(I'm here from my queue at the request of mochi.)
Nice, addictive song. Where can I get the full version xD?
Nothing really to worry about. You might want to sync up kiai times across all diffs, but that's up to you.
[Easy]
00:30:982 (1) - You could get this to wrap around (2) better by moving the center node down 3 grids, the last node left 3 grids, and then the whole thing right 3 grids.
00:34:874 (5) - Make it repeat one more time, so you have something filling up the long white tick?
00:41:361 (1) - Line this up with (5)?
01:04:712 (1) - Not NC for consistency with previous combos
02:01:793 (4) - Again, line this up with (3)? Or move the whole pattern up so it doesn't feel like they were supposed to be aligned.
02:06:982 (4) - Down 2 grids for a symmetric pattern
02:56:280 (1) - Make this symmetric by moving the last node 3 grids right. Then copy+paste for the next slider as well.
Cleanly mapped, the placement and timing of notes made intuitive sense, which is good.
[Normal]
00:10:550 (2) - This curve is a bit too sharp, just use a copy of (3).
00:36:820 (2,3) - Might want to space this out a bit more. Nazi, I know, but it happened to catch my attention.
00:45:253 (8) - Try and make long sliders like this symmetric- see viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
00:47:847 (4) - Move the center node 2 grids right, 1 grid up so it wraps better.
00:52:388 (2) - ^, except 2 grids left, 1 grid up.
00:56:928 (1) - Again, try to make this symmetric. It's not because the last node extends past the end of the slider.
01:18:009 (2) - Looks a bit sharp, flatten the angle and try making it symmetric.
01:22:874 (1) - Line this up with 10
01:39:739 (3) - I caution against curved sliders in an L-shape because they look too sharp; try remaking with 4 or more nodes
02:59:523 (8) - 1 grid right so it's equal between (7,8)
03:26:766 (8) - Adjust so it forms a rhombus pattern? Like:
Or move (6,7,8) all up so that (5,6,7,8) makes a symmetric zig-zag pattern.
03:31:144 (3) - This note feels out of place, delete it?
[Hard]
Even though this is a hard, you should still try and keep distance spacing the same within the same sections of the song. Otherwise the map plays quite confusingly. I'd rework this with a few set distance spacing (i.e. 0.8x for refrain, 1.2x for slowdowns, 1.5x for kiai or something like that) and try and keep to that, because right now it plays awkwardly with the different distance spacing.
00:25:631 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this is the best way to start a new section; I kept on failing to hit these notes at the right time because there wasn't a strong musical cue to tell me where they started. Perhaps replace with a repeating short slider.
00:27:415 (7,8,9) - Space these out evenly
00:56:928 (1) - If you're going to do the whole "slow down" thing for this section, space the notes closer.
01:19:793 (1,2) - I'd delete these notes. Yes, I can here the roll that justifies them, but at the same time the section from 01:18:334 (4) - to 01:22:226 (12) - feels tiresome because of a lack of short breaks.
01:37:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about a star pattern instead?
I'd break up these next few combos, because they're kind of long (going almost to 20), and it's more consistent with previous combos if you put them every 2 measures (8 beats). So new combos here:
01:41:036 (10) -
01:45:901 (6) -
01:51:415 (10) -
And so on.
01:59:523 (1) - This is the example of the kind of spacing you should have had at 00:56:928 (1) -
02:45:577 (1) - The NC should go on the next note, not this one.
02:59:361 (8) - 1 grid right for better spacing
03:09:253 (1) to the end- I really like the way these were mapped, simply using straight and horizontal sliders but making them flow very well. Good job!
[Insane]
Same note about using consistent spacing that I made with Hard.
A lot of the triples and streams seem thrown in at unexpected places- you don't need or want most of them.
00:12:334 (9,10) - Just because this is Insane doesn't mean you have to put in triples where they don't fit. It's nonsensically overmapped here, just remove these two.
00:13:793 (1,2) - Make these symmetric?
00:34:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels like too much of a spike in difficulty level all of a sudden. What with the 6.02x spacing and the spaced out streams. At the least, I"d delete 00:35:604 (2,3,4) because they don't actually fit the music.
00:48:334 (6,7,8,9,10) - Good idea, but perhaps space it closer, like 2.0x
01:48:658 (1,2) - Doesn't give enough time after the spinner, just remove these.
02:19:307 (1,2) - These are too loud, tone down the volume to fit in with the rest of the notes
Actually, the same holds true for the soft custom set 2 in general; the finish is too loud. Perhaps reduce the volume of the .wav file. See also:
03:09:253 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - , 03:11:847 (11) - 03:27:415 (1,2) -
In general:
Don't be afraid to use copy+paste to make notes that are supposed to be identical, identical.
