KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]
Hai hai ;3 ;3

[Normal]
00:57:281 (4) - Move it at X:20 Y:236 what for? ._.
02:34:781 (1) - NC is not needed o: it's fine here

[Insane]
01:47:085 (3) - Make it like this, fits better imo - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377503 ok
02:55:171 (4) - Why don't you stack them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377505 hmm ok

kazumikos wrote:

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]
Hai hai ;3 ;3

[Normal]
00:57:281 (4) - Move it at X:20 Y:236 what for? ._.

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Pie's Hard]
Omg Y SO PRO? Epic diff no mods <3

Loli Cjj wrote:

=Pie's Hard=
1. 00:14:156 - 00:16:031 Ohey hey hey it's not audible enough. <--- not think
2. 00:17:671 (4) - Wouldn't it's better if this deleted? You only use beat on every 2/4. I think this is better, but it's up to you. http://puu.sh/KzxW <--- hm, this slider sound here good
3. 00:36:656 (1) - No whistle? <--- No
4. 00:45:796 - How about use S:C1 and add clap at 00:45:327 (2,3) - (The (2) is at the end) It's sounds a bit catchy though. Volume 25-30. <--- not think. now it sound better
5. 01:17:906 - From this part you should add more clap. Kiai times, you know. I mean, more catchy beats. <--- claps here ok. if add more, it will be not sound
6. 01:26:343 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Ohey why all of this sudden spacing? <--- bcz it mini jumps.
7. 01:28:687 (4,5,6) - Another spacing problem. <--- it's not problem it jump >.<
8. 01:45:093 (1) - This is too big <--- hm, no it's k
9. 02:38:531 (5,1,2) - Nope. Make a constant spacing. <--- no. bcz this combo it is separated. Between notes (4,1) - the same distance.
There's more inconsistent spacing, you should check it by yourself. It seems that most of your sudden spacing contains bad flow, and somehow not fits. <--- You kidding me?? it's a little jumps, if make all diff with the same spacing it will be boring and not intresting. Thx for mod ^.^

KersiTyan wrote:

[Pie's Hard]

00:36:656 - add whistle <--- зачем? не стоят тут вистлы по большим белым же
01:38:999 - add clap <--- добавила :3
03:11:812 - ^ <--- добавила :3

Katty nyaaasha ~<--- NOoooo you :3

Loli Cjj wrote:

=Normal=
1. 00:57:749 (5) - How about moving this up to make a diamond pattern? then the flow between 00:57:749 (5,1) - doesnt look good to me
2. 01:22:593 (4,5) - Either it's ugly or what, I don't like the flow. Remake, perhaps? well i was just lazy, done
3. 03:04:781 - From this part I think it's not good to follow the vocal, try simpler note pattern.ok

=Insane=
1. 00:47:671 (7,8) - You may delete (8) and put (7) stacked with the notes before this. it's empty w/o 00:47:906 (8) -
2. 00:48:140 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - How about triangle pattern? http://puu.sh/KA7T this will cause bad flow between 00:49:312 (3) - and 00:49:546 (4) - =/
3. 01:19:312 (5) - Make the end near each other so it'll looks more like triangle pattern. hmm fixed

Will continue later. That's all for now, good luck. and i'll have to upload again? :<

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~

Insane

00:23:531 - add whistle? ok
00:29:156 (5) - ^ whistle here is inappropriate imo
00:46:031 (1) - maybe add finish? nah
00:53:531 (1) - ^ hmm the rhythm doesnt sound like that
02:17:437 (4) - x:146 y:225 oh come on... it's just 2 lvl 4 grids +_+
02:18:257 (2) - ^
02:18:374 - add note here hmm no
02:46:031 - x:277 y:222 fine
02:46:968 (2,5) - ^

1. 00:50:132 - There is another beat in the music here, I suggest adding a note like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378974
2. 01:01:148 - add spinner? break is pretty long, a spinner fits the vocal fade-out here.
3. 01:22:593 (3) - put here plays better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378969 then move (4) out a little
4. 01:44:156 (5) - move 3rd sliderpoint to about (388,184)? looks better if curve a litle
5. 02:57:749 (1,2) - symmetry._.
6. great map! like the jumps

1. 00:15:796 (6) - I think it's better if this slider is smoother o.o
2. 00:17:671 (4) - ^
3. 00:50:718 (1) - move last point 1grid up?
4. 02:02:906 (1) - ^ down
5. 01:29:624 (6) - 3grids up

1. 00:19:781 (3) - this goes out of the grids?

