1. Easy (2.99 stars, 115 notes)
2. Hard (4.89 stars, 221 notes)
3. Hibari's Taiko Tatsujin (4.83 stars, 728 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 316 notes)
5. n y a -'s Taiko Oni (4.78 stars, 549 notes)
6. Normal (4.04 stars, 155 notes)

kajiyatta wrote:

of course OK
and removed "fripSide" tag. this is "nao"'s song I see.

1. Open each diff with notepad and set audio lead-in 1000, it's 1004 atm

1. 00:32:927 (1) - This slider doens't fit the sound. Reduce it to the previous red tick and add a repeat
2. 00:34:894 (1) - Move to 00:34:730 and extend this until 00:35:222
3. 01:37:845 (3) - Remove clap and add finish at the end of it
4. 01:44:074 (1) - Move it to x464 y192?

1. 00:29:484 Add a circle here?
2. 00:49:648 (3) - It touches HP bar, move it x256 y112?
3. 01:10:304 (2) - This doens't fit the song. Make long slider in this way instead:
   
4. 01:18:501 (2) - Add a repeat? This "hole" sound is bad D:
5. 01:21:288 Add a circle?
6. 01:21:615 (4) - Extend this until the next red tick (01:21:943)
7. 01:23:747 (2) - 1 grid right to improve the blanket with the next and previous sliders
8. 01:24:730 (1) - Finish at the end

1. 01:15:386 (2) - This finish sounds bad, remove it?
2. 01:37:845 (1) - Spacing please, this is an hard not an insane. Spacing like this in 1/4 are really hard for.. an hard.

1. 00:39:156 (4) - Instead to use this slider, you should to fix in this way, it's much better:
   

Philippines wrote:

• General

1. I think your Kiai should end on 01:27:845. fixed
   
   
2. 01:48:992 til the end - Remove this part in your mp3 to save memory. ok I'll re-prepare music and video.

• Easy

1. Seems fine.thx

• Normal

1. 01:18:501 (2) - Extending this by one reverse would be better. no
   
2. 01:22:763 (1,3) - Try to make these sliders a blanket for circle (2).fixed
   
   
3. Approach Rate +1.fixed

• Hard

1. Seems fine.thx

• Insane

1. 00:04:566 (2,2) - Ctrl + R them individually. This is to maintain the spacing like the previous notes. fixed
   
   
2. 00:08:665 (1,2) - I think this spacing is just too much. Try reducing them a bit. ^
   
   
3. 00:11:861 (2) - I don't think this note is necessary. Please delete it. Also, remove new combo on the note before this. ^
   
   
4. 00:15:058 (2) - Fix this spacing. ^
   
   
5. 00:22:271 (1) - Remove new combo.^
   
   
6. 00:53:255 (1) - Try to avoid this slider from overlapping the next note.^
   
   
7. 01:40:960 (1) - I don't think there's a need for a new combo on this one, remove it.^
   
   
8. HP Drain -1.fixed

Chewin wrote:

Hai there, from my queue ~

General

1. Open each diff with notepad and set audio lead-in 1000, it's 1004 atmfixed

Easy

1. 00:32:927 (1) - This slider doens't fit the sound. Reduce it to the previous red tick and add a repeat fixed
2. 00:34:894 (1) - Move to 00:34:730 and extend this until 00:35:222 ^
3. 01:37:845 (3) - Remove clap and add finish at the end of it ^
4. 01:44:074 (1) - Move it to x464 y192? ^

Normal

1. 00:29:484 Add a circle here? fixed
2. 00:49:648 (3) - It touches HP bar, move it x256 y112? ^
3. 01:10:304 (2) - This doens't fit the song. Make long slider in this way instead:
   ^
4. 01:18:501 (2) - Add a repeat? This "hole" sound is bad D: re-mapped
5. 01:21:288 Add a circle? re-mapped
6. 01:21:615 (4) - Extend this until the next red tick (01:21:943) fixed
7. 01:23:747 (2) - 1 grid right to improve the blanket with the next and previous sliders ^
8. 01:24:730 (1) - Finish at the end

Hard

1. 01:15:386 (2) - This finish sounds bad, remove it? fixed
2. 01:37:845 (1) - Spacing please, this is an hard not an insane. Spacing like this in 1/4 are really hard for.. an hard. ^

Insane

1. 00:39:156 (4) - Instead to use this slider, you should to fix in this way, it's much better:
   

fixed


That's all, you need more work on it >w<
Good luck \o\

Kokatsu wrote:

