色所以不够明显,有没有可能把背景通过Color代码来降低一些亮度,比如200,200,200之类的值来让下雪效果更明显呢?
- 00:43:937 - 这里的White.png的三段fade效果感觉上中间延的有些长了而且不够平滑,个人建议是用2段的Fade,如果希望中间白屏的时间较长一些又能平滑过渡的话可以通过Easing值来调整,参考代码:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.jpg",320,240后面几个白屏也是类似的建议
_F,1,43937,44281,0,1
_F,2,44281,44971,1,0- 01:17:385 - 这个白屏从这里就可以开始进入为Kiai段做准备了
- 01:42:212 - g.png的layer建议放到miku身体的后面,也就是放到上面去
- 依然是g.png,强烈建议把Scale效果的easing值设定为1来获得更强的张力感~而且也能更好的渲染Kiai开始的气氛。参考代码:
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\g.png",320,240
_M,0,80143,,320,269
_F,0,80143,80316,0,1
_S,1,80143,81006,0.1,2.804
_F,0,80316,80833,1
_F,0,80833,81006,1,0- 01:42:212 - 这里的g.png的效果建议和上面相同
[Easy][Normal]
- Easy难度用SliderTickRate 2感觉有些略拥挤,Tickpoint和Overlay叠在一起不是很好看……
- 00:08:419 (1) - (nazi)弧线感觉有点怪怪的,换成一个单向的弧线如何? fix~
- 00:35:316 (2) - 头whistle? fix~
- 00:36:695 (3) - ^ ^
- 00:38:075 (4) - ^ ^
- 00:40:833 (2) - ^ ^
- 00:43:592 (2) - ^ ^
- 00:46:350 (2) - ^ ^
- 00:51:178 (2) - 尾whistle? ^
- 好吧不来回说了kiai前面建议做2|4whistle,如果是长slider的话可以尝试做成1|4的whistle,这样打击音效不会感觉太空空荡荡 all fix~
[Hard]
- HP-1建议 fix~
- 00:15:316 (3) - 为了避免XAT可能的issue,把这个Ctrl+h翻转一下吧,头的位置不变 遇到再orz...其实这样挺顺的。;_;
- 01:14:626 (1) - (nazi)改成弧线向下弯似乎更贴音乐一点~fix~
- 01:33:419 (4,5,1) - 有一点confusing...你要是跟vocal的话前面(3)应该停在01:33:075 - 这里才对……所以如果不想改节奏的话建议(4,5)连成一个slider fix~
- 01:42:212 (2) - 建议用单弧线的slider fix!~
- 01:58:764 (1) - 这种起点之后的方向很容易搞混……何况还是在normal里,可以考虑SB加个箭头指示,或者把起点和结束点的位置再分的开一些?分开了~SB嘛。。坐等/.\
差不多就这些了~~给个星支持下~
- 00:08:075 - 和00:08:247 - 考虑加两个note放到后面00:08:419 (1) - 那里(不一定要叠)来作为节奏上的过渡?
0.0?!~fix~- 00:13:592 - ^
- 00:27:385 - ^
- 00:38:764 (1) - 一个完整的1/2slider比1/4折返好听 fix!~
- 01:29:799 (3) - (nazi)形状没做好 fix!~
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~mod from Wmf's modding/Taiko queue我就是来吐槽这里的
这有啥好吐槽的……这个req最初就是从wmf的queue里pick的,而且我一直都是wmf queue的guest modderts8zs wrote:
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~mod from Wmf's modding/Taiko queue我就是来吐槽这里的
不要直接在osu文件里面改SliderMultiplier,这些数值是整数或者小数完全没有关系,手动修改后反而会出现Slider Unsnapped之类的问题jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
所有在.osu文件里面的SliderMultiplier都悲剧了...改成整数
恩 沒有改沒關係 因為不會影響玩家Scorpiour wrote:
不要直接在osu文件里面改SliderMultiplier,这些数值是整数或者小数完全没有关系,手动修改后反而会出现Slider Unsnapped之类的问题jonathanlfj wrote:
[General]
所有在.osu文件里面的SliderMultiplier都悲剧了...改成整数
学到新知识了~~bossandy wrote:
恩 沒有改沒關係 因為不會影響玩家Scorpiour wrote:
不要直接在osu文件里面改SliderMultiplier,这些数值是整数或者小数完全没有关系,手动修改后反而会出现Slider Unsnapped之类的问题
修改timing的缘故吧。jonathanlfj wrote:
Edit:话说sv为什么会变成那样? bug吗?
i don't very agree with this due to the CTB mod: although SB will be covered by spinner in standard mod, it's visible in CTB, so a suitable transition is necessary imo.popner wrote:
[SB]
02:04:281 - the fade in of white.jpg here is unnecessary since it is covered by spinner and cause a SB load overflow