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Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 สิงหาคม 2555 at 22:47:50

Artist: nao
Title: Tsukumonotsuki
Source: Tsukumonotsuki
Tags: Sugar Pot opening eroge loli visual novel Konei BeatofIke kajiyatta
BPM: 90
Filesize: 12333kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. BeatofIke's Normal (2.44 stars, 154 notes)
  2. Insane (4.87 stars, 376 notes)
  3. kajiyatta's Hard (4.71 stars, 244 notes)
  4. Konei's Easy (1.19 stars, 89 notes)
Download: nao - Tsukumonotsuki
Download: nao - Tsukumonotsuki (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st ranked beatmap

Opening from Tsukumonotsuki

Konei's Easy - Done by Konei
BeatofIke's Normal - Done by BeatofIke
kajiyatta's Hard - Done by kajiyatta
Insane - Done by me

Thank you for mod
Fenya
Kawayi Rika
Chewin
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx (and star)
Genshin
tiper
Scorpiour
Nagisawa
Katty Pie
Piscis
eLtigreXXx
Sushi
raririn
- t e n n y a -
Koro McAlpine
Kitsunemimi (and star)
meiikyuu
Nathien
Leorda
kurohana
-Sekai- (and star)
Melophobia
Colin Hou (Bubble)
Sync (Rank)

Enjoy!
Last edited by Nichiyouki , edited 33 times in total.
Konei
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Konei
may I try doing Easy?

You can see then if it's good to you.
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki

Konei wrote:

may I try doing Easy?

You can see then if it's good to you.
Sure! You can make Easy diff. ;)
Konei
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Konei
http://puu.sh/EwEV

I think that's it :)
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Thanks, but I might edit the sound and note in the next occasion.

Upload the Easy diff, and add Konei in tags.
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Shall I map a normal or hard difficulty? :D
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki

BeatofIke wrote:

Shall I map a normal or hard difficulty? :D
Sure! :D
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Okay Finished! I decided to map Normal Difficulty. Don't forget to add me in tags. :D

http://puu.sh/EJFL
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Thanks for your diff :)

Upload the Normal diff, and add BeatofIke in tags.
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
nao' s song? I like it =33
Could I make a Hard diff?
Last edited by kajiyatta , edited 3 times in total.
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki

kajiyatta wrote:

nao' s song? I like it =33
Could I make a Hard diff?
Sure! You can make a Hard diff ;)
ririco
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ririco
You should remove the Short Ver.because of the new rule~ >.<
Fumika
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Joined November 2011
Fumika

-Sekai- wrote:

You should remove the Short Ver.because of the new rule~ >.<
ตามนั้นแหละ แล้วก็เรื่องเกสดิฟ เวลาคนทําเกสดิฟมาส่งเขาห้ามให้ kd นะ ให้ได้เฉพาะม็อด ไปหา BAT / MAT มาลบด้วยนะ :?
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki

-Sekai- wrote:

You should remove the Short Ver.because of the new rule~ >.<
Thanks, -Sekai- :)

Netsukawa wrote:

-Sekai- wrote:

You should remove the Short Ver.because of the new rule~ >.<
ตามนั้นแหละ แล้วก็เรื่องเกสดิฟ เวลาคนทําเกสดิฟมาส่งเขาห้ามให้ kd นะ ให้ได้เฉพาะม็อด ไปหา BAT / MAT มาลบด้วยนะ :?
เห็นเคยไปขอทำเกสดีฟให้ kd กันน่ะ เลยทำตาม

แต่ถ้าเป็นกฎของเกม เดี๋ยวหา BAT / MAT มาลบจ้า
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
ok. finished!

http://puu.sh/FyUn
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Thank you for your diff.

Add the Hard diff, and add kajiyatta in tags.

Upload~

Note: Move to Pending beatmap.
Fenya
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Fenya
Hi hi~

Konei's Easy:
01:50:288 (1) - Finish in 01:52:733 ?