Also, you might want to shy away from patterns that are just squares on easier diffs, because they can get repetitive/ too predictable.
Overall, I think you have a good sense of how to map, so just keep on working on making creative and fun patterns like the end of Hard. Starred!
Nice, addictive song. Where can I get the full version xD?
AIBat Warnings
These warnings were generated by AIBat v1.0, based on the current ranking guidelines and rules. Some things (like breaks and spinners) can be ignored, but just know that it's generally bad practice.
[All .osu Files]
Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:172, ends on 03:30:009
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:496, ends on 03:30:009
- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:496, ends on 03:30:009
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:172, ends on 03:30:009
[Difficulty: Easy]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:090)
01:04:361 (snap to 01:04:388)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:685)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:442)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:07:955)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:23:847)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:496)
[Difficulty: Hard]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:35:819 (snap to 00:35:847)
00:58:037 (snap to 00:58:063)
00:59:010 (snap to 00:59:036)
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:191 (snap to 01:04:226)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:36:956 (snap to 01:36:982)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:00:307 (snap to 02:00:334)
02:01:279 (snap to 02:01:307)
02:05:496 (snap to 02:05:523)
02:06:469 (snap to 02:06:496)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:24:009)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:658)
[Difficulty: Insane]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:12:792 (snap to 00:12:820)
00:13:441 (snap to 00:13:469)
00:34:361 (snap to 00:34:388)
00:36:307 (snap to 00:36:334)
00:58:037 (snap to 00:58:063)
00:59:010 (snap to 00:59:036)
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:191 (snap to 01:04:226)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:36:956 (snap to 01:36:982)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:00:307 (snap to 02:00:334)
02:01:279 (snap to 02:01:307)
02:05:496 (snap to 02:05:523)
02:06:469 (snap to 02:06:496)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:08:117)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:24:009)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:658)
02:51:062 (snap to 02:51:090)
03:08:902 (snap to 03:08:928)
03:27:226 (snap to 03:27:253)
03:27:875 (snap to 03:27:901)
Breaks:
Consider adding a break before 01:55:031.
Spinner Length:
00:51:090 (1) - This spinner is 649 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms; check that it gets at least 2000 on auto.
[Difficulty: Normal]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:361 (snap to 01:04:388)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:08:117)
[All .osu Files]
Kiai:
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:172, ends on 03:30:009
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:496, ends on 03:30:009
- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:496, ends on 03:30:009
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:07:307, ends on 01:26:766
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:09:577, ends on 02:28:388
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:12:172, ends on 03:30:009
[Difficulty: Easy]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:090)
01:04:361 (snap to 01:04:388)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:685)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:442)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:07:955)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:23:847)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:496)
[Difficulty: Hard]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:35:819 (snap to 00:35:847)
00:58:037 (snap to 00:58:063)
00:59:010 (snap to 00:59:036)
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:191 (snap to 01:04:226)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:36:956 (snap to 01:36:982)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:00:307 (snap to 02:00:334)
02:01:279 (snap to 02:01:307)
02:05:496 (snap to 02:05:523)
02:06:469 (snap to 02:06:496)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:24:009)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:658)
[Difficulty: Insane]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:12:792 (snap to 00:12:820)
00:13:441 (snap to 00:13:469)
00:34:361 (snap to 00:34:388)
00:36:307 (snap to 00:36:334)
00:58:037 (snap to 00:58:063)
00:59:010 (snap to 00:59:036)
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:191 (snap to 01:04:226)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:36:956 (snap to 01:36:982)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:00:307 (snap to 02:00:334)
02:01:279 (snap to 02:01:307)
02:05:496 (snap to 02:05:523)
02:06:469 (snap to 02:06:496)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:08:117)
02:23:983 (snap to 02:24:009)
02:24:631 (snap to 02:24:658)
02:51:062 (snap to 02:51:090)
03:08:902 (snap to 03:08:928)
03:27:226 (snap to 03:27:253)
03:27:875 (snap to 03:27:901)
Breaks:
Consider adding a break before 01:55:031.
Spinner Length:
00:51:090 (1) - This spinner is 649 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms; check that it gets at least 2000 on auto.
[Difficulty: Normal]
Snapping:
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:03:226 (snap to 01:03:253)
01:04:361 (snap to 01:04:388)
01:05:821 (snap to 01:05:847)
01:38:577 (snap to 01:38:604)
02:08:091 (snap to 02:08:117)
Nothing really to worry about. You might want to sync up kiai times across all diffs, but that's up to you.
[Easy]
00:30:982 (1) - You could get this to wrap around (2) better by moving the center node down 3 grids, the last node left 3 grids, and then the whole thing right 3 grids.
