1. Another (5 stars, 472 notes)
2. Beginner (2.14 stars, 146 notes)
3. Hyper (4.98 stars, 396 notes)
4. Standard (3.6 stars, 189 notes)

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18:00 <LoliSora> : I'm coming
18:02 <Niva> : aaaah sorry for my lateness orz >_< my mother called me
18:02 *Niva is listening to Kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura
18:02 <Niva> : it's downloaded now
18:03 <LoliSora> : lol
18:03 <LoliSora> : That's fine
18:03 <LoliSora> : oh, you're only 17
18:03 <Niva> : o.o?
18:03 <Niva> : do you think how old I am >_<
18:04 <LoliSora> : You're a college student in my mind ( I don't know that before, just a guess
18:04 <Niva> : ah... many people said that, idk why >_<
18:04 <LoliSora> : Orz....
18:05 <LoliSora> : Just feel about you're ripe enough
18:06 <Niva> : err... o.o
18:06 <Niva> : first
18:06 <LoliSora> : Oh!
18:06 <Niva> : there's this file : Kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (LoliABC).osb
18:06 <LoliSora> : ....hmmmm
18:06 <LoliSora> : hahahah~
18:06 <Niva> : LoliABC o.o
18:07 <LoliSora> : Hmmm......don't tell the truth for ppy
18:07 <LoliSora> : XD
18:07 <Niva> :
18:08 <Niva> : idk... i'm still thinking about enddoor-l and enddoor-r.jpg
18:08 <Niva> : I know it's ending on 138997 already, but...
18:09 <Niva> : idk how to explain... it crashes with the bg in the end o.o
18:09 <LoliSora> : lol
18:09 <Niva> : uh... don't mind that
18:09 <LoliSora> : Anyway....I'm not the creator of this SB lol
18:10 <LoliSora> : I'll tell him about that
18:10 <Niva> : oh... okay
18:10 <Niva> : ~
18:10 <Niva> : anyway... you don't need lead-in 2000 lol, 1000 is enough
18:10 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:10 <Niva> : also I'm thinking about using this preview time : PreviewTime: 102098
18:11 <Niva> : hmm, now...
18:11 <LoliSora> : en! let me fix the code
18:11 <Niva> : oh ok~
18:11 <LoliSora> : now?
18:12 <Niva> : 00:01:068 (1) - why whistle+clap here, not finish instead :3
18:12 <Niva> : oh, finish + clap fits more imo xD
18:12 <LoliSora> : Ok!
18:13 <LoliSora> : I'm sick at hitsound and NC
18:14 <Niva> : you can use the music to aid hitsounding, actually...
18:14 <Niva> : for example, if you listen to the music on 00:03:186 (1,2,3,4) - here
18:15 <Niva> : the instrument hits high note on (1)'s start, (2), and (4)'s start
18:15 <Niva> : there's where your custom clap fits~ xD
18:15 <LoliSora> : let me do that
18:16 <LoliSora> : Hmmm, but not strong enough
18:16 <Niva> : yep...
18:17 <Niva> : 00:07:068 (8) - copy-paste (5) here and CTRL+R? xD
18:18 <LoliSora> : XD
18:18 <LoliSora> : of course a lazy way
18:18 <LoliSora> : I always overlap the preview position
18:18 <Niva> :
18:19 <LoliSora> : previous =.=
18:19 <LoliSora> : OMG...
18:19 <Niva> : 00:10:598 (6) - stack the start with 00:09:186 (6)'s start? xD
18:20 <Niva> : (the jump here is basically easy to catch)
18:20 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:20 <LoliSora> : yes!
18:20 <Niva> : 00:11:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is quite random o.o
18:21 <LoliSora> : Hmmm, yes....I don't know, just feel it can be easy to pass
18:21 <LoliSora> : or a smooth playing?
18:21 <Niva> : yep, let me try to do something with this though
18:22 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:22 <Niva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310339 ?
18:22 <Niva> : can't think of any better ideas lol
18:23 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:23 <LoliSora> : let's move it
18:24 <Niva> : well, if you want to keep the "randomness" it's fine as well though, it's still rankable and not hard to read
18:25 <LoliSora> : XD
18:25 <LoliSora> : I just try to play itXD
18:25 <Niva> : 00:14:833 (1) - remove the hitsounds on slider start?
18:25 <Niva> : to let it same with 00:13:773 (2) -
18:26 <LoliSora> : 00:13:773 (2) -
18:26 <LoliSora> : no hitsound here
18:27 <Niva> : yep~ so that's why it's better to remove on 00:14:833's start xD
18:27 <Niva> : ...imo xD
18:27 <LoliSora> : lol
18:27 <LoliSora> : OK
18:29 <Niva> : 00:21:009 (4) - whistle here should be on 5's start imo xD
18:31 <LoliSora> : OK!
