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ok! i seeBreeze wrote:
Sorry for late reply, when this map get rebubbled, feel free to ask me for a check then
hi, as per your req from forum PM
[General]
00:53:442 (3) - no whistle
01:00:942 (5) - x56 y120 to encircle better
[Normal]
whistles during the non-kiai parts could be arranged better, actually, pay more attention to them the next time while mapping
01:46:317 (1) - looks kinda asymmetrical http://puu.sh/A9v6
02:23:442 (4) - move clap to the reverse point
02:28:317 (6) - clap
02:29:254 (8) - finish
02:31:504 (4) - remove clap :< no reason for doing like this
02:36:942 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - chaotic/cofusing clap arrangement
[Pastel's Hard]
00:24:379 (5,6,7,8) - whistle,0,whistle,0→whistle,whistle,0,0
01:07:504 (3) - http://puu.sh/A9xS
02:21:567 (4) - ctrl+r? better flow imo
[Lunatic]
00:09:004 (3,4,5,6) - how about http://puu.sh/A9zJ?
00:13:504 (2) - pointless jump here i guess
00:20:067 (6) - http://puu.sh/A9zY
00:34:504 (6) - sldier http://puu.sh/A9Ak
00:45:567 (1,3) - bad looking, really, do sth :3
00:53:067 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - necessary to make the spacing even?http://puu.sh/A9AV
00:55:504 (4) - screwy
02:03:942 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - can you make this a triangle? http://puu.sh/A9BR now its sooo odd
02:21:942 (5) - http://puu.sh/A9Co
02:22:692 (7) - ^
02:27:004 (1,2) - copy+paste please. also 02:27:004 (1) - ctrl+r 02:27:379 (2) - ctrl+r x.x
taiko seems ok to me
But I'm wondering if this deserves a rebub since the lack of aesthetic arrangement
[General]
- well since the artist has been changed to FELT, edit the title of the thread
- And I'm not clear about the vocal so make sure Maika is still correct to appear there even after the artist change http://puu.sh/A9qb
- Spinner New Combo 02:20:442 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. (yes you need to add NC manually cause the spinner and the next note seems not in a row (not tightly group together in a logical way))
00:53:442 (3) - no whistle
01:00:942 (5) - x56 y120 to encircle better
[Normal]
whistles during the non-kiai parts could be arranged better, actually, pay more attention to them the next time while mapping
01:46:317 (1) - looks kinda asymmetrical http://puu.sh/A9v6
02:23:442 (4) - move clap to the reverse point
02:28:317 (6) - clap
02:29:254 (8) - finish
02:31:504 (4) - remove clap :< no reason for doing like this
02:36:942 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - chaotic/cofusing clap arrangement
[Pastel's Hard]
00:24:379 (5,6,7,8) - whistle,0,whistle,0→whistle,whistle,0,0
01:07:504 (3) - http://puu.sh/A9xS
02:21:567 (4) - ctrl+r? better flow imo
[Lunatic]
00:09:004 (3,4,5,6) - how about http://puu.sh/A9zJ?
00:13:504 (2) - pointless jump here i guess
00:20:067 (6) - http://puu.sh/A9zY
00:34:504 (6) - sldier http://puu.sh/A9Ak
00:45:567 (1,3) - bad looking, really, do sth :3
00:53:067 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - necessary to make the spacing even?http://puu.sh/A9AV
00:55:504 (4) - screwy
02:03:942 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - can you make this a triangle? http://puu.sh/A9BR now its sooo odd
02:21:942 (5) - http://puu.sh/A9Co
02:22:692 (7) - ^
02:27:004 (1,2) - copy+paste please. also 02:27:004 (1) - ctrl+r 02:27:379 (2) - ctrl+r x.x
taiko seems ok to me
But I'm wondering if this deserves a rebub since the lack of aesthetic arrangement
Topic Starter
OK ,All FixedLKs wrote:
hi, as per your req from forum PM
[General]
[Pastel's Hard]
00:24:379 (5,6,7,8) - whistle,0,whistle,0→whistle,whistle,0,0
01:07:504 (3) - http://puu.sh/A9xS
02:21:567 (4) - ctrl+r? better flow imo
http://puu.sh/AoRO
Sorry I took so long to get back to this.
[Easy]
00:25:692 (1) - This is still too soon after a spinner. 2 beats @ 160 BPM is still really soon and doesn't give much recovery time - especially after a fairly long spinner.
