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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Easy

  1. ._.看不出什么问题 不会mod简单难度...
Normal

  1. 00:24:216 (6) - this is confusing for beginners._.
  2. 01:32:619 (6,7,8,1) - 这里不好看啊._. 要不要考虑用reverse slider 然后blanket一下
Hard

  1. 00:50:718 (3) - 拆成slider+repeat+note好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357471
  2. 01:07:701 (5) - ._.hard难度别这么放
  3. 01:54:188 (8) - 同ins
Insane

  1. 00:22:233 (1,2) - 形状做一样的._.
  2. 00:25:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 下stack stream干嘛._. 其他的都没叠这里不是很奇怪
  3. 00:45:043 (5,6,7,8) - 不对准? ._.
  4. 01:53:198 (7) - 好像多了一个._.
  5. 其实没什么好mod的就是感觉太量产._.
that's all

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Strawberry

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
fine~

[Easy]
-Beatmap-
00:42:563 (2) - 这样的和之前的1对齐好好摆嘛...一样的nazi就不说啦(ノ´∀`*)
01:02:867 (3) - 稍微有一点挡住之前的01:00:884 (3),摆在两个中间的位置吧w fixed

[Normal]
fine~ :D

[Hard]
有用了四个slider speed...不知道会不会过关... :3没关系吧?
-Difficulty-
OD-1吧w done
-Beatmap-
00:05:125 (2) - 这样的节奏也蛮好...可以参考一下ww no.
01:11:792 (1) - 这个0.5好像有点不自然...0 0 有吗:P

[Insane]
同样是四个slider speed...
好像需要resnap一下..?
why resnap?
-Beatmap-
00:00:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 打起来手感好像稍微有点不好... 没梗._.
00:27:191 (5,6,7,1) - 这个好像没有之前方形的好看...或者是nazi... 其实主要是因为下面的silider拉不下去了。所以只能考上扁一点的


[Overall]
战场原荡漾ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛和音乐配合好好ww
给颗星~☆加油thanks~!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Easy

  1. ._.看不出什么问题 不会mod简单难度...


Normal

  1. 00:24:216 (6) - this is confusing for beginners._. 怎么?
  2. 01:32:619 (6,7,8,1) - 这里不好看啊._. 要不要考虑用reverse slider 然后blanket一下 done.
Hard

  1. 00:50:718 (3) - 拆成slider+repeat+note好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357471 changed,但有点变化
  2. 01:07:701 (5) - ._.hard难度别这么放 k.stack
  3. 01:54:188 (8) - 同ins what?
Insane

  1. 00:22:233 (1,2) - 形状做一样的._. ._.感觉没影响
  2. 00:25:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 下stack stream干嘛._. 其他的都没叠这里不是很奇怪 会吗:P
  3. 00:45:043 (5,6,7,8) - 不对准? ._.
  4. 01:53:198 (7) - 好像多了一个._.
  5. 其实没什么好mod的就是感觉太量产._. ......
that's all
Good luck~
thanks!~~
Low
Hey! This is a pretty nice map for someone who doesn't have any ranked yet. In fact, this map is just really good in general.

General

You should use tick rate 2 for ALL of the difficulties. Here's a tip for future maps - always use tick rate 2 if they aren't in 1/3. It fits well for most maps and should generally be used.[/list]

Easy

01:19:727 (4) - Move this one grid down in order to make a better looking slider blanket.
01:35:098 (2) - Due to the stacking with this note, it looks like it overlaps (1) during gameplay. Please unstack it with the next slider, (3).[/list]

Normal

00:14:299 (1) - Perhaps you could make the curve on this slider a little curvier upwards. I think that it would compliment the previous pattern nicely.
00:55:677 (3,4,5) - The pattern near the endpoint of (3) is a little clustered in my opinion. Doing something like this could be much more intuitive.
01:20:718 (1) - Curving this slider the other way would be very nicely flowing. It leads into the next slider smoothly.
01:24:437 (4) - Please try to avoid hiding circles partially under slider tracks in a normal difficulty.
01:47:495 (1) - Put a clap at the end of this slider to follow your hitsound pattern.

Hard

Add +1 to the Overall Difficulty. On a hard difficulty, 5 for any stat is a bit too low.
00:49:974 (1) - I wouldn't stack circles under short repeat sliders. They may be hard to see.
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Such a long stream doesn't belong in a hard difficulty. It also is different as to how you mapped the rest of the difficulty and doesn't really fit.
01:43:528 (3) - Add a new combo to this slider to show that the speed of the slider changes.

Insane

Please resnap all notes! There are a lot of unsnapped beats and sliders.
01:43:529 (8) - Add a new combo here to show that the slider speed changes.

A very nice mapset. I wish you luck!
kyuten

这里写的unsnap...应该是需要resnap一下0 0???
Topic Starter
Strawberry

kyuten wrote:


这里写的unsnap...应该是需要resnap一下0 0???

