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Nomiya Ayumi - colourful

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himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年7月26日 at 15:28:05

Artist: Nomiya Ayumi
Title: colourful
BPM: 120
Filesize: 8535kb
Play Time: 04:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dancing with himy! (4.63 stars, 447 notes)
  2. Normal (3.48 stars, 234 notes)
Download: Nomiya Ayumi - colourful
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My 4th map, a song from Comic Market75. It takes me long time to find a suitable background picture..

wish u like the BG(?
Last edited by himydanny , edited 30 times in total.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
I have some opinion went to give you ^^

I thing the song is to long~

[Normal]
Change ~
00:24:193 Can move a bit left.
02:05:684 Can move a bit far.

[Dancing with me!!]
Timing :
Slider Tick Rate can change to 1 ~
Change ~
01:07:187 Can move a bit right.
03:05:552 Can change to a bit left.
04:08:422 Can move a bit right

(Some of the lest of Hit-circle can change to <Finish>)

It is to long !?
Can you find a short one ~
It will be boring~

You can make a difficulty for ease~

I like this song ~
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny

kioukiou wrote:

BPM : 120.00 / Offset : 17212

[Normal]

fine.

[Dancing with me!]
03:36:71 (1,2,3) - a bad jump. :(

Star for you.


really a foolish mistake, thanks kiou2 :)

fixed
encorehow
3 posts
Joined October 2008
encorehow
it's really a nice song! perhaps "dancing with me" is a little longer, but it's ok now.star
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
[Normal]
可以多加一些whistle
00:21:186(1)-把末端提上一点，保持水平
00:22:346(2)-^
00:29:560(5)-提上一些，与4保持水平
00:31:560(5)-^
00:49:184(1)-缩减1/8拍
1:23:931(7)-提上一些，保持水平
1:35:180(5)-^
1:39:555(5)-延长1/8拍
2:32:675(1,1,1,1)-用distance snap，现在这样的排列容易按早
3:05:672(5)-重排节奏，现在没有对上

[Dancing with me!]
play time可能太久了，不过没什么影响
可以把note排的再整齐（光滑。我不会表达了- -）一点

nice map
+star
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny
CJ u r quite an attentive mapper! ;) i haven't known that there were so many mistakes in normal( include a foolish spacing mistake :? . really thanks :)
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
full love star :P
v2b
504 posts
Joined October 2008
v2b
star ;)
deepsea
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855 posts
Joined April 2008
deepsea
dig dig dig it out
ACC
54 posts
Joined March 2009
ACC
you work hard :D
mican
mican
hm...maybe my star is surplus ?
Sousei
207 posts
Joined May 2008
Sousei
爱‘ly!@
hhhhhhhhhhhh_old
1 post
Joined March 2009
hhhhhhhhhhhh_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
good song ww

shooting star~~~ :)
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Hi :D

[Normal]:
00:19:56 (4) - 1/4 back and readjust spacing? I understand if you don't want to do this since it might be harder for newbies to get the rhythm.
01:07:68 (1,1) - For prettiness, make these horizontal flips of the other (1,1).
01:33:68 (6) - (REALLY OPTIONAL) I think this isn't straight with (1) and (2).
01:35:18 (5,6) - They're all minor like above...but can you make it straight with (4)?
02:01:69 (6) - 1/4 back and readjust spacing?

[Dancing with me!]:
04:08:69 (3) - Move a little more to the left, like on Grid Level 3.

It's a pretty relaxing and soothing song I suppose...I don't have any negative comments, but I don't have any epic ones too. XD

Star~ Take it! :3
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny
fixed some of your suggestions. i didn't like to use the Grid Snap :3.

but the spacing problem u point out is helpful ;)

then l'll bring this to the bats. Good Luck to me.
Lumiere
163 posts
Joined November 2008
Lumiere
nice map ... ;3
the bg *o*

Star!
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
Spacing is fine

Normal follow many vocals
it is a bit hard for some players IMO
maybe use some sliders for those 3/4 divisors

Hard is all good

About hitsounds
A bit too many claps
clap+whistle at the same noet doesn`t fit the song
Soft finish fits the song

Offset:17212
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
You didn't use Alace's suggested offset.
Please use it.