BeatofIke's Normal:
01:23:622 (2,4) - overlap
01:25:399 (4,1) - ^
01:27:177 (1,3) - ^

kajiyatta's Hard:
Fine

Insane:
Fine

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Updated!
http://puu.sh/GBWN
Konei
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Konei
http://puu.sh/GDJQ

Here :)

And btw delete the osb. file and full submit^^
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki

Konei wrote:

And btw delete the osb. file and full submit^^
Ok, removed

Updated~
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hello ~ nich95 ~ :)

Ramdon check beatmap ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]


  1. Pls resnap to 00:53:731 (2) - 01:52:064 unsnapped circle and green line.
  2. 00:03:117 - Add circle sound much better.
  3. 00:03:284 - ^

[kajiyatta's Hard]


  1. AR+1 much better with play.
  2. Same as Insane pls resnap green line(kiai time should end to 01:52:066).
  3. 00:40:733 (4,5,6,7,1) - You can try move to center?,will be more beautiful.

[BeatofIke's Normal]


  1. You should add kiai time same as other diff.
  2. 00:24:955 (1) - Just putting a new combo to here.
  3. 01:50:288 (1) - Extend to 01:52:733.

[Konei's Easy]


  1. 01:14:733 (1,2) - You can try make more symmetry slider? looks ugly now.
  2. 01:50:288 (1) - End to 01:52:733 and don't mute this.

That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
All fixed...

Thank you for mod, Rika-chan :)
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
All fixed~
thanks Rika-chan :D

updated→　http://puu.sh/GMQq
Konei
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Konei
http://puu.sh/GOdA

Thanks Rika~ :)
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
http://puu.sh/GUw2

Updated! Thanks Rika. :D
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Ok, Updated~
Chewin
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Chewin
Hi, from my queue ;3

[General]
You must end the 2nd kiai time in the "Konei's Easy" diff.
First offset 926 is better, try it. Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines

[Konei's Easy]
00:18:951 (1) - Since this spinner should start at 00:18:284 to follow the vocal, I'd move it till 00:19:617. It's much better if this spinner follows the music in this way.
00:40:066 (3) - Whistle on this slider's tail
00:48:066 (2) - ^
00:59:177 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:511 (2) because there is a finish and so it fits much better. It's easier to follow for beginners
01:03:177 (4) - Finish on this slider's end
01:04:955 (5) - Finish on this slider's head
01:14:733 (1) - I know you are following the voice here but.. reducing this slider by 1/2 makes the rhythm more flowing. Why? Because this is an easy and you just should to use 1/1 snap divisor ;3
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:24:511 Add circle here, there is a missed sound between the previous spinner and the next slider o.o Even for consistency with 01:38:733 (1)
01:25:399 (1) - If you follow above, I think you will, just remove NC from this slider
01:35:622 (1) - Move this spinner till the next white long tic plz, for the same reason I have written in the first point above.
01:39:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:288 (1) - I'd reduce this slider till 01:52:066 since it should follow the vocal

[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play
00:35:622 (1) - Finish
00:36:511 (3) - ^
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:

00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head
01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try
01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:30:288 (4) - I'd use NC here for consistency with 00:35:622 (1)
00:40:955 (5) - Whistle on the head
00:42:511 (1) - 40% volume here on this slider's tail plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:46:066 (7) - ^
00:49:844 (1) - ^ this time on this slider's head
01:09:399 (5) - Add NC here for consistency with 01:12:955 (1)
01:28:955 (4) - Add NC always for consistency
01:50:288 (5) - Use NC here and remove from 01:51:177 (1)
Awesome map *-*

[Insane]
00:30:955 Add circle overlapping it with 00:31:066 (4)
01:21:622 (6) - This antijump without an advice (for example using NC) it's confusing and hard to read. Move it further from 01:21:399 (5,1)

That's all. I hope it's helpful.
Good luck with rank then ;3
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
All fixed!
thanks Chewin~
http://puu.sh/H5ta
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
General mod is fixed all...
Part to Insane diff, I didn't fixed, but add NC in 01:21:399 (5)

Thank you for mod, Chewin :)

Updated~
Kanari
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Kanari
Haii ~
You requested in my queue~


[Konei's Easy]
- Your spacing seems to be always changing.
00:41:399 (4) - One gird left.
00:45:844 (3) - Move it up a bit to make a better line.
01:00:511 (2) - New combo.
01:14:733 (1,2) - These two sliders can look better.