1. 00:18:843 (1,2) - blanket
2. 00:35:249 (4) - move right 1grid
3. 03:04:781 (1,1,1,1,1) - o.o

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Pie's Hard

1. 00:15:796 (6) - I think it's better if this slider is smoother o.o <--- no
2. 00:17:671 (4) - ^ <--- fixed
3. 00:50:718 (1) - move last point 1grid up? <--- fixed
4. 02:02:906 (1) - ^ down <--- fixed
5. 01:29:624 (6) - 3grids up <--- fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Insane

1. 00:50:132 - There is another beat in the music here, I suggest adding a note like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378974 hmm i'll add note if there's 1 more mod tell me to
2. 01:01:148 - add spinner? break is pretty long, a spinner fits the vocal fade-out here. then it gotta end at 01:01:968 - o_O this spinner's too short and a bit reluctant imo
3. 01:22:593 (3) - put here plays better imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378969 then move (4) out a little kk
4. 01:44:156 (5) - move 3rd sliderpoint to about (388,184)? looks better if curve a litle hmm k
5. 02:57:749 (1,2) - symmetry._. k ._.
6. great map! like the jumps

Normal

1. 00:19:781 (3) - this goes out of the grids? fixed

Good luck~

thx for modding

Loli Cjj wrote:

>Use approach circle to make a neat slider. Not neat, but more blanket. Take an example from first slider on easy diff. You can move 2 dots to make a neater one. http://puu.sh/KygK

=Zej's Easy=
1. 00:16:031 (1) - I think I've explained this ^

list of something similiar like this

00:18:843 (1) -
00:23:531 (1) -
00:26:343 (1,1) -
00:38:999 (1) -
00:42:749 (1) -
00:46:968 (3) - A neater one this time, you can use 00:48:374 (4) - , copypasta, scale 2x and remove repeat. Last, but not least, move to the proper place.
00:53:531 (3) -
00:59:624 (4) -
01:28:218 (3) -
01:32:906 (1) -
01:40:406 (1,3) -
02:03:843 (3) -
02:10:406 (3) -
02:16:499 (4) -
02:45:093 (3) -
02:57:281 (1,3) -
03:01:968 (5) -
03:14:156 (1) - This one, should be a symmetric.

2. 00:23:062 (4) - clap?
3. 00:37:124 (5) - Make this opposite with 00:35:249 (4) - , ctrl+ j, and move to the proper place. http://puu.sh/Kz3Z

KersiTyan wrote:

[Zej's Easy]
00:23:062 (4) - clap

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Zej's Easy]
01:20:718 (3) - Fix the shape of the slider so it fixed the Distance as well(Prev: 1.01 Next: 1.01) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377495
02:52:593 (3) - ^ - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377498

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Zej's Easy

1. 00:18:843 (1,2) - blanket
2. 00:35:249 (4) - move right 1grid
3. 03:04:781 (1,1,1,1,1) - o.o

Sandpig wrote:

Hard

00:32:437 - clap? <--- added
00:34:312 - ^ clap? <--- added
00:49:781 - it sounds better to me if you remove this clap and add it on 00:50:132 (mb also a clap on 00:50:484 if you follow this one) clap? <--- added
01:17:906 ~ 01:47:906 - I don't know why you only added clap on 2nd white tick. In general the 4th white tick should be with a clap if you add on the 2nd. but it's not a big problem... <--- bcz this claps follow the claps in music.
02:34:781 ~ 03:04:312 - ^ <--- ^

