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Topic Starter
Hi hi~
Konei's Easy:
01:50:288 (1) - Finish in 01:52:733 ?
BeatofIke's Normal:
01:23:622 (2,4) - overlap
01:25:399 (4,1) - ^
01:27:177 (1,3) - ^
kajiyatta's Hard:
Fine
Insane:
Fine
That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~
Konei's Easy:
01:50:288 (1) - Finish in 01:52:733 ?
BeatofIke's Normal:
01:23:622 (2,4) - overlap
01:25:399 (4,1) - ^
01:27:177 (1,3) - ^
kajiyatta's Hard:
Fine
Insane:
Fine
That's all, sorry for my nazi mod
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good map, good luck~
Topic Starter
Ok, removedKonei wrote:
And btw delete the osb. file and full submit^^
Updated~
Hello ~ nich95 ~ 
Ramdon check beatmap ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~
Good luck with rank ~
Ramdon check beatmap ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[Insane]
- Pls resnap to 00:53:731 (2) - 01:52:064 unsnapped circle and green line.
- 00:03:117 - Add circle sound much better.
- 00:03:284 - ^
[kajiyatta's Hard]
- AR+1 much better with play.
- Same as Insane pls resnap green line(kiai time should end to 01:52:066).
- 00:40:733 (4,5,6,7,1) - You can try move to center?,will be more beautiful.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
- You should add kiai time same as other diff.
- 00:24:955 (1) - Just putting a new combo to here.
- 01:50:288 (1) - Extend to 01:52:733.
[Konei's Easy]
- 01:14:733 (1,2) - You can try make more symmetry slider? looks ugly now.
- 01:50:288 (1) - End to 01:52:733 and don't mute this.
That's all ~ Hope this can help you ~
Good luck with rank ~
Topic Starter
All fixed...
Thank you for mod, Rika-chan
Thank you for mod, Rika-chan
Topic Starter
Ok, Updated~
Hi, from my queue ;3
[General]
You must end the 2nd kiai time in the "Konei's Easy" diff.
First offset 926 is better, try it. Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines
[Konei's Easy]
00:18:951 (1) - Since this spinner should start at 00:18:284 to follow the vocal, I'd move it till 00:19:617. It's much better if this spinner follows the music in this way.
00:40:066 (3) - Whistle on this slider's tail
00:48:066 (2) - ^
00:59:177 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:511 (2) because there is a finish and so it fits much better. It's easier to follow for beginners
01:03:177 (4) - Finish on this slider's end
01:04:955 (5) - Finish on this slider's head
01:14:733 (1) - I know you are following the voice here but.. reducing this slider by 1/2 makes the rhythm more flowing. Why? Because this is an easy and you just should to use 1/1 snap divisor ;3
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:24:511 Add circle here, there is a missed sound between the previous spinner and the next slider o.o Even for consistency with 01:38:733 (1)
01:25:399 (1) - If you follow above, I think you will, just remove NC from this slider
01:35:622 (1) - Move this spinner till the next white long tic plz, for the same reason I have written in the first point above.
01:39:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:288 (1) - I'd reduce this slider till 01:52:066 since it should follow the vocal
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play
00:35:622 (1) - Finish
00:36:511 (3) - ^
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:
00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head
01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try
01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:30:288 (4) - I'd use NC here for consistency with 00:35:622 (1)
00:40:955 (5) - Whistle on the head
00:42:511 (1) - 40% volume here on this slider's tail plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:46:066 (7) - ^
00:49:844 (1) - ^ this time on this slider's head
01:09:399 (5) - Add NC here for consistency with 01:12:955 (1)
01:28:955 (4) - Add NC always for consistency
01:50:288 (5) - Use NC here and remove from 01:51:177 (1)
Awesome map *-*
[Insane]
00:30:955 Add circle overlapping it with 00:31:066 (4)
01:21:622 (6) - This antijump without an advice (for example using NC) it's confusing and hard to read. Move it further from 01:21:399 (5,1)
That's all. I hope it's helpful.
Good luck with rank then ;3
[General]
You must end the 2nd kiai time in the "Konei's Easy" diff.
First offset 926 is better, try it. Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines
[Konei's Easy]
00:18:951 (1) - Since this spinner should start at 00:18:284 to follow the vocal, I'd move it till 00:19:617. It's much better if this spinner follows the music in this way.
