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Katou Tatsuya - Keshiki wo Miyou [Osu|Taiko]

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rockmmer
29 posts
Joined February 2010
rockmmer
[ Normal ]
　
[*]00:21:745 (2) - You miss a clap start already fixed
[*]01:01:870 - Why don't you add a note with finish? This part I want to make it finished more clearly so I don't want to make any change (｡･ω･)
[*]01:37:870 (1) - finishfixed~
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
AoiX

bossandy wrote:

SPOILER
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~
    　
  1. 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
  2. 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
  3. 黑 : 就單純建議
    　

    [ Insane ]
    　
  4. 00:56:432 (2) - 被前面的slider擋住了 不好看 nazi >_< :arrow: 改掉了，虽然感觉变得更难看了。。。
  5. 01:01:870 - 跟Normal一樣 :arrow: 恩 继续重申不会改的
    　
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最近鬼畜mapper越來越多了... 好圖 :D 要不要個Taiko diff?
:arrow: 貌似wmf要做的样子，不想加太多太鼓。。。还有我这分明是善良的真·送分图啊！
thx your mod & star~帅比bossandy
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[off-topic]

01:00:370 (1) - 这部分后我就想到了 Another 00:52:898 (1) -

[General]

  1. spinner-background.jpg 这要不要换成png的
[Easy]

00:24:370 (2) - 结尾不要clap
00:42:370 (3,1,2,1) - 感觉这么来回集中在中间不够舒畅
00:46:870 (1) - 最后两个发生点都放clap不好 去掉一个
00:48:370 (2) - http://puu.sh/oFnj

[rockmmer's Normal]

这种短slider连接和轻音效下法没什么不对 可用在这首歌上气势和氛围表现略差

[Hard]

00:48:370 (1) - 这么长的slider不在音效上做做文章就亏了
一样 加点重打击音效效果好

[Horizon]

00:11:620 (1) - 不用spinner用有点难度的note组合更好
http://puu.sh/oFw3 这部分音效的建议 1/2连续的clap对气氛营造有辅助作用

GL
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb file and full submit if you aren't using storyboard.

[Easy]
-

[rockmmer's Normal]
00:43:870 (1) - Increasing spacing to 1.50x
00:49:870 (1) - Try x:208 y:120, then flip horizontal for (2).
01:07:870 - consider starting here again, or at least where Easy starts.

[Hard]
00:05:432 (6) - HP Bar problems.

[Horizon]
00:03:370 (1,2) - Spacing here is strange, plays like a double but isn't.
00:04:120 (3,4) - ^
00:04:870 (5,6) - ^
Diff well done.

Good luck :3
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
>W<

Download: Katou Tatsuya - Keshiki wo Miyou (AoiX) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
CSY the corrupt
431 posts
Joined March 2010
CSY the corrupt
[Easy]

01:12:370 (1,1) - spinner跟后面的note的距离不够长是不是会被吐槽
01:24:370 (1,1) - ^


[Horizon]

00:38:245 (3) - remove clap
00:39:370 (1) - remove clap on 00:39:745
00:39:370 (1) - remove clap on 00:39:745
00:43:870 (5) - remove clap on 00:44:245
00:45:745 (2) - remove clap
00:46:870 (1) - remove clap on 00:47:245
01:14:995 (5,1,2,3) - 2和3用不用再分开一点
01:31:870 (1,2,3,4) - 跟上面一样,3和4

都是纯建议.渣mod, nice map.
Tomicorelend
25 posts
Joined March 2010
Tomicorelend
占坑准备复制唐诗骗kds，嗯
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General
lead in是不是改成2000比较好 现在是2222（好2）

Hard和Horizon之间的难度差距太大了 有个普通的Insane会更好


[Easy]
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:22:870 (1,2) - 不是什么大问题不过这种不是在一条直线上更好看么


[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:04:870 (5) - 这种我倒是更建议直接无视spacing 把3复制跟X轴做个对称
00:54:370 (1,2,3) - 这么摆的话 绝对不是normal难度应该用的梗 会坑死一片人


[Hard]
fine.

