Bobo wrote:

Hi there~!
Listen carefully, the edits are a bit confusing.

GO! PICKY MOD!

-General-

I'd remove Amy, Omega, Rouge and Eggman from the tags.


-Tails-

Why are the colours in this diff different from the others?
00:16:572 - Make this slider 2 ticks longer then add an extra repeat. Yes
00:22:640 - Add 2 repeats. ^
00:24:662 - Move this whole combo forward 4 ticks. ^
00:27:696 - Then make this slider 2 ticks longer and add one repeat. ^
00:33:426 - Add 2 repeats. No sry :/
00:38:145 - Shorten this slider by 4 ticks and add another repeat.
00:40:336 - Move this whole combo forward 2 ticks.
00:42:864 - Make this here two ticks longer and move it back 2 ticks.
00:43:370 - Delete this note.
00:52:808 - Make this slider look more sexy and add 2 repeats.
00:56:010 - Turn this into a 5 tick slider with one repeat.
01:03:595 - 2 ticks forward, 2 ticks longer.
01:23:314 - 2 ticks longer, one repeat.
01:30:730 - Add a note.
01:31:404 - 2 ticks longer.
01:37:303 - 4 ticks shorter.
01:38:651 - 2 ticks shorter.
01:58:876 - 2 ticks forward, 2 ticks longer.
02:01:572 - 2 ticks forward.
02:09:831 - 2 ticks forward.
02:15:898 - 2 ticks shorter.
02:17:246 - Pull this back to 02:16:572 and end it at 02:19:269.
02:25:336 - Back 4 ticks, 4 ticks longer.
02:26:685 - These patterns always confused me when I was a newbie, can you move the (6) so it isn't a back and forth pattern please? K
02:30:730 - 2 ticks longer.
02:31:235 - 2 ticks forward.
03:07:640 - Add a repeat.
03:25:336 - End kiai here.

Phew >.> That took a while... D;
1 diff down, 2 to go~

-Knuckles-

00:23:819 to 00:24:831 - Fill this little gap. Yep
00:53:482 to 00:54:325 - ^
00:56:179 to 00:56:853 - ^
01:23:988 to 01:24:831 - ^
Basically I want you to fill in any gaps like that.
01:33:932 - 2 ticks longer.
01:34:269 - Delete this note.
01:34:606 - 2 ticks longer, remove the whistle at the end.
01:49:100 - Delete (6) and (7) then add a note here. Why?
02:13:876 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/147299
02:27:190 - Delete this note.
02:46:235 - Add a repeat. Yep
02:47:584 - 2 ticks longer.
02:48:089 - Delete this note.
03:06:460 - New combo.
03:06:797 - Delete NC.

-Super Sonic-

00:48:932 - Go a little easier on the finish hitsounds in this combo.
00:51:291 - Delete the new combo.
00:54:325 - Straighten out (1), (2) and (3), these types of triplets can be a bitch.
00:55:168 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/147302
00:59:718 - DRAGONSPARTA WHY U NO USE JUMP POTENTIAL???
01:23:145 - Play around with the slider points so it doesnt overlap (3).
01:26:516 - Vertical flip.
01:54:999 - Go a little easier on the finish hitsounds in this combo.
01:57:359 - Delete NC.
02:08:145 - Ah! Ugly antijump! Fix it.
02:40:505 - Straighten (1), (2) and (3).
The whistles and triplets in the speed up zone do feel really spammy.
02:42:190 - ^
03:02:415 - Change the hitsound style to soft. Make this a 1/8 slider and make it repeat until 03:03:763. Now using many timing sections, make the volume of the slider slowly increase. Finish the slider with a finish. Copy the timing sections from the attatchment. Should look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/147310
03:04:100 - New combo.

Some Yes Some No here

Wow... Lol, there you go! \:D/

Nyquill wrote:

Can't really find much to complain about, so no kds, just going to toss some suggestions your way.

[Knuckles]
01:05:786 (1) - Remove clap from middle of this slider. Clap in the middle of (2) instead. Yep

[Bobo]
00:35:112 (1) - You really should find a way to get this slider to be half a beat earlier.
Otherwise, Excellent diff. Let Bobo decide

[Super Sonic]
01:02:078 (1,2,3) - This sounds like it should be half a beat earlier. Move (1,2,3) half a beat earlier and have a note at 01:02:246?
03:09:157 (1,3) - Having whistles on these reverse sliders is just ear rape. How about having them only at the beginning of (1,3) and have one on (5)?
03:19:143 (1,3) - ^

Nyquill wrote:

Can't really find much to complain about, so no kds,You're getting kuds whether you like it or not XD just going to toss some suggestions your way.
[Bobo]
00:35:112 (1) - You really should find a way to get this slider to be half a beat earlier. Don't see the issue ^^' Sorry
Otherwise, Excellent diff. It's not that good... ><

Bobo wrote:

EDIT 2: FFFF noticed an error, please redownload. Sorry... ><

HellDawn wrote:

Bobo
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this diff so unrankable. Oh shi- thnx. I dont even use the 4th one.
01:52:301- object isnt snapped Umm... ok...
01:55:166- ^ They're stacks. D:
01:55:503- ^
01:55:671- ^
pro DS's diffs are pro, wouldn't say the same about mine.