18:31 <Niva> : 00:27:185 (5) - I'd add a slight curve here to let it flow together with (6)...
18:31 <Niva> : it'll flow better with (9) as well~
18:32 <LoliSora> : then up a little
18:32 <Niva> : yep~
18:33 <Niva> : 00:29:833 (5,6,7) - this is just my idea... because (7) almost touches (4), I think you can arrange like this:
18:33 <Niva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310347
18:33 <Niva> : it's good with AR9 anyway~
18:35 <LoliSora> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310351
18:35 <LoliSora> : ....just a bad internet
18:35 <Niva> : oh...
18:35 <Niva> : 00:34:598 (6) -
18:35 <Niva> : is this... 1/8? not really sure...
18:35 <Niva> : it's just not 1/4 I guess
18:36 <LoliSora> : yes
18:36 <Niva> : anyway.... here's what I said when you got disconnected : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310357
18:37 <LoliSora> : it's 1/8 patten
18:37 <Niva> : ^^
18:37 <LoliSora> : let those player get more score!
18:40 <Niva> : 00:40:068 (1) - i think it's better to put this in the center of 1,2,3,4,5 lol
18:41 <LoliSora> : nice
18:41 <Niva> : 00:40:951 (6) - put this below 00:39:892 (5) - so the star pattern is completed
18:41 <Niva> : and put 00:41:127 (7) - in the center of 2,3,4,5,6 (:
18:43 <Niva> : ------------------------
18:43 <Niva> : 00:42:362 (1,2,3) - as this is another 1/8 part, I think this will be better:
18:43 <Niva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310363
18:47 <LoliSora> : OK
18:47 <LoliSora> : all done
18:47 <LoliSora> : have test
18:48 <Niva> : oh, ok~
18:48 <Niva> : anyway 00:47:657 (1,2,3) - not sure if this is rankable orz >_<
18:49 <Niva> : 00:51:186 (9) - i personally don't like the silence here... imo using a slow slider here (maybe 0.75x) plays better~
18:50 <LoliSora> : then
18:50 <LoliSora> : until00:51:186 (9) - ?
18:51 <LoliSora> : because here is 1/8
18:51 <LoliSora> : so I just try to ignore it
18:51 <Niva> : no, I mean... use slow slider from 00:51:186 to 00:51:892
18:51 <Niva> : with 0.75 inherit section~
18:52 <Niva> : 01:00:362 (11) - add nc here, remove nc on 01:01:421 (1) lol xD
18:53 <Niva> : 01:08:833 - drag the break here? xD
18:54 <LoliSora> : pretty long slider
18:54 <LoliSora> : 0.75
18:54 <LoliSora> : let me find a way to set it
18:54 <Niva> : yeah~ it's optional though, I just personally it's better instead of silence >_<
18:56 <Niva> : ---------------------------------
18:56 <Niva> : 01:21:539 (1) - hitsound should be like this:
18:56 <Niva> : clap on slider's end
18:56 <Niva> : 01:22:421 (2) - clap here
18:56 <Niva> : 01:22:598 (3) - finish on start, clap on end
18:57 <Niva> : 01:23:480 (x) - Add note with clap here if you want, and add finish on 01:23:657 (1)'s start~
19:00 <LoliSora> : OK
19:00 <Niva> : 01:31:598 (9,10) - should be like this imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310381
19:01 <Niva> : 01:37:421 (6) - you don't need clap on the sldier's end here, the music goes silent here
19:01 <Niva> : 01:41:657 (4) - hmm, imo it's better to add a new combo here to let players know this is a slowdown slider...
19:05 <Niva> : 01:47:304 (4,5) - again it's quite random here.. try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310387
19:07 <Niva> : 01:50:304 (1,6) - try this maybe? will be fancier imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/310390
19:08 <Niva> : 01:59:083 (1) - i think you can still map this 1/8 here, end the 1/8 slider on 01:59:568
19:09 <Niva> : with that, you can try to add a gradual volume increase on the 1/8 slider~
19:09 <Niva> : 02:07:598 (7) - stack below (4) instead to make this part tidier?
19:10 <Niva> : also, on this sequence the claps should be on 02:07:069 (4,7)
19:11 <Niva> : 02:14:480 (3) - why whistle here? Finish is better imo because of the finish you used on 02:12:362 (3) -
19:11 <Niva> : and finally, 02:15:539 (1) -
19:11 <Niva> : start the spinner 1/4 later and add a note with custom clap here ^^
19:12 <Niva> : ...that's it >_<
19:12 <LoliSora> : Thx!!!!!
19:12 <LoliSora> : a lot
19:12 <Niva> :
19:12 <LoliSora> : I just fix here01:50:304 (1,6) -
19:12 <LoliSora> : too much mod at same time
19:12 <Niva> : ah... >_<