00:40:066 (3) - Whistle on this slider's tail
00:48:066 (2) - ^
00:59:177 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:511 (2) because there is a finish and so it fits much better. It's easier to follow for beginners
01:03:177 (4) - Finish on this slider's end
01:04:955 (5) - Finish on this slider's head
01:14:733 (1) - I know you are following the voice here but.. reducing this slider by 1/2 makes the rhythm more flowing. Why? Because this is an easy and you just should to use 1/1 snap divisor ;3
01:16:511 (2) - ^
01:24:511 Add circle here, there is a missed sound between the previous spinner and the next slider o.o Even for consistency with 01:38:733 (1)
01:25:399 (1) - If you follow above, I think you will, just remove NC from this slider
01:35:622 (1) - Move this spinner till the next white long tic plz, for the same reason I have written in the first point above.
01:39:622 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:288 (1) - I'd reduce this slider till 01:52:066 since it should follow the vocal
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play
00:35:622 (1) - Finish
00:36:511 (3) - ^
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:
00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head
01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try
01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude
[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:30:288 (4) - I'd use NC here for consistency with 00:35:622 (1)
00:40:955 (5) - Whistle on the head
00:42:511 (1) - 40% volume here on this slider's tail plz This finish sounds TOO loud.
00:46:066 (7) - ^
00:49:844 (1) - ^ this time on this slider's head
01:09:399 (5) - Add NC here for consistency with 01:12:955 (1)
01:28:955 (4) - Add NC always for consistency
01:50:288 (5) - Use NC here and remove from 01:51:177 (1)
Awesome map *-*
[Insane]
00:30:955 Add circle overlapping it with 00:31:066 (4)
01:21:622 (6) - This antijump without an advice (for example using NC) it's confusing and hard to read. Move it further from 01:21:399 (5,1)
That's all. I hope it's helpful.
Good luck with rank then ;3
Topic Starter
General mod is fixed all...
Part to Insane diff, I didn't fixed, but add NC in 01:21:399 (5)
Thank you for mod, Chewin
Updated~
Part to Insane diff, I didn't fixed, but add NC in 01:21:399 (5)
Thank you for mod, Chewin
Updated~
Haii ~
You requested in my queue~
[Konei's Easy]
- Your spacing seems to be always changing.
00:41:399 (4) - One gird left.
00:45:844 (3) - Move it up a bit to make a better line.
01:00:511 (2) - New combo.
01:14:733 (1,2) - These two sliders can look better.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:57:844 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:46:733 (1) - New combo.
Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
You requested in my queue~
[Konei's Easy]
- Your spacing seems to be always changing.
00:41:399 (4) - One gird left.
00:45:844 (3) - Move it up a bit to make a better line.
01:00:511 (2) - New combo.
01:14:733 (1,2) - These two sliders can look better.
[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:57:844 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:46:733 (1) - New combo.
Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
SPOILER
Thanks for the mod! Updated![BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:617 (5) - I really don't like where you placed this circle. I think it's weird to see it placed there without a logic with previous circles. Move this circle in the center (x:256 y:192) using NC. It's more consistent and more pleasant to play. This circle is symmetical with 00:16:259 (4). Also, there's no need for a new combo.
00:35:622 (1) - Finish Okay.
00:36:511 (3) - ^ Okay.
00:46:288 (5) - 40% volume here plz This finish sounds TOO loud.I decided to just make the volume to 40% from 00:39:177 - 00:52:955 since it's the quiet part of the song.
00:48:066 (3) - Mh. To fits the whistle you can hear in the song at 00:48:955 I'd extend this slider by 1/2 removing 00:49:844 (1). I think it's really much better:
I decided to do something else XD.
00:50:733 (4) - If you follow above, you need to use NC on this circle I didin't follow the above so....
01:00:512 (1) - Finish on this slider's head Okay.
01:17:399 (4) - This slider is unreadable. Since this is a Normal, DON'T overlap it with the previous 01:15:622 (2).. It's really impossible to read for beginners at the first try How is this slider unrankable? It's not that hard to read. Normal is Normal, if beginners can't even read a simple overlap, how can they expect to prepare for Hard difficulty?
01:23:622 (2) - Finish + whistle on this slider's head. Adding finish alone sounds good already. Whistle is not needed.
01:26:733 (1) - For consistency with next part that has got the same rhythm, you should to remove NC on this circle and add it on this slider: 01:27:178 (2) and.. it fits better ;p Omg, my mistake
. Fixed.
