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BeatofIke
http://puu.sh/GUw2

Updated! Thanks Rika. :D
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Ok, Updated~
Chewin
Hi, from my queue ;3

[General]
You must end the 2nd kiai time in the "Konei's Easy" diff.
First offset 926 is better, try it. Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines

[Konei's Easy]
00:18:951 (1) - Since this spinner should start at 00:18:284 to follow the vocal, I'd move it till 00:19:617. It's much better if this spinner follows the music in this way.
00:40:066 (3) - Whistle on this slider's tail
00:48:066 (2) - ^
00:59:177 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:511 (2) because there is a finish and so it fits much better. It's easier to follow for beginners
01:03:177 (4) - Finish on this slider's end
01:04:955 (5) - Finish on this slider's head
01:14:733 (1) - I know you are following the voice here but.. reducing this slider by 1/2 makes the rhythm more flowing. Why? Because this is an easy and you just should to use 1/1 snap divisor ;3
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:24:511 Add circle here, there is a missed sound between the previous spinner and the next slider o.o Even for consistency with 01:38:733 (1)
01:25:399 (1) - If you follow above, I think you will, just remove NC from this slider
01:35:622 (1) - Move this spinner till the next white long tic plz, for the same reason I have written in the first point above.
01:39:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:288 (1) - I'd reduce this slider till 01:52:066 since it should follow the vocal

[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play
00:35:622 (1) - Finish
00:36:511 (3) - ^
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:

00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head
01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try
01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:30:288 (4) - I'd use NC here for consistency with 00:35:622 (1)
00:40:955 (5) - Whistle on the head
00:42:511 (1) - 40% volume here on this slider's tail plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:46:066 (7) - ^
00:49:844 (1) - ^ this time on this slider's head
01:09:399 (5) - Add NC here for consistency with 01:12:955 (1)
01:28:955 (4) - Add NC always for consistency
01:50:288 (5) - Use NC here and remove from 01:51:177 (1)
Awesome map *-*

[Insane]
00:30:955 Add circle overlapping it with 00:31:066 (4)
01:21:622 (6) - This antijump without an advice (for example using NC) it's confusing and hard to read. Move it further from 01:21:399 (5,1)

That's all. I hope it's helpful.
Good luck with rank then ;3
kajiyatta
All fixed!
thanks Chewin~
http://puu.sh/H5ta
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
General mod is fixed all...
Part to Insane diff, I didn't fixed, but add NC in 01:21:399 (5)

Thank you for mod, Chewin :)

Updated~
Kanari
Haii ~
You requested in my queue~


[Konei's Easy]
- Your spacing seems to be always changing.
00:41:399 (4) - One gird left.
00:45:844 (3) - Move it up a bit to make a better line.
01:00:511 (2) - New combo.
01:14:733 (1,2) - These two sliders can look better.


[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:57:844 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:46:733 (1) - New combo.


Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
BeatofIke
SPOILER
[BeatofIke's Normal]
  • 00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play. This circle is symmetical with 00:16:259 (4). Also, there's no need for a new combo.
    00:35:622 (1) - Finish Okay.
    00:36:511 (3) - ^ Okay.
    00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.I decided to just make the volume to 40% from 00:39:177 - 00:52:955 since it's the quiet part of the song.
    00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:

    I decided to do something else XD.
    00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle I didin't follow the above so....
    01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head Okay.
    01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try How is this slider unrankable? It's not that hard to read. Normal is Normal, if beginners can't even read a simple overlap, how can they expect to prepare for Hard difficulty?
    01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head. Adding finish alone sounds good already. Whistle is not needed.
    01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p Omg, my mistake :o . Fixed.
    01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
    I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude It's my mapping style.
Thanks for the mod! Updated!
http://puu.sh/H7My
Konei
Thank you for mods :)


http://puu.sh/H80S
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Ok, Updated~
Genshin
Let's Mod :D (from modding queue)

General:
rise audio of kiai inherit points to 80%


[Easy]
looks like ok...