Taikomod from my queue~

Songsetup:
You are not mentioned in the tags, i would complain about that D:
Reduce drain to 7, lol. done \(^o^)/
OD 8 would be nice 2.. done \(^o^)/

Timing:
I would decrease the vol. on non-kiai parts to ~90% done \(^o^)/
Maybe speedup for the kiaipart? (velo x1.05) done \(^o^)/
01:27:845 - move this section to 01:28:009 - done \(^o^)/
01:44:156 - Taiko with 5% vol. is just stupid, remove the spinner if you dislike the sound of it or increase the volume to ~40%. done \(^o^)/

Notes:
Overall, weird style :/ just trying to adapt to your mapping~ \(^o^)/
00:22:271 (29) - change to small don done \(^o^)/
00:33:255 (3,4,6) - big kat on these sounds better done \(^o^)/
00:34:894 (8) - change to small kat done \(^o^)/
00:36:206 (3,9,11,15,16) - should be kat imo done \(^o^)/
00:48:665 (21,22,25) - ^ done \(^o^)/
00:51:615 (2,4,9,14,16) - ^ done \(^o^)/
00:57:681 - add kat here done \(^o^)/
01:38:501 (2) - make it small done \(^o^)/
01:44:156 - spinner needs to start one tick later done \(^o^)/

Hope I could help~

Video,0,"op.avi"

NewRulerNA wrote:

hai

[Easy]
Normalと同じ感じで音を付けるべきだと私は思いました 修正
ちょっと見ているとヒットサウンドが少なく寂しい感じがします

00:33:747 (2) - 00:32:271 (3)のヒットバーストでスライダーの開始が半分程度隠れています
これは初心者には見にくいように私は感じました　配置変更


[Normal]

01:35:878 (1,3) - 僅かにですがスライダーが歪んでいます　修正


[Hard]
指摘なし　thx=


[Insane]
AR+1? ちょっと見づらいので保留　他の方の意見を待ちます

00:01:452 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2)と(3,4)で区切ることが初見では分かりにくいです　ジャンプを意識してるので保留ですが検討
00:02:435 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:17:845 (2,3,4,5) - 配置そのものには問題はありませんが、曲調と合っておらず不自然な感じがしました　修正
00:33:583 (1,2) - この短いスライダーによる音取りにすこし違和感を感じました　修正
00:38:173 (1) - わずかに歪んでいます　修正
01:04:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - この一連のかなり大きなDistanceの差は分かりにくいです　確かに差は大きいですが等間隔配置で星型なので保留。他の方のmodも参考にします。


[kurosu's Taiko]
You need to cancel an animation.
Please erase the description about an animation.

Video,0,"op.avi"

fixed

太鼓以外の難易度のヒットサウンドに関して

音量が70%のところが非常にわかりにくく、プレイに影響を与えています
音量は80～90でよりヒットサウンドがよく聞こえるようにするべきです全体的に音量を上げました。

配置自体には気になったところはほとんどありませんでした
Rankedがんばって　thx==
good luck!

Piscis wrote:

[General]
Song setup→Enable countdownのチェックをすべて外す。プレイしてもカウントダウンがでないので不必要だと思います fixed
ボリュームの100%は正直うるさいのでもう少し下げてください～ fixed
太鼓の譜面だけがLetterboxInBreaksのチェックが外されているのでチェックするか、全ての譜面のチェックを外すようにしてください。 fixed

[Easy]
ノートとノートを重ねる配置はちょっと初心者には難しいと思われます・・・ 何箇所か修正
00:03:419 (3) - スライダーの最初にwhistleを追加　fixed
00:06:042 (3) - whistleを追加 fixed
00:16:533 (5) - スライダーリバースさせない　そしたらスライダーの最後のclap消してfinishを追加 fixed
00:17:189 (6) - circleを追加 fixed
00:32:927 (1) - 二回リバースさせるのは混乱させる可能性があるので変更するのを検討してみてください fixed
00:50:304 (5) - スライダーの最後にfinish fixed
00:54:894 (1) - finishを追加 fixed
01:01:451 (5) - ^ ^
01:08:173 (2) - スライダーのリバースと最後にwhistle fixed
01:11:124 (3) - whistleを追加 fixed
01:18:829 (4) - x:192 y:272に置けば綺麗なお花型に fixed
01:19:812 (5) - finishを追加 fixed
01:25:386 (1) - ^ ^
01:37:845 (3) - スライダーの最初とリバースにwhistleを追加 fixed
01:40:468 (4) - スライダーの最初にwhistleを追加 fixed

