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ts8zs
关于SB
02:02:902 - 到 02:04:281 - 边缘的空白看着办一下吧=w=?
话说不太好看啊=w=b 我怎么觉得没SB还比较诗意……把那些大图片删掉吧……雪花和震屏效果留着就行= =b
做歌词比较好= =b
L_P
这图下了好久,因为看到可能会有SB所以拖了也不少时间

一直很想看看SB完成是怎样子,但是mod queue拖太久不是个办法
、于是很蛋疼的先来mod了

general: 这首歌很静,建议用静音slider slide
现在的话有点吵,尤其是在长slider慢slider听得很清楚

Hard
00:06:178 (3) - 身体的whistle声删了 很吵
00:08:419 (1,2) - ^
00:20:833 (3) - 这里不用跳的话觉得比较有感觉 排版也比较美观
01:02:902 (4) - ctrl+R?
01:20:143 (1) - 头finish有点太大声了,建议降低15-30%的音量这头
01:23:419 (2) - 这听着听着还是觉得怪怪的,不如弄点别的吧
02:01:868 (1) - spinner的最后finish也是挺大声的,建议45%就好了

Normal
00:00:833 (2) - 真的。。。slider身体有声音很突兀
00:03:592 (2) - ……
orz后面很多。。。不知道做的时候有没有戴耳机....? 用喇叭的话嗯 我可以接受 但是戴着耳机就很想去option 把effect关了

这里吐槽一句跟vocal跟音乐不是不好 不是unrankable 不是有问题 但是整首歌都是这样的话。。。
在这难度里面就有很多短短的slider一个接一个看着看着不那么好看啊

easy
00:19:454 (1,2) - 这里新手巨大压力。。。难读啊!建议就一个个note还是什么

taiko
难得有个我打的起的太鼓不mod真实无节操
00:13:937 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - 这里很喜感 建议不要这样下。。 00:14:109 (1) - 这删了如何
00:27:385 - 加个什么?
00:45:833 (1) - 删?
01:06:178 (1,1) - 换clap?
kiai似乎做得没那么带感,建议不用完全跟歌曲走,靠直觉下应该比较有feel吧


to mapper:
跟着vocal / 音乐下map是很容易没错 大家也容易接受 但是 如果整首歌都是这样子 似乎就没有惊喜、人气上升没那么快..? (multi过后大家虽然不会说你坑爹但是就像三妖的图一样 无言)
当然并不是每个人都立志成为神mapper 很多mapper也是听歌向 或者量产向

是因为我觉得你可能有前途有潜质 想说是不是该试试新东西什么什么的
毕竟osu多个神mapper大家都高兴。。。多个量产的这没差吧(除非你搞基厉害升上BAT大家找你rank图?)
要干
就干他妈的轰轰烈烈

加油!
ts8zs

L_P wrote:

我不是creator我只是来随便搞关系=3=
跟着vocal / 音乐下map是很容易没错 大家也容易接受 但是 如果整首歌都是这样子 似乎就没有惊喜、人气上升没那么快..? (multi过后大家虽然不会说你坑爹但是就像三妖的图一样 无言)嗯……其实自制音轨也就是DDK DDK 这样的= =b太乱的话真是=w= 中规中矩的一个mapper(指楼主
当然并不是每个人都立志成为神mapper 很多mapper也是听歌向 或者量产向w1c1x1中枪很深

是因为我觉得你可能有前途有潜质 想说是不是该试试新东西什么什么的
毕竟osu多个神mapper大家都高兴。。。多个量产的这没差吧(除非你搞基厉害升上BAT大家找你rank图?)
要干
就干他妈的轰轰烈烈Holycow

加油!
嗯……自制的话果断去围观老图……话说自制不好的话会被喷死的=w=b
L_P
刚加了个taiko mod看下..?
太鼓我巨stress 想看看creator反应...
ts8zs

L_P wrote:

taiko
难得有个我打的起的太鼓不mod真实无节操善良mapper(指自己
00:13:937 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - 这里很喜感 建议不要这样下。。feel
00:14:109 (1) - 这删了如何 feel
00:27:385 - 加个什么?空着吧
00:45:833 (1) - 删?有声
01:06:178 (1,1) - 换clap?嗯……后面那个换了=w=
kiai似乎做得没那么带感,建议不用完全跟歌曲走,靠直觉下应该比较有feel吧给这么严谨的creator做GD我不敢=w=b
http://puu.sh/MpEB
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos
Aunxfb’s mod~

Aunxfb wrote:

From:Fishball's NEWBIE modding queue

[Easy]
00:00:833 (2) - slider start at 00:00:661 ,ends at 00:02:385
00:08:419 (1) - add clap on second circle
00:10:488 (2) - add finish
00:11:178 (1) - remove finish,add clap
00:13:247 (3) - add clap
00:13:937 (1) - add clap on second circle
00:15:316 (2) - add finish on second circle
00:16:695 (1) - add clap on first circle
00:18:075 (2) - add clap on seconde circle
00:22:212 (1) - add clap
00:22:902 (2) - start at 00:22:730, ends at 00:24:281,add clap on second circle
00:24:971 (1) - add clap on second circle
00:26:350 (2) - add finish on second circle
00:26:350 (2) - add clap on second circle
00:29:109 (2) - end slider at 00:30:143
00:30:488 - add slider here til 00:30:833
00:31:178 (3) - change it into a slider till 00:31:523
00:38:075 (4) - add clap
00:43:592 (2) - add clap
00:47:730 (3) - add clap on second circle
00:53:937 (4) - add clap on second circle
01:05:661 (3) - add clap

[Normal]
00:00:833 (2) - slider start at 00:00:661
00:06:350 (2) - slider start at 00:06:178
00:16:695 (1) - remove finish add clap(first circle)
00:20:833 (3) - remove circle
00:21:006 (1) - let spinner start at 00:20:833
00:36:350 (5) - shorten slider so it ends at 00:36:695
00:37:040 - add circle
00:41:523 (1) - consider reshaping this, it looks like a d......You get the point ><
01:17:385 (4) - remove circle
01:17:385 - let spinner start here
02:00:833 (4) - slider start at 02:00:661,ends at 02:01:350

[Hard]
00:13:937 (1,2,3) - consider rearrange sliders so they look symmetrical
00:35:144 (5) - change this to a circle
00:38:764 (1) - ^
00:51:006 (3) - delete circle
00:51:178 (4) -let slider start at 00:51:006, ends at 00:51:523
00:57:730 (6) - delete circle
00:57:212 (5) - extend slider so it ends at 00:57:730 -
01:17:385 (7) - delete circle
01:17:385 - let spinner start here
01:23:419 (2) - end slider at 01:23:764 -
01:24:281 (3) - start slider at 01:24:109 -
01:24:971 - add circle
01:38:075 (4) - extend slider til 01:38:764 -
01:38:764 (5) - delete circle
01:46:350 (3) - delete slider
01:51:868 (3) - extend til 01:52:557 -
01:52:557 (4) -remove circle
02:01:350 (5) -change to circle
02:01:523 - let spinner start here
not too many change but from ur mod i change a little rhythm~

That's all, sorry if I gave a bad mod...Nice SB btw ;) thx~!
Good Luck! :)
thx! ur elaborative mod......

Dagger-Gazel's mod~

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

Hi~ My Modding is noooooooooooooooooooooooooob!!!!!!!


[hard]
00:44:281 Finish fix~( I think normal sample )yiyada!~/.\
00:46:178 Whistle
00:47:040 Finish
00:48:419 Whistle
00:49:626(9) x:308 y:84 ?why....i think it is pretty~/.\
00:49:799 Whistle or Finish its too noise~...
00:51:178 Whistle ^
00:52:577 Whistle or Finish ^
00:56:695 Whistle ^
01:17:685 Finish ?....
01:28:937 My Idea~(Music only) let me think about..it. 01:51:178 -^ ^
02:01:523 Finish nope/.\....feel too more finish...~

[normal]
Volume 100% → 50% (Hard=50%) okey~

[easy]
Volume 100% → 50% ^



Nice Song~ :) Great SB!!! :D oh!!~thx!!!~


Good Luck~
thx ur mod and star>_<!!!~

god modder L_P’s mod~

L_P wrote:

这图下了好久,因为看到可能会有SB所以拖了也不少时间 /.\~

一直很想看看SB完成是怎样子,但是mod queue拖太久不是个办法
、于是很蛋疼的先来mod了 SB已经完成了一半了/.\~

general: 这首歌很静,建议用静音slider slide 我去找找~/.\
现在的话有点吵,尤其是在长slider慢slider听得很清楚 /.\

Hard
00:06:178 (3) - 身体的whistle声删了 很吵 fix~
00:08:419 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:20:833 (3) - 这里不用跳的话觉得比较有感觉 排版也比较美观 fix~
01:02:902 (4) - ctrl+R? okey!~
01:20:143 (1) - 头finish有点太大声了,建议降低15-30%的音量这头 fix~45%~
01:23:419 (2) - 这听着听着还是觉得怪怪的,不如弄点别的吧 done...
02:01:868 (1) - spinner的最后finish也是挺大声的,建议45%就好了 fix~

Normal
00:00:833 (2) - 真的。。。slider身体有声音很突兀 delete~/.\
00:03:592 (2) - …… ……all delete...orz
orz后面很多。。。不知道做的时候有没有戴耳机....? /.\....忘了带。。用笔记本的渣渣音响听的/.\...
用喇叭的话嗯 我可以接受 但是戴着耳机就很想去option 把effect关了 /.\!~

