This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 июля 2012 г. at 8:29:29

Artist: ATB
Title: Marrakech
Tags: andre tanneberger trance no silence tiff lacey
BPM: 133
Filesize: 2345kb
Play Time: 02:21
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,84 stars, 298 notes)
2. Normal (3,08 stars, 146 notes)

Download: ATB - Marrakech
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A ritual disgrace, Marrakech adventure,
A ritual disgrace, Marrakech adventure. ...Marrakech adventure...


That familiar sound, explains what I'm feeling..

Ok, IRC modded, changed some patterns in Hard, reshaped sliders, other minor things. (do not worth kudosu)
The map itself is very neat and well-made. Good luck!

I will try to catch you ingame to ask a question.

hello!

offset - 14 848 (-12)

Normal

1. 00:14:851 (1) - add finish
2. 00:50:487 (7,1) - under hp bar for me
3. 01:00:411 (4) - this one is rly low, move up a bit?
4. 01:25:675 (5) - add finish to the entire slider

Hard

1. 00:27:479 (1,2) - move 1 grid up on grid lvl4
2. 00:42:817 (5) - move 3 grid left on grid lvl4
3. 01:58:156 (2) - put on grid, align with 01:59:284 (4) -
4. 02:21:614 (1) - extend by 1/2

all fixed :3/

[General]
I don't like combo 3, It's too dark. How about a lighter color?

[Normal]
00:14:859 (1) - add finish
01:25:687 (5) - Align this to (4) forming a perfect diagonal. 1st point - x:324 y:88 | 2nd point x:444 y:104
01:27:040 (1) - Adjust spacing here if you moved the previous note.
02:21:626 (1) - end spinner at 02:24:333?

Sorry I can't really mod normals but I think the parts with claps goes better at the if it was ending on the slider.


[Hard]
00:18:694 (2,3,4) - Kinda awkward to play since it starts at the red tick. Might be better to move it at 00:18:469 (1) - then add a note at 00:19:145.
00:31:100 (5) - Remove finish. doesn't fit imo.
Hmm there's lots of overused finishes. You should probably put them in every after 8 white ticks instead of every 4 white ticks.
00:36:514 (7) - A new combo would be good in this part.
00:40:123 (5) - ^
00:50:950 (5) - New combo? not sure but would also work.
00:52:303 (1) - Remove new combo. The symmetry would make it look better if it had the same color.
00:54:559 (5) - same as 00:50:950 (5) -
00:56:363 - This would go well if it was also silenced to 5% volume OR make it as a soft-hitsound.
01:23:431 (1) - This shape kinda bothers me. Make a better one?
01:25:235 (1) - ^ same
01:26:138 (3) - This seems a little bit too low on the screen. How about rearranging like this? http://puu.sh/H3Gl
01:26:589 - Add finish here also.
01:41:927 (3) - add clap
01:43:372 - ^
01:44:634 - ^
01:44:859 (4) - remove clap
01:55:912 (1) - The soft finish here doesn't sound very fitting. Use a normal finish.
02:08:995 (4,5,6) - Stack please.
02:11:250 (5) - Flows better if you rotate it like this http://puu.sh/H3Kn
02:12:378 (2) - if you're planning to use symmetry here with , Place it on x:436 y:148
02:18:694 (7,8,9) - same with 00:18:694 (2,3,4) - Triples starting on red ticks are awkward to play.
02:21:401 (7) - delete note.
02:21:401 (7) - put spinner here 02:21:401 end it at 02:24:333?

Hope this mod helps. This map is already good.

almost all fixed! thanks!

Hi. From Queue.

