Xakyrie wrote:

thanks for taking part in this queue and choosing me as your requested modder ^~^ I'll keep it simple due to language barrier.

General

1. no kiai times in any diffs? ;w; please include them ><
2. the N:C2 and N:C1 changes from 02:00:301 - 02:10:968 or so doesn't really fit...consider changing them or removing them.

Easy

song setup

1. I find the slider velocity doesn't fit with the spacing... consider changing one of them ><

note arrangement

1. 00:09:635 (1,2,1) - spacing like this looks kind of ugly, it's close to overlapping but just touching.. maybe decrease spacing throughout?
2. 00:18:968 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:20:301 (3,4) - definitely change spacing like this.
4. 00:26:968 (1) - slider not very pretty x.x
5. 00:31:634 (4,1) - yup.
6. 00:34:968 (1,2,3) - all the spacing that looks like this after this section, fix it. Like I had said, try a smaller number for spacing.
7. 01:29:634 (2) - fix shape; move the red point up one grid point or redo xD
8. 02:16:301 (1,2) - (1) blanket (2)?
9. 02:24:968 (2) - can you fix? D:

hitsounding

1. 00:58:968 (1) - remove whistle?
2. 01:17:634 (1) - something at the beginning
3. 01:49:634 (1) - remove whistle at beginning? o.o
4. 01:56:968 (4) - hitsounds on both ends; soft would work.
5. 02:01:634 (2) - remove or replace finish.
6. 02:04:301 (2) - ^
7. 02:06:968 (2) - ^
8. 02:09:634 (2) - ^
9. 02:10:301 (3) - missed a really obvious clap o:

volume points

1. 00:10:926 - unsnapped timing point silly o3o
2. 01:00:801 - increase volume here for the remainder up until break.
3. 02:00:259 - unsnapped again D: ?
4. 02:05:593 - ^ ;w;
5. 02:32:259 - ^ ._.
6. 02:34:218 - increase volume here.
7. 00:09:635 - 02:34:968 - increase overall volume?

new combos

1. perfect O~O/

comments

really nice diff, though the flow of the map goes around in circles too much, I would suggest rearranging it so it doesn't go clockwise constantly.

Normal

song setup

1. looking good.

note arrangement

1. 00:10:301 (3,4,1) - to make this easier (it's a normal), I would suggest removing (3), moving it up to where (3) was and fixing spacing between the notes, like:
2. 00:18:968 (1,2,3) - kind of overdone for a normal... try an alternative, like:

   92,120,18968,6,0,B|106:90|111:54|111:54|154:44,1,110
   244,104,19634,2,0,B|274:85|286:60,2,55,0|0|8
   264,212,20301,2,0,B|203:238|144:201,1,110

3. 02:04:134 (3,4,5,1) - two sliders here: try using a blanketing technique.
4. 01:51:634 (3) - maybe just two notes where the beginning and ends of the slider are?

hitsounding

1. 01:17:634 (1) - missed a finish at the beginning o.o
2. 01:50:301 (2) - end should be soft hitsounds too I think.
3. 02:01:468 (3) - remove finish at the beginning.
4. 02:04:134 (3) - ^
5. 02:06:801 (3) - ^
6. 02:09:468 (3) - ^

volume points

1. same suggestion as Easy.
2. fix those unsnaps I mentioned!
3. 02:10:301 (4,5) - louder here so we can hear this?

new combos

1. 01:19:968 (3) - new combo.
2. 01:20:634 (1) - remove new combo.
3. 01:54:968 (3) - new combo?

comments

I liked this a lot, it played well so no overall complaints. good job :3

Hard

song setup

1. seems fine.

note arrangement

1. 00:14:801 (1,2) - music doesn't really call for this kind of pattern, so fix it.
2. 00:20:134 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:54:801 (3,1,2,3) - flow break. try reversing (1), (2), and (3) somehow that doesn't break flow.
4. 00:56:301 (1,2) - to flow with ^, these are flipped.