1. 00:07:421 (3) - idk... I prefer a 2/1 long slider here (you can just simply encircle (4)'s start here) because imo you need a slider tick on 00:77:774 - not a must, though~
2. 00:12:715 (4) - Add clap on slider's end here? (because previously you had clap on 00:08:480 (4)'s end)
3. 00:15:892 (3) - Again here, it's strongly recommended to add a finish here because you have a finish on your previous (3)'s start~
4. 00:18:009 (1,2) - (optional) Move both few grids down so (1,2,3) forms a perfect triangle?
5. 00:22:245 (1) - I like your idea to use a 20% volume here, but really consider to add a finish on slider's start here - it will bring up some good accent (:
6. 00:24:362 (4,5) - Hmm, I think it's better to use a consistent hitsound here, I suggest to use finish on slider's start, clap on repeat, and clap on end to both slider to give more power to this part xD
7. 00:27:539 (2,3) - I personally dislike how this long straight slider will flow in play mode... Maybe use a tilted slider wave here to create a better flow?
   
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8. 00:36:009 (2) - Add whistle on slider's start here, as you already have a whistle on (4)
9. 00:40:245 (3) - (optional) Curve it slightly to the left so (3,4) will face to an opposite direction? Would be cute and flow better imo :3
10. 00:41:304 (4,1,2,3) - Add a gradual volume increase here? (simple one such as 55 -> 60 -> 65 -> 70 would do enough - just make sure it ends in 70%)
11. 00:43:068 (2,3) - (optional) Perhaps combine these two into a single slider? It will flow better imo, because it reflects (4)'s shape~
12. 00:47:657 (1) - It is strongly recommended to use finish on slider's start here, as you have a finish on your previous (2)
13. 00:58:245 (2,3) - Is it intentional to put (3) slightly higher than (2) here? To make (3) perfectly placed beside (2), just hold SHIFT while placing (3)~
14. 01:01:068 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, I personally think it's better to put (4,5) away from (1) to avoid (1)'s comboburst overlaps (4,5) in play mode, you can just simply arrange like this though:
    
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15. 01:08:833 - Drag break here~
16. 01:17:304 (1) - Reset the inherit volume to 70% here (around ~60% is fine, but 45% is just too low imo) - also, refer to my suggestion on 00:58:245 about (1,2) xD
17. 01:31:068 (2,3,4,1) - (optional) imo this square can be tilted to make it flow better... All you have to do is select all, rotate ~25° selection centre, and revert to its original position using (2) as your reference~
18. 01:44:833 (3) - Move this few grids lower? This will make (3) acts as a "bridge" from (2) to (4), thus increases flow xD
19. 01:48:009 (3) - (optional) I think you can face the slider's end upward instead of right, this is to avoid clustering with (4)'s path~
20. 01:51:186 (1) - Stack perfectly to (4)'s end, or move it further from (4)'s end - stacking this half below (4)'s end will obscure this note's start position because (4)'s comboburst covers this note's start... About the placement, I think you can just arrange like this:
    
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21. 01:54:362 (5) - Copy-paste from (4), CTRL+H, and CTRL+R here for perfect symmetry?
22. 02:08:127 (1,2,3,4,1,3,4) - I strongly recommend to add finish instead of whistle to every slider's start - whistle isn't powerful enough for this part imo~
23. 02:13:421 (3) - (optional) For flow, perhaps move this more to the bottom-left (x:318 y:359)? If you do this, don't forget to adjust (4)'s position xD

1. 00:04:245 (3) - Minor stuff, but perhaps try to make this symmetrical in the center? (x:158 y:317 for this note - adjusting (2) won't be that hard~)
2. 00:08:480 (3) - Hmm, it's quite weird for me having this suddenly faced downward (especially remembering your previous sliders were faced leftward or rightward)... Rotate this 90° to make this face rightward would fix this~
3. 00:19:068 (2) - If you listen to the song carefully, actually the song hits high note on the repeat instead of the end, so maybe move the clap on slider's end to the repeat?
4. 00:21:186 (2,3) - Add a gradual volume increase here?
5. 00:23:304 (2) - Same as 00:19:068
6. 00:36:715 (1,2,3) - Try to curve these three more - currently it's quite unclear whether this is curved or not, I suggest to move (2) to x:99 y:232 and move (3) more to the lower-left to emphasize the curve here~
7. 00:43:421 (1) - Hmm, I personally dislike how this slider's repeat almost touches 00:45:892 (4)... I know this isn't a big problem, but you still have a lot of playfield in the left >_<
   
