1. I would say that you should make an Easy diff that is less than 3 stars, but it looks like Normal is easy enough... Still find spots the are a little hard and make them a little more easier.
2. 01:39:056 (1) - 2 girds to the right
3. 02:10:127 (1) - The slider endpoint should be: (4 down, 3 right) (I would go (-4,3) but it's unnecessary)

1. 00:13:342 (1) - The normal-finish doesn't really fit here, change to a soft-whistle?
2. 00:26:306 (4,5) - whistle on slider end?
3. 00:32:842 (4,5) - ^ on slider start?
4. 01:13:342 (1,2,3) - This part doesn't go with the music. Just move the (1) 1 blue tick back and (3) 1 blue tick forward.... (do it on the timeline by the way) Don't forget spacing.
5. 01:33:913 (2) - clap on the end?
6. 01:42:056 (4) - find a way to get the finish and apply normal hitsounds
7. 01:47:199 (1) - This is supposed to be snapped to 1/3

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Regou

From my modding queue

[Normal]

HP +1Done
OD -1Done
00:44:627 (2) - Make to this, would make it easier. ???
01:04:342 (8) - Move up 2 gridDone
02:10:127 (1) - Add finish in slider end Already did it before O___o
02:25:342 (1) - Add finish in slider begin Done
02:32:199 (1) - ^Done
02:35:413 (x) - Add a note? No


[Insane]

00:35:627 (5,6) - Move down 1 grid Done
00:40:342 (7) - Change finish is clapNo,clap sounds quite weird here, huh?
02:53:627 (4) - Move last point down 2 gridDone,also make changes on 02:54:056 (6)
That's all, that I can find them.

Good luck~

• seems okay to me.

• 00:26:306 (4) - Somehow doesn't fit to the music :S. A Tripple would fit much better into the music on 00:26:199 (4,5,6).My Proposal.
  02:39:056 (1,2,3) - The tripple at the end of the slider doesn't fit to the music. Just my opinion.
  02:57:485 (3,4) - Delete 02:57:913 (4) and lengthen the reverse slider 02:57:485 (3) - 02:57:913 (3). This would greatly improve the flow and fit better into the music
  02:58:985 (8) - Shorten the slider 02:58:985 (8) by 2/4th and place a circle on 02:59:413 (1). My Proposal
  03:20:413 (7) - Just my personal view: Delete 03:20:413 (7) or delete 03:20:627 (1) and place 03:20:413 (7) on 03:20:627.

• 00:25:127 (4) - Delete this one :S
  00:34:556 (2) - Place it on x:344 y:104.
  01:47:199 (3,4,5) - Found this very hard to read on my first tries, that this is 1/3th stream,but keep it.

mrkyee wrote:

Everything following marked green are just proposals, if it is marked orange i think there might be a better way to do this, unless i marked it red, then i consider it as disturbing and you should probably change it.

After all this modding there is not much i have found :S

Normal:

• seems okay to me.

Hard:

• 00:26:306 (4) - Somehow doesn't fit to the music :S. A Tripple would fit much better into the music on 00:26:199 (4,5,6).My Proposal.
  02:39:056 (1,2,3) - The tripple at the end of the slider doesn't fit to the music. Just my opinion.
  02:57:485 (3,4) - Delete 02:57:913 (4) and lengthen the reverse slider 02:57:485 (3) - 02:57:913 (3). This would greatly improve the flow and fit better into the music
  02:58:985 (8) - Shorten the slider 02:58:985 (8) by 2/4th and place a circle on 02:59:413 (1). My Proposal
  03:20:413 (7) - Just my personal view: Delete 03:20:413 (7) or delete 03:20:627 (1) and place 03:20:413 (7) on 03:20:627.

Insane:

• 00:25:127 (4) - Delete this one :S It seems fine to me :S
  00:34:556 (2) - Place it on x:344 y:104. Done
  01:47:199 (3,4,5) - Found this very hard to read on my first tries, that this is 1/3th stream,but keep it.

I love this map and i love this song <33. Just 07th expansion.. awwrr.

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Easy] 這是normal吧...'
00:42:485 (3) - 聽起來不好 改了
02:59:627 (1) - 這段突然沒whistle了 0.0
有些部份的N轉S用的感覺不是很好

[Hard]
00:26:306 (4) - you know where places it will be more fit
01:21:913 (5) - NC
02:53:199 (2) - it's better not to hide the end of slider
02:54:056 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:39:913 (5) - 爲什麽突然開始沒whistle了 音樂結構沒發生大變化啊改了
01:21:056 (8) - whistle加在這 已經加了啊 o.o
01:35:627 (1) - ^改了
01:54:485 (6) - ^改了
02:59:627 (1) - ^改了

Other seems fine

theliveanddead wrote:

[General]
i love this song and the others maps of this song are awesome yours looks pretty fun too i don't see any trouble in general
so that's why this mod will be just mere opinions about gameplay hope you like it btw excuse me the time but i was a bit busy


[Normal]
XD this diff doesn't look like a normal looks more like a hard
the spacing at the begining is hard to read with that AR i suggest you to put more spacing in
00:09:913 (1)
00:08:199 (1)
00:25:985 (2) - In my opinion this movement is too hard for normal diff
00:32:842 (2) - ^ Same here ^.^
mmm there are a lot of this this triples in my opinion is too hard for a normal diff >.< other than that there's no more opinions
Nothing change...sorry D:
[insane]
00:23:627 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part has no sense with rhythm or maybe the spacing is hard to read ...add NC here hope can help something D:(this notes are unsnaped)
02:26:627 (7) - delete this and this 02:28:342 (7) They are 1/6 stream D:
03:10:770 (7) - ^
03:12:913 (6) - ^
03:15:913 (6) - ^
03:19:556 (4,5,6,7) ^
(this notes are unsnaped)


theres nothing else i can say about this map is pretty fun

>.< i see this map perfect you should ask for MAT/BAT moding

remember this are just mere opinions

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
[Evil's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 02:39:056, ends on 03:06:485
[Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 02:39:056, ends on 03:06:480
[Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 02:39:055, ends on 03:06:484
[Wmf's Taiko] : Kiai #1: Starts on 02:39:056, ends on 03:20:626
seems some kiai timing sections didn;t snap well made the kiai inconsistent, so please resnap them.

About the kiai time,I've checked them, the correct Kiai Time should start on 02:39:056 and end on 03:06:485 >< Done in my diff
[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:25:342 (1,2,3) - slider speed change like these in the sometimes is very picky for some modders so just a remind here.
00:45:484 (3) - ^same, maybe add a new combo Done

Hitsound
02:10:127 (1) - clap is a little weird, only finish is better imo.Done
02:59:627 (1) - suddenly no whistles did surprised me a little actually o.o...

[Insane]
Issues
00:47:199 (1) - new combo missing bug, add new combo here. Done

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:25:127 (4) - feel a little werid about this note, I think maybe better to remove it.rrr I won't remove it because 00:25:342 (1) maybe confusing >< Just -20% volume of this note
01:55:824 (1) - the stack feels really ugly, why not move it outDone
02:02:913 (6,7) - I don't really feel like here should using a 1/6 beat....because those 1/6 beat in the music is not very strong and clear, but whatever o.o
02:04:770 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps feel really sudden for me
03:03:699 (1,2) - the spacing feel a little too huge for me o.o :O really hard, right?

that is all for now I think, good luck~

Crok425 wrote:

Ok, you're the second in my mod queue, I hope this helps... wait... Umineko? You're gonna get the best of my modding >:D!

[General]
Why not name the map ''Dream End'' or ''Dream End Discharger'' or ''Dream End (Discharger)'' of it's another song version.
dreamenddischarger is the correct title of this song...
you may also see these map:
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/16258
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/17425
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22472
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29724
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31116
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37729
...yeah.
[Normal]
01:05:627 I think you should make end with the normal clap sound, the sudden change sounds weird. Done01:21:270 You could add a circle there. It's too hard for the easiet diff...
01:28:127 ^ No.
01:39:056 Um... this slider doesn't ends well, make it end either in 01:39:699 or 01:39:913. Oh my mistake fixed
02:09:913 Maybe add a circle in there.Ok
02:52:127 Hmm and empty sound could sound good, I mean, make a 0% sound there... or maybe not, just a preference of mine.rrr 0% is unrankable and we can't set 0% volume O__o(The lowest limit is 5%)
03:20:199 There's almost no sound in the song in that part... so I suggest you make 03:19:342 a slider that ends in 03:20:199 so it doesn't sounds that confusing to begginers. mmm I may take this if other modders mention this. D:
I don't see anything else.

[Wmf's Taiko]
Like I said in the rules, I can't do Taiko... but... I do hear some parts that are off... sorry.

[Insane]
Holy damn... ok, let's see...
01:28:127 Made a 0% sound in there, that's a dry sound that goes well in that part. rrr 0% is unrankable and we can't set 0% volume O__o(The lowest limit is 5%)
01:46:342 Clap maybe? Done
02:10:127 to 02:11:199 Instead of clap then normal sound, put all of them a finisher or all of them a normal sound or half and half. ...
03:20:413 Dele... oh wait, there's no circle, good .
I don't see anything else.
_________________________

Oh man... phew... the Insane one was... difficult. I hope my mod was helpful. I love Umineko, good luck with getting it ranked ^^. I like the song... um... I could shoot a kudosu... but it seems that you have a lot of them... so... maybe not, your decision...