这里吐槽一句跟vocal跟音乐不是不好 不是unrankable 不是有问题 但是整首歌都是这样的话。。。i just lazy/.\!~
在这难度里面就有很多短短的slider一个接一个看着看着不那么好看啊 SV慢慢的爬呀爬~~

easy
00:19:454 (1,2) - 这里新手巨大压力。。。难读啊!建议就一个个note还是什么 /.\just for ......ate newible player!~.../.\...too much pro player want to get #1 in easy.../.\!!!~

to mapper:
跟着vocal / 音乐下map是很容易没错 大家也容易接受 但是 如果整首歌都是这样子 似乎就没有惊喜、人气上升没那么快..? (multi过后大家虽然不会说你坑爹但是就像三妖的图一样 无言)/.\表示还没rank过图。。。不敢太。。。QAQ....做为newible mapper。。都懂得;_;.....
当然并不是每个人都立志成为神mapper 很多mapper也是听歌向 或者量产向 偶尔来几首哲学向的也不错/.\下手决定开canon&bloody moon~前提是claris能rank/.\....

是因为我觉得你可能有前途有潜质 想说是不是该试试新东西什么什么的 试过很多。。也被喷了很多/.\。。。囧~跟着vocal的BPM280歌曲。。。那东西能玩/..\...
毕竟osu多个神mapper大家都高兴。。。多个量产的这没差吧(除非你搞基厉害升上BAT大家找你rank图?) 瞎。。。
要干
就干他妈的轰轰烈烈 偶!~。。。。偶。。。。偶orz。。。

加油!
嗯嗯~thx mod!!!!~

ts8zs's about ts8zs' reply

ts8zs wrote:

taiko
难得有个我打的起的太鼓不mod真实无节操善良mapper(指自己
00:13:937 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - 这里很喜感 建议不要这样下。。feel
00:14:109 (1) - 这删了如何 feel
00:27:385 - 加个什么?空着吧
00:45:833 (1) - 删?有声
01:06:178 (1,1) - 换clap?嗯……后面那个换了=w=
kiai似乎做得没那么带感,建议不用完全跟歌曲走,靠直觉下应该比较有feel吧给这么严谨的creator做GD我不敢=w=b 瞎。。。。快给我变触/.\baka~

L_P wrote:

要干
就干他妈的轰轰烈烈
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos
嘎!~
Sun Rainbow
把那个关于我的SB的去掉=A=
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Sun Rainbow wrote:

把那个关于我的SB的去掉=A=
虾米?~。。。。
ts8zs
看来我要remap太鼓了=w=b
关于SB
02:04:281 - 不淡出么……
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

ts8zs wrote:

看来我要remap太鼓了=w=b
关于SB
02:04:281 - 不淡出么……
SB还没完全完成。。。。最后还要修改的~嗯~thx建议~^ ^
remap把~来feel点~/.\!~
ts8zs

Athena Tennos wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

看来我要remap太鼓了=w=b
关于SB
02:04:281 - 不淡出么……
SB还没完全完成。。。。最后还要修改的~嗯~thx建议~^ ^
remap把~来feel点~/.\!~
http://puu.sh/MXnQ
我还是觉得这背景不错完全不用SB
Holoaz
Thank you for request
日本語で失礼します



[Easy]
01:11:868 (1) - Easyでこの曲げ方はTimingが分かりにくいかもしれません
01:14:626 (1) - ^
01:33:937 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:09:799 (1,1) - スピン後の間が短すぎるのでこのようにした方がいいかも?
00:32:040 (1,1) - ここもスピン後の間が短すぎると思います
00:41:523 (1) - Normalでこの曲げ方はTimingが分かりにくいと思います
01:17:557 (1,1) - ここもスピン後の間が短すぎると思います
01:39:799 (1,1) - ^

[Hard]
Good!

Nice mapset!
Fight~ :!:

分かりにくい部分があればPM送ってください
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
嗯。。好像没做完? 做完我再来看吧233
Kanari
Omg, I was going to map this song. Lol. xD
A-tan so pro ~
Good luck and star! >w<

Artist is Hatsune Miku
doriko is the source. ~
lepidopodus
Since you requested on #modreqs... BTW This is a Taiko mod, since I'm good at that.

[Ts8zs' Taiko]
- OD is too low.