00:54:942 (2,3) - This may need to be simplified further. Maybe make 2 and 3 a slider and extend 00:56:254 (4) - to 00:57:004 - and delete 5
02:10:692 (2,1) - I'd remove the claps from here. Starting claps at 02:12:942 (2) - feels like it transitions with the music better.
[Normal]
01:28:129 (1) - Start this at 01:27:942 - That or add a note there.
02:18:192 (1) - Move them down and right two grids. It should looke like this in the editor
[Easy]
00:25:692 (1) - This is still too soon after a spinner. 2 beats @ 160 BPM is still really soon and doesn't give much recovery time - especially after a fairly long spinner.
00:54:942 (2,3) - This may need to be simplified further. Maybe make 2 and 3 a slider and extend 00:56:254 (4) - to 00:57:004 - and delete 5
02:10:692 (2,1) - I'd remove the claps from here. Starting claps at 02:12:942 (2) - feels like it transitions with the music better.
[Normal]
01:28:129 (1) - Start this at 01:27:942 - That or add a note there.
02:18:192 (1) - Move them down and right two grids. It should looke like this in the editor
mo hitotsu aru, gomen
rain:
02:20:442 (1) - Add new combo
rain:
02:20:442 (1) - Add new combo
Topic Starter
update
Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
thanks! Garven san!!Garven wrote:
Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
ででででで！！！！Patchouli wrote:
3...2...1...
[Normal]
- 02:18:942 - 02:48:942 - Why not keep using 2-4 clap in this part? sometimes you add clap at 1 or 3 white tick, that sounds odd imo
- 00:18:754 (6) - I think this jump is not a good idea, easily read to 1/2 beat space
- 02:02:254 (6) - Slider path is a bit hidden by hitburst of previous note, it would be nice if you move this slider to another area
- 01:18:379 (1) - Slider head, finish here sounds awkward imo, maybe remove finish?
- 01:24:754 (4) - ^, according to music, finish should at 01:24:942 white tick, but there is no note there, so just keep there empty would be better than it was now
- 01:26:254 (3) - Slider tail, add finish
- 02:29:254 (3) - Slider head, add finish
- 01:02:629 (1) - This spacing is just...odd, well, still playable though, I think it would be nice if it's a usual spacing or just stack it under 01:02:254 (5)
Topic Starter
all fixedBreeze wrote:
[Normal][Lunatic]
- 02:18:942 - 02:48:942 - Why not keep using 2-4 clap in this part? sometimes you add clap at 1 or 3 white tick, that sounds odd imo
That's all
- 01:02:629 (1) - This spacing is just...odd, well, still playable though, I think it would be nice if it's a usual spacing or just stack it under 01:02:254 (5)
thank you for modding
All fixed, and some pattern changedBreeze wrote:
[Pstel's Hard]
- 00:18:754 (6) - I think this jump is not a good idea, easily read to 1/2 beat space
- 02:02:254 (6) - Slider path is a bit hidden by hitburst of previous note, it would be nice if you move this slider to another area
- 01:18:379 (1) - Slider head, finish here sounds awkward imo, maybe remove finish?
- 01:24:754 (4) - ^, according to music, finish should at 01:24:942 white tick, but there is no note there, so just keep there empty would be better than it was now
- 01:26:254 (3) - Slider tail, add finish
- 02:29:254 (3) - Slider head, add finish
That's all
Thank you for modding,Breeze
http://puu.sh/B5mo
Topic Starter
update!!!
Here we go
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おめでとー！！
have been waiting so long 
gratz for the 1st ranked map :3 !
gratz for the 1st ranked map :3 !
おめでとう～～
おめでと～ 
Congrats on first ranked!
おめでとう～
この勢いで２個目いきましょ！
おめでと！
おめでと！
both in ha.ppy.sh and osu.ppy.sh > <
いえーい
Congratz ranked
congrats ~
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Congratz~
Congratz on your 1st ranked map 
Topic Starter
Thanks everyone!!
yay!!! first Rank!!!!! yayyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!
yay!!! first Rank!!!!! yayyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!
1st rankeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed~~~~~~~~~~<3
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時は来た！！！！
Congratulations! first ranked map! :>
congrats^^
rankおめでとう!!! Quillllltttt
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0w0b congrats for ranking on yuyuko
congrats on ranked beatmap
grats ~
Can some help me I can't download the map. I just run into an error when I try to download the osz