01:50:288 (1) - Same of easy
I like how you mapped this Normal, it's symmetric and flowing ;3 Good job dude It's my mapping style.
http://puu.sh/H7My
Topic Starter
Ok, Updated~
Let's Mod 
(from modding queue)
General:
rise audio of kiai inherit points to 80%
[Easy]
looks like ok...
[Normal]
HD and OD 3
00:57:844 (1) - remove new combo
damn.. else is sooo perfect
[hard]
HD and OD 5
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo
[Insane]
OD 6
else is ok
Good luck :3
(from modding queue)General:
rise audio of kiai inherit points to 80%
[Easy]
looks like ok...
[Normal]
HD and OD 3
00:57:844 (1) - remove new combo
damn.. else is sooo perfect
[hard]
HD and OD 5
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo
[Insane]
OD 6
else is ok
Good luck :3
UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KdLk
http://puu.sh/KdLk
Topic Starter
Fixed...
Thank you for mod, Genshin
Updated Normal and Insane diff~
Thank you for mod, Genshin
Updated Normal and Insane diff~
Genshin wrote:
Let's Mod
[hard]
HD and OD 5 no fixed but others mention it, I'll fix it
00:03:259 (4) - new combo
00:03:592 (3) - remove new combo
00:05:926 (1) - new combo
00:06:259 (2) - remove new combo
00:13:925 (1) - new combo
00:14:259 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:511 (4) - new combo
00:58:733 (3) - remove new combo
01:03:844 (4) - new combo
01:04:066 (3) - remove new combo
01:16:288 (1) - new combo
01:16:511 (3) - remove new combo
01:25:177 (7) - new combo
01:25:399 (2) - remove new combo
01:34:066 (5) - new combo
01:34:288 (3) - remove new combo
01:39:399 (5) - new combo
01:39:622 (3) - remove new combo
well, my NC style fits with Long White Line, so I don't change all.sorrt, for your modding
(already KIAI TIME has 80% volume, so I don't update all.)
tiper
[Easy]
Please, try to use maximum grid level and check spacing after it
00:44:955 (1) - add a whistle?
00:59:177 (4) -
01:08:511 (1) - this slider looks ugly80,208,68511,6,0,B|128:176|128:176|184:224|272:200|272:200|320:272,1,270,0|8
00:05:592 (4) - nazi, but you may place this beat down to one grid
00:32:066 (1) - nazi
00:33:844 (3) - ^
00:47:177 (1,3) - stacks like this are not good for easy difficulty. seriously
01:43:177 (4) - two repeat on sliders isn`t good for easy difficulty
00:04:592 (2,3,4) -
00:59:399 (2) - maybe add a beat here?
01:51:177 (3,1,2) - sudden jump. maybe it can be easier?
00:28:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:33:511 (6) - overmap?
01:45:399 (2,3) -
01:52:066 (1,2,3) - this jump is easier than jump in hard o_O
Topic Starter
Some fixed...
Thank you for mod, tiper
Thank you for mod, tiper
thanks for modding=tiper wrote:
[Hard]
00:04:592 (2,3,4) -
no fixed
00:59:399 (2) - maybe add a beat here? OK
01:51:177 (3,1,2) - sudden jump. maybe it can be easier? I think it's not too far but others mention that, I'll fix it.
updated→http://puu.sh/Kr8k
Thanks for the mod. Fixed some.
I also decided to adjust a few things for better flow. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KtzA
I also decided to adjust a few things for better flow. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/KtzA
Hi there~ mod from queue
[General]
[Insane]
[General]
- Consider to add a silent sliderslide to S:C1 sample for the part between 00:39:177 - and 00:53:399 - because gd mappers didn't choose S:C2 here.
- 00:46:733 (1)- (nazi)Make it symmetrical?
- 00:48:066 (2) - ^
- 00:56:511 - a note here is better than 00:56:733 - imo~
- 01:04:511 - add a note here for consistent beat?
- 01:16:066 - ^
- 01:17:844 - ^
- 01:27:177 (1) - symmetrical?
- 01:31:622 (2,1) - spacing~
- 01:47:622 (2) - a 1/1 slider maybe better?
- 01:52:733 - end your spinner here like other diffs?
- 00:06:259 (1) - try to make the slider more smooth? i.e..
- 00:39:177 (5) - NC?