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8. 00:50:833 (4,6) - Add clap on (4) to keep your clapping consistent - also, add clap on (6) also if you want, it fits~
9. 01:05:657 (3) - (optional) Curve this to the left instead? I personally feel it will flow better to your next (1)...
10. 01:06:715 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps use a less narrow angle to increase flow here?
11. 01:18:362 (3,4,1) - Move (4) upward or downward a bit, so there will be an arc formed here?
12. 01:22:598 (2) - I think you can move this downward a bit to increase flow here - yes, it might not follow the proper distance snapping, but it's barely noticeable while it highly increases flow~
13. 01:30:892 (2) - (optional) Move upward, so there will be an arc here?
14. 01:33:186 (4) - Try to arrange like this to avoid (2)'s comboburst blocking this slider's path? With this arrangement, you can also stack (2)'s end to (4)'s end like this:
    
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15. 01:39:539 (3,4) - I personally feel the clap should be on (3)'s start and (4) instead on (3)'s end because of how the instrument sounded here, but it's not a must~
16. 01:40:598 (5) - (optional) Because (3) is slightly curved, it's not a bad idea imo to slightly curve (5) as well to the right~ It gives a good flow with (4) as well (:
17. 01:50:833 (6) - Maybe move this to x:273 y:324 to let (1) be encircled perfectly?
18. 01:58:245 (3,4,5) - Alter to a repeating slider? In play mode, stack will ruin your symmetry in (1,2,3) you're aiming - while repeating slider won't (:

1. 00:07:421 (3) - idk... I prefer a 2/1 long slider here (you can just simply encircle (4)'s start here) because imo you need a slider tick on 00:77:774 - not a must, though~ keep~
2. 00:12:715 (4) - Add clap on slider's end here? (because previously you had clap on 00:08:480 (4)'s end)Fix!
3. 00:15:892 (3) - Again here, it's strongly recommended to add a finish here because you have a finish on your previous (3)'s start~Fix!
4. 00:18:009 (1,2) - (optional) Move both few grids down so (1,2,3) forms a perfect triangle?Fix!
5. 00:22:245 (1) - I like your idea to use a 20% volume here, but really consider to add a finish on slider's start here - it will bring up some good accent (:Fix!
6. 00:24:362 (4,5) - Hmm, I think it's better to use a consistent hitsound here, I suggest to use finish on slider's start, clap on repeat, and clap on end to both slider to give more power to this part xDFix!
7. 00:27:539 (2,3) - I personally dislike how this long straight slider will flow in play mode... Maybe use a tilted slider wave here to create a better flow?Fix!
   
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8. 00:36:009 (2) - Add whistle on slider's start here, as you already have a whistle on (4)Fix!
9. 00:40:245 (3) - (optional) Curve it slightly to the left so (3,4) will face to an opposite direction? Would be cute and flow better imo :3Fix!
10. 00:41:304 (4,1,2,3) - Add a gradual volume increase here? (simple one such as 55 -> 60 -> 65 -> 70 would do enough - just make sure it ends in 70%)Fix!
11. 00:43:068 (2,3) - (optional) Perhaps combine these two into a single slider? It will flow better imo, because it reflects (4)'s shape~Fix!
12. 00:47:657 (1) - It is strongly recommended to use finish on slider's start here, as you have a finish on your previous (2)Fix!
13. 00:58:245 (2,3) - Is it intentional to put (3) slightly higher than (2) here? To make (3) perfectly placed beside (2), just hold SHIFT while placing (3)~Fix!
14. 01:01:068 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, I personally think it's better to put (4,5) away from (1) to avoid (1)'s comboburst overlaps (4,5) in play mode, you can just simply arrange like this though:Fix!
    
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15. 01:08:833 - Drag break here~Fix!
16. 01:17:304 (1) - Reset the inherit volume to 70% here (around ~60% is fine, but 45% is just too low imo) - also, refer to my suggestion on 00:58:245 about (1,2) xDFix!
17. 01:31:068 (2,3,4,1) - (optional) imo this square can be tilted to make it flow better... All you have to do is select all, rotate ~25° selection centre, and revert to its original position using (2) as your reference~Fix!
18. 01:44:833 (3) - Move this few grids lower? This will make (3) acts as a "bridge" from (2) to (4), thus increases flow xDFix!
19. 01:48:009 (3) - (optional) I think you can face the slider's end upward instead of right, this is to avoid clustering with (4)'s path~Fix!
20. 01:51:186 (1) - Stack perfectly to (4)'s end, or move it further from (4)'s end - stacking this half below (4)'s end will obscure this note's start position because (4)'s comboburst covers this note's start... About the placement, I think you can just arrange like this:Fix!
    
