grumd wrote:

[DJPop's]

1. 00:04:046 (2) - remove whistle? it wasn't there on 00:02:080 (2)
   - Whistle on piano chord
2. 00:11:908 (3) - remove it also here?
   - ^
3. 00:14:856 (1) - add one repeat? to be honest, i'd like to add notes right till the slider start, but using a slider with repeats for this purpose is weird. I suggest you to delete this slider and add a little stream, like that: http://puu.sh/vpnB; this could be best.
   - Already synced with obvious sounds
4. 00:45:815 (2) - add one repeat? (due to vocals)
   - Fixed
5. 00:46:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i highly suggest you to remake this part with 0.5x spacing for streams (like you did after that) to keep consistency. it looks rather better, while unreasonable spacing change in streams looks weird
   - Fixed
6. 01:29:549 (1) - sudden use of finishes stunned me. it sounds very bad here.. consider changing them to claps or just removing
   - Removed
7. 01:30:778 (3) - yes, i mean these finishes
   - Removed
8. 01:31:515 (1) - this finish sounds good, no need to remove it. so, just remove (change to claps) it on 01:30:778 and 01:29:795, okay? highly suggest.
   - Okay
9. 01:33:480 (1) - remove finish please
   - Removed
10. 02:11:810 (4,5) - that's just my taste, but i think these sliders are too curvy. consider making them smoother?
    - Sure
11. 02:15:987 (5,1) - the same
    - Fixed
12. 02:26:183 (8) - i suggest you to add one repeat here, add finish on the end point of this slider, move spinner's start 1/4 later, move green point 1/4 later too. i just want to accent vocal on 02:26:552
    - No changes
13. 02:26:674 (1) - what about dividing this spinner into two another spinners? just like that: http://puu.sh/vpw1 (first spinner: 02:26:674 ~ 02:28:272, second spinner: 02:28:517 ~ 02:30:483). this will also accent vocal on 02:28:272
    - Tried that, but not good

grumd wrote:

A little recheck from AIBat:

1. DJPop's diff: 00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped slider
   - Intended, sync on vocal

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

updated :3

dafuq is this? Uploaded 10 days ago and so many mods already?

Anyway,

General
Volume is too high for many sections. The whistles give me a headache.
Add those hitsounds - Please, please please do: http://puu.sh/vCxl and http://puu.sh/vCxK. A clap with lotsa echo and a simple bass. Perfect for this song.
Tell all mappers who took part in this map to re-work their hitsounds D:

Insane
00:14:856 (1) - remove whistles completely or lower the volume for them, they sound terrible this way.

Besides that nothing to say. Please use the hitsounds provided above to IMPROVE your HITSOUNDS for this. You are DJPop. You can do this.

Hard
Hitsounds are WAAAY too loud. Lower volume in ALL sections by at least 20%.

Map itself is fine, but please use my custom hitsounds.

Normal
00:42:866 (4) - what is the bulk in the middle supposed to be? looks stupid.

Besides that, use my custom hitsounds from above.

Easy
Hitsounds are too loud.
Rework the hitsounds with my hitsounds from above.


Pleae excuse my arrogant behaviour in this post.

thanks Tenshi-nyan for checking the map :3

So, you gonna add those hitsounds or not? Just want to make sure.

thanks but no thanks. i feel that the current hitsounds are fine. i tried using your hitsounds but i got lost right away. in other words it'd be hard for me if i used your hitsounds as i'm not used to them in a calm song like this. it just doesn't fit my style at all.

Agree with 249 here. It's hard for me to use your hitsound in this calm song. Maybe it doesn't fit my style
About that slider, i just want variation, nothing wrong. And i don't think it's ugly.

From my queue

[249]

1. from a IceBeam's : separate all combos that are longer then 5 please,it's required for the easiest difficulty. ex)NC here 02:00:999 (3) -
2. 00:08:960 (1) - 1grid left 4th tick to be symmetry with head
3. 00:18:788 (2) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 00:17:805 (1) - ?
4. 00:24:684 (2) - start combo from here, melody changed
5. 01:24:635 (1) - you should NC after spinner
6. 01:31:023 (5) - 1grid left to be centered, put your timing bar here 01:29:795 - and you can take x:320
7. 01:33:480 (3) - looks hard, you'd better copy/paste from 01:31:515 (1) -. will be more soft imo
8. 01:52:645 (6) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 01:51:662 (4) - , because 01:52:154 (5) - is symmetry with 01:51:171 (3) - now

[Miya]

1. 00:02:080 (1) - because you started on melody first, i'd recommend start it on melody too, so you can delete it and add a circle on this slider's end
2. 00:04:046 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:942 (1) - ^but arrow
4. 00:11:908 (1) - ^ to delete?
5. 00:24:193 (6) - feels empty, whistle here will kepp your whistle sounds
6. 00:32:055 (4) - ^
7. 00:39:918 - ^
8. 00:44:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - to split this long combo, i'd NC at 00:46:797 (5) -
9. 00:50:729 (3,4,5) - if i were you, i whould put 00:51:220 (4) - on (292,48) to be symmetry with 00:48:763 (1,2) - , not center
10. 01:22:670 (6) - 1 grid up to be symmetry with 01:21:687 (4) -
11. 01:28:566 (2) - 1 grid down ^
12. 01:30:286 (5,6) - 2 grid left ^
13. 01:34:463 (4) - 1 grid left ^
14. 02:26:552 (1) - because it's just a normal diff, i recommend split it or make like easy diff

[Hard]

1. Insane diff has 4CS, i highly recommend to use 4CS too
2. 00:06:748 (4) - because you put NC on 00:02:326 (1,1) - , NC here as well
3. 00:23:456 (2) - whistle and remove whistle from 00:23:702 -
4. 00:29:353 (7) - ^
5. 00:43:603 (3) - 1 grid left,down to make more blank from 00:43:358 (2) -
6. 01:00:065 - finish
7. 01:31:515 (3) - ^
8. 02:11:318 (6) - copy/paste from 02:10:581 (4) - and ctrl+r,h?

[DJPop]

1. 01:38:272 (3) - a bit confusing, use more big dinstance or NC plz
2. 02:08:124 (9) - NC?

Good luck with ranking~

Fixed all nazi mod and the last spinner. :3

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

thanks Star Stream for your mod \o and updated ~

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Insane
00:14:856 (1) - remove whistles completely or lower the volume for them, they sound terrible this way.
- Reduced whistles to 1 and faded out volume, also applied your custom hitsounds

Star Stream wrote:

[DJPop]

1. 01:38:272 (3) - a bit confusing, use more big dinstance or NC plz
   - Fixed
2. 02:08:124 (9) - NC?
   - Fixed

Download: 50294 Lia - Tori no Uta.part1.rar
Download: 50294 Lia - Tori no Uta.part2.rar

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[249]

1. from a IceBeam's : separate all combos that are longer then 5 please,it's required for the easiest difficulty. ex)NC here 02:00:999 (3) -
2. 00:08:960 (1) - 1grid left 4th tick to be symmetry with head nope i don't think it'd make that much of a difference.
3. 00:18:788 (2) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 00:17:805 (1) - ? nope this is intentional.
4. 00:24:684 (2) - start combo from here, melody changed nope (1) is where the vocals start. im not following the melody at all, just the vocals and when it changes.
5. 01:24:635 (1) - you should NC after spinner ahh i see it. Fixed.
6. 01:31:023 (5) - 1grid left to be centered, put your timing bar here 01:29:795 - and you can take x:320 same as 00:08:960.
7. 01:33:480 (3) - looks hard, you'd better copy/paste from 01:31:515 (1) -. will be more soft imo alright just for flow.
8. 01:52:645 (6) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 01:51:662 (4) - , because 01:52:154 (5) - is symmetry with 01:51:171 (3) - now oh uhh this is a mistake. i moved (5) down. i want this to be a slight diagonal zig-zag pattern.

