Katty Pie wrote:

Insane
00:22:964 - put this note on white tick
- X
00:29:598 - add note
- X
00:58:837 - ^
- X
01:37:903(2,3) - correct spacing
- X

Nymph wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
02:26:552 (1) - I thought the finish is better than silence spinner end =3=..
- Added

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

Hi -Sekai-
Nazy mod...here we go \:D/

just suggestion :3

• General
  ● Add the same tags on all diff's
  DJPop Miya Byakugan249 opening

===========================

• 249's Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:22:719 (6) - next distance 0.76 just move it on x:240 y:58
  ● 00:40:409 (1) - next distance 1.24 just a little change slider form, like this for example http://puu.sh/uFDE
  ● 02:29:009 (1,2) - maybe change this patter like this http://puu.sh/uFC2
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 01:04:733 (1) - whistle on repeat?
  ___________________
  Nice diff

===========================

• Miya's Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Looks good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Very good

===========================

• Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● AR +1?
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 01:37:903 (5) - not symmetric slider http://puu.sh/uFMG --> http://puu.sh/uFNQ
  ● 02:05:913 (1) - maybe grid snap off and move to x:276 y:166
  ● 02:11:073 (5) - ^ x:333 y:272
  ● 02:22:620 (3) - ^ x:248 y:114
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 02:30:483 (1) - hm...maybe finish?
  ___________________
  Good job

===========================

• DJPop's Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:21:490 (2) - maybe 1 grid up? xD
  ● 00:28:616 (1) - slider is too long, make it a little short...end on red tick
  ● 00:29:598 (2) - add note
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 00:28:616 (1) - End slider - remove whistle
  ___________________
  DJPop style :3 awesome

Good luck and Star

thanks for modding my map and for your star :3

IchiGUN wrote:

• DJPop's Insane
  ● 00:21:490 (2) - maybe 1 grid up? xD
  - Fixed
  ● 00:28:616 (1) - slider is too long, make it a little short...end on red tick
  - Fixed
  ● 00:29:598 (2) - add note
  - X
  ● 00:28:616 (1) - End slider - remove whistle
  - Fixed
  
  Good nazi XD

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

My diff's still unchanged D:
Also Hard doesn't have BG.

yes, BG in hard suddenly dissapear. Where it's went Sekai? ._.

i changed the BG on my hard D:
so re-dl ;_;

IchiGUN wrote:

Hi -Sekai-
Nazy mod...here we go \:D/

just suggestion :3

===========================

• 249's Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:22:719 (6) - next distance 0.76 just move it on x:240 y:58 fixed it my own way.
  ● 00:40:409 (1) - next distance 1.24 just a little change slider form, like this for example http://puu.sh/uFDE ^
  ● 02:29:009 (1,2) - maybe change this patter like this http://puu.sh/uFC2 no i find that kind of hard for beginners. mine is straightforward and the path is easy to get to for beginners.
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 01:04:733 (1) - whistle on repeat? no i find that unfitting to the song.
  ___________________
  Nice diff

Good luck and Star

ty for the mod

EDIT: but not for me. When DJPop and Miya said that the BG isnt there for hard, it shows for me (this is before you full submitted the map)

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

awshi someone's finally remapping this.

Here is my full mod post ><

Easy
01:27:584 (5) - 2nd sliderpoint little down
01:50:679 (3) - add note

Normal
00:47:780 (1) - add sliider here end at 50:237
01:09:156 (2) - note here
01:11:122 (5) - ^
01:13:087 (2) - ^
01:17:018 (2) - ^
01:58:296 (4) - ^
02:17:215 (3,4,5) - like that http://puu.sh/uStb

Hard
01:16:527 (6) - NC
01:16:773 (1) - renc
01:18:738 (1) - ^
01:19:230 (7) - NC

Insane
00:31:564 (2) - maybe reverse selection?
00:01:097 (1) - remove NC
00:02:326 (6) - NC
00:03:063 (1) - reNC
00:04:291 (4) - NC
00:05:028 (1) - reNC
00:06:994 (1) - reNC
00:10:434 (6) - NC
00:10:925 (1) - renc
00:12:276 (5) - add note
00:12:399 (6) - NC
00:12:891 (1) - reNC
00:18:173 (5,6,7) - add notes
00:26:036 (5,6,7) - add notes
01:01:908 (3) - add note
01:10:999 (5) - add note
01:28:198 (2,4) - add notes
01:35:077 (3) - add note
01:38:272 (3) - add repeate?
02:02:104 (3) - add note

Hi~><//

All of them just a suggestion


nice map and nice song!!

Thanks Hinacle >w< added them all~

Sorry, no change in my diff. But thank you for the mod

Havent found any other specific problems so thats it~
Good luck ~

3er123 wrote:

- Sorry, no changes

Hinacle wrote:

＜DJPop's Insane＞
00:47:534 (5) - remove finish. don't match the sounds to me
- Cymbal there, but removed anyway

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

That's all, I hope to help.

Good sugestion Katsuri <3
Added everything at the first part. But i decide the hitsound by myself :3

Thank you very much~

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

thanks for modding Katsuri and everyone else updated now :3

3er123 wrote:

Here is my full mod post ><

Easy
01:27:584 (5) - 2nd sliderpoint little down nope it won't make that much of a difference
01:50:679 (3) - add note nope it'd be too hard for beginners if i do this.

Hinacle wrote:

Hi~><//

All of them just a suggestion


＜249's Easy＞

1. 01:24:144 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy difficulty. alright i removed the circle.
2. 01:51:662 (4,6) - add clap (5) Remove clap. I think this sound much better. i disagree. if i do this, then it'll ruin my pattern. every clap at every 3rd downbeat.
3. 01:53:136 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy difficulty. same as 01:24:144.
4. 02:09:353 (3,5) - Remove finish and add clap. I think add clap sound much better. i disagree. the claps wouldn't fit with this part because "itsumademo" has the same pitch in the vocals so adding finishes at every note fits to me.

nice map and nice song!!

Katsuri wrote:

• 
  Mapping

1. 00:08:960 (1,2) - These two notes may are overlapping too much, and it is sort of ugly. Please consider reducing this overlap, or making something like this, it would look a lot better an the spacing will be consistent. no but i did something else.
2. 00:12:891 (3) - This slider looks like it was placed in anywhere of the map, what about making it symmetric like this? Considering it's the end of a phrase it would look&play better than the way you left it. if i move it there, then it'll ruin the DS. if i followed your last suggestion, i'd do that, but since i ignored it, it'll look bad during gameplay.

Ty for the mods and to Loli: that slider i made is intentional so i'm not gonna change it, and Sekai did you change the kiai time? because when i re-update it, it shows the kiai time. i want my diff to be a kiai burst only.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

Getting work done.

