hoLysoup wrote:

:D
<3

S MoMo wrote:

一応太鼓BG作ってみましたが、使用はしていないので位置がズレていたりなどの報告ください。
修正します。

ストーリーボードですが一度osb内の内容をコピーしTaiko以外のそれぞれのosu内の[Events]に書き込んでください

Quilt wrote:

んー　結構位置がずれちゃってます＞＜　こちらで一応直して置いたんで確認？だけおねがいします

S MoMo wrote:

Quilt wrote:

んー　結構位置がずれちゃってます＞＜　こちらで一応直して置いたんで確認？だけおねがいします

修正どうもです。

後フォルダ内のosbは消したほうがいいです

NoHitter wrote:

[Pastel's Hard]
00:31:879 (1,2,3,4,5) - The sudden spacing change in order to make a pattern, doesn't fit the music IMO.Fixed
00:41:067 (8) - New Combo.Fixed
01:04:317 (1) - This anti-jump doesn't play well. Since it's similar to a Central Anti-Jump, players will tend to assume it's spaced similarly in the timeline as the previous notes. I don't want to change this
02:06:379 (2,3,4) - Maybe tone down the spacing here? II I don't want to change this><

terametis wrote:

[Hard] Fixed
01:06:192 (x)　　　　音取りに違和感を感じます。こんな音取りはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Pastel's Hard] ALL Fixed
HD+1, or it is too low as a Hard diff
00:46:317 (2) - move to x:292 y:40? or the anti-jump between 00:45:567 (1,2) - is kinda confusing
01:04:317 (1) - ^, x:300 y:296?
01:06:567 (7) - move this slider up a bit plz, it nearly out of the screen

1. ランクには支障ないと思いますが、歌詞以外のSBが線上に乗っていないので乗せた方が良いかと思います。全SBを動かす方法は上記ツールのDesign⇒ Move all elements in Timeでできるので便利です。
2. mod↓

1. 2つ目のkiai time前にエフェクト付けてみては？　↓は提案 (BGm1.jpgの行に追加)
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BGm1.jpg",320,240
   F,0,18754,18942,0,1
   F,0,18942,19692,1,0
   S,0,18942,19692,1,1.072
   F,0,138192,138754,0,0.4
   S,0,138192,138754,1
   F,0,138754,138942,0.4,0.5
   S,0,138754,139317,1,1.2
   F,0,138942,139317,0.5,0

1. SB isn't snapped other than the lyricsSB. ( As for this, there is not the problem with ranked. but it is better to snap )
2. Deficit:My suggestion↓