HellDawn wrote:

Tails
01:03:426- spacing, because too farYep
01:24:325 - ^
02:25:336 (2,3,4,5,6)- spacing
02:01:067 (2,3,4)- spacing
01:04:437- spacing *-* K

Knuckles
00:19:775- clap ? Kays
00:21:123- ^

Bobo
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this diff so unrankable.
01:52:301- object isnt snapped
01:55:166- ^
01:55:503- ^
01:55:671- ^
pro

Bobo wrote:

HellDawn wrote:

Bobo
More than three unique slider speeds are used in this diff so unrankable. Oh shi- thnx. I dont even use the 4th one.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Well my mod:
General:
Try to delete the breaks in the kiai time, add notes

Tails:
00:32:752 (5): New Combo
02:48:932 (spin): Maybe this spinner start on 02:48:763 and finish in 02:50:437 ^

Knuckles:
Circle size-1
To mantain consitance remove the break in 00:49:185 or add a break in 01:54:999 Yep
02:36:291(3): New combo np
I think that this sequence is very difficult knowing that is a normal difficulty

Bobo:
01:16:286: Remove this break is too short
02:50:617: Maybe a spinner sound good here and finish in 02:52:977

Super Sonic:
03:28:286: Remove this break it's really short and unnecesary Add notes
03:30:561(6): New Combo K

Really nice beatmap kudos star
Good Luck [/color]

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Well my mod:
Bobo:
01:16:286: Remove this break is too short
02:50:617: Maybe a spinner sound good here and finish in 02:52:977

ziin wrote:

[general]
What's up with the black overlay and white slider border?
If I mention something but missed it somewhere else, don't assume it's fine. Double check the map yourself so you didn't make that error again. Songs tend to repeat, so if I only mention something once, chances are it fits in every difficulty multiple times.

[tails]
Map was full of lazy sliders all noticeable on first play through (without access to the nodes). If you could, especially on the long sliders, make them as symmetrical as possible, that would be good.
I noticed an awful lot of notes on 1/2 beats, which is all well and good, but it's confusing on the easy difficulty, especially if you don't follow the lyrics almost completely.
There's a lot of sliders which end on the long white tick, or slide over them. Pay better attention to it, so that any that DO slide over are on purpose.
2x repeating sliders play poorly in general unless they are very long or very short. Keep them to a minimum.
00:03:089 (5) - you could put this slider above instead of below so that it isn't covering the next slider. Yep
00:08:819 (1) - take off a repeat, add circle or something Yep
00:11:179 (4,5) - I thought this played better as one long slider ^
00:16:573 (5) - shorten by 1/2 to map vocals ^
00:23:651 (3) - this didn't fit because the first note doesn't map what the last 3 seem to map. k
00:29:718 - add ^
00:32:921 - add 2x repeating (you could split it up into 2x normal sliders too) Did your second opinion
00:51:629 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why are these 2 rhythms different? Ok~
01:58:876 (3) - why is there a repeat? Change to no reverse
02:01:573 (4) - ^ This one has rhythm in the last hit
03:17:584 (1) - keep an eye on things that are too high or too low. Generally I don't put anything y<16 or it might hit the hp bar. Agree
03:29:382 (1,2) - I think you can do a much better job than this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151427 Changed a bit

[knuckles]
Using 1.2x for 1/2 notes and .8x or 1x for 1/1 notes is downright confusing. Then again, the spacing is all over the place so I guess I need to use other means of trying to figure out these rhythms. There's a lot to fix before I can mod it decently. I just don't have the patience to find everything. Take the general suggestions and apply them yourself. Aww T-T
03:33:089 (3) - what? LOL~~~ I DIDNT NOTICE THAT!!! THANKS
03:37:471 (1,2,3,4) - why is there a decrescendo in the hitsounds if there isn't one in the music? Seems ok?

[bobo]
don't forget slider border in this one.
oh the spacing is such a relief in this one...
but then the combo colours make me go "wtf". Mind explaining this one because I'm really baffled.
00:21:292 (6) - these super short 1x repeating sliders don't really need to be curved at all.
00:23:314 (5) - (this one obviously does, ignore ^, use your own judgement)
00:39:325 (10) - move 1/2 later, start new combo
00:42:191 (5) - remove clap
00:43:033 - add clap
00:44:044 (2,2) - I like to put the red nodes on the slider tick, I think it works better, but whatever.
00:49:100 (2,2,3,5) - finishes
01:18:595 (1,2,3,4) - ugh
01:22:303 (6,1) - strange jump
01:28:033 (2,3,4) - if you want to map lyrics here (which you clearly do, otherwise you wouldn't have this new combo pattern) then you should put the sliders on the red tick.
01:40:168 (2,3,4) - these really didn't make sense to me either time. I didn't hear anything in the music doing this so it seemed random.
01:44:213 (9) - new combo
01:46:404 - new combo. fix sliders so it works.
02:46:236 (5) - quit it, you know this doesn't fit.
02:49:101 (6,7) - move back 1/2
03:05:449 (5) - seems silly to completely hide a slider start like this.
03:14:550 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit. It fit 1/2 before, but not now.
03:39:494 - stupid timing point