[Easy]
Second byak easy I'm checking in a row huehuehue
00:12:891 (3) - This slider altogether feels random in placement. If you're ok with that overlap with (1) and (2) why not just have a nice slider striking down the middle like http://puu.sh/uYmv
01:52:154 (5) - Even though you had the claps on the 3s before, this clap just hurts (can't put it in better words). I'd personally suggest you remove it and do claps on 2,4 instead. 01:50:188 (2) to whistle instead since there isn't a real clap in the music.
02:29:009 (1) - Might as well add claps to the beginning and end of this slider.

[Normal]
00:39:672 (7) - Whistle to the end of this? Since you had a whistle to the end of 00:38:935 (6).
00:44:832 (1,2,3) - From what I know newer players would appreciate a tiny bit less stacks. Try turning some of these 3 stack patterns into a 1/2 slider + 1 note pattern.

Otherwise, nice.

[Hard]
ohaithar IC u liek small circles
01:25:618 (3) - This wrap could definately be better. Right now it points off into the distance with no real fit to its previous slider.
02:14:758 (4) - Ctrl-J? Then move it to be like http://puu.sh/uYto .

[Insane]
00:09:942 (3) - I believe you're missing a whistle on the beginning here (3rd beat whistles is what I'm guessing you're going for).
00:20:753 (1) - The start of whistles at the end of this slider is a bit sudden. I'd suggest you add whistles to the beginning of the slider and 00:19:770 (3) . I realize you may be trying to put whistles on the synth there, but because the synth slowly fades in its not as abrupt. With your whistles, they're always the same volume so its a tad bit surprising.
00:27:632 (3) - ^
02:05:913 (2) - Some interesting flow change if you ctrl-r this and move (1) and (3) closer to make it play well.

ohey +8 already lol.

hi~

[Insane]
00:42:866 (1) - nazi : x,y=336,275?
00:43:849 (5) - nazi : x,y=336,108?
01:41:834 (2) - x,y=256,42?

[Hard]

[Normal]
00:10:679 (2,3) - 1grid right, 1grid down?
01:25:127 (3,4,5) - make Equilateral triangle?

[Easy]
good


sorry for my nazi mod
nice map

Katsuri wrote:

Insane
01:57:559 (1,2,3) - What if you make it jumps like that? It would flow amazing a look wonderful at the same time!
- Fixed

Nyquill wrote:

[Insane]
00:09:942 (3) - I believe you're missing a whistle on the beginning here (3rd beat whistles is what I'm guessing you're going for).
- That was intended because there's no piano's emphasis like 00:11:908
00:20:753 (1) - The start of whistles at the end of this slider is a bit sudden. I'd suggest you add whistles to the beginning of the slider and 00:19:770 (3) . I realize you may be trying to put whistles on the synth there, but because the synth slowly fades in its not as abrupt. With your whistles, they're always the same volume so its a tad bit surprising.
- Changed volume and added whistle at (3)
00:27:632 (3) - ^
^
02:05:913 (2) - Some interesting flow change if you ctrl-r this and move (1) and (3) closer to make it play well.
- Fixed

maaagic wrote:

[Insane]
00:42:866 (1) - nazi : x,y=336,275?
- Fixed
00:43:849 (5) - nazi : x,y=336,108?
- Fixed
01:41:834 (2) - x,y=256,42?
- Spacings are already consistent

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

fixed something, thank you for the mod :3

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

Thanks for modding my map and updated :3

Nyquill wrote:

Getting work done.

[Easy]
Second byak easy I'm checking in a row huehuehue
00:12:891 (3) - This slider altogether feels random in placement. If you're ok with that overlap with (1) and (2) why not just have a nice slider striking down the middle like http://puu.sh/uYmv i swear i did something else during katsuri's mod. i ignored this but i did something else.
01:52:154 (5) - Even though you had the claps on the 3s before, this clap just hurts (can't put it in better words). I'd personally suggest you remove it and do claps on 2,4 instead. 01:50:188 (2) to whistle instead since there isn't a real clap in the music. when i updated this part, this one is supposed to be the custom clap, anyways no because since a finish is at 01:47:240, i want to change up my clap pattern. it doesn't fit with my mapping style if i do this. also i'd find it boring if i add claps at every 2nd and 4th downbeat.
02:29:009 (1) - Might as well add claps to the beginning and end of this slider. no because i find that unfitting. i tried adding claps there, but it doesn't fit in my POV.

ohey +8 already lol.

no changes made but ty for the mod. i just made a few self changes.

EDIT: haha not yet

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

H \:D/


[General]
you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
this is unrankable. you must remove eigher.

[249's Easy]
00:00:114 - unused green line
00:01:097 ~ 00:43:358 - it would be better to put whistle 1st white tick(downbeat) than 3rd one
because it follows nothing in almost case(for example:00:05:028 (3) - )
00:14:856 (1) - finish is too much, clap is better here
01:35:446 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:37:412 (3) - ^
01:39:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - only circles orz kinda boring so try to put some slider instead
01:43:308 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:46:011 (3,4) - too confusing imo. in easeist diff, there should not be any complex pattern like this
so you should keep 1/1 rhythm here like you did at previous part
01:47:240 (1,3) - kinda empty imo. not only 3rd white tick, you should add clap at 1st tick as well
02:26:552 (1) - extend this to 02:30:483 -

[Miya's Normal]
00:23:210 (4,5) - spacing
02:02:964 (7,1) - switch newcombos please

[Hard]
00:05:028 (3) - end this at 00:05:765 - to follow the piano better
00:08:960 (4) - ^
00:10:925 (4) - ^
01:52:891 (3) - add finish at the end
01:53:382 (4) - ^
02:22:620 (3) - add newcombo for slow-down slider? it's a bit confusing since it looks same as 02:21:638 (1) -

[DJPop's Insane]
00:52:694 - add a note
01:05:962 (4,5,6,7) - how about increasing the volume step by step?
01:21:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same
01:29:549 (1) - finish doesnt fit well imo

good luck!

Fixed everything Melo <3
Thank you for the mod~

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

Melophobia wrote:

H \:D/
H !? lol

[DJPop's Insane]
00:52:694 - add a note
- No, that part mainly followed vocal
01:05:962 (4,5,6,7) - how about increasing the volume step by step?
- Fixed
01:21:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same
- Fixed
01:29:549 (1) - finish doesnt fit well imo
- I heard a cymbal in the song, left side

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

Revenge of DJPop? xD

Melophobia wrote:

H \:D/

[249's Easy]
00:00:114 - unused green line nope this has a use. it's to reduce the volume of the whistles.
00:01:097 ~ 00:43:358 - it would be better to put whistle 1st white tick(downbeat) than 3rd one no it wouldn't fit with my mapping style.
because it follows nothing in almost case(for example:00:05:028 (3) - )
00:14:856 (1) - finish is too much, clap is better here hmm alright. i thought about this and since the clap matches the drums, i might as well.
01:35:446 (1) - add finish at the beginning alright. it matches the cymbals so yea it fits.
01:37:412 (3) - ^ same as 00:14:856.
01:39:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - only circles orz kinda boring so try to put some slider instead no that wouldn't fit with my mapping style in easy diffs. whenever i add only circles in a combo, then i'm making a specific shape out of it.
01:43:308 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:46:011 (3,4) - too confusing imo. in easeist diff, there should not be any complex pattern like this
so you should keep 1/1 rhythm here like you did at previous part alright fixed. i had a feeling this was hard.
01:47:240 (1,3) - kinda empty imo. not only 3rd white tick, you should add clap at 1st tick as well nope i want claps at every 3rd beat because of the slider finish at 01:47:240. the clap is supposed to be at the slider tick, and without it, it'd sound bad in my eyes and i'd feel uncomfortable if i do this.
02:26:552 (1) - extend this to 02:30:483 - there's no way i'm going to delete the slider and circle. i want it to end to where the vocals change.

good luck!

ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

updated :3

Hi hi~ I mod this map because I am late QAQ~
　
　
[ General]
　

1. Add "bossandy" to tags xDD

　
[ 249's Easy]
　

1. 00:08:960 (1) - Remove finish start? There is nothing change in music , Hmm.... If you don't want to change , Maybe you can make the green Timing Section to 20% , sounds good for me
2. 00:26:650 (3) - Add whistle end? sounds great for me
3. 01:21:687 (1,1) - These object is too close!!!! Beginners can't read these !!! , If you want to solve this issue , I suggetion you delete 01:24:144 (1) -
4. 01:37:412 (3) - Add a finish on the arrow , The music become high gradually , and this slider's start and end have a finish , If you don't add finish on arrow , it sounds not good
5. 01:49:697 Suggetion add a circle here to have a good flow xD
6. 01:53:136 (1,1) - Too close , Please delete 01:55:593 (1) - and add a circle 01:56:085
7. 02:17:215 (2) - You forget a clap here
8. 02:26:552 (1,1) - Too close , If you can , I hope you delete last two objects and add a spinner
   
   SPOILER

   

　
[ Miya's Normal]
　

1. AR-1? The AR looks a little high now >_<
2. 00:27:387 (4) - Add a circle here? May follow the vocal more
3. 00:50:729 (3,5) - Add clap sounds great?
4. 00:52:940 (2) - I suggetion delete this note , Add a note here isn't very good for me
5. 01:21:687 (4,5,6,7) - Remove all clap and add finish on this circles please , I think they will follow the music more , oh! And you can add a NC on circle 4 , because music become high
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:29:795 (4) - It sounds a little loud , make the volume lower?
7. 01:33:972 (3,4) - haha , just nazi , make it symmetrical?
8. 01:37:903 (3,4) - Remove clap and add finish

　
[ Hard]
　

1. 00:12:154 (1,2) - Remove all whistle and add a whitle on slider 2 of start , May follow the piano more xD
2. 00:50:729 (8) - Add clap ?
3. 01:19:230 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+R? If you do this , you need to add hutsounds again
4. 01:39:377 (3) - This isn't follow the song , I suggetion delete this slider and add two circles 01:39:377 and 01:39:623
5. 02:28:763 (1) - Start 02:28:640 to follow the song more

　
[ Insane]
　

1. 00:18:542 (5) - Remove whistle end please , this sounds strange for me >_<
2. 00:22:719 (2) - ^
3. 00:24:194 (5) - Add whistle
4. 00:26:404 (5) - Remove whistle end
5. 00:28:616 (1) - About this... 6/1 sounds not correct.... but 4/1 isn't correct too... so my suggetion is ..... Wow! it's too hard to say , so code here~
   

   256,192,28616,5,0
   308,84,29025,2,0,B|256:60|204:84,1,107.999996781349

6. 00:34:267 (5) - Remove whistle end
7. 00:38:444 (2) - ^
8. 00:42:129 (5) - ^
9. 01:36:674 (4,5) - Overlap here isn't a good idea for me
10. 01:46:503 (4) - Delete this note sounds more good

　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
Okay!~ Complate! Sorry for late , here is my diff and BG~
Sorry for my very poorrrrrrr mod ~~! >_<
Good Luck :3

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Boss Sweet Taiko].osu

Sorry bossandy, nothing fixed >.<
But thank you for the mod.

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ I mod this map because I am late QAQ~
　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Blue : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.

　

　
249's Easy
　
[*]00:08:960 (1) - Remove finish start? There is nothing change in music , Hmm.... If you don't want to change , Maybe you can make the green Timing Section to 20% , sounds good for me i reduced it to 20%. there's no way i'm gonna remove that finish
[*]00:26:650 (3) - Add whistle end? sounds great for me i disagree. if i do that, then it'll ruin the consistency in whistles. i mainly focus on consistency rather then how nice it sounds.
[*]01:21:687 (1,1) - These object is too close!!!! Beginners can't read these !!! , If you want to solve this issue , I suggetion you delete 01:24:144 (1) - alright. i guess i'll give beginners some time to adjust.
[*]01:37:412 (3) - Add a finish on the arrow , The music become high gradually , and this slider's start and end have a finish , If you don't add finish on arrow , it sounds not good hmm alright. i added timing points to increase the volume of the finish.
[*]01:49:697 Suggetion add a circle here to have a good flow xD no i wanna change up my pattern here. since it's near the kiai, i want this part to be easy, and then when the kiai comes up, then it'll so back to its original pattern.
[*]01:53:136 (1,1) - Too close , Please delete 01:55:593 (1) - and add a circle 01:56:085 hmm alright.
[*]02:17:215 (2) - You forget a clap here nope this is intentional. i want every clap to be at every 4th downbeat.
[*]02:26:552 (1,1) - Too close , If you can , I hope you delete last two objects and add a spinner no i'm not gonna do that. i don't to give beginners an easy pass that quick. since it's near the end, it wouldn't to put a bit of a challenge for beginners.

　


Sorry for my very poorrrrrrr mod ~~! >_<
Good Luck :3

Ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

ykcarrot wrote:

Revenge of DJPop? xD

This one's easier

bossandy wrote:

Insane

1. 00:18:542 (5) - Remove whistle end please , this sounds strange for me >_<
   - Fixed
2. 00:22:719 (2) - ^
   - Fixed
3. 00:24:194 (5) - Add whistle
   - Fixed
4. 00:26:404 (5) - Remove whistle end
   - Fixed
5. 00:28:616 (1) - About this... 6/1 sounds not correct.... but 4/1 isn't correct too... so my suggetion is ..... Wow! it's too hard to say , so code here~
   - Fixed
6. 00:34:267 (5) - Remove whistle end
   - Fixed
7. 00:38:444 (2) - ^
   - Fixed
8. 00:42:129 (5) - ^
   - Fixed
9. 01:36:674 (4,5) - Overlap here isn't a good idea for me
   - Fixed
10. 01:46:503 (4) - Delete this note sounds more good
    - X

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

updated :3

yo~

please don't eat me if mod is wrong ;_;

