1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

1. Easy难度tags里依然没有stefanie...
2. SB有做到最后 难度不做到最后么/.\

1. 00:03:136 (8,1,2) - 嘛,后面你都有用stack,为什么唯独这里留了很小的spacing呢o o 总感觉不太协调.
2. 00:04:027 (3,4) - 这里明显的感觉没叠好o o
3. 00:13:431 (8,1) - 这里的spacing很confused啊因为玩家不知道8里究竟藏了多少折返.建议这里使用正常的1.0xDS.
4. 00:14:946 (3,4) - 这个spacing也看不懂啊TAT 为什么空了一拍? 我感觉00:15:116有明显的节奏要加note,建议加个circle叠在4的开头.
5. 00:16:310 (3,4) - ^...这里节奏不像上面那个明显 但是spacing还是很..纠结- -
6. 00:20:061 (1,2) - 第一次玩会把2按早 因为没spacing可读很难预见 也可能大概是我眼神太差了... /.\ 我的话第一次出现这种节奏一般会摆slider...
7. 00:30:291 (2,3) - 没叠好o o
8. 00:33:189 (4,5) - 显然这样的节奏更对vocal /.\
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:12:746 (2,3,4,5) - 这里的节奏玩得怪怪的o o Try this↓ 如果不想全改的话 至少把5往后挪1/2 那里更适合摆个note
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:22:720 (1) - 不加个spinner么......
11. 01:45:483 (8) - 有点难看..而且好像我记得新规则有规定没tick的时候不能塞一堆红点...? 忘了../ \ 主要还是觉得这造型好奇葩不好看! T.T
12. 01:58:952 (4) - 加个note? 因为vocal念词速度也翻倍了o o
13. 02:14:809 (8) - 我觉得它应该出现在往后1/2的位置...要好太多...

1. 01:19:737 (3,4) - 没叠好o o 顺便我觉得这里叠着其实不太好看...
2. 01:22:465 (3) - 求后面加spinner...
3. 01:30:308 (3) - 这个y轴没对准中心..是粗心吧- -
4. 01:33:036 (3) - ……同上..
5. 01:58:952 (4) - 同hard,加个note?
6. 03:03:061 (3) - ^

1. Nice~没啥好吐槽的~除了记得改下tags o.o

spboxer3 wrote:

不過SB我倒是覺得有點怪怪的... 我知道你是把四個角的circle.png 下在重音. 重音到了才開始閃... 可是我覺得重音的才開始會有點慢...

1. 
2. 01:45:312 - add note

cmn_891127 wrote:

[Easy]
这个难度的slider真心漂亮 誇獎了QAQ 謝謝mod~

Megurine Luka wrote:

/QQ

[General]

Audio Lead In 不统一 只有hard开始比较早所以有
tag 不统一，Ez少了stefanie added

Tag suggestion：mayday (五月天的正确拼法ow<)，Ashin（没记错的话和声是阿信吧o3o） sure

[Normal]

00:30:632 (4,1) - 上去两格会比较好...
00:30:973 (1) - 开头fin 好像不怎么合啊
00:41:885 (3) - ^ ^, 我比较喜欢对应背景音来放finish
00:50:069 (3,4) - 这两个中间的白线都填满节奏上比较好听:3
01:07:460 (1) - try x=388 y=48 听大哥的
01:09:847 (1,2,3) - try x=212, y=204，然后尾巴往下摆一点:3 k
01:20:419 (4) - 没stack好 其实这些就算完全stack, 玩的时候也看不出来...不过还是改了
01:22:806 (x) - 加个spinner到01:24:170吧...不然太诡异了OTL 咦有这么诡异?
01:30:308 (3,1,2,3) - stack偏离是故意的么o.o? 是, 不然玩的时候偏移更严重
01:37:298 (2) - nazi一下往左一格 其实也没刻意要同一垂直线上...
01:50:086 (1) - 开头fin
01:58:270 (3,4) - 和之前一样 k
02:03:726 (5) - 开头fin
02:25:380 (4) - try x=336 y=140，这个位置刚好 k
02:26:915 (1) - 开头fin
03:31:024 (1) - fin 这些fin感觉背景音没有就没加了

[Hard]

00:30:973 (3) - 开头fin
00:41:885 (4) - fin
01:13:769 (5) - 移到01:13:940比较好的样子，调一下间距~ 这个好
01:22:806 (x) - 同N
01:58:270 (3,4) - ^ 这个我就保持等间距感觉比较顺
02:11:229 (6) - NC? k
02:12:593 (x) - 加个circle吧感觉漏了一拍 hmm, 不知道要往哪里放, 算是个小break应该也不错吧
03:22:669 (3) - 加个circle
03:24:033 (x) - +个circle 这里改了下
03:31:024 (1) - +fin
03:37:674 (2) - try x= 208 y=184 k