[supersonic]
00:20:449 (4,5) - I'm going to let you in on a secret. Ctrl C will copy a note, ctrl v will paste a note, and ctrl h will flip it horizontally. Thanks
01:02:163 (2) - you can put this 1/2 before or 1/2 later, but not here. Seems ok
01:07:809 (5,6) - you could have mapped the lyrics here by using 1x repeating sliders Ill see 1st
02:05:786 (1,2,3,4) - this part was bland in every difficulty. You don't have to map the lyrics, you can put in groups of 3 to map the guitar?
02:30:055 (6) - new combo. Also, nobody will complain about new combos if you put new combos on the first note of a phrase or on the long white tick of every other measure. k
02:39:157 (1,2,3) - don't put these on top of a whirling distraction, and not of a similar colour of said whirling distraction. Place on top
02:39:831 - I don't know what you're mapping here. If you're mapping the guitar solo, do it. If you're making something up, then how in the world are we supposed to follow it, especially at 1.25x? You should also start the kiai on the downbeat. It's for epicness



Here's some automated warnings for you. You don't have to fix everything, but it will make your map that much better if you do put the time and effort into making it closer to perfect. You can also download it yourself so you can check in the future. the program isn't perfect, so use your judegment on what needs fixing.

AIBat Warnings

These warnings were generated by AIBat.

[General]
No problems found.

[Storyboard]
Unused Image Files:
comboburst-3.png
comboburst-2.png
comboburst-0.png
comboburst-4.png
comboburst-1.png

Epilepsy Warning:
A storyboard was detected, you may want to include an epilepsy warning.


[All .osu Files]
Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Bobo] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5

- [Knuckles] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

- [Super Sonic] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

- [Tails] :
Combo1 : 68,255,68
Combo2 : 64,64,255
Combo3 : 255,255,87
Combo4 : 251,62,62
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Bobo] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:25:421

- [Knuckles] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:763, ends on 03:28:043

- [Super Sonic] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:629, ends on 01:13:202
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:696, ends on 02:19:269
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:594, ends on 02:57:686
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:754, ends on 03:25:327

- [Tails] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:544, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:28:043


[Difficulty: Bobo]
Snapping:
01:52:301 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:166 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:671 (2) - Unsnapped circle.

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:51:639
01:13:212
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
03:03:774

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:25:421


[Difficulty: Knuckles]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:13:886
00:34:953
00:35:291
00:51:639
01:13:212
01:19:953
01:41:358
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
02:39:588
03:28:043
03:38:071
03:38:746
03:39:420

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588


[Difficulty: Super Sonic]
Snapping:
02:52:977 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:19:937
01:49:600
02:39:594
02:57:686
02:58:360
02:58:670
03:03:754
03:25:327
03:39:404

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:594, ends on 02:57:686
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:754, ends on 03:25:327


[Difficulty: Tails]
Snapping:

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:13:886
00:35:291
01:13:212
01:19:953
01:41:358
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
02:39:588
03:03:774
03:28:043
03:38:071
03:38:746
03:39:420

Breaks:
00:11:885 - The break here is 551 ms long, which is shorter than the recommended 750 ms.

Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:544, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:28:043

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright gonna start this.
Tails:
00:16:572(5) - 2 grids to the left and 1 grid up at the end point of the slider k
00:55:505(3) - 2 grids up at the end point of the slider ^
01:28:539(3,4) - 1 grid down for both circles Good eye
01:31:067(1,2) - Spacing Move it a bit
02:08:819(1,2) - ^ np
02:31:235(3) - 1 grid up for the 2nd and 3rd point of the slider. Did it for the 2nd point

Knuckles:
00:02:584(4) - 2 grids up Ok
00:14:213(2) - Aline it with (3) ^
00:21:966(1) - 1 grid up ^
00:42:696(5) - 1 grid left ^
01:05:449(1) make the slider like this
Np
01:43:370(4) - 1 grid up ok
01:44:213(2) - Stack it with (4) unless u follow my last suggestion. if not ignore my suggestion above. np
03:16:235(4) - make the slider like this Ok


Bobo:
02:36:966(6) - Stack it with the end point of (5)

Super Sonic:
I focused on this diff like u said but i didnt see any problems.

Thi is the best i can do. GL

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

offset : 385 fine, but i will check

[tails]
00:29:718 (1,2) - It's too hard for Easy user. (bpm 178 and 1/2 beat not fit with easy diff)
01:03:427 (2,3) -
01:08:651 (2,3) -
01:58:876 (3) -
02:01:572 (4) -
02:09:663 (2) -
03:15:814 (2) - all same
I think their all fine

[Knuckles]
02:09:663 (3) - 1 grid left k

[bobo]
01:24:325 (6) - 1 grid left
02:36:966 (6) - stack with 02:36:460 (5) -
02:39:325 (2,1) - what?
03:36:291 (4) - 1 grid up

[Super sonic]
02:36:292 (3) - add new combo. np
03:15:056 (5) - stack with 03:13:876 (4) -

Vortex wrote:

Hey there,

Tails
00:16:564 (5) Whole slider with a finish sound?
01:47:407 - 01:48:081 (3,4) Both 1 grid left, because 3 touches 2 (doesn't look nice) Move somewhere else
02:00:722 - 02:01:396 (1,2,3) All 1 grid right, because of the spacing from 3 to 4. k
03:20:062 (1) Put the end of the slider 1 grid up, so it looks symmetrical. k
03:29:710 (2) Should be symmetrical like 2 in 03:32:407.k

Knuckles
00:08:980 (2) 1 grid left. k
00:18:755 Put in 1 hitcircle?
03:04:935 (5) Should look more symmetrical (I know, I like "symmetricalism" xD) k

Bobo
00:20:242 (4) 2 grid right 1 grip up?
00:30:384 (3) If something isn't a stream, I don't like overlapping notes, pls try to fix this
00:39:654 (1) 1 grid left.
00:53:811 (6) 1 grid right.
01:03:587 (5) 1 grid up.
01:07:800 - 01:08:811 (1,2,3) All 1 grid right?
02:39:317 (2) Remove this hitcircle, because it's starting with the equal ending of 1?