Good luck with ranking~

ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

From my modding queue! :3

[Byakugan]
00:08:960 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321393
00:14:856 (1) - finish
00:48:272 (1) - ^
01:27:584 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321432
02:06:896 (1) - whistle at reverse arrow

[Miya] well, almost nothing to mod :3 but 1 suggestion
01:56:576 (2) - whistle at reverse arrow

[Hard]
00:24:930 (4) - NC
00:33:530 (1) - clap
01:03:014 (1) - whistle

[Boss Andy]
sry.. i can't mod taiko

[DJ Pop]
well, nothing to mod here :3
but starting part of song is quiet and low speed
I think Normal sound is absurd...

Go rank ㅇㅅㅇ!

Sorry, i don't want any whistle in kiai part >.<
Thank you for the mod~

bbj0920 wrote:

From my modding queue! :3

[Byakugan]
00:08:960 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321393 it won't make that much of a difference so no.
00:14:856 (1) - finish no i find it unfitting with this part.
00:48:272 (1) - ^ too loud sorry.
01:27:584 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321432 *points at 00:08:960*
02:06:896 (1) - whistle at reverse arrow *points at 00:14:856*

Go rank ㅇㅅㅇ!

No changes made but ty for the mod.

nothing to changed but thanks for modding ~ :3

[Easy]

01:37:412 -(3) x:404 y:140

01:51:171 -(3) new combo

[Normal]

nice

[Hard]

00:28:616 -(5) ds need fix

[DJpop's Insane]

01:19:475 -(6) ds need fix

01:44:046 -(2) ^


thats I can find <3 really nice map and nice song, I love AIR

good luck w/~

Twice wrote:

[Easy]

01:37:412 -(3) x:404 y:140 it won't make that much of a difference during gameplay so no.

01:51:171 -(3) new combo i'd like to hear more people's opinions about this. if there's enough, i'll make this a NC


thats I can find <3 really nice map and nice song, I love AIR

good luck w/~

No changes made but ty for the mod.

[DJPop]
I'm pretty sure silenced ticks are unrankable (some exceptions)
00:29:025 (2) - feels better if it starts 00:28:984 and ends 00:29:475 (I'm pretty sure it's not 1/3)
00:45:815 (2) - NC to make it easier to read
00:52:694 - why not add a note here?

[Boss]
Force taiko skin?

[Hard]
Why so small hitcircle? D:
Tickrate +1? Easier to notice when there's a slow-down or not
00:04:291 (1) - remove the whistle-slide
00:56:871 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
01:35:446 (3) - finish at the beginning
02:02:964 (3) - finish

[Miya]
00:48:763 (1,2) - make them symmetrical to each-other, like this Yeah, you can rotate 00:47:780 (8) by 10º or something
00:14:856 (1,1) - unsure about this, but it might work

[249]
Don't like Kiai?
00:06:994 (4,5,6,1) - move them 1 grid left
00:08:960 (1) - rotate this slider by -2º (Selection Centre)
02:29:500 (1) - perhaps a 2/1 slider instead? something like this

Saten-san wrote:

[249]
Don't like Kiai? i'm trying out a new mapping style. i just want kiai bursts not kiai times.
00:06:994 (4,5,6,1) - move them 1 grid left oh my i think a few people mentioned this. alright just to fix the DS.
00:08:960 (1) - rotate this slider by -2º (Selection Centre) alright to make a perfect blanket.
02:29:500 (1) - perhaps a 2/1 slider instead? something like this no then it'll be too easy for beginners to clear. i added a 1/1 repeat slider as a challenge for beginnes

omg i can't believe i did this >.< ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

thanks Saten and Twice for your mods :3

Because much people request pattern change. Then i have revise the pattern on that one.
Thank you for modding Saten-san

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

Twice wrote:

[DJpop's Insane]
01:19:475 -(6) ds need fix
- Nothing's wrong
01:44:046 -(2) ^
- Fixed

Saten-san wrote:

[DJPop]
I'm pretty sure silenced ticks are unrankable (some exceptions)
- Fine if not all ticks are silent
00:29:025 (2) - feels better if it starts 00:28:984 and ends 00:29:475 (I'm pretty sure it's not 1/3)
- 1/4 is wrong, 1/3 is almost
00:45:815 (2) - NC to make it easier to read
- Added
00:52:694 - why not add a note here?
- Only vocal synced for this part

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

omg

\:D/

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. s49's BG? lolwhat.
2. spinner-background is too bright, IMO. Maybe you should decrease the brightness a little.
3. Uh... negative offset?

>249's Easy

1. 00:38:935 (3,4) - Are you sure about this? I mean, suddenly going 1/2 beat here?
2. 00:44:340 (1) - Lengthen by two white ticks?
3. 00:48:272 (1) - ^ (Three white ticks, instead.)
4. 02:22:620 (1) - ^ (Two.)

>Miya's Normal

1. 00:42:866 (4) - I... don't see anything you can tell me to justify about what happened in the middle of the slider. I mean, the music and vocal didn't have anything 'special' for this slider to be okay. Just make it... straight?

>Hard

1. CS5 is too small, IMO. CS4?
2. The SV changes before the first bookmark... It just doesn't flow well, IMO.

>DJPop's Insane

1. I'm sure enough I've seen the BG somewhere...
2. 00:44:832 (1,2) - It's HARD to read these, predict when (1) will end, when (2) will begin, and then comes the transition from 1/4 to 1/2... Well, it just doesn't work pretty good for me.
3. 01:53:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh... sure about these sliders?

'Kay, that's it. Good job you guys have done here.

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.


>249's Easy

1. 00:38:935 (3,4) - Are you sure about this? I mean, suddenly going 1/2 beat here? yes i'm 100% sure on this. i don't want to overuse the 1/1 lines and that'll lead to a boring easy diff.
2. 00:44:340 (1) - Lengthen by two white ticks? no i need to give time for beginners to get ready for the next note.
3. 00:48:272 (1) - ^ (Three white ticks, instead.) ^
4. 02:22:620 (1) - ^ (Two.) ^

'Kay, that's it. Good job you guys have done here.

Good luck on the way

no changes made but ty for the mod.

Read the reply for Tenshi-nyan please. I don't want to change that slider. Nothing wrong with the flow and i want some variation.

This request was taken from wmf's queue

[Boss Sweet Taiko]

1. SV back to 1.4 or 1.5 please.I can't see any reason that it needs 1.6.
2. 00:04:783 (1) - I think don is much better.
3. 00:39:426 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - I highly recommend removing these two notes here.It doesn't fit the music and it triplet sounds too rude here.
4. 00:59:451 (1,2,1,2) - dkkd for this 4-plets?
5. 02:08:861 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1) - Due to the change of blue-red notes pattern.This pattern is more difficult than overall.Please simply the pattern or remove the stream.
6. 02:16:724 (1) - Don please.Kat sounds weird.

That's it.GL

ok updated ~ o.o

from Spinboxer's mod queue (Taiko slot)

red is unrankable issue. bule is recommended to fix. Black is just suggestion.

good luck~

omg i thought i fixed that >.< ty for the mod bakaboxer

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

updated :3

12 days and 7 pages, ok.