[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:57:844 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:46:733 (1) - New combo.


Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
SPOILER
[BeatofIke's Normal]
  • 00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play. This circle is symmetical with 00:16:259 (4). Also, there's no need for a new combo.
    00:35:622 (1) - Finish Okay.
    00:36:511 (3) - ^ Okay.
    00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.I decided to just make the volume to 40% from 00:39:177 - 00:52:955 since it's the quiet part of the song.
    00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:

    I decided to do something else XD.
    00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle I didin't follow the above so....
    01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head Okay.
    01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try How is this slider unrankable? It's not that hard to read. Normal is Normal, if beginners can't even read a simple overlap, how can they expect to prepare for Hard difficulty?
    01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head. Adding finish alone sounds good already. Whistle is not needed.
    01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p Omg, my mistake :o . Fixed.
    01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
    I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude It's my mapping style.
Thanks for the mod! Updated!
http://puu.sh/H7My
Last edited by BeatofIke , edited 1 time in total.
Konei
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Konei
Thank you for mods :)


http://puu.sh/H80S
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Ok, Updated~
Genshin
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Genshin
Let's Mod :D (from modding queue)

General:
rise audio of kiai inherit points to 80%


[Easy]
looks like ok...

[Normal]
HD and OD 3
00:57:844 (1) - remove new combo
damn.. else is sooo perfect

[hard]
HD and OD 5
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo


[Insane]

OD 6
else is ok

Good luck :3
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KdLk
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Fixed...

Thank you for mod, Genshin :)

Updated Normal and Insane diff~
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta

Genshin wrote:

Let's Mod :D (from modding queue)

[hard]
HD and OD 5 no fixed but others mention it, I'll fix it
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo
well, my NC style fits with Long White Line, so I don't change all.sorrt, for your modding :(

(already KIAI TIME has 80% volume, so I don't update all.)
tiper
tiper
[Easy]


  • Please, try to use maximum grid level and check spacing after it
    00:44:955 (1) - add a whistle?
    00:59:177 (4) -
    SPOILER
    01:08:511 (1) - this slider looks ugly
    80,208,68511,6,0,B|128:176|128:176|184:224|272:200|272:200|320:272,1,270,0|8
[Normal]


  • 00:05:592 (4) - nazi, but you may place this beat down to one grid
    00:32:066 (1) - nazi
    SPOILER
    00:33:844 (3) - ^
    00:47:177 (1,3) - stacks like this are not good for easy difficulty. seriously
    01:43:177 (4) - two repeat on sliders isn`t good for easy difficulty
[Hard]


  • 00:04:592 (2,3,4) -
    SPOILER
    00:59:399 (2) - maybe add a beat here?
    SPOILER
    01:51:177 (3,1,2) - sudden jump. maybe it can be easier?
[Insane]


  • 00:28:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
    SPOILER
    01:33:511 (6) - overmap?
    01:45:399 (2,3) -
    SPOILER
    01:52:066 (1,2,3) - this jump is easier than jump in hard o_O
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Some fixed...

Thank you for mod, tiper :)
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta

tiper wrote:

[Hard]

00:04:592 (2,3,4) -
SPOILER
no fixed
00:59:399 (2) - maybe add a beat here? OK
SPOILER
01:51:177 (3,1,2) - sudden jump. maybe it can be easier? I think it's not too far but others mention that, I'll fix it.
thanks for modding=
updated→http://puu.sh/Kr8k
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Thanks for the mod. Fixed some.
I also decided to adjust a few things for better flow. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KtzA
Konei
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Konei
http://puu.sh/Le78

Some fixes~
Scorpiour
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Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~ mod from queue