Super Sonic
00:22:463 (4) 1 grid up. k
00:26:171 (4) Should look like this after you put it 1 grid right
http://puu.sh/65Td
00:29:036 (6) 1 grid down?
00:38:811 (2) 1 grid up.
03:10:834 (9) 3 grids up.
03:14:542 - 03:15:216 (2,3,4,5,6) Should like like thisk
http://puu.sh/65Ui


I hope it helps :3

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

SPOILER

IceBeam wrote:

Hi. A mod from my fav mapper. Sweet. :D

Fix Audio Lead-In in Bobo's and Super Sonic difficulties,it should be 1000.You can do this via notepad. Done~!
Increase Stack Leniency to 4 at least in Bobo's difficulty,as it's the minimum allowed border for maps aiming for ranking. Thnx didn't know that.
And finally,as you use custom hitcircle,you should add slider border colours..
Open .osu file,find [Colours] line and paste the code right below the 4-th colour settings.

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

Done~!

[Bobo]
Hitsounds are too loud..
Reduce the volume,please. -10% Enough?

00:11:677 (5) - Such things aren't acceptable now,and doesn't look so good imo :| Didn't think so myself.
00:44:036 (2) - It's wrong..actually it shound end at 00:44:542,but if you want to keep it,then extend to the next long white tick. Fixed
00:46:732 (2) - ^^
00:50:609 (5) - Again the shape and wth with it? Shouldn't it continue up to 00:51:283 or something? Bye bye crumpled slider.
00:51:620 - Add a note with finish. Sure why not~! :D
01:24:148 (5,6) - Ah,come on..it's annoying,just stack them. Lol sure~
01:50:104 (2) - Shorten to previous white tick -__- Mhmm
01:52:800 (4) - ^^
02:43:531 (7) - Nope,you can't do such sliders. Re-did the whole combo.
02:46:227 (4,5,6,7) - Fix slider and make this pattern more readable,please. Alrighty!

Soo,that's it,I guess!
Nice mapset ;)
Hooray for Sonic and the team,so good luck~

IceBeam wrote:

Hi.

Fix Audio Lead-In in Bobo's and Super Sonic difficulties,it should be 1000.You can do this via notepad.

Nice SB,but why would you use epilepsy warning? I don't think it's needed,as there aren't any strobes or flashes,so disable it?

Increase Stack Leniency to 4 at least in Bobo's difficulty,as it's the minimum allowed border for maps aiming for ranking.

Your BG is 1024 x 768,it's okay,but if the map has some storyboard - it's shouldn't be over 800 x 600.
I'm not 100% sure if it works when BG isn't affected in SB,but I it's not a big problem to resize it to prevent some troubles in future,right?

And finally,as you use custom hitcircle,you should add slider border colours..
Open .osu file,find [Colours] line and paste the code right below the 4-th colour settings.

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

Don't forget to do it in every difficulty.

[Tails]
00:18:250 - I'd add a note here to keep the rhytm on,also you might want to add another one to 00:18:924 as it'll improve the rhytm,so with this note it'll be easier to read. k
00:38:137 (5,1,2,3) - Rhytm isn't really obvious,because we need something to click at 00:40:834,soo..the only way is to follow white ticks,I mean instruments,but not the lyrics. k
01:02:407 - So,again.the note with finish would be appreciated. k
01:24:317 (3) - How about to remove this slider,add a circle to 01:24:317 and make a reverse-slider from 01:24:654 with a repeat at 01:24:823. k
01:30:722 - A note? np
01:49:598 (3) - This note should be in normal sampleset,right? But it's soft currently,fix it and add finish hitsound. np
03:14:542 - Again,I was ready to missclick,cause you need a note here. np
03:29:711 (2) - Nazi,but it's not a perfect curve Probably you should use more waypoints/4-th grid? change a bit

[Knuckles]
OD -1 k

00:08:980 (2) - Don't really like how it overlaps with the slider :< Maybe like this: k

SPOILER

00:24:654 (1,2,3) - Honestly,I hate such stacks,where the flow starts from 1/2 beats,which were stacked with 1/1 before,it's always confusing to me. moved else where
00:25:666 (2) - Not sure about that,especially in easier diffs,change to curve/plain slider,please. k
01:04:767 - Sounds catchy with this note. YOU'RE RIGHT~
01:07:463 - ^ Plus it follow the music. ^
01:29:542 - Seems like drums starting from this point? So add a note? k
02:27:351 (1) - Make it symmetrical? Looks a bit untidy. seems fine
02:42:183 (1) - ^ Same,it looks much better,when it centered to the "y" axis and symmetrical from both sides. fine
02:58:362 (x) - Remove useless sections from breaks? k
03:17:576 (1) - A symmetry issue again. moved a bit

[Bobo]
Hitsounds are too loud..
Reduce the volume,please.