少ないけどごめんね 　
カオスヘッド大好きですがんばってね星投げます

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q :3

Insane

01:12:763 - maybe add note here? i think no much.
01:42:599(3,4) - stack better fixed

Hard

00:19:812(1,2,3,4) - make identical distance between ends sliders http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/332728 fixed
00:40:140 - add note fixed
01:08:992 - add slider 1/2 some re-mapped
01:10:960(5,6) - stack better ^
01:11:615 - add slider 1/2 http://puu.sh/yxGM ^
01:19:156 - remove 1 repeat and add slider 1/2 http://puu.sh/yxHL sound better no fixed
01:20:632 - add note fixed
01:28:665(4,5,6) - make perfect stack of the end sliders well, it's already stack with notepad.

Normal

AR -1 fixed

00:51:615 - add note fixed
00:56:206 - make so http://puu.sh/yxLL fixed

It's all for me) good luck~~

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Taiko mod as requested :3

[kurosu's Taiko]
Disable the Letterbox done
01:07:025 - This SV is better at 1.15x or 1.20 1.20


00:09:320 (13) - This note don't fit here, delete it done
00:10:304 - I suggest to do it like this http://puu.sh/yDIL red is don and blue is katsu. done
00:12:107 - Can you delete this at the 00:22:271 and you can make this done

SPOILER

256,136,12107,5,0
256,136,12271,1,8
256,136,12435,1,0
256,136,12517,1,0
256,136,12599,1,8
256,136,12763,1,0
256,136,12927,1,8
256,136,13091,1,0
256,136,13173,1,0
256,136,13255,1,8
256,136,13419,1,0
256,136,13583,1,8
256,136,13747,1,0
256,136,13829,1,0
256,136,13911,1,8
256,136,14074,1,0
256,136,14238,1,8
256,136,14402,1,0
256,136,14484,1,0
256,136,14566,1,8
256,136,14730,1,8
256,136,14894,1,8
256,136,15058,1,0
256,136,15222,1,8
256,136,15386,1,8
256,136,15550,1,8
256,136,15714,1,0
256,136,15878,1,8
256,136,16042,1,8
256,136,16206,1,0
256,136,16370,1,0
256,136,16533,1,8
256,136,16697,1,8
256,136,16861,1,0
256,136,17025,5,12
256,136,17353,5,0
256,136,17517,1,8
256,136,17681,1,0
256,136,17763,1,0
256,136,17845,1,8
256,136,18009,1,0
256,136,18173,1,8
256,136,18337,1,0
256,136,18419,1,0
256,136,18501,1,8
256,136,18665,1,0
256,136,18829,1,8
256,136,18993,1,0
256,136,19075,1,0
256,136,19157,1,8
256,136,19320,1,0
256,136,19484,1,8
256,136,19648,1,0
256,136,19730,1,0
256,136,19812,1,8
256,136,19976,1,8
256,136,20140,1,8
256,136,20304,1,0
256,136,20468,1,8
256,136,20632,1,8
256,136,20796,1,8
256,136,20960,1,0
256,136,21124,1,8
256,136,21288,1,8
256,136,21452,1,0
256,136,21616,1,0
256,136,21779,1,8
256,136,21943,1,8
256,136,22107,1,0
256,136,22271,5,12

00:23:583 (6) - A katsu here sounds better done
00:24:812 (11,12) - Delete done
00:26:206 (17) - Katsu and delete 00:26:370 (18) done
00:30:632 - ^ Also with this done
00:40:386 (18) - Delete done
00:44:074 (2) - Big katsu is better done


Desu.

alacat wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

全て提案です。
Let's go~~

[General]
● tag に　psp　を追加? fixed

[Easy]
●00:03:419 - whistle 追加? fixed
●00:06:042 (3) - 逆に曲げてみては？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337356 fixed
●00:29:320 - clap　追加? fixed
●00:29:648 - clap 削除? fixed
●00:29:976 - clap 追加? fixed
●00:34:730 - whistle追加? fixed
●00:44:730 - clapではなくfinishのほうがあってる気がします fixed
●01:05:058 - whistleではなくfinish追加? fixed
●01:11:943 (1,2) - 重ねないほうがいいと思います fixed