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21. 01:54:362 (5) - Copy-paste from (4), CTRL+H, and CTRL+R here for perfect symmetry?Fix!
22. 02:08:127 (1,2,3,4,1,3,4) - I strongly recommend to add finish instead of whistle to every slider's start - whistle isn't powerful enough for this part imo~Fix!
23. 02:13:421 (3) - (optional) For flow, perhaps move this more to the bottom-left (x:318 y:359)? If you do this, don't forget to adjust (4)'s position xDFix!

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-> (optional) HP Drain -1? I personally feel the difficulty setting will be more balanced this way~
-> Also, feels weird that this diff has no Finish at all... Your hitsound is pretty much consistent already, yes, but some parts like the chorus' start (00:51:892 and 01:42:715) is good for a finish imo (they can emphasize that part's start :3)

1. 00:04:245 (3) - Minor stuff, but perhaps try to make this symmetrical in the center? (x:158 y:317 for this note - adjusting (2) won't be that hard~)
2. 00:08:480 (3) - Hmm, it's quite weird for me having this suddenly faced downward (especially remembering your previous sliders were faced leftward or rightward)... Rotate this 90° to make this face rightward would fix this~
3. 00:19:068 (2) - If you listen to the song carefully, actually the song hits high note on the repeat instead of the end, so maybe move the clap on slider's end to the repeat?
4. 00:21:186 (2,3) - Add a gradual volume increase here?
5. 00:23:304 (2) - Same as 00:19:068
6. 00:36:715 (1,2,3) - Try to curve these three more - currently it's quite unclear whether this is curved or not, I suggest to move (2) to x:99 y:232 and move (3) more to the lower-left to emphasize the curve here~
7. 00:43:421 (1) - Hmm, I personally dislike how this slider's repeat almost touches 00:45:892 (4)... I know this isn't a big problem, but you still have a lot of playfield in the left >_<
   
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8. 00:50:833 (4,6) - Add clap on (4) to keep your clapping consistent - also, add clap on (6) also if you want, it fits~
9. 01:05:657 (3) - (optional) Curve this to the left instead? I personally feel it will flow better to your next (1)...
10. 01:06:715 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps use a less narrow angle to increase flow here?
11. 01:18:362 (3,4,1) - Move (4) upward or downward a bit, so there will be an arc formed here?
12. 01:22:598 (2) - I think you can move this downward a bit to increase flow here - yes, it might not follow the proper distance snapping, but it's barely noticeable while it highly increases flow~
13. 01:30:892 (2) - (optional) Move upward, so there will be an arc here?
14. 01:33:186 (4) - Try to arrange like this to avoid (2)'s comboburst blocking this slider's path? With this arrangement, you can also stack (2)'s end to (4)'s end like this:
    
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15. 01:39:539 (3,4) - I personally feel the clap should be on (3)'s start and (4) instead on (3)'s end because of how the instrument sounded here, but it's not a must~
16. 01:40:598 (5) - (optional) Because (3) is slightly curved, it's not a bad idea imo to slightly curve (5) as well to the right~ It gives a good flow with (4) as well (:
17. 01:50:833 (6) - Maybe move this to x:273 y:324 to let (1) be encircled perfectly?
18. 01:58:245 (3,4,5) - Alter to a repeating slider? In play mode, stack will ruin your symmetry in (1,2,3) you're aiming - while repeating slider won't (:

1. 00:01:068 (1) - Hmm, whistle on slider's start here isn't bad, but I prefer finish because your finish sound is stronger here...
2. 00:03:892 (1) - (optional) Because your previous (4) is curved upward, maybe curve this downward as well (to create an antagonistic effect here)?
3. 00:10:068 (2) - Split into a circle + 1/2 slider? The song doesn't continue its 1/1 here...
4. 00:16:068 (2) - Add clap here? (previously you had a clap on 00:11:833 (2), I think it's better to add also here for consistency)
5. 00:20:657 (2) - I think it's better to stack this slider's end to (3)'s start instead... Stacking to (3)'s end isn't a good option because forcing it to stack perfectly will cause this touching (1) while your current stacking makes this slider's end not covered perfectly with (3)'s comboburst >_<
6. 00:21:186 (1,2,1,2) - (optional) I personally disliked how the first (1,2) flows here... Maybe arrange them into a slider fan like this?
   