00:01:523 (5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm, Maybe too many notes, compared with the part after 00:11:178. Let's get a bit lighter. How about just 'k k d'?
00:05:316 (19) - For same reason with above, remove this?
00:07:040 (25,26,27,28,29) - Same with 00:01:523 (5,6,7,8,9).
00:08:419 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - Maybe just some kind of 1/2 patterns, or at least decrease the density of notes?
00:10:143 (37,38,39,40) - 'd kkd' or 'ddkkd' or something like that, I think that is closer to music sounds.
00:11:006 - Do we need this uninheritied timing section?
00:11:305 - Same with above.
00:21:523 (77,78) - Add a note in 00:21:868, and if you want, 00:22:420 too.
00:24:971 (88,89,90,91) - Well I think it would be better to keep 'oo oo' pattern here. Let's start using 'o ooo' from 00:33:247 cause mood of music is changing a bit.
00:27:730 (98,99,100,101) - Similar with above.
00:29:109 (103,104,105,106,107) - My personal preference is 'ddkdk', though not sure about that.
00:32:557 (114,115,116) - As I said before mood of the song is changing from 00:33:247, but as you are using kdk in 00:32:557 it feels this part is stick to the next part while actually in the previous part, due to kdk in 00:33:592. You'd better to use 'kkd' or something instead of kdk, I think.
00:33:247 ~ 00:43:937 / 00:44:281 ~ 00:55:144 - These two parts are 'paired' in music. Yeah the music is similar in both part. In this case I usually use similar patterns in both parts cause I want to give players similar impression for both. (Of course, I put a bit of variation too.) You can find this kind of 'pair' in lots of music, actually, even some more in this music. Next time, how about consider that? (Of course I saw some kind of patterns 'paired' in current map, too, though I'm not sure whether it was intentional or not.)
00:33:592 (118,119,120) - I personally prefer 'ddk' here.
00:44:281 (159,160,161,162,163) - If you fix above, try this in here, too.
00:55:316 ~ 01:06:006 / 01:06:350 ~ 01:18:764 - Similar with 00:33:247 ~ 00:43:937 / 00:44:281 ~ 00:55:144. (Not that much 'paired' actually, this time though.)
01:20:143 ~ 02:04:281 - Big notes for 2nd & 4th beat in every measure? At least there is a drum sound there... Well at least this can be a concept for this map so I won't complain about that more. (Though I think more various patterns can be made if we don't use big notes like this.) BTW 5-note-long patterns between big notes are a bit random to me. Also we don't have to use 5-note-long patterns every time, you can try 'ooo o' or 'o ooo' or 'oo oo' kind of patterns too.
02:03:937 - How about adding a note?

Ok, though it would be better to pay attention for composition of song next time, I think.
ts8zs

lepidopodus wrote:

Since you requested on #modreqs... BTW This is a Taiko mod, since I'm good at that.

[Ts8zs' Taiko]
- OD is too low.fixed

00:01:523 (5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm, Maybe too many notes, compared with the part after 00:11:178. Let's get a bit lighter. How about just 'k k d'?fixed
00:05:316 (19) - For same reason with above, remove this?fixed
00:07:040 (25,26,27,28,29) - Same with 00:01:523 (5,6,7,8,9).fixed
00:08:419 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - Maybe just some kind of 1/2 patterns, or at least decrease the density of notes?fixed
00:10:143 (37,38,39,40) - 'd kkd' or 'ddkkd' or something like that, I think that is closer to music sounds.fixed
00:11:006 - Do we need this uninheritied timing section?fixed
00:11:305 - Same with above.fixed
00:21:523 (77,78) - Add a note in 00:21:868, and if you want, 00:22:420 too.no
00:24:971 (88,89,90,91) - Well I think it would be better to keep 'oo oo' pattern here. Let's start using 'o ooo' from 00:33:247 cause mood of music is changing a bit.
00:27:730 (98,99,100,101) - Similar with above.
00:29:109 (103,104,105,106,107) - My personal preference is 'ddkdk', though not sure about that.fixed,you're right
00:32:557 (114,115,116) - As I said before mood of the song is changing from 00:33:247, but as you are using kdk in 00:32:557 it feels this part is stick to the next part while actually in the previous part, due to kdk in 00:33:592. You'd better to use 'kkd' or something instead of kdk, I think.
00:33:247 ~ 00:43:937 / 00:44:281 ~ 00:55:144 - These two parts are 'paired' in music. Yeah the music is similar in both part. In this case I usually use similar patterns in both parts cause I want to give players similar impression for both. (Of course, I put a bit of variation too.) You can find this kind of 'pair' in lots of music, actually, even some more in this music. Next time, how about consider that? (Of course I saw some kind of patterns 'paired' in current map, too, though I'm not sure whether it was intentional or not.)I will think about it
00:33:592 (118,119,120) - I personally prefer 'ddk' here.fixed
00:44:281 (159,160,161,162,163) - If you fix above, try this in here, too.
00:55:316 ~ 01:06:006 / 01:06:350 ~ 01:18:764 - Similar with 00:33:247 ~ 00:43:937 / 00:44:281 ~ 00:55:144. (Not that much 'paired' actually, this time though.)
01:20:143 ~ 02:04:281 - Big notes for 2nd & 4th beat in every measure? At least there is a drum sound there... Well at least this can be a concept for this map so I won't complain about that more. (Though I think more various patterns can be made if we don't use big notes like this.) BTW 5-note-long patterns between big notes are a bit random to me. Also we don't have to use 5-note-long patterns every time, you can try 'ooo o' or 'o ooo' or 'oo oo' kind of patterns too.remaping
02:03:937 - How about adding a note?no

