Fuuko didn't send me.
[Sleeping]
00:44:282 (2) - Keep the whistle on the return 35% sounds better.
00:53:402 - Note with new combo? I expected to follow the vocal but also it fits the same rhythm as 00:55:322 (2,3,1,2) -
00:59:642 - Note? Keep the same rhythm going ^_^
01:22:682 (1) - Hmm kinda boring, so many returns might be confusing for a newbie. I think you could do something more interesting with 2 sliders and a note.
02:39:482 (1) - ^
02:52:922 - Note? It's a strong beat, I noticed it was missing ;__;
03:08:282 (1) - So many returns. I think you could remove 2 of them and do something after to keep it interesting.
[Walking]
- I agree with ouran here, after playing Sleeping this does feel like it has a lot of 1/2 and a bit of a difficulty jump. I guess there's no need to radically alter the map since it plays well but it's something to consider next time maybe =P
00:28:922 (4) - Overlapping the hp bar too much, it looks ugly. Maybe stack it with 00:28:442 (3) - or try something like 00:33:722 (1,2,3) -
00:44:282 (3) - Keep the whistle volume at the end 35%?
01:01:082 (4) - Move this so it stacks on 01:01:562 (1) - instead?
03:46:682 (1) - Finish.
[Dancing]
00:45:242 (3) - Keep it 35% this really stands out as too loud.
01:21:242 (5) - This jump is a bit awkward due to the slider direction of 01:20:522 (4) - I think it'd be better to remove this jump and space it normally.
01:21:482 (6) - Reverse selection on this if you do ^
02:52:202 (1) - Hmm I feel this jump is a bit too big, it certainly feels a lot bigger than 02:54:122 (1) -
03:30:362 (1) - This jump was a bit awkward for me too because of the direction of 03:29:882 (6) - maybe move this sliders position?
03:43:802 (1) - ^ but because this one feels much bigger than the others.
03:46:682 (1) - Stack this with 03:46:442 (5) - and add finish? The new combo doesn't really help me notice the spacing change here >_>
Good map! Those are my opinions from playing, let me know what you think. Star.