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Athena Tennos

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Unused Image Files
sb\bg01.jpg
sb\bg08.png
sb\bg09.png
spinner-background.jpg fix~


kiai不同...由于乃用了一堆线....所以...自己检查orz (↓找不同)
fix~

[Happy Birthday!]
00:20:750 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个摆的不好看...至少感觉不顺 fix~
01:02:235 (1) - 换成粉色的 否则(2)根本看不见嘛=-= fix~?有点不明白0.0~
01:28:485 (1) - ctrl+r fix~
01:49:110 (1) - slider的头建议不要被遮住 呜呜呜。。。感觉skin的原因没完全挡住吧~xD~其实我不知道怎么改orz
02:45:360 (8) - 开头finish fix~
02:45:828 (1) - spacing fix~
04:11:610 (7) - 总感觉ctrl+r更好点 fix~ :o
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Wonderful Mapset
SB挺给力
给星
thx~mod!~and~star!~

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BS.png",320,240
M,0,264735,,206,248
S,0,264735,264759,0.8975999
F,0,264735,266610,0,1
F,0,266610,270360,1
F,0,270360,272235,1,0
fix~wait ur easy。。。
jossieP

Snowy Dream wrote:

[i_k's Normal]
00:19:813 (4) - delete finish
00:50:047 (2) - ^
I feel that you abuse finish a bit :< some can use whistle instead I love finishes, what a shame that you dont
01:16:766 (5) - add a note? there is an object here
01:31:297 (4) - try ctrl+r? why? spacing is perfect
01:49:813 - delete finish
02:03:641 (3) - end at the next red tick and then add a slider at 02:04:110 (a return at 02:04:461)
03:46:297 (3,5) - use whistle instead finish
...
pieguyn
hi there, sorry for late~

General:

-offset +10?

i_k's Normal:

02:01:766 ~ 02:09:735 - IMO it seems really empty without whistles like the other parts, perhaps add whistles and just lower the volume 20%-30%? maybe try it like this (x = whistle): oxo x oo x oxox x o x ooxooox

lucyfly's Hard:

00:14:422 ~ 00:20:750 - I think you could continue using 0.5x here..
04:08:094 (2) - add whistle on start?
04:17:938 (2) - add whistle on end?

Happy Birthday!:

01:10:672 (1) - remove NC
01:35:985 (1) - add finish on start to be consistent with previous part?
01:43:485 (1) - add finish on start?
01:47:235 (3) - add finish on start?
01:52:860 (8) - add finish?
02:52:860 (1) - add finish on start?
02:56:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:00:360 (1) - add finish on start?
03:07:860 (1) - add finish on start?
03:11:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:15:360 (1,2) - add finish on start?
04:09:735 (1) - add finish on start?
04:13:485 (5) - add finish on start?
04:21:688 (2,3) - add finish?
04:22:625 (1) - hm, mute the sliderticks on this slider? sounds a lot better IMO

nice map~
eikkaleyd
来太晚了抱歉~
话说ClariS那个声音比较成熟的,声音辨识度好低噗

——看上去配置不错哈~看到skin和SB我就忽然懒得mod了觉得很漂亮……

[Happy Birthday!]
00:11:610 (2) - 第二个点往里收点,x112 y260这样
00:44:422 (9) - 这个形状也很奇怪啊
01:14:656 (5) - ^,我就挑我一眼看去很别扭的好了
01:26:375 (4) - CTRL+R,理由有,和12的flow相同(相反方向)以及因为音高是从高到低的(sore-zore这句)
01:47:235 (3,4) - 推荐先是往下凹的拖条,再是往上凸的(因为12都是往下凹的)
02:50:281 (5) - CTRL+R,也是跟音高(modo是从低到高)
——我的跟音高拖条习惯,主要集中在重音上面,不过不知道A碳认不认可;_;

[lucyfly's Hard]
00:37:860 (3,4) - 第一次出来这个节奏最好换成反弹的拖条
00:40:672 (x) - 加个圈压一下节奏,或者说这才是她唱音的结束点
00:44:422 (x) - ^
00:58:485 (7) - 换成和之前一句一样的3个circle好了
01:37:860 (1) - 没必要NC
02:28:485 (3,4) - 形状形状233
02:38:563 (7) - x184 y120……
02:50:985 (1) - 这个删掉
03:45:360 (3,1) - 3加个折返,spinner放到03:46:180 的蓝线上
变速拖条有点多,不过那还好,主要是这HARD其实不需要那么多NC提示,嗯可以考虑检查下NC~

For normal, looked through it, but found nothing special~
In fact I think you have got enough mods, just check some sliders' shape and New combo if you like.
It's a reaaaaaaaally good map. Must be ranked soon~! :)
Sanae Kochiya_old
BEST MAP EVER RANK FOR SHIZ NIGGARRRR
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there, sorry for late~

General:

-offset +10? this..idk..let XBT check it...orz

Happy Birthday!:

01:10:672 (1) - remove NC ~fix!~
01:35:985 (1) - add finish on start to be consistent with previous part?
01:43:485 (1) - add finish on start?
01:47:235 (3) - add finish on start?
01:52:860 (8) - add finish?
02:52:860 (1) - add finish on start?
02:56:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:00:360 (1) - add finish on start?
03:07:860 (1) - add finish on start?
03:11:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:15:360 (1,2) - add finish on start?
04:09:735 (1) - add finish on start?
04:13:485 (5) - add finish on start?
04:21:688 (2,3) - add finish?
04:22:625 (1) - hm, mute the sliderticks on this slider? sounds a lot better IMO

almost fix~

nice map~
thx!~ur mod~

eikkaleyd wrote:

来太晚了抱歉~
话说ClariS那个声音比较成熟的,声音辨识度好低噗

——看上去配置不错哈~看到skin和SB我就忽然懒得mod了觉得很漂亮……

[Happy Birthday!]
00:11:610 (2) - 第二个点往里收点,x112 y260这样 ~fix!~
00:44:422 (9) - 这个形状也很奇怪啊 ~fix!~
01:14:656 (5) - ^,我就挑我一眼看去很别扭的好了 ~fix!~
01:26:375 (4) - CTRL+R,理由有,和12的flow相同(相反方向)以及因为音高是从高到低的(sore-zore这句) ~fix!~
01:47:235 (3,4) - 推荐先是往下凹的拖条,再是往上凸的(因为12都是往下凹的) ~fix!~
02:50:281 (5) - CTRL+R,也是跟音高(modo是从低到高) ~fix!~
——我的跟音高拖条习惯,主要集中在重音上面,不过不知道A碳认不认可;_; ~才不会!~表示学习了!~下次我也注意一下@!

For normal, looked through it, but found nothing special~
In fact I think you have got enough mods, just check some sliders' shape and New combo if you like.
It's a reaaaaaaaally good map. Must be ranked soon~! :)
thx! ur mod!~
jesse7419
多了美美的SB 又更讚了
加油!!快rank吧 >w<
cx040156
教练我来了,您的教导真是令我内牛满面感动涕零,我现在就把第一颗星射给你><
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

jesse7419 wrote:

多了美美的SB 又更讚了
加油!!快rank吧 >w<
thx~Star!~


cx040156 wrote:

教练我来了,您的教导真是令我内牛满面感动涕零,我现在就把第一颗星射给你><
。。。。。教练你妹!~aho!~不过~thx star~~~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
SB挺美的0.0
ertyukjh010


Request from Game-pm

[General]

  1. Inconsistency in Tags:
    Happy Birthday! : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
    i_k's Normal : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
    lucyfly's Hard : ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara
    Rainbow's Easy : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
[Rainbow's Easy]

  1. Ar+2
[Layout]
  1. 00:13:485 (3,4) - 疊起來了, 分開它們
  2. 00:54:735 (1) - 同樣是不同顏色重疊,這個節拍比 00:37:391 (1,1) 慢了一倍,新玩家容易混淆它們
  3. 01:02:703 (3,4,1) - ^
  4. 01:26:610 (3) - 距離
  5. 01:34:110 (1) - Ez裡不要用折返兩次以上的滑條,新玩家會miss掉最後一下
  6. 02:11:610 (2) - 向下移動2格 Grid Lv4
  7. 02:20:985 (1) - 它跟 02:19:110 (2) 重疊了
  8. 02:22:391 (2) - 重疊在 02:20:516 (3) 的位置會比較好
[rhythm]
  1. 01:43:485 (1) - 對我來說 01:43:953 折返比較適合
  2. 01:47:235 (3) - ^
  3. 01:50:985 (1,1) - 組合成1個轉盤,因為第2個轉盤長度太短,不合符標準
  4. 02:24:735 (1) - 同樣地在 02:25:203 折返
  5. 02:51:922 (5) - 在 02:52:391 折返
  6. 02:54:735 (1) - 在 02:55:203 或者 02:55:672 結束,不然不合符Voice
  7. 03:08:797 (2) - 03:09:266 折返;我不懂為甚麼要Easy用藍線,既不合Voice也不合難度要求
  8. 03:15:360 (1) - 跟著"Yo~~" 所以結束在 03:20:985
  9. 03:47:235 (1) - 同樣地 03:46:531 開始比較適合
  10. 04:22:860 (1) - 對我來說 04:26:610 結束會比較好,只是這會浪費了 04:24:735 這個Finish;我的做法會刪掉這個轉盤,用Note、Sliider取替,然後到 04:24:735 之後繼續做下去 :)
[Hitsound]
  1. 01:24:735 (1) - Finish代替;就像您的 02:49:110 這樣
  2. 04:05:985 (1) - ^
要吃午餐去, 而且還有GD趕著做QQ
所以只是很隨便mod了~ That all :)
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

SB挺美的0.0
thx~xD


ertyukjh010 wrote:



Request from Game-pm

[General]

  1. Inconsistency in Tags:
    Happy Birthday! : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
    i_k's Normal : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
    lucyfly's Hard : ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara
    Rainbow's Easy : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
fix!~

要吃午餐去, 而且還有GD趕著做QQ
所以只是很隨便mod了~ That all :)
THX!~ur mod~
Mystica
some random checks.

[SB]
04:05:985 - 直接flash出來多好

[Rainbow]
00:10:906 (3,1) - actually this rhyme not fit in a easy diff.
00:13:485 (3,4) - about this?00:37:391 (1,1) - nc not a good choice
00:37:860 (1,2) - rhyme a little rapid not like the next pattern
00:57:547 - add a note really fit
01:24:735 (1,2,3) - why (1) and (2) is 1.0 but (2) and (3) is 0.7 dis
01:26:610 (3,4,1) - consider to stack them
01:37:156 (3) - according to your patterns I think it may put at 01:37:391 -
01:41:610 (3) - nazi mod
01:43:485 (1) - not fit
03:03:172 (1,2) - not good for noob
break time not feels very good...but it depends on you

[IK]
00:51:453 (1) - spinner a little short....um...but ok here
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - place not very beauty to see..consider it's place?
03:15:360 (2) - make it symmetrical.