00:11:677 (5) - Such things aren't acceptable now,and doesn't look so good imo
00:44:036 (2) - It's wrong..actually it shound end at 00:44:542,but if you want to keep it,then extend to the next long white tick.
00:46:732 (2) - ^
00:50:609 (5) - Again the shape and wth with it? Shouldn't it continue up to 00:51:283 or something?
00:51:620 - Add a note with finish.
01:24:148 (5,6) - Ah,come on..it's annoying,just stack them.
01:50:104 (2) - Shorten to previous white tick -__-
01:52:800 (4) - ^
02:43:531 (7) - Nope,you can't do such sliders.
02:46:227 (4,5,6,7) - Fix slider and make this pattern more readable,please.

[Super Sonic]
HP Drain -1(-2) -1
Consider it's a very long map,so..reduce it.

02:37:126 (8) - Remove this slider,it's out of rhytm. k
02:37:295 - Add a note here. k
02:37:463 - And here. k
02:42:857 (6) - Again the shape isn't acceptable. LOL, why =.=

Soo,that's it,I guess!
Nice mapset Thanks
Hooray for Sonic and the team,so good luck~

merchat7 wrote:

As requested, Another 3 min song :cry: 4 difficulties :cry: :cry: :cry: *dead*
D:
[General]

- Didn't notice any real problem, but I wish all the breaks were consistent across all difficulties.
- Also keep in mind I probably won't find much as more experienced modders had mod this already. S'alright!
[Bobo]

00:07:463 (3) - Doesn't look good, do grid level 4 and resnap to 0.8x distant snapping. Alrighty
00:08:811 (3) - ^^
00:49:935 (1.2.3.4.5) - Can you use 1.0x distant snapping, I thought this was a stream the first time I saw it. x0.8
01:47:913 (3) - Grid level 4, resnap to 0.8x Mhmm
03:37:463 (1) - End spinner at 03:39:486 so that you have the same end point as the other difficulties. Sure thing :D

Good map, consider mapping in grid level 4 next time as I saw some hit circle that I thought you place it on the wrong tick or so, but it was simply because you were using grid 3. Thnx I'll use Grid Level 4 from now on.

Beatmap look good. Sorry if mod was lazy, been modding 3 min song the whole day. No star since you have quite a few. Quite a few indeed! ^^

Good luck on rank!.

merchat7 wrote:

As requested, Another 3 min song 4 difficulties *dead*

[General]

- Didn't notice any real problem, but I wish all the breaks were consistent across all difficulties.
- Also keep in mind I probably won't find much as more experienced modders had mod this already.

[Tails]

00:22:632 (2) - Spread out your anchor points more, the slider doesn't look that good.
00:29:710 (1.2) - I prefer to have (1) stack to slider (2) begin.
03:14:879 (2.3) - They are touching each other, if you can remap (maybe try a different beat placement - hit circle in between the two sliders for example) so they don't, would be a lot nicer.

Quite a nice map. There are something I don't agree with for the easiest difficulty like some hit circles that were place on red ticks and notes that were place like this in the timeline http://puu.sh/6kz9. But I guess they're fine.

[Knuckles]

- I'm assuming this is Normal, why are there spacing errors? This diff feel really off because of this.Check ai mod (ctrl+shift+a)
- Also keep distant snapping the same for most of the map, this is also another reason why this difficulty feel weird.
- +1 ar, play better with how you place the hit circles.
- Placement of clap felt weird to me, try reworking it.

00:11:340 (2) - Stack (2) with (1) instead. It play better.
02:35:778 (1-7, 1-4) - This whole pattern just feel weird. I suggest making (1,2) a slider, position (3.4.5.6.7) like this http://puu.sh/6kBm For (1.2.3.4), use 1.2x distant snapping for this combo.

Fix everything that I mention in (-) and it'll be a lot better.

[Bobo]

00:07:463 (3) - Doesn't look good, do grid level 4 and resnap to 0.8x distant snapping.
00:08:811 (3) - ^
00:49:935 (1.2.3.4.5) - Can you use 1.0x distant snapping, I thought this was a stream the first time I saw it.
01:47:913 (3) - Grid level 4, resnap to 0.8x
03:37:463 (1) - End spinner at 03:39:486 so that you have the same end point as the other difficulties.

Good map, consider mapping in grid level 4 next time as I saw some hit circle that I thought you place it on the wrong tick or so, but it was simply because you were using grid 3.

[Super Sonic]

02:39:486 (3) - Don't stack this hard to read.
02:39:823 - 03:24:655 - The spacing for the stream :S Please use an even lower distant snapping for streams here.

Look solid, not too fond of some kick sliders and some pattern could be a bit better like at 02:16:565, you could have done this http://puu.sh/6kEy.

Beatmap look good. Sorry if mod was lazy, been modding 3 min song the whole day. No star since you have quite a few.

Good luck on rank!.

Gottwald wrote:

fight!

good maps!

Akemi_Homura wrote:

[Knuckles]

01:30:553(x) - Add note~
01:43:362(4) - 1 grid up~
01:44:205(2) - ^
02:02:567(2) - delete whistle end of slider and add finish~~
02:03:587(2) - add finish start of slider~!
02:13:531(5) - add finish end of sldier~ (clap , finish)

[other diff]

Fine~~!!!!