Btw, take a star Moe Sekai.

lol thanks Bruno xD

Philippines wrote:

• 
  [list:c7707]Easy

1. Inconsistent Kiai Times. Please remove the 2nd kiai on this diff. Also, your first kiai should end on 02:30:483. i'm not gonna change it. i told you on my other post, the kiai time can be inconsistent if there's a guest diff. look at gowww's diff here. it doesn't have a kiai time and it's ranked.
2. 02:04:439 (2,3,4,5,6) - Idk if you're trying to make a star pattern, if so, i recommend you fix it. i think it looks fine so i'm not gonna fix it. i don't see that's there to fix.

no changes made but ty for the mod.

Philippines wrote:

• Insane

1. Unsnapped Slider Ends: http://puu.sh/w5Eg.
   00:29:025 (2) - Intended, vocal snapped
   01:37:657 (1,2,1) - SV was wrong, fixed
2. Why does this have larger circles than Hard?
   - I usually map with this size

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

Taiko mod as requested.

[Taiko]
- remove sliderborder colour

00:13:136 - spinner嫌吵 直接放空也ok
00:49:500 - 節奏對應不了00:49:991 - 這個vocal, 可試用d k ddd kddk
01:04:979 - 第4個音明顯高音而不是低音 考慮到後面你用了kdddkddd 這用dddkd吧
01:07:805 - 音調向下降 d會自然一點
01:20:704 - 統一點 要不這2個也放大圓(K K) 要不前面也不要大圓
01:26:724 - 音調向上 可以試一下dk d k

整體不錯 只是你本身太鬼畜了嗯

I think it's time for MAT check Sekai
Focus on searching MAT now >.<

waiting for bossandy's fixes. =~=//

Almost fixed! thanks for mod!

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Boss Sweet Taiko].osu

ok updated :3

hello -Sekai-!

General

1. first of all,are you sure of source? should it be capitalzed? though I didn't find a certain answer in the web - all ranked maps have Air as source. I think it'd be consistent at least.
2. please make tags similar. even though you don't seem to miss anything - the order is messed up,so better to make them consistent in all difficulties.
3. why 249's Easy has 2 fountains instead of whole kiai section as in all other diffs? D: looks a little weird,I'd fix that.

249's Easy
hitsounds from the start and up to 00:52:203 are way too loud D: especially soft-whistles sound out of place,so I'd suggest to reduce volume to 50% or less.

and there's no break..I wish there was,at least in the easiest difficulty.
the only spot I could suggest is 00:44:340 - 00:52:203

1. 00:26:650 (3) - I'd end this slider at 00:27:633,otherwise your rhythm breaks..and btw it'd follow the lyrics.
2. 00:38:444 (2,3,4) - it follows the main rhythm,but looks doubtful comparing to the rest of the map.maybe try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:47:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I see logics in this hitsound pattern,but it could sound better imo >_<
   personally,I'd add claps to 01:51:662 (4 & 6),but adding claps to all these notes - 01:50:188 (2,3,4,5,6) - sounds good too,as it's the growing rhythm part between the chorus.
4. 02:17:215 (2) - here too,I'd add a clap if you're following upbeats.
5. 02:29:500 (1) - do you really need this object? why not to extend the previous spinner up to the 02:30:483?

Miya's Normal

1. 00:37:952 (4,5,6,7) - I don't think such sudden 1/2 fits well.maybe make like this at least?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:59:082 (4,5,6) - catchy rhythm,but I'm surprised to see it in the Normal diff D: as you use mostly use 1/1 rhytm,blue ticks look a little out of place. if you're willing to make it easier,but to keep this rhythm - the only thing I could suggest is:
   
   SPOILER

   
   if you change it in this way - dont' forget to fix such moments through the map!
   
   
3. 01:54:119 (1) - this spinner is a little short,maybe start it from 01:53:259?

Hard

1. 00:12:154 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is different from others,and it doesn't sound that good T_T adding another note to 00:13:382 and starting that slider from 00:13:628 could solve this problem.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:23:702 (3) - simple 1/2 rhytm sounds much better here >:O the only note that you could delete is 00:23:702. if you wanted to make another slider - start it from 00:25:667 then.
3. 00:52:694 (1) - was this nc intentional? just to point out the finish at 00:52:203 (1)? anyway,I'd remove nc from here.
4. 00:56:871 (1,2) - and this one for sure,please,it looks sooo awkward :C
5. 01:05:471 (8,1,2,3,4) - something wrong with this! as you didn't start repeating sliders from 01:05:962,obviously they wouldn't be consistent. anyway,I see a different way how to map this stream and it'd fit Hard difficulty in a better way imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:37:903 (5) - I'd make a 1/4 reverse-slider here instead,so it could sound better with 01:38:886 (2).
7. 01:54:119 (1,2,3) - the funny thing that you mapped such parts with streams,but this one and the next in chorus are much more easier xD
8. 02:17:706 (1) - clap here and at 02:17:952 would make it much better.

Boss Sweet Taiko
sadly I can't mod taiko,but it looks nice >:O
the only thing - if Boss is compared to your nickname - you could add an apostrophe - Boss' Sweet Taiko.

DJPop's Insane

1. 00:29:025 (2) - I don't really get this D: slider end is unsnapped anyway,but you shouldn't have snapped it at 1/6 in the first place. I'd rather tried to follow the rhythm instead - the lyrics aren't snapped correctly on common 1/4 beats.
2. 00:52:694 - add a note here please - I almost missclicked it. there's an obvious clap - even if you follow the lyrics - don't forget about rhythm,and it'd make it more readable!
3. 01:03:259 (4,5,6) - you should fix spacing here,because it looks totally equal.so try to clear out this blue tick with the spacing.

that's it!
lovely mapset,good job >w<
and I love this song so much,good luck with ranking it!

Reiji-RJ wrote:

hello -Sekai-!

General
[*]why 249's Easy has 2 fountains instead of whole kiai section as in all other diffs? D: looks a little weird,I'd fix that. nahh i'd like to keep it as it is. if i remove them, it'd feel weird for me.

249's Easy
hitsounds from the start and up to 00:52:203 are way too loud D: especially soft-whistles sound out of place,so I'd suggest to reduce volume to 50% or less. sure. i had a feeling someone would say this.

and there's no break..I wish there was,at least in the easiest difficulty.
the only spot I could suggest is 00:44:340 - 00:52:203 if i do that, then i'd feel uncomfortable if i add breaks here.

1. 00:26:650 (3) - I'd end this slider at 00:27:633,otherwise your rhythm breaks..and btw it'd follow the lyrics. i had a feeling this would turn out bad. fixed.
2. 00:38:444 (2,3,4) - it follows the main rhythm,but looks doubtful comparing to the rest of the map.maybe try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   no i don't want to overuse the 1/1 lines. it doesn't fit with my mapping style at all.
3. 01:47:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I see logics in this hitsound pattern,but it could sound better imo >_<
   personally,I'd add claps to 01:51:662 (4 & 6),but adding claps to all these notes - 01:50:188 (2,3,4,5,6) - sounds good too,as it's the growing rhythm part between the chorus. i disagree. i focus on consistency more than the map itself.
4. 02:17:215 (2) - here too,I'd add a clap if you're following upbeats. nope it doesnt fit with my mapping style at all, and if i do this, i'd feel uncomfortable and i'd find it unfitting.
5. 02:29:500 (1) - do you really need this object? why not to extend the previous spinner up to the 02:30:483? yes i do because i don't want to give beginners an easy pass. i want to challenge beginners if they can hit this slider.

that's it!
lovely mapset,good job >w<
and I love this song so much,good luck with ranking it!

Ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Miya's Normal

1. 00:37:952 (4,5,6,7) - I don't think such sudden 1/2 fits well.maybe make like this at least? Nope, i think my rythim fit well and doesn't surprising because i already have put 1/2 rythim on previour rythim before this one.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:59:082 (4,5,6) - catchy rhythm,but I'm surprised to see it in the Normal diff D: as you use mostly use 1/1 rhytm,blue ticks look a little out of place. if you're willing to make it easier,but to keep this rhythm - the only thing I could suggest is: Nope, this can be boring. I want a little challange for this diff. And i think player can manage that due to the low bpm.
   
   SPOILER

   
   if you change it in this way - dont' forget to fix such moments through the map!
   
   
3. 01:54:119 (1) - this spinner is a little short,maybe start it from 01:53:259? Hmm, increased in other way, i don't want to delete that finish

Thank you for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
The color is flashing, especially with video or DJPop's BG. I think you would like to use darker color in combo or slider border because of the skin.

Fine with E & N.

[Hard]
00:14:611 - add a note here? there is piano here, also if no note here, the next stream seems a little sudden
00:39:426 (1) - the other sliders which has similar length are all 0.5x, so i recommend to change to a short slider and a circle like this: http://puu.sh/wrxC
01:19:353 (2) - delete this note. it makes a slip of downbeat
02:00:630 (3) - ^

[DJPop's Insane]
00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped end

That's all I can find. GL~

thanks everyone for modding, and changed the source from AIR to Air as all Ranked maps have it~ :3

Reiji-RJ wrote:

DJPop's Insane

1. 00:29:025 (2) - I don't really get this D: slider end is unsnapped anyway,but you shouldn't have snapped it at 1/6 in the first place. I'd rather tried to follow the rhythm instead - the lyrics aren't snapped correctly on common 1/4 beats.
   - Fixed anyway
2. 00:52:694 - add a note here please - I almost missclicked it. there's an obvious clap - even if you follow the lyrics - don't forget about rhythm,and it'd make it more readable!
   - Added
3. 01:03:259 (4,5,6) - you should fix spacing here,because it looks totally equal.so try to clear out this blue tick with the spacing.
   - Fixed by adding NC

popner wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped end
- Was intended for vocal snapped, but fixed anyway

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

ok updated :3

Random mod cuz I felt like it and I like the song, I hope it's useful.

249's Easy:

Miya's Normal:

Hard:

DJPop's Insane:

sorry nothing to fix~ =3=

nothing fixed. ._.
who cares about the end point not in the middel as long as the shape is good. =3=

No changes for me. the rhythm would be unfitting for me, and like Miya said, it doesn't matter if the end point is at the middle. as long as the slider looks nice, then it shouldn't be a problem.

MystykAMV wrote:

DJPop's Insane:
Well first of all, why not use soft sounsd at the beginning? It might sound nicer :3
- If you mean lower the volume, sure

+1 or +2 HP Drain?
- Changed to 7

00:14:856 (1) - the end point of the slider is not in the middle - http://puu.sh/wwQO
- Fixed
00:28:984 (2) - I think this wound sound better, but just my opinion - http://puu.sh/wwJS
- No changes
00:44:095 (6,1,1) - these are weird imo, and the hitsounds in these realyl fast repeat sliders, whistle and claps, I don't think they fit, and after these again whistle (but that's probably just my personal taste, since I don't really like whistle)
- You said like they're default whistles and claps :<
01:05:962 (1,2,3,4) - again these hitsounds
- No changes
01:24:512 (5) - http://puu.sh/wwMq - she sings that for a long time, so I don't think those repeat sliders are necessary
- Synced with bg sounds
01:32:375 (5,6) - same as above, but this one fits better maybe
- Synced with bg sounds
01:37:657 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5) - hitsounds
- No changes
01:53:874 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is a little bit weird, but okay
- D:
02:06:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - hitsounds
- No changes
02:22:620 (1) - starting from here, why did you put whistle?
- Bass drums
02:14:758 (1) - that line is a bit strange? make it straight? http://puu.sh/wwQ9
- It's fine

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

updated :3

What a bored life.







See ya.

iMercurial wrote:

What a bored life.

Easy

01:00:065 (1) Remove NC for consistency with other combos. nope i made a NC because of the drums and since i added a finish there, it'd look weird if this isnt a NC with a finish IMO.
01:41:834 (5) A combo of 7 pieces is a very long combo for Easy Diffs, please turn this circle to a NC. no it'd be too short and the shape would be ruined.

See ya.

no changes made but ty for the mod. i added the claps back on a part.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

:3/

Hello!~ Here's my mod~ sorry for being late >< (a request from my queue)

• [General]

1. 01:54:119 - Set this as your preview point on all diffs.
2. Inconsistency on kiai's
   
   [249's Easy]
   Strange. AImod says that there's a spacing infringement but there really is nothing wrong with it... Maybe do these following:
3. 00:43:358 (3) - Move this 1 grid upward.
4. 00:43:849 (4) - Move this 1 grid to the left.
   
   [Miya's Normal]
   Clear~
   
   [Miya's Normal]
5. 00:23:702 (3) - Looks nicer this way :3
   
   pic

   
6. 01:06:699 (2) - Make it look like this? :3
   
   pic

   
   
   [DJPop's Insane]
7. 00:31:564 (2) - Ctrl+R?

That's all!~

So far nothing fixed in my diff >.<
Sorry, but thank you for the mod~

Makar8000 wrote:

:3/

[249's Easy]

1. Any reason why you use a Kiai is so much different than the other diffs? yes i want to try out something new. if this works out, then i'll be using kiai bursts only when i map diffs.
2. 01:16:773 (1,2,3,4) - These could all blanket much better. Yes this is a nazi suggestion. it won't make that much of a difference so no.
3. 01:26:109 (3) - Make this blanket (4), (nazi, but please make this look better) sekai can you go 1 grid up on the 3rd point? i don't want to submit my diff since it's just a nazi mod.

Goodjob \:D//

Ty for the Mod Mark and Kirino No changes because it's nazi modding and it won't make that much of a difference.

Byakugan249 wrote:

yes i want to try out something new. if this works out, then i'll be using kiai bursts only when i map diffs.