- Dancing with himy!:
04:33:56 (5) - Move away from (4).

That's it!
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny
ok fixed now. but i readjust the offset to 17200. i think this offset is better.
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny

Hanyuu wrote:

hello himy i like your map its beautiful :)
XDDD maybe this will be ranked because of the BG ;)

( your signature...umm awful 8-)
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
the BG is very cute

signature ha ha
kingcobra52
osu! Alumni
974 posts
Joined May 2008
kingcobra52
Yeah. The offset is a bit early. Try 17205. (+5)

Fix and I'll bubble. Nice job. :)
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny

kingcobra52 wrote:

Yeah. The offset is a bit early. Try 17205. (+5)

Fix and I'll bubble. Nice job. :)

thanks kingcobra52! Fixed now
kingcobra52
osu! Alumni
974 posts
Joined May 2008
kingcobra52
Have a bubble then. :)
Yuukari-Banteki
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Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:26:95 (3,4,5,1,2...) - this whole section has too many hitsounds (clap and whistle)
00:35:20 (3) - replace the last clap with a finish
remove approx. half of your hitsounds cus this entire map is a spam of hitsounds


[Dancing]
00:26:45 (4) - doesnt quite flow from 3
01:32:20 (8) - improper bpm change
01:59:57 (2) - improper stacking
02:04:70 (6) - ^
02:42:20 (6) - improper bpm change
03:30:20 (2) - align with 1
03:46:20 (1) - delete and replace break (check other breaks, just cus this was the first one i noticed doesnt mean the others arent off)
04:24:57 (7) - improper bpm change
again with the hitsounds, remove a lot of them

i do not think this map should be ranked in its current state
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Random mod.

Haha, so sweet BG. *____* Wanna take it home!

[Timing]
BPM look nice and offset too. I got 17,207 on offset, but it only 2 ms.

[Hitsounds]
You use too many hitsounds, I think.
But I like your hitsounds in Dancing with himy! diff. ^^

You don't need to do this, I'm only give you suggestions.

[Normal]
00:23:70 (3) - I suggest you add clap here, remove clap here 00:24:20 (4) and add finish.
00:33:20 (1) - Finish on start on slider?
00:35:20 (3) - Not sure about this, but... Remove clap on end of slider and add finish?
00:39:70 (5) - Remove whistle on end of slider and add finish?
00:43:20 (3) - Don't use whistle and clap on the same note. Remove whistle, please.
00:57:70 (4) - New combo, maybe?
01:16:20 (7,1,2,3) - Don't use 4 claps in a row.

[Dancing with himy!]
Wow! Nice rhythm!
00:55:70 (3) - Remove note?
01:15:57 (x) - Add note?
01:20:70 (3) - Add clap on return, remove clap from end of slider.

Star'd!
RemmyX25
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RemmyX25
Guess i should pop this until himydanny fixes these.
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny
sorry for i'm busy in my finall term exam. i'll fix them weeks later.
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
dancing with himy !!
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
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himydanny
fixed some hitsounds, thanks tieff! you helped me a lot!

hunting for bubble now :3
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
[Normal]:
01:35:70 (6) - Move 1/4 back?
02:01:70 (6) - Move 1/4 back?

[Dancing with himy!]:
00:23:70 (8) - Add a finish at the endpoint of this slider?
00:40:70 (3) - Finish?

Set a nice preview point maybe? (Well, not saying the preview point right now is totally bad)

I found no other problems with this map. I think it's about to get that bubble you so wanted back. :D
himydanny
108 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
himydanny
fixed! i have not known that i could set a position as preview...>.< thanks kirby~
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Let's dance with himy~
foulcoon
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foulcoon
Good offset was suggested two or three times and wasn't used. Offset is definitely early, please use 17,212.

Otherwise its good to go.

Edit: fixed and re-bubbled, great map
MapleLeaf
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Joined April 2009
MapleLeaf
S.t.a.r.
gdeath
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Joined May 2009
gdeath
nice map
扔星星~扔星星~(/≥▽≤/)
Alace
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Alace
BG <3
Rank~
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