[Normal]
HD and OD 3
00:57:844 (1) - remove new combo
damn.. else is sooo perfect

[hard]
HD and OD 5
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo


[Insane]

OD 6
else is ok

Good luck :3
BeatofIke
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed...

Thank you for mod, Genshin :)

Updated Normal and Insane diff~
kajiyatta

Genshin wrote:

Let's Mod :D (from modding queue)

[hard]
HD and OD 5 no fixed but others mention it, I'll fix it
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo
well, my NC style fits with Long White Line, so I don't change all.sorrt, for your modding :(

(already KIAI TIME has 80% volume, so I don't update all.)
tiper
[Easy]


  • Please, try to use maximum grid level and check spacing after it
    00:44:955 (1) - add a whistle?
    00:59:177 (4) -
    01:08:511 (1) - this slider looks ugly
    80,208,68511,6,0,B|128:176|128:176|184:224|272:200|272:200|320:272,1,270,0|8
[Normal]


  • 00:05:592 (4) - nazi, but you may place this beat down to one grid
    00:32:066 (1) - nazi
    00:33:844 (3) - ^
    00:47:177 (1,3) - stacks like this are not good for easy difficulty. seriously
    01:43:177 (4) - two repeat on sliders isn`t good for easy difficulty
[Hard]


  • 00:04:592 (2,3,4) -
    00:59:399 (2) - maybe add a beat here?
    01:51:177 (3,1,2) - sudden jump. maybe it can be easier?
[Insane]


  • 00:28:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
    01:33:511 (6) - overmap?
    01:45:399 (2,3) -
    01:52:066 (1,2,3) - this jump is easier than jump in hard o_O
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Some fixed...

Thank you for mod, tiper :)
kajiyatta

tiper wrote:

[Hard]

00:04:592 (2,3,4) -
no fixed
00:59:399 (2) - maybe add a beat here? OK
01:51:177 (3,1,2) - sudden jump. maybe it can be easier? I think it's not too far but others mention that, I'll fix it.
thanks for modding=
updated→http://puu.sh/Kr8k
BeatofIke
Thanks for the mod. Fixed some.
I also decided to adjust a few things for better flow. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KtzA
Konei
Scorpiour
Hi there~ mod from queue

[General]
  1. Consider to add a silent sliderslide to S:C1 sample for the part between 00:39:177 - and 00:53:399 - because gd mappers didn't choose S:C2 here.
[Konei's Easy]
  1. 00:46:733 (1)- (nazi)Make it symmetrical?
  2. 00:48:066 (2) - ^
  3. 00:56:511 - a note here is better than 00:56:733 - imo~
  4. 01:04:511 - add a note here for consistent beat?
  5. 01:16:066 - ^
  6. 01:17:844 - ^
  7. 01:27:177 (1) - symmetrical?
  8. 01:31:622 (2,1) - spacing~
  9. 01:47:622 (2) - a 1/1 slider maybe better?
  10. 01:52:733 - end your spinner here like other diffs?
[BeatofIke's Normal]
  1. 00:06:259 (1) - try to make the slider more smooth? i.e..
  2. 00:39:177 (5) - NC?
  3. 01:37:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the continuing 1/2 notes maybe too hard? i suppose u can choose repeat sliders here to replace some of them :>
  4. 01:44:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
[kajiyatta's Hard]
  1. 00:12:592 (3,4) - it's fine but when i try to reduce their length to 1/4, i find it can make better sense~~so try that? won't affect the difficulty i'm sure :>
nice diff~

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:926 - add a note? i think kajiyatta did better to the beat of prelude, so maybe u can take a look at his diff and make some change?
  2. 00:23:849 - highly recommend to add a note to connect the beat here together
  3. 00:30:955 - add a note, a triplet here is better imo~
  4. 01:05:844 (5,1) - use 1/2 sliders for these two white line?
  5. 01:06:733 - and then (follow above) i'd like to place a stream from here to 01:07:622 - for the music
  6. 01:21:399 (1,2,1) - reduce the spacing here, or it may be confusing
  7. 01:36:844 (4) - stack to (3)'s end, the 1/4 jmp here is mad
that's all ~~ gl with rank
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed some...