[General]
i'm not sure about kiai times in easy but it's good now

[Miya's Normal]
~_~ it's awesome


[DJPop's Tsubasa]
00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped
00:08:960 (1) - try a bit softer shape? (code) / same for 00:07:731 (2)

00:18:296 - circle here? and 00:19:033 (and to avoid ruining symmetrical pattern this) i know if you will accept this it will ruin symmetrical ;_;
00:23:456 (4) - and 00:23:456 (4) - ^
00:39:181 (4) - maybe a bit softer shape? nazi-code below
00:39:181 (4) - i want circle here
00:50:483 (3,4,6,7) - if yo curve these sliders this will looks better
01:03:996 (1) - move NC to (4) for better looking ;_;
02:03:947 (5,7) - just curve them a bit more

[Boss' Sweet Taiko]
it's awesome

[Hard]
00:17:068 (2) - a bit more moe shape
00:19:033 (5) - x316 y216 (don't forget to move (1)
00:33:530 (5) - new combo for slowdown
00:55:888 (3,4,5) - this?
01:07:682 (4,5,6) - this?

[249's Easy]
clear

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

gl~

you have amazing guest diffs frome awesome mappers. just get it ranked as fast as you can :3

Star!

-Bakari- wrote:

[DJPop's Tsubasa]
00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped
- Intended, sync on vocal
00:08:960 (1) - try a bit softer shape? (code) / same for 00:07:731 (2)
- Fixed
00:18:296 - circle here? and 00:19:033 (and to avoid ruining symmetrical pattern this) i know if you will accept this it will ruin symmetrical ;_;
- Don't want to add anyway
00:23:456 (4) - and 00:23:456 (4) - ^
- Fixed
00:39:181 (4) - maybe a bit softer shape? nazi-code below
- Fixed
00:39:181 (4) - i want circle here
- It's the same place as ↑ :<
00:50:483 (3,4,6,7) - if yo curve these sliders this will looks better
- Fixed
01:03:996 (1) - move NC to (4) for better looking ;_;
- Fixed
02:03:947 (5,7) - just curve them a bit more
- Fixed

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

Okay, here's my mod.
NO KUDOSU

[DJPop's]

1. 00:04:046 (2) - remove whistle? it wasn't there on 00:02:080 (2)
2. 00:11:908 (3) - remove it also here?
3. 00:14:856 (1) - add one repeat? to be honest, i'd like to add notes right till the slider start, but using a slider with repeats for this purpose is weird. I suggest you to delete this slider and add a little stream, like that: http://puu.sh/vpnB; this could be best.
4. 00:45:815 (2) - add one repeat? (due to vocals)
5. 00:46:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i highly suggest you to remake this part with 0.5x spacing for streams (like you did after that) to keep consistency. it looks rather better, while unreasonable spacing change in streams looks weird
6. 01:29:549 (1) - sudden use of finishes stunned me. it sounds very bad here.. consider changing them to claps or just removing
7. 01:30:778 (3) - yes, i mean these finishes
8. 01:31:515 (1) - this finish sounds good, no need to remove it. so, just remove (change to claps) it on 01:30:778 and 01:29:795, okay? highly suggest.
9. 01:33:480 (1) - remove finish please
10. 02:11:810 (4,5) - that's just my taste, but i think these sliders are too curvy. consider making them smoother?
11. 02:15:987 (5,1) - the same
12. 02:26:183 (8) - i suggest you to add one repeat here, add finish on the end point of this slider, move spinner's start 1/4 later, move green point 1/4 later too. i just want to accent vocal on 02:26:552
13. 02:26:674 (1) - what about dividing this spinner into two another spinners? just like that: http://puu.sh/vpw1 (first spinner: 02:26:674 ~ 02:28:272, second spinner: 02:28:517 ~ 02:30:483). this will also accent vocal on 02:28:272

[Taiko]

• 
  I never played or modded taiko, but you will probably accept some of these suggestions:

1. 00:48:272 (2) - blue note (whistle)?
2. 00:56:625 (1) - move it 1/4 earlier, to 00:56:503?
3. 01:12:350 (1) - the same, 1/4 earlier
4. 01:23:898 - add note?
5. 01:39:377 (1) - finish here?
6. 01:43:308 (2) - blue note (whistle)?
7. 01:44:291 (3) - blue note (whistle)?
8. 02:10:827 (1) - finish?
9. 02:30:483 (1) - finish? here i'm not sure

[Hard]

1. 00:00:851 (3) - whistle?
2. 00:01:834 - i can hear piano note here, probably shorten the slider to this point?
3. 00:03:063 (4) - same
4. 00:04:291 (1) - try to use 0.5x SV on this slider too
5. 00:13:628 - i hear a note here. start the slider in this point? (adding a note 00:13:382 here, of course)
6. 00:28:616 (5,6,7,8) - to follow vocals more, better use a slider staring here, ending here: 00:28:984, with one repeat (so it will finally end on 00:29:353)
7. Eh, that claps sound so noisy >< I don't like them, they totally don't fit the song. 01:08:050 - delete this green line to remove that annoying claps if you agree. Custom claps sound much better.
8. 01:06:085 - must be a note here
9. 01:07:805 - here too, but can be ignored
10. 01:15:790 (5) - add a finish on slider start?
11. 01:38:886 (2) - you'd better delete (3) and extend this slider to it's position
12. 02:10:090 (2) - have to be deleted
13. 02:22:620 (1) - this was too sudden and confusing.. but i dont know what you can do.. maybe change 02:21:638 (1)'s shape so they wil not look similar
14. 02:26:552 (1,1) - better do like I suggested in DJPop's diff: first spinner: 02:26:552 ~ 02:28:272, second spinner: 02:28:517 ~ 02:30:483

[Normal]

1. 00:01:834 - add a note
2. 00:03:800 - here too
3. 00:09:697 - and here
4. 00:11:662 - it was expectable. here too
5. 00:38:689 (5) - move it a bit to the right?
6. 00:42:620 - add a note somehow?
7. 00:48:763 (1,2) - i guess that you tried to make them symetrical, but don't know how. http://puu.sh/vpEw - try this! ctrl+j them and move (1) to x:160 y:352, (2) - mirrored to this. (if you agree, you will need to adjust (3) position)
8. 00:52:203 - as i told in Hard, change this to S:C1, please. these soft-claps totally don't fit the music.
9. 00:59:451 (5,6) - may be too confusing. try this: http://puu.sh/vox1
10. 01:03:259 (4) - move it to 01:03:259
11. 01:03:996 (6) - try to add 3/4 long slider with one repeat here please (and delete 01:04:488 (1))
12. 01:15:176 (5,6) - the same?
13. 01:23:652 (1) - change it to 1/2 long slider with repeat? http://puu.sh/voyK
14. 01:30:901 (7,8) - same?
15. 01:38:763 (5,6) - same?
16. 01:46:011 - add a note?
17. 01:46:503 - add a note?