Nice Song~~!!! and Nice Map!!!!
I think this map ready to ranked~~!!!
Star and Good Luck~!

Himekaido Hatate wrote:

hi! noob modder is here!XD Hey, better than no mod at all
Bobo- Yeas?
00:01:733 (1,2,3) - spacing problem plz recheck Fixed, thnx ;D
00:40:160 (4) - 2grid right (remember, when you fixing this map, you must fixing at grid level 4! not 3) Done~
01:05:104 (8) - 1grid up Mhmm...
01:23:474 (4) - try to copy 01:23:138 (3) and flip horizontal&vertical and rotate it Anti-Clockwise 75 (Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J, Ctrl+Shift+R) I tried, I cant seem to get it right without messing up the spacing.
01:46:227 (4) - 2grid down Done~

good luck! Thanks ^^ I swear, once this map gets ranked I am never listening to this song again, I am so sick of it...

Bobo wrote:

Thanks ^^ I swear, once this map gets ranked I am never listening to this song again, I am so sick of it...

DragonSparta wrote:

Bobo wrote:

Thanks ^^ I swear, once this map gets ranked I am never listening to this song again, I am so sick of it...

Haha~ I agree too~

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[hard]
00:28:362 (3) - ugly
00:46:311 (1) - move it to 00:46:227 and add finish
00:58:025 (3) - end at 00:58:699
01:26:003 (4) - overlap 3
01:56:340 (3) - add 2 circle instead of 2 repeats
02:46:901 (5) - use normal clap
03:17:744 (2) - hard to understand

Frozen wrote:

I got Bobo's PM.

Here ya are: http://puu.sh/aREt

(I don't need anything in return ;P)

[Don't worry I did not update !!]

Bobo wrote:

Oh well.

wingman_dw wrote:

Hello~ random modding~

[Knuckles]
I feel this map is difficult as Normal diff.please reduce jumps, circles
for example...
00:40:328 (1,2,3) -
01:19:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
02:46:059 (3) - delete
and use DS=1.2x mainly?
ok

[Bobo]
00:21:452 (6) - NC and 00:21:621 (1) - remove NC, 00:21:958 NC
00:29:879 (2,3) - This spacing annoy me. 00:30:384 - add circle?
00:31:227 (5,1) - anti jump
00:35:104 (1) - 1 grid right
00:40:497 (5) - NC is here.same as 00:35:104 (1) - follow the song
00:42:688 (6) - rearrange formation please
01:06:284 (3,4) - look bad a little. more beautiful blanket http://puu.sh/x0Te
02:12:351 (3,4) - ^
01:31:059 (1,2,3) - spacing?
01:40:497 (3) - 1~2 grids right? don't overlap
01:46:564 (5) - NC is here
01:49:092 - remove clap?
02:47:576 (1,2,3,4) - spacing. please use DS. (2)x:84y:164.(4)x:180y:68
03:14:205 (1,2,3,4,5) - use DS
03:14:879 (6) - NC
03:17:744 (2) - fucking 2 return;__;
Spacing-related and NC are accepted~

[Super Sonic]
01:41:171 (2) - NC is here
OK

That's all. GL~

Nagisawa wrote:

okay, i love this song and game and i moddint it!

Tails

00:40:328 (1) - to 00:41:002 (4) - i tnink is hard for easy changed
01:46:396 (1) - to 01:47:070 (4) - ^ changed
02:25:328 (1) - to 02:27:014 (7) - for beginners will not understand the rhythm. ^ ^
00:41:002 (4) to 00:41:002 (4) - add spinner ? i think u mean 03:41:002 but ill just leave it as it is



Knuckles
01:31:058 (1) - to 01:33:081 (10) - I think it's not a good idea, and instead of some notes better in some places add sliders. ok
for axample:



02:57:014 (3) - This slider is better to do as the previous two and rearranged a bit. would look very nice :3 changed
03:25:497 - here you can make another spinner, just fit the words in the song no change

STAAAAAAAR!:3 THANKS~

____
and little bonus.
section pass and fail, if you want use it!:3

SPOILER

SPOILER

thanks so much man >3

• General

• Tails

• Knuckles

Good Lookin' Slider

(I would've told you the slider points x,y locations but I didn't save them )

Good Lookin' Slider

1: unchanged
2: x:72 y:112
3: x:128 y:160
4: x:192 y:208
5: unchanged

• Bobo

• Super Sonic

Doodley wrote:

As per my queue.