[Normal]
●00:03:419 - whistle 追加? fixed
●00:09:484 (1) - 折り返しにwhistle追加? fixed
●00:10:468 (2) - 終わりにwhistle追加? fixed
●00:11:288 (3) - whistle追加? fixed
●00:12:271 (1) - 00:17:517 (1,2) - と同様にこういう感じはどうでしょうかhttp://puu.sh/zHXs　clapも置きやすい思います ちょっと音取りが不自然になるのでno fixed.
●00:32:927 (1) - 終わりにfinish追加? fixed
●00:53:911 (1) - finish追加? fixed
●01:01:779 (1) - 終わりにfinish追加? no fixed
●01:35:878 (1) - 01:37:189 (3) - と同じ形の方が綺麗だと思います fixed

[Hard]
●00:03:419 (5,6) - whistle追加? fixed
●00:06:042 (1) - ^ fixed
good diff

[Insane]
●00:03:419 (1) - 頭にwhistle追加? fixed
●00:34:074 (2) - もう少しspacingあけてみる? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337374 fixed

指摘するところがありませんでした

頑張ってくださいヾ(o・ω・o)ﾉ　以上です。

nekitkas wrote:

Mod~


Easy
AR 2 I thinks AR3 is better. well, other modders say so, I'll change it.

Normal
not bad thx

Hard

00:53:911(3) - fix that slider http://puu.sh/zKWb fixed
00:54:566(4) - ^ ^

Insane

00:44:074 - think that looks better http://puu.sh/zKJQ ofc you can ignore it! no fixed because I don't want to make space a lot in Insane sry.
01:08:665 - add nc some add NC but arleady NC exist?
01:09:648 - ^
01:10:796 - ^
01:12:271 - ^
01:13:911 - ^
01:14:894 - ^
01:22:599 - instead of the slidet put two circles fixed
01:34:566(1,2) - these sliders looks booooring,do something well, other modders mention that, i'll fix it. I think this is better... no confidence;;

if you have questions ask me pm!
Good luck with map!~

kajiyatta wrote:

nekitkas wrote:

Mod~
01:08:665 - add nc some add NC but arleady NC exist?

Atema wrote:

Hi ! From my modding queue

General

- I can’t mod Taiko, but due to the spinner in the end, it does not end at the same time as the others diffs and I don’t think this is rankable. fixed

Easy

00:13:583 - Add circle ? fixed
01:35:878 (1,2,3) - Couldn’t you make this part more symmetrical instead of having a quite long circle and a small one ? fixed

Normal

00:39:648 (4,5,6) - Maybe could you align these 3 ? well, no fixed but other modders mention that, i'll fix.
00:41:943 (3) - 1 grid down ? no? maybe already align :3

Hard

00:46:042 (1) - Remove NC ? fixed but removed NC previous (1)

Insane

01:43:747 (1) - Maybe put the middle of the slider in the middle lane, and not the beginning of it ? Would look more esthetic imo ^^I like this placement and rythem. sry I can't change it><


I could only point out really minor things, but this is a really clean mapset ! thanks ^w^
Good luck !

ArtBox wrote:

こんばんわー、すこしだけMODしたのでご参考までに（全部提案です）
[Easy]

SPOILER

スライダーの数がサークルの2倍以上あるので
HP+1（これは別に変更しなくてもいいです）
OD+1（OD+1は流石に欲しいかも？） Normalとの差別化とStar difficultが3.00を超えてしまうので保留
→修正しました