[General]
  1. Consider to add a silent sliderslide to S:C1 sample for the part between 00:39:177 - and 00:53:399 - because gd mappers didn't choose S:C2 here.
[Konei's Easy]
  1. 00:46:733 (1)- (nazi)Make it symmetrical?
  2. 00:48:066 (2) - ^
  3. 00:56:511 - a note here is better than 00:56:733 - imo~
  4. 01:04:511 - add a note here for consistent beat?
  5. 01:16:066 - ^
  6. 01:17:844 - ^
  7. 01:27:177 (1) - symmetrical?
  8. 01:31:622 (2,1) - spacing~
  9. 01:47:622 (2) - a 1/1 slider maybe better?
  10. 01:52:733 - end your spinner here like other diffs?
[BeatofIke's Normal]
  1. 00:06:259 (1) - try to make the slider more smooth? i.e..
  2. 00:39:177 (5) - NC?
  3. 01:37:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the continuing 1/2 notes maybe too hard? i suppose u can choose repeat sliders here to replace some of them :>
  4. 01:44:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
[kajiyatta's Hard]
  1. 00:12:592 (3,4) - it's fine but when i try to reduce their length to 1/4, i find it can make better sense~~so try that? won't affect the difficulty i'm sure :>
nice diff~

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:926 - add a note? i think kajiyatta did better to the beat of prelude, so maybe u can take a look at his diff and make some change?
  2. 00:23:849 - highly recommend to add a note to connect the beat here together
  3. 00:30:955 - add a note, a triplet here is better imo~
  4. 01:05:844 (5,1) - use 1/2 sliders for these two white line?
  5. 01:06:733 - and then (follow above) i'd like to place a stream from here to 01:07:622 - for the music
  6. 01:21:399 (1,2,1) - reduce the spacing here, or it may be confusing
  7. 01:36:844 (4) - stack to (3)'s end, the 1/4 jmp here is mad
that's all ~~ gl with rank
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed some...

Thank you for mod, Scorpiour :)

Add soft-sliderslide in folder. Updated by full submission~
kajiyatta
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Joined April 2011
kajiyatta

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~ mod from queue
[kajiyatta's Hard]
  1. 00:12:592 (3,4) - it's fine but when i try to reduce their length to 1/4, i find it can make better sense~~so try that? won't affect the difficulty i'm sure :>
I try this rythem but it doesn't fit with music I think sorry.
thanks for modding~
no updates
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Fixed some. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/Lkia
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Nagisawa
heey =3
from my Q

General
nope

Easy
~use mo hitsounds and unsnapped
00:33:844 (1) - remove nc
01:14:733 (1,2) - not beatiful
01:27:177 (1) - http://puu.sh/LxEp
01:34:288 (1) - remove nc

Normal
no promlem for me

Hard
nice

good luck with your map, good luck for ranking^^
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
Ok, fixed some.

http://puu.sh/LZ0W
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Thank you for mod, Nagisawa :)

Updated~
Poggo
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Poggo
Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane


00:28:511(1) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8VI
00:33:177(5) - better make so http://puu.sh/M8Xb better make identical distance between ends sliders
00:53:399 -here better sounds volume 40%
00:55:399 - add note here, it better follow the misic
01:25:844(4,5) - stack better
01:27:622(4,5,6) - ^

Hard

00:04:759 -remove this note, not sound here.
00:58:622 - ^
01:29:622(2) - better put so http://puu.sh/M93S it's looks better and more playable

Normal

00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^

copypast brrr... really borring...

Easy

00:50:733 - better make so http://puu.sh/M99l spinner to short for easy.
01:11:177(1) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/M9a7 looks better
01:20:955 - http://puu.sh/M9aP

Good luck~~
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed almost...

Thank you for mod, Katty Pie :)
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei
Thanks~

http://puu.sh/M9Hb

Fixed~
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
thanks for modding~
some updated http://puu.sh/MawS
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
SPOILER

Katty Pie wrote:

Normal

00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^

copypast brrr... really borring...
How is symmetical patterns boring?
Remapped a few parts AGAIN!
http://puu.sh/Mgcu
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Updated~
Piscis
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Piscis
nao <3

[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke" :arrow: "sugar pot konei beatofike"