Ok, though it would be better to pay attention for composition of song next time, I think.
http://puu.sh/NXmF Stillremaping
@Creator 以后我可动不了了=w=b实在不行就删了吧
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Omg, I was going to map this song. Lol. xD
A-tan so pro ~
Good luck and star! >w<

Artist is Hatsune Miku
doriko is the source. ~ fix!~
thx Star!~
ts8zs
http://puu.sh/O9go
Fininsh...话说我忘了update了=w=b
所以参数什么的……
ts8zs
http://puu.sh/OanK 看看能不能覆盖=w=b
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos
taiko fix~
ssssssssssssssss
hard
00:46:006 (3) - 个人认为这个clap加得不太好,首先来说这里本来就是个慢段,不需要有太多的clap变化,另外你前面一直是二四CLAP,这突然来这么一下听起来不太适应
01:11:868 - 和01:14:626 - 这里完全是在重复一样的旋律啊,而且你的01:11:868 (1) - 这个滑条做的也很棒,何不直接在01:14:626 - 粘贴01:11:868 (1,2) - 然后ctrl+h呢?正好也是一个不错的对称梗,打起来也顺多了
(纯个人感觉)01:25:661 (1,5) - 这两个滑条做成3/4滑条比较好,当然后面要补个圈。01:25:661 (1,5) - 也是

normal
01:23:247 (1,2,3) - 这样的90度折对新手来说有点难读,也许只是在第一遍时候的问题,但是如果你想善良点的话……
02:00:143 - 这地方玩起来也感觉不太顺手,把01:58:764 (1) - 粘贴过来会比较好?正好这种滑条的节奏很合这种乐曲不同段落的衔接部分

easy
诶诶01:58:764 (1) - 这种长滑条好无聊的说~拆掉嘛拆掉嘛~(被拖
我感觉这曲的旋律没有太多可以(在easy难度)下长滑条的地方,01:11:868 (1,1) - 不过这两个不错

好图给星~
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos
ssssssssssssssss’s mod~

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

hard
00:46:006 (3) - 个人认为这个clap加得不太好,首先来说这里本来就是个慢段,不需要有太多的clap变化,另外你前面一直是二四CLAP,这突然来这么一下听起来不太适应 其实这个slider下的不太好。。。不过跟着vocal下米办法。。。fix~
01:11:868 - 和01:14:626 - 这里完全是在重复一样的旋律啊,仔细听vocal。。。你就明白了。。。 而且你的01:11:868 (1) - 这个滑条做的也很棒,何不直接在01:14:626 - 粘贴01:11:868 (1,2) - 然后ctrl+h呢?正好也是一个不错的对称梗,打起来也顺多了 /.\。。。。
(纯个人感觉)01:25:661 (1,5) - 这两个滑条做成3/4滑条比较好,当然后面要补个圈。01:25:661 (1,5) - 也是 咿呀哒>~<!

normal
01:23:247 (1,2,3) - 这样的90度折对新手来说有点难读,也许只是在第一遍时候的问题,但是如果你想善良点的话……考虑到某些沙包来刷榜。。
02:00:143 - 这地方玩起来也感觉不太顺手,把01:58:764 (1) - 粘贴过来会比较好?正好这种滑条的节奏很合这种乐曲不同段落的衔接部分 fix~

easy
诶诶01:58:764 (1) - 这种长滑条好无聊的说~拆掉嘛拆掉嘛~(被拖 咿呀哒。。。
我感觉这曲的旋律没有太多可以(在easy难度)下长滑条的地方,01:11:868 (1,1) - 不过这两个不错 xD

好图给星~
THX MOD! and Star~
Banana
看到doriko就圆润的滚进来了
random mod

General

感觉音效下的不够 找了个kiai段能用的clap音 看着办吧 http://puu.sh/OqDa(话说自定义了音效就是去掉了滑条音吗....)

Hard

01:56:523 (2) - 这种地方不跳吗,要是没打算跳的话,01:23:419 (2) - 这种跳还是把间距放小点比较好。
01:23:419 (1) - 感觉这样一堆正常间距中间夹个跳有点违和(而且我在接下一个滑条的时候点太快断combo了...)我的建议是 01:22:730 (7) stack造一个跳出来,然后这边提示跳的nc就可以去掉了。因为在01:23:592 - 附近的滑条上vocal的音调是从前面的最高点开始下来的,所以我感觉不会造成误读。
01:29:109 (2) - 因为之前有用过跳,而且这一段好多都是红线note连到底,会让人感觉这里是个跳造成误读。建议是把三角形slider们的间距拉大点,(1,2)之间用2.3左右的spacing会好一些。(01:27:902 (6) - 另外,如果是jump style的话,类似这里的地方也可以把间距放大点)
01:34:454 (2) - 这个改成1/4的repeat可能会好摆一点,overlap什么的最讨厌了
01:56:523 (2) - 这种地方不跳吗,要是没打算跳的话,01:23:419 (2) - 这种跳还是把间距放小点比较好。
02:01:006 (4) - 建议02:00:833一个1/2滑条代替,全跟着vocal这里不好抓节奏。