Then... care to explain why you want to do this? There is a good reason why Kiai is suggested in the guidelines. It gives a nice effect while playing, and makes the menu look cool. Not to mention, in taiko, using only Kiai bursts can be alarming to the player and actually affects score (and in easier diffs you should also consider taiko since new taiko players will be playing easy as well). Now, if you have a good reason that you are doing this that makes this better than using the standard way, please explain. Otherwise, I highly suggest you change this for the reasons mentioned above.

hello~~ sorry big later

imo -> my opinion

[249's easy]

00:08:960 (x) - is timing 20% volume try use 40% volume because i can see other have 40% and is fit more IMO
00:22:719 (6,1) - are you sure the anti-jump is fine to easy diff ? because newbie can be confuse play this
00:38:935 (3,4) - Imo I test play this diff unstack can be little hard better if use stack better gameplay and the newbie can win SS for this easy if you do stack you need fix spacing at 00:40:409 (1) this just IMO because unstack can be little hard for Easy diff
01:18:738 (3,4,5) - need grid 1 dowm becanse the (3) will be nice blanket before (2) i mean this http://puu.sh/x9Pu like you did 01:16:773 (1,2) is not important fix but if you wanna nice blanket so fix or not, orz
01:27:584 (4) - the 3 point need grid 1 up i mean this http://puu.sh/x9Rw
01:52:645 (6) - grid 1 up to make symentric with 01:51:662 (4) because 01:51:171 (3,5) is symentric so is better use symentric IMO
02:17:215 (3) - you forget add clap hitsound
02:26:060 (1) - add clap ?
02:29:500 (1) - add clap the middle slider ?

stuff cool

[Miya's Normal]

00:12:645 (3) - I guess you forget add Finish only end slider
00:24:684 (1) - Grid 1 left to make symentric with 00:25:667 (2)
00:38:935 (6) - I guess you forget add Whistle only end slider

nothing much, stuff cool

[Hard]

00:02:817 (3) - add whistle because is fit more like you did at 00:00:851 (3) then i like but this just IMO
00:04:783 (2) - ^
00:07:240 (3) - ^
00:08:714 (3) - ^
00:10:679 (3) - ^
00:12:645 (2) - ^ only start slider
00:59:082 (1,2) - I can see my owm is incosientey spacing
01:17:264 (4,5) - Try better symentric pleasse
01:19:230 (1) - Remove new combo and at 01:19:475 (8) - put new combo and 01:20:704 (1) - remove new combo look nice and fit more lyrics imo http://puu.sh/xak1

stuff cool the gameplay look good for me

[DJPop's Insane]

nothing wrong, okay.face
[]
Sorry Big later anyway,
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
good luck and bye bye

Makar8000 wrote:

Byakugan249 wrote:

yes i want to try out something new. if this works out, then i'll be using kiai bursts only when i map diffs.

Then... care to explain why you want to do this? There is a good reason why Kiai is suggested in the guidelines. It gives a nice effect while playing, and makes the menu look cool. Not to mention, in taiko, using only Kiai bursts can be alarming to the player and actually affects score (and in easier diffs you should also consider taiko since new taiko players will be playing easy as well). Now, if you have a good reason that you are doing this that makes this better than using the standard way, please explain. Otherwise, I highly suggest you change this for the reasons mentioned above.

ok not only i want to try something new, but my worries are about the beginners' eyes. ik players that cant handle the kiai time because it might hurt their eyes, so i decided to make my diffs to kiai bursts so that it doesn't happen.

Byakugan249 wrote:

Makar8000 wrote:

Then... care to explain why you want to do this? There is a good reason why Kiai is suggested in the guidelines. It gives a nice effect while playing, and makes the menu look cool. Not to mention, in taiko, using only Kiai bursts can be alarming to the player and actually affects score (and in easier diffs you should also consider taiko since new taiko players will be playing easy as well). Now, if you have a good reason that you are doing this that makes this better than using the standard way, please explain. Otherwise, I highly suggest you change this for the reasons mentioned above.

ok not only i want to try something new, but my worries are about the beginners' eyes. ik players that cant handle the kiai time because it might hurt their eyes, so i decided to make my diffs to kiai bursts so that it doesn't happen.

If you are really concerned about the eyes of the player, then don't use Kiai at all. The Kiai bursts are the most annoying/brightest part of Kiai, and as I mentioned before, it confuses/alarms beginners when playing taiko.

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~ sorry big later

imo -> my opinion

[249's easy]

00:08:960 (x) - is timing 20% volume try use 40% volume because i can see other have 40% and is fit more IMO no i find 40% too loud for me.
00:22:719 (6,1) - are you sure the anti-jump is fine to easy diff ? because newbie can be confuse play this oh oops. tbh idk how that happened. fixed >.<
00:38:935 (3,4) - Imo I test play this diff unstack can be little hard better if use stack better gameplay and the newbie can win SS for this easy if you do stack you need fix spacing at 00:40:409 (1) this just IMO because unstack can be little hard for Easy diff no because when i map easies, i'd never stack notes at all.
01:18:738 (3,4,5) - need grid 1 dowm becanse the (3) will be nice blanket before (2) i mean this http://puu.sh/x9Pu like you did 01:16:773 (1,2) is not important fix but if you wanna nice blanket so fix or not, orz i don't see a difference so no.
01:27:584 (4) - the 3 point need grid 1 up i mean this http://puu.sh/x9Rw OMG you too D:. alright since so many people mentioned this, ill fix it.
01:52:645 (6) - grid 1 up to make symentric with 01:51:662 (4) because 01:51:171 (3,5) is symentric so is better use symentric IMO ^
02:17:215 (3) - you forget add clap hitsound actually no. this is intentional because it'll ruin the clap pattern i'm following atm.
02:26:060 (1) - add clap ? no because since there's no clap at 00:47:780, i'm not gonna add a clap here.
02:29:500 (1) - add clap the middle slider ? no i find that unfitting at this part.

stuff cool


that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
good luck and bye bye

ty for the mod

Makar8000 wrote:

If you are really concerned about the eyes of the player, then don't use Kiai at all. The Kiai bursts are the most annoying/brightest part of Kiai, and as I mentioned before, it confuses/alarms beginners when playing taiko.

by saying that you're ruining my style of mapping. what you're seeing right now is my new style of mapping. it wouldn't feel like a 249 diff with no kiai. that's why i said i wanted to try something new. i want to put something similar to a "bang" because after watching my previous ranked diffs, i'm starting to lose interest in the kiai time since you have to wait for it to be finished for a while, so i decided by doing a kiai burst, it makes it effective as it's like a loud "bang" similar to fireworks shooting from the ground or from a stand. i got this idea from my 1st ranked diff. i saw that it's really cool for me to see the kiai burst pop up instead of waiting for the kiai to be done for a long period of time, so i said to myself: why not do it on your other diffs. and that's how i made this diff a kiai burst.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

Time to snap out of my laziness!!!!

Baka General
Folder looks good

Baka 249's Easy
- Can't use kiai time just for the fountains like this :/ You can toggle it off then on when it fits, in this case at 02:10:827 but just for the fountains is a no no.
- Some sliders could be nicer for example: 00:03:063 (2) - Make it more curved by moving the middle slider point. Looks neater
00:14:856 (1) - Finish here
00:32:547 (1) - Finish on the start
00:38:935 (3,4) - This sudden change on having 1/1 and 1/2 note will through off the players. Just delete 3.
01:37:412 (3) - Instead of a finish on the reverse, try putting a clap


Baka Miya's Normal
00:59:451 (5) - Should really stay away from using a 1/4 slider like so, this is hard for the diff you are going at. Better if you just have a circle at 00:59:574 instead
01:15:176 (5) - Same as above
01:30:286 (5,6,7,8) - This whole part here doesn't play right. Have the placement like this:
01:38:763 (5) - Again same as before


Baka Hard
- Circle sizes are smaller than the insane which doesn't make sense......Make them bigger by 1 please
00:23:702 (3) - This ruins your pattern of having a slowed down slider at the end of a combo. Change to something else that isn't slowed down (it doesn't even fit well :/)
02:22:620 (1) - OMG please no slow down during kiai time D: Kiai time is during the most upbeat part and having a slow down throws people off and doesn't make sense...


Baka Pop's Insane
- Can't have slider and slider tick both silent, unrankable...

Everything else is fine

Weezy wrote:

Time to snap out of my laziness!!!!