[Horizon]
fine.
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


您好 :)

[Easy]

od-1
00:46:870 (1) - 換成長Slider就像00:45:370 (2)
00:50:245 (1) - 不要重疊；不同顏色會讓新手不懂判斷

[rockmmer's Normal]

00:54:370 (1,2,3) - 變距不是個好主意對於Normal
00:56:995 (3) - 保持1.5x距離
01:27:370 (1,2) - 這段有大量這種密密麻麻的1/2，我自己認識太難對於新人來說

[Hard]

OD+2 HP+2

[Horizon]

00:38:620 (1,2) - 重疊開始比較好讀譜0.0

就這樣吧，GoodLuck :)
rockmmer
29 posts
Joined February 2010
rockmmer
[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:04:870 (5) - 这种我倒是更建议直接无视spacing 把3复制跟X轴做个对称 Fixed
00:54:370 (1,2,3) - 这么摆的话 绝对不是normal难度应该用的梗 会坑死一片人 Fixed 已经改了梗
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu
Hello, taiko mod request from my queue~

Some suggestions:

00:17:526 (22) - delete and add note at 00:17:901
00:19:026 (33) - delete and add note at 00:19:401 , if you follow this maybe you can use ddddkdd
00:27:557 (92,93) - change them to dd, it doesn't sound as loud as 00:27:370 (91)
00:27:932 (94) - k?
00:34:495 (141) - ^
01:21:557 (466) - d
01:21:745 (468) - k
01:28:963 (516) - pattern sounds kinda weird, suggest to delete this
01:30:745 (532) - d

Good, IMO it's hard to mod this ;) that's all~
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris

shikyu wrote:

Hello, taiko mod request from my queue~

Some suggestions:

00:17:526 (22) - delete and add note at 00:17:901 k
00:19:026 (33) - delete and add note at 00:19:401 , if you follow this maybe you can use ddddkdd I'm trying to stream through the X x x X x x pattern
00:27:557 (92,93) - change them to dd, it doesn't sound as loud as 00:27:370 (91) It refers to the pitch, changed to k k d k k
00:27:932 (94) - k? k
00:34:495 (141) - ^ k
01:21:557 (466) - d k
01:21:745 (468) - k ddd sounds better
01:28:963 (516) - pattern sounds kinda weird, suggest to delete this there're some sort of similar sound in the music
01:30:745 (532) - d

Good, IMO it's hard to mod this ;) that's all~
thx :3

Download: Katou Tatsuya - Keshiki wo Miyou (AoiX) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
you remember that you posted on my queue? xD

[Easy]

  1. 00:00:370 (1,2,1,2,1) - no stack for begginers? you know D;
    SPOILER
  2. 00:25:870 - maybe 50~70% volume, sounds more tragic O.o
  3. 00:50:245 (1) - previous hit object is 1.26x :o I think newbies dont know about symmetry, but looks nice D; maybe just maybe change it, also no whistle on start of slider, double whistle is not repeated on incoming combos
  4. 01:01:870 - moar volume moar epicness
  5. 01:14:620 (1) - leorda says something like covered by spinner hitburst bla bla bla; please use the same x1.0 common distance, dont worry to overlap the next slider a bit
  6. 01:26:620 (1) - clap on start of slider dont fit to incoming patterns, just use clap on end of slider please
  7. 01:30:370 (1) - why no use clap on start, repeat and end?

[rockmmer's Normal]

pretty basic huh
well, there is a special reason for change the spacing rate? a [Normal] diff is supposed to have the same spacing
  1. 00:19:870 (1,2) - this 1/1 change is hmm just annoying, look you are using a lot 1/2 sliders back and then this, just so weird, apply for next combo, sory
  2. 00:57:745 (5) - this should start at 00:57:932, I think you are following that critical sound
  3. 01:16:120 (3) - stack on previous (1,2)? as the previous combo, you know
  4. 01:22:120 (6) - now unstack as previous

[Hard]

  1. 00:05:432 (6) - a bit moar down? cuz that hp bar guideline
  2. 00:43:495 (3) - remove the clap of the reverse, dont fit to double claping
  3. 00:48:370 (1) - finish on 12th repeat and end of slider?

