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ertyukjh010
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Breeze

Vass_Bass wrote:

Normal
00:24:323 (4,5) - add geen timing sections with the 50% and 60% volume :arrow: Hmm, why here?
01:02:004 (2,3) - may be you will stack them? i think it's easier than unstack :arrow: stack might be hard to read for beginner imo
01:07:801 - finish :arrow: nah, no such feeling here
01:16:668 (3,4) - stack? :arrow: as the same upon
01:19:737 (3,4) - replace it to another place, it's kinda confusing, 01:20:419 (4) - start of this slider is invisible in playing :arrow: okay for this
01:36:446 (1) - prolong to 01:37:128 for better rythm? :arrow: k
02:18:049 (1) - not good place for circle, you can stack slider with this note :arrow: I think it should be fine
03:09:200 - finish? :arrow: yay it's the right feeling to have a finish here, but after I add it, it sounds bad to me, so sorry, no finish for now

Hard
00:14:946 (3,4) - don't think that it's good idea with spacing, but okay :arrow: changed a bit
00:16:310 (3,4) - ^ :arrow: ^
02:06:625 (1,2,3,4) - may be spinner there? D: :arrow: why lol i love it
02:47:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add a stretching of volume :arrow: hmm, seems no need

Good luck
thanks

spboxer3 wrote:

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※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. 我瞎了 上次看怎沒發現這是128kbps的... 難怪我聽起來超刺耳的 有個高頻率聲音一直在耳邊吵... 如果要改記得跟我說... :arrow: 咦, 我觉得还好耶
  2. 03:12:951 - 這地方的SB是不是少了... 感覺照前面看來 這邊應該也要有的... [Normal] [ERT's Easy]
:arrow: SB是clap触发, 没clap的地方就没有

Normal



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:40:538 (4) - [suggestion] 這個slider的轉折處並沒有剛好在那個tick上 有些誤差 所以我幫你調了一下. 看起來還是有些微差別的(好吧 我承認根本mod不出什麼 所以在nazi...) :arrow: 你花那么多时间来弄这个我不用都对不起你了lol, 改了
    改過後

    400,336,100538,2,0,B|344:360|272:336|240:264|272:208|312:180|312:180|284:128|224:152,1,359.999989271164
  2. 01:45:994 (2) - [suggestion] 同樣的問題 把紅色的節點往上移動一格吧 (size 4) :arrow: k
  3. 01:50:086 (1) - ^ 額。真的很多~ 嘛...不想改就ign吧... 如果要改剩下的你也檢查一下吧...
  4. 01:51:450 (2) - ^ :arrow: k
  5. 03:07:836 (3) - 中心點上移一格~這樣左右就對稱了 同樣大小4 :arrow: k

Hard



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:03:136 (8,1,2) - lol還是沒有stack阿 後面都stack了 這邊不stack真的很奇怪耶 :arrow: 好吧
  2. 01:35:934 (5) - [arc issue] 說實話的 我認為你這個slider根本可以作成圍繞01:36:446 (1) - 的... :arrow: k

    280,264,95934,2,0,B|320:288|320:288|380:248|440:292,1,160
  3. 03:43:300 (8) - [suggestion] 其實我認為這地方是可以用NC的._. (斷落開始處 :arrow: 这其实没必要吧

恩~微風你懂的... 改完找我 我不在線請用PM~ 然後我週末不在 最好是今天改好找我 我可以幫你recheck 不然就下星期了 ((修改和未修改請用兩種顏色阿lol!!!!!
:arrow: ...最后还来个要两种颜色回复mod..., 好吧, 红色是没改的, 其他的都改了
spboxer3
recheck in IRC
looks all fine.
Bubble~
Garven
Yo

[General]
The mp3 sounds pretty poor quality. Think you can find a better one? The volume sounds artificially raised and it peaks a lot. :/
Think you can crop this a little better? It's really easy to see the red outline there


[Easy]
00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 -
01:25:534 - Why not just end the spinner here?
02:05:090 (3) - End this at 02:06:284 -
03:10:564 (5) - eeeh, considering my suggestions on the other two sliders, this last circle isn't appropriately place either.

[Normal]
00:55:525 (7) - Think you can shape this so you don't have that little smidge of border showing? It looks a little wrong.