- 01:37:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the continuing 1/2 notes maybe too hard? i suppose u can choose repeat sliders here to replace some of them :>
- 01:44:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- 00:12:592 (3,4) - it's fine but when i try to reduce their length to 1/4, i find it can make better sense~~so try that? won't affect the difficulty i'm sure :>
[Insane]
- 00:05:926 - add a note? i think kajiyatta did better to the beat of prelude, so maybe u can take a look at his diff and make some change?
- 00:23:849 - highly recommend to add a note to connect the beat here together
- 00:30:955 - add a note, a triplet here is better imo~
- 01:05:844 (5,1) - use 1/2 sliders for these two white line?
- 01:06:733 - and then (follow above) i'd like to place a stream from here to 01:07:622 - for the music
- 01:21:399 (1,2,1) - reduce the spacing here, or it may be confusing
- 01:36:844 (4) - stack to (3)'s end, the 1/4 jmp here is mad
Topic Starter
Fixed some...
Thank you for mod, Scorpiour
Add soft-sliderslide in folder. Updated by full submission~
Thank you for mod, Scorpiour
Add soft-sliderslide in folder. Updated by full submission~
thanks for modding~Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~ mod from queue
[kajiyatta's Hard]I try this rythem but it doesn't fit with music I think sorry.
- 00:12:592 (3,4) - it's fine but when i try to reduce their length to 1/4, i find it can make better sense~~so try that? won't affect the difficulty i'm sure :>
no updates
Fixed some. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/Lkia
http://puu.sh/Lkia
heey =3
from my Q
General
nope
Easy
~use mo hitsounds and unsnapped
00:33:844 (1) - remove nc
01:14:733 (1,2) - not beatiful
01:27:177 (1) - http://puu.sh/LxEp
01:34:288 (1) - remove nc
Normal
no promlem for me
Hard
nice
good luck with your map, good luck for ranking^^
from my Q
General
nope
Easy
~use mo hitsounds and unsnapped
00:33:844 (1) - remove nc
01:14:733 (1,2) - not beatiful
01:27:177 (1) - http://puu.sh/LxEp
01:34:288 (1) - remove nc
Normal
no promlem for me
Hard
nice
good luck with your map, good luck for ranking^^
Topic Starter
Thank you for mod, Nagisawa
Updated~
Updated~
Hi from my mod Q ^.^
Insane
00:28:511(1) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8VI
00:33:177(5) - better make so http://puu.sh/M8Xb better make identical distance between ends sliders
00:53:399 -here better sounds volume 40%
00:55:399 - add note here, it better follow the misic
01:25:844(4,5) - stack better
01:27:622(4,5,6) - ^
Hard
00:04:759 -remove this note, not sound here.
00:58:622 - ^
01:29:622(2) - better put so http://puu.sh/M93S it's looks better and more playable
Normal
00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^
copypast brrr... really borring...
Easy
00:50:733 - better make so http://puu.sh/M99l spinner to short for easy.
01:11:177(1) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/M9a7 looks better
01:20:955 - http://puu.sh/M9aP
Good luck~~
Insane
00:28:511(1) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/M8VI
00:33:177(5) - better make so http://puu.sh/M8Xb better make identical distance between ends sliders
00:53:399 -here better sounds volume 40%
00:55:399 - add note here, it better follow the misic
01:25:844(4,5) - stack better
01:27:622(4,5,6) - ^
Hard
00:04:759 -remove this note, not sound here.
00:58:622 - ^
01:29:622(2) - better put so http://puu.sh/M93S it's looks better and more playable
Normal
00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^
copypast brrr... really borring...
Easy
00:50:733 - better make so http://puu.sh/M99l spinner to short for easy.
01:11:177(1) - maybe try this http://puu.sh/M9a7 looks better
01:20:955 - http://puu.sh/M9aP
Good luck~~
Topic Starter
Fixed almost...
Thank you for mod, Katty Pie
Thank you for mod, Katty Pie
thanks for modding~
some updated http://puu.sh/MawS
some updated http://puu.sh/MawS
SPOILER
How is symmetical patterns boring?Katty Pie wrote:
Normal
00:28:066(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 9 notes you kidding? replace some on sliders bcz it difficult for normal.
00:35:177(4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
01:10:733(6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:955 - 01:49:844 - ^
copypast brrr... really borring...
Remapped a few parts AGAIN!
http://puu.sh/Mgcu
Topic Starter
Updated~