Baka 249's Easy nahh "Bakagan" sounds a lot better
- Can't use kiai time just for the fountains like this :/ You can toggle it off then on when it fits, in this case at 02:10:827 but just for the fountains is a no no. ohh do doing something like this is unrankable? alright i'll get rid of that kiai burst.
- Some sliders could be nicer for example: 00:03:063 (2) - Make it more curved by moving the middle slider point. Looks neater no the majority of the sliders are intentional.
00:14:856 (1) - Finish here no this has been suggested before and since the clap is here, i find the finish unfitting with this part.
00:32:547 (1) - Finish on the start not suggested before but same reply as above.
00:38:935 (3,4) - This sudden change on having 1/1 and 1/2 note will through off the players. Just delete 3. pereira said something similar to this. alright i'll remove it.
01:37:412 (3) - Instead of a finish on the reverse, try putting a clap hmm i guess. the finish at the repeat arrow didn't go in sync with the music that good. a clap would work after all.

Everything else is fine

ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

Byakugan249 wrote:

Weezy wrote:

Time to snap out of my laziness!!!!

Baka 249's Easy nahh "Bakagan" sounds a lot better
- Can't use kiai time just for the fountains like this :/ You can toggle it off then on when it fits, in this case at 02:10:827 but just for the fountains is a no no. ohh do doing something like this is unrankable? alright i'll get rid of that kiai burst.

You can have full kiai time like in everyone else's diffs and you can add kiai burst at where you had the second burst, that works great if you want.

Pereira006 wrote:

[Miya's Normal]

00:12:645 (3) - I guess you forget add Finish only end slider there's already a finish there o.o
00:24:684 (1) - Grid 1 left to make symentric with 00:25:667 (2) ok
00:38:935 (6) - I guess you forget add Whistle only end slider

nothing much, stuff cool thanks :3

Weezy wrote:

Baka Miya's Normal What's this? D:
00:59:451 (5) - Should really stay away from using a 1/4 slider like so, this is hard for the diff you are going at. Better if you just have a circle at 00:59:574 instead nope, since the bpm is low, i think most player can handle that. If it just too plain this diff won't be interesting enough
01:15:176 (5) - Same as above
01:30:286 (5,6,7,8) - This whole part here doesn't play right. Have the placement like this:
01:38:763 (5) - Again same as before

orz, sorry, didn't use all of your suggestion ;_;

Thank you for the mod guys

@Kirino Kousaka : 2 Miya's Normal? How's that supposed to be? o.o

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

I come here from t/85346
now let see...

General

1. Look's like there's already a bit discussion about the kiai stuff above my post, so i'll just leave the final choice to the mapperhere, but still, i think it woould be alright if you put the 249's diff kiai on the same timing as the other's diff, since when it comes to play, i think it was not really a big deal for the player even the newbie, for the whole (i say this for the whole, since there always the people who have some trouble on looking the kiai too
   , but i'm sure they're not so compared with the normal people who can easily adapted with it.) lol i even not realized if there was a kiai time before until i'm started to make a map before, doesn't have any super significant difference, just more lightly, and spectacular xD

249's Easy

1. 00:01:097 (1,2) - instead of make the (2) position like that, i think it would be better if you make it symmetrical with (1), can be done by copy paste the (1) and then flip it horizontally :3, but if you do this, automatically you should fix the next slider after this two too.
2. 00:12:891 (3) - i think this kind of position are not really friendly with the player when playing it, If it was me, i think i'll just make that (3) on the lower side (under the 00:11:908 (2) - ) instead placing it on the right side of (2).
   It would be like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:753 (3,4,5) - make this a zigzag pattern instead of straight pattern? seems a bit monotonous here
4. 00:34:512 (2,3,1) - Same as above, i think the flow between that three notes/slider are not very friendly to play by the newbies, consider move the 00:35:987 (3,1) - into the right maybe? Something like this can works too:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:38:935 (3) - I think it's not really necessary to put this notes here, besides it will form a 1/8 beats on that part, it was also the only pattern on the whole pattern that using the 1/8 beats, so i think remove this notes will be ok.
   Also if you really wanna make it, i think it would be good if you starting to use that 1/8 beat pattern from 00:22:719 (6,1) - instead, since they're also have similar song line.
6. 00:52:694 (2) - this slider are a bit more curved when i'm see it, compared with 00:54:168 (3) - , I think this can be fixed by make the slider curve on (2) same with (3), and vice versa if you wanna d it reverse.
   Make it an anchor pattern would be good too, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:55:643 (4) - stack this with 00:52:203 (1) - , I the flow from 00:54:168 (3,4) - seems too sharp and really hard for the newbies to play imo
8. 00:55:643 (4) - as for this, i recommend to move position into the 00:55:643 (4) - position before i'm ask you to stack it with (1), and then rotate it a bit to right. Since it can fix the flow between 00:58:100 (2,3) - , it was also able to forming an arc pattern on 00:58:100 (2,3,1,2)
   
   SPOILER

   
   
9. 01:24:144 - put the notes here? I think it would be weird if you just make this part spaced out while after that part, you make quite long 1/4 beat pattern
10. 01:33:480 (3) - make this slider with the same curve as 01:31:515 (1) - , way more better and it can makes the pattern more consistant
11. 01:44:783 (2) - move this down a bit. i see the 01:43:308 (1) - repeat slider and 01:44:783 (2) - slider are too near from each other
12. 02:02:964 (1) - move this down, although the flow on 02:02:473 (6,1) - is nice, but it was bad on 02:02:964 (1,2) - .
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:04:439 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix this pentagon pattern, doesn't seems like pentagon at all (seems flatted)
14. 02:08:861 (2,3,4,5) - makes the zigzag pattern here?
15. 02:20:163 (2) - move this notes into upper part from 2 slider instead of downpart, x352 y60 is fine

Miya's Normal

1. wut... 1,6SV for normal? Although it was still doable and pretty easy for normal, but i think if you use the lesser DS for this diff it would be better (you're using even more big DS here, 1,2 D:). Consider to use DS 0,7-0,8 here.
   Actually i'more prefer SV 1,2-1,3 for this diff, although it will be looks more easy, but i think it would be looks like the real/actual normal diff when play.
2. the pattern looks fine though, just the spacing and the SV that i think need to reconsider/fix again :3

Hard

1. To be honest i saw that SV1,8 are not really match if you make some of the pattern on this diff with 0,5 SV multiplier for the slower effect. If it was me, i think i'll use SV1,6 and then set the slow SV multiplier into 0,75 instead (i saw that setting to be more natural on the slider speed change). Please reconsider this since it will make the diff improved too^^
   If you agree with me, then you need to fix the whole pattern and spacing later orz
2. Use CS4 here? way more better when play i guess
3. 00:00:360 (1,2,3) - fix this pattern ito more neat i think? I can't see the reason why you make the triangle on this 00:00:360 (1,2,3) - with lesser triangle looks than 00:02:326 (1,2,3) -
4. 00:00:851 (3,4,3,4) - why the spacing between this 2 pattern are different? o.o, 00:02:817 (3,4) - is more spacing while the previous one are less spacing
5. 00:23:702 (3) - i think it would be better if you just copy paste this 00:21:736 (7) - and then ctrl+h-ctrl+j that slider,the flow are way better that way if you make theslider direction into up rather than down
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:39:181 (4,1) - a bit more spaced thatn the previous notes?
7. 00:45:077 (2) - move this up a bit, better flow.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:12:350 (5) - rotate this a bit right, i saw that the pattern position 01:11:613 (3,4,5) - are well not consistand, maybe because it looks like a symmetrical position but not really symmetrical.
   Move the 01:12:104 (4) - notes a bit left are works too i guess

DJPop's Insane

1. Is it just me or i feel that the custom hitclap sound here are really weird here? It's still pretty match with the song beats though, just, i'm expecting to hear a snare drum voice rather than muted-like voice (i don't know what kind of voice type here xD) for the hitclap here :3
2. can't really say much about the pattern, everything looks in order when i'm try it and doesn't have somewhat weird stuff (except that custom hitclap)
3. Also, when i try it, i saw that you make some pattern in this dif without any note while i think it was supposed to be a note there since the vocal it's still goes/the bgm doesn't have any slowdown/pause feel like:
   00:18:296 -
   00:19:033 -
   00:22:227 -
   00:23:210 -
   00:26:160 -
   I think for the rest, you're already know it by yourself, just take this into consideration :3.
   since this diff are insane, i think you don't need to hold back to make the diff seems easier because you're not adding the notes that i mention above.