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7. 00:24:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one also, you can just drag (2) and (4) further to create a fan formation here, it plays fancy :3
8. 00:25:774 (3) - Add clap here? It will tell player where the triple ends~
9. 00:29:657 (1) - (optional) CTRL+R this slider to create a small jump with (2)?
10. 00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another optional thing here, because your next (1,2,3) is patterned I think it would be better if you used a more recognizable pattern here... This is just my suggestion, though >_<
    
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11. 00:37:068 (3,1) - Add clap on both slider's start, because you added clap previously on 00:36:010 (4)'s start
12. 00:43:774 (1,2) - Try to make (1,2,1) and (2,1,2) in a straight line here? For example, 00:43:774 (1) should be on x:209 y:339 - adjusting (2) won't be that hard~
13. 00:49:774 (1,2) - Move few grids right (or upper-right) so (1,3,1)'s spacing becomes equal? Will be more intuitive this way imo (:
14. 00:56:833 (1,2,3) - I highly recommend to move (1) further from your previous slider's start - when I playtest this map, I missed here because of the uneven spacing >_<
    
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15. 01:03:186 (3,1,2) - Again, for the slowdown part like this it will be more intuitive if these three is spaced equally - for this case, you just need to move 01:03:892 (1) to x:476 y:138 xD
16. 01:07:774 (1) - I can still hear a note here. Perhaps add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 after?
17. 01:22:245 (2) - Place this more upward? This will avoid clustering with 01:20:480 (3)'s comboburst :3
18. 01:28:951 (4) - (optional) I think it will be good if you can put this slider's half cutted by (3)'s end lol, but this is purely optional~
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:33:539 (2) - CTRL+R this to create a small jump with (3)?
20. 01:36:010 (5) - Uh, remove the clap on slider's end maybe? It kinda sounded out of place...
21. 01:45:892 (5,6,1) - In any way, this is really similar to 1/4 triples (although they're actually 1/2 triples) - well, actually no need to change this because it flows good already, but for intuitivity I'd rather stack (6) above (1)'s start >_<
22. 01:51:186 (1,2) - This also, looking at your previous (2,3)'s shape, I highly recommend to CTRL+R one of this (I prefer (2) though)
23. 01:58:598 (1) - Again, I can still hear the song here. Add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 after?
24. 02:00:010 (1) - (optional) I'm not a big fan of putting post-spinner circles directly on the center actually... Spinner's comboburst will cover this note in play mode, but no need to change anything lol (it's just my opinion >_<)
25. 02:05:127 (2) - Hmm, I don't really get the rhythm here to be honest, although it plays good but it will definitely fit the song more to use a slider + circle 1/2 after~
26. 02:15:539 (1) - Silence this spinner's end, as the other difficulties did? Also add a circle on slider's start here and start the spinner 1/4 later if you want (as I previously suggested) xD

Niva wrote:

Hi again LoliSora~

Here's mod for Hyper, as promised :3

[Hyper]

1. 00:01:068 (1) - Hmm, whistle on slider's start here isn't bad, but I prefer finish because your finish sound is stronger here...
2. 00:03:892 (1) - (optional) Because your previous (4) is curved upward, maybe curve this downward as well (to create an antagonistic effect here)?
3. 00:10:068 (2) - Split into a circle + 1/2 slider? The song doesn't continue its 1/1 here...
4. 00:16:068 (2) - Add clap here? (previously you had a clap on 00:11:833 (2), I think it's better to add also here for consistency)
5. 00:20:657 (2) - I think it's better to stack this slider's end to (3)'s start instead... Stacking to (3)'s end isn't a good option because forcing it to stack perfectly will cause this touching (1) while your current stacking makes this slider's end not covered perfectly with (3)'s comboburst >_<
6. 00:21:186 (1,2,1,2) - (optional) I personally disliked how the first (1,2) flows here... Maybe arrange them into a slider fan like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:24:362 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one also, you can just drag (2) and (4) further to create a fan formation here, it plays fancy :3
8. 00:25:774 (3) - Add clap here? It will tell player where the triple ends~
9. 00:29:657 (1) - (optional) CTRL+R this slider to create a small jump with (2)?
10. 00:32:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another optional thing here, because your next (1,2,3) is patterned I think it would be better if you used a more recognizable pattern here... This is just my suggestion, though >_<
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:37:068 (3,1) - Add clap on both slider's start, because you added clap previously on 00:36:010 (4)'s start
12. 00:43:774 (1,2) - Try to make (1,2,1) and (2,1,2) in a straight line here? For example, 00:43:774 (1) should be on x:209 y:339 - adjusting (2) won't be that hard~
13. 00:49:774 (1,2) - Move few grids right (or upper-right) so (1,3,1)'s spacing becomes equal? Will be more intuitive this way imo (:
14. 00:56:833 (1,2,3) - I highly recommend to move (1) further from your previous slider's start - when I playtest this map, I missed here because of the uneven spacing >_<
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:03:186 (3,1,2) - Again, for the slowdown part like this it will be more intuitive if these three is spaced equally - for this case, you just need to move 01:03:892 (1) to x:476 y:138 xD
16. 01:07:774 (1) - I can still hear a note here. Perhaps add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 after?
17. 01:22:245 (2) - Place this more upward? This will avoid clustering with 01:20:480 (3)'s comboburst :3
18. 01:28:951 (4) - (optional) I think it will be good if you can put this slider's half cutted by (3)'s end lol, but this is purely optional~
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:33:539 (2) - CTRL+R this to create a small jump with (3)?
20. 01:36:010 (5) - Uh, remove the clap on slider's end maybe? It kinda sounded out of place...
21. 01:45:892 (5,6,1) - In any way, this is really similar to 1/4 triples (although they're actually 1/2 triples) - well, actually no need to change this because it flows good already, but for intuitivity I'd rather stack (6) above (1)'s start >_<
22. 01:51:186 (1,2) - This also, looking at your previous (2,3)'s shape, I highly recommend to CTRL+R one of this (I prefer (2) though)
23. 01:58:598 (1) - Again, I can still hear the song here. Add a circle here and start the spinner 1/4 after?
24. 02:00:010 (1) - (optional) I'm not a big fan of putting post-spinner circles directly on the center actually... Spinner's comboburst will cover this note in play mode, but no need to change anything lol (it's just my opinion >_<)
25. 02:05:127 (2) - Hmm, I don't really get the rhythm here to be honest, although it plays good but it will definitely fit the song more to use a slider + circle 1/2 after~
26. 02:15:539 (1) - Silence this spinner's end, as the other difficulties did? Also add a circle on slider's start here and start the spinner 1/4 later if you want (as I previously suggested) xD

