香港的mapper owo 您好~

[Normal]

一般來說E和N都不建議用減速
00:44:627 (2) - 減少1次折返
01:04:770 (9) - NC
01:05:413 (10) - 刪掉?
01:05:627 (1) - Remove NC
01:39:056 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/293624
01:55:342 (5) - 建議在01:55:770第1次折返，01:56:199結束
02:10:127 (1) - 不對稱。對稱簡單的方法，就是用 Ctrl+H 將左右3點搬到對稱的位置，最後用中間的圖控制長度和時間；多試試看吧

[Evil's Hard]

01:28:127 (7) - 換成Circle
01:29:413 (3,4) - Ctrl+R節奏比較順

[Insane]

還好

That all, Good luck

Updated~

Ok, you're the second in my mod queue, I hope this helps... wait... Umineko? You're gonna get the best of my modding >:D!

[General]
Why not name the map ''Dream End'' or ''Dream End Discharger'' or ''Dream End (Discharger)'' of it's another song version.

[Normal]
01:05:627 I think you should make end with the normal clap sound, the sudden change sounds weird.
01:21:270 You could add a circle there.
01:28:127 ^
01:39:056 Um... this slider doesn't ends well, make it end either in 01:39:699 or 01:39:913.
02:09:913 Maybe add a circle in there.
02:52:127 Hmm and empty sound could sound good, I mean, make a 0% sound there... or maybe not, just a preference of mine.
03:20:199 There's almost no sound in the song in that part... so I suggest you make 03:19:342 a slider that ends in 03:20:199 so it doesn't sounds that confusing to begginers.
I don't see anything else.

[Evil's Hard]
00:18:056 I mostly hear that intro in 00:18:270 so I dunno... start it there maybe.
00:40:770 A Finisher sound could go well.
02:11:627 Maybe add a finisher sound when it starts.
02:38:627 Hmm... instead of make it a repeat, just start it there and end it in 02:38:842... suggestion.
03:20:413 Maybe delete that circle, as I said, that part kind of sounds empty.
Well... that was short... I don't see anything else.

[Wmf's Taiko]
Like I said in the rules, I can't do Taiko... but... I do hear some parts that are off... sorry.

[Insane]
Holy damn... ok, let's see...
01:28:127 Made a 0% sound in there, that's a dry sound that goes well in that part.
01:46:342 Clap maybe?
02:10:127 to 02:11:199 Instead of clap then normal sound, put all of them a finisher or all of them a normal sound or half and half.
03:20:413 Dele... oh wait, there's no circle, good .
I don't see anything else.
_________________________

Oh man... phew... the Insane one was... difficult. I hope my mod was helpful. I love Umineko, good luck with getting it ranked ^^. I like the song... um... I could shoot a kudosu... but it seems that you have a lot of them... so... maybe not, your decision...

Crok425 wrote:

Ok, you're the second in my mod queue, I hope this helps... wait... Umineko? You're gonna get the best of my modding >:D!

[General]
Why not name the map ''Dream End'' or ''Dream End Discharger'' or ''Dream End (Discharger)'' of it's another song version.
dreamenddischarger is the correct title of this song...
you may also see these map:
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/16258
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/17425
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22472
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29724
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31116
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37729
...yeah.
[Normal]
01:05:627 I think you should make end with the normal clap sound, the sudden change sounds weird. Done01:21:270 You could add a circle there. It's too hard for the easiet diff...
01:28:127 ^ No.
01:39:056 Um... this slider doesn't ends well, make it end either in 01:39:699 or 01:39:913. Oh my mistake fixed
02:09:913 Maybe add a circle in there.Ok
02:52:127 Hmm and empty sound could sound good, I mean, make a 0% sound there... or maybe not, just a preference of mine.rrr 0% is unrankable and we can't set 0% volume O__o(The lowest limit is 5%)
03:20:199 There's almost no sound in the song in that part... so I suggest you make 03:19:342 a slider that ends in 03:20:199 so it doesn't sounds that confusing to begginers. mmm I may take this if other modders mention this. D:
I don't see anything else.

[Wmf's Taiko]
Like I said in the rules, I can't do Taiko... but... I do hear some parts that are off... sorry.

[Insane]
Holy damn... ok, let's see...
01:28:127 Made a 0% sound in there, that's a dry sound that goes well in that part. rrr 0% is unrankable and we can't set 0% volume O__o(The lowest limit is 5%)
01:46:342 Clap maybe? Done
02:10:127 to 02:11:199 Instead of clap then normal sound, put all of them a finisher or all of them a normal sound or half and half. ...
03:20:413 Dele... oh wait, there's no circle, good .
I don't see anything else.
_________________________

Oh man... phew... the Insane one was... difficult. I hope my mod was helpful. I love Umineko, good luck with getting it ranked ^^. I like the song... um... I could shoot a kudosu... but it seems that you have a lot of them... so... maybe not, your decision...

