Jacob wrote:

Hey! This is a pretty nice map for someone who doesn't have any ranked yet. In fact, this map is just really good in general.

General

You should use tick rate 2 for ALL of the difficulties. Here's a tip for future maps - always use tick rate 2 if they aren't in 1/3. It fits well for most maps and should generally be used.[/list]

Easy

01:19:727 (4) - Move this one grid down in order to make a better looking slider blanket.
01:35:098 (2) - Due to the stacking with this note, it looks like it overlaps (1) during gameplay. Please unstack it with the next slider, (3).[/list]

Normal

00:14:299 (1) - Perhaps you could make the curve on this slider a little curvier upwards. I think that it would compliment the previous pattern nicely.
00:55:677 (3,4,5) - The pattern near the endpoint of (3) is a little clustered in my opinion. Doing something like this could be much more intuitive.
01:20:718 (1) - Curving this slider the other way would be very nicely flowing. It leads into the next slider smoothly.
01:24:437 (4) - Please try to avoid hiding circles partially under slider tracks in a normal difficulty.
01:47:495 (1) - Put a clap at the end of this slider to follow your hitsound pattern.

Hard

Add +1 to the Overall Difficulty. On a hard difficulty, 5 for any stat is a bit too low.
00:49:974 (1) - I wouldn't stack circles under short repeat sliders. They may be hard to see.
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Such a long stream doesn't belong in a hard difficulty. It also is different as to how you mapped the rest of the difficulty and doesn't really fit.
01:43:528 (3) - Add a new combo to this slider to show that the speed of the slider changes.

Insane

Please resnap all notes! There are a lot of unsnapped beats and sliders.
01:43:529 (8) - Add a new combo here to show that the slider speed changes.

A very nice mapset. I wish you luck!

dragonxcz wrote:

I know that it is just bit change, but offset is bit out. 405 is better.

wmfchris wrote:

SPOILER

- 目測source應該有點東西 如果是人物歌的話順便tag character song之類

[Insane]
00:48:983 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/370749 move this slightly so that it's clearly a 1/4 separation

完全沒問題 把source/tag的問題解決可以泡

worth bubbling.

Andrea wrote:

[General]

Please change the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on all the difficulties. FIXED

[Hard]

01:07:825 (6) - I'd add a new combo here. FIXED

Pretty good map and song :3

L_P wrote:

奇怪 我怎么有印象你好像rank了不少图... = = lll