[Another]

IRC Modded from the log above~

I love this Hyper :3 :3
Good luck, LoliSora :3

Katsuri wrote:

[general]
you need to full-submit your map due to problems in download link, i get the map not updated at all. Sure~
the size of your folder is greater than 10mb, the maximum allowed to maps without video, try reducing a bit the size of some files..I don't know, maybe the SB folder is too big?(7MB)
nice sb and map

[another]
01:45:539 (6) - this note is a bit hidden by note combo burst, try to move it a bit like this.
maybe you want to set tick rate to 2, this way you will have a constant 1/2 rhythm in this diff

[hyper]
your hitsounds are somewhat low, consider rasing them, the player needs some feedback from what he is playing.
why at another you silence the last spinner's hitsound and here you don't? consider silencing it in both diffs for better consistency.
same thing as another about tick rate here.
Fix
[standard]
tick rates, same thing as another.

[beginner]
nothing to poke at

hope to help ya

1. Song folder - soft-clap.wav - maybe this is useless ?

1. 00:29:677 (5,6) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/wjA2 i think this one fits an SB, and the beginner is easy to play :3
2. 00:42:382 (5) - add NC and 00:42:735 (1) - remove NC. It matches an SB, and the appearance becomes clean, too
3. 00:50:853 (4) - Looks like the flow of the slider a little bad for me >< because 00:48:735 (2,3) - you are using the slider there is a roundness. my suggestion form: http://puu.sh/wjTX . http://puu.sh/wjU4 . http://puu.sh/wjUf ↓code
   
   SPOILER

   348,345,48735,2,0,B|444:345|460:253,1,160,4|8
   400,200,49794,2,0,B|384:108|288:108,1,160,4|8
   240,172,50853,2,0,B|144:172|128:264,1,160,4|8
   176,328,51912,5,4
   324,268,52618,1,8
   324,268,52971,2,0,B|396:223|396:134,1,160,4|8

4. 00:57:206 (1) - remove NC. ( i think do not need NC )
5. 01:02:500 (5) - add NC. ( i think too long NC in easy )
6. 01:28:971 (5) - try use 01:27:912 (4) copy. and rotate -10° http://puu.sh/wjXj
   

   346,253,87912,2,0,B|346:173|422:117,1,160,4|8

1. 00:30:559 (x) - 00:29:677 (2,3) - If you do not put anything between here, I prefer to put a note here
2. 00:33:912 (4) - add clap to repeat and end of the slider ? ( same as 00:42:382 (2) ? ) but I think that clap of start is unnecessary.
3. 01:27:206 (3) - maybe DS1.38x is Intentional? DS is not a problem. but 1.20x to put at the position has good appearance imo. http://puu.sh/wkfa
4. 01:53:324 (1) - http://puu.sh/wkhn try use symmetrical form. You should clean an appearance than you make DS uniformity here. so 01:51:206 (1) - Ctrl + c,v,h

1. why HD7,OD7 ;x;? it is better to lower than another diff. so HD , OD -1 or -1 is better imo.
2. 01:05:235 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:677 (6) - add NC and 01:06:030 (1) - remove NC ? ( I prefer to do the same as 01:56:059 (3) )
3. 01:07:882 - Why do you put kiai here? I do not think the problem with 01:07:794 in the same way as other diff.
4. 01:54:382 (4) - add NC ?

