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Yanzi Sun - First Day

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Garven
Yo

[General]
The mp3 sounds pretty poor quality. Think you can find a better one? The volume sounds artificially raised and it peaks a lot. :/
Think you can crop this a little better? It's really easy to see the red outline there


[Easy]
00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 -
01:25:534 - Why not just end the spinner here?
02:05:090 (3) - End this at 02:06:284 -
03:10:564 (5) - eeeh, considering my suggestions on the other two sliders, this last circle isn't appropriately place either.

[Normal]
00:55:525 (7) - Think you can shape this so you don't have that little smidge of border showing? It looks a little wrong.

00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 -
01:00:299 (3,4) - Not aligned well
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here?
01:43:948 (6) - This was kind of surprising that it wasn't another 1 repeat slider since your combo goes on too far.
02:05:261 (1) - End this at 02:06:284 -
03:09:370 (1) - End this at 03:10:393 -

[Hard]
01:12:746 (2,3) - eeeh, not liking this rhythm
01:21:101 (2) - Kind of disappointed that this was stacked
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here?
03:10:564 (14) - Delete
ertyukjh010

Garven wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - Fixed
01:25:534 - Why not just end the spinner here? Fixed
02:05:090 (3) - End this at 02:06:284 - Fixed
03:10:564 (5) - eeeh, considering my suggestions on the other two sliders, this last circle isn't appropriately place either. Do not understand what you mean :P If it must change, notify me
Thank Garven


http://puu.sh/BMnP
Andrea
I'm late sorry ;_;
Garven
Basically it's implying that you should have a beat ending at 03:10:393 - so maybe using a slider from 03:09:882 - to 03:10:393 - would work.
Topic Starter
Breeze

Garven wrote:

Yo

[General]
The mp3 sounds pretty poor quality. Think you can find a better one? The volume sounds artificially raised and it peaks a lot. :/ :arrow: changed one
Think you can crop this a little better? It's really easy to see the red outline there :arrow: done



[Normal]
00:55:525 (7) - Think you can shape this so you don't have that little smidge of border showing? It looks a little wrong. :arrow: fixed

00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - :arrow: k
01:00:299 (3,4) - Not aligned well :arrow: fixed
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here? :arrow: k
01:43:948 (6) - This was kind of surprising that it wasn't another 1 repeat slider since your combo goes on too far. :arrow: hmm? I think this should be fine
02:05:261 (1) - End this at 02:06:284 - :arrow: k
03:09:370 (1) - End this at 03:10:393 - :arrow: k

[Hard]
01:12:746 (2,3) - eeeh, not liking this rhythm :arrow: changed
01:21:101 (2) - Kind of disappointed that this was stacked :arrow: Hmm, moved to other place
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here? :arrow: k
03:10:564 (14) - Delete :arrow: I think here need this note, it sounds better for me
thx
ertyukjh010

Garven wrote:

Basically it's implying that you should have a beat ending at 03:10:393 - so maybe using a slider from 03:09:882 - to 03:10:393 - would work.
No change. I think very strange, the feeling of an early end
Garven

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Garven wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - Fixed
02:05:090 (3) - End this at 02:06:284 - Fixed
Then change these back because it's the exact same thing in the music that you're snapping, and apparently you feel that it is an odd rhythm.
ertyukjh010
微風
如果您看到幫我Fix
因為我都看不懂怎樣改(炸
謝了
Topic Starter
Breeze
updated
Garven
Blaaaah. a couple more small things

Hard:

02:32:254 - This extended break is unsnapped

Normal:

02:30:720 - This fountain isn't in your hard. Intended?
Topic Starter
Breeze

Garven wrote:

Blaaaah. a couple more small things

Hard:

02:32:254 - This extended break is unsnapped :arrow: fixed

Normal:

02:30:720 - This fountain isn't in your hard. Intended? :arrow: deleted
It should be all fine now :X
Garven
Good, good.

Nice to see a nice upbeat Stephanie song again. :D

Rebubbled!
Andrea
[General]

Kiai time through the difficulties is different.


[Normal]

Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick at least.


[Hard]

01:01:231 (6) - New combo.
01:01:742 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:04:299 (10) - New combo.
01:04:811 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:59:527 (1) - Something went wrong with this slider.

That's it >w<
Topic Starter
Breeze

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

Kiai time through the difficulties is different.
:arrow: fixed

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick at least.
:arrow: k

[Hard]

01:01:231 (6) - New combo.
01:01:742 (1) - Remove new combo. :arrow: ok for these 2
01:04:299 (10) - New combo.
01:04:811 (1) - Remove new combo. :arrow: sure
02:59:527 (1) - Something went wrong with this slider. :arrow: oops, fixed

That's it >w<
thx
Andrea
Looks good.

Ranked~
ertyukjh010
yo
L_P
连续两张
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Loneight
恭喜 微風醬 >w<
Dino99
恭喜啦~ 連2張ww
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
中文歌啊 好!
YTYuyu
and i thought that last ranked map isn't enough lol. once again congratz on the rank ;)
Starry_old
Gratz !!
vizzy
Congrats!
phonic
Congrats \:D/
Doodley
hell yeah

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