00:34:874 (5) - Make it repeat one more time, so you have something filling up the long white tick?
00:41:361 (1) - Line this up with (5)?
01:04:712 (1) - Not NC for consistency with previous combos
02:01:793 (4) - Again, line this up with (3)? Or move the whole pattern up so it doesn't feel like they were supposed to be aligned.
02:06:982 (4) - Down 2 grids for a symmetric pattern
02:56:280 (1) - Make this symmetric by moving the last node 3 grids right. Then copy+paste for the next slider as well.
Cleanly mapped, the placement and timing of notes made intuitive sense, which is good.
[Normal]
00:10:550 (2) - This curve is a bit too sharp, just use a copy of (3).
00:36:820 (2,3) - Might want to space this out a bit more. Nazi, I know, but it happened to catch my attention.
00:45:253 (8) - Try and make long sliders like this symmetric- see viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
00:47:847 (4) - Move the center node 2 grids right, 1 grid up so it wraps better.
00:52:388 (2) - ^, except 2 grids left, 1 grid up.
00:56:928 (1) - Again, try to make this symmetric. It's not because the last node extends past the end of the slider.
01:18:009 (2) - Looks a bit sharp, flatten the angle and try making it symmetric.
01:22:874 (1) - Line this up with 10
01:39:739 (3) - I caution against curved sliders in an L-shape because they look too sharp; try remaking with 4 or more nodes
02:59:523 (8) - 1 grid right so it's equal between (7,8)
03:26:766 (8) - Adjust so it forms a rhombus pattern? Like:
Or move (6,7,8) all up so that (5,6,7,8) makes a symmetric zig-zag pattern.
03:31:144 (3) - This note feels out of place, delete it?
[Hard]
Even though this is a hard, you should still try and keep distance spacing the same within the same sections of the song. Otherwise the map plays quite confusingly. I'd rework this with a few set distance spacing (i.e. 0.8x for refrain, 1.2x for slowdowns, 1.5x for kiai or something like that) and try and keep to that, because right now it plays awkwardly with the different distance spacing.
00:25:631 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this is the best way to start a new section; I kept on failing to hit these notes at the right time because there wasn't a strong musical cue to tell me where they started. Perhaps replace with a repeating short slider.
00:27:415 (7,8,9) - Space these out evenly
00:56:928 (1) - If you're going to do the whole "slow down" thing for this section, space the notes closer.
01:19:793 (1,2) - I'd delete these notes. Yes, I can here the roll that justifies them, but at the same time the section from 01:18:334 (4) - to 01:22:226 (12) - feels tiresome because of a lack of short breaks.
01:37:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about a star pattern instead?
I'd break up these next few combos, because they're kind of long (going almost to 20), and it's more consistent with previous combos if you put them every 2 measures (8 beats). So new combos here:
01:41:036 (10) -
01:45:901 (6) -
01:51:415 (10) -
And so on.
01:59:523 (1) - This is the example of the kind of spacing you should have had at 00:56:928 (1) -
02:45:577 (1) - The NC should go on the next note, not this one.
02:59:361 (8) - 1 grid right for better spacing
03:09:253 (1) to the end- I really like the way these were mapped, simply using straight and horizontal sliders but making them flow very well. Good job!
[Insane]
Same note about using consistent spacing that I made with Hard.
A lot of the triples and streams seem thrown in at unexpected places- you don't need or want most of them.
00:12:334 (9,10) - Just because this is Insane doesn't mean you have to put in triples where they don't fit. It's nonsensically overmapped here, just remove these two.
00:13:793 (1,2) - Make these symmetric?
00:34:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels like too much of a spike in difficulty level all of a sudden. What with the 6.02x spacing and the spaced out streams. At the least, I"d delete 00:35:604 (2,3,4) because they don't actually fit the music.
00:48:334 (6,7,8,9,10) - Good idea, but perhaps space it closer, like 2.0x
01:48:658 (1,2) - Doesn't give enough time after the spinner, just remove these.
02:19:307 (1,2) - These are too loud, tone down the volume to fit in with the rest of the notes
Actually, the same holds true for the soft custom set 2 in general; the finish is too loud. Perhaps reduce the volume of the .wav file. See also:
03:09:253 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - , 03:11:847 (11) - 03:27:415 (1,2) -
In general:
Don't be afraid to use copy+paste to make notes that are supposed to be identical, identical.
Also, you might want to shy away from patterns that are just squares on easier diffs, because they can get repetitive/ too predictable.
Overall, I think you have a good sense of how to map, so just keep on working on making creative and fun patterns like the end of Hard. Starred!