Blehgjdsfsdf, ok double post for modding responses.
edit: Updated Muzu and Oni here: http://puu.sh/HT3m
Thanks for modMMzz wrote:
Blehgjdsfsdf, ok modding.
Oni:
00:10:047 (1) - I hear a finisher hear, so make this note a finisher? Not sure how I missed that. Changed.
00:14:492 (1) - ^ Same as above.
00:19:214 - I suggest you add a note here, there is a beat clearly here and it felt a little awkward to play. Even though there is no momentum built up here it's still noticeable. You could add a don here and the pattern would be d k d k, but I personally think something like k d d k will flow better. Or you could add something you think works better. Changed up the pattern here a bit, Starting from 00:18:936 (2) - it is now "d kddk ddd kk k"
00:23:659 - ^ same thing. Changed to kddk as well. The rest of the pattern is left unchanged.
00:26:992 (2,3) - Maybe delete these notes? The beat stops on the note before and these notes are just being placed in between notes. Thus not making much sense placement wise. I tried removing them and it sounded kinda awkward. My original intent for these notes was to emphasize the quarter notes in the vocals with finishers. Disagree on this particular change but I'm open to alternative suggestions.
00:27:825 (1) - again there is a finish sound here, so possibly make this a finisher. But this one isn't as audible as before because there is now vocals, so it can work either way. Leaving this one as is due to previous finishers + the finisher not being nearly as audible.
00:36:436 (1,2,3,1,1) - Gonna bring this up as something to think about. Now from this stream the player will build a lot of momentum, but then the beat quickly changes it's pace at the end of the stream. So just as a suggestion, change this end bit of the stream to d d d, so that the player doesn't overshoot into the next calm pattern. It acts as sort of a cool-down if you think about it. Changed, good find on this.
00:41:297 - Because of the pace change in the music maybe you could fill this in so the dons are triplets instead of doubles? Just idea to keep the build of momentum from the stream. Good suggestion here, but it works either way at this section and the momentum isn't affected too much from my current pattern, so disagree with changing this.
00:42:409 - ^ Same as above.
00:45:603 (1) - again maybe a finisher, but like the one before the vocals kinda cover it up. Vocals cover up the finisher too much. Pass on this.
00:48:797 (2,1,1,1) - Just a suggestion on flow, maybe change this to kddk? I can't really think of a way to explain it other than try it and see how it feels and make your decision. Changing this affects the don pattern I have going on in the background way too much and throws it into a more offbeat feeling than I intended for it. Gonna have to pass on this.
01:03:381 (3) - Finish suggestion again lol. Changed.
01:07:825 (2) - ^ Changed.
01:34:631 - same suggestion as before with filling in these gaps. Didn't change this, but I did however apply same change that I applied to 00:36:436 (1,2,3,1,1) - to 01:34:214 (1,2,3,1,1) -
01:35:742 - ^ Same as above minus the other change.
01:38:936 (1) - again, finishers. xD As I said before, leaving this one as is due to previous finisher + the finisher not being nearly as audible.
01:42:130 (2,1,1,1) - If you took my suggestion before for changing this to kddk, do so.Passed on it previously, so passing on it now.
01:56:714 (3) - Finisher. Yep.
02:01:159 (3) - ^ Yep.
02:43:381 (1) - ^ Yep.
02:45:603 (1) - ^ Yep, also applied a finisher to 02:54:492 (1) -
Alls good with the rest.
Muzu:
I told you about this before in IRC.
SV needs to be 1.4 Making it 1.2 is just going to make it worse for the player when they jump into oni because they have to adjust into a whole new scrolling speed. And honestly, the concept of making the sv slow doesn't always make this easier. I'm still kinda iffy about this, but if I remove the speedup (especially now that I've had two people say to do so) this shouldn't be that big of a deal. Changing SV back to 1.4 and removing the speedup section.
And as we discussed in IRC, I think the speedup at the end is to much for a newer player, and it ill be even more intense once you set the sv back to 1.4. Changed as said above.
edit: Updated Muzu and Oni here: http://puu.sh/HT3m