[Easy]

1. 01:31:515 (1) - almost touches (4), better make a triangle: http://puu.sh/vpIc (adjust 01:32:989 (2) position if agree)
2. 02:29:009 (1) - it may be far-fetched, but it's the last combo in the map, after plenty of spinners... and you place the afterspinner note right after spinner, in kinda far distance of it... it may be hard for newbies, especially after the whole song.

Ah, that's all. Thank you for reading this!
Good luck with your map.
NO KUDOSU

grumd wrote:

Okay, here's my mod.
NO KUDOSU

[Easy]

1. 01:31:515 (1) - almost touches (4), better make a triangle: http://puu.sh/vpIc (adjust 01:32:989 (2) position if agree) yes it's almost touching (4) but if it's touching 4, then i'll fix it, for now i'll keep it.
2. 02:29:009 (1) - it may be far-fetched, but it's the last combo in the map, after plenty of spinners... and you place the afterspinner note right after spinner, in kinda far distance of it... it may be hard for newbies, especially after the whole song. alright i removed the circle and moved the slider up.

Ah, that's all. Thank you for reading this!
Good luck with your map.
NO KUDOSU

ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

thanks grumd and bakari for checking my map :3

and updated~

A little recheck from AIBat:
NO KUDOSU

1. Easy must have "bossandy" in tags.
2. Kiai in Easy is inconsistent compared to other diffs
3. DJPop's diff: 00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped slider

That's all.

ok added bossandy in tag in easy diff~ :3

Sorry, i don't get your point mentioning those things above. Besides i don't want to break my rythim consistencies. So, if you suggest to add a note overthere and there, please give it a good reason why you mention that. But, thank you for the mod~

Sekai, nothing changed >.<

wow after seeing the other peoples' BGs, i feel like i want to change mine to fit the scenery. if you don't mind can you change it to this BG?

@Miya: I just hear piano notes in the music there. But my mod wasn't only "add note" mod, what about other suggestions?
Ah, and thanks for constructive criticism. I'll try to add more explanations in future (I'm not a modder though).

I didn't use your other suggestion too. About clap, i don't agree with you. About 00:48:763 (1,2)- It breaks, my spacing. And about other nazi, i didn't see your point making nazi for it. And i denied all of your rythmical change, because i didn't see your reason why you said that.

@ Byaku changed your BG :3

grumd wrote:

[DJPop's]

1. 00:04:046 (2) - remove whistle? it wasn't there on 00:02:080 (2)
   - Whistle on piano chord
2. 00:11:908 (3) - remove it also here?
   - ^
3. 00:14:856 (1) - add one repeat? to be honest, i'd like to add notes right till the slider start, but using a slider with repeats for this purpose is weird. I suggest you to delete this slider and add a little stream, like that: http://puu.sh/vpnB; this could be best.
   - Already synced with obvious sounds
4. 00:45:815 (2) - add one repeat? (due to vocals)
   - Fixed
5. 00:46:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i highly suggest you to remake this part with 0.5x spacing for streams (like you did after that) to keep consistency. it looks rather better, while unreasonable spacing change in streams looks weird
   - Fixed
6. 01:29:549 (1) - sudden use of finishes stunned me. it sounds very bad here.. consider changing them to claps or just removing
   - Removed
7. 01:30:778 (3) - yes, i mean these finishes
   - Removed
8. 01:31:515 (1) - this finish sounds good, no need to remove it. so, just remove (change to claps) it on 01:30:778 and 01:29:795, okay? highly suggest.
   - Okay
9. 01:33:480 (1) - remove finish please
   - Removed
10. 02:11:810 (4,5) - that's just my taste, but i think these sliders are too curvy. consider making them smoother?
    - Sure
11. 02:15:987 (5,1) - the same
    - Fixed
12. 02:26:183 (8) - i suggest you to add one repeat here, add finish on the end point of this slider, move spinner's start 1/4 later, move green point 1/4 later too. i just want to accent vocal on 02:26:552
    - No changes
13. 02:26:674 (1) - what about dividing this spinner into two another spinners? just like that: http://puu.sh/vpw1 (first spinner: 02:26:674 ~ 02:28:272, second spinner: 02:28:517 ~ 02:30:483). this will also accent vocal on 02:28:272
    - Tried that, but not good

grumd wrote:

A little recheck from AIBat:

1. DJPop's diff: 00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped slider
   - Intended, sync on vocal

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

updated :3

dafuq is this? Uploaded 10 days ago and so many mods already?

Anyway,

General
Volume is too high for many sections. The whistles give me a headache.
Add those hitsounds - Please, please please do: http://puu.sh/vCxl and http://puu.sh/vCxK. A clap with lotsa echo and a simple bass. Perfect for this song.
Tell all mappers who took part in this map to re-work their hitsounds D:

Insane
00:14:856 (1) - remove whistles completely or lower the volume for them, they sound terrible this way.

Besides that nothing to say. Please use the hitsounds provided above to IMPROVE your HITSOUNDS for this. You are DJPop. You can do this.

Hard
Hitsounds are WAAAY too loud. Lower volume in ALL sections by at least 20%.

Map itself is fine, but please use my custom hitsounds.

Normal
00:42:866 (4) - what is the bulk in the middle supposed to be? looks stupid.

Besides that, use my custom hitsounds from above.

Easy
Hitsounds are too loud.
Rework the hitsounds with my hitsounds from above.


Pleae excuse my arrogant behaviour in this post.

thanks Tenshi-nyan for checking the map :3

So, you gonna add those hitsounds or not? Just want to make sure.

thanks but no thanks. i feel that the current hitsounds are fine. i tried using your hitsounds but i got lost right away. in other words it'd be hard for me if i used your hitsounds as i'm not used to them in a calm song like this. it just doesn't fit my style at all.

Agree with 249 here. It's hard for me to use your hitsound in this calm song. Maybe it doesn't fit my style
About that slider, i just want variation, nothing wrong. And i don't think it's ugly.

