Armin wrote:

[General]
*Seeing the title in the web I found this site: http://unformed.cc/page/unformed.html and after a discussion on #japanese I wonder if the title shouldn't be Doriko feat. Hatsune Miku V: ;_;...but..dorikoall map's d is lowercase...idk...how to do it.....and..and..ppy say...we have to use composer put in Artist....;_;..so idk...if that is ture...tell me again;w;...i will change it~
*You can add a clap pattern all above in the map, it would fit a lot (for example you can hear the percussion here 01:51:190 - 01:52:569 - 01:53:949 and so on) oooohhh...i see...fix ~ but idk use which hitclap is better...i just use default hitsound..=///=..if u have better hitclap~can u recommend to me...;_;sor..
some custom hitsounds are present here: thx very much~!
Clap Packs:

SPOILER

(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Snare Packs:

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(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Cymbal Pack:

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(Link)

Percussion Pack:

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(Link)

Just few issues
Easy: 01:17:397 (1,1) - the recovery time is a bit short since this is the easier difficulty v: hmm...but idk how to change it;w;....only a note in that...;_;
Normal: 00:15:328 (3) - this repeat is pretty hidden ;_;...but feel not too bad...
Hard: why verall Difficulty setting is 5? c: ;w;i just want map feel soft~but OD+1 now~^ ^fix!~

jesse7419 wrote:

IRC hitsounds mod

00:57 Athena Tennos: =w=
00:57 jesse7419: 你到kiai整個音效跟前面落差很大 這樣有點怪
00:57 Athena Tennos: 现在的么？！~
00:58 jesse7419: 還沒聽完
00:59 jesse7419: 感覺不能一般的下clap
00:59 jesse7419: 你的節奏
00:59 Athena Tennos: .....
00:59 Athena Tennos: ;w;。。。
01:06 jesse7419: 01:22:914 (1) -
01:06 jesse7419: 前後加whistle
01:06 jesse7419: 01:23:431 (2) -
01:06 jesse7419: 開頭加
01:06 jesse7419: 01:24:121 (3) - ^
01:08 Athena Tennos: fix~
01:08 jesse7419: 幫你把空地方弄一弄好了
01:08 Athena Tennos: 0.0
01:08 jesse7419: 01:20:156 (1) -
01:08 jesse7419: 這個finish
01:08 jesse7419: 建議讓人聽的到
01:09 Athena Tennos: 嗯
01:09 Athena Tennos: fix
01:12 jesse7419: 01:33:949 (1,2,3) -
01:12 jesse7419: 一樣
01:13 Athena Tennos: 一样是增加音量么？~
01:14 jesse7419: 不
01:14 Athena Tennos: 0.0
01:14 jesse7419: 加whistle
01:14 jesse7419: 跟前面一樣
01:14 Athena Tennos: 偶、
01:14 Athena Tennos: 懂了
01:14 jesse7419: 我突然想到梗= =
01:15 Athena Tennos: 虾米？~
01:15 Athena Tennos: 虾米？！~
01:15 Athena Tennos: 求截图 =w=
01:15 jesse7419: 音效的梗= =
01:16 jesse7419: 排版不要改了吧
01:16 Athena Tennos: 0.0
01:16 jesse7419: 改了不好... 除非BAT說的
01:16 Athena Tennos: 嘛，，，
01:17 jesse7419: 照我說的加一下吧
01:17 jesse7419: 01:24:811 (4) -
01:17 jesse7419: 開頭whistle
01:17 jesse7419: 01:25:156 (5,7) -
01:17 jesse7419: whistle
01:17 jesse7419: 01:26:535 (2,4) -
01:17 jesse7419: ^
01:17 jesse7419: 01:27:914 (6,8) -
01:17 jesse7419: ^
01:18 jesse7419: 01:31:018 (7) -
01:18 jesse7419: ^
01:18 jesse7419: 01:30:673 (5) -
01:18 jesse7419: clap
01:18 jesse7419: 你這樣聽看看
01:18 Athena Tennos: fix~
01:18 Athena Tennos: 嗯、、
01:18 Athena Tennos: feel good~
01:18 Athena Tennos: used~!
01:18 jesse7419: 後面都一盎
01:18 jesse7419: 後面都一漾
01:18 jesse7419: 01:32:052 (2,4) -
01:18 Athena Tennos: en
01:19 jesse7419: 嗯 那個你就等加吧 還有幾個地方 跟你說下
01:19 jesse7419: 01:35:156 (3) -
01:19 jesse7419: 尾巴 whistle
01:19 jesse7419: 01:36:362 (5) -
01:19 jesse7419: ^
01:19 jesse7419: 不是^是whistle= =
01:19 jesse7419: XD
01:19 Athena Tennos: 0.0
01:20 Athena Tennos: fix
01:20 jesse7419: 那兩個地方有很強烈的鈴聲
01:20 Athena Tennos: =w=要仔细听才能听得到=w=。。。
01:20 jesse7419: 01:44:983 (1) -
01:20 jesse7419: 開頭
01:20 Athena Tennos: 果然会taiko的。。。
01:20 Athena Tennos: 嗯
01:20 jesse7419: 01:45:500 (2) -
01:20 jesse7419: 開頭跟尾巴
01:20 jesse7419: 反專不要加whiste
01:20 jesse7419: 01:46:362 (3) -
01:20 jesse7419: 開頭
01:21 jesse7419: 那個
01:21 jesse7419: 其實靈感來自
01:21 jesse7419: 01:46:880 (4,5) -
01:21 jesse7419: = ="
01:21 Athena Tennos: =w=
01:21 Athena Tennos: 懂了~
01:23 jesse7419: 01:56:018 (1) -
01:23 jesse7419: 前後
01:23 jesse7419: 01:56:535 (2) -
01:23 jesse7419: 開頭
01:23 jesse7419: 01:57:224 (3) - whistle
01:24 Athena Tennos: fix~
01:24 Athena Tennos: =w=。。。。。
01:24 jesse7419: 02:00:156 (3,4) -
01:24 jesse7419: 都開頭
01:24 jesse7419: 好吧 很隨意的加了.. = =
01:24 Athena Tennos: 随意加的都比我好;_;

能幫的就這樣了 QAQ
祝早日rank!! :3

SapphireGhost wrote:

I guess you've already got Armin to mod this? I'm not sure what the correct artist should be according to the new rules (I can't find them anywhere) but I'll still mod this later if you want. Just going to sleep for now.

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'm pretty sure Armin didn't forget, BATs are just naturally busy and/or slow. No worries. ok..maybe im too impatient;_;...

[Normal]
01:20:156 (2) - Add a new combo here for the start of the new measure and consistency with Hard. fix~

[Easy]
01:17:397 (1) - I wouldn't use a spinner here because it makes it harder for new players to hit 01:20:156 (1). Try to map it differently?fix~

Really nice storyboard, nothing else to note for this map. Let me know what you figure out with Armin. ok...orz..i'll try too ask him~

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'm sorry everything has taken longer than expected. Here's a rebubble for now, and good luck again with ranking. It is a nice map!
Rebubbled!

lucyfly wrote:

Hmm~~~~~~Baka！


Congratulation~！LOL~

1. 00:55:328 (1) - Add a finish as well as Hard? It fits better.

1. 00:55:328 (1) - Same as Easy.
2. 01:17:569 (1) - Consider to shorten a spinner to 01:18:776. I think it fits the music and it can provide enough break for the next note.
3. 01:58:776 (1) - <3

• 
  I recommend to increase OD by 1. OD5 seems a bit too easy even if this is a relaxed difficulty.

KayeSara wrote:

咦，我妹子的图rank了哦！