[general]
What's up with the black overlay and white slider border?
If I mention something but missed it somewhere else, don't assume it's fine. Double check the map yourself so you didn't make that error again. Songs tend to repeat, so if I only mention something once, chances are it fits in every difficulty multiple times.
[tails]
Map was full of lazy sliders all noticeable on first play through (without access to the nodes). If you could, especially on the long sliders, make them as symmetrical as possible, that would be good.
I noticed an awful lot of notes on 1/2 beats, which is all well and good, but it's confusing on the easy difficulty, especially if you don't follow the lyrics almost completely.
There's a lot of sliders which end on the long white tick, or slide over them. Pay better attention to it, so that any that DO slide over are on purpose.
2x repeating sliders play poorly in general unless they are very long or very short. Keep them to a minimum.
00:03:089 (5) - you could put this slider above instead of below so that it isn't covering the next slider.
00:08:819 (1) - take off a repeat, add circle or something
00:11:179 (4,5) - I thought this played better as one long slider
00:16:573 (5) - shorten by 1/2 to map vocals
00:23:651 (3) - this didn't fit because the first note doesn't map what the last 3 seem to map.
00:29:718 - add
00:32:921 - add 2x repeating (you could split it up into 2x normal sliders too)
00:51:629 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why are these 2 rhythms different?
01:58:876 (3) - why is there a repeat?
02:01:573 (4) - ^
03:17:584 (1) - keep an eye on things that are too high or too low. Generally I don't put anything y<16 or it might hit the hp bar.
03:29:382 (1,2) - I think you can do a much better job than this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151427[knuckles]
Using 1.2x for 1/2 notes and .8x or 1x for 1/1 notes is downright confusing. Then again, the spacing is all over the place so I guess I need to use other means of trying to figure out these rhythms. There's a lot to fix before I can mod it decently. I just don't have the patience to find everything. Take the general suggestions and apply them yourself.
03:33:089 (3) - what?
03:37:471 (1,2,3,4) - why is there a decrescendo in the hitsounds if there isn't one in the music?
[bobo]
don't forget slider border in this one.
oh the spacing is such a relief in this one...
but then the combo colours make me go "wtf". Mind explaining this one because I'm really baffled.
00:21:292 (6) - these super short 1x repeating sliders don't really need to be curved at all.
00:23:314 (5) - (this one obviously does, ignore ^, use your own judgement)
00:39:325 (10) - move 1/2 later, start new combo
00:42:191 (5) - remove clap
00:43:033 - add clap
00:44:044 (2,2) - I like to put the red nodes on the slider tick, I think it works better, but whatever.
00:49:100 (2,2,3,5) - finishes
01:18:595 (1,2,3,4) - ugh
01:22:303 (6,1) - strange jump
01:28:033 (2,3,4) - if you want to map lyrics here (which you clearly do, otherwise you wouldn't have this new combo pattern) then you should put the sliders on the red tick.
01:40:168 (2,3,4) - these really didn't make sense to me either time. I didn't hear anything in the music doing this so it seemed random.
01:44:213 (9) - new combo
01:46:404 - new combo. fix sliders so it works.
02:46:236 (5) - quit it, you know this doesn't fit.
02:49:101 (6,7) - move back 1/2
03:05:449 (5) - seems silly to completely hide a slider start like this.
03:14:550 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit. It fit 1/2 before, but not now.
03:39:494 - stupid timing point
[supersonic]
00:20:449 (4,5) - I'm going to let you in on a secret. Ctrl C will copy a note, ctrl v will paste a note, and ctrl h will flip it horizontally.
01:02:163 (2) - you can put this 1/2 before or 1/2 later, but not here.
01:07:809 (5,6) - you could have mapped the lyrics here by using 1x repeating sliders
02:05:786 (1,2,3,4) - this part was bland in every difficulty. You don't have to map the lyrics, you can put in groups of 3 to map the guitar?
02:30:055 (6) - new combo. Also, nobody will complain about new combos if you put new combos on the first note of a phrase or on the long white tick of every other measure.
02:39:157 (1,2,3) - don't put these on top of a whirling distraction, and not of a similar colour of said whirling distraction.
02:39:831 - I don't know what you're mapping here. If you're mapping the guitar solo, do it. If you're making something up, then how in the world are we supposed to follow it, especially at 1.25x? You should also start the kiai on the downbeat.
Here's some automated warnings for you. You don't have to fix everything, but it will make your map that much better if you do put the time and effort into making it closer to perfect. You can also download it yourself so you can check in the future. the program isn't perfect, so use your judegment on what needs fixing.
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[General]No problems found.
[Storyboard]Unused Image Files:
comboburst-3.png
comboburst-2.png
comboburst-0.png
comboburst-4.png
comboburst-1.png
Epilepsy Warning:
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[All .osu Files]Combo Colours:
Inconsistency in combo colours:
- [Bobo] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
- [Knuckles] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
- [Super Sonic] :
Combo1 : 0,225,0
Combo2 : 40,40,255
Combo3 : 230,230,0
Combo4 : 237,5,5
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
- [Tails] :
Combo1 : 68,255,68
Combo2 : 64,64,255
Combo3 : 255,255,87
Combo4 : 251,62,62
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Bobo] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:25:421
- [Knuckles] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:763, ends on 03:28:043
- [Super Sonic] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:629, ends on 01:13:202
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:696, ends on 02:19:269
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:594, ends on 02:57:686
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:754, ends on 03:25:327
- [Tails] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:544, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:28:043
[Difficulty: Bobo]Snapping:
01:52:301 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:166 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:503 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:671 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:51:639
01:13:212
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
03:03:774
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:25:421
[Difficulty: Knuckles]Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:13:886
00:34:953
00:35:291
00:51:639
01:13:212
01:19:953
01:41:358
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
02:39:588
03:28:043
03:38:071
03:38:746
03:39:420
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:639, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
[Difficulty: Super Sonic]Snapping:
02:52:977 (9) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:19:937
01:49:600
02:39:594
02:57:686
02:58:360
02:58:670
03:03:754
03:25:327
03:39:404
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:594, ends on 02:57:686
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:754, ends on 03:25:327
[Difficulty: Tails]Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:13:886
00:35:291
01:13:212
01:19:953
01:41:358
01:57:706
02:19:279
02:39:504
02:39:588
03:03:774
03:28:043
03:38:071
03:38:746
03:39:420
Breaks:
00:11:885 - The break here is 551 ms long, which is shorter than the recommended 750 ms.
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:544, ends on 01:13:212
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:706, ends on 02:19:279
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:39:504, ends on 02:39:588
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:03:774, ends on 03:28:043