[hard]
你不覺得太跳了么
00:37:860 (3) - 尼瑪sv
懶得看的大概應該是感覺不飽滿感

[I]
00:07:860 (1,2) - 對稱放多好看現在真心搓
01:31:063 - 倒是沒覺得這三連意義很大
01:31:297 (1,2,3) - 以後注意下design現在擺放真心不好看
01:49:110 - 這段還是填充點3/4更符合rhyme
02:16:766 - 這個五連感覺是硬塞進去的
02:21:922 (2) - 往上拉幾個grid可以更好看
02:35:047 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這兩串沒看出感覺
後面偷懶了大概就是對rhyme還是有些掌握不夠不過作為新手很好了

閃人睡覺
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Mystica wrote:

some random checks.

[I]
00:07:860 (1,2) - 對稱放多好看現在真心搓 瞎~我不知道怎么对称。。。orz~
01:31:063 - 倒是沒覺得這三連意義很大 fix~
01:31:297 (1,2,3) - 以後注意下design現在擺放真心不好看 fix~
01:49:110 - 這段還是填充點3/4更符合rhyme fix~
02:16:766 - 這個五連感覺是硬塞進去的 有鼓点的说~
02:21:922 (2) - 往上拉幾個grid可以更好看 fix~
02:35:047 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這兩串沒看出感覺 fix~
後面偷懶了大概就是對rhyme還是有些掌握不夠不過作為新手很好了 thx~

閃人睡覺
thx ur mod!~
Amainya
Rainbow's Easy

00:20:985 (3) - 滑条中间部分有点遮挡
01:28:016 (4,1) - 叠在01:26:610 (3) - 的结尾感觉有点不合适
01:50:985 (1,1) - 这种感觉在easy不合适
03:04:578 (1,2,3) - 感觉放在这里,整体看起来遮挡比较多
04:15:360 (2,1) 和 00:49:110 (2,3) - 遮挡了(其实我也不知道合适不合适


i_k's Normal

02:32:235 (1) - 看起来感觉有点奇怪
01:45:360 (2,3,4,5) - 这种不知道在nor合适不合适


说了这么多废话真是抱歉呢~~~加油~star,sb很漂亮~
jossieP
I cant fucking read what this boy posted @OrangeNeKo
oh new page

Mystica wrote:

[IK]
00:51:453 (1) - spinner a little short....um...but ok here wut? xD
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - place not very beauty to see..consider it's place? suggest? ;3?
03:15:360 (2) - make it symmetrical. blanketing attemp, cant make symmetrical pattern
-Baby Strawberry-
简单mod一下~

Insane
SPOILER
00:39:735 (6) - 歪啦
00:52:860 (3) - ^
01:21:219 (1) - 我觉得从这里01:21:102开始感觉比较好
01:28:485 (1) - 修型
01:50:047 (4) - 有点歪
02:19:110 (4) - 说实话形状。。。好扭曲的赶脚,能看得出来是跟之前拉条重叠,但是确实不好看。。。要不要试试这样?
02:43:485 (3,6) - 这两个完全可以尾压尾的
02:50:281 (5) - 形状修修好
03:11:610 (3,5) - 这两个压着点感觉不太好其实。。。这种好些没?
大问题没有,拉条形状需要在自己仔细拉拉形状,对称才好~

Hard
SPOILER
02:45:594 (1) - 我觉得在02:45:477开始比较好
02:50:281 (3) - 歪掉了
03:17:117个人来讲这里加个note我觉得会舒服些
挺不错的没什么问题

Normal
SPOILER
01:22:156 (1) - better start at 01:21:922
01:31:297 (4) - maybe whistler instead of finish at the tail?
02:45:360 (3) - maybe do it like this
03:11:141 (5) - i think finish is better than whistler here
03:47:235 (5) - after this i suggest this:, all circles added have a finish hitsound
others are good~

Easy
SPOILER
01:07:391 这段别空着啊。。。。
01:26:610 (1,1) - 这个遮挡不怎么好。。。但是我又没找打好的解决办法。。。
01:35:516加circle
01:41:141 (2) - 歪了
01:41:610 (3) - 修修型
01:49:110 (1) - 形状
02:24:735 (1,1) - 其实这两个完全可以上下对称来的
02:29:422 (2) - 形状
02:32:703继续别空着
02:53:328这一片加东西否则太空
03:10:203加circle kiai别空着最好
03:11:141^
03:15:360 (1) - 这个有点太长了吧。。。其实完全可以把前面稍微map点然后03:17:703开始转圈
03:32:235 (1) - 这个有点不跟节奏感觉
03:42:547 (2) - 改成拉条至后面白线或者后面白线加circle
03:52:156 break 太长了感觉,后面可以map掉 03:58:684这里开始的白线放第一个circle然后就如图
04:22:860 (3) - 歪掉。。。
04:09:266加circle
04:11:141^
04:14:891^
我觉得这个难度还需要在努努力啦~

大家继续加油~迟早会rank的不要太着急~ Good luck guys~
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

简单mod一下~

Insane
SPOILER
00:39:735 (6) - 歪啦 fix~
00:52:860 (3) - ^ ^
01:21:219 (1) - 我觉得从这里01:21:102开始感觉比较好 fix~
01:28:485 (1) - 修型 fix~
01:50:047 (4) - 有点歪 fix~
02:19:110 (4) - 说实话形状。。。好扭曲的赶脚,能看得出来是跟之前拉条重叠,但是确实不好看。。。要不要试试这样? fix~
02:43:485 (3,6) - 这两个完全可以尾压尾的 fix~
02:50:281 (5) - 形状修修好 fix~
03:11:610 (3,5) - 这两个压着点感觉不太好其实。。。这种好些没? fix~
大问题没有,拉条形状需要在自己仔细拉拉形状,对称才好~ 嗯^ ^~