• General

Disable the epilepsy warning on Super Sonic, as the storyboard doesn't have anything that would otherwise cause epilepsy.
Add a track lead-in of one second in all difficulties. kays

• Tails

Usually I would point out the fact that Easy maps shouldn't use 1/2 notes, but I think it might be fine. You might have to stack them though.
00:18:924 (1,2) - Such as right here. You might want to stack 1/2 notes on an Easy difficulty. (This is done a few times more, so just fix them all if you'd like) kays
00:34:935 (1,2) - Spacing is too far apart on these. ^
02:31:227 (3) - Extend the repeat (the end of the slider) to the red tick. %

• Knuckles

Circle Size +1 nah
Approach Rate +1 it's already too harsh XD
Both of these play and feel better without raising the difficulty too much. Also, the reduced circle size does pretty much nothing to increase difficulty and improves patterns and sliders (mostly because the highest circle size is usually not recommended, especially not on a Normal/Hard difficulty)

Your sliders are a little mundane on this diff, but that's why I'm here.
00:03:081 (1) - Fix this slider: k


00:29:879 (3,4) - A two repeating slider proceeded by a one repeat slider doesn't play well. (Two short repeating sliders in general don't play very well) Try this timing pattern instead: k


With that timing pattern, you can assemble this simple placement pattern:



(Make sure you Ctrl+R (5), I forgot to do that in the screenshot. Also, you'll have to move the next slider after that a little closer according to distance snap.)

00:36:620 (5) - Does the end of this slider need to have a red slider point? As in, does it need to be straight on the end and not curved? k
01:09:317 (4) - Curve this slider upwards a bit more, it's kind of ugly. ill keep it XD

Good Lookin' Slider

(I would've told you the slider points x,y locations but I didn't save them )

01:23:474 (2) - Move the red slider point to x:216 y:128 (this will look better if you reduce the circle size) k
01:25:159 (2) - This slider has a better flow if you move it somewhere around x:152 y:248 ("somewhere around" meaning moved according to your distance spacing, as it doesn't seem to follow the distance snap you set) k
01:26:508 (4) - Gross slider. Remove the red point (converting it into a white point) and use this: derp

Good Lookin' Slider

1: unchanged
2: x:72 y:112
3: x:128 y:160
4: x:192 y:208
5: unchanged

01:42:182 (5,6) - Move (6) just a little closer. K
01:45:553 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+R these three notes and separate them a little farther. K
02:47:238 - New note. K
02:51:452 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This feels awkward to play, mostly because stacks next to stacks on a timeline (three of them, no less) is generally awkward as there's almost no way to tell where they'll begin and end. (this is a less severe case given it's only two note stacks, but it's still generally difficult) I suggest this timing pattern, which also sounds much much better in my opinion, so I highly recommend you change it:


02:54:149 (3) - I also don't think this sounds very well, so here's another timing pattern (make sure you keep the hitsound pattern correct and place a clap on (3)'s repeat and (4)!):

• Bobo

The difference in difficulty between this diff and Knuckles is very clear, which makes the spread look good.
40% hitsound volume is a tad too quiet in certain timing sections.
The sliders on this diff are delicious. Ohhh, I just love them.
00:21:452 (6,1) - Spacing is confusing. Place (6) somewhere else rather than stacked under (5)'s end, and then move (1) and it's pattern accordingly. looks fine to me
00:49:935 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is confusing, sort of anti jumpish.
00:50:609 (5) - There's not really any reason for the sudden slider slow down.
01:08:812 (3) - Have this repeat one less and place a note at 01:09:823
02:14:879 (3) - ^
01:38:643 (1) - I don't like this slider (2+ repeating sliders break the rhythm and flow of a map) but I don't have any suggestions regarding timing patterns...
01:56:340 (3) - Another weird slow down slider that doesn't seem necessary.
ALL ACCEPTED

• Super Sonic

No problems. Wonderful patterns, here.

This entire mapset is solid. It definitely feels like you took your time with the placement and timing patterns in all difficulties, rather than just the hardest difficulties like I've seen in some of the other maps in my queue. (For God's sake I've seen a Normal difficulty that had no hitcircles, just sliders. I pointed this out and he refused to change it. So this is a real refreshment.) Really, all of this is ready to be ranked after a few more checks, and I'm looking forward to this getting ranked. Very nice job. Starred.

Leorda wrote:

Hi there Hey~

[Tails]
* Set the AudioLead-In to 1000 for consistency on each diff ok
* AR +1 or +2? AR + 1

01:02:744 (1,2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this, so this possibly hidden for them. Also, while default spinner-osu is red-orange-yellow, this combo color will blend. I suggest to colorhax, by doing this like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/333676
01:47:407 (5) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying ok
02:08:474 (1) - While default spinner-osu is red-orange-yellow, this combo color will blend. I suggest to colorhax, by doing this like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/333676 umm...im not sure XD
02:50:609 (1) - ^
03:04:092 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It may hidden for them (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
03:14:542 (1,2) - Same issue as 01:02:744 (1,2)
03:37:463 (1) - Same issue as 02:08:474 (1)


[Knuckles]
* Set the AudioLead-In to 1000 for consistency on each diff k
* Set the preview time to 51620 for consistency on each diff. Use notepad to fix this fixed

00:36:620 (5) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying ok
00:37:800 (1) - Add clap? done
01:10:328 (1) - Move to 01:10:497? k
01:43:867 (1) - Add clap? ^
01:45:890 (5) - ^ ^
01:48:586 (6) - ^ ^
01:59:374 (6) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar changed slider design
03:11:171 (5) - End it at previous red tick? ok
03:15:722 (6) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar moved pattern


[Bobo]
00:14:205 (1) - While default spinner-osu is red-orange-yellow, this combo color will blend. I suggest to colorhax, by doing this like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/333676
02:35:441 (1) - ^
03:18:418 (3) - Because you stack with 1/2 timing pattern. I was expecting that this snap at previous white tick. So, should you snap to previous white tick? change pattern