[Wmf's Taiko]

oh god x_x Ill delete the bg
SPOILER
  1. 00:07:682 (46) - I think this should be a don, since previous patterns mark it very clearly d K K

[Horizon]

hmm I dont like a lot the usage of your manual stack leniency, I mean this 00:00:370 (1,2) - is 1/2 stacked with osu default leniency and 00:00:745 (3,4) - is 1/4 with manual stack leniency, that you are also using on 00:03:370 (1,2) - that is actually 1/2, is just an unconcistant on your manual leniency usage
oh yeah and ar 9 is just annoying at this bpm, just my opinion
  1. 00:16:401 (4,5) - 1,78x 1/4 jump >: unreadable for me x_x
and many unconcistance on compresion of streams and 1/2 stacked objects, again is my opinion, if you dont like it dont considerate it, just a remember, you posted on my queue for my opinion and here it is

that is all, thanks for requesting and sorry for late >_<
grumd
1,790 posts
Joined October 2010
grumd
@ikari_kyon: congrats with 300th kudosu ;D
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
【和谐区】
粗略的看了下
-10~12ms

虽然没看过动画
音效方面 建议用战鼓音效 显得更有气势一点
DT看了 下比较顺畅 排版读图都没什么问题 基本定型了

所以 希望在音效上出点力
老实说 现在这音效 也说得过去
要是有追求的话试着努力一把~



star~ 不说GL这种客套话了 233
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
AoiX

DarkRingSystem wrote:

【和谐区】
粗略的看了下
-10~12ms :arrow: -10,改了以后舒服多了

虽然没看过动画
音效方面 建议用战鼓音效 显得更有气势一点 :arrow: 战鼓感觉只能finish音连用啊，我试试
DT看了 下比较顺畅 排版读图都没什么问题 基本定型了

所以 希望在音效上出点力
老实说 现在这音效 也说得过去
要是有追求的话试着努力一把~ :arrow: 我现在超有追求，所以超懒惰状态等澄空的GD 液~



star~ 不说GL这种客套话了 233 :arrow: thx~
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
Easy
00:49:110 (3) - finish用意何在?


rockmmer's Normal
00:58:860 (1,2) - 这里节奏好随意，试试这个? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/323495


Hard
01:10:110 (1,2) - anti-jump略丑 要么摆得再近点 要么按spacing放


Horizon
Perfect !
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there

[Easy]
01:22:485 (3) - Almost touch the HP Bar


[rockmmer's Normal]
00:48:360 (3) - Stack under slider makes confusing for beginners of which the object should be clicked first
01:07:860 (1) - Too much repeating slider can makes confusing for beginners
01:10:860 (1) - ^
01:31:485 (6) - Same issue as 00:48:360 (3)


[Hard]
00:14:422 (2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, and it makes hidden for players for some cases http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/325197
00:48:360 (1) - Too much repeating slider can makes boring for advanced players. Split them into two slider


[Horizon]
00:27:547 (2,3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu and/or hitbursts, and it makes hidden for players for some cases
01:13:860 (1) - ^


Byeeee~
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
AoiX

Leorda wrote:

SPOILER
Hi there

[Easy]
01:22:485 (3) - Almost touch the HP Bar :arrow: but no affect to play

[Hard]
00:14:422 (2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, and it makes hidden for players for some cases http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/325197 :arrow: I'm think about to change the skin~
00:48:360 (1) - Too much repeating slider can makes boring for advanced players. Split them into two slider :arrow: fine.fix


[Horizon] :arrow: same with Hard
00:27:547 (2,3,4) - Overlapped by spinner-osu and/or hitbursts, and it makes hidden for players for some cases
01:13:860 (1) - ^


Byeeee~
thx mod
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Hello, from my queue. I have some suggestions for you ~

[Easy]

  1. The spacing is so small, and the slider velocity is so slow. I think you could probably make a more interesting Easy to be honest.
00:51:360 (2,1,2) - The overlapping is kind of ugly and potentially confusing for a new player.
00:58:860 (1) - Flip is vertically? It looks neater.
01:14:610 (1,2) - Why the spacing change? It's too far apart compared to the rest of the map.
01:23:985 (2) - Spacing feels too close.

[rockmmer's Normal]

  1. Wow again the slider velocity is really low; I'd recommend increasing it because sliders like 00:00:360 (1) - look bad and don't play great.
00:06:547 (2) - Remove finish, I think it sounds out of place.
00:08:047 (4) - ^
00:42:360 (3,1,2) - Lots of returns... maybe think of something more interesting?
01:01:860 - Add note, it finishes this section off nicely.
01:27:360 (1,2) - Number of returns is kinda confusing.
01:31:860 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

Hmm... there's so many returning sliders in this difficulty, I feel that this would be more interesting if you cut them down and came up with some other patterns.