From my queue

[249]

1. from a IceBeam's : separate all combos that are longer then 5 please,it's required for the easiest difficulty. ex)NC here 02:00:999 (3) -
2. 00:08:960 (1) - 1grid left 4th tick to be symmetry with head
3. 00:18:788 (2) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 00:17:805 (1) - ?
4. 00:24:684 (2) - start combo from here, melody changed
5. 01:24:635 (1) - you should NC after spinner
6. 01:31:023 (5) - 1grid left to be centered, put your timing bar here 01:29:795 - and you can take x:320
7. 01:33:480 (3) - looks hard, you'd better copy/paste from 01:31:515 (1) -. will be more soft imo
8. 01:52:645 (6) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 01:51:662 (4) - , because 01:52:154 (5) - is symmetry with 01:51:171 (3) - now

[Miya]

1. 00:02:080 (1) - because you started on melody first, i'd recommend start it on melody too, so you can delete it and add a circle on this slider's end
2. 00:04:046 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:942 (1) - ^but arrow
4. 00:11:908 (1) - ^ to delete?
5. 00:24:193 (6) - feels empty, whistle here will kepp your whistle sounds
6. 00:32:055 (4) - ^
7. 00:39:918 - ^
8. 00:44:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - to split this long combo, i'd NC at 00:46:797 (5) -
9. 00:50:729 (3,4,5) - if i were you, i whould put 00:51:220 (4) - on (292,48) to be symmetry with 00:48:763 (1,2) - , not center
10. 01:22:670 (6) - 1 grid up to be symmetry with 01:21:687 (4) -
11. 01:28:566 (2) - 1 grid down ^
12. 01:30:286 (5,6) - 2 grid left ^
13. 01:34:463 (4) - 1 grid left ^
14. 02:26:552 (1) - because it's just a normal diff, i recommend split it or make like easy diff

[Hard]

1. Insane diff has 4CS, i highly recommend to use 4CS too
2. 00:06:748 (4) - because you put NC on 00:02:326 (1,1) - , NC here as well
3. 00:23:456 (2) - whistle and remove whistle from 00:23:702 -
4. 00:29:353 (7) - ^
5. 00:43:603 (3) - 1 grid left,down to make more blank from 00:43:358 (2) -
6. 01:00:065 - finish
7. 01:31:515 (3) - ^
8. 02:11:318 (6) - copy/paste from 02:10:581 (4) - and ctrl+r,h?

[DJPop]

1. 01:38:272 (3) - a bit confusing, use more big dinstance or NC plz
2. 02:08:124 (9) - NC?

Good luck with ranking~

Fixed all nazi mod and the last spinner. :3

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

thanks Star Stream for your mod \o and updated ~

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Insane
00:14:856 (1) - remove whistles completely or lower the volume for them, they sound terrible this way.
- Reduced whistles to 1 and faded out volume, also applied your custom hitsounds

Star Stream wrote:

[DJPop]

1. 01:38:272 (3) - a bit confusing, use more big dinstance or NC plz
   - Fixed
2. 02:08:124 (9) - NC?
   - Fixed

Download: 50294 Lia - Tori no Uta.part1.rar
Download: 50294 Lia - Tori no Uta.part2.rar

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[249]

1. from a IceBeam's : separate all combos that are longer then 5 please,it's required for the easiest difficulty. ex)NC here 02:00:999 (3) -
2. 00:08:960 (1) - 1grid left 4th tick to be symmetry with head nope i don't think it'd make that much of a difference.
3. 00:18:788 (2) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 00:17:805 (1) - ? nope this is intentional.
4. 00:24:684 (2) - start combo from here, melody changed nope (1) is where the vocals start. im not following the melody at all, just the vocals and when it changes.
5. 01:24:635 (1) - you should NC after spinner ahh i see it. Fixed.
6. 01:31:023 (5) - 1grid left to be centered, put your timing bar here 01:29:795 - and you can take x:320 same as 00:08:960.
7. 01:33:480 (3) - looks hard, you'd better copy/paste from 01:31:515 (1) -. will be more soft imo alright just for flow.
8. 01:52:645 (6) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 01:51:662 (4) - , because 01:52:154 (5) - is symmetry with 01:51:171 (3) - now oh uhh this is a mistake. i moved (5) down. i want this to be a slight diagonal zig-zag pattern.

Good luck with ranking~

ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

From my modding queue! :3

[Byakugan]
00:08:960 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321393
00:14:856 (1) - finish
00:48:272 (1) - ^
01:27:584 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321432
02:06:896 (1) - whistle at reverse arrow

[Miya] well, almost nothing to mod :3 but 1 suggestion
01:56:576 (2) - whistle at reverse arrow

[Hard]
00:24:930 (4) - NC
00:33:530 (1) - clap
01:03:014 (1) - whistle

[Boss Andy]
sry.. i can't mod taiko

[DJ Pop]
well, nothing to mod here :3
but starting part of song is quiet and low speed
I think Normal sound is absurd...

Go rank ㅇㅅㅇ!

Sorry, i don't want any whistle in kiai part >.<
Thank you for the mod~

bbj0920 wrote:

From my modding queue! :3

[Byakugan]
00:08:960 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321393 it won't make that much of a difference so no.
00:14:856 (1) - finish no i find it unfitting with this part.
00:48:272 (1) - ^ too loud sorry.
01:27:584 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321432 *points at 00:08:960*
02:06:896 (1) - whistle at reverse arrow *points at 00:14:856*

Go rank ㅇㅅㅇ!

No changes made but ty for the mod.

nothing to changed but thanks for modding ~ :3

[Easy]

01:37:412 -(3) x:404 y:140

01:51:171 -(3) new combo

[Normal]

nice

[Hard]

00:28:616 -(5) ds need fix

[DJpop's Insane]

01:19:475 -(6) ds need fix

01:44:046 -(2) ^


thats I can find <3 really nice map and nice song, I love AIR

good luck w/~

Twice wrote:

[Easy]

01:37:412 -(3) x:404 y:140 it won't make that much of a difference during gameplay so no.

01:51:171 -(3) new combo i'd like to hear more people's opinions about this. if there's enough, i'll make this a NC


thats I can find <3 really nice map and nice song, I love AIR

good luck w/~

No changes made but ty for the mod.

[DJPop]
I'm pretty sure silenced ticks are unrankable (some exceptions)
00:29:025 (2) - feels better if it starts 00:28:984 and ends 00:29:475 (I'm pretty sure it's not 1/3)
00:45:815 (2) - NC to make it easier to read
00:52:694 - why not add a note here?

[Boss]
Force taiko skin?

[Hard]
Why so small hitcircle? D:
Tickrate +1? Easier to notice when there's a slow-down or not
00:04:291 (1) - remove the whistle-slide
00:56:871 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
01:35:446 (3) - finish at the beginning
02:02:964 (3) - finish

[Miya]
00:48:763 (1,2) - make them symmetrical to each-other, like this Yeah, you can rotate 00:47:780 (8) by 10º or something
00:14:856 (1,1) - unsure about this, but it might work

[249]
Don't like Kiai?
00:06:994 (4,5,6,1) - move them 1 grid left
00:08:960 (1) - rotate this slider by -2º (Selection Centre)
02:29:500 (1) - perhaps a 2/1 slider instead? something like this

Saten-san wrote:

[249]
Don't like Kiai? i'm trying out a new mapping style. i just want kiai bursts not kiai times.
00:06:994 (4,5,6,1) - move them 1 grid left oh my i think a few people mentioned this. alright just to fix the DS.
00:08:960 (1) - rotate this slider by -2º (Selection Centre) alright to make a perfect blanket.
02:29:500 (1) - perhaps a 2/1 slider instead? something like this no then it'll be too easy for beginners to clear. i added a 1/1 repeat slider as a challenge for beginnes

omg i can't believe i did this >.< ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

thanks Saten and Twice for your mods :3

Because much people request pattern change. Then i have revise the pattern on that one.
Thank you for modding Saten-san

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

Twice wrote:

[DJpop's Insane]
01:19:475 -(6) ds need fix
- Nothing's wrong
01:44:046 -(2) ^
- Fixed

Saten-san wrote:

[DJPop]
I'm pretty sure silenced ticks are unrankable (some exceptions)
- Fine if not all ticks are silent
00:29:025 (2) - feels better if it starts 00:28:984 and ends 00:29:475 (I'm pretty sure it's not 1/3)
- 1/4 is wrong, 1/3 is almost
00:45:815 (2) - NC to make it easier to read
- Added
00:52:694 - why not add a note here?
- Only vocal synced for this part

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

omg

\:D/

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. s49's BG? lolwhat.
2. spinner-background is too bright, IMO. Maybe you should decrease the brightness a little.
3. Uh... negative offset?

