fixed
thank you for modding

>>Pastel tagも変更しときました >w</

Hi from #modreqs

Rain:
Overall looks nice

00:36:942 (1) -- Add a whistle to the end of the slider
00:40:692 (4) -- Add a whistle to this note
00:57:192 (5) -- Add a whistle to the end of the slider
00:58:692 (2) -- Add whistle
00:59:442 (3) -- Remove whistle
01:00:192 (4) -- Add whistle
01:04:692 -- Add a note here with clap

Normal:

00:03:192 (3) -- Add whistle
00:06:192 (3) -- ^
00:08:817 (4) -- Remove whistle
00:18:942 (1,3) -- Add a whistle to the end of both sliders
00:25:317 (1) -- Add whistle to reverse slider
00:26:254 (2) -- Remove whistle
00:27:567 (5) -- I think it's better to have the whistle at the start of the slider instead
00:37:317 (2) -- Add whistle to the end
00:38:067 (3) -- Remove whistle
00:38:254 (4) -- Whistle to the end
00:42:942 (1) -- ^
00:44:629 (3) -- ^
00:46:317 (2) -- Whistle to reverse arrow
01:09:942 (1,3) -- If possible add a clap to the slider ticks
01:15:567 (2) -- Clap is better than whistle
01:42:942 (6) -- Whistle to the end
01:50:254 (7) -- ^
01:51:567 (9) -- Whistle to beginning
01:59:442 (4,6) -- Add finish to the beginning and whistle to the end (to keep up with the flow from the previous notes)
02:20:067 (4) -- Clap on end
02:21:567 (1) -- Clap
02:21:942 (2) -- Remove clap
02:23:422 (4) -- Clap on the reverse arrow. not the end
02:24:567 (1) -- Clap
02:35:254 (6) -- Clap on beginning

Pastel:

Sounds nice enough :3

Lunatic:

You could always follow pastel's flow on the hitsounds since it sounds the same

almost fixed
thx~

Yo, sorry I took so long to get to this.

[General]
02:48:942 - This is a weird place to end the kiai. 02:42:942 - End it here if anything.

[Easy]
00:12:942 (1) - This is too soon after a spinner for an easy difficuty. Maybe end the spinner at 00:11:817 - ?
00:25:692 (1) - This is also too soon. Doesn't seem to be an easy solution here beyond some slight rhythm changes or cutting the spinner really short, and that isn't desireable since it'd be awkwardly short for an easy. See what you can figure out.
00:49:504 (4,5) - maybe to simplify this a little delete 5 and extend the 4 slider to where 5 was.
00:54:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - This string is fairly complex for a beginner level map. Each object that comes up has a different time value to it. See if you can simplify this a little bit.
01:59:067 (2) - An alternate rhythm suggestion here:


[Normal]
00:08:067 (3,5) - I'd remove the finishes on these. They don't fit.
00:25:317 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a normal. Try for two beats at this BPM.
00:51:192 (1,2) - I was really wanting this next combo to start in the left left of the screen since that short slider really pushes the flow in that direction. Having it start back at the top was disruptive to an otherwise smooth play.
01:27:192 (2) - I don't understand why this is extended to 01:27:754 - and the spinner starts at 01:28:129 - . Move them back to the white ticks.
02:18:192 (1,2,3) - Move these down and right 2 grids to adjust for stacking.
02:42:942 (1,1) - I prefer the way R a i n did his spinner transition. Check the easy and see if you like it better.

[Taiko]
00:12:379 (3,1,1,1,1) - kddkd
00:15:942 (1,1,1,2,1) - These finishes felt rather inappropriate
00:18:942 (1) - And then you miss a perfect opportunity to add one in.
00:36:379 (1,2,3) - These feel better as k
00:50:254 (2,1,2) - I'm not feeling this rhythm at all considering the music.
00:58:692 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Why? 01:03:192 (1) - This is the best place for a longer stream, and you already took advantage of that. Why this one?
02:18:942 (1) - This kiai section feels so empty. This is supposed to be the big finale of the piece.