大家继续加油~迟早会rank的不要太着急~ Good luck guys~
thx! hentai kichiku の baka o ne-chan♪~o_<!
jossieP

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Normal
01:22:156 (1) - better start at 01:21:922 long space for beginners 3;
01:31:297 (4) - maybe whistler instead of finish at the tail? nope
02:45:360 (3) - maybe do it like this dunno, mine is moar simple

03:11:141 (5) - i think finish is better than whistler here
03:47:235 (5) - after this i suggest this:, all circles added have a finish hitsound other 3 circles? but there is no sound after that D:
others are good~
ts8zs
Easy完全没在拍上……
00:45:360 (1) - 三反
00:46:766 - 加圈clap
00:47:235 (1) - 缩短
槽点太多了不吐槽了……半长滑条不是这么用的……
Normal
……
02:23:211 (4) - 既然那么在意压线的话=3=
其他的槽点还是懒得吐槽
Hard
很激动啊!终于看到个fine啊!
Insane
fine!
jossieP
cant read =3=
raririn
Hi ,recheck
mod only Easy and the creator's diff
just nazi

[SB]
*Beatmap那里没有Sun Rainbow么?
*上下两个Lucyfly的'L'大小写不统一
*我觉得可能需要癫痫警告 找MAT/BAT确认一下
04:05:516 - 到 04:05:750 - 麻麻呀这里SB好可怕 让人以为突然FL了 强烈的建议删除

[General]
*开始部分的音量建议是50%-60%S 那个100%N建议80%N
*建议在01:04:110 - 01:05:047 - 01:05:985 - 01:06:922 - 加绿线让音量渐强 如果你开始音量改了的话就65% 70% 75% 80%这样

[Rainbow's Easy]
00:37:391 (1) - 这里没必要NC的啦
开始的部分我还是建议像其他难度一样下whistle clap显得略有些嘈杂
00:39:735 (2) - 这样的长度在Easy可能会造成误读 建议拉长
00:41:610 - 到 00:46:766 - 每两组NC建议合并 太短了
00:53:797 (2) - 如果你不去掉这里的whistle那么建议在00:54:735 (1) - 这个开头加whistle
01:08:094 - 强烈的不建议空着 空的多了确实会给新手造成影响
01:24:735 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 彩虹你什么意思 毫无理由的变NC是不行的O_O
01:47:235 (3) - 折返上不应该是whistle 改clap
02:02:469 - 意义不明的break
02:09:735 (1) - 第二个tick拉到(x=168,y=104) 第三个tick拉到(x=144,y=132)
02:19:110 (2) - 折返上去掉clap 听起来不好
02:28:485 (1) - 咋这么多tick 去掉2个
02:50:047 (3) - ^
02:56:610 (1) - 拉正点 显然不是个等腰梯形啥的
03:13:016 (2) - 建议改finish
03:32:235 - Easy强烈地不建议变速 很容易误读 而且这里的变速最重要的是你DSx2了 这样就很难读
03:58:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段我建议下whistle
04:11:610 (5) - spacing
04:22:860 (3) - 头whistle

[Happy Birthday!]
01:21:102 (1) - 这里我不建议用转盘代替 可以在01:21:102 - 01:21:922 - 01:22:391 - 分别加1/2 1/4 1/8的折返滑条 不过这梗有人喜欢有人讨厌你自己看看吧
01:38:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这stream还是别减DS做成一串长连打好

fine.Good Luck with rank~

ts8zs wrote:

Normal
……
02:23:211 (4) - 既然那么在意压线的话=3=
其他的槽点还是懒得吐槽
@ikari_kyon
I can't totally understand that ts8zs said,but I think it's really a bit hard for a Normal diff,so I suggest you change it into two circles at02:23:328 - and 02:23:563 -
ts8zs

raririn wrote:

Hi ,recheck
mod only Easy and the creator's diff
just nazi

[SB]
*Beatmap那里没有Sun Rainbow么?
*上下两个Lucyfly的'L'大小写不统一
*我觉得可能需要癫痫警告 找MAT/BAT确认一下
04:05:516 - 到 04:05:750 - 麻麻呀这里SB好可怕 让人以为突然FL了 强烈的建议删除

[General]
*开始部分的音量建议是50%-60%S 那个100%N建议80%N
*建议在01:04:110 - 01:05:047 - 01:05:985 - 01:06:922 - 加绿线让音量渐强 如果你开始音量改了的话就65% 70% 75% 80%这样

[Rainbow's Easy]
00:37:391 (1) - 这里没必要NC的啦
开始的部分我还是建议像其他难度一样下whistle clap显得略有些嘈杂
00:39:735 (2) - 这样的长度在Easy可能会造成误读 建议拉长
00:41:610 - 到 00:46:766 - 每两组NC建议合并 太短了
00:53:797 (2) - 如果你不去掉这里的whistle那么建议在00:54:735 (1) - 这个开头加whistle
01:08:094 - 强烈的不建议空着 空的多了确实会给新手造成影响
01:24:735 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 彩虹你什么意思 毫无理由的变NC是不行的O_O
01:47:235 (3) - 折返上不应该是whistle 改clap
02:02:469 - 意义不明的break
02:09:735 (1) - 第二个tick拉到(x=168,y=104) 第三个tick拉到(x=144,y=132)
02:19:110 (2) - 折返上去掉clap 听起来不好
02:28:485 (1) - 咋这么多tick 去掉2个
02:50:047 (3) - ^
02:56:610 (1) - 拉正点 显然不是个等腰梯形啥的
03:13:016 (2) - 建议改finish
03:32:235 - Easy强烈地不建议变速 很容易误读 而且这里的变速最重要的是你DSx2了 这样就很难读
03:58:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段我建议下whistle
04:11:610 (5) - spacing
04:22:860 (3) - 头whistle