木有了o3o

(*ﾟ▽ﾟ)ﾉ ☆

Yasora wrote:

yo

General

1. Tags: missing word "stefanie" in easy difficulty added

Normal

1. 01:09:847 (1) - add clap in here? I heard drum sound is sounded in here too. k
2. 01:30:308 (3) - hee, this slider doesn't stack properly. for make that stacked properly, just move some grid up (without grid snap)
3. 01:33:036 (3) - ^ put them like this on purpose, to avoid overstack while playing
4. 01:48:211 (5) - add new combo? I guess this is new vocal. I guess not
5. 02:21:800 (3) - ngg.. make this a bit more smoother? like this maybe? k
   

   336,104,141800,2,0,B|379:157|377:230|320:299|240:280,1,240,8|8

Hard

1. 00:00:242 (1) - add whistle in the slider's beginning as first note? I'm adding whistle at long white tick in this part
2. 00:59:106 (6) - I think the new combo should be start in here since the kiai is started in here. if you do this, remove new combo in the next note. but BPM change start from 00:59:617
3. 02:07:307 (3,4) - just a little thing, move them 2 grid up so that will be linear with (1,2)? oh sure
4. 02:59:651 - 03:03:743 (1,3,1,3) add whistle (soft default) in the long white tick (downbeat)? you are already do that in normal diff sure

That's all
Good luck :3

JoJo wrote:

Hi 微风~ :>
来mod可以刷存在感和好感度嘛/w\
这歌好像是初中那会儿听的www

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. Easy难度tags里依然没有stefanie...
2. SB有做到最后 难度不做到最后么/.\

[Hard]

1. 00:03:136 (8,1,2) - 嘛,后面你都有用stack,为什么唯独这里留了很小的spacing呢o o 总感觉不太协调. 因为常规stack是在右下, 但是如果stack右下的话玩HD的时候不太会看得出来
2. 00:04:027 (3,4) - 这里明显的感觉没叠好o o 改了
3. 00:13:431 (8,1) - 这里的spacing很confused啊因为玩家不知道8里究竟藏了多少折返.建议这里使用正常的1.0xDS. 之间隔了一拍应该不会太困扰吧
4. 00:14:946 (3,4) - 这个spacing也看不懂啊TAT 为什么空了一拍? 我感觉00:15:116有明显的节奏要加note,建议加个circle叠在4的开头. 其实我是不太喜欢堆太慢lol
5. 00:16:310 (3,4) - ^...这里节奏不像上面那个明显 但是spacing还是很..纠结- -
6. 00:20:061 (1,2) - 第一次玩会把2按早 因为没spacing可读很难预见 也可能大概是我眼神太差了... /.\ 我的话第一次出现这种节奏一般会摆slider... 我是觉得只要不是3/4拍的stack应该都不会太难把握的
7. 00:30:291 (2,3) - 没叠好o o fixed
8. 00:33:189 (4,5) - 显然这样的节奏更对vocal /.\ k
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:12:746 (2,3,4,5) - 这里的节奏玩得怪怪的o o Try this↓ 如果不想全改的话 至少把5往后挪1/2 那里更适合摆个note 换了点节奏, 最初开始做的时候只顾对称去了
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:22:720 (1) - 不加个spinner么...... 加了
11. 01:45:483 (8) - 有点难看..而且好像我记得新规则有规定没tick的时候不能塞一堆红点...? 忘了../ \ 主要还是觉得这造型好奇葩不好看! T.T 我就喜欢奇葩slider
12. 01:58:952 (4) - 加个note? 因为vocal念词速度也翻倍了o o k
13. 02:14:809 (8) - 我觉得它应该出现在往后1/2的位置...要好太多... k

[Normal]

1. 01:19:737 (3,4) - 没叠好o o 顺便我觉得这里叠着其实不太好看... 其实这里叠得再好玩的时候也都会有偏移的lol
2. 01:22:465 (3) - 求后面加spinner... k
3. 01:30:308 (3) - 这个y轴没对准中心..是粗心吧- - 故意的, 原因我不想再说了...
4. 01:33:036 (3) - ……同上.. ^
5. 01:58:952 (4) - 同hard,加个note?
6. 03:03:061 (3) - ^ 加了

That's it~ 音效我就偷懒不看了TvT

1000 posts 达成 XD

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Breeze~

[SB]

spboxer3 wrote:

不過SB我倒是覺得有點怪怪的... 我知道你是把四個角的circle.png 下在重音. 重音到了才開始閃... 可是我覺得重音的才開始會有點慢...

这个我也觉得有点慢，大概是因为当clap时，circle.png才开始放大，这样势必会感觉出现的晚了，试试
S,1,0,500,0.40608,1.12288 这样改了, 不过貌似我觉得还是差不多

[Nomral]
00:55:525 (7) - 感觉在00:56:719结束比较好 k
01:44:971 (7,1) - 这里空一拍很奇怪，有两个建议：

1. 
2. 01:45:312 - add note k

[Hard]
02:29:131 (1,2) - 虽然跟背景的鼓声一致，但是感觉很难打，也没有什么好的建议

就这些了~~~

Vass_Bass wrote:

Normal
00:24:323 (4,5) - add geen timing sections with the 50% and 60% volume Hmm, why here?
01:02:004 (2,3) - may be you will stack them? i think it's easier than unstack stack might be hard to read for beginner imo
01:07:801 - finish nah, no such feeling here
01:16:668 (3,4) - stack? as the same upon
01:19:737 (3,4) - replace it to another place, it's kinda confusing, 01:20:419 (4) - start of this slider is invisible in playing okay for this
01:36:446 (1) - prolong to 01:37:128 for better rythm? k
02:18:049 (1) - not good place for circle, you can stack slider with this note I think it should be fine
03:09:200 - finish? yay it's the right feeling to have a finish here, but after I add it, it sounds bad to me, so sorry, no finish for now

Hard
00:14:946 (3,4) - don't think that it's good idea with spacing, but okay changed a bit
00:16:310 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:06:625 (1,2,3,4) - may be spinner there? D: why lol i love it
02:47:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add a stretching of volume hmm, seems no need

Good luck

spboxer3 wrote:

from: ♡ Kawayi Rika's ♡ ♬ Good luck Queue

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

:idea: general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. 我瞎了 上次看怎沒發現這是128kbps的... 難怪我聽起來超刺耳的 有個高頻率聲音一直在耳邊吵... 如果要改記得跟我說... 咦, 我觉得还好耶
2. 03:12:951 - 這地方的SB是不是少了... 感覺照前面看來 這邊應該也要有的... [Normal] [ERT's Easy]

SB是clap触发, 没clap的地方就没有

Normal

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 01:40:538 (4) - [suggestion] 這個slider的轉折處並沒有剛好在那個tick上 有些誤差 所以我幫你調了一下. 看起來還是有些微差別的(好吧 我承認根本mod不出什麼 所以在nazi...) 你花那么多时间来弄这个我不用都对不起你了lol, 改了
   
   先前的

   
   改過後

   
   

   400,336,100538,2,0,B|344:360|272:336|240:264|272:208|312:180|312:180|284:128|224:152,1,359.999989271164

2. 01:45:994 (2) - [suggestion] 同樣的問題 把紅色的節點往上移動一格吧 (size 4) k
3. 01:50:086 (1) - ^ 額。真的很多~ 嘛...不想改就ign吧... 如果要改剩下的你也檢查一下吧...
4. 01:51:450 (2) - ^ k
5. 03:07:836 (3) - 中心點上移一格~這樣左右就對稱了 同樣大小4 k

Hard

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:03:136 (8,1,2) - lol還是沒有stack阿 後面都stack了 這邊不stack真的很奇怪耶 好吧
2. 01:35:934 (5) - [arc issue] 說實話的 我認為你這個slider根本可以作成圍繞01:36:446 (1) - 的... k
   
   
   

   280,264,95934,2,0,B|320:288|320:288|380:248|440:292,1,160

3. 03:43:300 (8) - [suggestion] 其實我認為這地方是可以用NC的._. (斷落開始處 这其实没必要吧

恩~微風你懂的... 改完找我 我不在線請用PM~ 然後我週末不在 最好是今天改好找我 我可以幫你recheck 不然就下星期了 ((修改和未修改請用兩種顏色阿lol！！！！！ ...最后还来个要两种颜色回复mod..., 好吧, 红色是没改的, 其他的都改了

Garven wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - Fixed
01:25:534 - Why not just end the spinner here? Fixed
02:05:090 (3) - End this at 02:06:284 - Fixed
03:10:564 (5) - eeeh, considering my suggestions on the other two sliders, this last circle isn't appropriately place either. Do not understand what you mean If it must change, notify me

Garven wrote:

Yo

[General]
The mp3 sounds pretty poor quality. Think you can find a better one? The volume sounds artificially raised and it peaks a lot. :/ changed one
Think you can crop this a little better? It's really easy to see the red outline there done



[Normal]
00:55:525 (7) - Think you can shape this so you don't have that little smidge of border showing? It looks a little wrong. fixed

00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - k
01:00:299 (3,4) - Not aligned well fixed
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here? k
01:43:948 (6) - This was kind of surprising that it wasn't another 1 repeat slider since your combo goes on too far. hmm? I think this should be fine
02:05:261 (1) - End this at 02:06:284 - k
03:09:370 (1) - End this at 03:10:393 - k

[Hard]
01:12:746 (2,3) - eeeh, not liking this rhythm changed
01:21:101 (2) - Kind of disappointed that this was stacked Hmm, moved to other place
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here? k
03:10:564 (14) - Delete I think here need this note, it sounds better for me

Garven wrote:

Basically it's implying that you should have a beat ending at 03:10:393 - so maybe using a slider from 03:09:882 - to 03:10:393 - would work.

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Garven wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - Fixed
02:05:090 (3) - End this at 02:06:284 - Fixed

Garven wrote:

Blaaaah. a couple more small things

Hard:

02:32:254 - This extended break is unsnapped fixed

Normal:

02:30:720 - This fountain isn't in your hard. Intended? deleted

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

Kiai time through the difficulties is different. fixed

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick at least. k

[Hard]

01:01:231 (6) - New combo.
01:01:742 (1) - Remove new combo. ok for these 2
01:04:299 (10) - New combo.
01:04:811 (1) - Remove new combo. sure
02:59:527 (1) - Something went wrong with this slider. oops, fixed

That's it >w<