Normal:
00:09:60 (1) - end a quarter note earlier
00:14:33 (1) - align with 5?
00:44:88 (3) - align with 2?
01:15:79 (1,2,3) - make this section have equal spacing
01:26:15 (4,5) - y is the spacing so large here
01:34:60 (4,5,6,7,8) - from what I hear, you should make these notes all on half and whole notes because the quarter notes either don't snap to anything or are not very obvious
Hard:
I don't like the small circle size
00:02:69 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of the red 2
00:16:88 (2,3,4,5,6) - a little annoying to read
00:21:79 (7,8,9) - make spacing equal in this section
00:46:33 (3) - have this end directly on the end of 2
00:47:79 (2) - have this end directly on 1
00:51:60 (5) - align with 4?
00:52:51 (8) - restack this under 6
00:53:15 (1) - if you want to follow the lyrics, this slider should end at 00:53:51() -
00:57:42 (1) - have the repeat sign be under the end of the blue 1
01:00:15 (5) - stack under the red 1
01:09:24 (3) - align with 2?
01:11:06 (4,5) - overlapping sliders and wrong spacing....
01:16:51 (9) - align with 8
01:20:88 (6) - shouldn't this align with 2 and 3?
01:22:69 (11) - put under the 9
Hearts Parallel:
00:01:24 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:02:69 (3) - " "
000:05:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - please make the spacing equal
00:17:42 (5,6,7) - sudden growth in spacing?
00:23:88 (8,9,10) - it looks ugly placed under the rest of your combo
00:30:88 (3,4) - align with 2,1 respectively
00:37:60 (5) - align with 4?
00:40:88 (5) - stack on top of 3
00:41:97 (9) - y is this so close to 7?
00:42:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - stack all of these sliders without grid snap
00:46:33 (1) - end directly on the green 1
00:53:15 (1) - same as normal
00:53:51 (2) - start this a quarter note later and end where it is currently
most of the other mistakes I see in the map are similar to the ones above, so use the ones above as examples to fix the whole map.
other things I noticed:
01:42:33 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read
02:16:15 (9) - new combo
02:25:24 (10) - " "
02:27:79 (14) - " "
Nice map.Just needs to neaten up a bit. Star.
00:09:60 (1) - end a quarter note earlier
00:14:33 (1) - align with 5?
00:44:88 (3) - align with 2?
01:15:79 (1,2,3) - make this section have equal spacing
01:26:15 (4,5) - y is the spacing so large here
01:34:60 (4,5,6,7,8) - from what I hear, you should make these notes all on half and whole notes because the quarter notes either don't snap to anything or are not very obvious
Hard:
I don't like the small circle size
00:02:69 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of the red 2
00:16:88 (2,3,4,5,6) - a little annoying to read
00:21:79 (7,8,9) - make spacing equal in this section
00:46:33 (3) - have this end directly on the end of 2
00:47:79 (2) - have this end directly on 1
00:51:60 (5) - align with 4?
00:52:51 (8) - restack this under 6
00:53:15 (1) - if you want to follow the lyrics, this slider should end at 00:53:51() -
00:57:42 (1) - have the repeat sign be under the end of the blue 1
01:00:15 (5) - stack under the red 1
01:09:24 (3) - align with 2?
01:11:06 (4,5) - overlapping sliders and wrong spacing....
01:16:51 (9) - align with 8
01:20:88 (6) - shouldn't this align with 2 and 3?
01:22:69 (11) - put under the 9
Hearts Parallel:
00:01:24 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:02:69 (3) - " "
000:05:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - please make the spacing equal
00:17:42 (5,6,7) - sudden growth in spacing?
00:23:88 (8,9,10) - it looks ugly placed under the rest of your combo
00:30:88 (3,4) - align with 2,1 respectively
00:37:60 (5) - align with 4?
00:40:88 (5) - stack on top of 3
00:41:97 (9) - y is this so close to 7?
00:42:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - stack all of these sliders without grid snap
00:46:33 (1) - end directly on the green 1
00:53:15 (1) - same as normal
00:53:51 (2) - start this a quarter note later and end where it is currently
most of the other mistakes I see in the map are similar to the ones above, so use the ones above as examples to fix the whole map.
other things I noticed:
01:42:33 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read
02:16:15 (9) - new combo
02:25:24 (10) - " "
02:27:79 (14) - " "
Nice map.Just needs to neaten up a bit. Star.