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
F,0,0,,0　⇒add. SB from below so i think the set of BG should be here
//Break Periods
2,10142,12192
2,94142,99192
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0　　⇒Remove the above reasons
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
Sprite,Fail,Centre,"SB\BGm1.jpg",320,240　　⇒remove. This does not so have a meaning.
F,0,21949,24761,0,0.724
F,0,24761,35449,0.724,0.7237426
M,0,25317,26008,320,240,318,240
F,0,35449,36949,0.7237426,0
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BGm.jpg",320,240
F,0,12386,12949,0,1　⇒
M,0,12386,25317,320,240,321,240 　⇒There is no meaning because it does not move
F,0,12949,63199,1,0.9662522　⇒nazi F,0,12949,63199,1
M,0,25317,31879,321,240 ⇒There is no meaning because it does not move
M,0,31879,100317,321,240,321,241　⇒There is no meaning because it does not move
F,0,63199,63949,0.9662522,0　⇒nazi　F,0,63199,63949,1,0
F,0,63949,99199,0
F,0,99199,99949,0,0.9674953　⇒nazi F,0,99199,99949,0,1
F,0,99949,186949,0.9674953,0.9520154 　⇒nazi F,0,99949,186949,1
F,0,186949,189949,0.9520154,0　　⇒nazi F,0,186949,189949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
F,0,6761,6949,0,1
S,0,6761,12574,0.5440001,1.48
R,0,6761,12574,-1.184,-1.621246E-07
F,0,6949,10699,1
F,0,10699,12574,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f1.png",320,240
F,0,761,1324,0
M,1,761,3949,320,253,283,226
S,0,761,3949,0.1280002,1.624
R,1,761,3949,-4.688,0.07999983
F,0,1324,3574,0,1
F,0,3574,3949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
F,0,1136,3574,0,1
M,1,1136,3949,324,272,255,232
S,0,1136,3949,1.936,0.7280002
R,1,1136,3949,0,-2.608
F,0,3574,3949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
M,0,3761,,320,240
F,0,3761,3949,0,1
S,1,3761,5449,1.496,1.96
R,0,3761,5449,0,-2.016
F,0,3949,5449,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f1.png",320,240
F,0,5261,5449,0,0.316
S,0,5261,6949,1.576,1.28
R,0,5261,6949,0.5119998,-1.328
F,0,5449,6949,0.316,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t2.png",320,240
M,0,6949,,398,258
F,0,6949,8449,1,0
S,0,6949,8449,1.264,1.744
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t2.png",320,240
F,0,6761,6949,0,1
M,0,6761,12949,399,260,396,236
S,0,6761,12949,1.256,1.064
F,0,6949,12199,1
F,0,12199,12949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t1.png",320,240
F,0,761,949,0,1
M,0,761,12949,320,240,318,193
S,0,761,12949,1,1.296
F,0,949,12199,1,0.9787234
F,0,12199,12949,0.9787234,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\t1.png",320,240
F,0,949,1699,1,0
S,1,949,1699,1,1.352
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240
F,0,11824,12386,0,1
F,0,12386,12761,1,0
M,0,12574,,320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BGm1.jpg",320,240
F,0,18761,18949,0,1
F,0,18949,19699,1,0
S,0,18949,19699,1,1.072
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\0.jpg",320,240
F,0,93574,93949,0,1
M,0,93574,99949,256,239,355,239
F,0,93949,99574,1
F,0,99574,99949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240 ⇒Do not have much effect. It is necessary to put it behind 「kk.jpg」 to keep an effect. so move to *1
F,0,63199,63949,0,1
F,0,63949,64136,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\whitew.jpg",320,240
F,0,12199,12386,0,1
F,0,12386,12949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\kkblack.jpg",320,240
F,0,75199,93949,1
F,0,93949,94699,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,81574,,1.416
F,0,81574,81949,0,1
M,0,81574,85699,432,-143,345,348
R,0,81574,85699,0,-0.64
F,0,81949,85324,1
F,0,85324,85699,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,87574,,1.608
F,0,87574,87949,0,1
M,0,87574,90949,457,63,353,434
R,0,87574,90949,0,-0.9919998
F,0,87949,90199,1
F,0,90199,90949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,84574,,1.56
F,0,84574,84949,0,1
M,0,84574,88699,123,16,188,354
R,0,84574,88699,0,1.392
F,0,84949,87949,1
F,0,87949,88699,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,78574,,1
F,0,78574,78949,0,1
M,0,78574,81574,252,-6,282,231
F,0,78949,81574,1,0.006399989
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,75574,,1.504
F,0,75574,76699,0,1
M,0,75574,83449,429,-155,67,420
R,0,75574,83449,0,1.936
F,0,76699,82699,1
F,0,82699,83449,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\f2.png",320,240
S,0,80824,,1.8
F,0,80824,81199,0,0.704
M,0,80824,84192,164,16,367,376
R,0,80824,84574,0.9440001,0.8639996
F,0,81199,83074,0.704
F,0,83074,84574,0.704,0
M,0,84192,84574,367,376,392,352
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\yuyuk.png",320,240
F,0,74449,75949,0,1
M,0,75574,,394,257
F,0,75949,93574,1
F,0,93574,95074,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\kk.jpg",320,240
F,0,63574,63949,0,1
F,0,63949,75199,1
F,0,75199,75949,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.png",320,240　⇒*1 above reasons. and add my suggestion
F,0,63192,63754,0,0.7
F,0,63754,63942,0.7,1
S,0,63754,63942,2,2.5
F,0,63942,64317,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\01.png",320,240
F,0,25317,25692,0,1
M,0,25317,28879,200,330,240,330
F,0,28504,28879,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\02.png",320,240
F,0,28879,29254,0,1
M,0,28879,31692,400,400,360,400
F,0,31317,31692,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\03.png",320,240
F,0,31879,32254,0,1
M,0,31879,36567,220,330,260,330
F,0,36192,36567,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\04.png",320,240
F,0,37317,37692,0,1
M,0,37317,40692,400,400,360,400