00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 -
01:00:299 (3,4) - Not aligned well
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here?
01:43:948 (6) - This was kind of surprising that it wasn't another 1 repeat slider since your combo goes on too far.
02:05:261 (1) - End this at 02:06:284 -
03:09:370 (1) - End this at 03:10:393 -

[Hard]
01:12:746 (2,3) - eeeh, not liking this rhythm
01:21:101 (2) - Kind of disappointed that this was stacked
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here?
03:10:564 (14) - Delete
ertyukjh010

Garven wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - Fixed
01:25:534 - Why not just end the spinner here? Fixed
02:05:090 (3) - End this at 02:06:284 - Fixed
03:10:564 (5) - eeeh, considering my suggestions on the other two sliders, this last circle isn't appropriately place either. Do not understand what you mean :P If it must change, notify me
Thank Garven


http://puu.sh/BMnP
Andrea
I'm late sorry ;_;
Garven
Basically it's implying that you should have a beat ending at 03:10:393 - so maybe using a slider from 03:09:882 - to 03:10:393 - would work.
Topic Starter
Breeze

Garven wrote:

Yo

[General]
The mp3 sounds pretty poor quality. Think you can find a better one? The volume sounds artificially raised and it peaks a lot. :/ :arrow: changed one
Think you can crop this a little better? It's really easy to see the red outline there :arrow: done



[Normal]
00:55:525 (7) - Think you can shape this so you don't have that little smidge of border showing? It looks a little wrong. :arrow: fixed

00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - :arrow: k
01:00:299 (3,4) - Not aligned well :arrow: fixed
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here? :arrow: k
01:43:948 (6) - This was kind of surprising that it wasn't another 1 repeat slider since your combo goes on too far. :arrow: hmm? I think this should be fine
02:05:261 (1) - End this at 02:06:284 - :arrow: k
03:09:370 (1) - End this at 03:10:393 - :arrow: k

[Hard]
01:12:746 (2,3) - eeeh, not liking this rhythm :arrow: changed
01:21:101 (2) - Kind of disappointed that this was stacked :arrow: Hmm, moved to other place
01:25:534 - Why not end the spinner here? :arrow: k
03:10:564 (14) - Delete :arrow: I think here need this note, it sounds better for me
thx
ertyukjh010

Garven wrote:

Basically it's implying that you should have a beat ending at 03:10:393 - so maybe using a slider from 03:09:882 - to 03:10:393 - would work.
No change. I think very strange, the feeling of an early end
Garven

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Garven wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:56:889 (1) - End this at 00:58:083 - Fixed
02:05:090 (3) - End this at 02:06:284 - Fixed
Then change these back because it's the exact same thing in the music that you're snapping, and apparently you feel that it is an odd rhythm.
ertyukjh010
微風
如果您看到幫我Fix
因為我都看不懂怎樣改(炸
謝了
Topic Starter
Breeze
updated
Garven
Blaaaah. a couple more small things

Hard:

02:32:254 - This extended break is unsnapped

Normal:

02:30:720 - This fountain isn't in your hard. Intended?
Topic Starter
Breeze

Garven wrote:

Blaaaah. a couple more small things

Hard:

02:32:254 - This extended break is unsnapped :arrow: fixed

Normal:

02:30:720 - This fountain isn't in your hard. Intended? :arrow: deleted
It should be all fine now :X
Garven
Good, good.

Nice to see a nice upbeat Stephanie song again. :D

Rebubbled!
Andrea
[General]

Kiai time through the difficulties is different.


[Normal]

Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick at least.


[Hard]

01:01:231 (6) - New combo.
01:01:742 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:04:299 (10) - New combo.
01:04:811 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:59:527 (1) - Something went wrong with this slider.

That's it >w<
Topic Starter
Breeze

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

Kiai time through the difficulties is different.
:arrow: fixed

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick at least.
:arrow: k

[Hard]

01:01:231 (6) - New combo.
01:01:742 (1) - Remove new combo. :arrow: ok for these 2
01:04:299 (10) - New combo.
01:04:811 (1) - Remove new combo. :arrow: sure
02:59:527 (1) - Something went wrong with this slider. :arrow: oops, fixed

That's it >w<
thx
Andrea
Looks good.

Ranked~
ertyukjh010
yo
L_P
连续两张
恭喜
Loneight
恭喜 微風醬 >w<
Dino99
恭喜啦~ 連2張ww
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
中文歌啊 好!
YTYuyu
and i thought that last ranked map isn't enough lol. once again congratz on the rank ;)
Starry_old
Gratz !!
vizzy
Congrats!
phonic
Congrats \:D/
Doodley
hell yeah

Congrats.
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