Thank you for mod, Scorpiour :)

Add soft-sliderslide in folder. Updated by full submission~
kajiyatta

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~ mod from queue
[kajiyatta's Hard]
  1. 00:12:592 (3,4) - it's fine but when i try to reduce their length to 1/4, i find it can make better sense~~so try that? won't affect the difficulty i'm sure :>
I try this rythem but it doesn't fit with music I think sorry.
thanks for modding~
no updates
BeatofIke
Fixed some. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/Lkia
Nagisawa
heey =3
from my Q

General
nope

Easy
~use mo hitsounds and unsnapped
00:33:844 (1) - remove nc
01:14:733 (1,2) - not beatiful
01:27:177 (1) - http://puu.sh/LxEp
01:34:288 (1) - remove nc

Normal
no promlem for me

Hard
nice

good luck with your map, good luck for ranking^^
Konei
Ok, fixed some.

http://puu.sh/LZ0W
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Thank you for mod, Nagisawa :)

Updated~
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane


00:28:511(1) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8VI
00:33:177(5) - better make so http://puu.sh/M8Xb better make identical distance between ends sliders
00:53:399 -here better sounds volume 40%
00:55:399 - add note here, it better follow the misic
01:25:844(4,5) - stack better
01:27:622(4,5,6) - ^

Hard

00:04:759 -remove this note, not sound here.
00:58:622 - ^
01:29:622(2) - better put so http://puu.sh/M93S it's looks better and more playable

Normal

00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^

copypast brrr... really borring...

Easy

00:50:733 - better make so http://puu.sh/M99l spinner to short for easy.
01:11:177(1) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/M9a7 looks better
01:20:955 - http://puu.sh/M9aP

Good luck~~
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed almost...

Thank you for mod, Katty Pie :)
Konei
Thanks~

http://puu.sh/M9Hb

Fixed~
kajiyatta
thanks for modding~
some updated http://puu.sh/MawS
BeatofIke
SPOILER

Katty Pie wrote:

Normal

00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^

copypast brrr... really borring...
How is symmetical patterns boring?
Remapped a few parts AGAIN!
http://puu.sh/Mgcu
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Updated~
Piscis
nao <3

[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke" :arrow: "sugar pot konei beatofike"

[Konei's Easy]
00:03:592 (2,1,2) - Not distance snap...
00:28:511 (1) - ^
00:35:622 (1) - ^
00:41:399 (4) - ^
00:46:733 (1) - ^
00:55:622 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:14:733 (1) - I think overlap
01:18:288 (1) - Remove clap to slider end
01:19:622 (2) - Add clap
01:20:066 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:25:399 (2) - Remove clap to slider start and end
01:25:844 - Add clap
01:27:177 (1) - Remove clap
01:29:399 (2) - Add clap
01:30:288 (1) - Add clap to slider start
01:31:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:32:511 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:33:399 (2) - Remove clap
01:34:288 (1) - ^
01:34:733 - Add clap
01:39:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:40:066 - Add clap
01:41:399 (1) - Remove clap
01:42:288 (2) - ^
01:43:177 (3) - ^
01:46:733 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:47:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:48:511 (1) - ^
01:48:955 - Add clap
01:49:844 (2) - ^

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:18:259 (1) - Add finish
00:53:622 - N:C1?
01:52:399 (1,2) - 1grid up
kajiyatta
thanks for modding~ all fixed
http://puu.sh/Mpkw
KokoroStudiox3
Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

[insane]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092







[kajiyatta's Hard]
suggestions
00:07:592 (3) - Add NC.