[Hard]
02:42:942 (1,1) - I prefer the way R a i n did his spinner transition. Check the easy and see if you like it better.
Otherwise this is pretty nice.

[Lunatic]
00:04:129 (2,3,4) - I'm not a fan of all these 1/4 stacks. They're disingenuous to the music. They're not following anything in the music in any case. They're also all over the map. :/
01:45:754 (6) - The timing of the finish is ever so slightly off. It just feels wrong to me, I guess.
02:13:504 (1,2) - Due to the direction of the jumps from these two sliders, I really wanted to continue that back and forth direction, but instead was confronted by 02:14:254 (1,2) - and felt like the flow was ruined and a great opportunity for a flowy jump pattern was lost. See if you can rearrange this so it remains awesome.
02:42:942 (1,1) - I prefer the way R a i n did his spinner transition. Check the easy and see if you like it better.
03:03:004 (6) - You can barely tell there's a slider there.


The taiko needs a lot of work still. I asked in #taiko for some volunteers to mod this. I don't know if anyone will come, but it's a start. See if you can get it in a better state, then call me back. :3

Random check in #modreqs as your Taiko mod request



good luck~

Garven wrote:

Yo, sorry I took so long to get to this.

[General]
02:48:942 - This is a weird place to end the kiai. 02:42:942 - End it here if anything.　I leave it to Quilt

[Hard]
02:42:942 (1,1) - I prefer the way R a i n did his spinner transition. Check the easy and see if you like it better.
Otherwise this is pretty nice.Fixed~

Thanks mod Garven sensei

forumにosuファイルが貼れない・・・だと
仕方ないのでpuush http://puu.sh/yWQb

orz seems i'm late, good luck.

Map is good and SB is great

update >w</
thanks mod!! Garven san!!
all fixed
and Thanks NatsumeRin!!

はやく Ranked　しないと　ぶーんぶーんいいまくるから


ぶーーんWWWWWWWWWWWぶーーーーーんWWWWWWWWWWWW

Garven wrote:

Yo, sorry I took so long to get to this.

[Taiko]
00:12:379 (3,1,1,1,1) - kddkd ok
00:15:942 (1,1,1,2,1) - These finishes felt rather inappropriate no
00:18:942 (1) - And then you miss a perfect opportunity to add one in. no
00:36:379 (1,2,3) - These feel better as k ok
00:50:254 (2,1,2) - I'm not feeling this rhythm at all considering the music. ok
00:58:692 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Why? 01:03:192 (1) - This is the best place for a longer stream, and you already took advantage of that. Why this one? no
02:18:942 (1) - This kiai section feels so empty. This is supposed to be the big finale of the piece. wait


The taiko needs a lot of work still. I asked in #taiko for some volunteers to mod this. I don't know if anyone will come, but it's a start. See if you can get it in a better state, then call me back. :3

fixed thankyou modding

追記:Quiltさん気合タイムについてはお任せでー(笑)

spboxer3 wrote:

Random check in #modreqs as your Taiko mod request

Taiko

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. none~

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:05:442 - It's a kinda empty here. maybe you need add some object like d? ok
2. 00:09:942 - ^ ok
3. 00:12:379 (3,1,1,1,1) - try to use ddkdk? no
4. 00:13:317 (3,1,2,1) - sound kd dk is better ok
5. 00:19:317 (2,1,2,1) - dk dk/ dk kk? ((because 00:20:067 - it's a high pitch in the background ok
6. 00:25:317 (1,1,1,1,1) - kdd dd follow the background about high/low pitch? change
7. 00:40:317 (2,1,2) - awkward pattern for me. because it's not follow the rhythm to make this pattern. ↓ is a possible solution ok
   
   
8. 00:52:317 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - used like xxx x xxx x or xxx x x xxx rhythm is better. ok
9. 00:56:254 (3,1,2) - used like ↓ rhythm it's more flow for this part ok
   