Sandpig wrote:

hi

Insane

00:42:046 (4,5,6) - this triplet plays weird...I'd recommand not using triplet from white tick in this part (triplet from red tick sounds much better) fixed
00:34:312 (4) - ^ mb change this, too? ^
01:25:406 (11) - new combo instead of 01:26:109 (1)? k
01:33:140 (6) - nc instead of 01:33:609 (1)? hmm i think it's fine here
01:40:406 (5) - nc instead of 01:41:109 (1)?^
02:12:281 (1) - mb remove this note? because there is no note on 02:04:781 or 02:08:531. hmm im having some troubles rearranging 02:12:515 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - well i'll change this if there's 1 more tell me to
02:16:031 (4) - ^ deleted
03:06:538 (1) - I think it should be started from 03:06:656. mb make it like 03:14:038 (1,2) fixed
02:42:281 (5) - nc instead of 02:42:984 (1)? nope
02:49:781 (3) - nc instead of 02:50:484 (1)?then combo 02:48:609 (1,2) - will be too short =o
02:57:281 (4) - nc instead of 02:57:749 (1)?same reason^

Normal

02:54:468 (5,6) - this part plays a little weird. I think it would be better not skip these claps - 02:54:937 and 02:55:874. I mean circle insteand of slidertick.hm i just.. didnt wanna use too many 1/1 sliders u_u well.. fixed
03:08:531 (1) - end it 1/2 earlier? the unique red tick in this part is odd to me. k

nice map

thx for ur help

Easy

03:10:406 - add a circle?


nice map

• Circle Size to 5.
  
  00:38:413 - add note?
  00:49:077 (1) - move on one grid left.
  00:49:312 (3) - move on one grid right.
  01:42:515 (5) - NC?
  02:20:132 (7) - ^

• AR 7.
  
  00:16:499 (7) - Old combo.
  00:16:734 (1) - NC.
  00:18:374 (5) - move to x:348, y:104.
  01:16:265 (1) - start spin
  01:17:906 - end spin.
  02:33:140 (1) - start spin.
  02:34:781 - end spin.
  02:57:984 (1,2,3) - try this
  03:01:031 (4) -
  SPOILER

  
  Еще бы чуть-чуть и получился бы инс) но мне понравилось.

• Circle Size to 3.
  
  00:40:406 (4) - oh my goodness.. what i see.. it's a jump in Normal? Please change this. (i understand , you done this with distance snap, but i recommending you change this moment)
  00:48:843 (4) - ^
  00:55:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this
  SPOILER

  
  01:39:468 (1) - move to x:312, y:340.

• 01:01:230 - The break here is 15236 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.
  02:18:105 - ^

Yoru-SAN wrote:

[Hard]

• AR 7.
  
  00:16:499 (7) - Old combo. <--- nope
  00:16:734 (1) - NC. <--- nope
  00:18:374 (5) - move to x:348, y:104. <--- nope
  01:16:265 (1) - start spin <--- nope
  01:17:906 - end spin.
  02:33:140 (1) - start spin. <--- nope
  02:34:781 - end spin.
  02:57:984 (1,2,3) - try this <--- nope
  03:01:031 (4) - <--- fixed
  SPOILER

  
  Еще бы чуть-чуть и получился бы инс) но мне понравилось. Thx ^.^

Yoru-SAN wrote:

[Easy]

• 01:01:230 - The break here is 15236 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.
  02:18:105 - ^

Good Luck!