00:03:419 (3) - 中途半端なスライダーの作りです、綺麗にしてみては？↓（真ん中の支点がx:440 y:280に来るように）
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:05:058 (2) - HPバーにかかっています（許容範囲？） fixed
00:06:042 (3) - ここは迷いましたが、スライダーの作りが中途半端なので (2)をずらしたのでその分も含めfixed
　　　　　　　　　　　真ん中の支点がx:64 y:120に来るように↓
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:09:156 (1,2) - 許容範囲な気はしますが、逆向きは好きではありません 個人的にはあまり気にならないですが、他の方の意見を待ちます
00:11:779 (3) - 1Grid左？fixed
00:12:599 (1) - 逆向きが連続してくるのは良いとは思えません、これでは駄目ですか？↓ fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　（逆にしただけです）
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:32:927 (1,2) - noteを重ねているのがここだけで違和感があります、ずらすべきです fixed
00:32:927 (1,2) - remove finish add whistle 音量を65％くらいに fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　　（ここでfinishがあってもバックの音（音量ではなく）が強すぎて掻き消されている感じがします）
00:39:320 (2) - 始点の座標（x:344 y:104）は変えずに角度を-5°から　-7°程 fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　（今の状態は左肩上がりな気がします、でも気のせいかも ）
00:40:796 (1) - タイムラインが白線から白線なのにMAPに置いてあるnoteは、
　　　　　　　　　　　離れてたりくっ付いてたりして変な感じです（ここだけではないです）、統一した方が良いのでは？↓　fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　（見た目的に離せない所とかもあるのでスルー程度で）
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:44:566 (2) - 00:46:042 (1) - ここまでの流れは許容範囲な気もしますが、
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　私としてはスライダーが完全に被らないように配置するべきだと思います 作り変えました
00:48:665 (3,4) - 音取りが不自然な気がします、が、代案も思いつかず
01:01:451 (5) - DS1.0xでx:320 y:120（この←↓二つはもしかしたら意図的かもしれないのでスルーして下さい、というか直すと1が打ちずらい気が ）　fixed
01:01:779 (1) - ^ x:240 y:120 　　
01:03:419 (2,3,4) - 2がなんかこう、だらーっと突っ立ってる感じがして見た目が悪いです（私だけでしょうけど） 色々修正
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　2の真ん中の支点がx:176 y:224に来るようにして、
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　角度を40°変更　あとはDS1.0x通りに並べてください（これもスルーしていいです、はい）↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

01:08:009 (2) - 1のスライダーに対して曲げすぎているような印象があります　fixed　
　　　　　　　　　　　真ん中の支点がx:200 y:256に来るようにして下さい
　　　　　　　　　　　（これもスルーしてもらって良いです）
01:12:271 (2) - 指摘するか迷いましたが一応、x:336 y:280（今のままでも、それはそれで味がある気はします、スルーで）以下remapしました
01:12:927 (3) - スライダーの曲がりが見た目的にも中途半端です、
　　　　　　　　　　　私も弄りましたが上手く曲げれず・・・、いっそ真っ直ぐで　fixed
01:14:238 (4) - これは微妙ですが、真ん中の支点がx:336 y:184に来るようにして下さい fixed
01:37:517 (2,3) - これは意図的ですか？　　もしそうでないなら3をx:320 y:80に fixed

[Normal]

SPOILER

初心者にはこういった曲がり方は難しいかもしれません、
00:01:452 (1) -
00:02:435 (2) -
00:04:074 (1) -
00:05:058 (2) -
01:35:878 (1) - （せめて後半のこの←↓二つは修正を検討して下さい、後半でこれはいやらしいです） fixed
01:37:189 (3) -

短いスライダーは少し難しいかも？
00:11:288 (3) -
00:40:304 (6) -
00:44:074 (1) - （←↓この二つは連続ではきついかもしれません） fixed
00:44:894 (3) -
01:21:124 (4) -

きちんとスライダーが曲がっていなかったり、
水平でみて始めと終わりが綺麗に揃っていないものは直してあげると綺麗に見えます
例ですが、
00:28:337 (3) - これは下の支点を右に一個分だけずらしてあげたほうが、変に斜めっていない気がします fixed
00:29:648 (6) - これについては始まりと終わりでGrid Level3で1マス分ずれいています fixed
（もし意図的であれば直さなくても良いと思います）
ただ、これのように綺麗に揃っているのもあるので再度ずれたりしていないか確認して見てください
00:41:451 (2) -

00:03:419 (3) - ここは普通に曲げても良いのでは？ fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　（後半でかくついたスライダーが幾つかありますが、ここだけは違和感を覚えます）
00:10:468 (2) - 下手に曲げるよりは真っ直ぐの方が良いかもしれません fixed
00:47:681 (3) - 00:48:665 (1) - だらっと曲げるよりは綺麗に曲げてあげてください fixed
00:48:665 (1) - remove　NC fixed
00:49:320 (2) - NC
01:12:271 (1) - remove　NC fixed
01:13:255 (2) - NC
01:14:894 (1) - remove　NC fixed
01:17:189 (3) - NC
01:17:517 (1) - remove　NC no fixed
01:43:747 (5) - delete（イージーの音取りと同じにして下さい、不自然です。 fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　　ここはスライダーでも良いですが全難易度で揃えた方が良いと思います） Hard,Insaneはスライダーのままでいきます
01:44:074 (5) - add note

　fixed

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:01:943 (2) - HPバーにかかっています（許容範囲？） fixed
00:02:435 (3) - 作り直してください、線が水平にきちんと引かれていません fixed
01:11:615 (6,7) - 見た目が残念なのでこれはどうでしょうか？↓fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　　