   
   01:03:942 - to 01:06:379 - It's poor difficulty spread. for this part. It's too easy compare to other part. ok
10. 01:09:192 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ok
11. 01:17:442 - [suggestion] add d? ok
12. 01:40:317 (1,2,3) - sound ddk is better. ok
13. 01:41:067 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1) - [suggestion] k d d d d k d k? no
14. 01:44:067 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - d k k d d k k d d k K ((follow the high/low pitch. ok
15. 01:50:254 (4) - It's sound like a downbeat. so I suggest to use D? ok
16. 01:52:692 (5) - k?　　 ok
17. 01:53:442 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - d k d k k d k?　　 ok
18. 01:55:317 (1,2,3) - follow this pitch. k d d is better.　　 ok
19. 01:56:067 (1,2,3,4) - d d k d. same as follow pitch issue.　　 ok
20. 02:03:192 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - try to use k d d k d d k d.　　 ok
21. 02:05:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - [suggestion] kkddd?　　ok
22. 02:09:942 (2,3,1,2) - sound b]k d k k[/b] is better.　　ok
23. 02:12:942 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1) - k d d kdd d d k k d k? ((follow the background about high/low pitch?　ok
24. 02:18:192 (1,2,3,1,1) - d d k k D. ((same as pitch and downbeat issue.　　ok
25. 02:18:942 - to 03:06:942 - D: It's toooooo easy for the second kiai time. you can reference the first kiai time to map. ok
    

　
good luck~

fix~ modding thankyou

Rain's easy fixed

update ></

Sorry for late reply, when this map get rebubbled, feel free to ask me for a check then

Breeze wrote:

Sorry for late reply, when this map get rebubbled, feel free to ask me for a check then

ok! i see

hi, as per your req from forum PM

[General]

1. well since the artist has been changed to FELT, edit the title of the thread
2. And I'm not clear about the vocal so make sure Maika is still correct to appear there even after the artist change http://puu.sh/A9qb
3. Spinner New Combo 02:20:442 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. (yes you need to add NC manually cause the spinner and the next note seems not in a row (not tightly group together in a logical way))

[Easy]

00:53:442 (3) - no whistle
01:00:942 (5) - x56 y120 to encircle better

[Normal]

whistles during the non-kiai parts could be arranged better, actually, pay more attention to them the next time while mapping
01:46:317 (1) - looks kinda asymmetrical http://puu.sh/A9v6
02:23:442 (4) - move clap to the reverse point
02:28:317 (6) - clap
02:29:254 (8) - finish
02:31:504 (4) - remove clap :< no reason for doing like this
02:36:942 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - chaotic/cofusing clap arrangement

[Pastel's Hard]

00:24:379 (5,6,7,8) - whistle,0,whistle,0→whistle,whistle,0,0
01:07:504 (3) - http://puu.sh/A9xS
02:21:567 (4) - ctrl+r? better flow imo

[Lunatic]

00:09:004 (3,4,5,6) - how about http://puu.sh/A9zJ?
00:13:504 (2) - pointless jump here i guess
00:20:067 (6) - http://puu.sh/A9zY
00:34:504 (6) - sldier http://puu.sh/A9Ak
00:45:567 (1,3) - bad looking, really, do sth :3
00:53:067 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - necessary to make the spacing even?http://puu.sh/A9AV
00:55:504 (4) - screwy
02:03:942 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - can you make this a triangle? http://puu.sh/A9BR now its sooo odd
02:21:942 (5) - http://puu.sh/A9Co
02:22:692 (7) - ^
02:27:004 (1,2) - copy+paste please. also 02:27:004 (1) - ctrl+r 02:27:379 (2) - ctrl+r x.x

taiko seems ok to me

But I'm wondering if this deserves a rebub since the lack of aesthetic arrangement

LKs wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:09:004 (3,4,5,6) - how about http://puu.sh/A9zJ? no chenge

almost fixed
thanks

LKs wrote:

hi, as per your req from forum PM

[General]


[Pastel's Hard]

00:24:379 (5,6,7,8) - whistle,0,whistle,0→whistle,whistle,0,0
01:07:504 (3) - http://puu.sh/A9xS
02:21:567 (4) - ctrl+r? better flow imo

OK ,All Fixed

http://puu.sh/AoRO

Sorry I took so long to get back to this.