Normal

00:09:454 - hard里面是有摆note,这边其实已经可以开始转转盘了。
00:53:764 - 转盘这里开始?
01:34:799 - 这边节奏有点密,建议中间空一拍出来:
01:51:868 (2) - 我觉得这里用蓝线slider不是很合适,01:52:212 - 这里开始有三个红线上的音,建议跟着。

Easy

01:47:730 (1) - 没找到什么可以挑的,nazi下这种波浪形的滑条,感觉弯的不够。
(一个repeat也没有 好厉害)

good luck~
pimp
hi o/

no much to sugest, this map is awesome 8-)

mod as requested

general

offset -6?
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).

easy

01:20:143 (1) this hitcircle after the spinner surprided me, it looked like a speed up... because of the slow ar i gess

normal

00:11:868 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:21:006 - this spinner looks so sudden
00:32:040 - ^
00:53:764 - ^
01:32:557 (3,4,5,1) - i get 100 in this combo in the 1st play, sudden rithym change, and the notes are too close
01:51:868 (2) - i think you shoud use red tick not blue tick again here, just imo
02:00:143 (1) - ^


hard

00:00:488 (2) - ^ i got 100 in this note in the 1st play, maybe remove it, its just imo
00:06:006 (2) - ^
00:08:419 (1,2) - reduce the distance a bit maybe?
00:19:454 (1,2) - ^

thats all

good luck ★ :)
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

- Add flashy warning for those with SB.

[Taiko]
- remove SB...? Most of the miku head is covered by the taiko bar.
- sounds too loud comparing with the music. Try N70%
00:22:040 - since you used xx xx before, add a note here?
00:22:730 - ^
00:32:385 - ^
00:33:075 - ^
01:17:385 - better not to put finishes here because it's "1/4" and it's not really a strong accent here in the music
01:19:971 - d because the transition of vocal is done in the last tick?
01:42:040 - ^
02:09:799 - If you retain the SB here, that last miku picture shouldn't disappear end but at the end of the song.

In overall custom patterns are well made under a slower frame, though I feel like some kkk in the first half could be replaced by sth else fitting the vocal/drum better -w-

Also, great SB, but the SB load seems a bit too much. You may want to find some SB assistance to deal with it.
ts8zs

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

- Add flashy warning for those with SB.

[Taiko]
- remove SB...? Most of the miku head is covered by the taiko bar.
- sounds too loud comparing with the music. Try N70%fix
00:22:040 - since you used xx xx before, add a note here?xx xx only use when……算了不用英语了就是这个只是在长音结束的时候用这个
00:22:730 - ^
00:32:385 - ^
00:33:075 - ^
01:17:385 - better not to put finishes here because it's "1/4" and it's not really a strong accent here in the musicfix QAQ 话说kkkD这样应该没问题吧
01:19:971 - d because the transition of vocal is done in the last tick?I fllow the drum
01:42:040 - ^
02:09:799 - If you retain the SB here, that last miku picture shouldn't disappear end but at the end of the song.

In overall custom patterns are well made under a slower frame, though I feel like some kkk in the first half could be replaced by sth else fitting the vocal/drum better -w- Then kiai will same with other part -w-

Also, great SB, but the SB load seems a bit too much. You may want to find some SB assistance to deal with it.
话说高潮确实单调了些= =……加入了点变化→ http://puu.sh/OPo6
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos
Banana's mod~

Banana wrote:

看到doriko就圆润的滚进来了
random mod \o/!!~

General

感觉音效下的不够 找了个kiai段能用的clap音 看着办吧 http://puu.sh/OqDa(话说自定义了音效就是去掉了滑条音吗....) en..其实clap我真心拿不定主意。。orz

Hard

01:56:523 (2) - 这种地方不跳吗,要是没打算跳的话,01:23:419 (2) - 这种跳还是把间距放小点比较好。 fix~
01:23:419 (1) - 感觉这样一堆正常间距中间夹个跳有点违和(而且我在接下一个滑条的时候点太快断combo了...)我的建议是 01:22:730 (7) stack造一个跳出来,然后这边提示跳的nc就可以去掉了。因为在01:23:592 - 附近的滑条上vocal的音调是从前面的最高点开始下来的,所以我感觉不会造成误读。我没有理解这个。。。orz不过误读的确有。。。我试着改改。。。
01:29:109 (2) - 因为之前有用过跳,而且这一段好多都是红线note连到底,会让人感觉这里是个跳造成误读。建议是把三角形slider们的间距拉大点,(1,2)之间用2.3左右的spacing会好一些。(01:27:902 (6) - 另外,如果是jump style的话,类似这里的地方也可以把间距放大点) fix~
01:34:454 (2) - 这个改成1/4的repeat可能会好摆一点,overlap什么的最讨厌了
01:56:523 (2) - 这种地方不跳吗,要是没打算跳的话,01:23:419 (2) - 这种跳还是把间距放小点比较好。again?~
02:01:006 (4) - 建议02:00:833一个1/2滑条代替,全跟着vocal这里不好抓节奏。 \o/fix!~