>249's Easy

1. 00:38:935 (3,4) - Are you sure about this? I mean, suddenly going 1/2 beat here?
2. 00:44:340 (1) - Lengthen by two white ticks?
3. 00:48:272 (1) - ^ (Three white ticks, instead.)
4. 02:22:620 (1) - ^ (Two.)

>Miya's Normal

1. 00:42:866 (4) - I... don't see anything you can tell me to justify about what happened in the middle of the slider. I mean, the music and vocal didn't have anything 'special' for this slider to be okay. Just make it... straight?

>Hard

1. CS5 is too small, IMO. CS4?
2. The SV changes before the first bookmark... It just doesn't flow well, IMO.

>DJPop's Insane

1. I'm sure enough I've seen the BG somewhere...
2. 00:44:832 (1,2) - It's HARD to read these, predict when (1) will end, when (2) will begin, and then comes the transition from 1/4 to 1/2... Well, it just doesn't work pretty good for me.
3. 01:53:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh... sure about these sliders?

'Kay, that's it. Good job you guys have done here.

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.


>249's Easy

1. 00:38:935 (3,4) - Are you sure about this? I mean, suddenly going 1/2 beat here? yes i'm 100% sure on this. i don't want to overuse the 1/1 lines and that'll lead to a boring easy diff.
2. 00:44:340 (1) - Lengthen by two white ticks? no i need to give time for beginners to get ready for the next note.
3. 00:48:272 (1) - ^ (Three white ticks, instead.) ^
4. 02:22:620 (1) - ^ (Two.) ^

'Kay, that's it. Good job you guys have done here.

Good luck on the way

no changes made but ty for the mod.

Read the reply for Tenshi-nyan please. I don't want to change that slider. Nothing wrong with the flow and i want some variation.

This request was taken from wmf's queue

[Boss Sweet Taiko]

1. SV back to 1.4 or 1.5 please.I can't see any reason that it needs 1.6.
2. 00:04:783 (1) - I think don is much better.
3. 00:39:426 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - I highly recommend removing these two notes here.It doesn't fit the music and it triplet sounds too rude here.
4. 00:59:451 (1,2,1,2) - dkkd for this 4-plets?
5. 02:08:861 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1) - Due to the change of blue-red notes pattern.This pattern is more difficult than overall.Please simply the pattern or remove the stream.
6. 02:16:724 (1) - Don please.Kat sounds weird.

That's it.GL

ok updated ~ o.o

from Spinboxer's mod queue (Taiko slot)

red is unrankable issue. bule is recommended to fix. Black is just suggestion.

good luck~

omg i thought i fixed that >.< ty for the mod bakaboxer

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

updated :3

12 days and 7 pages, ok.

Btw, take a star Moe Sekai.

lol thanks Bruno xD

Philippines wrote:

• 
  [list:c7707]Easy

1. Inconsistent Kiai Times. Please remove the 2nd kiai on this diff. Also, your first kiai should end on 02:30:483. i'm not gonna change it. i told you on my other post, the kiai time can be inconsistent if there's a guest diff. look at gowww's diff here. it doesn't have a kiai time and it's ranked.
2. 02:04:439 (2,3,4,5,6) - Idk if you're trying to make a star pattern, if so, i recommend you fix it. i think it looks fine so i'm not gonna fix it. i don't see that's there to fix.

no changes made but ty for the mod.

Philippines wrote:

• Insane

1. Unsnapped Slider Ends: http://puu.sh/w5Eg.
   00:29:025 (2) - Intended, vocal snapped
   01:37:657 (1,2,1) - SV was wrong, fixed
2. Why does this have larger circles than Hard?
   - I usually map with this size

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

Taiko mod as requested.

[Taiko]
- remove sliderborder colour

00:13:136 - spinner嫌吵 直接放空也ok
00:49:500 - 節奏對應不了00:49:991 - 這個vocal, 可試用d k ddd kddk
01:04:979 - 第4個音明顯高音而不是低音 考慮到後面你用了kdddkddd 這用dddkd吧
01:07:805 - 音調向下降 d會自然一點
01:20:704 - 統一點 要不這2個也放大圓(K K) 要不前面也不要大圓
01:26:724 - 音調向上 可以試一下dk d k

整體不錯 只是你本身太鬼畜了嗯

I think it's time for MAT check Sekai
Focus on searching MAT now >.<

waiting for bossandy's fixes. =~=//

Almost fixed! thanks for mod!

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Boss Sweet Taiko].osu

ok updated :3

hello -Sekai-!

General

1. first of all,are you sure of source? should it be capitalzed? though I didn't find a certain answer in the web - all ranked maps have Air as source. I think it'd be consistent at least.
2. please make tags similar. even though you don't seem to miss anything - the order is messed up,so better to make them consistent in all difficulties.
3. why 249's Easy has 2 fountains instead of whole kiai section as in all other diffs? D: looks a little weird,I'd fix that.

249's Easy
hitsounds from the start and up to 00:52:203 are way too loud D: especially soft-whistles sound out of place,so I'd suggest to reduce volume to 50% or less.

and there's no break..I wish there was,at least in the easiest difficulty.
the only spot I could suggest is 00:44:340 - 00:52:203

1. 00:26:650 (3) - I'd end this slider at 00:27:633,otherwise your rhythm breaks..and btw it'd follow the lyrics.
2. 00:38:444 (2,3,4) - it follows the main rhythm,but looks doubtful comparing to the rest of the map.maybe try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:47:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I see logics in this hitsound pattern,but it could sound better imo >_<
   personally,I'd add claps to 01:51:662 (4 & 6),but adding claps to all these notes - 01:50:188 (2,3,4,5,6) - sounds good too,as it's the growing rhythm part between the chorus.
4. 02:17:215 (2) - here too,I'd add a clap if you're following upbeats.
5. 02:29:500 (1) - do you really need this object? why not to extend the previous spinner up to the 02:30:483?