[Happy Birthday!]
01:21:102 (1) - 这里我不建议用转盘代替 可以在01:21:102 - 01:21:922 - 01:22:391 - 分别加1/2 1/4 1/8的折返滑条 不过这梗有人喜欢有人讨厌你自己看看吧
01:38:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这stream还是别减DS做成一串长连打好

fine.Good Luck with rank~

ts8zs wrote:

Normal
……
02:23:211 (4) - 既然那么在意压线的话=3=
其他的槽点还是懒得吐槽
@ikari_kyon
I can't totally understand that ts8zs said,but I think it's reallt a bit hard for a Normal diff,so I suggest you change it into two circles at02:23:328 - and 02:23:563 -
帮我全吐槽了啊=w=GJob
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

raririn wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

Normal
……
02:23:211 (4) - 既然那么在意压线的话=3=
其他的槽点还是懒得吐槽
@ikari_kyon
I can't totally understand that ts8zs said,but I think it's reallt a bit hard for a Normal diff,so I suggest you change it into two circles at02:23:328 - and 02:23:563 -
nice translate!im entangled with how to translate it think all the morning....orz...
ts8zs

Athena Tennos wrote:

nice translate!im entangled with how to translate it think all the morning....orz...
噗 我笑了
jossieP
what? ↑
ts8zs

ikari_kyon wrote:

what? ↑
I laughed
Sun Rainbow
=A=我先说SB,SB那里FL的……其实我有吐槽过“开演唱会吗=A=”
那个毫无理由的变NC我也不知道怎么回事ORZ
那些BREAK什么的……听听歌曲吧……也是为了减低难度=A=
jossieP
<_<
-kevincela-
Hi,I'm sorry for my delay,but here's the mod you requested :D

[General]

  1. Lucyfly's diff is missing the tags "Sun Rainbow Kadono Toshikazu",remember to add them!
[Rainbow's Easy]

00:39:735 (2) - The slider's end is missing a clap,add it
00:46:297 (2) - Little suggestion here,if you think it's not right you can freely skip: if you want to make a more enjoyable pattern,it could be better to copy-paste 00:45:360 (1) -,flip it horizontally and vertically and put it at x:212 y:292,instead of making a new slider. By doing this 00:44:891 (4,1,2) - will become prettier and nice to play too!
00:54:735 (1) - Move the new combo on 00:56:610 (2) -,to follow the singer in a better way and to mantain the consistency with 00:52:860 (1,2) -
01:03:641 (4,1,2,3) - What do you think of making the pattern like in this picture? (to inform you, 01:05:047 (2) - is just 01:04:110 (1) - flipped horizontally and its start matches with 01:03:641 (4) - )
01:37:860 (1,2,1) - Move 01:37:860 (1) - at x:60 y:108 and move 01:39:266 (2) - at x:252 y:208,so that you'll have a linear flow that IMHO flows better here.
01:45:360 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:47:235 (3) - ,fits way better in that way
02:53:563 (6,7) - I suggest you to make instead of these notes 2 sliders long 1/2,here's an example of how it should look like:

This would sound better and would be easier to play for beginner,since it's just 1/1
04:07:860 (1) - Move the New Combo on 04:09:735 (3) - ,as now it fits better with the singer's voice

[i_k's Normal]

  1. 00:19:813 (4,5) - This is just a cosmetic thing,but it would be cool to change this slider and the note's position in this way?
  2. 01:21:922 (1) - Move this 1/2 before its current beginning and make it longer by 1/2? Imho,something like this would fit better.
  3. 01:48:875 (3) - Move this at x:256 y:88?
  4. 02:20:047 (1) - Move the new combo on 02:19:110 (4) - and add a new combo at 02:20:985 (3) -? Imho,it fits better with the singer's voice.
[lucyfly's Hard]

  1. 00:07:860 (5) - New combo here,to keep the consistency with the following patterns
  2. 00:50:047 (4) - CTRL+R? Imho,it flows better in this way
  3. 01:18:172 - Add a note here stacked with 01:17:235 (6) - and having a whistle?
  4. 02:14:422 (4) - Same as 00:50:047 (4) -
  5. 02:42:547 - Same as 01:18:172 -
    Good diff, I'm just a bit disappointed for the use of copy-paste but okay.
Will mod the other diffs later by editing this post,since now I have to go~ Done,will anyway skip the Insane diff because of the lenght.
Pretty solid map,good job! Good luck with your map :D
Kotone
01:49:578 (2) - 少了個clap
路過 不用kd
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

karenying wrote:

01:49:578 (2) - 少了個clap
路過 不用kd
/.\。。。。这是神马情况。。。。额。。。嗯。。。哪个diff/.\。。。orz
已发现。。。fix~
-kevincela-
Mod finished,remember to check it! ^^
kanpakyin
Hi.
Request is taken from my queue.

