victoraiss wrote:

喜欢这个曲子 皮肤 SB做的非常棒 顶顶 祝早日rank~~

1. Not sure in the tags, i think you should remove Evil_Twilight, and add "zts" and "visual novel"...don't sure yea
2. 02:09:913 - 02:11:627 - add kiai there!

1. 00:11:627 (1) - remove nc
2. 00:27:056 (1) -little confusing, stuck it with (5)
3. 00:40:770 - 100% volume -_- my ears, do it quiet, may be 60%
4. 00:45:484 (1) - too loud, yeah, same 60% and another one, try this (sounds good i think):
   1) 00:45:485 - green section (soft) delete clap there and add whistle
   2) 00:45:913 - green section (normal)
   3) whistle on the ALL slider, and in the end of it
5. 01:06:485 - remove whistle
6. 01:15:056 - LOUUUD
7. 01:29:199 - clap must be there
8. 01:31:770 (4) - nc
9. 01:55:342 (5) - not a good thing in normal, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:18:485 - missed notes there, add circles on the small white ticks

1. 00:13:342 (4) - nc
2. 00:36:913 (4) - ^
3. 00:44:842 - whistle
4. 01:01:342 - finish
5. 01:42:056 - whistle, not finish
6. 02:18:913 - whistle
7. 02:19:770 - ^
8. 02:28:342 (5) - ^
9. 02:32:199 - make this finish normal, sounds better

1. try not to use 100% volume (it makes my ears cry)
2. 01:01:342 (1) - soft finish there
3. 01:30:484 (1) - nc

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General

1. Not sure in the tags, i think you should remove Evil_Twilight, and add "zts" and "visual novel"...don't sure yea added zts to the tag. :3
2. 02:09:913 - 02:11:627 - add kiai there! rrr no.

Normal

1. 00:11:627 (1) - remove nc Done
2. 00:27:056 (1) -little confusing, stuck it with (5) Done
3. 00:40:770 - 100% volume -_- my ears, do it quiet, may be 60% Done
4. 00:45:484 (1) - too loud, yeah, same 60% Done
   and another one, try this (sounds good i think):
   1) 00:45:485 - green section (soft) delete clap there and add whistle
   2) 00:45:913 - green section (normal) Done
   3) whistle on the ALL slider, and in the end of it
5. 01:06:485 - remove whistle Done
6. 01:15:056 - LOUUUD -20%
7. 01:29:199 - clap must be there Done
8. 01:31:770 (4) - nc Done
9. 01:55:342 (5) - not a good thing in normal, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Done
10. 03:18:485 - missed notes there, add circles on the small white ticks ??? There's already a note here o.o

Insane

1. try not to use 100% volume (it makes my ears cry)
2. 01:01:342 (1) - soft finish there Done
3. 01:30:484 (1) - nc Done

Good luck :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

1 year old first map... orz.

not much to say, good luck.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哇泡了 加油

nold_1702 wrote:

咁岩記返起呢張map我係好耐之前(我好新手戈時) 係見個=- -

Makar8000 wrote:

You are missing a reversearrow. You must use a reverse arrow even if its from the template skin in order to skin the complete hitcircle set.

Oh, and by the way, there is a New Combo bug on this note 02:09:913 (1) in the normal, so please manually add the new combo there.

Goodluck with this map~ if you want I can also mod it, just PM me.

Aleks719 wrote:

2 things as Makar8000 said. Fixed

+

General
Audio lead-in is unnecessary, set it 0 in all diffs. Done
Don't use sections on the same time please :

Set offset 4470 in all diffs for avoiding it I change the offset to -372, sounds better

SB
Your SB code looks so messy, i fixed it for you, use my file please and full submit after it of course Thanks a lot~~
also, your sb works for all diffs. make it for all except taiko? mmm do you mean remove the SB in taiko diff? anyway Done

Insane
01:55:556 (9,1) - i think object, which starts from 1/8 yellow tick is kinda odd, btw there are bass sound inside sliderbody (9 )on the blue tick. Try this?

03:03:270 - sounds empty Done
03:04:127 - ^ Done

Evil's Hard
01:34:770 (5) - hidden 2nd reverse

Normal
01:03:056 (5) - add nc (too long combo) Done
01:06:484 (4) - clap to the end Done
01:07:770 (6) - clap instead of whistleDone
01:08:199 (7) - remove clapDone
01:06:484 (4) - add ncDone
01:18:484 (1) - slider touches border of the window, replace it up 2 grids for this. :3

02:29:199 - better map this break~ No :3

Leorda wrote:

Hiii

[Normal]
* Using 0,5x section will confuse beginners who play this about slider speed. You should avoid that To increase the readability for new players,I use 1.0x from 00:20:199 (1) -

03:08:628 (3) - Too much repeating slider can makes confusing for beginners about when the slider is end Fixed
03:15:485 (5) - ^Fixed


[Wmf's Taiko]
* The kiai time should end at 03:06:485Fixed for wmf


[Insane]
01:15:056 (1) - The tail slider is touch the HP BarFixed
01:18:913 (2) - ^Fixed
01:22:663 (3,4) - This object is almost offscreenFixed
01:26:842 (4) - This object is touch the HP BarFixed


Once you done, forum PM me

Flask wrote:

Regou加油!

Loctav wrote:

Funfact: I had the map for the TWC already and I also made a taiko BG for this. But somehow wmf never handed it in, uh? So the taiko diff here doesnt have the BG it supposed to have :'D