Great map, rank it asap! gogogogoggoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*I expected another w-gradient pulse here like at 18361. It seems there's a flash on my version. Maybe I already made this fix?
*Same as above for 48740. This doesn't quite follow the pattern. The 1/2 w-gradient flashes come right before the verse begins.
*w-thai seems to disappear from 79500 to 79880. Is this intended, or is it a layering issue? w-thai doesn't disappear – it's greyed out. So it's intentional.
*Same as above for 84816 to 85562. Certainly appearing here. Maybe I already made this fix.
*s-1.jpg: Why not fade this out at 116701 instead of 117080? Good idea.
*k-gradient.png doesn't seem to be changing color like it's supposed to in Kirby's diff... Found it. The original image wasn't greyscaled.
Gens, download the .zip, extract it in the song folder. Replace k-gradient.png with the one attached here.xierbaliti wrote:
-Kirby-
00:30:892 - this green line seems not used, remove it? Removed, honey.
01:01:272 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing is not good imo. it's a bit hard to read. Got a better pattern, thanks!
01:02:791 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:50:xxx - not sure about SB load. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/150893 Fixed.
have a star
Gens wrote:
Now the only thing left is the pending timing recheck and we're good to go!
Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:48 pm (over 3 months ago);_;
Download: you know what you doing.zipDerekku wrote:
[Storyboard]
*Why is the fog at 67348 so much more faded than the other parts of the song? It was a typo – the Fade was supposed to end at 68107, not 78107. Fixed.
*I mentioned before that w-thai seems to disappear from 79500 to 79880 and from 84816 to 85562. Whether it's "grayed out" or "non-visible", I think it would look better fading from purple to gray rather than basically disappearing and then coming back.There was something up at 79690, but since I couldn't find out exactly what it was, I decided to remove the fade altogether. It looked unsettling with that delayed start, anyway.
*The lyrics look fine without fading out (since a new line of lyrics quickly replace the last), but the final line of each phrase looks strange when disappearing so abruptly. Therefore, I suggest slightly fading out the lyrics at 30892, 67348, and 146342. I thought that the transitioning should be consistent coming in as to out, so I didn't do anything here. SWITCHED-ON LOTUS had such cut transitions with the lyrics, and subtitles are also common cases of cut transitioning.
[KIRBY Mix]
02:32:608 (1) - Could possibly add two more notes so that the vocals are represented like with 02:28:431 (7). Trololo, now it's megatons harder. :v
Charles445 wrote:
02:32:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - Instant death I will survive! I will survive! Hey hey!
Sorry for the delay. I haven't been checking things as I used to.Garven wrote:
[KIRBY]
01:07:918 (4) - The 4 in each of these combos is slightly misaligned. Whaddya know, it is! And there we go. Done.
01:54:437 (2) - There's a bunch of random sliders during this section that have the whistle on the sliderslide and it just sounds bad. It's been a while since I mapped this, but I'm pretty sure they were meant as some sort of build-up. Anyway, I changed the usage of hitsounds there to something I find more sensible.
02:26:525 (2) - The repeat on this is kind of obscured by the osu! image after the spinner
To alleviate this, I flipped the patterns around and changed the design slightly. The repeat isn't hidden anymore!
I can't believe I'm finally going to get my first rank in 2012. Beautiful. ;_;Derekku wrote:
Just a couple tiny issues and I'll be happy to rank this!
I was also worried about this when I fixed that other problem, so I broke symmetry and fixed it. I guess it's better.Derekku wrote:
[Normal]
00:36:968 (1) - Much too close to the last notes. I guess it's not too bad since it's a new combo, but it tripped me up a little.
Hmm, I decided to leave Hard like that since a spinner doesn't seem as necessary... it's not like the scoreboard will be full of SS's, although I guess you never know. I also didn't want to destroy that last pattern... so I'd like to leave it like this if possible.Derekku wrote:
[Hard]
*Perhaps add a spinner to match the other 3 diffs? :p
Breaking symmetry is totally cool with me as long as the pattern still looks nice and fits; in this case, it totally does. (:Gens wrote:
I broke symmetry and fixed it. I guess it's better.
My thoughts exactly!Gens wrote:
it's not like the scoreboard will be full of SS's