[BeatofIke's Normal]

Spinner New Combo
01:06:733 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
suggestions
00:14:259 (3) - Add NC.





[Konei's Easy]
suggestions
00:08:259 - Add a circle at {x:280 y:288}.
00:10:926 - Add a circle at {x:392 y:128}.
00:18:926 - Add a circle at {x:128 y:48}.
00:18:926 (1) - Remove this spinner.
00:19:592 - Add a spinner from here until
00:24:066, with a finish.
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki

Piscis wrote:

[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~ ok, resnapped
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke" :arrow: "sugar pot konei beatofike" Using the capitalized. Isn't a problem for ranking.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

[insane]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092 Fixed
Thank you for mod, Piscis and eLtigreXXx :)
BeatofIke
Minor fix. Updated!
http://puu.sh/ME56
Sushi
Hi hi, from #modreqs

This is already quite polished, so I'll investigate on details to make the map look better, and give suggestions.

Big Suggestions will be in italic.


The global hitnormal sounds very low compared to the custom hitsounds and the music itself, which has a quite high level, specially during the choruses. Maybe raise the volume of the hitnormal (and the hitclap as well we barely hear it actually) ? (not the volume of all hitsounds, heh ;) )

[Easy]
00:28:511 (1,2,3) - Moving (1) a grid up would be better, will make the spacing look even, and more eye pleasent :)00:35:622 (1) - Same as above, but on the left with a grid 4. this is really a detail
Globally this could be done on several patterns where it's clearly visible, like 00:39:177 (1,2,3) - but I won't list them all, unless you really want me to do it

[BeatofIke's Normal]
:D

[kajiyatta's Hard]
8-)

[Insane]
01:21:622 (2) - This note feels like it's not really on something... based on the music, I'd see a slider starting on the previous (1) instead
01:22:955 (2,4) - a clap on these would sound cool :)
01:32:955 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern sounds weird to me :s Below a suggestion for the timeline :
SPOILER
Instead of this :


Why no this ?



It will feel more like the rest of the map ;)


Cool :D
Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Sushi :)
raririn
Hi~~ From CLANNAD Modding queue

[General]
*inconsistency in kiai times:since there isn't much difference,consider making them the same?

[Normal]
00:06:259 (1) - (nazi)see the pic below↓
it can be better :D move the third and the last tick 1 grid down
same as the other sliders:
SPOILER
00:00:926 (1) - 00:03:592 (3) - 00:08:926 (3) - 00:11:592 (1) - 00:14:259 (3) -
00:32:066 (1) - (nazi)
move the third tick 1 grid up
same as 00:33:844 (3) -
01:06:733 (1) - add NC here since this is the note after a spinner

[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning?
00:45:399 (6) - ^
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end?
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern?

[Insane]
00:02:926 (5) - remove whistle ? it sounds strange here
00:06:259 (1) - add whistle on the end
00:10:926 (1) - add whistle?
00:34:622 (4) - remove the clap on the beginning
01:22:955 (2) - NC here since you change the SV
01:32:955 (4) - consider changing this slider into a circle?
(Oh it seems you change something before i post x.x)

didn't see much here,good mapset,good luck with rank~ :P
10nya
I'll do M4M from your queue ~

[General]
  1. I suggest to remove hentai from the tags
[Konei's Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:45:844: Make this symmetrical ? 2nd point to x96 y160 and 3rd point to x96 y88 ?
  2. 01:25:399: 2nd point to x248 y128 ?
[BeatofIke's Normal]
- AR -1 ?
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:18:288: how about CRTL < -ing the slider?
[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
Rhythms
  1. 00:15:592: add circle?
  2. 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
[Insane]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:31:844: make this overlap with hit 3 on 01:31:177 ?
Rhythms
  1. 01:02:511: add circle?
thats all I can find, good luck for the rank ^w^)/
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