F,0,40317,40692,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\05.png",320,240
F,0,41067,41442,0,1
M,0,41067,43879,220,330,260,330
F,0,43504,43879,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\06.png",320,240
F,0,44067,44442,0,1
M,0,44067,45192,400,400,380,400
F,0,44817,45192,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\07.png",320,240
F,0,45379,45754,0,1
M,0,45379,48004,200,330,240,330
F,0,47629,48004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\08.png",320,240
F,0,48192,48567,0,1
M,0,48192,50817,400,400,380,400
F,0,50442,50817,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\09.png",320,240
F,0,51192,51567,0,1
M,0,51192,54004,200,330,240,330
F,0,53629,54004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\10 copy.png",320,240
F,0,54379,54754,0,1　　⇒Fade-in is slower than others. change to F,0,54192,54567,0,1
M,0,54379,57379,400,400,380,400　　⇒ M,0,54192,57379,400,400,380,400
F,0,57004,57379,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\11.png",320,240
F,0,57567,57942,0,1
M,0,57567,59629,200,330,240,330
F,0,59254,59629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\12.png",320,240
F,0,60192,60567,0,1
M,0,60192,63004,400,400,380,400
F,0,62629,63004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\13.png",320,240
F,0,63192,63567,0,1
M,0,63192,65629,200,330,240,330
F,0,65254,65629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\14.png",320,240
F,0,65817,66192,0,1
M,0,65817,69004,400,400,380,400
F,0,68629,69004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\15.png",320,240
F,0,69192,69567,0,1
M,0,69192,72004,200,330,240,330
F,0,71629,72004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\17.png",320,240
F,0,75192,75567,0,1
M,0,75192,77629,200,330,240,330
F,0,77254,77629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\16.png",320,240
F,0,72192,72567,0,1
M,0,72192,75004,400,400,380,400
F,0,74629,75004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\18.png",320,240
F,0,77817,78192,0,1
M,0,77817,81004,400,400,380,400
F,0,89629,81004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\19.png",320,240
F,0,81379,81754,0,1　⇒Fade-in is slower than others. change to F,0,81192,81567,0,1
M,0,81379,84004,220,330,260,330　⇒M,0,81192,84004,220,330,260,330
F,0,83629,84004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\20 copy.png",320,240
F,0,84192,84567,0,1
M,0,84192,93754,400,400,380,400
F,0,93379,93754,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\21.png",320,240
F,0,100317,100692,0,1
M,0,100317,103879,220,330,260,330
F,0,103504,103879,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\22.png",320,240
F,0,104067,104442,0,1
M,0,104067,106504,400,400,380,400
F,0,106129,106504,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\23.png",320,240
F,0,106879,107254,0,1
M,0,106879,111192,240,330,300,330
F,0,111192,111567,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\24.png",320,240
F,0,112317,112692,0,1
M,0,112317,115692,400,400,380,400
F,0,115317,115692,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\25.png",320,240
F,0,116067,116442,0,1
M,0,116067,118879,240,330,300,330
F,0,118504,118879,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\26.png",320,240
F,0,119067,119442,0,1
M,0,119067,120379,400,400,380,400
F,0,120004,120379,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\27.png",320,240
F,0,120567,120942,0,1
M,0,120567,123004,240,330,300,330
F,0,122629,123004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\28.png",320,240
F,0,123192,123567,0,1
M,0,123192,125817,400,400,380,400
F,0,125442,125817,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\29.png",320,240
F,0,126192,126567,0,1
M,0,126192,129004,240,330,300,330
F,0,128629,129004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\30 copy.png",320,240
F,0,129192,129567,0,1
M,0,129192,132379,400,400,380,400
F,0,132004,132379,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\31.png",320,240
F,0,132567,132942,0,1
M,0,132567,135004,240,330,300,330
F,0,134629,135004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\32.png",320,240
F,0,135192,135567,0,1
M,0,135192,138004,400,400,380,400
F,0,137629,138004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\33.png",320,240
F,0,138192,138567,0,1
M,0,138192,140629,240,330,300,330
F,0,140254,140629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\34.png",320,240
F,0,140817,141192,0,1
M,0,140817,144004,400,400,380,400
F,0,143629,144004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\35.png",320,240
F,0,144192,144567,0,1
M,0,144192,147004,240,330,300,330
F,0,146629,147004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\36.png",320,240
F,0,147192,147567,0,1
M,0,147192,150004,400,400,380,400
F,0,149629,150004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\37.png",320,240
F,0,150192,150567,0,1
M,0,150192,152629,240,330,300,330
F,0,152254,152629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\38.png",320,240
F,0,152817,153192,0,1
M,0,152817,156004,400,400,380,400
F,0,155629,156004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\39.png",320,240
F,0,156192,156567,0,1
M,0,156192,159004,240,330,300,330
F,0,158629,159004,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\40 copy.png",320,240
F,0,159192,159567,0,1
M,0,159192,161629,400,400,380,400
F,0,161254,161629,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Lyrics\41.png",320,240
F,0,161817,162192,0,1
M,0,161817,168942,240,330,300,330
F,0,168567,168942,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