[Konei's Easy]
00:03:592 (2,1,2) - Not distance snap...
00:28:511 (1) - ^
00:35:622 (1) - ^
00:41:399 (4) - ^
00:46:733 (1) - ^
00:55:622 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:14:733 (1) - I think overlap
01:18:288 (1) - Remove clap to slider end
01:19:622 (2) - Add clap
01:20:066 (3) - Add clap to slider start
01:25:399 (2) - Remove clap to slider start and end
01:25:844 - Add clap
01:27:177 (1) - Remove clap
01:29:399 (2) - Add clap
01:30:288 (1) - Add clap to slider start
01:31:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:32:511 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:33:399 (2) - Remove clap
01:34:288 (1) - ^
01:34:733 - Add clap
01:39:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:40:066 - Add clap
01:41:399 (1) - Remove clap
01:42:288 (2) - ^
01:43:177 (3) - ^
01:46:733 (1) - Remove clap to slider start. And add clap to slider end
01:47:622 (2) - Remove clap
01:48:511 (1) - ^
01:48:955 - Add clap
01:49:844 (2) - ^

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:18:259 (1) - Add finish
00:53:622 - N:C1?
01:52:399 (1,2) - 1grid up
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
thanks for modding~ all fixed
http://puu.sh/Mpkw
KokoroStudiox3
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KokoroStudiox3
Request from eLtigreXXx's Modding queue~

[insane]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092







[kajiyatta's Hard]
suggestions
00:07:592 (3) - Add NC.





[BeatofIke's Normal]

Spinner New Combo
01:06:733 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
suggestions
00:14:259 (3) - Add NC.





[Konei's Easy]
suggestions
00:08:259 - Add a circle at {x:280 y:288}.
00:10:926 - Add a circle at {x:392 y:128}.
00:18:926 - Add a circle at {x:128 y:48}.
00:18:926 (1) - Remove this spinner.
00:19:592 - Add a spinner from here until
00:24:066, with a finish.
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki

Piscis wrote:

[General]
All diff "Resnap All notes" please~ ok, resnapped
Tags change "Sugar Pot Konei BeatofIke" :arrow: "sugar pot konei beatofike" Using the capitalized. Isn't a problem for ranking.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

[insane]
Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:01:026 - snap to 00:01:092 Fixed
Thank you for mod, Piscis and eLtigreXXx :)
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Minor fix. Updated!
http://puu.sh/ME56
Sushi
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Sushi
Hi hi, from #modreqs

This is already quite polished, so I'll investigate on details to make the map look better, and give suggestions.

Big Suggestions will be in italic.


The global hitnormal sounds very low compared to the custom hitsounds and the music itself, which has a quite high level, specially during the choruses. Maybe raise the volume of the hitnormal (and the hitclap as well we barely hear it actually) ? (not the volume of all hitsounds, heh ;) )

[Easy]
00:28:511 (1,2,3) - Moving (1) a grid up would be better, will make the spacing look even, and more eye pleasent :)
SPOILER
00:35:622 (1) - Same as above, but on the left with a grid 4. this is really a detail
SPOILER

Globally this could be done on several patterns where it's clearly visible, like 00:39:177 (1,2,3) - but I won't list them all, unless you really want me to do it

[BeatofIke's Normal]
:D

[kajiyatta's Hard]
8-)

[Insane]
01:21:622 (2) - This note feels like it's not really on something... based on the music, I'd see a slider starting on the previous (1) instead
01:22:955 (2,4) - a clap on these would sound cool :)
01:32:955 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern sounds weird to me :s Below a suggestion for the timeline :
SPOILER
Instead of this :


Why no this ?



It will feel more like the rest of the map ;)


Cool :D
Nichiyouki
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Topic Starter
Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Sushi :)
raririn
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raririn
Hi~~ From CLANNAD Modding queue

[General]
*inconsistency in kiai times:since there isn't much difference,consider making them the same?

[Normal]
00:06:259 (1) - (nazi)see the pic below↓
SPOILER
it can be better :D move the third and the last tick 1 grid down
same as the other sliders:
SPOILER
00:00:926 (1) - 00:03:592 (3) - 00:08:926 (3) - 00:11:592 (1) - 00:14:259 (3) -
00:32:066 (1) - (nazi)
SPOILER
move the third tick 1 grid up
same as 00:33:844 (3) -
01:06:733 (1) - add NC here since this is the note after a spinner

[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning?
00:45:399 (6) - ^
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end?
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern?

