Hi, from my queue ;3
[General]
You must end the 2nd kiai time in the "Konei's Easy" diff.First offset 926 is better, try it. Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines
[Konei's Easy]
00:18:951 (1) - Since this spinner should start at 00:18:284 to follow the vocal, I'd move it till 00:19:617. It's much better if this spinner follows the music in this way.
00:40:066 (3) - Whistle on this slider's tail
00:48:066 (2) - ^
00:59:177 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:511 (2) because there is a finish and so it fits much better. It's easier to follow for beginners
01:03:177 (4) - Finish on this slider's end
01:04:955 (5) - Finish on this slider's head
01:14:733 (1) - I know you are following the voice here but.. reducing this slider by 1/2 makes the rhythm more flowing. Why? Because this is an easy and you just should to use 1/1 snap divisor ;3
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:24:511 Add circle here, there is a missed sound between the previous spinner and the next slider o.o Even for consistency with 01:38:733 (1)
01:25:399 (1) - If you follow above, I think you will, just remove NC from this slider
01:35:622 (1) - Move this spinner till the next white long tic plz, for the same reason I have written in the first point above.
01:39:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:288 (1) - I'd reduce this slider till 01:52:066 since it should follow the vocal
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play
00:35:622 (1) - Finish
00:36:511 (3) - ^
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:
00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head
01:17:399 (4) -
This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:30:288 (4) - I'd use NC here for consistency with 00:35:622 (1)
00:40:955 (5) - Whistle on the head
00:42:511 (1) - 40% volume here on this slider's tail plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:46:066 (7) - ^
00:49:844 (1) - ^ this time on this slider's head
01:09:399 (5) - Add NC here for consistency with 01:12:955 (1)
01:28:955 (4) - Add NC always for consistency
01:50:288 (5) - Use NC here and remove from 01:51:177 (1)
Awesome map *-*
[Insane]
00:30:955 Add circle overlapping it with 00:31:066 (4)
01:21:622 (6) - This antijump without an advice (for example using NC) it's confusing and hard to read. Move it further from 01:21:399 (5,1)
That's all. I hope it's helpful.
Good luck with rank then ;3