I think that's all.
From my viewpoint, i saw that many part on this mapset are still able to be improved, take this into some consideration from me to make this mapset better(also for the next work of yours)^^
Good luck~

Umm, I don't think that will be problem. This song has low bpm, and looking to hard map that has long stream and many 1/2, so this will be a good option to keep the map balance. Well, thank you for modding Envi

Moe Sekai >///<

[249's Easy]

1. 01:03:996 (1) - This New Combo is useless imo.
2. 02:17:215 (3) - Did you missed the Clap?

Not really much things to say hahahahaha.

Can't find anything else in other difficulty this mapset is too fine for be modded, DON'T NEED ANY CHANGE SEKAI SENSEI RANK IT NAO >///< ( inb4unoob unomod ulazy ufckingbastard :'( )

Hi~

General

1. Kiai must be the same in each diff, check it

249's Easy00:44:340 (1,1,1) - add finishes there01:08:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - move them like this:
01:36:920 (2) - stack it with (4)01:40:360 (2,3,4) - i suggest you remove it and add a slider, it will be better for the rythm01:47:240 (1) - 6-7 grids right02:16:232 (2,3,4,5) - try this:
02:22:620 (1,1,1) - finishesMiya's Normal

1. AR=4
2. I think there's too big spacing, 1,0 will be better but no one cares

Hard

1. 00:07:485 (4) - drown out the sound in the end of the slider
2. 00:23:702 (3) - this slider not in it's place, add there some sliders with 1.0 speed
3. 00:25:667 - there must be that slider D:
4. 00:50:483 (6) - nc
5. 01:06:699 (2,4) - they're overlapped, move (4) in another place
6. 01:15:299 (2) - stack with 01:14:316 (6) -
7. 01:31:269 (2) - clap there
8. 02:02:964 (3) - well, to be honest default soft-finish here will be better
9. 02:10:827 - ^

DJPop's Insane

1. 00:36:232 (6) - whistle?
2. 00:39:918 (5) - ^
3. 01:49:205 (1) - finish there seems odd

Good luck

thanks all for modding my map >A</

fixed some stuff :3

Envi wrote:

I come here from t/85346
now let see...

249's Easy

1. 00:01:097 (1,2) - instead of make the (2) position like that, i think it would be better if you make it symmetrical with (1), can be done by copy paste the (1) and then flip it horizontally :3, but if you do this, automatically you should fix the next slider after this two too. no. i want this to be a straight path. if it's near the middle of the song, the i'd make this symmetrical. but since this is the introduction, i'm gonna keep it.
2. 00:12:891 (3) - i think this kind of position are not really friendly with the player when playing it, If it was me, i think i'll just make that (3) on the lower side (under the 00:11:908 (2) - ) instead placing it on the right side of (2).
   It would be like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   then the flow would look weird if i put (3) below (2).
3. 00:20:753 (3,4,5) - make this a zigzag pattern instead of straight pattern? seems a bit monotonous here no because the straight pattern represents the introduction.
4. 00:34:512 (2,3,1) - Same as above, i think the flow between that three notes/slider are not very friendly to play by the newbies, consider move the 00:35:987 (3,1) - into the right maybe? Something like this can works too:
   
   SPOILER

   
   no but i did something else similar to what you said.
5. 00:38:935 (3) - I think it's not really necessary to put this notes here, besides it will form a 1/8 beats on that part, it was also the only pattern on the whole pattern that using the 1/8 beats, so i think remove this notes will be ok.
   Also if you really wanna make it, i think it would be good if you starting to use that 1/8 beat pattern from 00:22:719 (6,1) - instead, since they're also have similar song line. i thought i fixed this i swear. fixed again >.<
6. 00:52:694 (2) - this slider are a bit more curved when i'm see it, compared with 00:54:168 (3) - , I think this can be fixed by make the slider curve on (2) same with (3), and vice versa if you wanna d it reverse.
   Make it an anchor pattern would be good too, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   no then that'd ruin the blanket for (4). i don't want these 2 sliders to be the same.
7. 00:55:643 (4) - stack this with 00:52:203 (1) - , I the flow from 00:54:168 (3,4) - seems too sharp and really hard for the newbies to play imo ^
8. 00:55:643 (4) - as for this, i recommend to move position into the 00:55:643 (4) - position before i'm ask you to stack it with (1), and then rotate it a bit to right. Since it can fix the flow between 00:58:100 (2,3) - , it was also able to forming an arc pattern on 00:58:100 (2,3,1,2)
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   hmm i guess this will work. after all (2) is stacked on (4).
9. 01:24:144 - put the notes here? I think it would be weird if you just make this part spaced out while after that part, you make quite long 1/4 beat pattern no i need to give some time for beginners to get ready after the spinner.
10. 01:33:480 (3) - make this slider with the same curve as 01:31:515 (1) - , way more better and it can makes the pattern more consistant i thought i did this. fixed.
11. 01:44:783 (2) - move this down a bit. i see the 01:43:308 (1) - repeat slider and 01:44:783 (2) - slider are too near from each other no but i moved it between the slider to make a blanket.
12. 02:02:964 (1) - move this down, although the flow on 02:02:473 (6,1) - is nice, but it was bad on 02:02:964 (1,2) - .
    
    SPOILER

    
    sorry no i don't want to ruin my flower pattern.
13. 02:04:439 (2,3,4,5,6) - fix this pentagon pattern, doesn't seems like pentagon at all (seems flatted) tbh idk how to fix it.
14. 02:08:861 (2,3,4,5) - makes the zigzag pattern here? no the flow would look weird if i do this. i want this to be a smooth path to the next combo.
15. 02:20:163 (2) - move this notes into upper part from 2 slider instead of downpart, x352 y60 is fine hmm alright i guess this'll work.

I think that's all.
From my viewpoint, i saw that many part on this mapset are still able to be improved, take this into some consideration from me to make this mapset better(also for the next work of yours)^^
Good luck~

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~
General

1. Kiai must be the same in each diff, check it
   nope look at this and this. if you notice the GDs, 1 has the kiai burst while the other has no kiai at all.

