[General]
Add "Bakemonogatari" in the source and remove from tags.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times. You should to set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:974, ends on 01:05:842 in the "Easy" and "Normal"
Remove Letterbox during breaks since the video already has got it
I suggest you to add the epilepsy warning cuz this video starts with some flashes
[Easy]
00:22:233 (1) - Improve the blanket:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35367956,176,21241,2,0,B|144:176,1,80,0|8
01:05:842 (1) - ^
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35369856,116,65842,6,0,B|56:40|140:20|216:40|216:124,1,240,6|8
01:19:727 (4) -
without distance snap move the 1st waypoint to x:332 y:296
[Normal]
00:48:018 (4) - Unsnapped slider's end
01:31:379 (4,5) - These elements touch hp bar. Just move it
01:37:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since this is a Normal I'd delete these circles and would fix in this way:
It fits better imo
[Hard]
00:49:974 (3) - I'd use NC here and remove it from 00:50:222 (1)
01:01:379 (5) - You could do this more curved, I think it flows better with 01:00:883 (4) in this way:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/35370401:53:197 (8) - Nazi, improve the overlap with 01:51:958 (3)
Nice
[Insane]
00:46:034 (1) - You could overlap the slider's tail with 00:45:538 (7)
01:20:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Some players will hate you for these streams o: Including me. <3
Nice mapset, I think you should to call a MAT.
Good luck with this ;3