Thanks for your mod~

hi~
nazi4mod

General


Normal
maybe make it under 3.0 stars? o_0
00:20:199 (1) - use spinner's circle to make shape for (1)
00:25:342 (1,2,3,1) - i can't read this pattern in play-mode
00:36:485 (6,2) - stack them somehow!
01:33:913 (1) - put it in the center? make it symmetrical?
02:03:056 (4,6) - they symmetrical about (5) maybe you can make them a bit more symmetrical somehow?
02:09:913 (1,2) - 2 notes after spinner and break? confusing ><
02:32:199 (1,2,3,1,2) - a bit hard to read
02:52:770 (1) -x379 y248 make it symmetrical
02:54:485 (5,7) - avoid crossing or put endpoint ow (7) in (5) http://puu.sh/qS3K
02:56:199 (7) - new combo
03:14:199 (2) - x208 y211

Insane

00:20:199 (1) - i guess this slider can follow spinner's shape this?
00:23:627 (3) - ^
00:35:627 (5) - new combo
00:40:770 (1,3) - let them follow (2)'s approach circle's shape?
00:42:270 (4,11) - stack?
01:03:056 (7) - why no new combo?
01:13:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - we are not in taiko mode. so place them somehow. no need to stack them
02:32:199 (1) - a bit messy? covered by circles?
02:48:699 (4,5,6,8,9) - maybe star-shape for this stream?
03:05:842 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - ^
03:11:627 (1,2) - this? maybe put them in this way. sliders "inherit" shapes D:

Taiko

yeah, i can't mod taiko


Hard
00:06:484 (1,2,3) - this?
00:08:627 (2,3) - don't cross! a bit messy!
00:13:342 (1) - delete new combo? D:
00:28:127 (4) - x411 y262
00:29:199 (2) - x395 y17
00:32:627 (3,4,5) - avoid crossing
00:39:056 (1,3) - blah blah blah crossing. avoid it. i won't write about them again. just look at map and fix them if you want
01:16:342 (6,1) - use (1)'s approach-circle to make shape for (6)
01:23:413 (8) - new combo

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
ok~ that's all

Star!
i love this song

-Bakari- wrote:

hi~
nazi4mod

General


Normal
maybe make it under 3.0 stars? o_0
00:20:199 (1) - use spinner's circle to make shape for (1)
00:25:342 (1,2,3,1) - i can't read this pattern in play-mode
00:36:485 (6,2) - stack them somehow!
01:33:913 (1) - put it in the center? make it symmetrical?
02:03:056 (4,6) - they symmetrical about (5) maybe you can make them a bit more symmetrical somehow?
02:09:913 (1,2) - 2 notes after spinner and break? confusing ><
02:32:199 (1,2,3,1,2) - a bit hard to read
02:52:770 (1) -x379 y248 make it symmetrical
02:54:485 (5,7) - avoid crossing or put endpoint ow (7) in (5) http://puu.sh/qS3K
02:56:199 (7) - new combo
03:14:199 (2) - x208 y211

Insane

00:20:199 (1) - i guess this slider can follow spinner's shape this?
00:23:627 (3) - ^
00:35:627 (5) - new combo
00:40:770 (1,3) - let them follow (2)'s approach circle's shape?
00:42:270 (4,11) - stack?
01:03:056 (7) - why no new combo?
01:13:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - we are not in taiko mode. so place them somehow. no need to stack them
02:32:199 (1) - a bit messy? covered by circles?
02:48:699 (4,5,6,8,9) - maybe star-shape for this stream?
03:05:842 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - ^
03:11:627 (1,2) - this? maybe put them in this way. sliders "inherit" shapes D:

Taiko

yeah, i can't mod taiko
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
ok~ that's all

Star!
i love this song

Fixed some
Thanks for your star and your mod><

[Mystica]
All fixed

[Livean]
01:29:413 (3) - the spacing here is weird No
i think HP drain 6 would be fine Fixed

[Nymph]
All fixed

[ertyukjh010]
All fixed

[Crok42]
All fixed



Download: 07th Expansion - dreamenddischarger (Regou) [Evil's Hard].osu

喜欢这个曲子 皮肤 SB做的非常棒 顶顶 祝早日rank~~

victoraiss wrote:

喜欢这个曲子 皮肤 SB做的非常棒 顶顶 祝早日rank~~

謝謝^^

Hi~

General

1. Not sure in the tags, i think you should remove Evil_Twilight, and add "zts" and "visual novel"...don't sure yea
2. 02:09:913 - 02:11:627 - add kiai there!