[General]
Offset 14840.
use the same offset in all diffs

[Normal]

00:38:769 - new combo ... i think
02:05:386 (5) - ctrl+h?
02:08:544 (3) - if you can down this note is better o.o

it is all ... Good Map
I like it

[Hard]

01:44:408 (3) - in the first part of this slider add "finish".
01:44:859 (4) - in the first and second part of this slider add "finish".
01:47:341 (3) - in the first part of this slider add "finish" that this part have "finish and clap"
02:00:198 (2) - add "finish"
02:00:875 (4) - ^
02:21:401 (7) - delete this note

it is all .
me wait that it func you.
Good map ^^

Я тебе тут бг принес.
Собственно мод :
[Hard]
00:31:100 (5,6) - как тебе такое?
01:11:025 (2,3,4) - а такое?
01:48:469 (6) - делит
01:50:950 (2) - ^
01:52:078 (5) - ?
02:17:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
Мод уг , бг норм.
Удачи с картой!

thank you guys
upd later

привет

General:
Offset -12
With -12 offset is 100% perfect.

Hard:
Fine

Normal:
This map is completely unsnapped, you need to resnap all yours notes


Solid solid. Fix snapping and offset ^-^

thank you all fixed timing/unsnap/some shapes :3

:3/

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

привет

o.o привет

General

1. your hitsound should have more Normal hitsound, or maybe u change it to soft hitsound at all
   SPOILER

   
2. inconsistent offset

Hard

1. 00:31:100 (5) - extend this slider , just like 00:29:747 (2) - , gap look bad
2. 00:46:213 (3,4,5) - change this pattern, make some jump, dont stack too much
3. 00:55:912 - should have normal hitsound + clap, just move Soft inherit point at 00:56:025 -
4. 01:43:281 - clap ?? are u sure? look here 01:46:890 -
5. 01:51:401 (4) - change
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:06:739 - 30% better
7. 02:08:995 (4,5,6) - this stack look bad when gameplay view

Normal

1. 00:56:339 - add inherit point to silence spinner sound
2. only that thing i got

done~

thank you!
fixed all but hitsound type and adding jump.

IRC mod.

Fixed the inconsistent red ticks and resnapped kiai.
Fixed combo pattern inconsistencies in Normal.
Note and slider suggestion on Hard.

Simple mapset, but it fits the song.

Star for mod from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion, sorry about my lateness

[General]
nothing c:

[Normal]
- 00:44:159 : clap?
- 00:45:061 : clap?

[Hard]
- 00:31:527 : clap?
- 01:43:933 : remove the clap?
- 01:44:159 : clap?

thats all I can find, rank good luck

Normal - all fixed
Hard - No changes, sorry

fixed~ updating!
Edit: Updated

Hi from my queue
I'm not gonna lie i love this song

Normal
01:27:016 remove NC

Hard
00:56:452 add break

that's all

no changes, sorry.
NC follows my pattern
no need to add break. it kinda interesting as is

No chabges but it's because of me. Here's your earned kd, dude!

Ну ты сам попросил ))) держи

• General
  ● Удали .osb файл

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• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:36:490 (1,2,3) - используй чаще такие комбы
  ● 01:04:460 (3) - дистанс 0,65, может добавить слайд на 01:03:557 с хлопком в конце?
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Слишком однообразно, но ок

===========================

• Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:22:956 (3) - дистанс 1,05, хотя по всей мапе 0,9 в общем смотрится странно...советую подвинуть правую и левую часть на пару гридов
  ● 00:23:858 (5) - ну не для харда слайд = = да и повторяется еще 2 раза
  ● 00:59:948 (1) - чем обусловлена смена дистанса на 1,0? получается пол мапы 0,9, а вторая часть на 1,0 О О
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  В целом норм

===========================

Удачи

Да, DS меняется, но незначительно. Я бы сказал после киаи начинается трансовое состояние, там-то и надо 1.0!
Слайдеры, ну.. Они такие тяяяяяяяяянущиеся няши. Others fixed! Thanks, man.

А вот и я.
У тебя тут всё почти идеально, мне тут даже придраться не к чему=( Поэтому сделаю несколько своих предложении.

Normal:
Сделай размер кругов побольше...
Тут вроде бы всё нормально, но как то некрасиво, не аккуратно сделано, по сравнению с хардом.

Hard:
AR-1 раз уж это хард...
00:46:414 (4) - предлогаю опустить вниз по центру http://puu.sh/HSww будет интереснее играться.
01:00:625 (5) - ^ ну а эту влево или впарво, на твой выбор...
01:55:437 (8,9) - предлогаю заменить эти две ноты слайдером http://puu.sh/HSAG
02:21:151 (6,7,8) - почему этот трипл стакнутый? может сделаешь его как предыдущее?