1. Add effects to 2nd kiaitime How is?　so ↓my suggestion (Added to the BGm1.jpg)
   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BGm1.jpg",320,240
   F,0,18754,18942,0,1
   F,0,18942,19692,1,0
   S,0,18942,19692,1,1.072
   F,0,138192,138754,0,0.4
   S,0,138192,138754,1
   F,0,138754,138942,0.4,0.5
   S,0,138754,139317,1,1.2
   F,0,138942,139317,0.5,0

wcx19911123 wrote:

form my queue

[General]
jsut saying, as a sb designer, shia is no need to put into tags.. anyway it's up to you o.o
why not cancel letterbox during breaks? it looks bad cuz this map has nice sb　no change~

[Normal]
01:15:942 - cancel newcombo? fixed
01:26:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pentagon can be better fixed

[Lunatic]
00:37:129 (3,1) - this is really hard to read, plz don't make hidden sldiers.. fixed
01:11:067 (7) - move this slider up a bit plz, it nearly out of the screen fixed
01:19:879 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - move this pattern right and down a bit plz, or the spacing between 01:19:504 (1,2) - is wrong when playing fixed
02:42:754 - add a note plz, it's odd when here hasn't object..fixed

did you find any sb mod? I'm not sure..
anyway, you can call me back when it got some sb mod

1. I suggest adding a silent slider into the file.Some of the part are just too noisy with the sliderslide sound.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP +1?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These ar e totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:03:942 (1) - The rhythm is quite weird here.I think this should be a 1.5 beat here.That means the slider should end at 00:04:504 - and you should add a whistle at the end of the slider if you fix it.
   2. 00:10:317 (x) - I don't know why you put a break here.I think a spinner here is much better then a break.If you change that, you don't need to place a long spinner.
   3. 01:02:067 (x) - I guess you need to add a note here to follow the vocal but well, just leave it to you.
   4. 01:30:567 (1) - I would move this spinner to 01:30:754 - to fit with the vocal if I were you.You need to end it at 01:33:942 -
   5. 02:45:567 (1) - ^Similar to previous.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:00:942 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider due to the drum sound.
   2. 00:33:942 (4) - Add a whistle at the ednd of the slider to fit your whistle pattern.
   3. 00:48:192 (3) - Please remove the clap sound at the reverse of the slider.It doesn't fit the music at all and it is the only clap in this part.
   4. 00:51:192 (1) - ^Same.
   5. 00:55:879 (3) - ^Same.
   6. 02:30:192 (3) - Add a clap sound at the beginning of the slider and add a finish at the end of the slider.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:10:317 (x) - I don't know why you put a break here.I think a spinner here is much better then a break.If you change that, you don't need to place a long spinner.
   2. 01:00:192 (1,2,3) - I would change this 1/2 stack to a 1/2 slider if I were you because this is the only 1/2 stream in this part which may cause a miss to some newbie player.
   3. 01:05:442 (5) - Would you add a new combo here because this chain of combo is much longer than others.
   4. 01:07:692 (1,2) - Be honest, the 1/2 rhythm here doesn't sound right, I think it is off the music.Some 1/1 here is good enough for me though.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:35:817 (2) - I think a whistle here would be nice, it depends on you.
   2. 01:03:942 (3) - I guess you are missing a clap at the reverse of the slider.Please add one on it to follow your hitclap pattern.
   3. 01:11:442 (3) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider?
   4. 01:39:942 (1) - I guess you are missing a finish sound here because there is a very strong accent point.
   5. 02:18:942 (3) - Please remove the clap sound at the reverse of the slider.It doesn't fit the music for sure.
   6. 02:36:942 (3) - Remove the clap at the end of the slider and then add a clap at the reverse of the slider.
   7. 02:40:692 (5) - Remove the clap from the beginning of the slider and the end of the slider and then add a clap at the reverse of the slider.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 02:39:754 (4,5,1) - (Bad gameply)Inconsistent spacing, were you make this intentional?This can make a bad gameplay to players.Please use the distance snap to snap it again.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:09:942 (3) - Design stuff here.I would make it like this if I were you.Yeah, just make it more beautiful.
      
      

      255,131,9942,2,0,B|193:128|199:86|123:79,2,140,4|2|2

   2. 00:17:629 (4) - They rhythm here is really weird for me.1/1 on red line doesn't fit the music here.Probably change it to 1/2 or some 1/2 with some triplets?
   3. 00:21:942 (1) - I don't think a spinner would fit the music here.I rather map this part instead of spinner.
   4. 02:21:567 (4) - A bit nazi here.Would you put slider (4)- between (2.3)- properly like this?You need to check the spacing after fix.
      