[Insane]
00:02:926 (5) - remove whistle ? it sounds strange here
00:06:259 (1) - add whistle on the end
00:10:926 (1) - add whistle?
00:34:622 (4) - remove the clap on the beginning
01:22:955 (2) - NC here since you change the SV
01:32:955 (4) - consider changing this slider into a circle?
(Oh it seems you change something before i post x.x)

didn't see much here,good mapset,good luck with rank~ :P
10nya
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Joined February 2011
10nya
I'll do M4M from your queue ~

[General]
  1. I suggest to remove hentai from the tags
[Konei's Easy]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:45:844: Make this symmetrical ? 2nd point to x96 y160 and 3rd point to x96 y88 ?
  2. 01:25:399: 2nd point to x248 y128 ?
[BeatofIke's Normal]
- AR -1 ?
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:18:288: how about CRTL < -ing the slider?
[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
Rhythms
  1. 00:15:592: add circle?
  2. 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
[Insane]
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 01:31:844: make this overlap with hit 3 on 01:31:177 ?
Rhythms
  1. 01:02:511: add circle?
thats all I can find, good luck for the rank ^w^)/
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Fixed some! Updated! :D
http://puu.sh/MWD9
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
SPOILER

eLtigreXXx wrote:

00:07:592 (3) - Add NC. no change

raririn wrote:

[Hard]
00:21:400 - i strongly suggest you reduce the volume by at least 10% , it sounds a bit noisy here fixed
00:41:844 (7) - add whistle on the beginning? fixed
00:45:399 (6) - ^ fixed
00:48:511 (5) - add whistle on the end? fixed
01:36:066 (1,2,3,4) - i really don't think it fits the music , consider changing into another pattern? I like this rythem but if others mention that, I'll change it.

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[kajiyatta's Hard]
- Make the same kiai timing ok
Slider shape, circle placement
  1. 00:10:926: 2nd point to x100 y192?
another fixed

Rhythms
  1. 00:15:592: add circle? it's too hard for diff I think.
  2. 01:23:622: nc? suggestion tough
fixed
thanks for moddings~
EDIT updated→http://puu.sh/MWU7
Last edited by kajiyatta , edited 3 times in total.
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
raririn, I fixed some...
- t e n n y a -, I fixed only general recommend...

Thank you for mod, raririn and - t e n n y a - :)
DerekMcD
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Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Just my own suggestions...

[Easy]

00:55:622 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:25:399 (2) - At the reverse: Where's the clap?

[Normal]

01:16:955 (3) - At the start: Where's the clap?
01:26:733 (5) - Clap?

[Hard]

00:21:844 (2) - Spacing?
00:24:511 (4) - ^
00:58:066 (3) - ^
01:07:622 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:47:177 (4) - Spacing?
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
thanks for modding=
some fixed http://puu.sh/Nd2u
Konei
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Konei
http://puu.sh/Nidr

Okay, many fixed :)
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Fixed...

Thank you for mod, Koro McAlpine :)

Note: Waiting for BeatofIke's update.
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Minor Fix. Updated! :D
http://puu.sh/NjPD
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Updated!
Kitsunemimi
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Kitsunemimi
Mod4mod :O

The 135 BPM timing section should be 21,380. This song was a bit hard to hear the timing of, so my offset might be ±2ms off. Don't forget to move all your timing sections back by 20ms.

[Konei's Easy]
00:18:926 (1) - This spinner is REALLY awkward. It sounds much better if you shorten it to 00:21:400. Then you can put in a few more sliders/circles in the space after it.
00:59:177 (4) - The lump you have in this slider looks a bit ugly. Try to make the curve larger, or just make it a plain straight slider.
01:00:511 (1) - ^
01:04:955 (4) - You don't need a clap hitsound on the slider tail.
01:14:733 (1) - Is there a reason why you have that useless slider point in there? D: Just simplify it, make it a nice neat round slider.
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:18:288 (1) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider tail again.
01:20:066 (3) - Clap hitsound doesn't belong on slider head, rather it belongs on slider tail o3o
01:35:844 - Timing sections here are really inconsistent. Plus, your hitsound volume is so low anyways, nobody can tell the difference. Just get rid of the three sections in the middle of the spinner.