Normal

1. 00:11:627 (1) - remove nc
2. 00:27:056 (1) -little confusing, stuck it with (5)
3. 00:40:770 - 100% volume -_- my ears, do it quiet, may be 60%
4. 00:45:484 (1) - too loud, yeah, same 60% and another one, try this (sounds good i think):
   1) 00:45:485 - green section (soft) delete clap there and add whistle
   2) 00:45:913 - green section (normal)
   3) whistle on the ALL slider, and in the end of it
5. 01:06:485 - remove whistle
6. 01:15:056 - LOUUUD
7. 01:29:199 - clap must be there
8. 01:31:770 (4) - nc
9. 01:55:342 (5) - not a good thing in normal, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:18:485 - missed notes there, add circles on the small white ticks

Evil's Hard

1. 00:13:342 (4) - nc
2. 00:36:913 (4) - ^
3. 00:44:842 - whistle
4. 01:01:342 - finish
5. 01:42:056 - whistle, not finish
6. 02:18:913 - whistle
7. 02:19:770 - ^
8. 02:28:342 (5) - ^
9. 02:32:199 - make this finish normal, sounds better

Insane

1. try not to use 100% volume (it makes my ears cry)
2. 01:01:342 (1) - soft finish there
3. 01:30:484 (1) - nc

Good luck :3

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General

1. Not sure in the tags, i think you should remove Evil_Twilight, and add "zts" and "visual novel"...don't sure yea added zts to the tag. :3
2. 02:09:913 - 02:11:627 - add kiai there! rrr no.

Normal

1. 00:11:627 (1) - remove nc Done
2. 00:27:056 (1) -little confusing, stuck it with (5) Done
3. 00:40:770 - 100% volume -_- my ears, do it quiet, may be 60% Done
4. 00:45:484 (1) - too loud, yeah, same 60% Done
   and another one, try this (sounds good i think):
   1) 00:45:485 - green section (soft) delete clap there and add whistle
   2) 00:45:913 - green section (normal) Done
   3) whistle on the ALL slider, and in the end of it
5. 01:06:485 - remove whistle Done
6. 01:15:056 - LOUUUD -20%
7. 01:29:199 - clap must be there Done
8. 01:31:770 (4) - nc Done
9. 01:55:342 (5) - not a good thing in normal, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Done
10. 03:18:485 - missed notes there, add circles on the small white ticks ??? There's already a note here o.o

Insane

1. try not to use 100% volume (it makes my ears cry)
2. 01:01:342 (1) - soft finish there Done
3. 01:30:484 (1) - nc Done

Good luck :3

Most fixed :3 Thanks!!!

To Evil_Twilight and wmf:我已經幫你們的diff加了新的tag, 不用自己再改:3

fixed all

Download: 07th Expansion - dreamenddischarger (Regou) [Evil's Hard].osu

~

Download: 07th Expansion - dreamenddischarger (Regou) [Wmf's Taiko].osu

1 year old first map... orz.

not much to say, good luck.

NatsumeRin wrote:

1 year old first map... orz.

not much to say, good luck.

Thanks for your bubble QWQ

哇泡了 加油

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哇泡了 加油

謝謝 :3

咁岩記返起呢張map我係好耐之前(我好新手戈時) 係見個=- -

支持纯鼠做图者路过~

泡了耶Regou大大

nold_1702 wrote:

咁岩記返起呢張map我係好耐之前(我好新手戈時) 係見個=- -

睇下 我呢個圖咁耐都未rank就證明我沙包到不得了 - -

You are missing a reversearrow. You must use a reverse arrow even if its from the template skin in order to skin the complete hitcircle set.

Oh, and by the way, there is a New Combo bug on this note 02:09:913 (1) in the normal, so please manually add the new combo there.

Goodluck with this map~ if you want I can also mod it, just PM me.

Makar8000 wrote:

You are missing a reversearrow. You must use a reverse arrow even if its from the template skin in order to skin the complete hitcircle set.

Oh, and by the way, there is a New Combo bug on this note 02:09:913 (1) in the normal, so please manually add the new combo there.

Goodluck with this map~ if you want I can also mod it, just PM me.

I will change this when BAT comes~
Thanks!

2 things as Makar8000 said.

+

General
Audio lead-in is unnecessary, set it 0 in all diffs.
Don't use sections on the same time please :

Set offset 4470 in all diffs for avoiding it

SB
Your SB code looks so messy, i fixed it for you, use my file please and full submit after it of course
also, your sb works for all diffs. make it for all except taiko?