[General]
  1. Inconsistent tag, this is an unrankable issue, ensure that it should be fixed properly.
  2. Inconsistent Kiai time, this is not a must to fix, but still recommend.
[Rainbow's Easy]
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 03:03:172 (1,2) - (bad gameplay) This 1/2 click break down the flow because this is only 1/2 click in this diff which make it inconsistent. Remove it can improve the flow and make it consistency.
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:07:860 (1) - I would remove the new combo here because it seems too unnecessary and I don't find any reasons that new combo is needed.
    2. 00:37:860 (1) - ^Same.
    3. 00:37:860 (1) - I feel weird with that flow, how about remove all the reverse and then add a new slider at 00:38:797 - ? Two sliders here look much better than one.
    4. 01:04:110 (1) - The slider shape is just...weird to me. The slider is collapsed by too many superfluous waypoints.
    5. 01:08:328 (x) - The break time is too long, I highly suggest shortening it to 10~15s
    6. 02:32:703 - ^
    7. 04:04:110 (1) - I'm not sure about this but I'm wondering this might be too short for easy. Consider removing it and put a note or even a slider there?
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:37:391 (1) - Remove the clap sound here, it sounds weird to me.
    2. 00:37:860 (1) - And then add a finish sound at the beguinning of the slider because of the strong accent. A finish would help with emphasizing the accent and give a cool effect to it.
    3. 00:39:735 (2) - I guess you were missing a clap at the end of the slider. Because you had put the clap sounds on 2,4-beats.
    4. 01:34:110 (1) - Are you missing a clap at the reverse of the slider?
    5. 01:35:516 (2) - ^Same here.
[i_k's Normal]
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 02:57:547 (3,1,2) - (bad gameplay) I can see a inconsistent spacing here, it will affect the gameplay, please use distance snap to re-snap it again.
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 00:18:172 (1) - I think it would be better if you follow the vocal here, just move this note to 00:17:938 - and then adjust the spacing.
    2. 01:14:422 (3) - The shape of this slider looks weird to me. I would like to give you a recommendation here, feel free to ignore it.
      Suggestion

      300,251,74422,2,0,B|267:254|256:233|256:233|245:252|207:250,2,100
    3. 01:17:235 (1) - You should fix this one if you fix the previous one since you are making a symmetry pattern.
    4. 01:33:641 (3) - I will move this up a bit if I were you to ensure that (3)- doesn't touch the beginning of (2)- .If you change that, you should adjust the position of slider (4)- to make the whole pattern more beautiful.
    5. 02:23:211 (4) - Probably me only, I don't recommend putting 3/4 in Normal diff because some of recruit can't identify the 3/4 and you have used a small spacing-style, so it will be more difficult to recognise it.
    6. 02:30:360 (6) - I can't get the intention of putting 3/4 rhythm here, it doesn't fit the music, I think 1/1 or 1/2 is much appropriate here.
    7. 02:52:860 (1,2) - ^Same.
    8. 03:11:610 (1) - ^Same. I guess 1/1 at 03:11:610 (1) - and then add a note at 03:12:313 - would be nice.
    9. 03:34:110 (1,2) - I suggest putting 1/2 here just like what you do at 03:32:235 (1,2) - .
    10. 04:04:461 (2) - Same as 02:23:211-
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:19:813 (4) - How about removing the finish at the beginning of slider because I don't hear any accent there and it sounds too noisy imo.
    2. 00:54:735 (2) - Remove the whistle at the reverse of the slider because the pitch of 'no' sound is much lower than 'de' and 'wa'.
[lucyfly's Hard]
  1. Issue/unrankable stuff
    (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
    1. 01:30:125 (1) - (bad gameplay) I highly suggest removing this slow down section because it is really hard to identify with speed up and jump, sudden slow down break the flow and causes a miss.
    2. 01:45:125 (1) - ^
    3. 02:54:500 (1) - ^
    4. 03:09:500 (1) - ^
    5. 04:11:375 (1) - ^
  2. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 03:02:235 (6) - Sorry, but I can't understand this. Why were you putting a 3/4 here? It didn't fit the music and seems that 1/2 or even 1/1 is much better.
    2. 03:45:125 (1) - I think this spinner should stop at 03:47:235 - because the instrument is stopped at there.
    3. Hard怎麼這麼多大跳...麻,就是有些跳打起來不順而已, 其他沒什麼問題.
  3. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:20:750 (1) - How about chaning the end of the spinner to normal-finish sound? Just like what other difficulties do.
    2. 02:51:219 (1) - I feel like a whistle at the beginning of the slider.
[Happy Birthday!]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 01:37:860 (7) - Again, can't find the intention of using 3/4 here. Highly suggest changing it to 1/2 or 1/1.
    2. 02:23:797 (7) - I think simple 1/2 here would be nice.
    3. 02:42:313 (6) -違和感滿載, 強烈建議修改= =
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:49:110 (2,3) - Remove the whistle sound at the reverse of the slider beause the pitch of the beginning and the end of the slider is much higher than the reverse.
    2. 01:20:985 (1) - How about adding a finish here to fit your previous finishs?
    3. 01:34:110 (1) - I will add a whislte at the end of the slider if I were you.
    4. 02:52:860 (1) - I guess you are missing a clap at the end of the slider because it breaks the hitsounds flow.
Good luck with ranking~
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

-kevincela- wrote:

Mod finished,remember to check it! ^^
okey~thx ur mod!~

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi.
Request is taken from my queue.