[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:17:592 (2) - I think it would sound better if you got rid of this hitclap.
00:29:844 (3) - Slider head missing hitclap.
01:50:288 (1) - Perhaps extend this to the white tick?
That's it! This difficulty is perfect.

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:15:259 (2,3,4) - Most awkward rhythm ever. Lose the slider and place some notes normally on the red/white ticks.
...I couldn't really find anything else.

[Insane]
00:08:926 (5) - Doesn't need a new combo.
00:29:733 (5,6) - The spacing here is weird. Either move (6) out to the right of (5), or move them both underneath the end of (4).
01:12:066 (6,7) - Random unintuitive jump. Just use normal spacing.

Good map. It's looking very solid, however there are some problems with Easy. I mean, aside from the inconsistent hitsounds I pointed out, it would be nice if you went and prettied up some sliders. If you end up fixing that up, then I'll shoot a star your way~
Konei
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Konei
Thank you very much Kitsunemimi~

Fixed all you said and made some slider prettier.


http://puu.sh/NKsF
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Kitsunemimi
And Thanks in advance for star :)
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
thanks for modding~
fixed and updated→http://puu.sh/NUrw
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Updated!
http://puu.sh/NXaT
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Updated!
meiikyuu
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meiikyuu

feel free to ignore whatever u don't like xD

Konei's Easy
  1. 00:06:259 (1,2) - make these 2 sliders the same shape? they look kind of random right now because the combos around them seem to be same shapes to each other but its up to u xD
  2. 00:25:380 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view for a sec and move this note to x:172 y:172 (so it is in the middle of 1 and 3)
  3. 00:36:935 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view again and move one grid to the left for even spacing between 1 and 3
  4. 00:48:046 (2) - its on the verge of touching 1 so..move down a bit? while keeping distance snap
  5. 00:50:713 (1) - same situation as above, move away a little to avoid touching 3?
  6. 01:14:713 (1) - add finish at the beginning like u did for 2
  7. 01:14:713 (1) - add note
  8. 01:50:268 (1) - pls extend the slider to 01:52:713 - , it'll make more sense
c:

BeatofIke's Normal
  1. 00:56:066 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note pls, because new vocal line starts on that next note
  2. 01:14:733 (1) - add finish at beginning
  3. 01:49:844 (4) - make 1/2 slider instead? xD
pretty nice

kajiyatta's Hard
  1. 00:11:592 (2) - blanket around 1 is not perfect, so i tried to fix the slider for u ^^ heres code if u want
    32,224,11592,2,0,B|48:256|92:288|144:256|164:224,1,160,4|10
  2. 00:39:379 - i think a note should be here because u can obviously hear the voice start here.. xD
  3. 01:01:844 (5,6) - highlight these 2 notes and move 1 grid down, then adjust 01:02:288 (1) - a little to fix spacing
  4. 01:05:399 (2) - the end of this is not stacking perfectly with the end of 01:06:288 (2) - , not too big of a deal though
another nice diff~

Insane
  1. 00:01:926 (2,3,4) - i feel like these triplets should be a little more spaced out? ><
  2. 00:39:157 (1,3,4,6) - i think it would also sound nice if you add a whistle to the end of these 4 sliders ^^
    edit: 00:42:713 (1,3) - same here xD whistles at end
    If you follow the whistle suggestions above, you can probably add some more to the rest of the soft part up to 00:51:602 - to keep hitsounds consistent~
  3. 01:02:491 - add note
  4. 01:27:046 (2) - move to x:408 y: 316?
nice

good luck, i love nao <3
kajiyatta
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kajiyatta
thanks for moddings~ some fixed
updated→http://puu.sh/OZT3
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki
Mostly fixed...

Thank you for mod, meiikyuu :)

Update Hard and Insane diff~
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Updated!
http://puu.sh/Pa6H
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