Konnichiha
General
* For tags, "s h i o n" should replace with "s_h_i_o_n". Otherwise, if you want to click "s h i o n", they clickable on each letter, not word
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/fkvp
Easy
01:10:703 (2) - Remove clap at tail slider is better IMO
02:14:303 (2) - ^
02:58:103 (2,3) - These finish hitsound seems not fit, IMO
03:00:503 (2) - ^
03:02:903 (2,3) - ^
S h i o n's Normal
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems slow
00:53:303 (3) - Move it like this for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/233407
00:59:903 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. Try move somewhere to make more readable http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/233412
Hard
00:25:703 (1) - Forgot to put finish at head slider?
00:35:303 (1) - Forgot to put finish?
01:06:803 (2) - These seems overlapped by hitbursts, at 2nd try it's easy to read. Maybe just me.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/233440
01:42:803 (5) - How about move this to 01:42:653?
02:23:303 (4) - Put finish?
Nice mapset, Forum PM me for recheck
General
* For tags, "s h i o n" should replace with "s_h_i_o_n". Otherwise, if you want to click "s h i o n", they clickable on each letter, not word
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/fkvp
Easy
01:10:703 (2) - Remove clap at tail slider is better IMO
02:14:303 (2) - ^
02:58:103 (2,3) - These finish hitsound seems not fit, IMO
03:00:503 (2) - ^
03:02:903 (2,3) - ^
S h i o n's Normal
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems slow
00:53:303 (3) - Move it like this for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/233407
00:59:903 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. Try move somewhere to make more readable http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/233412
Hard
00:25:703 (1) - Forgot to put finish at head slider?
00:35:303 (1) - Forgot to put finish?
01:06:803 (2) - These seems overlapped by hitbursts, at 2nd try it's easy to read. Maybe just me.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/233440
01:42:803 (5) - How about move this to 01:42:653?
02:23:303 (4) - Put finish?
Nice mapset, Forum PM me for recheck