[Happy Birthday!]
  1. Beatmap design/suggestion
    (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
    1. 01:37:860 (7) - Again, can't find the intention of using 3/4 here. Highly suggest changing it to 1/2 or 1/1. fix!~
    2. 02:23:797 (7) - I think simple 1/2 here would be nice. fix!~
    3. 02:42:313 (6) -違和感滿載, 強烈建議修改= = fix!~.../.\~
  2. Hitsound
    (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
    1. 00:49:110 (2,3) - Remove the whistle sound at the reverse of the slider beause the pitch of the beginning and the end of the slider is much higher than the reverse. fix!~
    2. 01:20:985 (1) - How about adding a finish here to fit your previous finishs? fix!~
    3. 01:34:110 (1) - I will add a whislte at the end of the slider if I were you. fix!~
    4. 02:52:860 (1) - I guess you are missing a clap at the end of the slider because it breaks the hitsounds flow. ye!!!~~fix!~
Good luck with ranking~
xD THX ur mod!!!~

EDIT: rainbow's Easy all fix~
EDIT: lucyfly's Hard fix~
jossieP
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

ikari_kyon wrote:

http://puu.sh/O6Wo
\o/~
all diff fix~
lovhin456
Hello

[General]
- Fine

[Skin]
- Use this hitcircle instead http://puu.sh/P2Dh or use this one http://puu.sh/P2DC The only difference is that in my opinion the one in gray does a better job in game
- You are missing a spinner-spin
- You have a sliderfollowcircle that means you must complete the set with a slider ball and also the slider score points

[SB]
- 00:07:860 ~ A pulsation here with the gray images would be nice
- 00:37:860 ~ A pulsation of the girls would be good here
- 01:54:735 ~ A pulsation of all the images in color would be good
- Actually in all my suggestions a pulsation or a flash work

[Rainbow's Easy]
- Your break placement is awful to be honest, use the break placement as in the other diffs
- Through the difficulty you stack quite a lot, avoid that because stacks are difficult for new players
- 00:08:563 ~ Shorten this slider until here then add a note on 00:09:031
- 00:10:906 (5,1) ~ Don't stack these, it will confuse players
- 00:20:985 ~ You could something better than this, I mean more pretty
- 00:20:985 ~ Remove the finish
- 00:49:110 (4,5) ~ You can easily avoid the overlap here
- 00:50:047 ~ Add a repeat so it's easier for players to keep up with the rhythm and also hit the next note
- 00:54:266 ~ Add a note
- 00:54:735 ~ Remove new combo
- 00:56:610 ~ Add new combo then add a note on 00:57:547
- 01:19:110 ~ Players will hit earlier the notes and fail if these keep spaced like this, space them out correctly
- 01:31:297 ~ New combo then remove new combo on the next note
- 01:37:625 ~ Move (1) here and shorten it so it ends on 01:38:328 then add a note on 01:38:797. After all that remove the new combo on (1) then add the new combo on the note you just added
- 01:45:360 ~ Remove new combo then add new combo on the next note
- 01:49:110 ~ Remove new combo
- 02:18:172 (1,2) ~ Don't stack
- 02:19:110 ~ Don't do this, why make it harder than what it actually is ? Extend the slider by 1/4
- 02:43:485 ~ Same as 01:19:110
- 02:52:860 (5,6,7) ~ Jumping from white to red then white tick is a bad idea in an easy diff, most players will probably hit earlier/later than what you need to hit
- 03:32:235 to 03:46:297 ~ Remap all this without the slowdown, using slowdowns on easy diffs is a no, it will really confuse players and probably make them slider break their combos
- 04:00:360 ~ New combo
- 04:02:235 ~ ^ also no need to put whistle on every note there
- 04:05:985 ~ Spacing ?
- 04:07:860 ~ Remove new combo then new combo on the next note
- 04:09:266 ~ Avoid the overlap between this and the next slider
- This difficulty still needs more work

[i_k's Normal]
- 00:14:422 ~ Add new combo then remove new combo on the next note
- 00:18:172 ~ Remove new combo then add new combo on the next note
- 00:40:203 ~ Remove NC then add NC on 00:41:610 and finally remove NC on 00:43:485
- 00:51:219 ~ Start the spinner here or you can start it on 00:50:985 where the singer starts holding the note
- 01:06:219 ~ Basically the same as above
- 01:15:828 ~ Add a repeat
- 01:17:235 ~ Remove NC then add NC to the next slider and remove NC on 01:20:047
- 01:20:985 ~ Maybe add a finish
- 01:21:922 ~ Start the spinner here
- 01:44:891 ~ Remove NC then add NC on the next slider
- 02:17:235 (1,2) ~ Spacing ?
- 02:30:360 ~ Add NC
- 03:03:641 ~ Add NC then remove NC on the next note
- 03:40:203 ~ Move (1) here then make a 1/2 slider on 03:40:672 and add a repeat
- 03:42:781 ~ Move (6) here
- 03:47:703 ~ I don't know about this spinner, there's nothing in the music/vocals
- 04:20:985 (1,2,3) ~ Make a triangle but not like the one you have right now, I mean like the usual triangle

[lucyfly's Hard]
- I'm going to be really drastic here, the slowdowns and speed ups during this map are no good at all. I highly suggest you to please remap the beginning of the song, remove all those slowdowns and maybe some jumps. Also you use speed ups sometimes which don't make sense at all because the song is quite calm and doesn't suggest these speed ups, they don't make sense at all
- The distance snap you're using is way too much even with 1.00x speed. I know this can sound like something very drastic but I have also noticed the slow speed for the diff, try using 1.60 for speed this means remapping a little
- I'm sorry but I can't mod this diff, I only suggest you to remap it using 1.60 speed and 1.0x distance snap or the current speed with a proper distance snap (probably between 1.2~1.5) also no speeds ups, there is room for slowdowns but they have to go with the music