      ^

      
   5. 02:26:254 (x) - I guess you need to add a note here to follow the vocal.At least I can't find a reason that you skip this pitch.
   6. 02:42:754 (7) - How about move this note to x:416 y:256? (grid 4) ?It looks much better imo.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:11:254 (5) - I'm quite wondering that why you don't add a finish sound here.I can hear a finish sound from the instrument so a finish is really suitable here.
   2. 01:18:379 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider would be nice.
   3. 02:33:754 (1) - Please remove the clap at the end of the slider.I feel extremely weird of this clap and it don't fit the music.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:05:817 (8) - Remove or change this 5-plets please.It sounds really noisy and doesn't fit the music here.
   2. 00:10:317 (x) - I don't know why you put a break here.I think a spinner here is much better then a break.If you change that, you don't need to place a long spinner.
   3. 00:15:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It would be much better if you can 1/1 spacing consistent here.It can improve the gameplay if you do that.
   4. 00:20:629 (7) - Add a new combo here to emphasize the new stanza
   5. 01:00:942 (2) - A desgin stuff here.This slider is really ugly for me.I would make a new one for you but use or not is depended on you.
      
      

      185,342,60942,2,0,B|236:320|261:361|308:337,1,119.999996423721,4|2

   6. 02:57:754 (1) - I would put this note between (2)- and (2)- properly like this.
      
      
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:17:817 (6) - Remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider please.
   2. 02:26:629 (8) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider please.

1. 00:00:942 (1) - Change it to big don?
2. 00:28:317 (2,3,1) - I don't think triplet is really fitting the music here.You can either remove or change it to 1/2 pattern.
3. The drum sound in kiai time is almost covered by the music.Please increase the volume (change it normal hitsound can increase the volume.)
4. 01:14:254 (1,2,3,1,2) - kkddd sounds much better here.
5. 01:43:129 (1) - Remove this note?
6. 01:45:942 (3) - Change to big kat and then remove the note at 01:46:129 (1) - .This note is quite meaningless.
7. 02:13:504 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Why such a long stream here? D: It doesn't fit the music for SURE.It just make the noisy without any fun.

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry for long delay.Request is taken from my queue.

[SoMo's Taiko]

1. 00:00:942 (1) - Change it to big don?　　ok
2. 00:28:317 (2,3,1) - I don't think triplet is really fitting the music here.You can either remove or change it to 1/2 pattern. ok
3. The drum sound in kiai time is almost covered by the music.Please increase the volume (change it normal hitsound can increase the volume.) wait
4. 01:14:254 (1,2,3,1,2) - kkddd sounds much better here. ok
5. 01:43:129 (1) - Remove this note? ok
6. 01:45:942 (3) - Change to big kat and then remove the note at 01:46:129 (1) - .This note is quite meaningless. ok
7. 02:13:504 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Why such a long stream here? D: It doesn't fit the music for SURE.It just make the noisy without any fun. ok

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Pastel's Hard]
01:09:192 (1,2,3) - nice here
01:33:942 - plz volume up here, 30% is too low.. Fixed
02:45:567 - 1st spinner end at here and 2nd spinner start at 02:45:754 - ? like what you did at 01:27:942 (1,1) - Fixed

wcx19911123 wrote:

here we go

LunarSakuya wrote:

いけいけいけいけいけいけいけ

Makar8000 wrote:

Hello~
02:27:004 (1,3) - (Lunatic) The hitburst from (1) blocks the repeat from (3), which is unrankable:

SPOILER

Please consider fixing this when a BAT checks, :3. Fun map btw ^^

happy30 wrote:

[Pastel's Hard]
00:30:567 (5,6) - why the sudden spacing change?　
00:34:504 (2) - too close to (1)
00:48:942 (1,2,3) - spacing change again I won't change it..><
01:20:067 (4) - make the prev/next spacing equal

happy30 wrote:

Change the Artist to FELT and put Maika in the tags Don't forget to fix the taiko bg as well

[Normal]
I dislike the bland 1/1 rhythm you use here. try to follow the vocals and drums a bit more

00:26:442 (2,3) - 1/2 back?
00:27:379 - add a note?
00:29:817 (2) - get rid of this, place a single note on 00:30:004 -
00:31:317 (4) - make it start 1/2 later
00:32:817 (2,3) - remove these, place a new note on 00:33:004 -
00:38:442 (4) - move this 1/2 back
00:49:317 (3) - move this 1/2 later
00:49:692 (4) - move this 1/2 later as well and kill 1 repeat
00:51:942 (3) - this slider doesn't work here. I feel like there should be a sound on 00:52:504 - change this slider perhaps?
00:53:067 (4) - the same for this slider, there really needs to be a sound on 00:53:254 -
00:58:692 (4,5,6,7,1) - move these 1/2 back, after that place a new note on 01:00:192 -
01:03:942 (3) - make this slider 1/2 longer, so you will have to remove the note on 01:05:067 (4) - (similar to 01:15:942 (1) - )
01:06:192 (2) - move this 1/2 earlier
01:13:692 (4) - move this 1/2 back and place a new note on 01:14:629 (6) -
01:30:754 (1) - start this 1/2 later?
01:48:192 (3) - make this start 1/2 earlier
02:00:942 (6) - I'm not sure about this slider, I think the endpoint should end 1/2 earlier, in this case the repeat won't work :\
02:08:442 (1) - move this 1/2 back
02:13:317 (3,4,5) - move these 1/ back and place a new note on 02:13:317 -
02:15:942 (1) - remove this slider, make something similar to this:

02:18:942 (3) - the endpoint should end 1/2 earlier so I don't think this repeat slider works either
02:20:442 (4) - move this 1/2 back?
02:21:942 (2) - make the slider 1/2 longer (1/1 since its a repeat slider) and remove the note on 02:23:067 - ?
02:26:067 (3) - move this 1/1 later and remove the note on 02:27:192 -
02:27:942 (5) - this slider doesnt work since I feel like there should be a sound on 02:28:504 - and 02:28:863 -
02:31:692 (2) - move this 1/2 back?
02:33:192 (2) - ^
02:34:692 (4) - ^
02:35:067 (5) - make this start 1/2 earlier
02:38:067 (1) - make this start 1/2 later
02:46:317 (1) - make this start 1 white ticks later
02:42:942 (1) - make this end 1 white tick later

all fixed

[Lunatic]
00:25:129 - till 00:35:442 - for such a calm part of the song I think you overmapped this part here.some fixed

1. Remove letterbox during the break in taiko diff. Not consistant with other diff.
2. Pastel's Hard has different tags, make sure you fix that.

1. 00:03:567 (4) - I think you need a whistle here since you also give a whistle when the drum sound occur in previous and next note.
2. 00:06:942 (1) - ^ but at the slider repeat.
3. 00:25:692 (1) - This note is covered by spinner hitburst which can confused some beginner player. Consider to move it somewhere else.
4. 00:25:692 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why there's no hitsound in this rythim? I think you can add a whistle rythim in each long white tick. It's very fit because there's a high pitch in every long white tick.
5. 00:33:942 (4) - Add new combo here. It's very long compare to your other combo.
6. 00:48:192 (3) - I think you need a whistle here at the start to close your previous whistle rythim.
7. 00:51:192 (1) - ^ but this is more likely because not consistant.
8. 01:05:442 (1) - New combo bug. This is unrankable, so make sure you add a new combo on it.
9. 01:48:942 (5) - Add new combo here. Too long again.
10. 02:04:879 (2) - Add a whistle here too at slider end. I hear a high piano sound there and very fit with whistle sound.
11. 02:12:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - This shape is not even symetrical, making it not very good to see. To fix this, move 02:13:692 (3) - to x:256 y:304 , 02:14:442 (4) - to x:372 y:248 , 02:15:192 (5) - to x:488 y:192.
12. 02:19:692 (1) - This note is hidden by spinner hitburst too. Consider to move this circle somewhere else.
13. 02:28:692 (1,2,3) - Orz, not symetrical shape again that really not good to see. To fix this, please move 02:29:442 (2) - to x:116 y:232 , then 02:30:192 (3) - x:212 y:320. Fix the spacing with the next note if you use this suggestion.
14. 02:39:192 (1) - Remove the finish on the start please. Really doesn't fit with your current melody. It should be clap not finish.
15. Any reason why you don't map until 03:06:942- ? If there's no particular reason, you should map this diff until that spot.

1. Very high distance for a normal. Just comment
2. 00:26:254 (2) - How about you add a whistle here? It's follow up nicely with your whistle at 00:26:629 (3) - end.
3. 00:27:567 (5) - ^ but at the slider end.
4. 00:29:442 (1) - ^
5. 00:30:004 (2) - Don't stack this circle please. Because you change polarity into red, it's hard to guess what's the rythim on it. It can be confusing, even to the experience player.
6. 00:32:442 (1) - ^
7. 00:41:629 (3) - I think whistle on this circle should be on 00:41:067 (2) - end. It will be more consistant to your hitsounds rythim.
8. 00:44:067 (2) - Partly hidden by 00:42:567 (5) - hitburst. It's not good to see and quite confusing. Better to stack it 5 or move it away from 5
9. 00:46:317 (2,3) - A bit spacing issue. Move 3 a little more away.
10. 00:49:879 (4) - How about you add a finish here at the slider end? Since there's a cymbal sounds at that spot, it really fit with finish sound.
11. 00:51:942 (3) - ^ the whistle should be finish at this slider start.
12. 01:06:004 (2) - Nazi, but move this slider 1 grid down to make this symetrical with 01:05:442 (1) -
13. 01:13:879- Add a note on this spot please. It seems you're following the vocal but miss at this point. It's makes the gameplay little awkward.
14. 01:23:629- Add a note on this spot too please. You're following vocal but miss at this spot too.
15. 01:24:567 (3) - I think you need a hitsounds at this slider start to follow you previous clap rythim. It can be clap or whistle. But i prefer clap since it fit with the drum.
16. 01:25:317 (4) - ^
17. 01:26:067 (1) - ^
18. 01:27:192 (2) - ^
19. 01:44:442 (2) - Feels empty at this spot. Better you add a whistle at this slider start.
20. 01:48:004 (3) - ^ it's not consistant with 01:49:504 (6) -
21. 01:48:942 (4) - Add a finish here since i hear a cymbal sound at this spot.
22. 01:50:254 (7) - ^ in the slider start.
23. 02:35:254 (6) - It seems empty without clap. How about clap at this slider end?
24. 02:39:942 (4) - Umm, it's seems your clap doesn't fit with the song. Please add a clap here. then remove clap at 02:40:692 (5) - start. Then add a clap on 02:40:692 (5) - repeat. It will be more consistant.
25. Same as Easy, any reason why you don't map until 03:06:942- ? If there's no particular reason, you should map this diff until that spot.
    