Miya's Normal

1. 00:37:952 (4,5,6,7) - I don't think such sudden 1/2 fits well.maybe make like this at least?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:59:082 (4,5,6) - catchy rhythm,but I'm surprised to see it in the Normal diff D: as you use mostly use 1/1 rhytm,blue ticks look a little out of place. if you're willing to make it easier,but to keep this rhythm - the only thing I could suggest is:
   
   SPOILER

   
   if you change it in this way - dont' forget to fix such moments through the map!
   
   
3. 01:54:119 (1) - this spinner is a little short,maybe start it from 01:53:259?

Hard

1. 00:12:154 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is different from others,and it doesn't sound that good T_T adding another note to 00:13:382 and starting that slider from 00:13:628 could solve this problem.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:23:702 (3) - simple 1/2 rhytm sounds much better here >:O the only note that you could delete is 00:23:702. if you wanted to make another slider - start it from 00:25:667 then.
3. 00:52:694 (1) - was this nc intentional? just to point out the finish at 00:52:203 (1)? anyway,I'd remove nc from here.
4. 00:56:871 (1,2) - and this one for sure,please,it looks sooo awkward :C
5. 01:05:471 (8,1,2,3,4) - something wrong with this! as you didn't start repeating sliders from 01:05:962,obviously they wouldn't be consistent. anyway,I see a different way how to map this stream and it'd fit Hard difficulty in a better way imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:37:903 (5) - I'd make a 1/4 reverse-slider here instead,so it could sound better with 01:38:886 (2).
7. 01:54:119 (1,2,3) - the funny thing that you mapped such parts with streams,but this one and the next in chorus are much more easier xD
8. 02:17:706 (1) - clap here and at 02:17:952 would make it much better.

Boss Sweet Taiko
sadly I can't mod taiko,but it looks nice >:O
the only thing - if Boss is compared to your nickname - you could add an apostrophe - Boss' Sweet Taiko.

DJPop's Insane

1. 00:29:025 (2) - I don't really get this D: slider end is unsnapped anyway,but you shouldn't have snapped it at 1/6 in the first place. I'd rather tried to follow the rhythm instead - the lyrics aren't snapped correctly on common 1/4 beats.
2. 00:52:694 - add a note here please - I almost missclicked it. there's an obvious clap - even if you follow the lyrics - don't forget about rhythm,and it'd make it more readable!
3. 01:03:259 (4,5,6) - you should fix spacing here,because it looks totally equal.so try to clear out this blue tick with the spacing.

that's it!
lovely mapset,good job >w<
and I love this song so much,good luck with ranking it!

Reiji-RJ wrote:

hello -Sekai-!

General
[*]why 249's Easy has 2 fountains instead of whole kiai section as in all other diffs? D: looks a little weird,I'd fix that. nahh i'd like to keep it as it is. if i remove them, it'd feel weird for me.

249's Easy
hitsounds from the start and up to 00:52:203 are way too loud D: especially soft-whistles sound out of place,so I'd suggest to reduce volume to 50% or less. sure. i had a feeling someone would say this.

and there's no break..I wish there was,at least in the easiest difficulty.
the only spot I could suggest is 00:44:340 - 00:52:203 if i do that, then i'd feel uncomfortable if i add breaks here.

1. 00:26:650 (3) - I'd end this slider at 00:27:633,otherwise your rhythm breaks..and btw it'd follow the lyrics. i had a feeling this would turn out bad. fixed.
2. 00:38:444 (2,3,4) - it follows the main rhythm,but looks doubtful comparing to the rest of the map.maybe try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   no i don't want to overuse the 1/1 lines. it doesn't fit with my mapping style at all.
3. 01:47:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I see logics in this hitsound pattern,but it could sound better imo >_<
   personally,I'd add claps to 01:51:662 (4 & 6),but adding claps to all these notes - 01:50:188 (2,3,4,5,6) - sounds good too,as it's the growing rhythm part between the chorus. i disagree. i focus on consistency more than the map itself.
4. 02:17:215 (2) - here too,I'd add a clap if you're following upbeats. nope it doesnt fit with my mapping style at all, and if i do this, i'd feel uncomfortable and i'd find it unfitting.
5. 02:29:500 (1) - do you really need this object? why not to extend the previous spinner up to the 02:30:483? yes i do because i don't want to give beginners an easy pass. i want to challenge beginners if they can hit this slider.

that's it!
lovely mapset,good job >w<
and I love this song so much,good luck with ranking it!

Ty for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Miya's Normal

1. 00:37:952 (4,5,6,7) - I don't think such sudden 1/2 fits well.maybe make like this at least? Nope, i think my rythim fit well and doesn't surprising because i already have put 1/2 rythim on previour rythim before this one.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:59:082 (4,5,6) - catchy rhythm,but I'm surprised to see it in the Normal diff D: as you use mostly use 1/1 rhytm,blue ticks look a little out of place. if you're willing to make it easier,but to keep this rhythm - the only thing I could suggest is: Nope, this can be boring. I want a little challange for this diff. And i think player can manage that due to the low bpm.
   
   SPOILER

   
   if you change it in this way - dont' forget to fix such moments through the map!
   
   
3. 01:54:119 (1) - this spinner is a little short,maybe start it from 01:53:259? Hmm, increased in other way, i don't want to delete that finish

Thank you for the mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
The color is flashing, especially with video or DJPop's BG. I think you would like to use darker color in combo or slider border because of the skin.

Fine with E & N.

[Hard]
00:14:611 - add a note here? there is piano here, also if no note here, the next stream seems a little sudden
00:39:426 (1) - the other sliders which has similar length are all 0.5x, so i recommend to change to a short slider and a circle like this: http://puu.sh/wrxC
01:19:353 (2) - delete this note. it makes a slip of downbeat
02:00:630 (3) - ^

[DJPop's Insane]
00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped end

That's all I can find. GL~

thanks everyone for modding, and changed the source from AIR to Air as all Ranked maps have it~ :3

Reiji-RJ wrote:

DJPop's Insane

1. 00:29:025 (2) - I don't really get this D: slider end is unsnapped anyway,but you shouldn't have snapped it at 1/6 in the first place. I'd rather tried to follow the rhythm instead - the lyrics aren't snapped correctly on common 1/4 beats.
   - Fixed anyway
2. 00:52:694 - add a note here please - I almost missclicked it. there's an obvious clap - even if you follow the lyrics - don't forget about rhythm,and it'd make it more readable!
   - Added
3. 01:03:259 (4,5,6) - you should fix spacing here,because it looks totally equal.so try to clear out this blue tick with the spacing.
   - Fixed by adding NC

popner wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped end
- Was intended for vocal snapped, but fixed anyway

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu

ok updated :3

Random mod cuz I felt like it and I like the song, I hope it's useful.

249's Easy:

Miya's Normal:

Hard:

DJPop's Insane:

sorry nothing to fix~ =3=

nothing fixed. ._.
who cares about the end point not in the middel as long as the shape is good. =3=