249's Easy00:44:340 (1,1,1) - add finishes there i added the finishes on the spinner but not on the circle. i find it unfitting to the song.01:08:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - move them like this:

SPOILER

the only difference i see is the slider. fixed.01:36:920 (2) - stack it with (4) oh wow it does. fixed.01:40:360 (2,3,4) - i suggest you remove it and add a slider, it will be better for the rythm no i don't want to ruin the shape i'm forming.01:47:240 (1) - 6-7 grids right fixed this on the other mod.02:16:232 (2,3,4,5) - try this:

SPOILER

hmm alright. it makes a nice border for (1).02:22:620 (1,1,1) - finishes same as 00:44:340.

ty for the mods everyone

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

Makar8000 wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]

1. 00:12:399 (4,1) - The flow isnt very good here... I would suggest horizontally flipping the sliders and everything after it but that'd be kinda complicated to fix..
   - Fixed

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
[*]00:31:564 (2) - Ctrl+R?
- Fixed[/list]

Weezy wrote:

Baka Pop's Insane
Can't have slider and slider tick both silent, unrankable...
- It's not, as long as not all ticks are silent

Envi wrote:

DJPop's Insane

1. Is it just me or i feel that the custom hitclap sound here are really weird here? It's still pretty match with the song beats though, just, i'm expecting to hear a snare drum voice rather than muted-like voice (i don't know what kind of voice type here xD) for the hitclap here :3
   - Added new clap file :3
2. Also, when i try it, i saw that you make some pattern in this dif without any note while i think it was supposed to be a note there since the vocal it's still goes/the bgm doesn't have any slowdown/pause feel like:
   00:18:296 -
   00:19:033 -
   00:22:227 -
   00:23:210 -
   00:26:160 -
   I think for the rest, you're already know it by yourself, just take this into consideration :3.
   since this diff are insane, i think you don't need to hold back to make the diff seems easier because you're not adding the notes that i mention above.
   - No changes here because I like what they are. If you listen to the song carefully, you'll know why I made rhythm like that :3

Vass_Bass wrote:

DJPop's Insane

1. 00:36:232 (6) - whistle?
   - Added
2. 00:39:918 (5) - ^
   - Added
3. 01:49:205 (1) - finish there seems odd
   - Obvious cymbal through my left ear

Download: 50294 Lia - Tori no Uta.zip

Musty wrote:

Moe Sekai >///<

[249's Easy]

1. 01:03:996 (1) - This New Combo is useless imo. no it's not useless. the lyrics change from here so that's why i made this note a NC.
2. 02:17:215 (3) - Did you missed the Clap? nope this is intentional.my clap rhythm changes because since the kiai is coming up, i want the claps to be slow at 1st, and then when the kiai reaches, it'll go back to its original clap pattern.

Not really much things to say hahahahaha.

Can't find anything else in other difficulty this mapset is too fine for be modded, DON'T NEED ANY CHANGE SEKAI SENSEI RANK IT NAO >///< ( inb4unoob unomod ulazy ufckingbastard :'( )

sorry musty i overlooked yours >.<. no changes made but ty for the mod.

HiHi~

[249's Easy]

00:06:994 (4) - Maybe you should make this curved? Just to be consistent on slider shapes in that combo.
00:40:409 (1) - Maybe its just me. But I think this would look nicer if you curved it more.
00:56:134 (1) - Shorten this slider a bit so it ends back one white tick.
00:58:100 (2) - If you fixed the above you should move this back 1 tick and make the slider longer. Just saying because this follows the rhythm better.
01:15:790 (5) - Remove this note?
01:50:188 (2) - ^
01:47:240 (1) - If you do the above you can make this slider longer.
02:08:861 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/xvQc

[Miya's Normal]

00:02:080 (1) - You should straighten this out.
01:46:503 - Consider adding a note here.

Nice >.<

[Hard]

00:07:485 (4) - Make an overlap like this. http://puu.sh/xvXg
00:26:650 (9) - http://puu.sh/xvYk Slider fits better.
02:25:815 (2) - New combo

[DJPop's Insane]

01:08:910 (3,4,5) - Maybe replace with this slider note? 01:07:928 (1) -
02:06:404 (3) - Shouldn't this slider be facing the other direction? o-o

Nice~

Umm, sorry Starry, about that slider, i prefer to make it arc. And about a note, i don't think it's neccesary because it will ruin my rythim consistencies.
But, thank you for the mod :3

Starry wrote:

HiHi~

[249's Easy]

00:06:994 (4) - Maybe you should make this curved? Just to be consistent on slider shapes in that combo. i made this a straight slider mainly because of the tone of the piano. if it was a 2/1 slider i would make this a curved slider but since it's a 1/1, i think it'd be better if it was a straight slider.
00:40:409 (1) - Maybe its just me. But I think this would look nicer if you curved it more. no it looks nice enough. there are people that are telling me that my curved sliders should be nicer, i always say no to them because i'm not focusing on how nice the curved slider looks but on how smooth it flows to the next note.
00:56:134 (1) - Shorten this slider a bit so it ends back one white tick. then that would ruin the flow in vocals. i don't want to overuse the 1/1 lines just for that.
00:58:100 (2) - If you fixed the above you should move this back 1 tick and make the slider longer. Just saying because this follows the rhythm better.
01:15:790 (5) - Remove this note? no because if you remove it, you'll clearly hear the sound of the cymbals.
01:50:188 (2) - ^ no i wanna continue the rhythm. if i remove it it'd be a boring wait for players.
01:47:240 (1) - If you do the above you can make this slider longer.
02:08:861 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/xvQc no i want this to be a smooth flow to the slider. this one however is that you have to move down from (4,5) and then across to (1) and that doesn't flow that smooth to my expectations.

Nice~

no changes made but ty for the mod.

Starry wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
01:08:910 (3,4,5) - Maybe replace with this slider note? 01:07:928 (1) -
- X
02:06:404 (3) - Shouldn't this slider be facing the other direction? o-o
- Fixed

@Sekai : use Full Submit

Download: 50294 Lia - Tori no Uta.zip

ok updated and full submited :3 ~

I have extra star to spare :3
I want to see this map ranked, very lovely song <3

Hi ~ -Sekai- ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions






That's all ~ Nice song ~

Good luck with rank ~

Fix the source in my diff please, Sekai >.<

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]

1. 00:09:697 - Add whistle.
   - Doesn't consistent with previous part
2. 00:20:753 - Add whistle and Remove 00:21:245.
   - Removed all whistles
3. 00:24:684 (1) - Same as above.
   - Doesn't sound right for me
   
   Fixed some whistles and volume in other parts too

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ -Sekai- ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

[249's Easy]

1. Change same kiai time? no i wanna try something different instead.
2. AR+1 much better play. i disagree. since this is a slow song, AR3 would look too fast for beginners to keep up.

That's all ~ Nice song ~

Good luck with rank ~

no changes made but ty for the mod.

thanks Rika-chan >w< and updated ~

Really like the skin.

[249]
Make Kiai Time like it is on other diffs.
01:13:824 (2,3,4,5) - 12 pixels to the right, 2 down.
02:16:232 (2) - Last anchor point: 3 pixels up.

Nice <3

Hi~
Sorry for the delay D:!

249's Easy:
00:08:960 (1) - Out of Grid.

Miya's Normal:
01:29:795 (4) - I feel this hitsound not come there

Hard:
Nothing~

DJPop's Insane:
I love this diff ♥

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song/map, good luck~

no changes for me. it won't make a difference if i put this note on the grid.

thanks for modding guys :3

and carrot and mok for the stars >A</

No change, i feel that finish is great at that point. >.<
Thank you for the mod~

orz this really need an MAT :<

yay, Rika. xD
go for ranking Sekai

owo, I love this song so much, and it have a great mapset to go along, It'd be a shame not to rank it now. Good job !

O.O
So suddenly..
Congratz Sekai <3
Thank you too Kurai <3