[General]
01:17:676 (3) - Finish start?
01:19:522 (4) - I think the extra return might be confusing for new players when most of the sliders only have 1 return.
01:26:906 (2) - ^
01:32:445 (1) - Soft finish?
01:39:830 (1) - ^
01:45:368 (3) - Same thing about extra return.
01:57:830 (5) - ^ etc etc, 2 sliders fit better in some places imo and you can create more of a pattern.
[Walking]
00:22:291 (1) - Soft finish?
00:36:599 (3) - ^ at the end.
00:47:676 (7) - Missing clap?
00:51:368 (6) - ^
01:26:676 (4,5) - Align this diagonally with 01:25:983 (3) - ?
01:32:445 (1) - Soft finish start?
01:39:368 (1) - ^ the end this time.
01:59:676 (4) - Vocal starts on 1/4.
02:01:753 - Really expected a note here.
02:44:445 - Expected notes here because of the vocal. Sleeping has them so why not here?
[Dancing]
00:22:291 (1) - Remove finish? I don't think normal finish fits, a soft finish works better imo.
00:29:676 (4) - ^
00:35:676 (2) - Align this with the end of 00:35:214 (1) - ? It looks better imo.
00:36:599 (2) - Finish? It fits the finish pattern you had in the previous section.
00:38:906 (1) - Instead of having a jump here I think it'd be cool if you placed this where the end of 00:36:599 (2) - was and then continue the pattern.
00:44:445 (4) - Finish?
01:22:522 (6,7,8,1) - I think this stack ruins your pattern. Remove the 1/4 and continue the pattern up with 1/2? It looks and plays better for me.
01:37:983 (2) - Remove finish? Just use hit normal here since the beat is strong?
01:39:830 (3) - Soft finish is better.
01:54:137 (2) - Missing clap?
01:59:661 - Inheriting section is unsnapped, since this is a slowdown section it's probably a good idea to snap it to the timeline =P
01:59:676 (2) - Hmm the vocal starts on 1/4 at 01:59:791
02:00:122 - Unsnapped inheriting section, same as I said before.
02:14:676 (8) - Why's the spacing smaller here, shouldn't gradually increase like 00:59:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
02:44:445 - I kind of wanted some more notes here since you seemed to be following the vocal D:
03:33:599 (6,7,8) - Really nazi but the spacing isn't even! (I did actually notice this in game lol)
Well those are my suggestions and opinions. I'll have to check out the other maps in the project! Star for now ^_^
- Can you find a version of the BG that's 1024x768 or another BG? The black borders are quite ugly and someone's face has been cut off in the bottom right corner!
- The 30% volume normal sections are a bit too quiet imo, increasing them to 35-40% gives more feedback.
- I also think the volume in kiai time is a bit quiet, maybe increase that to 60% or so?
- I don't really understand the combo patterns, some combos are very short like in Dancing ~ 00:26:906 (1,2,3) - and 00:35:214 (1,2) - and then some are really long ones straight after like 00:36:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also stuff like 00:21:368 (1,2,1) - in Sleeping. I just didn't understand why you did this, some of these don't even have spacing changes or new vocals. So instead of posting a combo mod maybe just look at the combos and shorten or lengthen some of them? (Unless there's a good reason ofc =P)
- Compared to Walking this is very easy. I'd suggest making this Harder or Walking easier
01:17:676 (3) - Finish start?
01:19:522 (4) - I think the extra return might be confusing for new players when most of the sliders only have 1 return.
01:26:906 (2) - ^
01:32:445 (1) - Soft finish?
01:39:830 (1) - ^
01:45:368 (3) - Same thing about extra return.
01:57:830 (5) - ^ etc etc, 2 sliders fit better in some places imo and you can create more of a pattern.
[Walking]
- AR +1 omg it makes the map look so much neater especially the overlapping 1/2. I know it's 1 less than hard but try it
00:22:291 (1) - Soft finish?
00:36:599 (3) - ^ at the end.
00:47:676 (7) - Missing clap?
00:51:368 (6) - ^
01:26:676 (4,5) - Align this diagonally with 01:25:983 (3) - ?
01:32:445 (1) - Soft finish start?
01:39:368 (1) - ^ the end this time.
01:59:676 (4) - Vocal starts on 1/4.
02:01:753 - Really expected a note here.
02:44:445 - Expected notes here because of the vocal. Sleeping has them so why not here?
[Dancing]
- End the first kiai section at 01:30:599 - like the other diffs
00:22:291 (1) - Remove finish? I don't think normal finish fits, a soft finish works better imo.
00:29:676 (4) - ^
00:35:676 (2) - Align this with the end of 00:35:214 (1) - ? It looks better imo.
00:36:599 (2) - Finish? It fits the finish pattern you had in the previous section.
00:38:906 (1) - Instead of having a jump here I think it'd be cool if you placed this where the end of 00:36:599 (2) - was and then continue the pattern.
00:44:445 (4) - Finish?
01:22:522 (6,7,8,1) - I think this stack ruins your pattern. Remove the 1/4 and continue the pattern up with 1/2? It looks and plays better for me.
01:37:983 (2) - Remove finish? Just use hit normal here since the beat is strong?
01:39:830 (3) - Soft finish is better.
01:54:137 (2) - Missing clap?
01:59:661 - Inheriting section is unsnapped, since this is a slowdown section it's probably a good idea to snap it to the timeline =P
01:59:676 (2) - Hmm the vocal starts on 1/4 at 01:59:791
02:00:122 - Unsnapped inheriting section, same as I said before.
02:14:676 (8) - Why's the spacing smaller here, shouldn't gradually increase like 00:59:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
02:44:445 - I kind of wanted some more notes here since you seemed to be following the vocal D:
03:33:599 (6,7,8) - Really nazi but the spacing isn't even! (I did actually notice this in game lol)
Well those are my suggestions and opinions. I'll have to check out the other maps in the project! Star for now ^_^