1. 00:43:088 (7) - change to 1/8 kick slider is better? ( same as 00:34:618 (6) )
2. 00:46:618 (1,2,3) - I do not think that you put it in the place same as 00:45:912 (4,5) to be a good idea >< for ex: http://puu.sh/wkTX . http://puu.sh/wkJY
3. 00:48:382 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:51:382 (10) - add repeat. end to 00:51:735 ?
5. 01:25:088 (5,1) - i think does not match the rhythm a little try simple rhythm: http://puu.sh/wkN5

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ LoliSora :3

from m4m ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - soft-clap.wav - maybe this is useless ? Fix!

[Beginner]

1. 00:29:677 (5,6) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/wjA2 i think this one fits an SB, and the beginner is easy to play :3
2. 00:42:382 (5) - add NC and 00:42:735 (1) - remove NC. It matches an SB, and the appearance becomes clean, too
3. 00:50:853 (4) - Looks like the flow of the slider a little bad for me >< because 00:48:735 (2,3) - you are using the slider there is a roundness. my suggestion form: http://puu.sh/wjTX . http://puu.sh/wjU4 . http://puu.sh/wjUf ↓code
   
   SPOILER

   348,345,48735,2,0,B|444:345|460:253,1,160,4|8
   400,200,49794,2,0,B|384:108|288:108,1,160,4|8
   240,172,50853,2,0,B|144:172|128:264,1,160,4|8
   176,328,51912,5,4
   324,268,52618,1,8
   324,268,52971,2,0,B|396:223|396:134,1,160,4|8

4. 00:57:206 (1) - remove NC. ( i think do not need NC )
5. 01:02:500 (5) - add NC. ( i think too long NC in easy )
6. 01:28:971 (5) - try use 01:27:912 (4) copy. and rotate -10° http://puu.sh/wjXj
   

   346,253,87912,2,0,B|346:173|422:117,1,160,4|8

Fix All!

[Standard]

1. 00:30:559 (x) - 00:29:677 (2,3) - If you do not put anything between here, I prefer to put a note here
2. 00:33:912 (4) - add clap to repeat and end of the slider ? ( same as 00:42:382 (2) ? ) but I think that clap of start is unnecessary.
3. 01:27:206 (3) - maybe DS1.38x is Intentional? DS is not a problem. but 1.20x to put at the position has good appearance imo. http://puu.sh/wkfa
4. 01:53:324 (1) - http://puu.sh/wkhn try use symmetrical form. You should clean an appearance than you make DS uniformity here. so 01:51:206 (1) - Ctrl + c,v,h

Fix All!

[Hyper]

1. why HD7,OD7 ;x;? it is better to lower than another diff. so HD , OD -1 or -1 is better imo.
2. 01:05:235 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:677 (6) - add NC and 01:06:030 (1) - remove NC ? ( I prefer to do the same as 01:56:059 (3) )
3. 01:07:882 - Why do you put kiai here? I do not think the problem with 01:07:794 in the same way as other diff.
4. 01:54:382 (4) - add NC ?

Fix All!

[Another]

1. 00:43:088 (7) - change to 1/8 kick slider is better? ( same as 00:34:618 (6) ) Fix!
2. 00:46:618 (1,2,3) - I do not think that you put it in the place same as 00:45:912 (4,5) to be a good idea >< for ex: http://puu.sh/wkTX . http://puu.sh/wkJY Sorry, I like such pattern QAQ
3. 00:48:382 (1,2) - ^ ^
4. 00:51:382 (10) - add repeat. end to 00:51:735 ? Fix in the other way!
5. 01:25:088 (5,1) - i think does not match the rhythm a little try simple rhythm: http://puu.sh/wkN5 keep this one :3

poor mod again

great map & SB ! Star~☆ Please do not throw kudosu if worthless x3

Good luck~

NatsumeRin wrote:

咦，这个是妹子吗？你好，你住哪里？上几年级了？

NatsumeRin wrote:

咦，这个是妹子吗？你好，你住哪里？上几年级了？

NatsumeRin wrote:

咦，这个是妹子吗？你好，你住哪里？上几年级了？

LoliSora wrote:

>cRyo
Thank you! where's "我喜欢你“ :3