Normal

00:09:454 - hard里面是有摆note,这边其实已经可以开始转转盘了。en~fix~
00:53:764 - 转盘这里开始? fix~
01:34:799 - 这边节奏有点密,建议中间空一拍出来: fix~
01:51:868 (2) - 我觉得这里用蓝线slider不是很合适,01:52:212 - 这里开始有三个红线上的音,建议跟着。 fix~

Easy

01:47:730 (1) - 没找到什么可以挑的,nazi下这种波浪形的滑条,感觉弯的不够。 囧。。。orz
(一个repeat也没有 好厉害)虾米?~

good luck~
thx mod!~

pimpG's mod~

pimpG wrote:

hi o/

no much to sugest, this map is awesome 8-) thx~xD

mod as requested

general

offset -6? hmm....im not sure about this~
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2). fix~now..not .osb file/.\~

easy

01:20:143 (1) this hitcircle after the spinner surprided me, it looked like a speed up... because of the slow ar i gess hmmm...i'll ask MAT about this ...

normal

00:11:868 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. fix~
00:21:006 - this spinner looks so sudden orz...idk...waitng MAT check it....
00:32:040 - ^ ^
00:53:764 - ^ ^
01:32:557 (3,4,5,1) - i get 100 in this combo in the 1st play, sudden rithym change, and the notes are too close just for more playable...orz
01:51:868 (2) - i think you shoud use red tick not blue tick again here, just imo hmm...i think not too much problem~xD
02:00:143 (1) - ^ ^


hard

00:00:488 (2) - ^ i got 100 in this note in the 1st play, maybe remove it, its just imo /.\
00:06:006 (2) - ^ ^
00:08:419 (1,2) - reduce the distance a bit maybe? just for fun~\o/~
00:19:454 (1,2) - ^ ^

thats all

good luck ★ :)
thx ur mod! and Star!!!~

wmfchris's mod~

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

- Add flashy warning for those with SB. change the SB~

[Taiko]
- remove SB...? Most of the miku head is covered by the taiko bar. fix~

Also, great SB, but the SB load seems a bit too much. You may want to find some SB assistance to deal with it. fix~
thx ur mod~

about ts8zs' update~

ts8zs wrote:

话说高潮确实单调了些= =……加入了点变化→ http://puu.sh/OPo6
update done~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~


Hard

  1. 00:01:868 (5) - 尾上clap?
  2. 00:02:902 (1,2,3) - 这一段 (1)和(3)头上whistle, (2)尾whistle, (3)尾clap (四个连续whistle不舒服啊)
  3. 00:06:178 (3,4) - (3)头, (4)头whistle, (4)尾clap
  4. 00:09:109 (2) - 头clap, (3) whistle
  5. 01:02:902 (4) - 这个滑条柔和点吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394215
  6. 01:23:419 (2) - 去掉new combo
  7. 01:47:212 (5) - 往左拉开点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394220
  8. 01:57:212 (3) - spacing不对>.>... 叠个note吧
  9. 01:58:764 (1) - 这样比较好看呢 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394224
  10. 好图啊
Normal

  1. 00:51:178 (3) - 这个滑条尾往左拉开点舒服o.o
  2. 00:53:764 (1,1) - 我觉得这个转盘接的有点快o.o 对新手可能不是很容易
  3. 00:56:695 (3) - 这个也松点
  4. 01:35:143 (3) - 间距不对..?
  5. 01:58:419 (4) - 这个new combo吧, 下个去掉 不然有点怪。。
Easy

  1. fine www
skin和storyboard很美啊>_< 给个star

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos
[CSGA)Ar3sgice's mod~:45f5c][quote="[CSGA]Ar3sgice"
hi~


Hard

  1. 00:01:868 (5) - 尾上clap? fix~
  2. 00:02:902 (1,2,3) - 这一段 (1)和(3)头上whistle, (2)尾whistle, (3)尾clap (四个连续whistle不舒服啊) fix~
  3. 00:06:178 (3,4) - (3)头, (4)头whistle, (4)尾clap fix~
  4. 00:09:109 (2) - 头clap, (3) whistle fix~
  5. 01:02:902 (4) - 这个滑条柔和点吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394215 fix~
  6. 01:23:419 (2) - 去掉new combo fix~
  7. 01:47:212 (5) - 往左拉开点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394220 fix~
  8. 01:57:212 (3) - spacing不对>.>... 叠个note吧 fix~
  9. 01:58:764 (1) - 这样比较好看呢 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394224 fix~
  10. 好图啊
Normal