   256,310,55301,6,0,B|256:240,1,70,10|0
   188,188,55634,2,0,B|131:228,1,70,2|0
   380,228,55968,2,0,B|324:188,1,70,10|0
   188,99,56301,6,0,B|256:68|324:100,1,140,6|10
   324,284,56968,2,0,B|256:315|188:284,1,140,6|8

5. 01:53:301 (1,2,3) - because you don't use this anywhere else, it sticks out too much, try removing (2) and rearranging notes.
6. 01:56:801 (1,2) - this plays sort of bad because the amount of the repeats isn't the same. try placing a note in-between and shortening the amount of repeats on (2).
7. 02:21:468 (1,2,3) - for consistency, this isn't seen anywhere else in the map, consider removing (2) or something.
8. 02:32:301 (1) - move this away from the spinner, it gets in the way of the spin uqu

hitsounding

1. 00:35:634 (3,4) - remove hitsounds completely from these.
2. the finishes during 02:00:301 - 02:10:968 like I had mentioned in the previous diffs should be removed as well.
3. 02:13:634 (1) - remove whistle?
4. 02:16:301 (3) - ^
5. 02:23:968 (4) - remove hitsounds?
6. 02:26:634 (1) - ^

volume points

1. 00:10:926 - fix this unsnap.
2. 02:10:134 (3,4) - increase volume here so we can feel the increase in tempo.
3. since I found unsnaps in other diffs, be sure to check for them here too.

new combos

1. 00:30:968 (5) - new combo?
2. 00:31:468 (1) - remove new combo?
3. 00:32:301 (7) - new combo.
4. 00:33:134 (1) - remove new combo.
5. 01:32:634 (1) - remove new combo.
6. 01:40:634 (1) - remove new combo.
7. 01:44:134 (1) - ^
8. 01:44:301 (2) - new combo.
9. 01:50:801 (4) - ^
10. 01:51:634 (1) - remove new combo.
11. 01:53:301 (1) - remove new combo.
12. 01:53:634 (3) - new combo.
13. 01:54:634 (1) - remove new combo.
14. 01:54:968 (3) - new combo.
15. 01:56:801 (1) - remove new combo.
16. 02:15:968 (1) - remove new combo.
17. 02:16:301 (3) - new combo.
18. 02:17:468 (1) - remove new combo.
19. 02:25:468 (4) - new combo.
20. 02:26:634 (1) - remove new combo.
21. 02:26:968 (3) - new combo.

comments

other than some repeat spams and inconsistent new combos, a pretty solid diff.

Collab

song setup

1. good to me I believe.

note arrangement

1. 00:15:301 (2,3,4) - the flow sort of breaks here ._.
2. 00:38:801 (1) - flip this so the curve faces up.
3. 00:40:801 (2) - just make this section a triplet.
4. 01:46:634 (4,1) - transition is funny, please change D:

hitsounding

1. sings great together =3=

volume points

1. I see the unsnaps again... also, I suggest volume changes similar to those of previous suggestions I made.

new combos

1. 00:14:801 (6) - new combo.
2. 00:15:134 (1) - remove new combo.
3. 00:27:968 (1) - ^
4. 00:28:301 (3) - new combo.
5. 00:30:801 (7) - ^
6. 00:31:468 (1) - remove new combo.
7. 00:31:801 (1) - ^
8. 00:32:968 (1) - ^
9. 00:33:634 (5) - new combo.
10. 00:41:301 (4) - new combo.
11. 00:41:801 (1) - remove new combo.
12. 00:46:801 (6) - new combo.
13. 00:46:968 (1) - remove new combo.
14. 00:52:468 (1) - ^
15. 00:52:635 (2) - new combo.
16. 00:56:301 (4) - ^
17. 00:56:801 (1) - remove new combo.
18. 01:40:134 (1) - ^
19. 01:40:634 (2) - new combo.
20. 01:42:801 (1) - new combo.
21. 01:43:301 (2) - remove new combo.
22. 01:43:968 (1) - ^
23. 01:44:301 (3) - new combo.
24. 01:45:468 (1) - remove new combo.
25. 01:45:968 (2) - new combo.
26. 01:54:134 (1) - remove new combo.
27. 01:54:634 (2) - new combo.
28. 01:54:968 (1) - remove new combo.
29. 02:14:801 (7) - new combo.
30. 02:14:968 (1) - remove new combo.
31. 02:26:301 (1) - ^
32. 02:26:801 (8) - new combo.
33. 02:27:468 (1) - remove new combo.
34. 02:29:634 (4) - new combo.
35. 02:30:134 (1) - remove new combo.

comments

fun to play, just make sure the new combos are consistent.

good luck uqu

-Bakari- wrote:

yo!

as requested

[General]
meh.. clear ;_;