-Bakari- wrote:

hi~
nazi4mod

General


Normal
maybe make it under 3.0 stars? o_0
00:20:199 (1) - use spinner's circle to make shape for (1)
00:25:342 (1,2,3,1) - i can't read this pattern in play-mode
00:36:485 (6,2) - stack them somehow!
01:33:913 (1) - put it in the center? make it symmetrical?
02:03:056 (4,6) - they symmetrical about (5) maybe you can make them a bit more symmetrical somehow?
02:09:913 (1,2) - 2 notes after spinner and break? confusing ><
02:32:199 (1,2,3,1,2) - a bit hard to read
02:52:770 (1) -x379 y248 make it symmetrical
02:54:485 (5,7) - avoid crossing or put endpoint ow (7) in (5) http://puu.sh/qS3K
02:56:199 (7) - new combo
03:14:199 (2) - x208 y211

Insane

00:20:199 (1) - i guess this slider can follow spinner's shape this?
00:23:627 (3) - ^
00:35:627 (5) - new combo
00:40:770 (1,3) - let them follow (2)'s approach circle's shape?
00:42:270 (4,11) - stack?
01:03:056 (7) - why no new combo?
01:13:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - we are not in taiko mode. so place them somehow. no need to stack them
02:32:199 (1) - a bit messy? covered by circles?
02:48:699 (4,5,6,8,9) - maybe star-shape for this stream?
03:05:842 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - ^
03:11:627 (1,2) - this? maybe put them in this way. sliders "inherit" shapes D:

Taiko

yeah, i can't mod taiko
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
ok~ that's all

Star!
i love this song

victoraiss wrote:

喜欢这个曲子 皮肤 SB做的非常棒 顶顶 祝早日rank~~

1. Not sure in the tags, i think you should remove Evil_Twilight, and add "zts" and "visual novel"...don't sure yea
2. 02:09:913 - 02:11:627 - add kiai there!

1. 00:11:627 (1) - remove nc
2. 00:27:056 (1) -little confusing, stuck it with (5)
3. 00:40:770 - 100% volume -_- my ears, do it quiet, may be 60%
4. 00:45:484 (1) - too loud, yeah, same 60% and another one, try this (sounds good i think):
   1) 00:45:485 - green section (soft) delete clap there and add whistle
   2) 00:45:913 - green section (normal)
   3) whistle on the ALL slider, and in the end of it
5. 01:06:485 - remove whistle
6. 01:15:056 - LOUUUD
7. 01:29:199 - clap must be there
8. 01:31:770 (4) - nc
9. 01:55:342 (5) - not a good thing in normal, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:18:485 - missed notes there, add circles on the small white ticks

1. 00:13:342 (4) - nc
2. 00:36:913 (4) - ^
3. 00:44:842 - whistle
4. 01:01:342 - finish
5. 01:42:056 - whistle, not finish
6. 02:18:913 - whistle
7. 02:19:770 - ^
8. 02:28:342 (5) - ^
9. 02:32:199 - make this finish normal, sounds better

1. try not to use 100% volume (it makes my ears cry)
2. 01:01:342 (1) - soft finish there
3. 01:30:484 (1) - nc

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General

1. Not sure in the tags, i think you should remove Evil_Twilight, and add "zts" and "visual novel"...don't sure yea added zts to the tag. :3
2. 02:09:913 - 02:11:627 - add kiai there! rrr no.

Normal

1. 00:11:627 (1) - remove nc Done
2. 00:27:056 (1) -little confusing, stuck it with (5) Done
3. 00:40:770 - 100% volume -_- my ears, do it quiet, may be 60% Done
4. 00:45:484 (1) - too loud, yeah, same 60% Done
   and another one, try this (sounds good i think):
   1) 00:45:485 - green section (soft) delete clap there and add whistle
   2) 00:45:913 - green section (normal) Done
   3) whistle on the ALL slider, and in the end of it
5. 01:06:485 - remove whistle Done
6. 01:15:056 - LOUUUD -20%
7. 01:29:199 - clap must be there Done
8. 01:31:770 (4) - nc Done
9. 01:55:342 (5) - not a good thing in normal, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Done
10. 03:18:485 - missed notes there, add circles on the small white ticks ??? There's already a note here o.o

Insane

1. try not to use 100% volume (it makes my ears cry)
2. 01:01:342 (1) - soft finish there Done
3. 01:30:484 (1) - nc Done

Good luck :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

1 year old first map... orz.

not much to say, good luck.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哇泡了 加油

nold_1702 wrote:

咁岩記返起呢張map我係好耐之前(我好新手戈時) 係見個=- -

Makar8000 wrote:

You are missing a reversearrow. You must use a reverse arrow even if its from the template skin in order to skin the complete hitcircle set.

Oh, and by the way, there is a New Combo bug on this note 02:09:913 (1) in the normal, so please manually add the new combo there.

Goodluck with this map~ if you want I can also mod it, just PM me.