01:43:747 (3) - delete（Easyに同じ） ここは現行のままでいきたいです。（今のところは特に指摘も多くないので…)
01:44:074 (3) - add note

[Insane]

SPOILER

01:02:927 (3) - スコアとプログレスバーにかかっています（許容範囲なんですかね？） fixed
01:23:255 (2) - HPバーにかかっています（許容範囲？） fixed
01:30:304 (9) - HPバーにかかっています（許容範囲？） fixed
01:43:747 (1) - delete（Easyに同じ） no fixed
01:44:074 (5) - add note

Insaneには関係ありませんが、次はnaoさんのsincerelyで譜面とかどうですかね （冗談です） どうでしょうね(0_0)その時はゲスト譜面をお願いしたいと思います:3[/color]

Rankedがんばー

1. You may consider to remove the .osb file and then full submit.

1. Maybe make some unique shapes to the sliders that looks good AND flows with the music nicely? I got this epic "WTF" feeling while I played this diff, believe me.
2. 00:32:271 (3) - Remove the Clap at the end? Don't really think double-clap works here.
3. 00:32:927 (1,2) - I can't really hear the Finish sounds. You might just as well remove them or make them a bit louder.
4. 00:48:665 (3) - NC?
5. 00:50:304 (4) - Eh... Don't know why, but it just feels pretty weird when I played this slider.
6. 00:52:271 (2) - Make this a 1/2 (from the white tick to the red tick on the timeline) kick slider?
7. 00:52:599 (3) - I personally would like to shorten this to a 1/1 slider that repeats twice. You might want to do it too.
8. 01:08:009 (2) - ^ (Except it only repeats once.)
9. 01:18:829 (4) - Lengthen this by 1/2 beat?
10. 01:44:074 (1) - Let's ignore the spacing here and place it at (256,64). Just go and do a leap of faith here. If you don't want though... it's fine, but you should play this spot with the original position AND with my suggested position first before responding to this.

1. Uh... I'm not sure, but things seem to be a bit off (no, not the timing) when I played this diff. Don't know why.
2. 00:06:697 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1.2x DS? No, I'm not crazy, but I just discovered that using a larger spacing when you're going for 'weird timing' (having bunches of 3/4 or 3/2 beat-spaced notes, for example) will go well. It might only work for me though, so you shouldn't strictly follow this.
3. 00:59:156 (1) - ^
4. 01:16:206 (5) - NC?
5. 01:28:009 - You should map this part...
6. 01:33:255 - Add a circle?

1. Overall, this diff still needs a bit more work on... basically everything. You don't have to remap this, just rearrange stuff. I'll point out a few things.
2. 00:06:042 (1,2,1) - This jump doesn't really work well here, IMO.
3. 00:11:288 (1,2) - Don't know why, but this plays... bad.
4. 00:30:304 (1,2) - This slight overlap looks odd.
5. 01:38:501 (1,2) - You may want to make these sliders spaced a bit larger.
6. 01:43:747 (3) - I didn't expect this slider to be slowed...

1. I'm also not really sure about the quality of this diff... Might be just me that suck, though.
2. 00:01:452 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ...What's with these jumps?
3. 00:04:074 (1,2,1,2) - ^

wingman_dw wrote:

hi/

[Insane]
00:06:533 (4) - 前のスライダーと重なってるので完全に隠れるようにするか反対側に配置した方がいいと思います fixed
00:28:173 (2,3,4,5) - 対称になってないのでgrid snap外して揃える？ fixed
00:36:697 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 似たようなところがいくつか fixed
00:40:796 (1,2,3,4) - (2,3)がプレイする時に(1)と被っていてるのであえて右下にずらしてもいいと思います remap
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 恐らくHRとのバランスもあるので難しいですが remap
01:16:206 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:51:288 (1,2,3,4) - もう少し綺麗に囲むかずらすか http://puu.sh/Apb1 fixed
ただここだけ音取りが変わっている？
00:52:927 (1,2,4,5,6,7) - スペーシングが若干気になりました。(4,6)はDS=1.5xで統一して良いと思います fixed
01:04:074 (6) - 1grid下に fixed
01:07:681 (3,4) - スペーシング？ fixed
01:09:484 (10) - 全く影響ないけど手前の(7)にgridsnap外して重ねる re-map
01:35:550 (3) と 01:36:206 (2,3) - やはりAR8だと若干ごちゃごちゃした印象。できたらスライダーの終点とかどこかをしっかり重ねた方がいいかも　fixed
01:41:288 (2) - サークルの方がいいかも？ ここは保留

全体を通して始点と終点が水平に配置してあるスライダーはきっちりさせた方が。gridsnap外して曲げれば上下は簡単に揃えられるので

SPOILER

00:12:107 (1) - before after的なものを


細かいですはい
スライダーが長くなるほど気になるので長いのは修正を

前半曲の良さが譜面に出ていてとても良かったです

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Sorry for being late.

