Overall a fun map, few changes here and there but it's good.
00:36:720 - 00:37:597 this section is pretty much all dons. It's a drum and bass song so all you hear is the drum that you're trying to follow/capture.
mm, well. Okay. I like both versions, lol00:41:281 - missed a kat
true00:42:597 (2,3,4,1) - I wouldn't recommend following this kind of sound because there's no drum there. It's just a blaring/glitch noise thrown out there. Try to do something else here.
the noise is too long to be only done with a finish, short spinners and sliders have same effect than the 1/6 thing. and the 1/6 sounds the best. and leaving out is no option00:45:404 (1,2,3) - Another like above
replaced with finish note00:52:509 (2,3) - Remove these two kats. The sound you're trying to follow is barely audible, and even more-so with the kats there.
removed the one on the blue tick. this should work better.00:55:228 (1,2) - These two notes are kats and ironically 00:55:579 (1) isnt'.
true00:58:211 (2,1,1) - I'd remove the two kats there and use the don to make an off-beat pattern. There's really no sound here either.
it took me a while to understand, but yeh, that sounds good.01:01:193 - There's actually no sound on the fourth kat here so a don or blank space will suffice.
removed one don.01:07:860 (1,2,3,4) - Another spot where the noise is glitchy. Find another way to map this.
see above.01:13:825 - No sound on the last kat here either.
yup01:18:386 (1,2,3,4,1) - Drums die for a moment here.
true.01:20:579 - Missed a note.
yup.01:26:281 (5,6,7) - Spacing should change from 1/4 to 1/6 here.
yup01:30:316 (1,2,3,4) - Another glitch spot.
see above.01:32:334 - (Recommendation) I'd change this to a don to make it flow easier and sound closer to the music, but this piece of the song is hard to follow at all.
seems fine to me.01:36:720 - Missed a note.
yup.01:37:070 (3,4,1,1,2,1,1,2) - This whole pattern should be changed to fit the drums if you're trying to stay consistent with how you've mapped thus far.
tried my best.01:38:562 (2,3,1) - This piece you can make a 1/6 pattern to because the drums change to it.
k01:38:912 (1,2,3,1) - This doesn't really work because it's not drums, it's just glitch again.
see above01:44:527 - Missed a don here and next to it at 01:44:702
yup.01:46:105 - No sound here. Change to a don or remove extra note.
removed.01:50:316 - Should be a don.
true.01:52:772 (3,4,5,1) - More glitch
replaced with finish.01:58:737 - change to don
kFor all of the kiai time I can't tell what you're following at all. If you're just making you're own beat to add too the music then it's fine if you're following something, might want to consider remapping.
I TRIED to follow the clusterf*k music, then it turned out to be pretty custom with some basement on the song self. I think the kiai overlays pretty well with it and I killed the randomness contained in this 'music'03:14:614 - No sound here, remove don.
k03:15:228 - Change to kat.
k03:17:334 - Change to don.
k03:18:211 (1,2) - Change to kats. (Note: you can change the last kat on the 1/6 burst to a don.)
k03:19:790 (2,3,4,1) - More glitch.
replaced with finisher.03:31:369 (Editor Error) - I noticed you added a new combo to this note that doesn't need one (lol you'll see).
lol, fixed03:35:755 - Change to don.
k03:35:930 - Change to kat.
k03:38:211 - Add a don to the end of this 1/6 burst. 3-note 1/6th beat patterns are tricky to hit and a don isn't going to change anything. (Recommendation).
don't fit the music.03:39:702 - Missed a note.
k03:41:105 (Editor Error) - Check it again. xD
XD03:42:684 - Extra don, remove.
k03:45:053 (2,1,1,2) - Glitch.
finisher03:48:649 - (Recommendation) Missed a sound that could have a note here, but not necessary.
k03:49:439 - Change to don.
k03:50:141 - Change to don.
k03:50:930 - Remove to kats from the end of this pattern, there's no sound.
k04:44:000 (1,1,1,1,1) - Change to all dons.
k04:44:527 - 04:45:053 (Don't know how to explain so:) Change the pattern to this:
http://puu.sh/A24H k04:49:614 - Glitch
see above04:52:421 - Glitch
see above04:56:369 - (Recommendation) You could put something in this empty space here if you wanted, but not necessary.
I don't want.04:58:211 - Change to don.
k05:08:211 - Change note to don. The burst ends on the third note, but add the fourth one (which is there now) and change to a don to make it flow.
k05:12:158 - Remove note here and add it here: 05:12:334
kThe ending is subtle so I'd recommend slowly decreasing your note density as it progresses. Which you kind of do, but you don't even really just drop it, you know? I'm not sure if that's explained well. If it isn't contact me and i'll help clarify some more.
well, I don't like SV changes.