1. QwertyK's Rooftop Hustle (5 stars, 450 notes)
2. QwertyK's Rooftop Taiko (4,27 stars, 507 notes)
3. Ratsu's Taiko (5 stars, 670 notes)
4. Roof Breaker (Extra) (5 stars, 606 notes)
5. Rooftop Breeze (Easy) (2,6 stars, 178 notes)
6. Rooftop Dash (Hard) (4,39 stars, 274 notes)
7. Rooftop Jog (Normal) (4,26 stars, 229 notes)
8. Rooftop Rush (Insane) (4,98 stars, 522 notes)

MaSingerZ wrote:

Thanks for modding my map! You're welcome!

[General]
I suggest you should use more precise grid level. Nah; using grid level 2 is sufficiently precise for nice patterns and also to avoid me to count too many gridpoints when making symmetrical designs. I sometimes change to level 3 when I make long sliders, and even disable grid-snapping when distance-snapping.

[Easy]
01:10:430(2,3)-this object is too close the previous object. But the distance spacing is still x1.00, so I consider that no problem.
01:11:929(4,5)-^ Same as above
02:11:749(2,3)-this object is too far the previous object. Same as above.
You may remake this difficulty completely because of your sound taking is not better. Uh the rhythms I take is sufficiently easy for Easy and still hear-able, although I'll see that.

[Insane]
00:25:606(9)-add NC Don't see anything wrong with that. It's Insane after all; it's pretty commonplace in Insane diffs that combo lengths go to the teens.
00:54:766(8)-^ Same as above.
00:57:432(7)-^ Same as above.
01:05:431(8)-^ Same as above.
01:27:759(9)-add NC or diffrent placement Same as above.
01:43:089(6)-add NC Okay this one I agree. Fixed.
01:56:253(9)-^ Back to disagreeing with the same reason.
01:58:919(9)-^ Same as above.
02:06:917(9)-^ Fixed.
02:08:250(17)-^ Fixed.
02:18:581(5)-^ Fixed.
and more Fixed all that I see.

Good Luck!! Thanks!

qwertykool wrote:

Rooftop Breeze
Overall
Phew, this map, could use a makeover, very hard to mod in the current state. But some some tips, especially if you don't want to redo this map. I'm redoing it anyway, seeing other Easy maps.

-DO NOT use the offbeat of a song for many notes in a combo. (Sliders, if not overused, are able to slide [No pun intended] on this problem.) Too much hard diffs makes me use the style there here Edited.
-DO NOT repeat sliders more than once. (Cmon, xD you told me this yourself on my map) It only applies if the slider is short (1/2-beat, additionally 1-beat for Easy). But yeah.
-You have A LOT of empty space on this map, and they aren't breaks, and if they were, there'd be too many breaks. :3 Yeah I know. That's why I'm redoing it.
- A few of the sliders overlap either another slider or a hit circle. It's difficult to see that. Really? I don't remember any here. And I deleted those parts for the redo. Meh.
-Try not to use the melody on an easy difficulty unless the melody follows a very on-beat rhythm. (This one definitely does not) See also: I redo the map
-WAY TOO MANY sliders, definitely cut back on them. Wut? I only have like half as many sliders as hitcircles. Although I'll keep that in mind.

No individual things for Easy, it's not easy at all to mod, and [in my opinion] the map is a little too hard, despite the few hits.

Rooftop Dash
Great map until 2:05:584, At that point, it looked like you gave up. xD See also: Update 8. Also all my comments are based on the finished Hard (until 01:49:588), so if you say something about the part after that break, then you can make sure it's changed; it's leftover of Insane which I haven't edited anyway.
Overall

- Although easy had more, I only recommended it because it was an easy. This is crucial, there NEEDS to be either less spinners or they need to be placed in better spots, because they kind of just pop out at you while your playing, it isn't expected. Alright, modified some.
-DO NOTput a hit circle directly on top of a slider, it's impossible to see where to click next. Same goes for slider on slider, slider on hit circle, etc. There's a reason why this is called Hard, and I use them pretty sparingly.
-DO NOTuse sixteenth notes on a Hard map, and if you do, use them very sparsely. Where do I use sixteenth note?
-FIXFIXFIXFIXFIX Probably the most important problem with this map, is that after the above mentioned point, some notes were marked off the tick, which is a timing error. It sounds atrocious, and I know that it wasn't on purpose, but fix it, it hurts mah ears. Can you give some example?
-Some sliders look, peculiar, :/ make sure they are symmetrical as a general rule. If not they kinda look bizarre. (Some are fine, but look at all of them, and make sure you can say proudly "Hey! I made that, and I'm proud of it! : D) xD Can you give some example?
-Drop the approach rate and overall difficulty. Just by one for each, not needed, but I thought it'd be nice. Done.