Это всё. Удачи! :3

Спасибо, пофиксил. :3

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Remove countdown.
  • Open all .osu files and change...
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 219,202,227
  Combo2 : 255,237,174
  Combo3 : 197,206,254

[Normal]

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • 00:16:640 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:18:445 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:20:249 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:22:054 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:23:858 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:25:663 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:27:467 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:29:272 (4) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:31:076 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:32:429 (3) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 00:32:429 (white tick) and another circle at 00:32:881 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on the second circle.
  • 00:34:685 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 01:08:069 (4) - Remove the repetition and add a circle at 01:08:971 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on this circle.
  • 01:12:129 (5) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 01:12:129 (white tick) and another circle at 01:12:580 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on the second circle.
  • 02:17:091 (1) - Remove the repetition and move this slider 1/1 later. Add a circle at 02:17:091 (white tick).

• • 00:22:505 (2,3) - Make the spacing here consistent.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:31:076 (5) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:31:978 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:32:881 (7) - Add "New Combo".

Nice map, good job.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Remove countdown. ~
  • Open all .osu files and change...
  

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 219,202,227
  Combo2 : 255,237,174
  Combo3 : 197,206,254

  yea, much better. thanks~

[Normal]

• • HP Drain Rate: 4 hm.. i still want to keep it as is. It's easiest diff
  • 00:16:640 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:18:445 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:20:249 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:22:054 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:23:858 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:25:663 (3) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:27:467 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:29:272 (4) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:31:076 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:32:429 (3) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 00:32:429 (white tick) and another circle at 00:32:881 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on the second circle.
  • 00:34:685 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 01:08:069 (4) - Remove the repetition and add a circle at 01:08:971 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on this circle.
  • 01:12:129 (5) - Delete this slider. Add a circle at 01:12:129 (white tick) and another circle at 01:12:580 (white tick). Add a "New Combo" on the second circle.
  • 02:17:091 (1) - Remove the repetition and move this slider 1/1 later. Add a circle at 02:17:091 (white tick).

• • 00:22:505 (2,3) - Make the spacing here consistent.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:31:076 (5) - Add "New Combo".
  • 00:31:978 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
  • 00:32:881 (7) - Add "New Combo".

Nice map, good job.

others fixed~

а вот и я с ужасно субъективным и небольшим модом

генерал:
ну про бг я уже писал
2 дифики маловато будет, может стоит намапать еще инсейн или изи?

нормал:
1\1 всю крату с парой мест 1\2 но однако играется довольно забавно, хорошо получилось, вообще мне очень понравилась эта дифка
00:57:242 (1) - все хитсоунды должны быть слышимы бла бла бла из ранкинг правил
02:21:602 (1) - ^

хард:
наци мод тут
00:23:858 (2) - кривоват же, может так его
92,192,23858,6,0,B|96:128|120:72|168:28|256:-32|344:28|392:72|416:128|420:192,1,510,4|8
01:05:362 (2) - ^
02:06:715 (1) - ^

00:47:317 (1) - 00:50:023 (3) - тут вообще круто сделано

00:51:377 (3) - если все до этого смотрится красиво, то этот явно нет
00:52:279 (5) - ^
00:54:986 (3) - ^
00:55:888 (5) - ну и все такие (однотипные) слайдеры может стоит подправить? дальше их выписывать не буду если согласишся и сам найдеш
00:25:663 (1) - забавно, но в горизонтально положении они вроде выглядят получше
00:29:723 (2) - ^
02:21:602 (1) - все хитсоунды должны быть слышимы бла бла бла из ранкинг правил

Нормал тут как полуизя. Simple map.А инсы я сам НЕ делаю и НЕ буду. Я их не люблю.
Остальное завтра чекну. Спасибо, вот твоя кд. :3
Все, но не все. Спиннер в конце можно сделать на 5-10% софта. это ранкбл

edit: some fxd