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward or wrong to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. You may consider to remove the .osb file and then full submit.

>Easy

1. Maybe make some unique shapes to the sliders that looks good AND flows with the music nicely? I got this epic "WTF" feeling while I played this diff, believe me.
2. 00:32:271 (3) - Remove the Clap at the end? Don't really think double-clap works here. fixed
3. 00:32:927 (1,2) - I can't really hear the Finish sounds. You might just as well remove them or make them a bit louder. removed
4. 00:48:665 (3) - NC? no?
5. 00:50:304 (4) - Eh... Don't know why, but it just feels pretty weird when I played this slider. fixed
6. 00:52:271 (2) - Make this a 1/2 (from the white tick to the red tick on the timeline) kick slider? no changed.I think it's too short.
7. 00:52:599 (3) - I personally would like to shorten this to a 1/1 slider that repeats twice. You might want to do it too. just remapped
8. 01:08:009 (2) - ^ (Except it only repeats once.) no fixed
9. 01:18:829 (4) - Lengthen this by 1/2 beat? no fixed
10. 01:44:074 (1) - Let's ignore the spacing here and place it at (256,64). Just go and do a leap of faith here. If you don't want though... it's fine, but you should play this spot with the original position AND with my suggested position first before responding to this.

In Easy, I don't want to change DS but other modders mention that, I'll do.

>Normal

1. Uh... I'm not sure, but things seem to be a bit off (no, not the timing) when I played this diff. Don't know why.
2. 00:06:697 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1.2x DS? No, I'm not crazy, but I just discovered that using a larger spacing when you're going for 'weird timing' (having bunches of 3/4 or 3/2 beat-spaced notes, for example) will go well. It might only work for me though, so you shouldn't strictly follow this. I don't have iuntention of changing DS sorry
3. 00:59:156 (1) - ^
4. 01:16:206 (5) - NC? fixed
5. 01:28:009 - You should map this part... fixed
6. 01:33:255 - Add a circle?

fixed

>Hard

1. Overall, this diff still needs a bit more work on... basically everything. You don't have to remap this, just rearrange stuff. I'll point out a few things.
2. 00:06:042 (1,2,1) - This jump doesn't really work well here, IMO. fixed
3. 00:11:288 (1,2) - Don't know why, but this plays... bad. fixed
4. 00:30:304 (1,2) - This slight overlap looks odd. fixed
5. 01:38:501 (1,2) - You may want to make these sliders spaced a bit larger. fixed
6. 01:43:747 (3) - I didn't expect this slider to be slowed...

fixed

>Insane

1. I'm also not really sure about the quality of this diff... Might be just me that suck, though.
2. 00:01:452 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ...What's with these jumps? I think this needs jumps because the sounds of music is so clearly and loundly.
3. 00:04:074 (1,2,1,2) - ^

IMO, this still needs a bit work, but overall it's already great for someone's first mapset \:D/

Good luck on the way

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Easy:
00:21:779 (3) - Spacing fixed
01:21:615 (3) - put like this: http://puu.sh/AFiV Sound better, imo o.o fixed
01:37:845 (3) - 1 grid down no fixed
01:42:107 (2) - Press shift to align with the (1) fixed

Normal:
00:42:763 (4,1) - Overlap fixed
00:57:189 (2) - 1 grid left? To fulfill the symmetry with (1) fixed

Hard:
00:01:943 (2) - 1 grid up? fixed
00:02:927 (4) - 1 grid down? fixed
01:20:632 (3) - 1 grid up, to have the same distance. fixed

Insane:
00:56:533 (1) - Move the slidertick to x:12 y:120, to be equal to the slider (3) fixed

That's all, sorry for my poor mod :c
Sorry for my poor English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