[Happy Birthday!]
- Are you really using 1.40 for speed on an insane diff lol it's fine, the diff goes smoothly
- 01:10:672 ~ Remove new combo
- 01:48:406 ~ Remove clap
- Good although I don't really know about the 1.40x sections ..
jossieP

lovhin456 wrote:

[i_k's Normal]
- 00:14:422 ~ Add new combo then remove new combo on the next note I havent added a new combo here because of the previous blanket that this slider has with previous hitcircle, but Ill remove the combo on next note because of I think is weird right now, so next combo will be on 00:16:063 (8) -
- 00:18:172 ~ Remove new combo then add new combo on the next note 00:18:172 (1,2,3) - are a triangular formation, wanna keep it the same colour
- 00:40:203 ~ Remove NC then add NC on 00:41:610 and finally remove NC on 00:43:485 00:40:203 (1) - is a reflected circle from 00:37:860 (2) - but as 00:40:672 (2) - is a slider I added new combo on previous note because of they are not symmetrical at all, and about 00:43:485 (1) - is almost simmilar as this
- 00:51:219 ~ Start the spinner here or you can start it on 00:50:985 where the singer starts holding the note Im starting the spinner on second bass effect and 1/1 distance is not more soft for beginners?
- 01:06:219 ~ Basically the same as above eyup
- 01:15:828 ~ Add a repeat k
- 01:17:235 ~ Remove NC then add NC to the next slider and remove NC on 01:20:047 as 01:17:235 (1) - is on the same location of 01:14:422 (3) - different colour will make it moar visible
- 01:20:985 ~ Maybe add a finish previous finishes where supporting on that high piano parts, and as this part hasnt so..
- 01:21:922 ~ Start the spinner here
- 01:44:891 ~ Remove NC then add NC on the next slider
- 02:17:235 (1,2) ~ Spacing ? wut, sorry
- 02:30:360 ~ Add NC I think the formation here is pretty noticable about the combo
- 03:03:641 ~ Add NC then remove NC on the next note symmetrical with 03:00:828 (2) -
- 03:40:203 ~ Move (1) here then make a 1/2 slider on 03:40:672 and add a repeat I was following the bass effects, but looks like vocals are higher here
- 03:42:781 ~ Move (6) here wich (6) /o/?
- 03:47:703 ~ I don't know about this spinner, there's nothing in the music/vocals supported on silence o.o?
- 04:20:985 (1,2,3) ~ Make a triangle but not like the one you have right now, I mean like the usual triangle sorry

[lucyfly's Hard]
- I'm going to be really drastic here, the slowdowns and speed ups during this map are no good at all. I highly suggest you to please remap the beginning of the song, remove all those slowdowns and maybe some jumps. Also you use speed ups sometimes which don't make sense at all because the song is quite calm and doesn't suggest these speed ups, they don't make sense at all
- The distance snap you're using is way too much even with 1.00x speed. I know this can sound like something very drastic but I have also noticed the slow speed for the diff, try using 1.60 for speed this means remapping a little
- I'm sorry but I can't mod this diff, I only suggest you to remap it using 1.60 speed and 1.0x distance snap or the current speed with a proper distance snap (probably between 1.2~1.5) also no speeds ups, there is room for slowdowns but they have to go with the music
↑ totally according with this slowdowns are so asdfasdfas D;

update
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello

[General]
- Fine

[Skin]
- Use this hitcircle instead http://puu.sh/P2Dh or use this one http://puu.sh/P2DC The only difference is that in my opinion the one in gray does a better job in game ~i choose the first and feel better now~xD...THX!~
- You are missing a spinner-spin fix~
- You have a sliderfollowcircle that means you must complete the set with a slider ball and also the slider score points fix~

[SB]
- 00:07:860 ~ A pulsation here with the gray images would be nice
- 00:37:860 ~ A pulsation of the girls would be good here
- 01:54:735 ~ A pulsation of all the images in color would be good
- Actually in all my suggestions a pulsation or a flash work
↑all fix~

[Rainbow's Easy]
i delete this diff now...Creator allow i delete it~......and...i dont really need easy diff right~?

[Happy Birthday!]
- Are you really using 1.40 for speed on an insane diff lol it's fine, the diff goes smoothly \o/~im r newible mapper..so..im not dare the crazy diff/.\...first for rank~;_;.....
- 01:10:672 ~ Remove new combo fix~
- 01:48:406 ~ Remove clap fix~
- Good although I don't really know about the 1.40x sections .........;_;

ikari_kyon wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

[lucyfly's Hard]
- I'm going to be really drastic here, the slowdowns and speed ups during this map are no good at all. I highly suggest you to please remap the beginning of the song, remove all those slowdowns and maybe some jumps. Also you use speed ups sometimes which don't make sense at all because the song is quite calm and doesn't suggest these speed ups, they don't make sense at all
- The distance snap you're using is way too much even with 1.00x speed. I know this can sound like something very drastic but I have also noticed the slow speed for the diff, try using 1.60 for speed this means remapping a little
- I'm sorry but I can't mod this diff, I only suggest you to remap it using 1.60 speed and 1.0x distance snap or the current speed with a proper distance snap (probably between 1.2~1.5) also no speeds ups, there is room for slowdowns but they have to go with the music
↑ totally according with this slowdowns are so asdfasdfas D;
\o/.....orz.....zzZZ.....remaping...;_;......

update
okey~...thx ur speed update!~
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