Yoru-SAN wrote:

HI! from my modding queue~

[Insane]

• Circle Size to 5. u mean small circle? o_o sorry but no
  
  00:38:413 - add note? nah
  00:49:077 (1) - move on one grid left. nope
  00:49:312 (3) - move on one grid right.^
  01:42:515 (5) - NC? hmm ok
  02:20:132 (7) - ^ k

[Normal]

• Circle Size to 3. nah i think it's fine
  
  00:40:406 (4) - oh my goodness.. what i see.. it's a jump in Normal? Please change this. (i understand , you done this with distance snap, but i recommending you change this moment) how can it be a jump when i've done it with distance snap (as u said)? @@ it's just a normal circle, with normal spacing that's all O_o
  00:48:843 (4) - ^
  00:55:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this
  SPOILER

  
  hmm i dont really understand ur idea but i'll try to fix this
  01:39:468 (1) - move to x:312, y:340. then im afraid the reverse will be hidden under 01:39:468 (1) - D:

Soror wrote:

<3

kazumikos wrote:

Soror wrote:

<3

=D

Zej's Easy

1. 00:42:749 (1) - Move last point to right 1 grid
2. 01:37:593 (5) - Make to this be beautiful.
   
   SPOILER

   

   256,320,97593,2,0,B|304:384|392:384|448:336|456:256,1,270,0|8

3. 02:41:812 (6) - Add clap here
4. 03:03:843 (1) - Remove NC (Same as 01:46:968 (6) -)
5. 03:10:406 - Add a note?

nich95 wrote:

Hi, kazumikos

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Normal

1. 00:21:421 (6,2) - Stack it. forgot :<
2. 02:02:906 (1,2) - Trying don't overlap, Maybe making new player is strange. fixed
3. 02:06:656 (5) - Add NC k
4. 02:56:812 (2) - Move 2nd point to down 4 grids? why?
5. 03:10:874 (2) - Add clap here? i forgot :< and it should be whistle
6. 03:11:812 (4) - ^

Insane

1. 00:19:781 (6) - Slider end at 00:20:132, then move (7) to 00:20:249. uhmmm ok
2. 00:37:359 (2,3) - It's overlap little. Trying don't overlap, would be better.fixed
3. 00:43:452 (3) - Making the slider like 00:42:984 (2) - ok..

That's all that I can find them.
nice map and song, give a star

Good luck~

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Pie's Hard
00:28:921 add a circle maybe? <--- make slider double
00:32:437 (4) - adjust the shape? it's not that perfect right now. and don't forget your copied one~! <--- fixed
03:10:406 (1) - i don't think its a symmetrical shape <--- it's symmetric
well i really like the pauses and the way you put the spinner~! <--- Thanks ^^

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hello~! sry for my late mod~!

Hard

SPOILER

this is pretty much an insane diff, you may consider to change the name of this diff
sry couldn't find anything... hey it was [Insane] from the start o3o

Normal

SPOILER

still couldn't find anything........

Zej's Easy

SPOILER

00:23:062 (4) - clap
03:17:671 (1) - start at 03:17:906?

ezek wrote:

From my modding queue.

Zej's Easy
00:28:218 (1) - Remove NC?
00:46:968 (3) - Move the third grid 2 grids to the left, it looks better.
01:45:093 (5) - Add NC?
01:46:968 (6,7) - Maybe do this:

SPOILER

02:03:843 (3) - Just like 00:46:968 (3)

ezek wrote:

Normal
Looks fine to me.

Insane
00:16:499 (4) - Do not touch with 00:16:031 (3) these are 1/4 notes o_O
00:47:671 (7,801:44:156 (7) - ) - ^ with 00:46:968 (6) k
01:44:156 (7) - Maybe like this?

SPOILER

hmm..k
03:18:140 (1,2,3) - Separate them to make the diff more hard. i'll think abt this

ezek wrote:

Pie's Hard
00:40:874 (1) - It's better like this:

SPOILER

00:41:812 (3) - ^ Just flip vertically..

Sorry but I'd like my forms~ Thx for mod~

Leorda wrote:

Hi kazu-chan

[Zej's Easy]
00:20:718 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern?
00:35:249 (4) - ^

Good luck

Leorda wrote:

[Pie's Hard]
* Your hitsounds during kiai time is monotonus, due there is no clap at 4th white tick. Consider to add clap at 4th white tick for following snare sound <--- I'm not love many hitsounds. I think now it's good follow the claps in song~~

00:41:577 (2,3) - Move 1 grid left for making a symetrical pattern (nazi) <--- fixed
Good luck