Laurier wrote:

from user page

Easy
00:06:042 (3) - nazi なんか妙にせまくなっているのでちょっと左にずらしましょう fixed
00:07:681 (2) - ^同じ理由で右へ ^
00:32:927 (1,2) - CS:1のclap追加 fixed
00:45:714 (4) - clap? fixed
01:04:402 (4) - end のホイッスルをfinishに変更。その後の3つの単発にホイッスル追加 fixed
01:08:009 (2) - slider slideの音追加しても面白いかも(Easyってことを考えると初心者混乱するし微妙ですけど\/) ここはそのままで
01:41:124 (1) - 直前のsliderを包む感じに　http://puu.sh/B4Ss　次のsliderもこれをコピーして反転で　fixed

Normal
00:12:763 (2) - 開始を1つ前のred tickから。Normalだし、こういう音取で大丈夫だと思います fixed
00:56:533 (1) - sping後のおすの文字で隠れるので場所を変えましょう。もう少し中心よりがいいと思います fixed
01:01:779 (1) - end at 01:02:599 - ？少しタイミングとりにくいように思います fixed
01:14:894 (4) - りばーすの部分をもう少し左側に移動。変更する場合は次のsliderも平行になるようにちぇんじ fixed
01:27:353 (5) - 今までのstackさせていたものとタイミングが変わるパターンなので、stackさせないで移動しましょう。 fixed
01:40:468 (4) - finishつけるなら真ん中じゃなくて最後へ fixed

Hard

00:11:288 (3) - 音量を少し上げてﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ追加？ fixed
00:27:681 (1) - 音取りの提案　http://puu.sh/B4Xt fixed
00:48:665 (1) - 説明しにくいけど直前のsliderのくぼみに収まる感じに　http://puu.sh/B4Y4 fixed
00:52:599 - add note no fixed
01:20:140 (1) - add finish これの少し前のfinishはホイッスルにする感じでもいいかもしれません fixed
01:43:747 (1) - delete? no fixed

Insane
00:32:927 - clapつけるか音量上げるかしましょう 音量を上げました
00:43:419 (1,2,3) - 　00:43:091 (4) - を左に少し移動して、(1,2,3)を00:42:107 (1) - の頭にstack　fixed
00:55:714 (4) - 連打入れるなら00:55:878 - ここまで入れて1/2 sliderに変更 スライダーに置き換えました
01:06:042 (1) - 白tickにホイッスル追加？あと音量少しあげましょう fixed
01:37:681 (7) - 結構ずれてるのでstackさせるならしっかり fixed
01:38:419 (8) - streamにするならこれはdelete fixed


That's all

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
mp3 is 127 kb/s? You'd better to find a 128~192 one. changed
End Kiai of Taiko at 01:27:845 to make consistent? fixed

[Easy]
00:31:288 (2) - not fit the vocal. You can use same pattern as 00:28:829 (2). fixed

[Normal]
00:12:435 (2) - move to 00:12:271 and extend by 1/2 tick? Or it is confusing. fixed
00:17:353 - add note here? no fixed.
01:07:681 (3) - change to a note and a 1/2 slider? http://puu.sh/BwGD now no changed, but others mention that, I'll fix.

[Hard]
00:31:779 (4,5,6) - put like this? http://puu.sh/BwD5 fixed
00:54:402 - add a note here? fixed
01:10:960 (4) - there is vocal at 01:11:124 fixed
01:43:747 (1) - same as Insane fixed

[Insane]
00:19:156 (4,5,6) - use rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/Bwjq fixed
00:30:304 (1,2) - move to 264,84? http://puu.sh/Bwxo re-mapped
00:32:681 (10) - move to 00:32:681 is much better imo. ^
00:43:501 (2) - the triplet doesn't make much sense because it doesn't fit the vocal. So delete (2) is a good choice imo. fixed
00:46:533 - add a note here to make consistent? fixed
00:52:271 (3) - not fit the vocal at 00:52:435. remapped.
01:06:779 (6) - delete this note or add a note at 01:06:943 to make a stream? the triplet is just like 00:43:501 (2) deleted one
01:14:730 (8) - stack it under end of 01:14:238 (7)? Vocal change at 01:14:894 (1) so i think it's not a good choice to stack it with previous note. fixed
01:21:288 (1) - big jump following a pause stack is misleading removed 1 stack
01:28:501 (4,5) - remove the stack? It's same as 01:14:730 (8) I think this isn't problem. so no fixed.
01:37:845 - end - this section is much harder than previous section, the patterns here is for AR9. Try to lower the difficulty. changed stack.
01:43:747 (1) - delete? there is nothing to follow here fixed

That's all I can find. GL~