    There's a lot of hitsounds that i can't follow. It seems you're mostly placed the hitsounds randomly. My suggestion about hitsounds is if you want to follow the drum sounds with a clap, try to add clap every 2nd and 4th beat every stanza

1. 00:18:942 (1) - How about finish sounds at this slider start? Since it's have a cymbal sounds there.
2. 00:20:442 (1) - Remove new combo here. Doesn't consistant with 00:14:442 (4) -
3. 00:27:567 (6) - I think you miss a whistle here at the start.
4. 00:39:567 (7) - ^
5. 00:46:504 (3) - ^
6. 02:00:567 (6) - ^
7. 02:55:504 (2) - An awkward slider. It's better just straight. So delete the 2nd and 3rd point of this slider.

1. 00:18:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Why there's no hitsounds here? Not consistant with 00:12:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2. 02:12:942 (7) - How about add a finish here since there's a cymbal sounds at this spot.

Miya wrote:

Pastel's Hard

1. 00:18:942 (1) - How about finish sounds at this slider start? Since it's have a cymbal sounds there.
2. 00:20:442 (1) - Remove new combo here. Doesn't consistant with 00:14:442 (4) -
3. 00:27:567 (6) - I think you miss a whistle here at the start.
4. 00:39:567 (7) - ^
5. 00:46:504 (3) - ^
6. 02:00:567 (6) - ^
7. 02:55:504 (2) - An awkward slider. It's better just straight. So delete the 2nd and 3rd point of this slider.

I think two easiest diff need more work before it ready for bubble. The hitsounds stills random and not consistant imo. And there's some point of the song that's break the flow in normal diff. Also, pattern in easy can still be improved too.
That's all from me.
Good luck~

Garven wrote:

Yo, sorry I took so long to get to this.

[General]
02:48:942 - This is a weird place to end the kiai. 02:42:942 - End it here if anything.　I leave it to Quilt

[Hard]
02:42:942 (1,1) - I prefer the way R a i n did his spinner transition. Check the easy and see if you like it better.
Otherwise this is pretty nice.Fixed~

Garven wrote:

Yo, sorry I took so long to get to this.

[Taiko]
00:12:379 (3,1,1,1,1) - kddkd ok
00:15:942 (1,1,1,2,1) - These finishes felt rather inappropriate no
00:18:942 (1) - And then you miss a perfect opportunity to add one in. no
00:36:379 (1,2,3) - These feel better as k ok
00:50:254 (2,1,2) - I'm not feeling this rhythm at all considering the music. ok
00:58:692 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Why? 01:03:192 (1) - This is the best place for a longer stream, and you already took advantage of that. Why this one? no
02:18:942 (1) - This kiai section feels so empty. This is supposed to be the big finale of the piece. wait


The taiko needs a lot of work still. I asked in #taiko for some volunteers to mod this. I don't know if anyone will come, but it's a start. See if you can get it in a better state, then call me back. :3

spboxer3 wrote:

Random check in #modreqs as your Taiko mod request

Taiko

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. none~

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:05:442 - It's a kinda empty here. maybe you need add some object like d? ok
2. 00:09:942 - ^ ok
3. 00:12:379 (3,1,1,1,1) - try to use ddkdk? no
4. 00:13:317 (3,1,2,1) - sound kd dk is better ok
5. 00:19:317 (2,1,2,1) - dk dk/ dk kk? ((because 00:20:067 - it's a high pitch in the background ok
6. 00:25:317 (1,1,1,1,1) - kdd dd follow the background about high/low pitch? change
7. 00:40:317 (2,1,2) - awkward pattern for me. because it's not follow the rhythm to make this pattern. ↓ is a possible solution ok
   