  1. 00:51:178 (3) - 这个滑条尾往左拉开点舒服o.o fix~
  2. 00:53:764 (1,1) - 我觉得这个转盘接的有点快o.o 对新手可能不是很容易 fix~
  3. 00:56:695 (3) - 这个也松点 fix~
  4. 01:35:143 (3) - 间距不对..? fix~
  5. 01:58:419 (4) - 这个new combo吧, 下个去掉 不然有点怪。。
fix~

Easy

  1. fine www
skin和storyboard很美啊>_< 给个star

Good luck~
thx ur very helpful mod! and star!!!
Lizellota
Nyaa. Hii from our Q~

[Hard]

00:08:419 - um..add whistle
00:16:695 - add finish?~
01:06:350 - ^
01:17:385 - whistle~

[Normal]

00:41:523 (1) - ..looks weird ._.
01:39:454 - finish
01:41:868 (1) - delete this note?
01:58:764 (2) - NC instead of 01:58:419 (1)
02:00:143 - remove finish
02:01:523 - finish

[Easy]

Nice~

Awesome map!~ GL~
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue.

I'm probably a newbie, but I didn't see anything wrong.

Good luck with rankings ^^
JudgeTheDude
Delete this please, I can't
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos
Lizellota's mod~

Lizellota wrote:

Nyaa. Hii from our Q~

[Hard]

00:08:419 - um..add whistle fix~
00:16:695 - add finish?~ fix~
01:06:350 - ^ no...too noise~
01:17:385 - whistle~ fix~

[Normal]

00:41:523 (1) - ..looks weird ._. xD~
01:39:454 - finish no...too noise~
01:41:868 (1) - delete this note? ...why..orz~
01:58:764 (2) - NC instead of 01:58:419 (1) fix~
02:00:143 - remove finish fix~
02:01:523 - finish too noise~

[Easy]

Nice~

Awesome map!~ GL~
thx ur mod~

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

I'm probably a newbie, but I didn't see anything wrong.

Good luck with rankings ^^
^_^never mind~........orz。。。i click worry。。。deny it。。。orz

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Delete this please, I can't
i cant too。。。( T_T)\(^-^ )
pw384
万年一见的超棒SB

[General]
nazi:
01:42:040 - 加绿线,去掉kiai
01:42:212 - kiai
---------多一个喷泉更好玩------

[ez]
02:02:212 (1) finish音效
00:11:868 (2) (slider头)- 00:13:247 (3) - 00:13:937 (1,2,1,2) (slider尾)- 00:20:143 (2) (头)- 00:20:143 (2) (尾)- 00:22:902 (2) (头和尾)- 00:24:971 (1,2,1) (slider尾)- 00:31:178 (3) - 加clap (反正就是这一段音乐中第一条短白线和第三条短白线加上clap音效(据说更带感)?

[nm]
00:36:006 (4) - new combo
00:37:212 (6) - 不太喜欢这形状 (nazi)
01:33:075 ~ 01:35:488 - 对于normal来说有点难了._. (nazi)

[hd]
开头这一段的转盘有些多了._.00:21:006 (1) 00:53:937 (1) 这是两个可以作图的转盘
别的做得还不错._.起码比我要好

gl~
Mystica
質量越來越高了 加油
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Mystica wrote:

質量越來越高了 加油
\o/!!!!~>_<!!!~thx!~
Kiiwa
Hi~ XD

General
Tick rate is inconsistant on Hard.
01:42:212 - You can have another Kiai burst here if you want~
Cool SB o.o

Hard
00:02:902 (1,2,3) - Somthing like this would look better: http://puu.sh/QBVj ?
00:20:833 (3) - Make spacing bigger
00:30:488 (1) - Move 1 grid right
01:17:557 (1) - Add finish
01:19:454 (2,3) - Make these both Normal hitset! 01:19:454 - 50% 01:19:626 (3) - 40% is good~?
02:01:523 - Add finish
You could do alot more with hitsounds on this diff if you wanted

Normal
00:02:212 (4) - Add whistle
01:23:247 (1,2) - Bad idea to use 1/4 like this on a Normal

Easy
02:04:281 - Add finish to make consistant with other diffs ^^

good luck :)
ts8zs
新Taiko BG http://puu.sh/V8uK
求最少删taikoSB= =b
lucyfly

ts8zs wrote:

新Taiko BG http://puu.sh/V8uK
求最少删taikoSB= =b
taikoSB早就刪了啊= = 這張BG會被中間的note擋住的 還不如原來的
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