Individual Thingsnote: These are only things that weren't mentioned in the general things.

00:29:605 - Repeats twice? Maybe once, then add something Nah, this (breaking what sounds like should be in one slider when it fits with something else) is fun and I see a few in other maps too.
2:05:584 - 2:08:750 - Way too long combo. Combos must be no longer than 16, and (IMHO) no longer than 10 for Hard maps. Also, the whistles are in peculiar spots. See also: Update 8
Many areas don't look finished towards the end, as if you just simply stacked them just to finish later. If that's the case, arrange them, if not, arrange them! xD See also: Update 8

Rooftop Rush
Overall, really, I can't think of any that weren't already stated in the previous two difficulties. Look at those, and apply an "Insane" mentality to them, and go from there. Uh I can't see any of the mentioned suggestions that can be applied here. Any example?

Pleased to help,
Qwertykool

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~

[Rooftop Breeze]
00:50:934 (5) - NC Done
02:04:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - You should change the pattern here, 02:05:584 (5) is not completely hidden, but it's confusing with the approach circles. Done
02:44:242 (5) - Maybe NC Done
02:46:908 (5) - ^ Done

[Rooftop Jog]

00:48:268 (1) - This gets covered by previous combo Done
01:42:922 - Try this and keep if you like I prefer making some stream-like beats to introduce Normal players with stream, although if there is further complaint I'll see how I can change it
01:48:255 - ^ ^

All uninherited timing points (red lines) must be the same in all diffs (source: osu! wiki) Uh qwertykool, you have different uninherited timing sections (including two extremely questionable ones 02:00:252 and 02:10:938). Fix them (and the subsequent different timings caused by the timing section in 01:38:975)?

That's all from my part, good luck c: Thanks

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~

[QwertyK's Rooftop Hustle]

00:10:943 (1) - This note may be covered by HP bar, you should move it.

Edit: All uninherited timing points (red lines) must be the same in all diffs (source: osu! wiki)

That's all from my part, good luck c:

chaotic_iak wrote:

Hm... My reason of not using video is that it feels bad in this song. I'd put one if the song needs some video (like, it's a music that I know to have a music video that is simply very cool that it cannot be left out, or something like that). Unfortunately, this is not the case.

Rooftop Jog clap inconsistency: Oh yeah I forgot. But the claps aren't put as what you think they would be...
Fading out at the end: It feels weird not to fade it. Although if more people apparently prefer no fade, then I'll go for it.

What colors? Combo colors? The four colors most resemble the buildings' colors in my opinion

Your image is pretty great; I'll use it. I'm curious about the source though; for whatever reason I suspect Sonic Generations or Mario and Sonic at the London Olympic Games (okay the latter is pretty much impossible because there's no Mario, but still, it's London). Where did you get the image?

Also yay spammed my kudosus on this

qwertykool wrote:

Well, I'm glad it's resolved

Patch, any modding on mine?

chaotic_iak wrote:

Why there is something like Big Ben there -_- (Or I fail at knowing landmarks miserably)

Err... Okay. Any idea on more "proper" combo colors?

Also since Patch starts from low-diff maps, I guess he's not ready for insane maps yet.

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Kin wrote:

Hi ~
Sorry for late mod .__. Sorry for not noticing mod too ._.
Here some suggest

Easy :

01:20:261 (5,2) - overlap : http://puu.sh/1blPn Not too overlap; I don't think Easy players will have any problem here.
02:09:583 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - there is too many circle here, it's easier if you make something like this : http://puu.sh/1blTz Changed
02:42:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too many circle here, add some slider Changed

Normal :

00:24:273 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/1bm0n Changed? Seems like no change but whatever.

480,192,15608,2,0,B|480:272|464:368,1,96,8|0

00:29:605 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/1bm25 ^

32,192,20941,2,0,B|32:272|48:368,1,96,8|0

01:17:595 (1,2,3) - I think beatsnap 1/2 is too hard for normal diff (for 180 BPM) Changed
01:22:927 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:28:259 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:33:591 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:42:922 (3,4,5) - ^ Not changed because Normal should learn something like that too

Hard :

00:13:109 - maybe add one slider : http://puu.sh/1bm98 I intend to follow the guitar
00:18:441 - ^ ^
00:21:607 (1,4) - It's good looking but I don't think overlap like this is really good Changed
00:26:939 (1,4) - ^ Changed
00:24:773 (7,1) - overlap Changed
nothing here ? 01:20:927 - Added something
02:00:252 (1,4) - this overlap is not really good looking Changed
02:05:584 (1,4) - ^ Changed

Insane :

00:44:102 (3,1) - overlap Intended

Good luck with ranking ~ Thanks