Insane
01:55:556 (9,1) - i think object, which starts from 1/8 yellow tick is kinda odd, btw there are bass sound inside sliderbody (9 )on the blue tick. Try this? 03:03:270 - sounds empty
03:04:127 - ^

Evil's Hard
01:34:770 (5) - hidden 2nd reverse

Normal
01:03:056 (5) - add nc (too long combo)
01:06:484 (4) - clap to the end
01:07:770 (6) - clap instead of whistle
01:08:199 (7) - remove clap
01:06:484 (4) - add nc
01:18:484 (1) - slider touches border of the window, replace it
02:29:199 - better map this break~

Download: 07th Expansion - Dreamenddischarger (Regou).osb

Aleks719 wrote:

2 things as Makar8000 said. Fixed

+

General
Audio lead-in is unnecessary, set it 0 in all diffs. Done
Don't use sections on the same time please :

Set offset 4470 in all diffs for avoiding it I change the offset to -372, sounds better

SB
Your SB code looks so messy, i fixed it for you, use my file please and full submit after it of course Thanks a lot~~
also, your sb works for all diffs. make it for all except taiko? mmm do you mean remove the SB in taiko diff? anyway Done

Insane
01:55:556 (9,1) - i think object, which starts from 1/8 yellow tick is kinda odd, btw there are bass sound inside sliderbody (9 )on the blue tick. Try this?

03:03:270 - sounds empty Done
03:04:127 - ^ Done

Evil's Hard
01:34:770 (5) - hidden 2nd reverse

Normal
01:03:056 (5) - add nc (too long combo) Done
01:06:484 (4) - clap to the end Done
01:07:770 (6) - clap instead of whistleDone
01:08:199 (7) - remove clapDone
01:06:484 (4) - add ncDone
01:18:484 (1) - slider touches border of the window, replace it up 2 grids for this. :3

02:29:199 - better map this break~ No :3

Thanks for your mod~~~
Waiting for Evil's response

To Evil & wmf: Audio-lead in, SB, timing 那些我都幫你們改了

Edit: Evil take the mod

不愧是小車車神觸

Download: 07th Expansion - dreamenddischarger (Regou) [Evil's Hard].osu

nice map i like it!!

Hiii

[Normal]
* Using 0,5x section will confuse beginners who play this about slider speed. You should avoid that

03:08:628 (3) - Too much repeating slider can makes confusing for beginners about when the slider is end
03:15:485 (5) - ^


[Wmf's Taiko]
* The kiai time should end at 03:06:485


[Insane]
01:15:056 (1) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar
01:18:913 (2) - ^
01:22:663 (3,4) - This object is almost offscreen
01:26:842 (4) - This object is touch the HP Bar


Once you done, forum PM me

Leorda wrote:

Hiii

[Normal]
* Using 0,5x section will confuse beginners who play this about slider speed. You should avoid that To increase the readability for new players,I use 1.0x from 00:20:199 (1) -

03:08:628 (3) - Too much repeating slider can makes confusing for beginners about when the slider is end Fixed
03:15:485 (5) - ^Fixed


[Wmf's Taiko]
* The kiai time should end at 03:06:485Fixed for wmf


[Insane]
01:15:056 (1) - The tail slider is touch the HP BarFixed
01:18:913 (2) - ^Fixed
01:22:663 (3,4) - This object is almost offscreenFixed
01:26:842 (4) - This object is touch the HP BarFixed


Once you done, forum PM me

Thanks Leodra!!!

快找Leorda吧wwww

dreams becomes nightmare when you feels lonely, but nightmares is gone when you sleep with the people who love you...... (just sayin)

Bubbled

holy ____ the snapping gone off again.
I only snapped two section into 1/3 properly, and I guess this can be fixed before ranking instead of direct popping.

Download: 07th Expansion - dreamenddischarger (Regou) [Wmf's Taiko].osu

My computer broke down so I can't upload it for these few days ;w;
Holy____! (Using my phone to check this thread lol)

Regou加油!

Flask wrote:

Regou加油!

謝謝:)
等遲些電腦修好了就趕緊找回Aleks._.

Normal:
i think theres too many whistle there xD


you should be creative c: just like giving a "finish" that will make a big circle in taiko
or clap when you hear the sound more high and "tak" (?)


btw the Hard and The Insane looks like a mixed Dreamen map beside DBF,AngelHoney,Natteke to 1 part *A*
when im doing the CTB i feel like sometimes its lag D:
and i think no need Cursortrail :|
and the flash @@

Funfact: I had the map for the TWC already and I also made a taiko BG for this. But somehow wmf never handed it in, uh? So the taiko diff here doesnt have the BG it supposed to have :'D

Loctav wrote:

Funfact: I had the map for the TWC already and I also made a taiko BG for this. But somehow wmf never handed it in, uh? So the taiko diff here doesnt have the BG it supposed to have :'D

YAY I can use my computer now
lol-ed
alright the BG fit in taiko mod, so I won't use a taiko BG for wmf's diff o.o
Update: updated wmf's taiko...

呃 泡呢

After mod via irc, we fixed 1nc in Hard, some no sense 1/6 notes in Insane and another minor stuff

after 13 months... Ranked!