[Easy]
00:25:692 (1) - This is still too soon after a spinner. 2 beats @ 160 BPM is still really soon and doesn't give much recovery time - especially after a fairly long spinner.
00:54:942 (2,3) - This may need to be simplified further. Maybe make 2 and 3 a slider and extend 00:56:254 (4) - to 00:57:004 - and delete 5
02:10:692 (2,1) - I'd remove the claps from here. Starting claps at 02:12:942 (2) - feels like it transitions with the music better.

[Normal]
01:28:129 (1) - Start this at 01:27:942 - That or add a note there.
02:18:192 (1) - Move them down and right two grids. It should looke like this in the editor

All fixed

mo hitotsu aru, gomen

rain:
02:20:442 (1) - Add new combo

update

Rebubbled!

Garven wrote:

Rebubbled!

thanks! Garven san!!

3...2...1...

Patchouli wrote:

3...2...1...

ででででで！！！！

[Normal]

1. 02:18:942 - 02:48:942 - Why not keep using 2-4 clap in this part? sometimes you add clap at 1 or 3 white tick, that sounds odd imo

[Pstel's Hard]

1. 00:18:754 (6) - I think this jump is not a good idea, easily read to 1/2 beat space
2. 02:02:254 (6) - Slider path is a bit hidden by hitburst of previous note, it would be nice if you move this slider to another area
3. 01:18:379 (1) - Slider head, finish here sounds awkward imo, maybe remove finish?
4. 01:24:754 (4) - ^, according to music, finish should at 01:24:942 white tick, but there is no note there, so just keep there empty would be better than it was now
5. 01:26:254 (3) - Slider tail, add finish
6. 02:29:254 (3) - Slider head, add finish

[Lunatic]

1. 01:02:629 (1) - This spacing is just...odd, well, still playable though, I think it would be nice if it's a usual spacing or just stack it under 01:02:254 (5)

That's all

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 02:18:942 - 02:48:942 - Why not keep using 2-4 clap in this part? sometimes you add clap at 1 or 3 white tick, that sounds odd imo

[Lunatic]

1. 01:02:629 (1) - This spacing is just...odd, well, still playable though, I think it would be nice if it's a usual spacing or just stack it under 01:02:254 (5)

That's all

all fixed
thank you for modding

Breeze wrote:

[Pstel's Hard]

1. 00:18:754 (6) - I think this jump is not a good idea, easily read to 1/2 beat space
2. 02:02:254 (6) - Slider path is a bit hidden by hitburst of previous note, it would be nice if you move this slider to another area
3. 01:18:379 (1) - Slider head, finish here sounds awkward imo, maybe remove finish?
4. 01:24:754 (4) - ^, according to music, finish should at 01:24:942 white tick, but there is no note there, so just keep there empty would be better than it was now
5. 01:26:254 (3) - Slider tail, add finish
6. 02:29:254 (3) - Slider head, add finish

That's all

All fixed, and some pattern changed
Thank you for modding,Breeze

http://puu.sh/B5mo

update!!!

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おめでとー！！

have been waiting so long

gratz for the 1st ranked map :3 !

おめでとう！！！

おめでとう～～

おめでと～

おめでとうー

Congrats on first ranked!

おつかれさん

おめでとう～

both in ha.ppy.sh and osu.ppy.sh > <

いえーい

Congratz ranked

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そして　


さようなら

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Gratz

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Congratz~

Congratz on your 1st ranked map

Thanks everyone!!

yay!!! first Rank!!!!! yayyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!

1st rankeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed~~~~~~~~~~<3

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時は来た！！！！

Rank >w<

Congratulations! first ranked map! :>

おめると

congrats^^

OMEDETO!!!!
YEAH~~~~

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congrats on ranked beatmap

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I love this song~Congrats~

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