Fixed ~thanks
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Jacob wrote:

Hey! This is a pretty nice map for someone who doesn't have any ranked yet. In fact, this map is just really good in general.

General

You should use tick rate 2 for ALL of the difficulties. Here's a tip for future maps - always use tick rate 2 if they aren't in 1/3. It fits well for most maps and should generally be used.[/list]

Easy

01:19:727 (4) - Move this one grid down in order to make a better looking slider blanket.
01:35:098 (2) - Due to the stacking with this note, it looks like it overlaps (1) during gameplay. Please unstack it with the next slider, (3).[/list]

Normal

00:14:299 (1) - Perhaps you could make the curve on this slider a little curvier upwards. I think that it would compliment the previous pattern nicely.
00:55:677 (3,4,5) - The pattern near the endpoint of (3) is a little clustered in my opinion. Doing something like this could be much more intuitive.
01:20:718 (1) - Curving this slider the other way would be very nicely flowing. It leads into the next slider smoothly.
01:24:437 (4) - Please try to avoid hiding circles partially under slider tracks in a normal difficulty.
01:47:495 (1) - Put a clap at the end of this slider to follow your hitsound pattern.

Hard

Add +1 to the Overall Difficulty. On a hard difficulty, 5 for any stat is a bit too low.
00:49:974 (1) - I wouldn't stack circles under short repeat sliders. They may be hard to see.
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Such a long stream doesn't belong in a hard difficulty. It also is different as to how you mapped the rest of the difficulty and doesn't really fit.
01:43:528 (3) - Add a new combo to this slider to show that the speed of the slider changes.

Insane

Please resnap all notes! There are a lot of unsnapped beats and sliders.
01:43:529 (8) - Add a new combo here to show that the slider speed changes.

A very nice mapset. I wish you luck!
fixed almostly~ thanks fo modding%star!
Wafu
I know that it is just bit change, but offset is bit out. 405 is better.
Nichiyouki
Hi, Strawberry

My mod from your request in nich95's modding / mod4mod Queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Easy

  1. 01:36:586 (4,1) - Overlap slightly. Try not to make overlap.

Normal

  1. Nice diff

Hard

  1. 01:42:535 (1,2,1) - Try not to make overlap.
  2. 01:52:949 (7,8) - Ctrl+R, would be able to play better.

Insane

  1. 00:53:445 (4) - Congruent with slider end of 00:54:684 (3).
  2. 01:42:535 (5) - Add NC?
  3. 01:52:453 (4,5,6) - Same as 01:52:949 (7,8) in Hard diff.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Strawberry
Fixed mostly~thanks~

edit:

dragonxcz wrote:

I know that it is just bit change, but offset is bit out. 405 is better.
I think it is so early from my ear o~o..
wmfchris
SPOILER
- 目測source應該有點東西 如果是人物歌的話順便tag character song之類

[Insane]
00:48:983 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/370749 move this slightly so that it's clearly a 1/4 separation

完全沒問題 把source/tag的問題解決可以泡

worth bubbling.
Topic Starter
Strawberry

wmfchris wrote:

SPOILER
- 目測source應該有點東西 如果是人物歌的話順便tag character song之類

[Insane]
00:48:983 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/370749 move this slightly so that it's clearly a 1/4 separation

完全沒問題 把source/tag的問題解決可以泡

worth bubbling.
thanks~wmf~ :)
-Baby Strawberry-
天啊好快!
bossandy
快rank 話說兩位/個草莓ava是一組的呢 :3
Andrea
[General]

Please change the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on all the difficulties.


[Hard]

01:07:825 (6) - I'd add a new combo here.

Pretty good map and song :3
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Andrea wrote:

[General]

Please change the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on all the difficulties.
FIXED

[Hard]

01:07:825 (6) - I'd add a new combo here. FIXED

Pretty good map and song :3
THANKS FOR MOD~ Andrea~
Andrea
Alright, time to go :3

Ranked~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好>.>
Kanari
Congrats ~
Nymph
宇多田光<3
Scorpiour
哇宇多田
Aurele
Oh! Congratulation!
L_P
奇怪 我怎么有印象你好像rank了不少图... = = lll
spboxer3
恭喜了~
Topic Starter
Strawberry
:) thanks everyone~

edit:

L_P wrote:

奇怪 我怎么有印象你好像rank了不少图... = = lll
谜之错觉……
Lizzehb
What anime is this from? I really think some credit needs to be placed here. And what does the video have to do with the song besides someone made it into an AMV and put lyrics in it? Really didn't want to see an Utada song mapped this way, you broke my heart.
authority8
おめでどう
Flask
恭喜~~~
IchiGUN
Congrats :oops:
Nichiyouki
Congrats~
ouranhshc
YAYC ONGRATS
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