[Hard]

00:05:610 (7) - Move this left with distance snap to reduce overlap with 00:05:422 (6) -
00:13:860 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe move these further apart so no overlap? It'll look better.
00:18:360 (1,2,3) - ^
00:35:985 (4) - Align with 00:35:422 (3) -
01:38:610 (1) - I think the volume should be louder here, maybe 25%?

This difficulty is good, but I think you could reduce some of the overlapping to make it look neater.

[Wmf's Taiko]

  1. Looks fine, but I don't understand why there are 1/8 drum rolls when there's no 1/8 in the song.
[Insane]

00:04:860 (1) - Align with 00:04:485 (2) -
00:05:235 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I think it would look neater if the spacing was bigger between these notes.
00:46:297 (3,4,5,6,1) - This sounds odd... maybe keep the rhythm 1/2?
01:01:860 - Note? It'd finish off this section nicely.
01:10:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you should keep the volume at 40% here.
01:21:360 (1,2) - Sounds odd since it doesn't follow the song. It might be better to keep it 1/2 here.
01:22:860 (1,2) - ^
01:37:860 - Note?
01:38:610 (1,2,3,4) - Raise volume to 25%?

Overall, I like the way you used custom hitsounds and the song is really cool but I think the easier difficulties could be made more interesting.
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
AoiX

Shulin wrote:

SPOILER
Hello, from my queue. I have some suggestions for you ~

[Easy]

  1. The spacing is so small, and the slider velocity is so slow. I think you could probably make a more interesting Easy to be honest.
:arrow: I think it's fine as a Easy diff.

00:51:360 (2,1,2) - The overlapping is kind of ugly and potentially confusing for a new player. :arrow: fixed
00:58:860 (1) - Flip is vertically? It looks neater. :arrow: fixed
01:14:610 (1,2) - Why the spacing change? It's too far apart compared to the rest of the map. :arrow: fixed
01:23:985 (2) - Spacing feels too close. :arrow: fixed

[rockmmer's Normal]

  1. Wow again the slider velocity is really low; I'd recommend increasing it because sliders like 00:00:360 (1) - look bad and don't play great.
00:06:547 (2) - Remove finish, I think it sounds out of place.
00:08:047 (4) - ^
00:42:360 (3,1,2) - Lots of returns... maybe think of something more interesting?
01:01:860 - Add note, it finishes this section off nicely.
01:27:360 (1,2) - Number of returns is kinda confusing.
01:31:860 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

Hmm... there's so many returning sliders in this difficulty, I feel that this would be more interesting if you cut them down and came up with some other patterns.

[Hard]

00:05:610 (7) - Move this left with distance snap to reduce overlap with 00:05:422 (6) - :arrow: fixed
00:13:860 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe move these further apart so no overlap? It'll look better. :arrow: fixed
00:18:360 (1,2,3) - ^ :arrow: fixed*2
00:35:985 (4) - Align with 00:35:422 (3) - :arrow: no,it will overlap with (1)
01:38:610 (1) - I think the volume should be louder here, maybe 25%? :arrow: I think now is still too loud...

This difficulty is good, but I think you could reduce some of the overlapping to make it look neater.

[Wmf's Taiko]

  1. Looks fine, but I don't understand why there are 1/8 drum rolls when there's no 1/8 in the song.
[Insane]

00:04:860 (1) - Align with 00:04:485 (2) - :arrow: I think it's fine so I don't know what's your mean...
00:05:235 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I think it would look neater if the spacing was bigger between these notes. :arrow: fixed
00:46:297 (3,4,5,6,1) - This sounds odd... maybe keep the rhythm 1/2? :arrow: I'll keep my mind
01:01:860 - Note? It'd finish off this section nicely. :arrow: nope.I keep blank here because of the rhythm
01:10:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you should keep the volume at 40% here. :arrow: no.it will be noisy with hitsound and what I want is keep the original sound.
01:21:360 (1,2) - Sounds odd since it doesn't follow the song. It might be better to keep it 1/2 here. :arrow: fixed
01:22:860 (1,2) - ^ :arrow: ^
01:37:860 - Note? :arrow: No
01:38:610 (1,2,3,4) - Raise volume to 25%? :arrow: fixed

Overall, I like the way you used custom hitsounds and the song is really cool but I think the easier difficulties could be made more interesting. :arrow: my pleasure thx~
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