[Easy]
AR -1 or 2 unacceptable hard for Easiest diff will think about it~
00:40:301 (1,1) - overlapped with hitburst i think its not affect gameplay that much o.o
00:56:301 (1) - finish + clap at the end?
01:25:634 (1,2) - ctrl+h and move them with distance snap after this. it'll help to avoid overlaps :3
01:33:634 (1,2) - mhm.. nazi :3 i like symetry ^^
01:42:968 (3,1) - this is NOT blanket slider. fix it how it looks what i want don't forget to fix 01:45:634 (2) -
02:00:301 (1) - clap at reverse arrow dont like claps here ==
02:05:634 (1,1) - ^


i can point out more nazi things. but they won't really help :/

[Normal]
01:46:968 (1) - x475 y 267 (ut will help to avoid overlap with (3) and kinda blanket slider for (5) i think this overlap fine~
02:00:301 (1,1,1) - claps at the end ~_~ TAT

[Hard]
AR + 1 will keep AR7 for now

[Collab]
you know, nothing to say here.

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nice map. gl~
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Other fixed!

Leorda wrote:

Oh hi there Hi ^^/


[General]
* Why "VREDINA" in tags? its one of his previous accaunts he asked me to add this~
* Put the album name into tags? dont have album name ww
* Perhaps, remove the letterbox during breaks? i want to leave letterboxes since SB dont have any BG changings, just simpe icons which appears with pattern o.o!


[Easy]
* The Slider Velocity feels too high, reduce a bit? i thought 1.0 can be used in Easy diffs o.o


[Normal]
* AR +1? i ussually using AR-5 for this bpm in N diffs o.o!

01:14:301 (3) - Make a slider like this to make better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/369796 ok :3


Once you done, forum PM me

Chewin wrote:

Hi cryo, random modding here Hi Chewin~ ></

[General]
Remove letterbox during breaks because you are using a SB. oh this is just small sb in the corner which appears with pattern ^^, i prefer to leave letterbox~
No kiai times? nope :3

[Easy]
00:44:968 (3) - Remove whistle to keep consistency with 00:38:301 (2)'s end
00:54:968 (2) - ^
01:12:301 (1) - Add finish added~
01:45:634 (2) - Remove whistle on the head for the same reason
its consistant, i just wanted to use whistles for fuwafuwa :3
02:01:468 (2) - You really should move this slider 1/2 earlier extending it by 1/2: http://puu.sh/KPKd You should follow the music here since this is the easiest diff hmm, dunno both fine, but id rather keep simple white tick rhytm here o.o
02:01:634 (2) - Still here sorry, remove the whistle since you haven't used it on 02:04:134 (2) and 02:07:634 (3) that have the same rhythm
02:04:301 (2) - ^ I would do the same here
02:06:968 (2) - ^
^^^ i dont have any whistles there x.x
02:32:968 (2,1,2) - Select these elements and move them to x:200 y:172. In this way you can blanket these 02:32:301 (1,2) changed a bit :3

[Normal]
00:58:968 (1) - I think moving this circle in x:96 y:288 is better, also because with distance snap it should to be further from 00:56:301 (1) there is a huge time distance between this note and slider, i dont think that changing spacing here will affect gameplay ^^
01:11:134 This isn't an important thing but I suggest you to reduce this break till the long white tick 01:10:968 : http://puu.sh/KPSG ok

[Hard]
00:32:301 (4) - Add New combo.
00:33:134 (1) - Remove New combo.
01:22:801 (1) - ^
01:22:968 (2) - Add New combo.
^^^ oh i simply dont like when stacked note and slider have different color ww, that the reason of my NC xD
01:44:134 (1,2) - ^ Change new combo. ok~

[Collab]
00:25:801 (2,3,4) - Move them in this way to create a square? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378936 changed a bit :3

308,192,25634,5,0
392,132,25801,1,0
456,224,25968,1,8
364,280,26134,1,0
308,192,26301,2,0,B|245:254|161:231,1,160,0|8

00:30:801 (7) - New combo.
00:31:468 (1) - Remove New combo. ok~
00:31:801 (1) - ^
00:36:801 (4) - What about to overlap this with 00:36:301 (1)? hmm no i want overlap it with slider tail \o.o/
00:55:301 (1) - Since 00:55:635 (2,3) are symmetric why don't you make this slider in this way to keep a symmetry together with 00:55:301 (1,2)? I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378939 i just feel that this slider should go in right direction xD
Just use this code:

254,252,55301,6,0,B|270:296|234:320|270:352,1,80

Good luck >w</