   
8. 00:52:317 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - used like xxx x xxx x or xxx x x xxx rhythm is better. ok
9. 00:56:254 (3,1,2) - used like ↓ rhythm it's more flow for this part ok
   
   
   01:03:942 - to 01:06:379 - It's poor difficulty spread. for this part. It's too easy compare to other part. ok
10. 01:09:192 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ok
11. 01:17:442 - [suggestion] add d? ok
12. 01:40:317 (1,2,3) - sound ddk is better. ok
13. 01:41:067 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1) - [suggestion] k d d d d k d k? no
14. 01:44:067 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - d k k d d k k d d k K ((follow the high/low pitch. ok
15. 01:50:254 (4) - It's sound like a downbeat. so I suggest to use D? ok
16. 01:52:692 (5) - k?　　 ok
17. 01:53:442 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - d k d k k d k?　　 ok
18. 01:55:317 (1,2,3) - follow this pitch. k d d is better.　　 ok
19. 01:56:067 (1,2,3,4) - d d k d. same as follow pitch issue.　　 ok
20. 02:03:192 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - try to use k d d k d d k d.　　 ok
21. 02:05:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - [suggestion] kkddd?　　ok
22. 02:09:942 (2,3,1,2) - sound b]k d k k[/b] is better.　　ok
23. 02:12:942 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1) - k d d kdd d d k k d k? ((follow the background about high/low pitch?　ok
24. 02:18:192 (1,2,3,1,1) - d d k k D. ((same as pitch and downbeat issue.　　ok
25. 02:18:942 - to 03:06:942 - D: It's toooooo easy for the second kiai time. you can reference the first kiai time to map. ok
    

　
good luck~

Breeze wrote:

Sorry for late reply, when this map get rebubbled, feel free to ask me for a check then

1. well since the artist has been changed to FELT, edit the title of the thread
2. And I'm not clear about the vocal so make sure Maika is still correct to appear there even after the artist change http://puu.sh/A9qb
3. Spinner New Combo 02:20:442 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. (yes you need to add NC manually cause the spinner and the next note seems not in a row (not tightly group together in a logical way))

LKs wrote:

[Lunatic]
00:09:004 (3,4,5,6) - how about http://puu.sh/A9zJ? no chenge

LKs wrote:

hi, as per your req from forum PM

[General]


[Pastel's Hard]

00:24:379 (5,6,7,8) - whistle,0,whistle,0→whistle,whistle,0,0
01:07:504 (3) - http://puu.sh/A9xS
02:21:567 (4) - ctrl+r? better flow imo

Garven wrote:

Rebubbled!

Patchouli wrote:

3...2...1...

1. 02:18:942 - 02:48:942 - Why not keep using 2-4 clap in this part? sometimes you add clap at 1 or 3 white tick, that sounds odd imo

1. 00:18:754 (6) - I think this jump is not a good idea, easily read to 1/2 beat space
2. 02:02:254 (6) - Slider path is a bit hidden by hitburst of previous note, it would be nice if you move this slider to another area
3. 01:18:379 (1) - Slider head, finish here sounds awkward imo, maybe remove finish?
4. 01:24:754 (4) - ^, according to music, finish should at 01:24:942 white tick, but there is no note there, so just keep there empty would be better than it was now
5. 01:26:254 (3) - Slider tail, add finish
6. 02:29:254 (3) - Slider head, add finish

1. 01:02:629 (1) - This spacing is just...odd, well, still playable though, I think it would be nice if it's a usual spacing or just stack it under 01:02:254 (5)

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 02:18:942 - 02:48:942 - Why not keep using 2-4 clap in this part? sometimes you add clap at 1 or 3 white tick, that sounds odd imo

[Lunatic]

1. 01:02:629 (1) - This spacing is just...odd, well, still playable though, I think it would be nice if it's a usual spacing or just stack it under 01:02:254 (5)

That's all

Breeze wrote:

[Pstel's Hard]

1. 00:18:754 (6) - I think this jump is not a good idea, easily read to 1/2 beat space
2. 02:02:254 (6) - Slider path is a bit hidden by hitburst of previous note, it would be nice if you move this slider to another area
3. 01:18:379 (1) - Slider head, finish here sounds awkward imo, maybe remove finish?
4. 01:24:754 (4) - ^, according to music, finish should at 01:24:942 white tick, but there is no note there, so just keep there empty would be better than it was now
5. 01:26:254 (3) - Slider tail, add finish
6. 02:29:254 (3) - Slider head, add finish

That's all