[Super Sonic]
00:31:059 (1,2,3) - This anti-jump is awkward for me, IMO XD but it goes with the flow
01:44:710 (4) - Make symetric slider? i think i'll keep this
03:02:407 (3) - Too much repeating slider can makes pro players boring. Split this into 2 or more slider? okays


I have only one question : Where's Amy Rose? Apparently, gone fishing

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ DragonSparta ~ hi

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. You are missing add 'reversearrow.png' skin file.

ill try to get/make one ;_;

[Super Sonic]

1. I see have too many slider looks not symmetry and ugly,you can try remake that?derp
2. 00:18:587 - Add a circle,sound much better. done
3. 01:20:272 (2) - Make more better slider and move to center,like this.done
   
4. 02:08:306 (3) - Move 1 grid up(symmetry) .[/color]

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~

Accelerator-kun wrote:

Hi there, I love sonic so I'm gonna try to help with this :3

Tails

Nice difficult, for me it's perfect, but just two notes:

00:40:328 (1,2,3) -
01:46:396 (1,2,3) - Ill keep this for now but I'll consider~

At these times I think that someone can find a bit difficult those triple notes... but they make a perfect sound, so imho you can leave them there.

Knuckles

I think this difficult it's a bit hard to be a normal, expecially in moments like this: 00:39:486 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
But, like the first difficult, they make a nice sound. So it's up to you, if you want a perfect sound, leave them there, if you want to help less skilled players try to make it a bit easier. For me, it's perfect as it is now. Okays~

Bobo

First, I love this difficult.

Here is the same of before, it's hard to be an hard (excuse the pun) but it sounds perfectly. Again, it's up to you. Do you wanna help less skilled players? For me, it's ok as it is because it's not an easy or a normal, so less skilled players are advised. Thanks

Super Sonic

Here is the inverse of the first speech. The only difficulty in this map (apart from the growing end) seems to be the size of the notes and some jumps a little exaggerated. I think you should make the first three quarters of the map a bit harder similar with the end of the map. Note that if you increase the difficult of the map you should add a point on the circle size. It feels a bit weird to see the actual difficult of this map compared to the difficult of the others.

Doomsday wrote:

Only played the hardest difficulty (Super Sonic), and I like it. Krisom's influence is as clear as daylight First guy who said that to me (It's true). the black edges on the hitcircles are one giveaway (same as Krisom's map for Sonic Heroes). It's fun though, I like what I've seen.

From the one playthrough I had, the only thing I remember bugging me a little were these patterns:

02:44:879 (1,2,3,4) -
02:52:969 (1,2,3,4) -
For these two, I've decided to make it more nearer and readable (?)

Just a personal thing, but I wasn't keen on these. Maybe you could do something else with these, but it's hardly a pressing issue. I'm just picky. That's okays

Can't comment on the other difficulties, but I like Super Sonic.

(Don't kudosu this post)

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello (M4M)

[Tails]
00:41:340 (3) - move to x:368 y:48 to be symmetrical Distance spacing becomes different
01:35:946 (1,2) - blanket properly (unless it's meant to be that way) Remade it

[Knuckles]
I would suggest reducing the AR -1 Okays
00:53:137 (5) - move one grid up to create proper blanket Agreed

[Bobo]
Spacing seems odd in some sections. i would suggest taking a look at them. but overall good :D

[Super Sonic]
Looks good to me.

[General]
Love this song instant fave i would suggest tweaking with spacing since it seems odd in some difficulties. I would really like to see this ranked
have a star (╯°□°）╯︵

Sonnyc wrote:

Yo, DragonSparta ;3

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi ~ from my queue M4M :3

sorry for delay its okei

All is suggestion from my view , just choose what is good for you
rhythm is great and pattern also
but ... yes just I didn't mod this kind of mapping style before xD

[General]

1. Seems special diff name can't be use now cus the new rule

changed

[Tail]

1. Umm.... not thing :3
   But I just think , this diff is easier than "Knuckles"? why circle size is small than "Knuckles"?

[Knuckles]

1. This diff's circle is so large , maybe try Circle siz +1 or AR +1 to 2 , it's a bit of hard to read

Circle size +1

[Bobo]

1. 00:50:609(5) - How about make this slider cross with middle line more standard? tried
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:35:441(1,2,3,4) - seems spacing is not consistency

changed

[Super Sonic]00:31:059(1,2,3) - Maybe make spacing bigger , seems suddenly too close here from front part , that make me misunderstanding into 1/4 beat moved further 01:43:025(6,7,8) - I will suggest separate these note , I will be more fun with moving

maybe ca be a reference

01:47:238 - Add a note here ? seems empty here with no hit point let the drain bar drop *evil* changed02:15:384(4,5) - Why not use slider like 02:13:868(1) - 02:14:879(3) and 02:15:890(6) - to unified this part? okei02:58:360 - unnecessary green line ? remove

SPOILER

02:45:533(3) - hey , how about move this down to below (1)?

SPOILER

It will be a nice specing stairs up pattern :302:48:587 - Add a note ? miss a hit pont is quite strange empty nah03:12:519(5) - Ctrl + G to make a jump here ? I DIDNT KNOW YOU COULD DO THAT :p03:21:958(9) - maybe make this blanket more symmetry changed

SPOILER

That's all

Good luck ~ !